Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/18/08 Ch 25 [WIP]
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Re: Pride, Respect...(CC,Mature) 6/20/08 Ch 15 pg 6
Ch 15
"That was a piece of cake." Liz scoffed, rolling her eyes. "This time Doctor Evans is going down." She and her friends were sitting on the bleachers outside at lunchtime.
"Oh my god, I cannot beleive he actually fell for that. That man is hornier then a douche bag" Kara-Louise commented to which almost everyone burst out laughing.
"Lord have mercy, that's a funny one!". Sanchez laughed, almost falling off the bench he was sitting on.
"Shut up." Liz said. "It's nothing like that." She said annoyed.
"Oh defending the Doc are we Liz?". Kara-Louise sniggered to which Liz gave her a death stare.
"They're just playing around Lizzie, we know you're not like that." Maria assured.
Then Tess appeared at the scene. Everyone's mouths dropped. There at the bottom of the bleachers stood Tess with her extra bouncy blonde locks, mascara which lengthened her usually small lashes, Makeup here and there, A tight light pink leather ass skirt and a white almost see through blouse which was slightly unbuttoned at the top showing her cleavage and a bit of her light pink bra with matched with her skirt. She wore high heeled pink boots and her nails were manicured. She smiled as she looked up to the gang.
"Hey guys." She purred.
"Is that Tess?". Sanchez asked. "Someone took a trip to whoreville." He scoffed.
Not hearing that comment, Tess made her way up to the gang. She had taken a break to transform herself. She wanted to be like Liz and Maria. Now she wore this kind of outfit and had a makeover, she knew she would soon be accepted in the higher rank.
"Tess, what have you done to yourself?". Kyle asked. "You look-" He was about to pay her a negative comment until she took the chance away from him.
"Look gorgoeus right." She smiled and twirled around flashing her huge nails in their eyes.
"How much did you get your nails done for?". Maria asked. "Slept with another stranger again?".
"Actually, being an escort isn't that bad." Tess said back. "You get to relive pretty woman again."
"Ew, more like the secret diary of a call girl." Liz scrunched her face in disgust. "You're not serious are you? I mean with the whole sleeping around act."
Tess smiled and decided to wedge herself in between Liz and Maria. Maria was enraged, how dare this hoe come again in their lives? "Liz, Liz, Liz." She said. "Let me give you the popular 101. The more promiscious you are, the more likely rich and famous you're likely to be. Take me for example, I have been sleeping here and there and now I'm rich. I can buy whatever you buy. For example that gucci bag you brought for yourself on thanksgiving."
"That was a gift from Grandma Claudia." Liz corrected her. "And no, I don't go around sleeping with strangers to earn money. I work for it. Not sleep for it."
"Well, that's how I operate." Tess said defensively as she took out a nail file and began filing her nails much to the gang's releif.
"Now that's how whores operate." Maria corrected her. "Lesson number one, only hoes, prostos, whores, sluts and slags sleep for money or for free. Lesson number two, gold diggers and man eaters marry for money and sex, lesson number three, popular girls such as Liz, Kara-Louise and myself are the real deal, we're hard to get, we're the apples on top of the tree and only true love can find us. Jerks and players can find you rotten on the ground who don't bother to work hard. You're the fallen apple of the tree bitch." Maria ranted.
"She's so right." Kara-Louise agreed.
"Wow, what a thoughtfull speech." Tess said, not completely understanding Maria's point. "So I'm so lucky. I've been where you guys haven't been yet!". She said, delighted. Liz put a hand to her head, sick of Tess' stupidity.
The clothes had changed, but her personality had stayed.Everyone was sick of her stupidity.
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"That was a piece of cake." Liz scoffed, rolling her eyes. "This time Doctor Evans is going down." She and her friends were sitting on the bleachers outside at lunchtime.
"Oh my god, I cannot beleive he actually fell for that. That man is hornier then a douche bag" Kara-Louise commented to which almost everyone burst out laughing.
"Lord have mercy, that's a funny one!". Sanchez laughed, almost falling off the bench he was sitting on.
"Shut up." Liz said. "It's nothing like that." She said annoyed.
"Oh defending the Doc are we Liz?". Kara-Louise sniggered to which Liz gave her a death stare.
"They're just playing around Lizzie, we know you're not like that." Maria assured.
Then Tess appeared at the scene. Everyone's mouths dropped. There at the bottom of the bleachers stood Tess with her extra bouncy blonde locks, mascara which lengthened her usually small lashes, Makeup here and there, A tight light pink leather ass skirt and a white almost see through blouse which was slightly unbuttoned at the top showing her cleavage and a bit of her light pink bra with matched with her skirt. She wore high heeled pink boots and her nails were manicured. She smiled as she looked up to the gang.
"Hey guys." She purred.
"Is that Tess?". Sanchez asked. "Someone took a trip to whoreville." He scoffed.
Not hearing that comment, Tess made her way up to the gang. She had taken a break to transform herself. She wanted to be like Liz and Maria. Now she wore this kind of outfit and had a makeover, she knew she would soon be accepted in the higher rank.
"Tess, what have you done to yourself?". Kyle asked. "You look-" He was about to pay her a negative comment until she took the chance away from him.
"Look gorgoeus right." She smiled and twirled around flashing her huge nails in their eyes.
"How much did you get your nails done for?". Maria asked. "Slept with another stranger again?".
"Actually, being an escort isn't that bad." Tess said back. "You get to relive pretty woman again."
"Ew, more like the secret diary of a call girl." Liz scrunched her face in disgust. "You're not serious are you? I mean with the whole sleeping around act."
Tess smiled and decided to wedge herself in between Liz and Maria. Maria was enraged, how dare this hoe come again in their lives? "Liz, Liz, Liz." She said. "Let me give you the popular 101. The more promiscious you are, the more likely rich and famous you're likely to be. Take me for example, I have been sleeping here and there and now I'm rich. I can buy whatever you buy. For example that gucci bag you brought for yourself on thanksgiving."
"That was a gift from Grandma Claudia." Liz corrected her. "And no, I don't go around sleeping with strangers to earn money. I work for it. Not sleep for it."
"Well, that's how I operate." Tess said defensively as she took out a nail file and began filing her nails much to the gang's releif.
"Now that's how whores operate." Maria corrected her. "Lesson number one, only hoes, prostos, whores, sluts and slags sleep for money or for free. Lesson number two, gold diggers and man eaters marry for money and sex, lesson number three, popular girls such as Liz, Kara-Louise and myself are the real deal, we're hard to get, we're the apples on top of the tree and only true love can find us. Jerks and players can find you rotten on the ground who don't bother to work hard. You're the fallen apple of the tree bitch." Maria ranted.
"She's so right." Kara-Louise agreed.
"Wow, what a thoughtfull speech." Tess said, not completely understanding Maria's point. "So I'm so lucky. I've been where you guys haven't been yet!". She said, delighted. Liz put a hand to her head, sick of Tess' stupidity.
The clothes had changed, but her personality had stayed.Everyone was sick of her stupidity.
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Re: Pride, Respect...(CC,Mature) 6/22/08 Ch 16 pg 6
Ch 16
Three days passed by and beads of sweat fell down Liz's forehead as she tried to understand what Doctor Evans was trying to explain to her. It was incredibly hot the atmosphere topped off with frustration and worry. She didn't want to look like an idiot to Doctor Evans or she'd screw up getting that grade A. Since when did her brain cells die out?
"Do you understand now?". Max asked her, looking at her with concern. He could tell she had been trying her best to interpret what he was trying to say to her.
"So the braking distance would be 30 miles per hour?". Liz asked after slowing searching the answer.
Max smiled. It had almost been half an hour trying to explain on equation to her. Liz had found physics really hard. Everything else she was good at, it was the mass of confusion about physics that she hadn't been able to understand.
"Good."
"Oh thanks." Liz said, taking a huge gulp of the strawberry flavoured water. Max watched her as she hungrily drank from the bottle. He took this opportunity to admire her. He knew it was wrong but he couldn't help the way his eyes lingered at her silky dark brown hair and the way her lips parted when she spoke. Physically she was attractive, Max would definetly call her beautiful. But he wasn't among those to judge a book by it's cover. He knew behind her beauty lay the real Liz which he had unable to view. He didn't know her well yet, he was slowely getting to know how she reacted to things. These tuitions proved useful. Liz was a really interesting person.
She seemed like a careless spoilt person on the surface but she proved him wrong the day she asked for help. She cared about her future. She wanted to build her future, not wait for it to fall into her lap. Max admired her about that. She had this feistiness to fight for what she wanted. What she deserved.
"Okay, so what's next?". Liz asked, breaking him from his thoughts. Unaware that he was thinking about her. Her being naive attracted him even more. How could she sit there and not notice how he longed for her? Max didn't know how long he could sit next to her and take this.
He bent over her textbook. "Here.." He began, knowing the rest of this lunchtime was going to be pure torture.
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Tess flicked the lights off. It was a lonely friday night as usual. She could have been at the bar having sex with numerous hot guys right now but tonight her body was tired. The curtains were closed, the tv was swtiched off and it was time for bed. She kicked off her slippers and climed on her bed. There was no one to say goodnight too, there was no bed time stories for her and no one comfort her while she cried to sleep.
When she finally found sleep, Tess drifted off into her dream world....
She was back in school again, She was alone waking in the halls. She was in her nightgown she realised. She found herself walking into her biology classroom. Doctor Evans was already there. In nothing but boxer shorts. Tess licked her lips. She always found Doctor Evans irresitably attractive althought she wouldn't admit it out aloud. After the nasty incident with Sanchez, there was only one man she could count on not to hurt her feelings; Which was Doctor Evans. He seemed mature, smart and well like a really nice guy.
"Hey Tess." Doctor Evans smirked.
Tess felt heat pool between her thighs. This man's voice was so seductive. She loved his deep voice.
He was resting on the desk but got up on Tess's arrival. He got off the desk. Tess stopped walked towards him.
"What do I have to do to please you?". She asked.
"Touch me." He ordered.
She was almost going to faint. He was asking her to touch him, he was giving her permission to touch him. Life had never been so considerate to her.
When she was about to step forward, he stopped her. "Wait, answer one question."
"Of course sir."
"Is magnesium oxide a compound or an element?". He asked, looking at her breasts. Tess wanted him so much now.
"Sir, I don't really care. Right now I want to touch you." She said and rushed upto him crashing her lips on his.
"Wrong answer." He mumbled between her kisses as she reached down to stroke him. God his lips felt good. Tess wanted more. She touched him down there...
But soon the waking alarm awoke her.
She jumped up. She forgot to put her alarm off. It was saturday. And she just had an erotic dream about her and Doctor Evans....
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Three days passed by and beads of sweat fell down Liz's forehead as she tried to understand what Doctor Evans was trying to explain to her. It was incredibly hot the atmosphere topped off with frustration and worry. She didn't want to look like an idiot to Doctor Evans or she'd screw up getting that grade A. Since when did her brain cells die out?
"Do you understand now?". Max asked her, looking at her with concern. He could tell she had been trying her best to interpret what he was trying to say to her.
"So the braking distance would be 30 miles per hour?". Liz asked after slowing searching the answer.
Max smiled. It had almost been half an hour trying to explain on equation to her. Liz had found physics really hard. Everything else she was good at, it was the mass of confusion about physics that she hadn't been able to understand.
"Good."
"Oh thanks." Liz said, taking a huge gulp of the strawberry flavoured water. Max watched her as she hungrily drank from the bottle. He took this opportunity to admire her. He knew it was wrong but he couldn't help the way his eyes lingered at her silky dark brown hair and the way her lips parted when she spoke. Physically she was attractive, Max would definetly call her beautiful. But he wasn't among those to judge a book by it's cover. He knew behind her beauty lay the real Liz which he had unable to view. He didn't know her well yet, he was slowely getting to know how she reacted to things. These tuitions proved useful. Liz was a really interesting person.
She seemed like a careless spoilt person on the surface but she proved him wrong the day she asked for help. She cared about her future. She wanted to build her future, not wait for it to fall into her lap. Max admired her about that. She had this feistiness to fight for what she wanted. What she deserved.
"Okay, so what's next?". Liz asked, breaking him from his thoughts. Unaware that he was thinking about her. Her being naive attracted him even more. How could she sit there and not notice how he longed for her? Max didn't know how long he could sit next to her and take this.
He bent over her textbook. "Here.." He began, knowing the rest of this lunchtime was going to be pure torture.
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Tess flicked the lights off. It was a lonely friday night as usual. She could have been at the bar having sex with numerous hot guys right now but tonight her body was tired. The curtains were closed, the tv was swtiched off and it was time for bed. She kicked off her slippers and climed on her bed. There was no one to say goodnight too, there was no bed time stories for her and no one comfort her while she cried to sleep.
When she finally found sleep, Tess drifted off into her dream world....
She was back in school again, She was alone waking in the halls. She was in her nightgown she realised. She found herself walking into her biology classroom. Doctor Evans was already there. In nothing but boxer shorts. Tess licked her lips. She always found Doctor Evans irresitably attractive althought she wouldn't admit it out aloud. After the nasty incident with Sanchez, there was only one man she could count on not to hurt her feelings; Which was Doctor Evans. He seemed mature, smart and well like a really nice guy.
"Hey Tess." Doctor Evans smirked.
Tess felt heat pool between her thighs. This man's voice was so seductive. She loved his deep voice.
He was resting on the desk but got up on Tess's arrival. He got off the desk. Tess stopped walked towards him.
"What do I have to do to please you?". She asked.
"Touch me." He ordered.
She was almost going to faint. He was asking her to touch him, he was giving her permission to touch him. Life had never been so considerate to her.
When she was about to step forward, he stopped her. "Wait, answer one question."
"Of course sir."
"Is magnesium oxide a compound or an element?". He asked, looking at her breasts. Tess wanted him so much now.
