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Anatomy of a Sentence part 12 (15/1)

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Part 12

Michael’s warning ringing in my ears, I jerked abruptly when the door bell rang. Maria looked at me curiously.

“What?”

“Umm, nothing.” I replied. “Can you look at the window and see who’s at the front door?”

Casting me a long look, she peered out the window and waved, “It’s spaceboy. I’ll get it.”

Michael was here. Finally. I felt like I’d been waiting for hours for him to arrive. He would be the litmus test for me. If Michael believed what I had to say, if he believed or even agreed with my suspicions then maybe, just maybe I’d have the manpower I needed. It’s not that I can’t do this without his help…I can. I just, it’s just that all of a sudden I am aware of how difficult and dangerous this could be. Alex was dead. Whoever had killed him had done it to keep him quiet. They had killed him with a brutality and a ruthlessness that I would deal with me the same way if I came in its way. Maybe, Michael would be my insurance against that. He had proven himself to be quite capable as a protector. It was his job after all. And that horrible night, I could have sworn we had come to some sort of silent agreement. In our own ways, we had maybe agreed to be vigilant, to protect those that we cared about. This was more than just about vengeance and the truth. This was about protecting Maria and Kyle…they were the only two left who mattered.

“Hey Liz,” he spoke quietly. His entire manner subdued, but coiled for action. He had obviously meant his warning over the phone very seriously. He looked different. I don’t mean physically, no physically he was very much the same: tall, tough, grim, spiky hair. No, it was something else. Something inside him, underneath his skin had changed. It was more than maturity and sorrow, no…what was it? And then it struck me. It was the way he stood and moved. Previously his anger at the world and his unhappiness oozed out his every pore. His desire for violence was evident, but not anymore. No. Right now he looked like a soldier. Stoic in demeanour, his body coiled for action and an undercurrent of deep seated violence simmered – he looked like a man ready for war.

Maybe, maybe I had found my ally after all.

Swallowing against my uncomfortably dry throat, I nodded in response. He stalked across the room and stood in a corner, opposite from me. I noticed the deliberateness of his move. He could see both the door to Alex’s room and out the window from where he stood.

Protect your back and cover your flanks.

Never walk into a room you can’t walk out of.


The two thoughts flashed through my mind abruptly. I could have sworn someone I knew whispered them in my mind. Michael unconsciously straightened and pulled Maria to his side.

Steeling myself to face their combined reactions I started to speak. Maria still didn’t know everything that I knew. She didn’t know about the dreams, and the weird bits of sentences that floated through my mind’s eyes at odd intervals. She didn’t know about my growing sense of unease – someone was shadowing me, someone was watching. Shrugging off the dark mood, I started my story.

“Ok, what I’m going to tell you will seem strange and I’ll sound crazy. But I have proof.” Forestalling Michael’s comments, I spoke urgently, “I’ve told Ria some of it but not all and that’s because I can’t keep doing this repeatedly. I need to get it all out in one shot.”

Fixing my gaze on Michael I continued, “I need you to just listen to me Michael and not say anything until I’ve finished. I’ll answer whatever questions you have after that, ok?”

His unblinking gaze remained fixed on my face. Aside from the slight movement of his chest he had been standing completely still. He could have been carved out of wood or granite. A slight jerk of his chin was my only indication that he had granted me a reprieve.

Here goes nothing, I thought to myself. “Ok, well…as you know, I don’t think that Alex’s death was a suicide or an accident. I think it was deliberate, premeditated…Alex was murdered. I know this because I knew Alex. I mean, Ria and I knew him better than anyone else on the planet and whether or not you agree with me about murder Maria, you know that he didn’t kill himself.”

Maria nodded unwillingly, easing away from Michael.

“Ok, first I thought that maybe somebody had hit his car, you know? Wheel traction, skid marks and strength of impact would indicate if it was an accident or not. Anyway,” I continued pushing my hair behind my ears. “His car was totalled. It was a mess but I didn’t find anything. Then I went through his computer, files, school records.”

Michael raised his eyebrows at the mention of school records. “Aren’t those confidential, Parker?” He asked sardonically.

Flushing at the implication of his words, I said shortly, “Yes. It doesn’t matter how I got them, what’s important is what they said. Alex’s host family in Sweden was called the Olson’s and he became really good friends with their daughter Leanna. But, I called Sweden pretty much non-stop for the past 48 hours and there are no Olsen’s living at that address, or have ever lived there.”

Maria inhaled sharply. Her reaction much more contained than I had hoped for. Moving forward to stand next to me, she just motioned me to continue, her eyes scanning Michael’s face.

“Myth number 2 – the people who live there don’t know any girl named Leanna.” The silence in the room had thickened. It seemed that I had managed to keep Michael’s interest and attention, after all.

My voice gathering force, lost some of its earlier hesitancy. Pointing to the pictures I’d arranged on the corkboard, I said, “Myth 3 – the building in the background of all those pictures does not exist in any of the places Alex said he went to.”

And now the final piece, “The building where Alex and ‘Leanna’ took this picture does not exist. It was razed to the ground ten years ago. And this is the very same picture Alex scanned into a locked document and wrote, ‘Leanna is not Leanna’ repeatedly!”

Stalking forward, Michael carefully looked at all the pictures. His face a complete blank, I had no idea whether he even believed me or not. But he hadn’t laughed yet. He hadn’t asked me a biting question. All things considered this was not going so badly. Grabbing Maria’s hand I squeezed. We both knew this was the moment. She needed Michael’s agreement almost as much as I did.

After an interminable silence, he asked quietly, “How do you know about the building?”

It was silly of me, I should have expected that question but I hadn’t. Oh God! Maria didn’t know what I had planned on doing, what had stopped me. She didn’t know about the horrible fight with Max that had ended whatever little feeling I had towards him. He hadn’t had faith in me. After everything was said and done, at the end of the day, he hadn’t even been my friend, when I had needed one.

“Lizzie?” Maria’s questioning voice rang in my ears. Hands on my shoulders she spoke to me directly, “whatever it is Lizzie, I can handle it, ok?”

Gulping down my anxiety, my gaze flickered towards her and Michael, before settling down between them. Speaking so softly that they strained to listen, I confessed. “I was planning on going to Sweden.”

Looking up, I met Michael’s startlingly perceptive hazel gaze. His eyes glittered for a second, like a thousand stars caught in a sun-burst. He spoke almost to himself “that explains it.”

Catching the end of his sentence, Maria’s pale face flushed. Eyes sparking with temper, she glared at me and I almost stepped back. “Did he hurt you?”

Startled by the unexpected question, I gasped, “who?”

“The rat bastard,” she growled dangerously. “Did he hurt you when he tried to stop you from going, Liz? Well did he?” Not knowing what to say, I simply kept silent.

Fuming, she sent Michael a scathing look and spat out, “You listen to me spaceboy, he might be your fucking king, but he’s acting like an asshole. If he touches Liz, or talks to her, or even looks at her in a way I don’t like – I will rip his fucking head off…and not you, not God and not some army will be able to stop me. Do you understand me?”

Appalled by the level of rage she was exhibiting, I was struck dumb. I remembered now, why if something had ever happened to either Alex or myself we had often just told each other and downplayed it in front of Maria. Like a tigress defending her cubs she was fearless when it came to defending us, to protecting us. The last time I had seen her this angry she had kneed Jimmy Mallory in the balls and broken his nose, leaving him a sobbing heap in the quad because he had hit Alex. I know we, both of us, mocked the famous Deluca wrath, but we never forgot the truth of it. I wondered how Michael would react to her anger.

He took his time to answer her. Rubbing a finger across his eyebrow, a classic sign that he was thinking or deciding something, he looked at both Maria and I long and hard. Coming to some sort of a decision he lowered his hand and spoke confidently and clearly. “I understand.” Then, “you won’t have to rip his fucking head off, Ria. I’ll give it to you on a platter.”

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Others --


“Well, well,” he mused aloud. “It seems that she has potential, this human girl you think of so highly.”

I looked at him surprised. Praise for a human no matter how faint, was praise indeed. Swallowing my excitement at his acknowledgement, I hoped that it would all work out. There was still the question of the boy. He had fought grimly and hung on. His spirit was strong and any mention of Liz and Maria elicited recognition from him. Maybe, we wouldn’t lose just yet.

“Has an ally come forward yet?” He asked. The concession had been hard won but I knew that she would need all the help that she could get. I had hoped for someone else. Someone a little older, a little less foolhardy but I’d intervened too late.

“Yes,” I responded sourly. Always quick at reading my moods, he snickered.

“Not your favourite then?”

“No,” I snapped back, well aware that he was baiting me but unable to stop the reaction. “I don’t trust him but I know he’s one of your favourites.”

Running a hand across his smooth cheek, he replied, “Aah yes, the irony of it all. It is quite delicious. Where is your sense of humour? Don’t tell me the cloak of responsibility has choked the last of your dismally limited attractive features! ”

Growling, I replied, “This is NOT funny. I don’t find it amusing that you would trust Nikkei’s kin over my lieutenant.”

Ignoring my hastily spoken words, he laughed under his breath. “Nikkei’s kin? It amazes me how you have managed to survive all these years without even a modicum of information.”

My temper fraying, Alex’s despair beating a steady drum in my temple, I groused, “If you have something to say then spit it out. I don’t have time for your games.”

His brows drew together abruptly. Eyes glittering crystalline hazel, he replied without a trace of humour or emotion: “He’s Nikkei’s brother, Ser, blood among brothers or loyalty to the cause. Now which do you think will win out?”


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Liz


My mouth opening and closing like a fish, I just stared at Michael. The implacable hardness of his words left no doubt in my mind that he meant just that. Ria on the other hand accepted his statement as her due and flashed him a smile.

Struck by how out of control the situation was, I spoke, “Michael, Ria, I really don’t think that’s necessary. Max,” pinned by their identical gazes, I continued with some difficulty, “Max understands the situation now. He gets it.”

Maria simply sniffed and Michael arched an eyebrow. Desperately trying to change the direction of the conversation, I asked, “Umm, now what?”

“Liz, you remember Alex was talking about some project of his?” Maria asked me, her brow furrowing with the effort to remember.

“Yeah, some sort of computer language program,” I replied not quite sure where this conversation was heading.

Clapping her hands together, she spoke quickly. “You remember he said something about a super computer at Las Cruces where he could do his work?”

“Yeah,” I nodded, completely lost.

“Well, we should go check there. Since everything about his study abroad is a lie, maybe we should go check if he even went to Las Cruces or not?”

“We? I don’t think so.” Michael stated firmly. “The two of you are gonna stay put and safe. I’ll go and find out about the computer and Alex.”

Seeing Maria and my identical expressions of vehement denial, he continued impassively. “Do not test my patience on this one. This is the way it’s gonna be from now on. Either I do stuff alone, or we – the three of us – do stuff together. There will be no solos. You understand me Parker?”

Before I could respond, a low mocking voice came from the door, “Oh, I don’t think that will be necessary Guerin. I can tell you what happened at the uni!”

