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by Ash_maxliz
Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:07 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Epilogue LIZ A giggle escapes me when Max caresses the side of my neck with his fingers. I pull away and grin at him. “It’s an insult when I try seducing you and you giggle…” He tells me. “What’s a woman to do when her husband tickles her?” He rolls his eyes. “I have two things to say to you. One, ...
by Ash_maxliz
Wed Nov 10, 2004 2:43 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Part 29 LIZ I woke up the next day in the arms of Max. When I had first opened my eyes, I checked if it was a dream. Had I really lost my baby? Had Max and I really come out with our feelings? Covering my eyes, I tried to forget about my car accident. I had to move on from that and knowing that Max...
by Ash_maxliz
Mon Nov 08, 2004 11:25 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Part 28 MAX My fingers were massaging her hand. She had wanted to sit up and leaned her back on the headboard. My eyes darted from her hand to her face. She seemed deep in thought. “Liz?” She didn’t say anything even though she had heard me. “Why don’t you rest now? You haven’t had much sleep.” She...
by Ash_maxliz
Sat Nov 06, 2004 2:09 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Well, I wasn't lying when I said sooner... lol. Umm, I just hope you guys like this part better than the previous one. And guys, I had just wanted to give Max's POV and how he got drunk and stuff. But just to clarify, when Max reaches home from the bar, he sleeps on the couch and then the whole argu...
by Ash_maxliz
Fri Nov 05, 2004 12:41 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Guys, thank you so much for the feedback. I know I haven't been frequent in updating but reali life has been taking a toll on me. Part 26 LIZ “Max.” He looked at me with slightly opened eyes. “Liz, you’re home.” He tried to lift himself up but suddenly gasped in pain. I rushed to his side and asked,...
by Ash_maxliz
Tue Oct 12, 2004 1:46 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Hey, guys! Thanks for the incredible feedback. I know many of you didn't like Liz in the previous chapter so this one's all Liz's POV. Part 25 LIZ “Hey.” I said when Kyle opened the door. “Liz, hey. I see you are on time.” I simply nodded and realized he was staring at me rather curiously. “What?” I...
by Ash_maxliz
Tue Sep 28, 2004 11:46 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Guys, thank you so much for being so patient and leaving feedback. I definitely appreciate it. Anyway, this thread was locked for a while so I didn't get a chance to post it day before yesterday. By the way, there are only six more chapters left. I haven't written them yet but I plan to finish this ...
by Ash_maxliz
Mon Sep 06, 2004 10:32 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Okay, guys, I am so so sorry for the delay. I had written the chapter on Saturday but didn't get a chance to post it. And thanks to everyone who left feedback. Especially anonymousarfan . :D Part 23 LIZ “How could you let him come in while you were taking a bath?” Maria asked. “Uh, hello, you were t...
by Ash_maxliz
Sun Aug 08, 2004 6:27 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Thank you all for leaving feedback. I am unsure about this part but then again I'm always unsure about everything. :roll: Part 22 LIZ “You know what I think?” He asked. “About what?” I looked at him. “About this song.” When he didn’t say anything else, I asked, “You were going to tell me what you th...
by Ash_maxliz
Sat Aug 07, 2004 8:33 am
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Whenever Your Eyes Meet Mine (M/L, ADULT) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 69283

Okay, so it was posted on the 31st but now it's not here so I am reposting it. Part 21 LIZ “Kyle, I am… pregnant.” He raised his eyebrows and kept staring at me for a few seconds. “You got married! And I never knew!” He complained, standing up. I shook my head. “Kyle, I did not get married.” “Oh.” H...