"Sir, I don't really care. Right now I want to touch you." She said and rushed upto him crashing her lips on his.
"Wrong answer." He mumbled between her kisses as she reached down to stroke him. God his lips felt good. Tess wanted more. She touched him down there...
But soon the waking alarm awoke her.
She jumped up. She forgot to put her alarm off. It was saturday. And she just had an erotic dream about her and Doctor Evans....
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Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 6/24/08 Ch 17 pg 7
Ch 17
"Apparently, the school is considering to cut your name of the list." Max told his sister as soon as he finished talking with his mother on the phone. He looked at his sister who seemed to not give a damn in the world and was in his apartment, sitting on his couch, watching his TV.
Isabel was sitting on the couch watching 'The fresh prince of bel air' which was one of her favourite TV shows. She had heard Max on the phone but decided not to pay attention.
"Isabel I'm talking to you." He said putting the phone down on the receiver. Here she was chilling out while he was picking up the pieces of her shattered life and was getting cut in the process.
"Max, just leave it okay?". Isabel muttered, not wanting to miss her programme.
"Isabel, you're bringing shame on our name, do you know that?". He said.
The Evans family had been of of the highest ranked family in Alberqueqe. Hard work had been passed down generations to keep this family in the top market. Now Isabel was being careless, neglecting her education and the family's name to participate in joy riding and underage drinking. Max didn't know what had happened to his little sister. It was like she was a completely different person. She wasn't acting herself latetly.
"Whose nature? Yours or mine?". She asked sarcastically and decided to turn the TV off before standing up to face her brother. "Why don't I enroll at Roswell high instead Max? How about that? Will that satisfy you people? Atleast I won't be coming home to no one, atleast I won't get cheated on". She broke into a sob.
Max picked up on her last words. "Tony cheated on you?". He gasped in shock and pain.
As far as he could remember, the pair were almost inseperable from third grade. Everyone including himself would beleive they were meant for each other. If Isabel was the princess, Tony would be her prince charming. They've been close since third grade and have been dating since they were sixteen. Max had approved of Tony, he came from a respectable family and had possessed gentleman like manners with a smart dress sense, just the perfect man cut out for Isabel He would say. Little did he know that behind that posh attitude lay a sinister desire of infidelity. That Tony dared to cheat on his little sister. There would be hell to pay.
"With my best friend Amanda!". Isabel screamed. "Can you beleive he fucking fucked her a year ago on Micheal's birthday?. And none of them told me. For a year I thought he was faithful. He deserves the award for being the best liar since he made me beleive he could be faithful and the only one for me." Isabel sobbed harder. "But then, when that bitch of a best fucking friend Amanda came back from Paris, things had changed. He dumped me for her. Then only did I find out. A whole fucking year later."
Max gritted his teeth in anger. How dare Tony and Amanda betrey Isabel like that? "Those fucking pieces of shit."
"And you know the best part is...both of them decided what to do, when to tell me. It was like I was a puppet in their hands or something. They didn't care who I was or how I would feel." Isabel chanted. "They didn't care how I would feel."
Now Max understood why Isabel had run away from home. Going to school everyday and seeing Tony with Amanda had broke her heart and reminded her of their betreyal. Max didn't blame Isabel for running away for that. Heck, maybe he would have done the same.
"Come here Isabel." Max took his little sister in his arms and soothed her. "You don't need jerks like that when you have a brother like me. I won't let anyone hurt you ever again." He told her. Isabel hugged him tighter and her sobs slowely subsided. "Thanks Max." She sniffed.
"I'll get you an application form for enrolling in Roswell high. How about that?". He asked her.
Isabel smiled. "Thanks Max, Thanks for everything." She knew she could count on her big brother.
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Can you hear me!
"Yes I defo can." Maria giggled, holding Carlos' hand and spotting Micheal sitting across the room with that dreadful courtney.
I am numb but i can still feel you
Sometimes I’m blind but I see you
You are here but so far away
"Come on then." Liz said, holding her boyfriend Adam's hand. The two couples went over to where Micheal and Courtney who were waiting for them. "Hello guys." Liz said smiling at the two, she was most certainly not smiling at Courtney that was for sure.
"Hey." Micheal smiled back, looking at Maria who was in another guy's arms. He was envious straight away.
"Thanks for waiting." Maria said before Carlos helped her into her seat and Liz's boyfriend Adam did the same.
I’m on a coaster-collision
Am not about to give in
Can’t explain my position or the condition that I’m in.
"Well, this is Liz by the way Micheal you've already met her that day. This is Liz's boyfriend Adam, they've been together for two years.." Maria introduced.
"Hey." Adam said politely and both Courtney and Micheal repsonded back.
"And this is my man, Carlos." Maria said, linking her arm with him on purpose to make Micheal envious as per Liz's plan.
Hey.. Hey.. Hey all the way
DJ let it play.
Hey Hey Can You Hear Me?
Oooow
"Everyone this is Micheal Guerin and his girlfriend Courtney." Maria said, almost spitting out Courtney's name in digust.
Courtney on the other hand, glared at Maria. How dare she act so casual after that Facebook drama? This girl was such bitch. "Or don't you mean Courtweiler?". Courtney snapped causing Liz and Maria to almost giggle.
"Hey leave it." Micheal warned.
Don’t you mean that you’re my vision
I gotta make a decision
Do I go, do I stay? sta-a-a-a-ay?
"Micheal don't!-" Courtney was about to being her bitching but stopped when she received confused stares from Adam and Carlos. She didn't want to scare the hot guys away. She faked a small laugh. "Now where was I...yeah.. what are you guys going to order?". She picked up her menu. "See I was thinking.."
Where I am is no limit, no walls, no ceilings
No intermission, so let
Let the party begin
Hey.. Hey.. Hey all the way
DJ let it play.
Hey Hey Can You Hear Me?
Oooow
Hey.. Hey.. Hey all the way
DJ let it play.
Hey Hey Can You Hear Me?
Oooow
As the song ended, the had ordered and was now on the verge of tucking in until Courtney took this opportunity to use her thin high heels to kick Maria on the shins under the table. She hated that Maria. Maria gave a sharp wince of pain and looked at Courtney who smilled discreetly before shooting a small glance at Maria while opened her mouth to make room for the forkfull of noodles she had wrapped around it.
Maria decided to kick her back causing the fork to go slightly more forward then it should in Courtney's mouth which sent Courtney almost chocking on her noodles.
Liz noticed this and restrained a laugh. Courtney began to cough and splutter the noodles.
"You alright Courtney?". Micheal asked, worried. Her face had turn blue almost and he grabbed her glass of water and tried to make her drink it. "Here drink this." He said and Courtney drank it desperately trying to shove the noddles down her throat.
She spluttered for a while causing everyone to look at her with disgust and bits of her saliva fell into her plate full of chicken chow mein.
"Ew." Maria said.
She glared at Maria again who was just finishing her egg fried rice with schezuan chicken. Maria licked her lips. "Bitch." Courtney growled, pointing at Maria again receiving stares from Adam and Carlos thinking that she was strange.
Courntey finished her plateful of noodles before thinking of a way to avenge Maria who decided to follow Micheal who excused himself from the table. Liz and Adam went to their making out sessions, leaving a very uncomfortable Courtney with Carlos shooting weird glances at her. He didn't want to talk to her. She was much worser then what Maria described.
"Wha you looking at?". Courtney asked, wiping her lips with the napkin.
"I don't know." Carlos honestly said, shrugging.
Micheal had gone into the men's room, Maria was waiting outside and then Carlos arrived. This was part of their plan. Carlos realised what he had to to and swiftly took Maria in his arms. At that point Micheal had come out and Maria was in front of him in Carlos' arms.
"Did I tell you how beautiful you are?". Carlos used that seductive accent which Liz had made him rehearse for an hour.
"Oh Carlos don't make me blush." Maria replied shyly and looked down. "Anyone could look." She then slowely met Micheal's eyes which were full of jealously. "Micheal!". She sqeaked, acting surprised to see him there. "We were just.." She said before Carlos finished her line of for her.
"We were just about to resort to kissing." He said in a posh spanish accent. "Right bebe?". He looked at Maria.
Micheal watched. He wanted to be the one calling Maria bebe in that spanish accent to seduce her, he wanted to be having her in his arms and kissing her.
"Maybe later Carlos. Not now." Maria whispered and detached herself from his arms. "I'll see you at the table." She said and Carlos nodded, taking his cue to walk into the men's room.
Maria smiled at Micheal who moved out the way for Carlos to exit the scene. "So you're intimate?". He asked her.
"Carlos and I are best friends until he asked me out a week ago." Maria shrugged. "I couldn't say no since he's every girl's dream."
"Is he yours?". Micheal asked her, with jealously about to dominate.
"That's what I'm going to find out." Maria shrugged and before she knew it, Micheal's lips were on hers and his hands were on her hips, pulling her closer to him.
She felt the air rush out from her lips and Micheal passionatly kissed her over and over again. Suddently he parted from. "Well, this is my dream." He said. "I wanted you for so long." He confessed.
"Then be with me." Maria said, tracing his lips with her finger.
"I need you." Micheal urged, kissing her again. Maria closed her eyes and kissed him back with joy. Liz's plan had worked!, she loved that girl!
"Oh my god!". Courtney shrieked seeing Micheal making out with her arch enemy. "Micheal what are you doing?".
He broke apart from Maria and looked at Courtney. "You're dumped." He said and went back to kissing Maria.
Courtney was so shocked and mortified, this Maria had stole her boyfriend. She didn't want to cause a scene so she stormed out the restuarent.
Maria and Micheal smiled as they rested their forehead against each others. "Go out with me?". He asked her.
She smiled. "Hell yeah".
Liz would have to be thanked over and over again, Maria thought. Liz was her messiah and the bestest friend anyone could have she thought as she returned to the table hand in hand with Micheal.
"Apparently, the school is considering to cut your name of the list." Max told his sister as soon as he finished talking with his mother on the phone. He looked at his sister who seemed to not give a damn in the world and was in his apartment, sitting on his couch, watching his TV.
Isabel was sitting on the couch watching 'The fresh prince of bel air' which was one of her favourite TV shows. She had heard Max on the phone but decided not to pay attention.
"Isabel I'm talking to you." He said putting the phone down on the receiver. Here she was chilling out while he was picking up the pieces of her shattered life and was getting cut in the process.
"Max, just leave it okay?". Isabel muttered, not wanting to miss her programme.
"Isabel, you're bringing shame on our name, do you know that?". He said.
The Evans family had been of of the highest ranked family in Alberqueqe. Hard work had been passed down generations to keep this family in the top market. Now Isabel was being careless, neglecting her education and the family's name to participate in joy riding and underage drinking. Max didn't know what had happened to his little sister. It was like she was a completely different person. She wasn't acting herself latetly.
"Whose nature? Yours or mine?". She asked sarcastically and decided to turn the TV off before standing up to face her brother. "Why don't I enroll at Roswell high instead Max? How about that? Will that satisfy you people? Atleast I won't be coming home to no one, atleast I won't get cheated on". She broke into a sob.
Max picked up on her last words. "Tony cheated on you?". He gasped in shock and pain.
As far as he could remember, the pair were almost inseperable from third grade. Everyone including himself would beleive they were meant for each other. If Isabel was the princess, Tony would be her prince charming. They've been close since third grade and have been dating since they were sixteen. Max had approved of Tony, he came from a respectable family and had possessed gentleman like manners with a smart dress sense, just the perfect man cut out for Isabel He would say. Little did he know that behind that posh attitude lay a sinister desire of infidelity. That Tony dared to cheat on his little sister. There would be hell to pay.
"With my best friend Amanda!". Isabel screamed. "Can you beleive he fucking fucked her a year ago on Micheal's birthday?. And none of them told me. For a year I thought he was faithful. He deserves the award for being the best liar since he made me beleive he could be faithful and the only one for me." Isabel sobbed harder. "But then, when that bitch of a best fucking friend Amanda came back from Paris, things had changed. He dumped me for her. Then only did I find out. A whole fucking year later."
Max gritted his teeth in anger. How dare Tony and Amanda betrey Isabel like that? "Those fucking pieces of shit."
"And you know the best part is...both of them decided what to do, when to tell me. It was like I was a puppet in their hands or something. They didn't care who I was or how I would feel." Isabel chanted. "They didn't care how I would feel."
Now Max understood why Isabel had run away from home. Going to school everyday and seeing Tony with Amanda had broke her heart and reminded her of their betreyal. Max didn't blame Isabel for running away for that. Heck, maybe he would have done the same.
"Come here Isabel." Max took his little sister in his arms and soothed her. "You don't need jerks like that when you have a brother like me. I won't let anyone hurt you ever again." He told her. Isabel hugged him tighter and her sobs slowely subsided. "Thanks Max." She sniffed.
"I'll get you an application form for enrolling in Roswell high. How about that?". He asked her.
Isabel smiled. "Thanks Max, Thanks for everything." She knew she could count on her big brother.
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Can you hear me!
"Yes I defo can." Maria giggled, holding Carlos' hand and spotting Micheal sitting across the room with that dreadful courtney.
I am numb but i can still feel you
Sometimes I’m blind but I see you
You are here but so far away
"Come on then." Liz said, holding her boyfriend Adam's hand. The two couples went over to where Micheal and Courtney who were waiting for them. "Hello guys." Liz said smiling at the two, she was most certainly not smiling at Courtney that was for sure.
"Hey." Micheal smiled back, looking at Maria who was in another guy's arms. He was envious straight away.
"Thanks for waiting." Maria said before Carlos helped her into her seat and Liz's boyfriend Adam did the same.
I’m on a coaster-collision
Am not about to give in
Can’t explain my position or the condition that I’m in.
"Well, this is Liz by the way Micheal you've already met her that day. This is Liz's boyfriend Adam, they've been together for two years.." Maria introduced.
"Hey." Adam said politely and both Courtney and Micheal repsonded back.