Hands pressed against my pounding heart, I whirled around, just as Maria shouted, “No, Michael” and Michael’s hand sparked.

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Sean


“…I’ll go find out about the computer and Alex!” Guerin said authoritatively.

Hmmm…..choices, choices, decisions, decisions.

You remember that question I asked you earlier? Well, have you figured out what the answer is? No, oh well, I guess you’ll just have to wait and see.

Mikey G’s solo comment was just the best cue anyone could hope for. Seriously though. My family is totally into drama, aside from Maria and Aunt Amy that is. My father’s side, now they give acting a whole knew meaning all together. My dear departed parent may he burn in hell, now he did a damn fine job pretending to be a human being. Oh yeah, props to him. If he hadn’t died so young, I’m sure he’d have made a name for himself in Hollywood.

Anyway, that’s all irrelevant to the matter at hand. The question of the hour is – what did I decide? Well, to tell you the truth, I haven’t quite decided yet. I like keeping my options you. I learnt that much from my father and my mentor…always keep your options open. I never was one for jumping in head-first, not like Mikey G. Nope, he was a little too gung-ho for my liking. But you had to give the man credit, agreeing to go along with two crazy chicks was definitely a sign of courage or stupidity. I guess if he lived until the end, I’d have a chance to find out. Or maybe, I could find out now – just as he tries to burn a hole through me.

“No, Michael!” Ria shrieked, her voice louder than a siren but it didn’t faze Rath, who at the moment was too startled by his inability to burn me to pay attention to her.

Sigh, I knew this was going to be dramatic. Centering myself, feet planted shoulder width apart I flicked my wrist outward and water gushed out. It hit him in the chest, pushing him backward, breaking his concentration. The fire sizzled out. Sputtering in anger, his yells mingled with Ria's screams as the cacophany of sound threatened to shred my ear drums. Well, enough of this crap.

Blowing a piercing whistling, I shouted. “Oye! If you’d all calm the hell down then maybe we can talk about Alex Whitman!”

The immediate silence was deafening. Dusting the sparks off my clothes, I addressed all three of them in turn,

“How you doin’ Parker?”

“Nice to see you again cousin!”

Glancing at Rath, I couldn’t resist flashing him my widest grin. “You gotta do something about that aim, man! Oh, and some of us…well, we don’t burn. Remind me to tell you about that later.”

“Sean?” Parker asked her big brown eyes the size of saucers.

Atta girl! I knew she’d be the first one to recover. Man, even freaked and unhappy she’s classy and hot. Knowing that wasn’t quite the reaction she was looking for, I introduced myself:

“Sean Den-Sa Nickolai. I’m Nikkei’s brother.”
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Anatomy of a Sentence Part 13 (1/2)

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Thank you for all the wonderful feedback everyone. I promise to respond next time. Umm, we should be winding up by Tuesday, hopefully! :D
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Part 13

Kyle POV


Dad looked freaked today. And that freaked me out.

I mean, James Valenti never freaks out. Not ever. Nope. He’s got that whole lone ranger, cowboy at OK Corral thing going for him. The only sign that he’s worried is the Stetson. If he’s worried or concerned it perches on his head precariously because he keeps moving it to run his hands through his hair. So when I saw the angle of the hat, I just knew something had gone down.

Now couple the hat with brooding and a single shot of malt scotch – you’ve got alien trouble. Jesus! It was bad this time. I could tell.

The question was did I want to know what the trouble was? I mean, let’s face it the alien abyss has pretty much fucked up my entire life. Even Buddha would be hard pressed to put a good spin on that one. Yep, knowing them has ruined my life. Before I got sucked into their crazy ass world, I was just your regular jock. Heck, who am I kidding, I was a damn great jock. Captain of the school football, basketball and wrestling team, a bunch of good guy friends, a really hot and smart girlfriend, a potential football scholarship, yeah, life was damn good if I say so myself. And then, and then I met fucking Evans and he screwed it all up. And then just like that my girlfriend got shot, started lying to me and left me, while my other friends started getting into trouble, I got shot, I lost my friends, I got sucked into dark wet caves with flesh eating crystals and let us please, please not forget the psychotic bitch who is currently living in my house and in my room I might add!

So, ok the guy has magic hands and he saves Liz’s life and then my life and all of a sudden he gets to be King. I don’t fucking think so.

And to add insult to injury, not only does he get Liz, he also gets Tess. What is up with that? What is wrong with all these women? I wasn’t that bad a human being in this lifetime this can’t be my penance for whatever sin I’ve committed. My karma has just been kicking my ass left-right-and-center and the hits just keep on coming.

No wait, there’s more. My bitching isn’t over yet, so just sit your ass down. Where was I? Right, Liz and then Tess, yeah that sounds right. Anyway, so if it isn’t bad enough that all the girls I like have to fall in love with the Alien King and his soulful – gag, sorry that was my upchuck reflex – he commits the biggest act of stupidity anyone I’ve ever had the misfortune to meet, he dumps Liz for a blonde bitch.

Sigh.

See, now would someone just explain that to me? What is that about? Didn’t he get his fill of blonde bitchiness from his sister? I mean, he lives with the Queen of them all or does the poor bastard have some sort of a masochistic streak a mile wide? You know I think that is what it is. Here I’ve been searching for some meaning and some sort of explanation for his asinine behavior and there it is right in front of me, staring me in the face. His predilection for the company of bitchy busty blondes is his karmic bite in the ass.

Wow.

The world seems much more fair all of a sudden. You know, I’m not bitter. I’m really not. What I am is pissed. I’m pissed that he has hurt Liz. I’m pissed that for all his bleating about soul mates and all that he doesn’t see how unhappy Liz is, he doesn’t see how much she needs a friend. She needs him ofcourse she would never admit that. Nope, not Liz. Underneath all her softness and fragility there’s a real core of iron. She’s a feminist through and through. It’s true though, I figured that much out when we were going out. She’s little, you know, petite they call it. Yeah, petite. She’s fragile looking, and when she looks at you with those big brown eyes and all that amazing hair you think you can do anything and that she needs you to do things for her…but see that’s a mistake. She doesn’t need anyone to do anything for her. She’s quite capable of doing all sorts of things, things that you and I probably would shudder at the thought of…things like saving the world from ending.

She told me about that, sometime yesterday or was it the day before? I can’t remember. My head hurts a lot. I have trouble remembering things. And my stupid finger drumming just adds to the pain in my head. Buddha save me, of all the things I could have picked up from Whitman I picked up the finger drumming. The thing is I just can’t seem to stop. It’s incessant, constant. I just can’t stop.

What was I thinking…oh yeah, dad is pissed so it must have something to do with pod people. Well here goes nothing.

“Hey dad, what’s up?” He looked startled, as if he hadn't seen me.

“Hmm, what did you say?”

“I said, what’s up dad? You look a little umm annoyed. Did something happen?” The old man just frowned harder. I can tell this conversation isn’t getting anywhere real fast.

“Kyle?”

“Yeah,” I replied.

“Where is Tess?” He asked sitting down on the coffee table in front of me. Uh-oh.

“She’s gone out somewhere, probably hanging around Evans.” I couldn’t help the sour note that came into my voice. It just…stung. Not to mention, I had a thirty person orchestra banging around in my head.

“Listen, have you talked to Liz lately?”

I sat up. Ok, where was this going? “Not since day before. She’s been kinda hard to track down lately. Why?”

“Oh, it’s nothing,” he averred, twisting the brim of his hat in his hands.

“Don’t nothing me dad. Liz is my friend. She’s having a really shitty time of it so if there is something happening I need to know about it, ok?” I said grimly. No more bullshit.

“Kyle, son...”

“No,” I interrupted him brutally. “I need you to tell me what is going on. Now, Liz won’t talk, in fact she’s done a damn good job of hiding from everyone. If something is happening, if she’s going to need help then you need to tell me about it. Especially if it has something to do with Max! I know you like him but whatever. I need to help Liz dad, she needs her friends.”

He looked straight at me and for the first time in my life, I met my father’s gaze straight on. I didn’t blink, my eyes didn’t flicker and I didn’t look away. I was not going to lose this staring contest there was too much riding on it. I don’t know what he saw in my face, maybe it was my desire to help my friends, or just sheer mule-headed stubbornness but he grunted and looked away first.

He rubbed his hand over his head until his hair stood up in tufts another sign that he was worried. “Ok, no one outside the department knows what I’m going to tell you now. It’s going to come as a shock and I want you to just listen to me until I finish, ok.”

I opened my mouth to agree with all his conditions if only he’d get on with it, but he didn’t stop there.

“You’re an adult now, son. And I trust you. I also know that you really care for Liz, and I’m proud of you. But, I want you to promise to not do anything rash, ok? I need to know that I can trust you with this, Kyle?”

I don’t think I’d ever heard dad string so many words together in my entire life. So, I paid extra attention. He was trying to tell me something, in his own way, he was trying to steer me in a specific direction. To tell you the truth I really didn’t care what that direction was, I would have promised him anything if only to find out what he was going to tell me because I had a bad feeling about this. My head hurt even worse.

Not wanting to waste time, I simply nodded and hoped that he’d get on with it.

Sighing deeply he said, “Liz came to me and said that she had proof that Alex had been murdered, that his death was neither an accident nor a suicide. She saw the car, the accident site and searched his room. She found a picture of Alex and some girl called Leanna and some concert tickets for the day he died. She says that all these things coupled with the fact that he was a member of the I-Know-An-Alien club makes it very likely that he was murdered by someone,” he paused gathering his thoughts for a long minute, “from the alien contingent.”

Oh Buddha! I totally wasn’t expecting that. I knew that she thought Alex had been killed but I figured she meant that metaphorically, not literally. Holy crap! She’d searched his mangled car and gone through his stuff. I couldn’t even imagine what kind of dedication and cast iron stomach that took. Shit, why hadn’t she told me? She needed to stop with this whole lone ranger thing. Wait till I got my hands on her, she and I would have a long chat about how not ok it was for her to pull these kind of stunts alone. But wait, dad wasn’t finished yet.

I thought this was bad but then it got much worse. Lots worse.

“Kyle are you listening to me?” Dad asked sharply, tension etched in his frame.

I shook my head in an effort to clear it. Everything seemed really fuzzy all of a sudden I really needed to take some medication for this headache. It was killing me.

Stumbling over my tongue, I said, “sorry, I missed that. What did you say?”

Ignoring his curious look, I struggled to keep him in focus.

“I said that after she left I called Max and maybe I shouldn’t have done that. He’s been under a lot,” Dad must have seen the look of acute dislike on my face because he stopped abruptly and started a completely different thought. “Anyway, something else has happened. Alex Whitman’s body is missing.”

What the fuck! Ok, excuse my language but I repeat WHAT THE FUCK! I looked at my father dumbly, what did he mean by that…

“What do you mean his body is missing? How do you misplace a body? Umm, he was dead, they put him in the morgue and then what…he just disappeared! Are you trying to tell me that Alex’s body disappeared from the morgue and no one knows where it went? Are you kidding!” I ranted in disbelief.

