Search found 32 matches

by RonaldoC
Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:15 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 pg 9

Ch 25 "Mr Valenti?". Maria called when she heard the sudden bump followed by a groan. A minute ago Jim Valenti was taking her to the safe house and he had dissapeared to take a phonecall. Maria was starting to worry, Jim had been missing for two minutes. She didn't dare to walk out, her fe...
by RonaldoC
Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:51 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/14/08 Ch 24 pg 9

Ch 24 Her phone rang again and this time she was angry, picking it up, she yelled. "What!?". He jumped in fright after hearing the anger directed at him in her tone. There was no hello nor a friendly how's it going? And he couldn't really expect that off her could he? After what happened a...
by RonaldoC
Fri Jul 11, 2008 7:07 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/11/08 Ch 23 pg 9

Thank u lovlies for the feedback and any lurkers out there who read this. :D Next chapter coming up.. Hope this satisfies u Ch 23 She was at the back of the ambulance being treated when her mother and father rushed toward her after being called by the cops. "Oh lizzie!". Mrs Parker took Li...
by RonaldoC
Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:45 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/8/08 Ch 22 pg 8

Ch 22 Max sighed out in frustration when he lifted his cellphone in the air again, trying to get a signal. He had bandaged up most of Liz's wounds before deciding to call the police and then the paramedics. Liz was badly injured to an extent she found even lifting a limb painful. He had been around ...
by RonaldoC
Mon Jul 07, 2008 10:18 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/7/08 Ch 21 pg 8

was it max or the couk that got out of jail looking for maria It was Mr Olsen, the fatty 40 yr old teacher who Maria tricked to expose him for being a pervert and a child molester in chapter one. She got him in jail and now he escaped for...revenge. Max or Michael? Michael would take her to Max cor...
by RonaldoC
Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:28 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/5/08 Ch 20 pg 8

Ch 20.. "Adam hey.." Liz called, walking in his bedroom. He had called her afterschool to meet up at his place and here she was, coming to him like a good little girlfriend, unaware of what was lurking in his mind. She wore a white shirt with a stonewash blue jeans. Adam had his back towar...
by RonaldoC
Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:30 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/1/08 Ch 19 pg 7

Ch 19 After school, the gang headed to their usual haunt, Ben and Jerry's icecream parlour. Tucking into a delicious bohiemein rasberry ben and Jerry, Liz began to think about her close encounter with Doctor Evans..how dreamy did his eyes look. She could taste the delicious flavour of his look.. &qu...
by RonaldoC
Fri Jun 27, 2008 5:02 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 6/27/08 Ch 18 pg 7

Ch 18 "You what?!". Kara-Louise exclaimed with wide eyes. Here they were in the empty class room with Tess Harding who just narrated her dream last night...with Doctor Evans. "No, no, don't get me wrong. It was just a dream not a fantasy. I don't fancy Doctor Evans." Tess protest...
by RonaldoC
Tue Jun 24, 2008 5:38 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 6/24/08 Ch 17 pg 7

Ch 17 "Apparently, the school is considering to cut your name of the list." Max told his sister as soon as he finished talking with his mother on the phone. He looked at his sister who seemed to not give a damn in the world and was in his apartment, sitting on his couch, watching his TV. I...
by RonaldoC
Sun Jun 22, 2008 11:23 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
Replies: 30
Views: 20118

Re: Pride, Respect...(CC,Mature) 6/22/08 Ch 16 pg 6

Ch 16 Three days passed by and beads of sweat fell down Liz's forehead as she tried to understand what Doctor Evans was trying to explain to her. It was incredibly hot the atmosphere topped off with frustration and worry. She didn't want to look like an idiot to Doctor Evans or she'd screw up gettin...