"And this is my man, Carlos." Maria said, linking her arm with him on purpose to make Micheal envious as per Liz's plan.
Hey.. Hey.. Hey all the way
DJ let it play.
Hey Hey Can You Hear Me?
Oooow
"Everyone this is Micheal Guerin and his girlfriend Courtney." Maria said, almost spitting out Courtney's name in digust.
Courtney on the other hand, glared at Maria. How dare she act so casual after that Facebook drama? This girl was such bitch. "Or don't you mean Courtweiler?". Courtney snapped causing Liz and Maria to almost giggle.
"Hey leave it." Micheal warned.
Don’t you mean that you’re my vision
I gotta make a decision
Do I go, do I stay? sta-a-a-a-ay?
"Micheal don't!-" Courtney was about to being her bitching but stopped when she received confused stares from Adam and Carlos. She didn't want to scare the hot guys away. She faked a small laugh. "Now where was I...yeah.. what are you guys going to order?". She picked up her menu. "See I was thinking.."
Where I am is no limit, no walls, no ceilings
No intermission, so let
Let the party begin
Hey.. Hey.. Hey all the way
DJ let it play.
Hey Hey Can You Hear Me?
Oooow
Hey.. Hey.. Hey all the way
DJ let it play.
Hey Hey Can You Hear Me?
Oooow
As the song ended, the had ordered and was now on the verge of tucking in until Courtney took this opportunity to use her thin high heels to kick Maria on the shins under the table. She hated that Maria. Maria gave a sharp wince of pain and looked at Courtney who smilled discreetly before shooting a small glance at Maria while opened her mouth to make room for the forkfull of noodles she had wrapped around it.
Maria decided to kick her back causing the fork to go slightly more forward then it should in Courtney's mouth which sent Courtney almost chocking on her noodles.
Liz noticed this and restrained a laugh. Courtney began to cough and splutter the noodles.
"You alright Courtney?". Micheal asked, worried. Her face had turn blue almost and he grabbed her glass of water and tried to make her drink it. "Here drink this." He said and Courtney drank it desperately trying to shove the noddles down her throat.
She spluttered for a while causing everyone to look at her with disgust and bits of her saliva fell into her plate full of chicken chow mein.
"Ew." Maria said.
She glared at Maria again who was just finishing her egg fried rice with schezuan chicken. Maria licked her lips. "Bitch." Courtney growled, pointing at Maria again receiving stares from Adam and Carlos thinking that she was strange.
Courntey finished her plateful of noodles before thinking of a way to avenge Maria who decided to follow Micheal who excused himself from the table. Liz and Adam went to their making out sessions, leaving a very uncomfortable Courtney with Carlos shooting weird glances at her. He didn't want to talk to her. She was much worser then what Maria described.
"Wha you looking at?". Courtney asked, wiping her lips with the napkin.
"I don't know." Carlos honestly said, shrugging.
Micheal had gone into the men's room, Maria was waiting outside and then Carlos arrived. This was part of their plan. Carlos realised what he had to to and swiftly took Maria in his arms. At that point Micheal had come out and Maria was in front of him in Carlos' arms.
"Did I tell you how beautiful you are?". Carlos used that seductive accent which Liz had made him rehearse for an hour.
"Oh Carlos don't make me blush." Maria replied shyly and looked down. "Anyone could look." She then slowely met Micheal's eyes which were full of jealously. "Micheal!". She sqeaked, acting surprised to see him there. "We were just.." She said before Carlos finished her line of for her.
"We were just about to resort to kissing." He said in a posh spanish accent. "Right bebe?". He looked at Maria.
Micheal watched. He wanted to be the one calling Maria bebe in that spanish accent to seduce her, he wanted to be having her in his arms and kissing her.
"Maybe later Carlos. Not now." Maria whispered and detached herself from his arms. "I'll see you at the table." She said and Carlos nodded, taking his cue to walk into the men's room.
Maria smiled at Micheal who moved out the way for Carlos to exit the scene. "So you're intimate?". He asked her.
"Carlos and I are best friends until he asked me out a week ago." Maria shrugged. "I couldn't say no since he's every girl's dream."
"Is he yours?". Micheal asked her, with jealously about to dominate.
"That's what I'm going to find out." Maria shrugged and before she knew it, Micheal's lips were on hers and his hands were on her hips, pulling her closer to him.
She felt the air rush out from her lips and Micheal passionatly kissed her over and over again. Suddently he parted from. "Well, this is my dream." He said. "I wanted you for so long." He confessed.
"Then be with me." Maria said, tracing his lips with her finger.
"I need you." Micheal urged, kissing her again. Maria closed her eyes and kissed him back with joy. Liz's plan had worked!, she loved that girl!
"Oh my god!". Courtney shrieked seeing Micheal making out with her arch enemy. "Micheal what are you doing?".
He broke apart from Maria and looked at Courtney. "You're dumped." He said and went back to kissing Maria.
Courtney was so shocked and mortified, this Maria had stole her boyfriend. She didn't want to cause a scene so she stormed out the restuarent.
Maria and Micheal smiled as they rested their forehead against each others. "Go out with me?". He asked her.
She smiled. "Hell yeah".
Liz would have to be thanked over and over again, Maria thought. Liz was her messiah and the bestest friend anyone could have she thought as she returned to the table hand in hand with Micheal.
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Ch 18
"You what?!". Kara-Louise exclaimed with wide eyes. Here they were in the empty class room with Tess Harding who just narrated her dream last night...with Doctor Evans.
"No, no, don't get me wrong. It was just a dream not a fantasy. I don't fancy Doctor Evans." Tess protested before giving them the idea that she was mad for Doctor Evans. Well the truth was, she did want him. So much.
"That.Is. Disgusting." Sanchez said to Tess. "I don't think he would remotely think you're hot."
"Shut up Sanchez. Just because I got over you, you don't need to be so jealous." Tess snapped, for the first time she answered back. "Yeah and Doctor Evans has more class then you'll ever have."
Liz, Maria along with Kyle and Alex entered the classroom. On seeing them, Kara-Loiuse rushed to them. "Hey guys you won't beleive this!". She said breathlessly, can't wait to break the news to them.
The four were happy about Maria and Micheal getting together and they looked at an excited Kara-Louise who seemed to have more exciting news to give.
"What is it?". Kyle asked, noticing Tess was also there in her skimpy outfit. He guessed the news had something to do with her.
"Tess had an erotic dream about Doctor Evans in the weekend." Kara-Louise said.
"Urgghh". Came the same reply from the four of them. Maria cocked her head to the side and said to Tess. "You dirty cow. You probably had enough of the one night stand jerks and now want to go for the teacher? You're gross." She gagged.
Alex shook his head at Tess. "You really are disgusting." He said.
Tess looked at Liz who said nothing at all. "Well, I thought I'd tell you my secrets because you're my friends. But no, you have to make fun of me and be so damn rude." She pointed a finger at everyone. "I hate all of you people." She cried angrily before grabbing her jacket and storming out the room.
Everyone was shocked at Tess' new attitude. "What the hell happened to her?". Liz asked in surprise, wondering where the new Tess emerged from.
"Must have caught an STD". Maria sniggered. "Stessfull tramatic Disorder and Sexually transmitted Disease at the same time."
"That is gross." Sanchez said. "You're right though. That bitch is an STD herself."
"So enough of the Tess talk." Kyle rubbed his hands. "Where's the food at?."
"I thought you were gunna get it?". Sanchez shrugged.
"You mean you ain't paid a visit to the vending machine yet?".
Sanchez shook his head and Kyle sighed.
"Here's the monies". Sanchez said, handing some coins in Kyle's hands. "You don't mind do you?".
Kyle looked at him. "Course I mind."
Liz decided to intervene. "Here, I'll go and get it."
"And me." Alex volunteered talking half of the cash into his hands.
"Thanks guys." Kyle said.
They gave their orders and then both Liz and Alex went down to the vending machines in the hallway to collect the food. Liz put in some quaters and pressed codes to get a few doritoes and hershey chocolate bars while Alex got the sodas from the machine next to the one Liz was using.
"So, how things going with the Doc?". Alex randomly asked while pressing the buttons.
"It's going fine. I'm starting to get what I didn't understand before. "Liz said, busy with collecting the snacks.
"Good good." Alex smiled.
None spoke a word until they got enough snacks in their hand for the group. Liz had a handful of chips and chocolate bars in her hand that she didn't see what was coming in front of her as she turned around and felt a strong impact, causing the snacks to jump out from her arms and into the air while she almost fell back when two strong arms out of nowhere caught her and cradled her back to stop her from falling. "What the hell?!!".
She was vaguely aware of the snacks falling on the floor as she became lost in those amber eyes. Doctor Evans was staring directly back in her eyes.
Such capivating eyes she thought. Why hadn't she noticed that before?
While he was holding her, Max was trying hard not to get lost in her dark brown eyes. Damn, she was so beautiful. He almost kissed her for it. But the reality, the ego stopped him. He knew he couldn't kiss. He was her teacher and she was his student. They could NOT go beyond that.
While the two were getting lost into each other's eyes, Alex watched them with curiousity, silently waiting for them to part. It was like being in a movie where the first two lovers meet each other. He was surprised Liz hadn't thrown Doctor Evans off her like he was fire. He bent down and collected the snacks of the floor.
"Liz?". Adam, her boyfriend called from across the hallway. He had went in the classroom to be with her when her friend said she was getting the snacks from the hallway so he decided to find her there. But to his surprise, his beautiful girlfriend was in someone elses arms, looking at him like she was supposed to look at her boyfriend only.
Liz heard her boyfriend's call and then slowely rose as Max helped her to her feet. What the hell was that? "You okay?". Max asked her softly.
"Uh yeah". Liz said in a shaky breath and waited for her boyfriend to arrive. Adam put an arm around Liz's waist protectively and drew her closer to him. "Hey baby. I missed you." He kissed her on the cheek. "Great time last night though." He said on purpose, wanting to make the intruder notice that Liz was his girl and taken by him.
"You two are dating?". Max said in disbeleif. He should have known, a pretty girl like Liz Parker could not stay single for long.
"Um yeah." Liz nodded feeling hot all of a sudden. Doctor Evans was surprisingly...hot. But she had to shake off that thought. She had a boyfriend and Doctor Evans was her teacher. This was just nothing but an accident. Doctor Evans came to her rescue. It was just a knight in shining armour feeling that lasted less then a minute.
"Two years. I'm Adam West sir." Liz's boyfriend said on purpose. He knew who this man was. Liz's annoying biology teacher or something. Liz had often reported his biased behaviour on her from him. Adam didn't like this Doctor Evans one bit either.
"Doctor Evans."
"I know sir." Adam said. "So sir, you planning on to be a permanant teacher here?". Adam wanted to show this Doctor Evans his place. He was a teacher. Liz was a young student like himself. Teachers cannot love students like lovers.
"Adam I think we should go now." Liz intterupted, wanting to leave. It like breathing with no air. She was confused but knew Adam was purposely attacking Doctor Evans who looked hurt. She took her boyfriend's hand in hers. "Thanks for breaking my fall Doctor Evans." She said politely, giving him a small smile.
"You're welcome." He smiled back which caused Liz to be relieved, at least the hurt was reducing. "See you later Doc."
"See you Liz." He said in a small voice as she watched her leave.
Alex shortly followed the couple wondering what just happened back there, Adam and Liz were also thinking the same question.
And Max...he felt so hurt thinking that Liz would never feel the same way about him like he felt about her.
"You what?!". Kara-Louise exclaimed with wide eyes. Here they were in the empty class room with Tess Harding who just narrated her dream last night...with Doctor Evans.
"No, no, don't get me wrong. It was just a dream not a fantasy. I don't fancy Doctor Evans." Tess protested before giving them the idea that she was mad for Doctor Evans. Well the truth was, she did want him. So much.
"That.Is. Disgusting." Sanchez said to Tess. "I don't think he would remotely think you're hot."
"Shut up Sanchez. Just because I got over you, you don't need to be so jealous." Tess snapped, for the first time she answered back. "Yeah and Doctor Evans has more class then you'll ever have."
Liz, Maria along with Kyle and Alex entered the classroom. On seeing them, Kara-Loiuse rushed to them. "Hey guys you won't beleive this!". She said breathlessly, can't wait to break the news to them.
The four were happy about Maria and Micheal getting together and they looked at an excited Kara-Louise who seemed to have more exciting news to give.
"What is it?". Kyle asked, noticing Tess was also there in her skimpy outfit. He guessed the news had something to do with her.
"Tess had an erotic dream about Doctor Evans in the weekend." Kara-Louise said.
"Urgghh". Came the same reply from the four of them. Maria cocked her head to the side and said to Tess. "You dirty cow. You probably had enough of the one night stand jerks and now want to go for the teacher? You're gross." She gagged.
Alex shook his head at Tess. "You really are disgusting." He said.
Tess looked at Liz who said nothing at all. "Well, I thought I'd tell you my secrets because you're my friends. But no, you have to make fun of me and be so damn rude." She pointed a finger at everyone. "I hate all of you people." She cried angrily before grabbing her jacket and storming out the room.
Everyone was shocked at Tess' new attitude. "What the hell happened to her?". Liz asked in surprise, wondering where the new Tess emerged from.
"Must have caught an STD". Maria sniggered. "Stessfull tramatic Disorder and Sexually transmitted Disease at the same time."
"That is gross." Sanchez said. "You're right though. That bitch is an STD herself."
"So enough of the Tess talk." Kyle rubbed his hands. "Where's the food at?."
"I thought you were gunna get it?". Sanchez shrugged.
"You mean you ain't paid a visit to the vending machine yet?".
Sanchez shook his head and Kyle sighed.
"Here's the monies". Sanchez said, handing some coins in Kyle's hands. "You don't mind do you?".
Kyle looked at him. "Course I mind."
Liz decided to intervene. "Here, I'll go and get it."