“Kyle,” he started but I cut him off, shaking my head in disbelief, the pounding grew louder. “How can you lose a body? Oh my God, what are you going to tell his parents? Do they know? What about the funeral? There’s a funeral tomorrow, you know that right. You need to have a body in order to have a funeral, preferably the body of the person who’s being buried. Shit. What’s this like some bad joke from return of the body-snatchers or something!”

I could not believe what he was telling me. What was going on? This was crazy. People did not disappear from the morgue, not in small sleepy towns. No…scratch that it made perfect sense. Bodies didn’t disappear in small sleepy towns, but they did disappear in small sleepy alien infested towns. Liz was right. This had alien conspiracy written all over it. Written, heck, it was there in flashing red and green neon lights. You’d have to be completely blind to not see it.

Shit. Liz.

She didn’t know. I knew it from dad’s hesitation. She didn’t know anything and then in a moment of clarity through the pounding in my head, I realized that he didn’t want to tell her. He didn’t want her to be right. He didn’t want it to be true. He didn’t want to believe her. But it wasn’t in his hands anymore. I knew and I believed her and if this is what she needed to validate her quest then so be it.

Ignoring my father’s shouts, I ran out of the house and gunned the Mustang out of the drive away. Breaking all sorts of speed limits and traffic laws I raced to the Crashdown. The pain in my head was unbearable but I couldn’t sit down. I had to think through it, see through it. Liz needed to know. I needed to find her or something would happen. My sense of disaster was flashing red in my mind. It’s a wonder that I made any sense to Mrs. Parker and I struggled to make sense of what she was telling me.

Liz was at Alex’s house.

Did anyone else know she was there – Sean did. Damn. He was as bad as Evans. But at least Kinghole wasn’t there. Thank god for small mercies. I could still get to her in time. There was still time. Shit, this pain is just ridiculous. I couldn’t even grimace because every gesture hurt. I swear once I find Liz, I’m gonna down a whole bottle of advil with Tequila. If my head was gonna explode then it least it would go the fun way. With these random thoughts scrambling around in my head I nearly crashed my car into Maria’s jetta on the Whitman’s drive way.

The sense of urgency kept hounding my heels. The world tilted dangerously for a second, as I pushed open the front door. I didn’t wonder why it was unlocked. I just took the stairs two at a time, my head pounding in time with my heart until I felt they would both burst from the noise. I had to get to Liz. I had to let Liz know. I stumbled through the door, out of breath and my lungs clenching from the pain, and without adieu called out her name, “Liz! Liz!”

Fuck, why wouldn’t the floor stop moving? And why the hell had Alex’s parents painted his room in red and white horizontal stripes. It wasn’t helping my nausea. I vaguely heard her respond to my call and felt her vanilla scented hands grasp my upper arms.

Swaying treacherously on my feet, I rasped, “Alex’s body is missing,” before the ground rushed up to meet me, and the walls turned a blessed black.
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Anatomy of a Sentence Part 14 (22/2)

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Sorry about the delay everyone. RL has been driving me :mad: Thank you for all the lovely feedback.

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Part 14 – Rotating POV


Isabelle


“…you can’t go,” Max ground out.

“What do you mean I can’t go? I have to Max, don’t you understand? I just can’t live here anymore, please.” I begged. I know it’s hard to imagine that I, Isabelle Evans, Ice Queen of Roswell High, would beg or plead with anyone. But I did. I begged Max to let me go to college, to let me leave Roswell and put all the horrible memories behind me.

“Because I said so, Isabelle,” he spat out.

I just stared at him. Who was this person? Who was this monster masquerading as my brother? Max wasn’t like this. He was sweet and gentle. He wouldn’t do anything to hurt the people he loved, so what was going on. So I tried again. I tried to explain to him how I couldn’t live in Roswell anymore. The pain was too much to bear. I couldn’t walk around remembering what Alex was to me and how I found out too late, how everything reminds of the things that could have if I’d just let myself believe. It hurt to draw in a breath – but I couldn’t say all of this, no not to this Max. He was too angry to hear me say all of that so all I could tell him was that I had gotten admission into college in California and I could leave and both mum and dad would be ok with it.

“I said you can’t go Isabelle. And that means you can’t go.” Max’s voice rang out in the living room, his tense frame vibrating with anger. I had never seen him this angry before…he scared me.

“And, if you insist on this plan of leaving then I will tell not only mom and dad that you are on drugs and cheated on your exams, but I’ll also tell your school counselor and teachers. Don’t test my resolve on this Isabelle. You will do as I say!”

That last statement broke me, I just couldn’t bear it. “Max, please I’ll die in Roswell. Please, you have to let me go…” I couldn’t help the tears clogging my voice and streaming down my voice. I couldn’t help the tremors that wracked my body as I wrapped my arms around myself to keep the chill away. I hate feeling this vulnerable and I hate showing my fears and vulnerability even more than that but Max has always been able to do that. He has always been able to strip away my veneer and expose me without any effort, but never has it been so brutal or clinical. Today, I can feel something breaking between Max and I and I know that whatever it is – things can never go back to the way they were. We can never go back.

But Max didn’t respond. Not to the tears and not to the begging. He simply tied his shoelaces and calmly shrugged into his jacket. I think that last gesture was the last straw. One minute I was standing to the side trying vainly to get him to listen to me and the next moment the lamp nearest to his hand exploded.

“I hate you,” I screamed. “I hate you. How can you do this to me? I’m your sister, Max, not some fucking subject or leper begging for scraps of your attention. How can you refuse me after everything that you’ve done? First you let Liz in and exposed us all and now when we all like Liz, I like Liz, when she’s proven herself, when she’s saved us so many times you’re fucking Tess. What is wrong with you? You let Alex, my Alex die…How can you stand there and tell me that I can’t do this one thing that’s good for me. I’m not ASKING for your permission little brother, I’m TELLING you this is how it will be. I AM LEAVING ROSWELL AND FUCK YOU!” I screamed with all my might. My anger knew no bounds and if I could I would have zapped him with my powers. But I didn’t because somewhere a small part of me sat horrified and still at how we were behaving, at how I was behaving towards my brother. But I didn’t care, not anymore.

And then, before I could draw a breath the unthinkable happened. Max’s hand came up in a flash and his shield wrapped around me and slowly backed me into a wall. His eyes were glowing feral gold and whatever last restraints remained had snapped. I clawed frantically against the shield that was slowly choking of my air supply, and the harder I struggled the tighter it became, until I couldn’t move any more. Wide-eyed I stared at him as he moved towards me like a predator.

Leaning in he hissed, “Don’t ever talk to me like that again, Isabelle. And you will do exactly as I say.” Max stared at me one last time before stalking out of the drawing room. A second after the front door slammed shut, his shield winked out and I fell to the floor. I gulped in air, my throat was scraped and raw from all the screaming and where the shield had pressed against my windpipe. I felt utterly alone and afraid. I was afraid of what Max had become, and I felt guilty for my part in it. But no…this was not my fault. I was not responsible for the fact that he had abandoned us all. And, if this was a glimpse of my future in Roswell then I was better off somewhere else.

Tears of frustration and rage streamed down my face as I stumbled to the middle of the drawing room and then I did something, something that I would never have done, not in a million years. I stood in the middle of the drawing room and let loose the energy pulsing restlessly inside me. It shot out of the palms of my hands and sparked all around me. Like the eye of the storm, I stood very still as the energy roared and raged around me, lifting furniture off the floor, pulling paintings and pictures off the walls, bric-a-brac swirled around me. The power pulled in tighter and tighter and like a cyclone everything was sucked into the vortex of my anger and fears.

Everything was out of control. I felt out of control. And overhead the strength of my emotions fed into the tempest raging in my mother’s drawing room. My skin tightened over my face, and I could feel my bones stiffening against the onslaught, my fingers curved inwards as my hair streamed behind me. Power coiled in the pit of my stomach and just before the moment of release, oblivion came…

“ISABELLE! Honey what’s going on?” My mother’s horrified voice traveled through the spaces between us.


Alex


The first thing that crosses my mind is that my head hurts. I mean, it really, really hurts. I can feel light and sound pressing against my eyelids and my ears. Their sharp echoes keep punching in and out. I try to squeeze my eyes shut tighter but the intensity of light doesn’t diminish, if anything it strengthens becomes brighter. Flashes of red and white explode in my head and pain increases like the pitch of sound reaching an intolerable limit.

I struggle against the onslaught but I can’t. I feel weak as if I haven’t slept or eaten in days. My limbs are weighted down and I can’t move. Why can’t I move? Maybe I’m having a really real dream…you know one of those dreams where you think you’re naked in class and wake up in a panic. If I could just focus and open my eyes it would be so much better. I really need to wake up because I have to go meet Isabelle. Isabelle, yes, I just talked to her, didn’t I? Liz and Ria were there too. I was going to invite her to a concert with me. I really need to wake up.

“Wake up Alex, wake up. You have to wake up now. They all need you. You must wake up.”


Liz


I heard Kyle calling out my name before I saw him. We were all still in shock over Sean’s appearance. I wonder if that is even his real name. Sean. It sounds very human. Sean, Maria’s annoying but still helpful cousin. Sean, the man who helped me break into the school, the man who took me lane walking and who I kissed. Sean, Nicholas’ brother, the same Nicholas who works for Khivaar and who is trying to kill us all. Why am I just standing here watching him and Michael argue – why aren’t I doing anything…but before I could decide one way or the other or make a move in any direction, Kyle burst in the room.

He spoke hoarsely, “Alex’s body is missing,” before collapsing at my feet.

“Kyle! Is he ok?” Maria knelt next to him on the floor as he began to twitch uncontrollably. His hands clenched and unclenched and a frown marred his face. “Michael?” she called out in panic.

“Is that blood coming out of his nose?” Michael asked, leaning over him, while I stood frozen in my spot. My mind bubbling with thoughts all at once and I couldn’t focus. I couldn’t concentrate on what was going on. Something, something that would explain the situation was floating just out of reach. If I could just reach out and grasp it then things would make sense. My next move would become clear. I just needed to think. Think, Liz, think. Focus. Pay attention. Who else had been complaining of headaches aside from Kyle? And somebody else had been tapping their fingers on and off. If I could just figure it out, we would be half way there. I just needed to remember.

And then…

“He’s hemorrhaging. Look, we don’t have much time, we have a lot to do so we need to get going now,” Sean called out his voice firm and steady.

“Why? What do you know?” Michael spat out. He was pissed. Well, I didn’t blame him, not really. I mean, we’d just found out that his girlfriend’s and my best-friend’s first cousin was an alien and to top it all the brother of an alien who was trying to kill us all. Yeah, I could see how Michael might have some trust issues with that. I was just surprised that it didn’t bother me that much. There was just something about him that made me want to trust him. There it was again that little scrap of knowledge floating just outside my grasp, if I could only reach it everything would be ok.

