Coco Puffs (UC/AU,Z/L,YTEEN/ADULT) Ch 13 - 10/05/04 [WIP]

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channi bella
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chapter 8 (i think :? )

I ran in my bare feet I just had to get away the situation was suffocating me so I just ran. Away from the confrontation away form the anger and hurt. Maria the one friend I thought I had who betrayed me used me. She is here in town and Mickey how could he go back to her. I didn’t get far before I fell down I m exhausted and scared and angry. It all tripped me up in the end. So when Zan s arms surrounded picked me up and carried me away I didn’t question it I didn’t protest I just melted in his warmth.


That’s all I remember, next all I felt was home. Blanketed with zan in my bed the comfort of my quilt with the cover my grandma made and this was home. I didn’t want to think of everything else the fact I left everything up and out there. What did Zan think of me? Did he think I was so needy and pathetic?
“What ya thinking about?”
I jumped a little his voice loud in my empty little room were I think he is the first guy to be in my room let alone my bed. I can’t help but blush at the fact I’m in bed with him. I just shake my head
“Nothing? Well then kitten I have a question that’s been bugging me since last night?”
And I don’t want to hear it. Last night is something I don’t want to relive. I know I have to but not right now not yet please.

“Why does my bro call you blue?”

After everything that happened I wasn’t expecting that. I turn from where Zan is spooning behind me and lay on my back he still wrapped his arms around me and on his side, but now I can see him.

"well?? Umm he always sorta of called me that the first day he worked at my dad’s café and I asked him because it was getting on my nerves.”
He just looked at me with hooded eyes and his little smirk
“And…..”
“Well he told me because of our uniforms we had to wear he could see my knickers every time I bent over and they happened to be blue”
“What??? Your messin wit me??”
“Nope I didn’t even realize you could see my knickers?”
“Trust Michael my brother my twin to see your panties before I have”
I just giggle because I can’t help it, he has the inconceivable look and he is completely serious. So I look right at him and speak softly and huskily
“My poor baby …..Well do you want to see them?”


His smile drops and then his eyes light up like Christmas morning. And I just looked him up and down and he actually licked his lips. I slid out of bed my eyes never leaving his. I still have my jeans on and I hook my finger over the waistband look at him seductively I bite my lip, his mouth his hanging open and his eyes never leave my body. I move closer to the bed lean over and open my drawer get out some clean panties and throw them in his face.
He looks at me bemused by the whole thing me still standing up laughing at him and him lying down with a pair of pink panties in his hands. And he laughs
“Why my naughty little kitten”
And before I realize he has jumped out of my bed and chased me around the room. It wasn’t long before he caught me the room is small and well I wanted him to have me.



short part i know sorry its been a hell of a week -ex boyfriend issues but
u guys dont want to hear about that! thankyou too Zor for your help im an idiot of course changing the title would be that easy but thanks anyway :)
more soon thankies to everyone reading and feedback is more then appreciated it is loved and craved for
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chapter 9

After our little runs around and some kisses and cuddles somehow we ended up asleep again. The exhaustion of the night before just hit us. But right now my jeans are to tight and digging into my legs- that’s not the only thing digging in to my leg either…….
I don’t want to move even though I’m hot! My clothes are uncomfortable, I have work in 20 min and I really have to pee... But Zan is in my bed yummy Zan who’s sweet and sexy and his hairs all messed up and his shirts ridden up and and warm arms around me.


Damn it the bladder wins out. Grabbing some clothes and sneaking out the room I run straight into Ava who looks through my open door to a sleeping Zan. She looks pissed.
“Didn’t take you long?”
“Ava Nothing happened”
She looks at me unconvinced
“Oh yeah right Liz Beth whatever your name is you had Zan Evans in your bed and you didn’t hit it!”
“Nothing was hit no one hit anything we just slept”
I don’t even know what I’m saying? I don’t understand…
“Just get dressed we start in 15 we walk and talk”
Confused but not wanting to loose my job I jump in the shower fast and throw on my work gear which happens just to be black top and black pants. Grabbing my bag I find an impatient Ava on the street waiting for me. She looks sooo pissed.