"And me." Alex volunteered talking half of the cash into his hands.
"Thanks guys." Kyle said.
They gave their orders and then both Liz and Alex went down to the vending machines in the hallway to collect the food. Liz put in some quaters and pressed codes to get a few doritoes and hershey chocolate bars while Alex got the sodas from the machine next to the one Liz was using.
"So, how things going with the Doc?". Alex randomly asked while pressing the buttons.
"It's going fine. I'm starting to get what I didn't understand before. "Liz said, busy with collecting the snacks.
"Good good." Alex smiled.
None spoke a word until they got enough snacks in their hand for the group. Liz had a handful of chips and chocolate bars in her hand that she didn't see what was coming in front of her as she turned around and felt a strong impact, causing the snacks to jump out from her arms and into the air while she almost fell back when two strong arms out of nowhere caught her and cradled her back to stop her from falling. "What the hell?!!".
She was vaguely aware of the snacks falling on the floor as she became lost in those amber eyes. Doctor Evans was staring directly back in her eyes.
Such capivating eyes she thought. Why hadn't she noticed that before?
While he was holding her, Max was trying hard not to get lost in her dark brown eyes. Damn, she was so beautiful. He almost kissed her for it. But the reality, the ego stopped him. He knew he couldn't kiss. He was her teacher and she was his student. They could NOT go beyond that.
While the two were getting lost into each other's eyes, Alex watched them with curiousity, silently waiting for them to part. It was like being in a movie where the first two lovers meet each other. He was surprised Liz hadn't thrown Doctor Evans off her like he was fire. He bent down and collected the snacks of the floor.
"Liz?". Adam, her boyfriend called from across the hallway. He had went in the classroom to be with her when her friend said she was getting the snacks from the hallway so he decided to find her there. But to his surprise, his beautiful girlfriend was in someone elses arms, looking at him like she was supposed to look at her boyfriend only.
Liz heard her boyfriend's call and then slowely rose as Max helped her to her feet. What the hell was that? "You okay?". Max asked her softly.
"Uh yeah". Liz said in a shaky breath and waited for her boyfriend to arrive. Adam put an arm around Liz's waist protectively and drew her closer to him. "Hey baby. I missed you." He kissed her on the cheek. "Great time last night though." He said on purpose, wanting to make the intruder notice that Liz was his girl and taken by him.
"You two are dating?". Max said in disbeleif. He should have known, a pretty girl like Liz Parker could not stay single for long.
"Um yeah." Liz nodded feeling hot all of a sudden. Doctor Evans was surprisingly...hot. But she had to shake off that thought. She had a boyfriend and Doctor Evans was her teacher. This was just nothing but an accident. Doctor Evans came to her rescue. It was just a knight in shining armour feeling that lasted less then a minute.
"Two years. I'm Adam West sir." Liz's boyfriend said on purpose. He knew who this man was. Liz's annoying biology teacher or something. Liz had often reported his biased behaviour on her from him. Adam didn't like this Doctor Evans one bit either.
"Doctor Evans."
"I know sir." Adam said. "So sir, you planning on to be a permanant teacher here?". Adam wanted to show this Doctor Evans his place. He was a teacher. Liz was a young student like himself. Teachers cannot love students like lovers.
"Adam I think we should go now." Liz intterupted, wanting to leave. It like breathing with no air. She was confused but knew Adam was purposely attacking Doctor Evans who looked hurt. She took her boyfriend's hand in hers. "Thanks for breaking my fall Doctor Evans." She said politely, giving him a small smile.
"You're welcome." He smiled back which caused Liz to be relieved, at least the hurt was reducing. "See you later Doc."
"See you Liz." He said in a small voice as she watched her leave.
Alex shortly followed the couple wondering what just happened back there, Adam and Liz were also thinking the same question.
And Max...he felt so hurt thinking that Liz would never feel the same way about him like he felt about her.
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Ch 19
After school, the gang headed to their usual haunt, Ben and Jerry's icecream parlour. Tucking into a delicious bohiemein rasberry ben and Jerry, Liz began to think about her close encounter with Doctor Evans..how dreamy did his eyes look. She could taste the delicious flavour of his look..
"I cannot beleive Tess is having dreams about Doctor Evans. Newsflash!, local whore has a taste for teachers, beware all you young male teachers, you may find yourselves hinding behind the desk from a certain blonde." Maria sniggered.
All of them erupted wih laughter, Liz joined in trying to hide her feelings. She knew they all came here to gossip but she didn't like to make fun of someone. Back in the days she didn't care but now, it seemed really nasty.
"Someone better put a leash on Tess!". Sanchez cried, laughing his head off.
While they continued to make fun of Tess being in 'love' with Doctor Evans, Liz felt guilty to not defending either of them. She feared Tess became a whore because of them and Doctor Evans was being attacked verbally behind his back for no reason. He never treated them like dirt, although he had been making Liz feel upset a few times that was only because he cared for her as a student and wanted to bring out the best in her. She understood now. Her innocence was resurfing after being buried by the badness which she had conformed to to enhance her status. Everything she did in the past was to boost her pride and obtain as much respect which caused her to be prejudiced against those who were weaker then her and she held a great prejudice for Doctor Evans because he was a challenge to her but really she realised she held a prejudice against herself. Thanks to Doctor Evans, she realised where she was going wrong and was ever so thankful to Doctor Evans that she never knew where she started to respect him.
As time went on, the afternoons spent with him made her open her eyes. He was so kind to her and wasted his free time helping her. He wasn't biased in his teaching. Liz was deluded into thinking that. He was trying to be a good teacher and she made his work harder by being a bitch of a student. And on top of that she had faked an apology just to get his help, Liz had never felt like a bitch in her entire life. Was she so blinded that she was causing so much grief to people thinking it was cool?
They were in their classroom in Doctor Evans' class and Sanchez nudged Liz. "Remember Tess' erotic dream about the Doc?" He chuckled and the gang laughed. Liz remained silent and sadly looked at Doctor Evans. Wanting to apologise to him for real. She had enough of being a bitch.
When the lesson ended, Liz told her friends she'd meet up with them later and took this chance to apologize to Doctor Evans and thank him. He too also had some news for her. Good news and wanted to tell her after the class.
"Liz." He smiled.
God, he has a great smile Liz thought, that smile made her melt. Along with his kindness and maturity there was a handsome man.
"Hey sir." Liz smiled.
"Liz I have good news for you." He smiled. "You got a grade A star! Congratulations!". He congratulated her and handed her essay. Liz felt so much joy right now. She always wanted to hear those words.
"Sir, you're not joking are you?". She gasped, putting the apology aside. She wanted this atmosphere to be happy, not sad. She took the essay and a big 'A' star was looking back at her. "Oh my god! THANKS sir!". She exclaimed, feelings tears brimming in her eyes. Why was she getting so emotional? She was used to getting A stars.
"No." Max said. "You should thank yourself, you deserve this grade A star and many A stars to come." He corrected her, already praising her again and again. The time spent with her in the tuturials had helped him to get to know her better, there was no snobiness, nor stuck up behaviour. Liz was behaving like herself and he liked what he saw. A hardworking enthusiastic young girl ready to get lots of sucess in the future.
"Thanks for helping me sir." Liz whispered, holding back the tears. Max saw those unshed tears in her beautiful dark brown eyes and went upto her, in an innate response, he brushed a single tear that escape the pools held back.
"You don't need to cry." He said softly.
Liz never felt this much proximity to Doctor Evans before. He was such a gentleman but he was in her personal bubble. Had they gotten so close?
Liz looked at him in a trance but smiled. "I won't. I won't cry."
And the two looked at each other like that day when Liz was in his arms.
Through the glass in the doorway, Liz's boyfriend Adam West was watching in envy and anger. How dare this Doctor try and make a move on his girlfriend? And how dare Liz just stand there, letting him touch her the way only Adam was supposed to touch her.
In a silent huff, he moved away from the door and left. Liz and Max didn't notice anyone there. But Liz was afraid one move more would betrey her and she'd end up making a BIG mistake so she moved back after fearing her lips would lock on Doctor Evans' for solace, comfort and...love? No. It couldn't be love. She had a boyfried who she dated for a long time. They were happy and steady. That was love. A few times spending tuturials with her teacher couldn't be classed as love. It was just hormonal feelings..pheromones of attraction. He was an older attractive male, she was a younger female. It was nothing but lust.
Liz felt dirty. She could not have feelings like that for Doctor Evans. He was her teacher, it was wrong for a teacher and student to have a lovers relationship and she had a boyfriend. It was so wrong.
Max wished she was his and he was hers. She had a boyfriend and she was his student. They were restricted both by circumstances and law. There was nothing more he wanted to do then just grab her and kiss her senseless but he didn't move a muscle. Scared of her possible rejection and those same beautiful dark brown eyes may see him with disgust, fear and distrust.
"I have to go." Liz whispered. "Thanks. Again. See you tommorow." Liz quickly dismissed herself before she was tempted to attack his mouth and make love with his mouth. Max watched her leave the room in haste. He was sad again. If only they were together....
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After school, the gang headed to their usual haunt, Ben and Jerry's icecream parlour. Tucking into a delicious bohiemein rasberry ben and Jerry, Liz began to think about her close encounter with Doctor Evans..how dreamy did his eyes look. She could taste the delicious flavour of his look..
"I cannot beleive Tess is having dreams about Doctor Evans. Newsflash!, local whore has a taste for teachers, beware all you young male teachers, you may find yourselves hinding behind the desk from a certain blonde." Maria sniggered.
All of them erupted wih laughter, Liz joined in trying to hide her feelings. She knew they all came here to gossip but she didn't like to make fun of someone. Back in the days she didn't care but now, it seemed really nasty.
"Someone better put a leash on Tess!". Sanchez cried, laughing his head off.
While they continued to make fun of Tess being in 'love' with Doctor Evans, Liz felt guilty to not defending either of them. She feared Tess became a whore because of them and Doctor Evans was being attacked verbally behind his back for no reason. He never treated them like dirt, although he had been making Liz feel upset a few times that was only because he cared for her as a student and wanted to bring out the best in her. She understood now. Her innocence was resurfing after being buried by the badness which she had conformed to to enhance her status. Everything she did in the past was to boost her pride and obtain as much respect which caused her to be prejudiced against those who were weaker then her and she held a great prejudice for Doctor Evans because he was a challenge to her but really she realised she held a prejudice against herself. Thanks to Doctor Evans, she realised where she was going wrong and was ever so thankful to Doctor Evans that she never knew where she started to respect him.
As time went on, the afternoons spent with him made her open her eyes. He was so kind to her and wasted his free time helping her. He wasn't biased in his teaching. Liz was deluded into thinking that. He was trying to be a good teacher and she made his work harder by being a bitch of a student. And on top of that she had faked an apology just to get his help, Liz had never felt like a bitch in her entire life. Was she so blinded that she was causing so much grief to people thinking it was cool?
They were in their classroom in Doctor Evans' class and Sanchez nudged Liz. "Remember Tess' erotic dream about the Doc?" He chuckled and the gang laughed. Liz remained silent and sadly looked at Doctor Evans. Wanting to apologise to him for real. She had enough of being a bitch.
When the lesson ended, Liz told her friends she'd meet up with them later and took this chance to apologize to Doctor Evans and thank him. He too also had some news for her. Good news and wanted to tell her after the class.
"Liz." He smiled.
God, he has a great smile Liz thought, that smile made her melt. Along with his kindness and maturity there was a handsome man.
"Hey sir." Liz smiled.
"Liz I have good news for you." He smiled. "You got a grade A star! Congratulations!". He congratulated her and handed her essay. Liz felt so much joy right now. She always wanted to hear those words.
"Sir, you're not joking are you?". She gasped, putting the apology aside. She wanted this atmosphere to be happy, not sad. She took the essay and a big 'A' star was looking back at her. "Oh my god! THANKS sir!". She exclaimed, feelings tears brimming in her eyes. Why was she getting so emotional? She was used to getting A stars.
"No." Max said. "You should thank yourself, you deserve this grade A star and many A stars to come." He corrected her, already praising her again and again. The time spent with her in the tuturials had helped him to get to know her better, there was no snobiness, nor stuck up behaviour. Liz was behaving like herself and he liked what he saw. A hardworking enthusiastic young girl ready to get lots of sucess in the future.
"Thanks for helping me sir." Liz whispered, holding back the tears. Max saw those unshed tears in her beautiful dark brown eyes and went upto her, in an innate response, he brushed a single tear that escape the pools held back.
"You don't need to cry." He said softly.
Liz never felt this much proximity to Doctor Evans before. He was such a gentleman but he was in her personal bubble. Had they gotten so close?
Liz looked at him in a trance but smiled. "I won't. I won't cry."
And the two looked at each other like that day when Liz was in his arms.
Through the glass in the doorway, Liz's boyfriend Adam West was watching in envy and anger. How dare this Doctor try and make a move on his girlfriend? And how dare Liz just stand there, letting him touch her the way only Adam was supposed to touch her.
In a silent huff, he moved away from the door and left. Liz and Max didn't notice anyone there. But Liz was afraid one move more would betrey her and she'd end up making a BIG mistake so she moved back after fearing her lips would lock on Doctor Evans' for solace, comfort and...love? No. It couldn't be love. She had a boyfried who she dated for a long time. They were happy and steady. That was love. A few times spending tuturials with her teacher couldn't be classed as love. It was just hormonal feelings..pheromones of attraction. He was an older attractive male, she was a younger female. It was nothing but lust.
Liz felt dirty. She could not have feelings like that for Doctor Evans. He was her teacher, it was wrong for a teacher and student to have a lovers relationship and she had a boyfriend. It was so wrong.
Max wished she was his and he was hers. She had a boyfriend and she was his student. They were restricted both by circumstances and law. There was nothing more he wanted to do then just grab her and kiss her senseless but he didn't move a muscle. Scared of her possible rejection and those same beautiful dark brown eyes may see him with disgust, fear and distrust.