“…you need to tell me what the hell you know and you need to tell me right now!” Michael growled. I don’t think he realized that power was pulsing against the palms of his hands. A silver blue rhythmic pulse that glowed brighter the angrier he got.

“You are in no position to make demands,” Sean replied, calmly flicking off a piece of lint from his jacket. “If you want to save your friends,”

“Friends, that’s it!” I spoke aloud, cutting across the different conversations. It was all coming together in my head, the different pieces of information: the tapping, the headaches, the loss of memory, the mood changes.

“Liz, you’re scaring me,” Maria cried out her wide-eyed gaze flickering between me and Sean. “What did you figure out?”

“It’s all a mindwarp. Of course! I can’t believe we didn’t think of it earlier. They all have the same symptoms,” I rattled off my reasoning aloud, uncaring whether anyone understood me or not. “Ok, here is what we are going to do. Michael I want you to call Isabelle, JUST Isabelle and tell her we’re coming to pick her up. I’m going in Maria’s car with Maria and Sean. You and Isabelle come with Kyle in his car. OK?”

Before Michael could ask any of his frustrated questions, Sean laughed aloud. “I always knew you were a clever girl, Parker. The one thing, good old Evans showed any sense and taste in.”

I whirled to face him. I didn’t have the time or the patience to deal with his remarks or his innuendos. “Don’t test my patience Sean. I don’t care what axe you have to grind and with whom. This is not a permanent relationship so don’t get comfortable, I’m only with you because we don’t have enough time to do this on our own. You are going to help me bring back Alex and Kyle and if you fuck with me you will become a long-term guest at a government facility and on a first name basis with a number of alien hunting specialists! Are we clear?” I hissed in his face.

I don’t know what he saw when he looked at me but all of a sudden he became abruptly serious. He held out his hand and said, “No funny business, Parker.” I shook his hand, while Maria and Michael stared at the both of us with their mouths open.

“Let’s go, we don’t have time to waste,” I said just as Michael and Sean bent down to pick up Kyle.


Isabelle


“ISABELLE! Honey what’s going on?” My mother’s horrified voice traveled through the spaces between us.

Shit. Shit. Shit. Shit. My mother was home.

My mother was home and I was in the middle of meltdown.

My mother was home and I was in the middle of a melt-down with furniture swirling around my head.

My mother was at home and I was in the middle of a melt-down with furniture swirling around my head and all our years of hiding, of keeping our abilities a secret had just gone down the drain.

My mother, no not my mother, Diane Evans, would know that her children were freaks. She would know that I was a freak. I wasn’t normal. It was all over. I had nothing left, not anymore. Not Alex, not my brother and now the one person who had given me a home and every reason to be normal, I’d just lost that person as well. And with that last thought, all the fight and power drained out of me. Everything settled on the floor, exactly where it had been before, except the room had never felt as barren or more like a wasteland before.

Ostensibly, everything was the same but in the spaces between my mother and I, and my heart knew, everything had changed. All was broken, things had fallen part.

Straightening my shoulders, I turned around to face Diane Evans, my adopted parent.

“You probably want to know what’s going on, right, mum?” I asked softly my voice almost a whisper. This was it. This was the moment that I had been waiting for, preparing for my entire life. The one I was so sure I would carry through with aplomb. But now, at this very moment, every answer and every carefully constructed explanation and speech tasted like ashes in mouth because the reality of it was all at one more terrifying and more exhilarating than anything I could have ever imagined.

“Honey, what’s going on? Are you ok? Please, say something,” she asked again. Her eyes were crinkled in concern and I could see her fingers restlessly lacing and unlacing, a sure sign that she was worried. I did the same thing myself. “H..how did, umm, were you, I mean, did you move that furniture?”

It was now or never.

“Mom, can you please sit down. I have something to tell you, something that Max and I should have told you a long time ago but,” I swallowed desperately against the cold fear sealing my throat, “but I…we were afraid.”

“Isabelle, I love you. Your father and I love you, you know that. I promise, whatever it is we can handle it. Ok?” She spoke soothingly.

At least, I’m sure that’s what her intention was but my fear didn’t abate. How could she say that? How could she say something so sweeping without even knowing what I was going to tell her? It wouldn’t last once she found out that we…we were freaks. There was no easy way to say this so I just sat down abruptly in front of her.

“Max and I are aliens!”
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Anantomy of a Sentence Part 15 (7/3)

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Hi everyone, *ducks in embarassment* apologies for the delay in posting but a) I'm having a lot of difficulty wrapping up this story; b) For the Roses is firing on all cylinders and there just aren't enough hours in the day! But I will understand if you want to pelt me with eggs and tomatoes... :oops:

Here's a new part. One more and then we hit - The End. Sigh, if I ever get there. :shock:

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Part 15 Rotating POV

Diane POV:

I woke up this morning thinking what a wonderful day it was going to be. I would spend some time with Izzy. She’s been so down what with Alex’s death and her fights with Max. Oh and I know, neither of them think we pay attention or notice anything but we do. We just don’t know what to do about it. Izzy and Max are the best things to ever happen to us and we are both so proud of them and so pleased that they could become a part of our family. They were always so close, both of them. It was as if they were connected in some deep way, an inextricable link that tied them to each other. But lately their arguments are fraught with hostility and it isn’t the usual level of teenage angst. No, this is so much more and so much worse than that. There is a malevolence and violence implicit within their fights and try as we might, Phillip and I can’t get through to them.

I’ve had my suspicions about what they’ve been hiding. I know that there isn’t something quite normal about my children but it doesn’t matter. I don’t care what they can do or who they are. I don’t care about anything except for the fact that they are my babies and I love them. This is why when Phillip told me he was going to have Max investigated, we fought about it. I can’t violate their trust like that. I can’t spy on my own children, no matter what Phillip says about them being in trouble. I believed Max when he told me to trust him and to have faith that he wasn’t doing anything illegal and I do. But Phillip doesn’t. He doesn’t understand that by spying on our children, his desire for answers will hurt everyone. And I fear that I will lose my children in his quest. I just wish that they’d talk to me, that they would trust me. Because no matter what they tell me, I will always love them, and nothing can change that.

But nothing I had imagined could be as unbelievable as what Izzy has just told me. She looks so afraid as if I will push her away from me. My beautiful girl’s eyes are full of tears and fears. She is so very afraid and I have never seen Isabelle afraid. She has always been collected and calm. But not right now. All I can see when I look into her beautiful brown eyes is fear and relief at finally having told me the truth. But what does it mean?

“Aliens?” I said, letting the word unfurl on my tongue.

“Yes, mom,” she whispered, her eyes bright with unshed tears. “I’ve wanted to tell you for so long. Everyday I ask Max if we can tell you and he always said no. But I can’t lie to you anymore, I can’t pretend that everything is ok. Because it isn’t. Nothing is ok and it won’t be ever again. I’m so sorry mom.”

“Isabelle honey, what do you mean by aliens?” I asked unable to bear her anguish but couldn’t quite grasp what she was saying. There were no such thing as aliens, were there? It was just too far-fetched to be true, wasn’t it?

Determinedly wiping her eyes, Isabelle looked down at her clasped hands and spoke so softly that I had to focus every bit of attention to make out her words. “Max, Michael, Tess and I are aliens. Our spaceship crashed in the Roswell dessert in 1947. We are the clones of the ruling family on Antar, which was our planet. Max was the King, I was his sister, Tess was his wife and Michael was his second in command. We came out of our pods when we were six, and that was the night you and daddy found both of us.”

It was all so unbelievable like a piece of bad fiction. But she spoke with so much conviction and intensity that I couldn’t look away from her. Phillip and I had always wondered why two naked children were wandering in the dessert. But there had never been any answer. There were other clues over the years. They hadn’t known how to talk and yet Max and Isabelle were able to communicate with each other silently. We had had to teach them everything from the beginning, how to eat, how to wear clothes, how to talk, how to bathe. We had to teach them how to do everything as if they were infants.

“Mom?” Isabelle’s frightened voice broke my thoughts. “You don’t believe me, do you?”

“No, I…” I stammered unable to say anything. The strange part was that I did believe her. I just didn’t know what to do about it now that I did know.

“We can do things,” she spoke softly.

“Things? What kinds of things?” I asked startled. My mind flashed back to a seven year old Max holding a dead bird in his hands and then the very next moment he opened his palms and the bird flew away. I had always wondered about that and tried to understand what it meant but no matter how many times I saw that tape, I couldn’t unravel that mystery.

“Well, Max can heal,”

“Oh you mean like that little bird?” I put in curiously.

“Yes, like the bird. Michael make energy blasts, Tess can make people see things that aren’t really there,” she continued her voice getting softer and softer.

“What can you do honey?” I asked, touching the bent golden head.

“I can see what’s in people’s subconscious. I can go into their dreams,” Isabelle rushed out finally raising her eyes to meet mine. Determination warred with shame in her brown orbs and for a moment I couldn’t understand the conflicting emotions and then it hit me…she was waiting for me to reject her. Push her away. She was waiting for me to call her a freak.

Tears filled my eyes. My beautiful sensitive children had carried such a heavy burden their entire lives. They had lived with the threat of exposure and the fear that if we found out we would reject them. I suppose I couldn’t blame them, but it still hurt that they hadn’t trusted me. They hadn’t trusted their parents with their secret.

I couldn’t bear the thought that they were afraid of us, afraid of me. “Oh honey, I love you Isabelle. I love you and Max and nothing can change that. And I love you even more now that I know your secret. You’ve been so brave. Oh, Izzy don’t you know you can tell me anything and it won’t change the way your father and I feel about you – we will always love you.”

Sobbing she launched herself in my arms and I held her as closely as I could. At last, we knew the truth. I know that a lot more has been going on, that there is more to the story but right this minute, I can’t quite bring myself to care. My daughter has revealed herself to me. She has trusted the truth of her existence to me and I want to make sure that she understands how much we love them. And nothing will change that.

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Michael POV:

Fuck. Fuck. Fuck.

I don’t like this. I don’t like this at all. But somehow I doubt Liz gives two shits about how I feel. I don’t like following, Deluca, or whatever his name is into whatever trap he’s leading us into. I just don’t like it. But Liz doesn’t care. Even she has thought about it, I doubt that she cares. We are heading for a showdown and all I can do is go along for the ride and make sure that she doesn’t get herself, Maria and Kyle killed.

“Do you have your phone?” I asked Maria as she gunned the engine out of the Whitman drive-way, while Deluca, Liz and Kyle piled into the Mustang.

“Here,” she tossed it my way her eyes focusing on the road. Maria was too quiet. I didn’t like it when she got that quiet, it always meant something bad.

“So, how are you holding up?” I asked dialing Isabelle’s number.

A sidelong glance, then she spoke in a clipped voice, “I’m shit scared that we’re all going to die, Michael. But more than that – I am afraid that I’m gonna lose Liz and Kyle as well. I can’t…I can’t”

“Shh, Maria it will be ok,” I said as comfortingly as I could. Please don’t make a liar out of me!

“How do you know Michael? How the hell can you say that to me?” She shouted banging her open palm against the steering.

My energy flared higher in response to her anger. Shifting in my seat, I replied as calmly as I could, “I don’t know anything Maria. But I do know that there is going to be a day when we are going to lose. There is going to be a day when I’m going to promise you that everything is fine and I will be lying – but today is not that day! Ok, you have to believe me when I say that today is not that fucking day. We are not going to lose today.”

Turning sideways, I looked at her vibrant profile. She had given me love, life and home. I’d be damned before I gave that up. “I love you Maria Deluca and I promise you, today is not a day when I’m going to break my promise to you.”

Her green eyes glittered with emotion and then she said in her husky voice, “I love you too, Spaceboy.”

“Good, so let’s go get Isabelle,” I said, redialing the Evans’ number.

“Hello?”

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Isabelle POV:

“Hello, Michael?”

I smiled tremulously. Today had started out as the worst day of my entire life, but telling my mother the truth had just been the best thing I could have done.

“Iz, listen. I don’t have much time,” his voice crackled over the phone.

“What? What’s happening?” I cried, this morning’s event flashing in my mind. Had Max met Michael? Oh god, Michael would kill him if he pulled the King card. He’d blast him to pieces especially since he had been feeling so protective towards Maria and Liz.

“Michael what is it?”

“Look, we don’t have time to talk about it over the phone. Just come outside the house. Maria and I are on our way.”

“But…”

“I don’t have time to argue just do it Isabelle.” A moment of silence and then, “Please.”

He never said please. Michael was never polite not even the pain of death could make him mind his manners. The situation, whatever it was serious. All traces of happiness left my face as I said, “Ok, Michael. I’ll be outside.”

Turning to my mother, I debated what to tell her. The instinctive desire to lie rose to the surface quickly, but a look at her face had me rethinking my decision.

“Mom, I have to go somewhere.”

“Where honey? Is everything ok? You know you can tell me anything sweetie?” She exclaimed her voice filled with concern.

“Michael just called and he wants me to meet him outside. I think that he need to talk to me,” raising a hand to forestall her objections, I said quickly, “I don’t know anything else mom. I swear I’ll come back and tell you everything.”

Hugging her quickly, I left the house before she could say anything.

Now, where was Michael and what the hell was going on?

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Liz POV:

“So who are these people who are going to help us?” I asked Sean keeping Kyle’s head in my lap. Thank God, his nose had stopped bleeding. Michael had put him to sleep after lugging him to the car. I was just glad he wasn’t in any pain.

He stayed quiet for so long that for a moment I thought he wasn’t going to answer my question. But then he asked a surprising question, “Do you know Serena?”

Startled, I whipped my head up to meet his gaze. His surprisingly serious eyes met mine. “How do you know about that?” I swallowed to ease my dry throat.

“I know a lot of things, Parker. But to answer you question, I know about her because she told me.”

“No, you’re lying! How do you know that? That was a secret. He promised me that no one knew the truth except for me. I was the only one.” I gasped out. My thought whirled in my head, a mile a minute.

He sighed. “Look, Parker, I like you, I really do. And this is a suck thing to have happened to you. He didn’t know that Tess was going to turn psycho bitch on him. And his allies, well let’s just say, they were the equivalent of his enemies.”

“You mean Nasedo?” I asked, thinking about what he’d just said.

“Yeah, he was wacko. But they had another protector. He’s a big hot-shot Hollywood producer now by the name of Cal Langley. Anyway, Serena found him and they headed to Roswell because some bad shit was going down. They found out that Maxie boy had adopted Zan’s not so nice characteristics. And that Whitman had been killed.”

I stopped smoothing Kyle’s hair at that last sentence. “Wait – do you mean to say that they knew that Alex might be killed and they did nothing to stop it?”

Sean’s knuckles tightened on the steering wheel. “No, that’s not what I said.”

“Really, what exactly did you say? Because from what I understand, you were all aware of the whole Future Max debacle and knew what I had to do in order to push Max away from me. You all knew that Tess was waiting to sink her claws into him. You all knew that she was mind-warping both Alex and Kyle. Alex died because of you people and you didn’t think it was important enough to inform me?!” I hissed out furious at the way they had manipulated all of us. At the prices we had had to pay for knowing the alien secret.

“Look, I didn’t know any of that, ok? All I knew was that something was wrong with you, that Max was being a total asshole and that Alex was dead. I swear those are the only things I knew. I didn’t think of contacting Serena and Cal until, well until a couple of days ago.”

“A few days was still plenty of time. When exactly were you going to tell me?” I caught him blanche and swiftly added, “Were you going to ever tell me, or being the rat bastard that you are tag on to the winning side!”

“I’m sorry ok,” he replied looking beleagured. “This was not my idea. I had no idea that any of this was going to happen. I just found out today that Alex’s body was missing…”

“Missing,” I pounced on the word. “That’s what Kyle said. Are you telling me that this Serena and Cal person have something to do with that?”

“Yeah, I think…I guess,” he stammered. It was odd to see Sean so uncertain. He was usually the picture of snotty delinquent coolness but I guess that could be explained by the power he had at his disposal. No, I just knew that neither Isabelle nor Michael was going to have an easy time disposing off of him – if it came to that. But future ally or not, I just couldn’t bring myself to care or be nicer to him.

I took a deep breath and counted off in my head, anything to prevent myself from exploding. Smoothing the offending strands of hair away from my face, I looked down at Kyle. He looked so pale and ill that I couldn’t believe he was the same athletic boy I’d talked to a few days ago. Another one of Tess’ victims in a long line of victims. I’ve never considered myself a violent person. More importantly, I’ve never thought that I could hate someone enough to hurt them. But Tess has proven to be that exception in my character. I want to hurt her for every hurt that she has inflicted on us. I know that if it comes down to a choice, I will choose to kill her, end her existence permanently. I think it’s a fitting end for someone as vicious and malignant as she is.

“Hey, Parker! Are you still there?” Sean called out looking at me through the rear view mirror.

Pushing my murderous thoughts I said, “Yes, Sean I’m still here. Where are we going?”

“The Granolith Chamber.”

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Maria POV:

Isabelle looks happy. Now that’s strange. No don’t get me wrong. I don’t hate her. Heck, I don’t even know how I feel about her but I do know that she hasn’t had a lot to be happy about lately. If it isn’t asshole Max then it’s the fact that she was a complete bitch to Alex before he died. Yeah, it could be any one of those factors. I just don’t care anymore. I mean, why should I? Why the hell should I give two shits about how the Ice Princess feels? She doesn’t care about how we feel. She’s never cared. Half the time she bitches about Liz and the other half she gads about with her shallow sorority friends, without giving a damn about hurting other peoples feelings – Alex’s feelings. Yeah, she’s a bitch. So why do I care? Why do I feel the need to ask her,

“Hey Isabelle, is everything ok?”

“Yeah, yeah everything is ok. Good, no everything is fine!” She said tripping over herself.

Now see that’s the other thing. I’ve never seen Isabelle nervous. Pissed, yes. Annoying, yes. Bitchy, yes. Self-absorbed, yes. But nervous, nope that’s just not an Isabelle kind of thing. So I repeat, what the hell is going on.

“What’s going on, Michael? I had to run out on my mother so this better be worth it,” she demanded. Aah, now see, that’s the Isabelle I recognize.

“Why was your mother at home?” Michael responded sourly, scratching his eyebrow.

“Why do you care?”

“Just answer the question Iz. What was your mom doing at home?”

“I…she…we were just talking ok, Michael. God, do I need permission to talk to my own mother. Get a life Michael!” She had started off uncertainly but then all of a sudden the Ice Queen kicked in and she buried him under an avalanche of ice. But see that’s the beauty of my space boy he just doesn’t stay down. Wait a second, why would she be nervous about talking to her mother, unless….I looked in the rear view mirror and there it was Isabelle was twirling a lock of hair. She never touches her hair unless she’s nervous or she’s lying.

“You told her!” I burst out amazed that she would actually take such a huge step without consulting Max-hole or Michael. “Didn’t you? Oh my God! How did she take it? Was everything, ok?”

“Told her what?” Michael exclaimed running his fingers through his hair until it stood up in tufts. And then light dawned. It really is amazing to see something click in space boy’s head he looks like he swallowed a light bulb!

“Isabelle!” He roared nearly blasting my eardrums.

“Hey watch it buddy. I don’t want to be deaf before I turn twenty!”

“It’s none of your business Michael,” Isabelle exclaimed talking right over me. “And even if it is your business, she’s my mother and I told her, ok. I can’t lie to her anymore. I can’t. I’m not going to lose another person because I wasn’t brave enough to tell them I loved them.” She sniffed meeting my eyes.

Before Michael could rain over her parade, I said, “Shut it space boy. I’m really glad you told her Isabelle. She loves you guys. She’ll accept you.”

Her eyes brightened with tears as she managed a smile and said, “Thank you Maria. I feel so much better now that I’ve told her, you know?” I nodded in response.

“I feel like I can do anything now.”

Michael and I shared a long look, before he spoke smirk firmly in place, “Funny you should say that Izzy because you just might have to!”
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Anatomy of a Sentence - Part 16(A) End (10/4)

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Conclusion - 16A

Liz POV


“So, do you know what’s going on in there?” I nodded towards the granolith chamber where Michael and Serena had disappeared with Kyle more than an hour ago.

“Yeah,” Cal Langley, the MIA protector replied.

He was a stocky man, with a gleaming bald pate and a cigar perpetually hanging out of the corner of his mouth. For a royal protector he was remarkably unconcerned about the king’s psychotic behavior, the queen’s treachery and generally the mess Antarians had made of their lives not only on this planet but on all others as well.

“And,” I prodded, wrapping my arms around my knees. I really hated this cave. I could trace some of the worst moments of my life to it.

He took his time answering. Lighting his cigar he replied, “As Max’s second Michael’s primary job is to not only act as the king’s strategist but also to rule in his stead. So, if something happens to the king, then Michael will not only rule in his place but his latent abilities will be jumpstarted.”

“You mean, if something happens to Max, or if he…” I trailed off not knowing how to talk about Max’s metamorphosis from my gentle soul-mate to an abusive and dictatorial stranger.

Cal snorted. “I mean, if he starts acting like an egotistical jackass and starts thinking with his dick instead of his head or if he starts acting crazy, or if he,”

“Ok, I get it,” I cut in as Cal dispassionately ripped Max’s behavior to shreds. “Anyway, what does Michael’s flip switch have anything to do with Kyle?”

“I thought they said you were the smart one,” he said sardonically. “Figure it out.”

That condescending comment and tone was the last straw. Standing up, I snarled, “Look, I’m tired, and those are two of my closest friends in there and I would really appreciate it if you can the sarcasm and stop acting like a complete asshole!”

When he opened his mouth to speak, Maria yelled from her corner, “I second that.”

“I think Liz is still being too nice. I’d even say that this entire mess is your fault. If Alex and Kyle don’t recover then I will hold you responsible,” Isabelle spoke incisively her voice cutting through the fraught silence like a honed blade.