"I have to go." Liz whispered. "Thanks. Again. See you tommorow." Liz quickly dismissed herself before she was tempted to attack his mouth and make love with his mouth. Max watched her leave the room in haste. He was sad again. If only they were together....
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Ch 20..
"Adam hey.." Liz called, walking in his bedroom. He had called her afterschool to meet up at his place and here she was, coming to him like a good little girlfriend, unaware of what was lurking in his mind. She wore a white shirt with a stonewash blue jeans. Adam had his back towards her in silence.
"Nice of you to come." His raspy voice send chills over the room.
"Adam is everything okay?". Liz asked, getting worried. Normally she would have been swept in his arms right now with his planting sweet kisses over her face telling her how much she was special and meant a lot to him. But a few seconds passed and he remained still.
She shut the door and walked to him, wrapping her arms around her long term boyfriend and lay her head on his shoulder. "I missed you." Liz tried to start the conversation.
He turned around and she kissed his lips. They were about to get into a passionate making out session until Adam abrubtly stopped and pulled away much to Liz's dismay. What had gotten into her boyfriend. He never pulled away.
"Okay, is it me or is something seriously wrong here Adam?". Liz asked, annoying of his fiasco.
"Liz don't fuck with me." He growled. "Tell me, how can you come to me when you just have special stolen moments with him." He said 'him' in a distinctive tone indicating that 'him' wasn't a part of their lives.
Liz arched an eyebrow. "What are you talking about?". She gasped, Adam never spoke to her in that tone. She was getting scared. She hoped this was some nightmare or a silly surprise he had in store of her.
"For god's sakes Liz, don't act like you don't know who I'm talking about. You seem to be spending a lot of time with you Doc these days that you barely come with me anymore." Adam said harsly. "Its like you're fuck buddy's or something". With that, Liz slapped Adam.
"How dare you speak to me like that?!". She roared and battered her eyelids to hold back the tears. She pointed at him. "You have no idea what you've just done!".
"Oh yeah?". Adam said, rubbing his cheek to where Liz slapped him. "Well, you know the whole school's talking about it. I had to find out from other people what you and Doctor Evans have been doing behind closed doors!". He yelled back, causing her back away until she reached his bed and toppled over it.
Liz gasped, no it couldn't have been. Rumors never included her, she was the queen of rumors, scandal and gossip, She was untouchable. Was people really gossiping about her?
Liz balanced herself on her elbows. "You're not serious are you?".
"So I came to see for myself." Adam spat, ignoring Liz's question. "And voila, there you were with him and his hand was on your fucking cheek, stroking you the way I do."
"That was nothing." She whispered. "I was just happy I got a grade A."
"Yeah, that's why Doctor Evans was touching you intimatly." Adam spat ironically. "Or did you need someone to replace me since I wasn't there?".
"Don't be sick Adam, I only love you and you know it." Liz demanded getting up. Althougth she thought Doctor Evans was a handsome respectable man, she only respected him for who he was. That was all. She wasn't looking to get with him. This Adam was overreacting. There was no way Liz would let her long term relationship go down the drain so easliy. She spend time investing in this relationship, jealousy was a sin that had to be eradicated.
"Somewhere down the line, your love for me died and was reborn as love for Doctor Evans." Adam said, looking her dead in the eyes. "I can't beleive I didn't see it before. You're in love with Doctor Evans". He chocked. "I'm not enough anymore."
"Stop being stupid!". Liz scolded him and grabbed him by the scruff of his neck. "Stop it!".
"Sorry to say this Liz but we're over." Adam said and Liz looked at him in shock. Slowely she let go of him.
"You're dumping me?".
"Yes."
"No. We can't break up."
"Why not?".
"Because..we've been together for so long..I can't deal with not being with you!". Liz panicked. Was her boyfriend of two years actually ending their relationship, the first proper relationship that Liz ever had?
"Yeah and you fucking replaced me with Doctor Evans the cradle snatcher". Adam shrugged. "You want an older guy go for it. But don't fucking drag me to be your bitch."
"You're sick." Liz screamed. "How could you ever be so deluded, nasty and well a prick!?".
"Maybe because I realised my girlfriend was a sick, lying hypocrite?". He spat back.
"I'm leaving." Liz said, unable to stay with him and get even more insulted by the man she thought was the one for her. "You fucking jerk, hope you have a sad life!". She screamed before storming out of his bedroom and his house crying her heart out as she left.
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"Shit man." Kyle said while sitting down with Alex and Maria. "That fucking Olsen dude is out there somewhere."
The three had been sitting down and watching the news. Mr Olsen who had secretly had a 'relationship' with Maria had escaped from jail. Now Maria was shitting it. The man was obviously not pleased with her and was clever enough to fool the cops. She was sure, he was after her.
"Don't worry Maria, I'll call my dad, he'll put you somewhere safe." Kyle said, jumping off the sofa and grabbing the cell phone on the dining table.
Alex wrapped his arm around Maria who was shaking in fear. "He's gunna kill me..oh shit. He's after me."
"Maria, we are not going to let that sad cradle snatcher hurt you or anyone else okay?". He soothed her and rubbed her shoulders.
Maria rested her head against Alex, unsure of his words. She had a feeling that this Mr Olsen only escaped from jail to avenge his insult...to hurt her.
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She was on the highway, crying her eyes out. It was almost dark and she didn't care. Her life was almost over. Adam was a big part of her life and the school played a major role in her life too. How could she go back to school pretending everything was fine when it wasn't? Now she knew the little sparks were ignited it wouldn't take long for the whole school to find out what had happened between her and Adam, the perfect couple had broken up because of a misunderstanding of her going to Doctor Evans to improve her grade. Apparently they thought she made a mistake in choosing her education over her reputation.
Why did they always poke their noses in her life!? Why couldn't they just leave her alone and let her live in peace?
She didn't want any of this. At first being the queen felt good, it became addictive and then boring. She was bored of gossip and scandal. She just wanted to build her future now.
And Adam, the man of every girl's dreams had abandoned her. She thought of building a future with him. Where they'd be married or something with a house behind a white picket fence with a couple of children and a pet dog. She so badly wanted that. To have a great husband, great career and a great future life.
Liz was so lost in her thoughts that she hadn't seen a group of leering man head her way. They noticed Liz Parker walking alone in the highway and to them, she was an easy target. They wanted a good meal tonight. They would be satisfiying their urges. With beer bottles in one hand and a variety of weapons like thick metal chains and base ball bats in the other, they surrounded her and licked their lips. Liz stopped in shock.
"Hey dolly, wanna fuck tonight." He sneered and brought his hips forward a couple of times gesturing his sex drive.
Liz watched all of them form a circle around her. She was afraid.
"Stay away from me." She said and tried to break the circle but a guy stopped her and grabbed her, holding her face in place. Liz whimpered. "Get off me."
"You're not going anywhere dolly, you're our meal tonight." They said, wanting an orgy.
Liz felt sick. She wasn't going to let any of these ugly men touch her like that let alone use her body for their digusting sexual satisfation.
With one elbow, she elbowed the man in the stomach, turned around and used her palm to push his jaw back which was a technique she learned in karate and then kneed him in the groin causing him to yelp out in pain. Then several other guys charged at her, picking her up to stop her from hurting them. Liz was screaming and kicking her legs in the air.
Meanwhile someone was driving along the highway late at night and saw them. The driver stopped the car, got out and with a determined look, growled. "Let her go".
TBC..
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"Adam hey.." Liz called, walking in his bedroom. He had called her afterschool to meet up at his place and here she was, coming to him like a good little girlfriend, unaware of what was lurking in his mind. She wore a white shirt with a stonewash blue jeans. Adam had his back towards her in silence.
"Nice of you to come." His raspy voice send chills over the room.
"Adam is everything okay?". Liz asked, getting worried. Normally she would have been swept in his arms right now with his planting sweet kisses over her face telling her how much she was special and meant a lot to him. But a few seconds passed and he remained still.
She shut the door and walked to him, wrapping her arms around her long term boyfriend and lay her head on his shoulder. "I missed you." Liz tried to start the conversation.
He turned around and she kissed his lips. They were about to get into a passionate making out session until Adam abrubtly stopped and pulled away much to Liz's dismay. What had gotten into her boyfriend. He never pulled away.
"Okay, is it me or is something seriously wrong here Adam?". Liz asked, annoying of his fiasco.
"Liz don't fuck with me." He growled. "Tell me, how can you come to me when you just have special stolen moments with him." He said 'him' in a distinctive tone indicating that 'him' wasn't a part of their lives.
Liz arched an eyebrow. "What are you talking about?". She gasped, Adam never spoke to her in that tone. She was getting scared. She hoped this was some nightmare or a silly surprise he had in store of her.
"For god's sakes Liz, don't act like you don't know who I'm talking about. You seem to be spending a lot of time with you Doc these days that you barely come with me anymore." Adam said harsly. "Its like you're fuck buddy's or something". With that, Liz slapped Adam.
"How dare you speak to me like that?!". She roared and battered her eyelids to hold back the tears. She pointed at him. "You have no idea what you've just done!".
"Oh yeah?". Adam said, rubbing his cheek to where Liz slapped him. "Well, you know the whole school's talking about it. I had to find out from other people what you and Doctor Evans have been doing behind closed doors!". He yelled back, causing her back away until she reached his bed and toppled over it.
Liz gasped, no it couldn't have been. Rumors never included her, she was the queen of rumors, scandal and gossip, She was untouchable. Was people really gossiping about her?
Liz balanced herself on her elbows. "You're not serious are you?".
"So I came to see for myself." Adam spat, ignoring Liz's question. "And voila, there you were with him and his hand was on your fucking cheek, stroking you the way I do."
"That was nothing." She whispered. "I was just happy I got a grade A."
"Yeah, that's why Doctor Evans was touching you intimatly." Adam spat ironically. "Or did you need someone to replace me since I wasn't there?".
"Don't be sick Adam, I only love you and you know it." Liz demanded getting up. Althougth she thought Doctor Evans was a handsome respectable man, she only respected him for who he was. That was all. She wasn't looking to get with him. This Adam was overreacting. There was no way Liz would let her long term relationship go down the drain so easliy. She spend time investing in this relationship, jealousy was a sin that had to be eradicated.
"Somewhere down the line, your love for me died and was reborn as love for Doctor Evans." Adam said, looking her dead in the eyes. "I can't beleive I didn't see it before. You're in love with Doctor Evans". He chocked. "I'm not enough anymore."
"Stop being stupid!". Liz scolded him and grabbed him by the scruff of his neck. "Stop it!".
"Sorry to say this Liz but we're over." Adam said and Liz looked at him in shock. Slowely she let go of him.
"You're dumping me?".
"Yes."
"No. We can't break up."
"Why not?".
"Because..we've been together for so long..I can't deal with not being with you!". Liz panicked. Was her boyfriend of two years actually ending their relationship, the first proper relationship that Liz ever had?
"Yeah and you fucking replaced me with Doctor Evans the cradle snatcher". Adam shrugged. "You want an older guy go for it. But don't fucking drag me to be your bitch."
"You're sick." Liz screamed. "How could you ever be so deluded, nasty and well a prick!?".
"Maybe because I realised my girlfriend was a sick, lying hypocrite?". He spat back.
"I'm leaving." Liz said, unable to stay with him and get even more insulted by the man she thought was the one for her. "You fucking jerk, hope you have a sad life!". She screamed before storming out of his bedroom and his house crying her heart out as she left.
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"Shit man." Kyle said while sitting down with Alex and Maria. "That fucking Olsen dude is out there somewhere."
The three had been sitting down and watching the news. Mr Olsen who had secretly had a 'relationship' with Maria had escaped from jail. Now Maria was shitting it. The man was obviously not pleased with her and was clever enough to fool the cops. She was sure, he was after her.
"Don't worry Maria, I'll call my dad, he'll put you somewhere safe." Kyle said, jumping off the sofa and grabbing the cell phone on the dining table.
Alex wrapped his arm around Maria who was shaking in fear. "He's gunna kill me..oh shit. He's after me."
"Maria, we are not going to let that sad cradle snatcher hurt you or anyone else okay?". He soothed her and rubbed her shoulders.
Maria rested her head against Alex, unsure of his words. She had a feeling that this Mr Olsen only escaped from jail to avenge his insult...to hurt her.
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She was on the highway, crying her eyes out. It was almost dark and she didn't care. Her life was almost over. Adam was a big part of her life and the school played a major role in her life too. How could she go back to school pretending everything was fine when it wasn't? Now she knew the little sparks were ignited it wouldn't take long for the whole school to find out what had happened between her and Adam, the perfect couple had broken up because of a misunderstanding of her going to Doctor Evans to improve her grade. Apparently they thought she made a mistake in choosing her education over her reputation.
Why did they always poke their noses in her life!? Why couldn't they just leave her alone and let her live in peace?
She didn't want any of this. At first being the queen felt good, it became addictive and then boring. She was bored of gossip and scandal. She just wanted to build her future now.
And Adam, the man of every girl's dreams had abandoned her. She thought of building a future with him. Where they'd be married or something with a house behind a white picket fence with a couple of children and a pet dog. She so badly wanted that. To have a great husband, great career and a great future life.
Liz was so lost in her thoughts that she hadn't seen a group of leering man head her way. They noticed Liz Parker walking alone in the highway and to them, she was an easy target. They wanted a good meal tonight. They would be satisfiying their urges. With beer bottles in one hand and a variety of weapons like thick metal chains and base ball bats in the other, they surrounded her and licked their lips. Liz stopped in shock.
"Hey dolly, wanna fuck tonight." He sneered and brought his hips forward a couple of times gesturing his sex drive.
Liz watched all of them form a circle around her. She was afraid.
"Stay away from me." She said and tried to break the circle but a guy stopped her and grabbed her, holding her face in place. Liz whimpered. "Get off me."
"You're not going anywhere dolly, you're our meal tonight." They said, wanting an orgy.
Liz felt sick. She wasn't going to let any of these ugly men touch her like that let alone use her body for their digusting sexual satisfation.
With one elbow, she elbowed the man in the stomach, turned around and used her palm to push his jaw back which was a technique she learned in karate and then kneed him in the groin causing him to yelp out in pain. Then several other guys charged at her, picking her up to stop her from hurting them. Liz was screaming and kicking her legs in the air.
Meanwhile someone was driving along the highway late at night and saw them. The driver stopped the car, got out and with a determined look, growled. "Let her go".
TBC..
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Re: Pride, Respect & Prejudice..(CC,Mature) 7/7/08 Ch 21 pg 8
It was Mr Olsen, the fatty 40 yr old teacher who Maria tricked to expose him for being a pervert and a child molester in chapter one. She got him in jail and now he escaped for...revenge.Natalie36 wrote:was it max or the couk that got out of jail looking for maria
The guy that came out of the car while Liz is being attacked by these group of perverts is someone good..you'll find out who he is in the next chapter.katydid wrote:Max or Michael? Michael would take her to Max correct?
Thanks for the updates.
Kate
Thanks for the fb.

Ch 21
"Let her go." Max Evans growled, his amber eyes blazing anger and his stoic voice creeping the perverts out. Slowly they put Liz back on her two feet again and shoved her back, away from Max.
"What the hell do you want? We don't share with outsiders." One of them sniggered. "Wait till we're done with her."
Liz gasped when she saw Doctor Evans. Never in her life had she seen him so angry. His eyes were clearly showing his anger and his face changed...like the calmness before a storm. She was releived, that he was here.
Max clenched his jaw and balled his fists, how dare they talk about a girl like that? How dare they treat Liz like that? "I said let her go or else.." He warned again, he wasn't going to let these savages hurt Liz.
They looked at Max in amusment. "What are you gunna do pretty boi?". A bigger and taller guy stepped out, dressing in nothing but a dirty vest and black combat trousers. He had piercings on his lip, eyebrow and his ears were covered in piercings. This guy was a one tough ass piece of shit, Max thought. But he would risk himself to save Liz. None of these perverts were going to rape her.
"Ha look at him!, like he's the husband or something." They snorted, mistaking Max's pause to be a weakness until suddenly Max launched a punch at the big guy, sending him falling backwards and flat on his ass. Much to their surprise, Max had hit him hard and good. The incredible strength must have arisen from his emotions.
Good shot, Liz thought. Doctor Evans was going to be her knight in shining armour.
"Do you want some of this?". He asked in a cold voice to the other guys who gripped their weapons.
"We're gunna beat the hell outta you and then fuck this bitch till she screams for death in front of you." One of they sneered in anger.
That was the last straw and Max dove in, attacking them all. They surrounded him and hit him with their bats and chains but Max never gave up, punch after punch he struck them. Liz felt bile rise in her throat as she saw they trying to hurt him. She noticed a rock on the floor and picked it up before banging it against the big guy's head to stop him from hurting Max further.
Max kneed one of them in the stomach and twisted his arm until he heard a crack, the guy groaned out in pain and Max threw him on the floor before fighting off the other guys who kept coming and coming one by one.
The big guy, felt an impact on his skull and turned to look at Liz. With one hand he rubbed his bleeding wound and the other, he tried to grab Liz's throat but she kicked his balls and double kicked his face before ducking and kicking his feet, sending him off balance and causing him to have his body slammed on the hard concrete floor. Two other guys saw Liz and jumped towards her, Liz ran to the tree and jumped up on a branch before swinging backwards to kick both their faces in. Moves she learnt off watching karate movies. She was thinking fast now. There was no time to panic. She had to move swiftly. Letting go of the branch, she delieved a double punch to both the guys and kicked their stomachs. Both fell over in defeat.
She decided to help Max who was fighting off the majority. There were atleast seven men attacking him. One of them grabbed Max's hands and pinned him down while six of them took turns in punching his handsome face. Liz felt her heart break. There was blood on Max's lips. She picked up a baseball bat which was lying on the floor and hit a couple of the guys in the back of the head at hard as she could. They groaned in pain and she whacked and kicked them. Whacking the bat into the guys till she was satisfied they were nothing but a bloody pulp. She use the baseball bat to attack the others and three of the guys turned against her to fight her back leaving two guys to deal with Max.
They took out their baseball bat and chains and licked their lips. "Bitch, we're gunna fuck you all night."
Liz dodged the swinging chain and the base ball bat and decided to blow a storm with her baseball bat. Lifting it, she engaged in a figthing frenzy with the guy who has the baseball bat, the other guy watch, enjoying the fiestiness in Liz. It was like a sword fighting match. Liz defended herself from the opponent, blocking his blows. Then she used the end of the baseball bat to whack his groin so hard she thought she must have castrated him. When she knocked him down, the guy the chain decided to attack her. Slapping her hands with the heavy chain and caused her to wince out in pain before she dropped the bat and he hit her even more. On seeing this Max roared and fought off the two guys and grabbed the guy who was hurting Liz. He grabbed both their heads and smashed them together, knocking them both out in the process. Then he charged for that guy who was whipping Liz with the chain. Liz screamed in pain and agony.
Max grabbed the guy and spun him around before grabbing the chain off him in full force, with the chain in the same manner started to hit the guy like he had hit Liz. There was no stopping Max. Everytime the guy moved in attempt to win the control he would be struck down with more harsher blows. Max had no mercy for anyone of them. They were monsters. Savages.
Liz had bruises on her arms and got up from the floor. She reached out for Max but while he was busy beating the guy him, the big guy pounced on her and sent her falling down in the small ravine. "Doctor Evans!". Liz screamed out for help but her voice echoed as she felt herself falling and bumping on the sharp rocks which teared her clothes and skin. The big guy lost his grip and fell way back down faster then Liz.
Max did a final blow on the guy before hearing Liz's screaming for him. Max's heart beated faster in horror when he saw he fall over. "Liz!". He called and ran to see where she was.
Luckily Liz grabbed a hold of a tree root which poked out from the ground. He could see the outline of her body in the semi darkness. She wasn't that far down, just ten feet down and she had a loose tree root for support. Max had to save her quick. "Hang on Liz I'm coming!". He shouted, making sure she knew she had hope.
He had a rope in the back of his car, took that out and tried it to the bumper of his car then fixed the other end of the rope to his waist and then absailed down the ravine towards Liz.
"Take my hand Liz. Grab me." He ordered her, she looked up to see Doctor Evans hadn't given up on her even though he was hurt badly. But both her hands were on the root and if she let one go, she feared she may fall to her death or something. She wasn't good at balancing with one hand.
"I'm scared. What if I fall?". She asked him, with fear shining in her moonlit dark brown eyes. God, she looked so beautiful, Max thought. He couldn't let this pure angel suffer no more. "Do you trust me Liz?". He asked her softly and with tears in her eyes she looked up at him.
This man had taken on a gang of deadly perverts just for her sake and got battered up to save her, risking himself for her and now he was trying to get her off the ravine and back to safety, of course she trusted him. More then anything. "Yes." She mumbled, holding back the tears. "I trust you." With that, she reached out and connected with him when their hands touched. Both felt alive again.
Max hoisted Liz up into his arms and she used her feet to climb towards him. She wrapped both arms around his waist and used her legs to help them both up. Max wrapped an arm securely around Liz to stop her from falling and used the other to grab onto the rope, pulling them both upwards and used their feet to guide them. Max's palm was bleeding and Liz helped to grip the rope. Gosh, he was pretty badly hurt.
They took their time in reaching the surface again and both collapsed. Max ripped the rope of him and went to take it off his bumper and put it away. Liz struggled up and Max rushed to her aid again, taking her in his arms and opening his car door, putting her in the passenger seat and fastening herseat belt. He closed the door and ran back to the drivers seat, and closed the door.
He turned to Liz. He winced when he saw that gnash on the left side of her forehead, her left cheek was scratched and her clothes were almost teared to shreds and there was some blood. He had to fix her up quick.
She looked at him weakly and he spoke first. "I'm gunna have to find someplace to heal you." He said. "You look pretty bad."
She nodded and then he drove off, until he saw a small cottege just two miles away. He parked his car, took the first aid kit out from the glove compartment and went over to Liz's side of the car and opened the door, he bent down and placed the kit in her lap before opening it and getting out the essentials. He took out an antibacterial solution out first and some cotton pads. Using them, he pressed it to Liz's cuts. He would need to use the cottage for some open place he noticed the cuts all over her body. Liz winced when the antibacterial solution was applied to her wound. She knew what it was by the smell of it and it always stinged.
Max softly rubbed it on her wounds and quickly applied some cream and attached a clean piece of cotton on her forehead which was stuck on by some tape. He bandaged the wounds on her hands and she watched him lovingly as he healed her with affection.
Who knew Doctor Evans could possess such gentleness?
He zipped the back and took of her seatbelt before helping her in his arms. He shut the door and locked it. "Right, I'm gunna have to take you to the cottage. Is that okay?". He said.
Liz nodded and using his support, hopped to the cottage.
Did this mean things between them would never be the same?
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Ch 22
Max sighed out in frustration when he lifted his cellphone in the air again, trying to get a signal. He had bandaged up most of Liz's wounds before deciding to call the police and then the paramedics. Liz was badly injured to an extent she found even lifting a limb painful. He had been around this area many times. Passed this old abandoned cottage many times before when he explored Roswell.
Liz was on the bed and watched a frustrated Max try to get a signal. She really wanted to help him. He also had cuts on his face but he didn't let her attempt to help him. They were out of badages now and she felt so guilty, Max put her first before him. He didn't care about his cuts, to him her wounds were more impoprtant. He's heal later. She wanted the paramedics to arrive soon as possible. Her phone must have slipped out her pocket when she fell and got crushed in the process of her falling down the ravine. There wasn't a single phone in sight as Max had checked all the rooms. The cottage was dark, cold but not dirty. Sure there was dust but it was okay. The lights didn't work and it was getting darker. Both of them were panicking. Max didn't want to leave Liz in the cottage alone while he went out to find a signal but he seriously doubted that would work either.
"It's getting dark." Liz pointed out, shivering. She was cold.
Max turned to look at Liz. "Liz I'm going to go out and try to see if they have signal. Is that okay? I'll be back in a min?". He had to try.
Liz nodded. "Sure, but be quick." She didn't want to be left alone in some old cottage especially in the dark.
Max quickly walked outside and did the same. When he got no reception, he sighed once again in frustration and this was such a highway which people didn't usually drive on. He had decided to open up the boot and take out a blanket and his laptop which he took with him every. Maybe he could use the internet to call for help. Taking the laptop and the blanket, he shut the car and quickly went back to the cottage.
"Here." He said, handing the blanket to Liz. "It's not much but it's all I have." He said. Liz took the blanket and their fingers brushed. They looked at each other longingly.
"Thanks".
Liz wrapped the blanket around herself and Max sat on the bed with her, putting the laptop on his lap and switching it on. "Liz, I'm going to email a friend who can get us help." He said. "Don't worry." He knew emailing Micheal would be the right thing to do as Micheal was always on msn. He was one computer freak.
Liz was grateful Max was helping her out so much. But really she wanted more time to spend with him, alone. He really seemed to care about her. She knew he'd do the same for anyone else but there was more to it. She was feeling his underlying care for her. He seemed to forget that she was his student for a moment.
When the laptop was on, Max had his wireless internet connection on. Atleast that worked which was odd since there was no reception here. Max logged into msn and spotted Micheal already online. He opened up an instant messaging table and typed in the words 'Mike, we need your help. Call the cops and paramedics to that 285 south, there's a cottage here, 203 is the number.'
When Max was done explaining the situation to Micheal over msn, Micheal proceeded to get help for them and Max sighed in releif. He looked at Liz who had fresh tears on her cheeks along with dry ones. "The cops and paramedics will be here soon." He told Liz.
His heart broke to see her in such a state. Even being in this condition, never did she look so beautiful. She would always look beautiful. He had to reach out to her. He cupped her cheek. "Hey." He murmered.
She gazed upon him. Her illuminated dark brown eyes captivating, bewitching him in her magical spell. She was addictive and he feared he may become obsessed with her. She possessed him in such a way that he could never explain either to himself or anyone else. "What's wrong?". He asked her.
Liz bit her lip. She didn't want to hide it anymore. Why didn't she start with Doctor Evans?. Atleast he wouldn't laugh at her. "My boyfriend dumped me today." She sobbed silently. "Because of the tuturiols."
Max inhaled sharply. He knew it was wrong to feel joy but atleast she wasn't taken. But however, her sadness meant his sadness. He blamed himself. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make it seem.." He began, remembering that incident when he captured Liz in his arms to stop her falling.
"No. It's okay." Liz cut him off. "It was bound to happen." Liz reasoned. "All this time I thought he was the one when I was just dousing myself in fake happiness." She laughed with sarcasm and stopped. "I'm probably destined to pay for the price of being a fool."
"No Liz. You're not a fool." He said and caressed her cheek. Damn, he wanted to kiss the pain away but restrained himself. Liz didn't need more heartache. "You're a very smart and intelligent young woman."
Liz smiled at Max. "Is that what you think?".
"I don't think that, I know that because it's a fact." He smiled back. Liz was aware of the magic his hand was doing to her cheek. She sighed in pleasure. This felt good. "Doctor Evans..." She moaned with lips parted.
"Call me Max." He said, giving her the right to call him by his first name. Now he didn't see her as a student. He saw her as Liz. He saw her as herself.
Liz smiled even more. This was the first time she had ever heard his name and the same time she was being granted the right to call him Max. The teacher student relationship was lost.