Cal swiveled on his heel to look at her. His eyes bore into hers. But Isabelle wasn’t known as the Ice Queen of Roswell High for nothing. Instead of backing down, she strode up to him and faced him down. Of the two of them, I would put my money on Isabelle every time when it came to a stare down and she didn’t disappoint me. After three extended moments of silence, Cal shrugged and turned away from her. But his voice didn’t lose any of its edge, if anything it grew colder and harsher.

“You’ll hold me responsible! You will hold ME responsible,” he sneered, “now that is a riot. What, you think you’re a princess or something?”

Losing his sneer abruptly, “You aren’t in a position to make demands. The whole royalty crap is long over. So, if I were you, I’d get a swift reality check.”

Not a princess anymore? I mouthed to Maria. What the hell did that mean? I looked over to Sean if he had any clue about what Cal was talking about, but he looked befuddled. Shaking my head in disbelief, at the enormity of information we didn’t possess I turned to ask him what he meant, but Isabelle beat me to it.


Isabelle POV

“What are you talking about?” I snapped. “If you have something to say then spit it out. Don’t talk in riddles!”

“What the hell...holy fuck! You really don’t know anything, do you?” He exclaimed, spitting out his cigar in surprise.

“That was so totally gross. You really shouldn’t go around spitting on people, or smoking for that matter. Tobacco kills,” Maria deadpanned from her corner. “But I can tell you don’t take constructive criticism well, so I’m just gonna ask my question, which is: what are you talking about?”

Ignoring my huff of exasperation, and Cal’s scowl she rambled on. “Ok, so according to the freaky mom-o-gram from outer space, which I totally missed out on, but Lizzie was there, so you can help me out if I get stuff wrong babe. Yeah, so I don’t know what you know but she was pretty clear on the whole royalty crap. Max, Isabelle, and Michael were the King, Princess and Second in Command on Antar. Bad shit happened so they podded the lot of them and blasted them to earth with their protectors. If you ask me, y’all have really shitty judgment in protectors because you didn’t do much in the protect department. Anyway, did I forget something? Lizzie?”

I groaned aloud. Only Maria could reduce something that was a matter of life and death and the fate of distant galaxies into a bad daytime soap opera. Still, I couldn’t argue with the salient facts she had presented, despite how un-amused I was by her mode of presentation.

“You forgot the gerbil,” Liz commented a smile fighting to break free under the steady voice.

“Oh yeah,” Maria gagged before saying, “yeah I tried to forget the bit about the blonde hosebeast as Max’s child bride or something.”

Shaking her head in disgust, Maria slung an arm over Liz’s shoulder as they walked towards the edge of the cave.

“You know,” she continued addressing all of us, “it takes a really sick and perverted mind to bind people together by the promise of past life sex and by tying memory retrieval to sex as well. Yep, it is really really disgusting. You really should do something about that.”

Choosing to ignore her comments, I turned to Cal. “Maria is right. That is what the message in the orb was. Now, if you have something to add to that, or if you want to tell us something different then please do.”

I don’t know what he thought when he looked at me, at the three of us actually as we sat side by side, but whatever it was he finally decided to talk.

“You might as well pay attention Sean, this is about you as much as them,” he called out to Maria’s delinquent cousin.

Sean, now, I didn’t quite know what to make of him. I knew off hand that he was on probation and had been in prison from earlier conversations with Maria but the whole half-alien thing, along with being Nicholas’ or Nikkei’s brother, as Serena and Cal referred to him, was disturbing. He was the enemy. He was the reason why we’d all been hunted like animals, why the skins had attacked us, he knew all of that. But when I demanded that Liz give me some answers she didn’t. She just told me that it wasn’t the right time and that she might tell me later – I don’t think anyone can imagine how hard it was for me to not slap her when she said that. The only reason I didn’t rip into her was because of Alex.

Alex, my dear sweet Alex, who was still alive but hanging precariously between life and death. It was the memory of Alex’s words that stopped me and the fact that no matter what her faults or how annoying her attitude might be, Liz Parker has never steered us wrong. Even at the cost of her own sanity and well-being, she has always put our interests first.

“You know Princess, I’m not telling this story for my edification. I know all this already. So, if you want answers I suggest you stop acting like a space-case and pay attention,” Cal hissed at me breaking my spiraling thoughts.

Throwing a glare in his direction, I leaned back and prepared to listen to his story. Even before he began, I knew that it would shatter what little illusions I had left about my past and my planet. After this, things would never be the same again.

But then, I hadn’t thought about Max in all the time I had been here so maybe they had already begun to change.


Cal Langley POV

Why the hell do I get stuck with the explanations? Chalk it to yet another fucked up decision made by an ugly rock.

I was doing fine in California. I was happy, you know. It’s hard for me to admit that – I was happy. Shape-shifters don’t come by happiness often. When you are the most reviled and enslaved species on your planet, well that tends to get in the way of feel good moments. I never asked for this life. I never asked to be sent her with four whiny brats that were responsible for the destruction of an entire planet. This is where Ser would throw a hissy fit.

‘It wasn’t their fault,’ she’d whine. ‘They were just children, Cal!’

Children my ass. You want to know what Antar’s greatest curse was…Royalty that’s what, despotic, malevolent and cruel royalty. They treated an entire planet of beings like slaves. It wasn’t enough for them to control all the land or the wealth – no, they had to control lives. They wanted to control the existence of every being and become little demonic gods in their own right. The created a society of slaves, and fed off their blood and toil and energy like parasites. It’s no wonder then that there was a revolution and a bloody one at that. If you ask me, the anti-royalists didn’t shed enough blood. They should have just massacred the royals in one go. But that’s where the incompetence of the skins comes in – they didn’t take into account the self-serving self-protection instincts of the Antarian royalty and their coterie of priests and seers.

It was the holy council of Antar that decided to send Zan, Vilondra, Rath and Ava to earth. It was the holy council’s idea to tie their memories to sex, opening their minds to external control. It was the only way they could come back to power. The idea was ingenious in its sheer wickedness. Sex in the Antarian royalty not only seals the strength of the host’s abilities but it also opens up a complex grid of mind links, allowing telepathy and mind-control. So the royals can talk to each other and like a hive monitor personal movements constantly. It’s an incredibly paranoid and bloodthirsty society, which explains Zan’s behaviour.

But the thing nobody knows is that the mind-links they can all be controlled by the holy council and in this case, the head of the council is Larek.

I know I can’t tell them all this directly. I can’t reveal the truth to them so openly because they won’t be able to handle it. And no, I’m not talking about the royal spawn, I’m talking about the four humans who have for worse tied their fates to these three.

Serena thinks I am heartless. And I am. I don’t hide the truth about myself. But just this once, I want these four to walk away without losing, with that objective in mind I tell them the edited sad history of their lives.


Liz POV

“The anti-royalists attacked the castle and killed everyone there except for the four of you. And the only reason you managed to escape was because of the holy council. They agreed unanimously that the future king and his family should be sent to safety until he could come back and bring them back to power. The only reason that you have lasted here so long, that you’ve been allowed to live, is because the revolutionary government knew that none of you would be coming back to Antar. It was only when you started becoming nosy that they decided to take care of you all. Permanently.”

Stunned by his revelations, I stared at him in dismay. This was just unbelievable. It made a lie of everything that we had heard in the past year and a half. Poor Isabelle and Michael, everything that they had believed about themselves, all the answers that they had were a lie. There was no glorious royal past it was all tainted with blood and betrayal. There was no family. It was all a convenient fiction.

They had all been brutally played.

“She wasn’t my mother?” Isabelle whimpered, reeling from the shock.

“No, she was the head of the council. The whole message was crap. You were all sent down here with big target signs posted on your foreheads.”

“But, why?” she cried softly, wiping away the tears rolling down her face.

“Power,” Cal replied looking tired for the first time. “The council wanted you to go back so that they could come into power. They wanted to rule through you. The pushed the whole destiny crap on you because they wanted to open the mind-links between you. You were all pawns in a really messy political struggle. Ser and I believe that Max’s mind link is active since he and Tess have fuc…been together, so he’s been acting crazy.”

“It isn’t all him then, right?” Isabelle spoke struggling to her feet. Her desire to believe in her brother was just heartbreaking. I wanted to shut my ears against the obscene hope in her voice.

Cal winced. “Part of it is the mind-link but the rest, that’s all him kiddo. You train a monster for centuries and when he comes out, he’s ready to play. He is what he is, by choice and by training.”

“No, I don’t believe it. Oh God, I think I’m going to be sick,” and with that Isabelle ran towards the mouth of the cave, hand pressed to her mouth.

“Maria,” I whispered, nudging my shell-shocked friend.

“Yeah, ok,” she scrambled after Isabelle just as the sounds of violent retching reached us.

“Parker, how you holding up?” Sean said gingerly touching my shoulder. I recoiled.

Embarrassed by my reaction, I nodded apologetically before asking Cal, “The council podded them?”

He nodded, lighting another cigar, but keeping his gaze firmly trained on me.

I walked from one end of the cave to the other, wrestling with my thoughts. “The royalty on Antar were despots and they enslaved an entire planet, which means the revolution was a popular one?”

“Yes.”

“The skins are actually anti-royalists and are part of the new government’s army? They attacked because Max, Isabelle and Michael were digging into their past and were thinking of going back?”

“Yes.”

“Who are Nicholas and Khivar then? And what about Tess and Nacedo?” I asked again retracing my steps across the cave.

“Nicholas’s real name is Nikkei, he and his skins are fighting their own war. They want to come into power, and destroy both the current government and the holy council who pose a threat to their plans. Khivar is their chief.”

“They are trying to pit the government and the council against each other, while killing off the royals,” Sean remarked thoughtfully a note of admiration in his voice. “Well, it’s a great strategy.”

“Yeah,” Cal agreed, “but Ava and Nacedo beat them at their own game.”

“How do you mean?” Maria asked from behind me as she entered supporting a pale Isabelle.

“Ava and Nacedo are working for both the council and Khivar. They told the council that Tess, as you know her, would push the destiny message and make the four of you desire each other,”

“The dreams,” Isabelle gasped.

Ignoring her interruption, Cal continued, “If she could get Michael and Isabelle to have sex while she paired up with Max that would be the perfect situation, but since you two didn’t she just focused on Max. Besides, he’s powerful enough to compensate for you two now. Once that step was complete the mind-link would be open and the Council with Tess as their representative would be back in power. But at the same time, she and Khivar agreed that once the royals were in her control she would bring your powers to him. And then both of them could defeat the council and rule together.”

“Either way she wins,” Sean commented.

“But the skins attacked us and Nicholas was there,” Maria cried.

“It was a diversion,” Sean spoke up before any of us could respond. “By attacking you lot he focused the council’s attention on the humans. They were the one’s responsible for Tess’ whole mind-warps and destiny book shit.”