"Max." She whispered, both liked the way his name rolled of her tongue. Both leaned forward til their lips brushed and they captured each other's lips into a lip lock, Max parted Liz's lips with his tongue and she gave him access. His hand travelled further till it rested at the back of Liz's head and he threaded his fingers through her silky smooth hair, bringing her forward towards him.
Both had experienced kissing before but nothing was hot and passionate like this kiss. Max was making love to Liz's mouth with his own. He was gentle, swift and passionate at the same time. He sucked on Liz's tongue causing Liz to moan in pleasure. Nothing ever tasted or felt this good.
She nipped at his bottom lip and her tongue dueled with him, introducting more passion to the kiss. "God you taste so good." Max growled, kissing her more and Liz gasped, realisation hitting her and she quickly pulled away. Did she just make out with her teacher?
She looked away, ashamed. On the night she had broken up with her boyfriend, she was making out with the reason her boyfriend dumped her? And she was leading Max on. She felt like a slut.
"No, we can't do this. I'm so sorry." She quickly apologised.
"Liz..." Max breathed, now he kissed her, he needed more. "To be honest, I don't care you're my student. All I care about is that..."He paused. This was the most biggest moment of his life. The most important too. "I love you."
Now Liz looked at him in shock. "How...you do?". They spent a long time in the tuturiols and had casual conversations that she hadn't realised she disclosed most of herself to him and the same thing in reverse. Max had disclosed information about himself that he generally wouldn't tell a student. Like Liz knew what band he liked, what colonge he goes for and intimate thoughts. It was like he was a friend.
Max loved everything he learned about Liz. They had common interests and views. She might have no realised it but he did. Every detail he learned about her, he cherished in his mind. He wanted her to know that.
"I love you Liz Parker, ever since the day I knew you." Max said, he knew the line sounded cheesy like a romantic chick flick dialoge but it was true. He was going to pour his heart out to Liz.
Liz slowely turned to face him. So it was true, Max Evans was deeply in love with her. But that fact overjoyed her. What she had been desperate for from Adam was coming from Max. Maybe this was meant to be...she badly wanted to hug him and kiss him again. He loved her! "Maax..." She whispered again before drifting closer to his lips and Max found himself doing the same.
They were an inch away from kissing until the loud sirens around pulled them apart.
Max sighed out in frustration when he lifted his cellphone in the air again, trying to get a signal. He had bandaged up most of Liz's wounds before deciding to call the police and then the paramedics. Liz was badly injured to an extent she found even lifting a limb painful. He had been around this area many times. Passed this old abandoned cottage many times before when he explored Roswell.
Liz was on the bed and watched a frustrated Max try to get a signal. She really wanted to help him. He also had cuts on his face but he didn't let her attempt to help him. They were out of badages now and she felt so guilty, Max put her first before him. He didn't care about his cuts, to him her wounds were more impoprtant. He's heal later. She wanted the paramedics to arrive soon as possible. Her phone must have slipped out her pocket when she fell and got crushed in the process of her falling down the ravine. There wasn't a single phone in sight as Max had checked all the rooms. The cottage was dark, cold but not dirty. Sure there was dust but it was okay. The lights didn't work and it was getting darker. Both of them were panicking. Max didn't want to leave Liz in the cottage alone while he went out to find a signal but he seriously doubted that would work either.
"It's getting dark." Liz pointed out, shivering. She was cold.
Max turned to look at Liz. "Liz I'm going to go out and try to see if they have signal. Is that okay? I'll be back in a min?". He had to try.
Liz nodded. "Sure, but be quick." She didn't want to be left alone in some old cottage especially in the dark.
Max quickly walked outside and did the same. When he got no reception, he sighed once again in frustration and this was such a highway which people didn't usually drive on. He had decided to open up the boot and take out a blanket and his laptop which he took with him every. Maybe he could use the internet to call for help. Taking the laptop and the blanket, he shut the car and quickly went back to the cottage.
"Here." He said, handing the blanket to Liz. "It's not much but it's all I have." He said. Liz took the blanket and their fingers brushed. They looked at each other longingly.
"Thanks".
Liz wrapped the blanket around herself and Max sat on the bed with her, putting the laptop on his lap and switching it on. "Liz, I'm going to email a friend who can get us help." He said. "Don't worry." He knew emailing Micheal would be the right thing to do as Micheal was always on msn. He was one computer freak.
Liz was grateful Max was helping her out so much. But really she wanted more time to spend with him, alone. He really seemed to care about her. She knew he'd do the same for anyone else but there was more to it. She was feeling his underlying care for her. He seemed to forget that she was his student for a moment.
When the laptop was on, Max had his wireless internet connection on. Atleast that worked which was odd since there was no reception here. Max logged into msn and spotted Micheal already online. He opened up an instant messaging table and typed in the words 'Mike, we need your help. Call the cops and paramedics to that 285 south, there's a cottage here, 203 is the number.'
When Max was done explaining the situation to Micheal over msn, Micheal proceeded to get help for them and Max sighed in releif. He looked at Liz who had fresh tears on her cheeks along with dry ones. "The cops and paramedics will be here soon." He told Liz.
His heart broke to see her in such a state. Even being in this condition, never did she look so beautiful. She would always look beautiful. He had to reach out to her. He cupped her cheek. "Hey." He murmered.
She gazed upon him. Her illuminated dark brown eyes captivating, bewitching him in her magical spell. She was addictive and he feared he may become obsessed with her. She possessed him in such a way that he could never explain either to himself or anyone else. "What's wrong?". He asked her.
Liz bit her lip. She didn't want to hide it anymore. Why didn't she start with Doctor Evans?. Atleast he wouldn't laugh at her. "My boyfriend dumped me today." She sobbed silently. "Because of the tuturiols."
Max inhaled sharply. He knew it was wrong to feel joy but atleast she wasn't taken. But however, her sadness meant his sadness. He blamed himself. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make it seem.." He began, remembering that incident when he captured Liz in his arms to stop her falling.
"No. It's okay." Liz cut him off. "It was bound to happen." Liz reasoned. "All this time I thought he was the one when I was just dousing myself in fake happiness." She laughed with sarcasm and stopped. "I'm probably destined to pay for the price of being a fool."
"No Liz. You're not a fool." He said and caressed her cheek. Damn, he wanted to kiss the pain away but restrained himself. Liz didn't need more heartache. "You're a very smart and intelligent young woman."
Liz smiled at Max. "Is that what you think?".
"I don't think that, I know that because it's a fact." He smiled back. Liz was aware of the magic his hand was doing to her cheek. She sighed in pleasure. This felt good. "Doctor Evans..." She moaned with lips parted.
"Call me Max." He said, giving her the right to call him by his first name. Now he didn't see her as a student. He saw her as Liz. He saw her as herself.
Liz smiled even more. This was the first time she had ever heard his name and the same time she was being granted the right to call him Max. The teacher student relationship was lost.
"Max." She whispered, both liked the way his name rolled of her tongue. Both leaned forward til their lips brushed and they captured each other's lips into a lip lock, Max parted Liz's lips with his tongue and she gave him access. His hand travelled further till it rested at the back of Liz's head and he threaded his fingers through her silky smooth hair, bringing her forward towards him.
Both had experienced kissing before but nothing was hot and passionate like this kiss. Max was making love to Liz's mouth with his own. He was gentle, swift and passionate at the same time. He sucked on Liz's tongue causing Liz to moan in pleasure. Nothing ever tasted or felt this good.
She nipped at his bottom lip and her tongue dueled with him, introducting more passion to the kiss. "God you taste so good." Max growled, kissing her more and Liz gasped, realisation hitting her and she quickly pulled away. Did she just make out with her teacher?
She looked away, ashamed. On the night she had broken up with her boyfriend, she was making out with the reason her boyfriend dumped her? And she was leading Max on. She felt like a slut.
"No, we can't do this. I'm so sorry." She quickly apologised.
"Liz..." Max breathed, now he kissed her, he needed more. "To be honest, I don't care you're my student. All I care about is that..."He paused. This was the most biggest moment of his life. The most important too. "I love you."
Now Liz looked at him in shock. "How...you do?". They spent a long time in the tuturiols and had casual conversations that she hadn't realised she disclosed most of herself to him and the same thing in reverse. Max had disclosed information about himself that he generally wouldn't tell a student. Like Liz knew what band he liked, what colonge he goes for and intimate thoughts. It was like he was a friend.
Max loved everything he learned about Liz. They had common interests and views. She might have no realised it but he did. Every detail he learned about her, he cherished in his mind. He wanted her to know that.
"I love you Liz Parker, ever since the day I knew you." Max said, he knew the line sounded cheesy like a romantic chick flick dialoge but it was true. He was going to pour his heart out to Liz.
Liz slowely turned to face him. So it was true, Max Evans was deeply in love with her. But that fact overjoyed her. What she had been desperate for from Adam was coming from Max. Maybe this was meant to be...she badly wanted to hug him and kiss him again. He loved her! "Maax..." She whispered again before drifting closer to his lips and Max found himself doing the same.
They were an inch away from kissing until the loud sirens around pulled them apart.
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Ch 23
She was at the back of the ambulance being treated when her mother and father rushed toward her after being called by the cops.
"Oh lizzie!". Mrs Parker took Liz in her arms, worried as hell. It wasn't everyday her daughter was in such situations. Liz hugged her mother who tighened her grip on her.
"Ow mom, I'm still in pain." Liz croaked and her mother quickly let go and stepped back, looking at the bandaged wounds on her daughter. Liz's father lightly hugged his daughter before Nancy turned towards Jim Valenti who stood there.
"Who did this to my daughter?". She demanded. It was every mother's nightmare to see their child in a state like this.
"Apparently a group of..you know perverts on the street looking for a good time." Jim lowered his voice.
"Those rascals!". Jeff exclaimed loudly, angry with the thought of these dirty rapists trying to get their filthy hands on his pure daughter. "They didn't to her did they?". Jeff asked, alarmed. He would hunt these motherfuckers down and kill them himself if they hurt his baby girl.
"No-No." Jim said. "Thanks to Liz's teacher, Doctor Evans who came to her rescue before they could begin."
"Oh thank god." Jeff sighed.
"Did you arrest them?". Nancy asked him, she wanted those gangbashers locked away for good before they could do this crime on any other poor girl.
"Yes, we found most of them but they're seriously injured so they need to be treated at a hospital."
"They should be rotting in jail!". Nancy screamed. "We can't let them roam around taking advantage of poor little girls."
"Mom I'm fine." Liz said, pressing the iceback to her throbbing forehead. She didn't like too much drama when her parents were present, not at a time like this.
"We have it all under control." Jim assured. "Now, the main question is what was your daughter walking around in the middle of the highway and putting herself out there to be attacked?".
They looked at Liz. "I needed some time to myself." Liz snapped, hating their glares. "I didn't know I was going to be attacked."
Nancy and Jeff turned their heads back to Jim. "I want them arrested." Jeff said.
At that moment, Max Evans walked into the scene, he had his wounds treated and went to check up on Liz. "Liz are you..." Max paused, seeing a couple next to Liz which he guessed was her parents. They looked at him curiously and Jim smiled.
"Nancy, Jeff..this is Max Evans, he saved Liz." Jim introduced.
Jeff and Nancy looked at Max, approving of him. He was a strong built man who looked like a gentleman. "Thanks so much for saving our Lizzie." Nancy and Jeff thanked him at the same time.
Max blushed. "You don't need to thank me, Mr and Mrs Parker. I was just there at the right time and I'm sure any respectable person in my place would do the same."
"May god keep you happy." Jeff said. "You stopped not only a mother's nightmare but a father's nightmare from happening."
Max blushed even more. This was like meeting the bride's parents before marriage. Not that they knew of his and Liz's intimacy before. He wondered if their new found respect for him would change into digust and disaproval if they found out that he was in love with their daughter.
He then looked up and met Liz's eyes. A spark of romance travelled between them. Such a spark that had to be concealed..but just for now.
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"Fuking bitch!".
Tess screamed in agony and threw the perfume bottle in the mirror. How could this happen! She had sent those guys to rape Liz, she had instigated Adam against Liz and now hearing that Doctor Evans had ran to Liz's rescue, the Doctor Evans which Tess was in love with. She wanted that man but Liz got there first. That lucky bitch, always had everything, the attention, the status, a hot boyfriend, loyal friends, loving parents, money, power and respect while Tess was casted into the background, as a tag along.
God knew what happened between them. He must have attented to her with affection while nursing her wounds, the vision made Tess sick to the stomach. This was an opportunity to Doctor Evans and Liz to get closer. And Liz was also saved from the gang who would have given her a merciless orgy. Tess hated Liz. She knew Liz was a virgin and wanted her to lose her purity in such a way she'd feel low and suicidal. Tess had lost her virginity for no reason, she blamed Liz and the others for that. They made her beleive one night stands were good somehow.
She had tears running down her cheeks. Enough was enough. She wanted a bottle of cidar.
"Bunny, you must not lose patience." Mr Olsen said while she walked in the kitchen. He was getting drunk but was coherent enough to hear Tess' anger ripping through the walls of her house. She had helped him escape from jail and given him a place to hide. This was also her idea of avenging the gang. First she'd start of with their girls, innocent as virgins, they'd be raped and the guys would be left ditressed mentally calling themselves failures for not being able to protect the girls. She knew Kyle and Alex would hate themselves if Liz and Maria were taken advantage of. Everyone would be shallow though, treating Liz and Maria as damaged goods. Their status would decline. Maybe Sanchez and Kara-Louise would abandon them too.
Oh she wanted to see that picture so much.
"Olsen, shut up and pour me a glass of cidar." She said, sitting on the stool next to him. Mr Olsen, happily poured Tess a drink. He knew he could count on her. All he had to do was press her buttons, fuel her hatred for the gang even more and Maria would be his. He didn't care about the rest, he didn't care if Liz or any other female student was raped. All he wanted was Maria.
Tess gulped the cidar down. "I fucking hate, Liz, Maria and everyone else who made my life hell."
"Bunny.." He called her since she started to show an obsession with playboy. She changed her look, now most of the things she wore was playboy. "Liz might have survived but think about it, If anything happens to Maria, all of them will be more then upset. You have to attack the heart."
"I don't get what you're saying." Tess snapped, she wasn't exactly the brighest blonde on the planet.
"Consider one of them is the heart, say Maria. She can play the heart we damage."
"Attack the heart and give them a nice slow torturous death?". Tess's icy blue eyes glowed. "Yes..attack the heart."
Their next victim was Maria Deluca..
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Ch 23
She was at the back of the ambulance being treated when her mother and father rushed toward her after being called by the cops.
"Oh lizzie!". Mrs Parker took Liz in her arms, worried as hell. It wasn't everyday her daughter was in such situations. Liz hugged her mother who tighened her grip on her.
"Ow mom, I'm still in pain." Liz croaked and her mother quickly let go and stepped back, looking at the bandaged wounds on her daughter. Liz's father lightly hugged his daughter before Nancy turned towards Jim Valenti who stood there.
"Who did this to my daughter?". She demanded. It was every mother's nightmare to see their child in a state like this.
"Apparently a group of..you know perverts on the street looking for a good time." Jim lowered his voice.
"Those rascals!". Jeff exclaimed loudly, angry with the thought of these dirty rapists trying to get their filthy hands on his pure daughter. "They didn't to her did they?". Jeff asked, alarmed. He would hunt these motherfuckers down and kill them himself if they hurt his baby girl.
"No-No." Jim said. "Thanks to Liz's teacher, Doctor Evans who came to her rescue before they could begin."
"Oh thank god." Jeff sighed.
"Did you arrest them?". Nancy asked him, she wanted those gangbashers locked away for good before they could do this crime on any other poor girl.
"Yes, we found most of them but they're seriously injured so they need to be treated at a hospital."
"They should be rotting in jail!". Nancy screamed. "We can't let them roam around taking advantage of poor little girls."
"Mom I'm fine." Liz said, pressing the iceback to her throbbing forehead. She didn't like too much drama when her parents were present, not at a time like this.
"We have it all under control." Jim assured. "Now, the main question is what was your daughter walking around in the middle of the highway and putting herself out there to be attacked?".
They looked at Liz. "I needed some time to myself." Liz snapped, hating their glares. "I didn't know I was going to be attacked."
Nancy and Jeff turned their heads back to Jim. "I want them arrested." Jeff said.
At that moment, Max Evans walked into the scene, he had his wounds treated and went to check up on Liz. "Liz are you..." Max paused, seeing a couple next to Liz which he guessed was her parents. They looked at him curiously and Jim smiled.
"Nancy, Jeff..this is Max Evans, he saved Liz." Jim introduced.
Jeff and Nancy looked at Max, approving of him. He was a strong built man who looked like a gentleman. "Thanks so much for saving our Lizzie." Nancy and Jeff thanked him at the same time.
Max blushed. "You don't need to thank me, Mr and Mrs Parker. I was just there at the right time and I'm sure any respectable person in my place would do the same."
"May god keep you happy." Jeff said. "You stopped not only a mother's nightmare but a father's nightmare from happening."
Max blushed even more. This was like meeting the bride's parents before marriage. Not that they knew of his and Liz's intimacy before. He wondered if their new found respect for him would change into digust and disaproval if they found out that he was in love with their daughter.
He then looked up and met Liz's eyes. A spark of romance travelled between them. Such a spark that had to be concealed..but just for now.
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"Fuking bitch!".
Tess screamed in agony and threw the perfume bottle in the mirror. How could this happen! She had sent those guys to rape Liz, she had instigated Adam against Liz and now hearing that Doctor Evans had ran to Liz's rescue, the Doctor Evans which Tess was in love with. She wanted that man but Liz got there first. That lucky bitch, always had everything, the attention, the status, a hot boyfriend, loyal friends, loving parents, money, power and respect while Tess was casted into the background, as a tag along.
God knew what happened between them. He must have attented to her with affection while nursing her wounds, the vision made Tess sick to the stomach. This was an opportunity to Doctor Evans and Liz to get closer. And Liz was also saved from the gang who would have given her a merciless orgy. Tess hated Liz. She knew Liz was a virgin and wanted her to lose her purity in such a way she'd feel low and suicidal. Tess had lost her virginity for no reason, she blamed Liz and the others for that. They made her beleive one night stands were good somehow.
She had tears running down her cheeks. Enough was enough. She wanted a bottle of cidar.
"Bunny, you must not lose patience." Mr Olsen said while she walked in the kitchen. He was getting drunk but was coherent enough to hear Tess' anger ripping through the walls of her house. She had helped him escape from jail and given him a place to hide. This was also her idea of avenging the gang. First she'd start of with their girls, innocent as virgins, they'd be raped and the guys would be left ditressed mentally calling themselves failures for not being able to protect the girls. She knew Kyle and Alex would hate themselves if Liz and Maria were taken advantage of. Everyone would be shallow though, treating Liz and Maria as damaged goods. Their status would decline. Maybe Sanchez and Kara-Louise would abandon them too.
Oh she wanted to see that picture so much.
"Olsen, shut up and pour me a glass of cidar." She said, sitting on the stool next to him. Mr Olsen, happily poured Tess a drink. He knew he could count on her. All he had to do was press her buttons, fuel her hatred for the gang even more and Maria would be his. He didn't care about the rest, he didn't care if Liz or any other female student was raped. All he wanted was Maria.
Tess gulped the cidar down. "I fucking hate, Liz, Maria and everyone else who made my life hell."
"Bunny.." He called her since she started to show an obsession with playboy. She changed her look, now most of the things she wore was playboy. "Liz might have survived but think about it, If anything happens to Maria, all of them will be more then upset. You have to attack the heart."
"I don't get what you're saying." Tess snapped, she wasn't exactly the brighest blonde on the planet.
"Consider one of them is the heart, say Maria. She can play the heart we damage."
"Attack the heart and give them a nice slow torturous death?". Tess's icy blue eyes glowed. "Yes..attack the heart."
Their next victim was Maria Deluca..
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Ch 24
Her phone rang again and this time she was angry, picking it up, she yelled. "What!?".
He jumped in fright after hearing the anger directed at him in her tone. There was no hello nor a friendly how's it going? And he couldn't really expect that off her could he? After what happened at their last meeting, he took some time and calmed down, thinking it was time to make up to her by starting with sorry. He needed her back right now. "I'm so sorry Liz about what hap-" He was cut off.
"Well you can take that sorry and shove it up your ass, we're done and don't you ever call me again or I'll get a restraining order." Liz barked back in anger. Adam had the nerve to call her. He put her through shit last night and she almost got raped if it weren't for Max Evans who saved her. Liz clicked off the phone, went on her contact list and blocked Adam's number so he couldn't call her no more. She needed to change her phone number now.
Sighing in frustration, she ran a hand through her hair and tilted her head back. She was still in pain but thankfully she wasn't in a hospital. She hated hospitals. The nurse was regularly coming in to check on Liz though. She had just left about five minutes ago and there was guarentee she'd be back in an hour or so.
She hadn't seen her friends. Man, she was bored. She thought of ringing up Maria first but she didn't answer so went to call Kyle instead.
"Hey, it's me. Come here as soon as you can. I can do with the company." Liz said. "And bring Alex and Maria with you. Okay. See you in a bit. Bye." Liz said and clicked off the phone.
Half an hour later, Kyle arrived at Liz's place with Alex. They had big news to tell her. Kyle was surprised Liz had no idea about Mr Olsen breaking out of jail. And they had no idea what happened to Liz last night.
"Hey Li..." They stopped midsentence when they saw the state she was in. The cuts had slightly healed overnight but the bandages were still there.
"Who the hell did this shit to you?". Kyle demanded, becoming overprotective in an instant, he was so shocked to see her in this condition. Fear ran through them both, had someone beaten her up?
"I was attacked last night, by a group of perverts who wanted a good fuck." Liz said and both guys went angry.
"Last night?!, did those jerks..." Alex couldn't bring himself to say it. It was too painful to bear.
"No. Thanks to Doctor Evans who was passing by, he kicked their asses and saved me." Liz told them with a smile, remebering her and Max's first kiss. How soft it was..
"Where are they now?". Kyle asked, balling his hands into fists wanting to beat the shit out of them.
"The mostly injured ones are in hospital on watch though." Liz said.
"Wow, who'd ever guess Doctor Evans would have so much strength?". Alex said increduluosly. "Whoa. Looking at him, you'd never guess he was that strong. How many of them were there?".
"About nine or ten." Liz shrugged.
"I would have taken them all down. No one does that to my girls." Kyle stated as a matter of fact. He would never let anyone get away with harming Liz or Maria.
"Right now what matters is that I'm okay and justice is being served." She said. "I broke up with Adam."
"What? Why? I thought you guys loved each other?". Alex asked puzzled.
"Well obviously he thinks I'm having an affair with Doctor Evans while we're having our tutoring sessions." Liz said.
"What?! that's crazy. Adam's a nutbag." Kyle exclaimed. "Is he the reason why you were almost raped?". Kyle whispered. "Cause if he is..I'm gunna teach that nutcase a lesson".
"No worries, I can handle it." Liz said and then noticed. "Where's Maria?".
"Shit man." Alex looked down leaving Kyle to answer Liz's question.
"Guessing by your breakup with Adam last night, you didn't hear about the news?". Kyle asked and Liz shook her head. What did Maria have to do with the news?
"I don't understand? Why?". Liz asked, confused.
"Mr Olsen broke out of jail, on the rampage for Maria."
"What!?". Liz try to shoot up but found it to hard to, her legs needed to recover. "Oh my god!, where is Maria right now?".
"Kyle's dad took her to a safe house." Alex whispered.
"Oh my god..what is going on?". Liz was so shocked at latest events. Everything was going downhill. Their once safe and perfect life was now becoming a dangerous ticking time bomb, no one knew what was going to happen next.
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Her phone rang again and this time she was angry, picking it up, she yelled. "What!?".
He jumped in fright after hearing the anger directed at him in her tone. There was no hello nor a friendly how's it going? And he couldn't really expect that off her could he? After what happened at their last meeting, he took some time and calmed down, thinking it was time to make up to her by starting with sorry. He needed her back right now. "I'm so sorry Liz about what hap-" He was cut off.
"Well you can take that sorry and shove it up your ass, we're done and don't you ever call me again or I'll get a restraining order." Liz barked back in anger. Adam had the nerve to call her. He put her through shit last night and she almost got raped if it weren't for Max Evans who saved her. Liz clicked off the phone, went on her contact list and blocked Adam's number so he couldn't call her no more. She needed to change her phone number now.
Sighing in frustration, she ran a hand through her hair and tilted her head back. She was still in pain but thankfully she wasn't in a hospital. She hated hospitals. The nurse was regularly coming in to check on Liz though. She had just left about five minutes ago and there was guarentee she'd be back in an hour or so.
She hadn't seen her friends. Man, she was bored. She thought of ringing up Maria first but she didn't answer so went to call Kyle instead.
"Hey, it's me. Come here as soon as you can. I can do with the company." Liz said. "And bring Alex and Maria with you. Okay. See you in a bit. Bye." Liz said and clicked off the phone.
Half an hour later, Kyle arrived at Liz's place with Alex. They had big news to tell her. Kyle was surprised Liz had no idea about Mr Olsen breaking out of jail. And they had no idea what happened to Liz last night.
"Hey Li..." They stopped midsentence when they saw the state she was in. The cuts had slightly healed overnight but the bandages were still there.
"Who the hell did this shit to you?". Kyle demanded, becoming overprotective in an instant, he was so shocked to see her in this condition. Fear ran through them both, had someone beaten her up?
"I was attacked last night, by a group of perverts who wanted a good fuck." Liz said and both guys went angry.
"Last night?!, did those jerks..." Alex couldn't bring himself to say it. It was too painful to bear.
"No. Thanks to Doctor Evans who was passing by, he kicked their asses and saved me." Liz told them with a smile, remebering her and Max's first kiss. How soft it was..
"Where are they now?". Kyle asked, balling his hands into fists wanting to beat the shit out of them.
"The mostly injured ones are in hospital on watch though." Liz said.
"Wow, who'd ever guess Doctor Evans would have so much strength?". Alex said increduluosly. "Whoa. Looking at him, you'd never guess he was that strong. How many of them were there?".
"About nine or ten." Liz shrugged.
"I would have taken them all down. No one does that to my girls." Kyle stated as a matter of fact. He would never let anyone get away with harming Liz or Maria.
"Right now what matters is that I'm okay and justice is being served." She said. "I broke up with Adam."
"What? Why? I thought you guys loved each other?". Alex asked puzzled.
"Well obviously he thinks I'm having an affair with Doctor Evans while we're having our tutoring sessions." Liz said.
"What?! that's crazy. Adam's a nutbag." Kyle exclaimed. "Is he the reason why you were almost raped?". Kyle whispered. "Cause if he is..I'm gunna teach that nutcase a lesson".
"No worries, I can handle it." Liz said and then noticed. "Where's Maria?".
"Shit man." Alex looked down leaving Kyle to answer Liz's question.
"Guessing by your breakup with Adam last night, you didn't hear about the news?". Kyle asked and Liz shook her head. What did Maria have to do with the news?
"I don't understand? Why?". Liz asked, confused.
"Mr Olsen broke out of jail, on the rampage for Maria."
"What!?". Liz try to shoot up but found it to hard to, her legs needed to recover. "Oh my god!, where is Maria right now?".
"Kyle's dad took her to a safe house." Alex whispered.
"Oh my god..what is going on?". Liz was so shocked at latest events. Everything was going downhill. Their once safe and perfect life was now becoming a dangerous ticking time bomb, no one knew what was going to happen next.
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