“And Future Max,” Cal said gently looking at me.
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Anatomy of a Sentence 16 (B) End (15/4)

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Glad to see that you all are still enjoying the story. This part will provide a few more answers...but not as many as you'd like! :D

Umm, Part 16 is the conclusion and it was actually divided in A and B but since I don't feel too well, there's going to be a part C as well. C will be the final and definitive ending - I promise. :rolleye


16 (B)


Maria POV

“It was a diversion,” Sean spoke up before any of us could respond. ‘By attacking you lot he focused the council’s attention on the humans. They were the one’s responsible for Tess’ mind-warps and destiny book shit.”

“And Future Max,” Cal said gently looking at Liz.

She was stunned into silence. Speechless. Her face was completely blank and she was so pale. It was if her face was drained of blood. White underneath her tan – the description I had always read in books but never understood swam though my head. All of a sudden, I knew what they meant.

Liz opened her mouth to speak, but it just flapped open and shut. There were no words, no sound. Struggling against the pressure in my chest, I asked Cal, “What do you mean by that?”

He sighed deeply.

“No, no, don’t sigh. That isn’t the answer to my question. I want to know what you meant! What the hell are you trying to say – that the council bastards fucked with Liz’s head? Is that what you are saying? Or that it was a shape-shifter? What the HELL do you mean by that?”

“He was real,” Liz gasped, her broken voice scraping against the rough cave walls. “He was real. I saw him. He was there. He knew things. I checked, and he knew everything.”

“It wasn’t real…”

“NO!” Liz screamed her face flushed with anger heedless of the tears streaming down her face. “I don’t believe it. I did everything…”

“Liz,” I began.

“I did everything he asked,” she gasped scrabbling for my hands. Her eyes desperately focusing on mine, “Everything, Ria. We were married at 19 in Vegas…”

“What are you talking about, Liz?” Isabelle asked her voice wavering. “Cal? Sean?”

“I was married to him. We were happy, Ria. Nothing came between us until the end of the world. He promised, Ria. He promised…” she wailed, her voice breaking, shattering under the strength of her emotions.

“It’s my fault all of it. I did it. I killed Alex and…Kyle. Oh God! Oh God! I can’t breathe. I gave them to her. I gave everything to her. It was all my fault, all of it. Oh God!”

“Liz,” I cried out again. “LIZ!” but she wasn’t listening. She kept muttering hysterically, her face splotchy and red. It was horrible. Cal looked ashamed, served him right the maggot! Sean looked away uncomfortably while Isabelle just looked sick. But none of them did anything to calm her down. They’d look at me then look at her. Look at me then look at her. It was just crazy.

Taking a deep breath, I moved to face Liz, as she rocked back and forth. I had never seen her do distraught so abandoned to her grief and guilt that she had lost all sense of herself. It was one of the most painful sights of my life and at that point I wanted to yank Tess’ entrails through her nose. Fucking Psycho Bitch.

“Liz, I love you and I’m sorry. But I have to do this,” I said softly before swinging my hand back and…

SMACK!

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Alex POV

Oh jeez, I feel like crap.

Hmm, may be not.

Crap really doesn’t capture my state of being. Let’s think about this. Oh, I know – I feel like shit! Nope, that doesn’t quite cover it either. I think I’m gonna go with pulverized. Yeah, that is most definitely the winner.

I’m exaggerating you say. Welllll, let me see. How about I lay down the facts in front of you and then see what you think. Although to tell you the truth, I don’t really care what you think but I’m gonna say it anyway because for so long it’s been me in my head and well, in my head I ramble. Isolation tends to do that to ya, what can I say? But where was I?

Oh yes, I Alexander Charles Whitman, feel pulverized. I am probably the only living being, actually human cause there are lot of ‘beings floating around, anyway, I am probably the only living being who knows what it feels like to go through a meat grinder. I feel like a slab of beef does after it has been chopped into little bitty pieces then stuffed in to a small malevolent machine that grinds it into a fine pulp before being pounded into a small round patty.

Yeah, all of a sudden I feel very sympathetic towards beef burgers and hot dogs. Ugh. I will definitely not be eating one of those again. Nope, you are looking at one Alex Whitman recent mind-warp victim and newly turned vegetarian. Now, if I could only stop dreaming of Michael’s face and some woman who looks really really familiar. Why I don’t know?

But see, strangely familiar woman aside, why the hell am I dreaming of Michael? I mean, why can’t I dream of beautiful Isabelle, or quirky Maria or my precious Lizzie? Yeah, why do I gotta dream of the brute? What is going on? I feel quite different all of a sudden. This isn’t like the usual floating nope there isn’t something quite right here. I know I’m dead, I mean, I can feel that I’m dead. I’m just a sad spirit hovering around the gang ‘cause I’m desperate to not leave my girls alone. While I’m not a big believer in the metaphysical I know for a fact that spirits can’t feel pain.

Ouch! Hey, hey! Michael, stop it! Shit, that hurts. This isn’t right. I shouldn’t be hurting after death.
“Did you hear that?” A gruff voice sounded somewhere to my left.

Yeah, that was most definitely not me. I couldn’t sound gruff if I even wanted to. But aside from that, why would I ask myself if I heard anything? That’s just crazy! I may be dead but I sure as hell ain’t crazy.

“Alex!”

Who me?

“Alex! Wake up!”

What the hell is wrong with these people, I’m dead. Dead people cannot wake up. Wait, hang on! “People” since when…oh, holy…shit! All of a sudden I feel a sudden surge of energy and it has a distinctly Czech feel to it. The pain that had receded roars to the front again and involuntarily I yelp,

“Ow, hurts!”

“Alex – Man is that you?”

Wincing against the 70 dwarf orchestra currently banging cymbals in my head, I try to open my leaden eyes. Every move, every wince, every flutter feels like I am fighting against some great insurmountable force that is pitting its will against mine. I tremble with effort. My jelly muscles scream in pain and spasm.

“Alex!” This time I know its Michael because no one else would shake me so roughly.

“Shake me one more time and I’ll throw up on you!” I tried to threaten him but it sounded more like whimper.

“Go for it, Whitman. I’ve done it once already!” another familiar voice called out.

“Valenti?” I croaked, desperately trying to open my eyes. If this was a dream then it wasn’t very funny.

“Alex,” the soft female began again, “the light will heal your eyes. It’s the last stage in the process. Just do it once, I promise you’ll feel better.”

My ass she knew how badly it hurt. While I was really grateful to be alive, I was fuzzy on the details and trusting yet another distinctly Czech female was not high on my priority list.

“How do I know I can trust you?”

There was silence, even Kyle didn’t say anything.

“I do,” Michael said gravely and then he sealed my fate. “Liz trusts her.”

There was nothing else to say, except for, “Ok.”

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Michael POV

I never realized how much energy healing took and even more so when it was psychic damage rather than physical. I’ve never fought a war. I’ve never battled with and enemy face to face but if this is what it feels like then we are fucked.

The resistance in their minds was incredible. It was like the black weight of the universe bearing down on Serena and me. I could feel the pressure in my lungs, as it got harder to breathe. I could feel it in my back, where my muscles ached. In short, I felt the way I did after Hank’s worst beatings. But for the memory alone, for making me feel helpless and afraid, I’m gonna make Tess pay. And when she goes done, I’ll make sure that the entire ship goes down with her.
Khivar.

Tess.

Nicholas.

The Holy Council.

They are all going down. For too long we’ve reacted to the war, even when it came to us, even when it attacked us in our own homes we failed to respond. But no more. The time has come to fight back and for once, I have a plan on how to get it done. The price for it, like all other important things is high, but if it means seeing a laughing and happy Maria, if it means visiting Liz in Harvard, if it means listening to Alex’s music, and Kyle’s Buddha jokes – then it is well worth it.

This time, we are going to win because the price of losing is too high.

And I’m not ready to lay down and give it up all yet. Not just yet.

As we stagger out of the Granolith Chamber, Alex leaning on me and Serena supporting Kyle, I hear Isabelle say:

“What are we going to do?”

Looking around at the unwilling and unwitting victims and recruits of our war – my resolve hardens.

“We are going to fry them all from the inside out.”

Turning to Serena, I say, “and the Granolith is going to do it for us!”
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Conclusion (16 C)

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Well guys here it is...The End. It's been a bumpy ride and I think I've resolved some of my issues :shock: but we'll just have to see. I'm going to shamelessly promote For The Roses on this thread and ask that you try the new one called - either Second Chances or Another You. :lol:

As always, feedback, criticism and rotten tomatoes are more than welcome. Please don't hate me - :wink:

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Michael POV

“Where do you think he is?” I asked, Isabelle after we had looked for him at the Evans place, school, the Crashdown and the quarry.

“I don’t know. I can’t think,” she replied tiredly. I couldn’t remember the last time she looked this frazzled. Even when she’d found out about Vilondra and smoked the skins, she’d been self-possessed and composed. But right now, she looked like she’d been through a war. I suppose we all had.

“How you doing?” I asked, rubbing my neck.

“How the HELL do you think, Michael?” She asked acerbically.

“Everything about my past life has been a lie. My former sister-in-law is trying to kill us all. My brother has turned into a psychopath. I’m actively conspiring to commit mass scale murder and the end of the world might be today while I lose my alien powers. How the FUCK do you think I’m feeling!”

Damnit, try to be a nice guy and you get your head bitten off. Teach me not to be Mr. sensitive-nice-guy anymore, that was Max…but Max isn’t here anymore is he – my sardonic inner voice whispered. Max tried to kill his own sister. Max has gone round the bend. It was all up to me. And the thought scared me shitless.

Forget a mile I’d never even walked an inch in Max’s shoes. And I didn’t want to sart now. For all my bitching and groaning being a second gave me room to make mistakes and to go off half-cocked. I didn’t have to think in terms of worlds ending and friends dying. But now, that was all that occupied my mind. Shit, I didn’t know how Maxwell managed it but if…no, when…when he came back – I was just gonna try to be a better...friend. Brother.

Hopefully, Max would never have to be a leader again. I would never be a second. And we'd be able to live our lives.

Damn right, he was coming back. I absolutely refused to live like this. Besides, I needed him to deal with Iz. If she was this scary when she was afraid for her life, I’d hate to receive her verbal whip-lashing under ordinary, day to day conditions. I knew she was afraid that my plan would backfire. That when we channeled all our powers into the granolith, it might not burn Tess' mind, it might not destroy the mental links she had with Khivaar and the Council...it might not do anything at all.

Except drain us of our powers.

Make us human.

Normal.

Not alien.

Leave us unprotected.

Vulnerable.

Dead.

Frantically trying to change the direction of my morbid thoughts and cheer Isabelle up, I said, “Alex looks better,” hoping Whitman’s trembling recovery would improve her mood.

“Yeah,” and then she smiled. It lit up her entire face. Traces of tension disappeared from her face when she thought of Alex. I’d paint her like this, when all of this was over. Half human half star – the warmth of her love for Alex softening the cold unearthly beauty.

“Michael?”

“Yeah?”

“We should go to the observatory.”

“Why?” I asked puzzled.

“Max used to say it’s where he went to prove that our alien sides couldn’t be cold or ugly. Since we came from the stars, and the stars are beautiful,” her voice trembled slightly before forging ahead, “we should go to the observatory.”

Silently, we both sat back in Jetta. Thoughts of Max filling our heads. We needed him back, because without him we weren’t complete. We weren’t a family any more.

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Tess POV

“Max, you were right?” Isabelle said hysterically, her shrill voice breaking the mood.

Damnit! It had taken long enough to get Max here I thought furiously letting his lower lip ease out from my mouth. He groaned at the loss of contact and pressed my head down to him again. Succumbing to the temptation of that full lush mouth, I leaned in again. Liz Parker had been good for something, as much as it galled me to admit it. She’d definitely made him a champion kisser. But, since I was going too benefit from her efforts, I suppose I could be charitable, as Max languidly ate at my mouth. Yum.

“MAXWELL!”

Growling, Max put me away from him. His eyes darkened to a swirling black. He looked pretty pissed to me, but then we had been interrupted so it was justified. Smirking at Michael, I scraped my nails down Max’s back and pressed an open-mouthed kiss to his shoulder. His body grew tauter if possible, while Isabelle paled. Whatever, princess. Not my fault lover-boy’s road-kill.

“What do you want Michael?”

I hid my grin. Ooh, testy, testy, testy.

“You were right Max,” Isabelle deflected him.

Well, the ice sculpture speaks! Hell must have frozen over since Isabelle was admitting that she was wrong. Not bothering to pull on my shirt, well, what there was left of it. Max had been pretty definite by wanting it off. Just listen to my heart flutter, I do love me a forceful man – alien!

“About?” he asked abruptly, his body hot underneath my stroking fingers.

“I don’t belong here Max. We don’t belong here.”
“It’s time to go home, Max.” Michael added his two bits.

I-n-t-e-r-e-s-t-i-n-g! Now what did all this mean? I knew what Max had done earlier that day. He’d scared the crap out of Isabelle. And now, here they both were wanting to go home, tails between there legs. I wouldn’t have to get pregnant after all. Now don’t get me wrong. I really want to fuck Max. I mean, look at him. Who wouldn’t? I just don’t want to do it at the expense of my very nice body.

I guess this means, Khivaar’s out and the Council is in. I don’t get pregnant, I bring the royals home and I still get to be queen. Sounds like a pretty sweet deal to me. But, Nasedo didn’t raise an idiot.

“Why?” I said standing up, pulling Max with me. I’d be able to tell if they were being less then sincere. They hadn’t become adept at hiding their emotions just yet. Any signs of disgust, disdain or hesitation and well…it wouldn’t be pretty for them.

“Alex is dead,” Isabelle whimpered. Ugh, blow it out your ass princess.

“I can’t stay here anymore. And I want my mother, my real mother.”

Hmm, maybe. She would be shallow like that. Ok, approved. Let’s take a look at the other one.

“Look, I’ve been telling you lot that we don’t belong here for a while now. I mean, this isn’t our home. We don’t have families here. Hell, I don’t want to live on a rock that gives me Hank for a father and social security checks for food,” Michael spat out.

I tapped my lips, while Max waited for my decision. It would be mine – after all I was his queen. Yay, for me! Michael sounded a little too convincing. The answer came too quickly. It was a little too pat. Besides what about his twinky girlfriend?

“What about Maria?” Max asked, reforming my shirt, before sliding it over my head.

I guess play-time was over. Oh well, there would be many more opportunities when we got back. He’d make a very pretty pet.

“Broke up with me,” Michael scowled, looking over our heads. “Said, she needed to focus on her music.”

Now that did sound like Maria. To tell you the truth, I was surprised at how long it lasted, their relationship I mean. I’d have fried his annoying ass a long time ago. All in good time, I thought to myself.

Max turned to me and raised an eyebrow. I smiled at him sweetly and couldn’t resist a quick swipe of my tongue across his mouth.

“Looks like we’re going home, baby.”

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Serena POV

“Cal will take care of Tess. I’ll power up the granolith, but one or all of you will have to take care of Max,” I said breaking their reunion.

They were all doing so well. So brave and ferociously protective of each other. They had been through so much, and while it hadn’t broken them they had come out bruised and dented on the other side. It shamed me to think that Cal and I were as responsible for that as Tess.

Instinctively, my eyes swung to Liz. Even now, when I thought of Max I thought of her. The two were forever entwined in my mind. Sensing my speculative gaze she straight at me. Her brown eyes filled with pain but also determination.

Her head inclined slightly before turning to meet her friends. I would never know what it meant to be Liz Parker, and for the first time in my life I knew that I would never be brave or determined enough to find out. Accepting, her agreement, I turned towards the granolith but Maria’s screech stopped me.

“Hell, no! Are you out of your mind, Lizzie?”

“Maria, it is the only thing to do,” she replied patiently. Gravel studding her whisky voice.

“Liz, you can’t. It’s too much,” Alex denounced vehemently, as he leaned against the cave walls weakly.

“I won’t let you,” Kyle announced stubbornly. His face was pale and bloodless.

“My mind is made up, and none of you can stop me. I’m the only one who can do this. So just stop, ok?” She shouted, before walking away swiftly to the back of the cave.

“But,” Maria started to go after her only to have Sean clamp a hand on her arm.

“Let her go, Mar.”

“Like, hell I will. She’s done so much for these bastards and they just keep asking for more and more. When is it ever going to be enough, huh?” she said mutinously, glaring at me.

I was grateful that Maria didn’t have alien powers otherwise I would have been a pile of smoking dust.

“I’ll take care of it,” Sean replied ignoring her outburst.

Silence. The ticking of an invisible clock announced the others arrival. I rushed to the granolith as the rest took their position.

“Parker won’t have to do a thing,” Sean’s voice swirled in the silence, before settling down with the dust and our leaden fear.

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Cal POV

“Finally, I couldn’t see a damn thing,” Isabelle said loudly, announcing their arrival.

“Max why don’t you go in first, then Michael, then Isabelle and I’ll come in at the end,” Tess’ nasal voice grated on my sensitive ears.

“Why?” Michael asked suspiciously.

“No reason,” she sing-songed.

Don’t push it, Michael, I glared at him furiously. It would make my life a lot simpler if she came in at the end.

“Let’s go Michael,” Max said his hand glowing in front of the pod-chamber. He walked in first, followed by Michael then Isabelle.

Before Tess could move forward, I loosened some rocks on the side. Their clatter echoed loudly in the desert night. She stopped and turned around. Her eyes gleaming in the dark like a cat.

Ava had been curious as well.

And curiosity killed the cat.

Something hissed near her foot, and she jumped right as a shower of sparks burst over her head. But instead of falling on the ground, or calling out in alarm, she floated suspended in mid-air. Her mouth opened on a soundless gasp. Her eyes remained open and unblinking.

The shower of sparks flickered over her body, like a swarm of locusts and grew brighter and brighter.

They fed off her power, one last time, before dissipating.

It was a tableau of death: the failed royal protector and the husk of the Antarian Queen.

Life flickered in the wormhole in her mind. She would burn in soundless pain from the inside out flaming across distant galaxies.

Soundlessly, I carried her through the rock and waited for the gathering.

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Alex POV

Maria, Kyle and I held Liz down, while Isabelle and Michael duked it out with Max.

Deciding to put our faith in Sean, we tackled Liz just as she was about to approach Max. He looked completely unhinged. I have never, had never been afraid of Max Evans in my entire life, until that moment. The others must have felt the same way, because before Liz could move and expose herself, we pulled her down. Our combined force was enough to startle and delay her. Maria sat on her feet, Kyle held her arms, and I clamped my hand on her mouth.

An angry and furious Liz I could deal with but not a dead Liz.

Arcs of blazing blue light shot out of Max’s hands, pinning Michael and Isabelle to the wall. They didn’t even get the chance to react or retaliate his fire had been so swift.

“Where is Tess?” He growled, his hands glowing brighter.

Chests heaving soundlessly, Michael and Isabelle kicked at the cords of energy pining them to the cave ceiling. The more they struggled against it the tighter it became until their efforts grew slower and slower.

Where the hell was Sean, I thought desperately trying to catch sight of him, when I saw Max stumbling.

“Shit!”

It was all over in the next twenty-seconds. Sean brought down the rock on Max’s head one more time viciously. Max crumpled. The energy cords retracted. Isabelle and Michael fell from the roof. Maria and I screamed closing our eyes before they smashed to death on the rocky floor.

A second went by.

Ten seconds.

Fifteen seconds went by without sound.

We peered through our hands carefully, only to see a grinning Sean, an impressed Michael and a furious Isabelle.

“Did you have to hit him with a rock?” She shouted kneeling beside an unconscious Max, healing the wound at the back of his head but making sure he remained out of commission.

“Would you like to be choked to death by your brother or fall from the ceiling and die?” Sean shot back unruffled.

“How did you do that, man?” Michael asked.

“Yeah, we were thinking, umm, thud and dead,” I said limping out of our hiding spot, Maria and Liz in tow.

“I pulled air molecules together to create an air cushion to break your fall.”

He must have caught Michael’s speculative look because he added, “It takes a lot of practice. If you excite the atoms too much they can catch fire or simply explode. It’s very risky and takes a lot of practice. Besides you don’t need to know…anymore.”

“Right.”

“It’s time,” Serena said.

I held Liz’s hand in one, and reached out to Maria, only to have Isabelle hold it.

“After this is over,” she murmured, “can we talk, please?”

Struck mute by her proximity and the events in my life so far, I just nodded. If we came out on the other side, I’d do nothing but listen to her talk.

“Put one hand on the granolith and grab your partner’s arm with the other,” Serena instructed, facing the Ganolith both her hands aligned with Tess’, who was inside. Her silence and stillness didn’t reduce the threat she posed. If anything, our moods grew somber and darker than before.

I looked around at all of us, each standing in position. We were LizAlexIsabelleKyleMariaMichaelCal.

Max lay near the base of the Granolith. Cal’s leg was touching Max, whose arm was touching Serena whose hands were aligned with Tess’ palms.

“I want you to focus your energy and emotions on the granolith. All of you must focus on this spot where my hands meet Tess. Dredge up every single memory you have of her, and just push it out. Push it at me. Push it at her. Reject her from your system. Keep your eyes open at all times.”

“Ok?”

Silently we all nodded. The time was now.

“Repeat after me: She is not me.”

She is not me – I said aloud. I hated her. I wanted her to die. I wanted her to burn.

Burn.

Arcs of electricity erupted from the granolith and exploded out of Serena. It grew progressively brighter.

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Liz POV

The light grew brighter and brighter. It grew harder to keep my eyes open. I could sense the others struggling in the same way. The blue and silver flames spread over Serena’s body and lit up everyone in the circle. It swirled over, through, under and between all of us.

We were a human funeral pyre.

A column of light leapt from the top of the granolith, tearing through the chamber roof. Locked in place by the network of lights and the glittering bonds that tied us together, my eyes widened as chunks of rock began to fall from the ceiling.

I heard Cal jubilantly heralding a brave new dawn.

And then my world exploded.
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