“Have you changed your mind? Because it’s a little unfair when you said it was ok for me and Zan to be together and then let me have him for a while and now say no! Its teasing and I”
“Whoa Liz take a breath I haven’t changed my mind so relax come on walk we start in 8 minutes”
We start to walk I’m a little confused but try and busy myself with trying to find a hair tie in my bag of crap. What the hell have I got in here nothing of use a pen that doesn’t work , receipts and tickets some wrappers my journal, phone, lipstick- even though I don’t wear lipstick ohhh a candy cane- wonder how long that’s been in there??? Damn it all I want is elastic to tie my hair and I have everything but, I have even got a spoon…..


A huh triumph a little hair tie thingy its got a little bit of crumbs some hair sticking out of it but hey it will do the job. Unless when I go to use it snaps
“Son of a bitch little piece of crap!!!”
“Whoa easy tiger here got one on me wrist”
I take it looking at her sheepishly
“Thanks”
“consider it a peace offerin look ok I was a little pissed when I saw Zanny in your bed I can handle it just need some getting used to is all…”
I just tie my hair in a big not on the top of my head and hug my best friend
“Besides I needs ya to talking to me when ya tell me all about Mickey working!!! That in itself is a miracle…”
“He was a hard worker yes he was rude gross and never did what he was told but what was I saying?”


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When we got home later Zan was still there making pancakes in the kitchen in nothing but a towel. Ok its sooooooooooooo good to be home. He turns around I can see his hair is still wet and dripping on his bare shoulders. I can see his tattoo that one that wraps around his arm and goes aroung his shoulder mmmmmmmmm.
“Honey your home”
He comes over to hug me and I can feel the heat from his body smell the shampoo in his hair ohh boy I need to be alone with him right now!!!!
“So cornball I’m out, Whitman’s tonight?”
“Sure pink gotta show off my girl now”
“Later”
The door slams, it used to annoy me when Ava slammed the door but now it’s the sound of me getting some Zan time. I just can’t seem to stop holding his warm body. Feeling his muscles in his back.


“Baby we got to stop cause I’m in a towel and it s getting dangerous”
Ok way to make me blush
“Kitten don’t blush like that baby cause you know hows hot you are when ya do that!!! Ahhh ya killin me”
I just smile to scared to say anything this is nice Zan half naked in my kitchen cooking and telling me how hot I make him. Still touching his heated skin his hand on my overheated face the smell of smoke…. Wait smoke?????
“Shit Zan the pancakes”
“Oh fu…”
And it’s a scramble grabbing the fry pan and it’s a lot of cursing and a soggy burnt pancake in the overflowing sink. I can’t help it he is standing there it complete shock staring at the sink in a towel. I giggle and I can’t stop soon I’m on the floor holding my sides because it’s too funny.
“You think this is funny huh? Do ya kitty?”
“Yes”
And he kneels on the ground next to me
“I’m glad I’m so hilarious”
He smiles one of those blinding smiles with his perfect teeth and the hint of pink tongue and his tongue stud calling me like some forbidden desire. But that honest smile makes me love him even more.
“I want to tell you about my dad and Maria”



Sorry its been so long guys I have been a bad bad channi! :( But I need to do some stuff but i promise triple promise i will update more and more.
and yes this is a no aliens and no Max thing but its all Zan baby
thanksies for all the feedback
Love Channi
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hey heres the new part im pwomised


chapter 10

Ok all I can hear is the water running over the smoshed up burnt pancakes the smell of smoke still lingers and I can hear Zan’s breathing- answer me already!!!! oh his mouth is open he is going to say something......
“Ok”
“Ok but um first we have to get off the floor and you have to puts some clothes on and while you do that I will fix the sink yea ok”
“Or you could take a breath babe and relax don’t worry about the sink or my towel just let it out”


Damn it Zan now you said it all I can think about is that damn towel and what’s underneath it. Damn it to all hell it’s not like the sight of your chest and strong inked arms is bad enough but did ya have to mention the towel crap crap crap
“No um Zan the towel thing is distracting and this is a lot of crap to say and I can’t say it with you all half naked”
I have my eyes closed because I think the glare from my blushing may blind me. I open them to a smirking Zan. He is just doing the “hey how you doin?” look. Smug bastard. He runs his fingers through his hair flex his chest at me comically
“You think I’m sexy you want to touch me I distract you with my bod”
“Shut up”
“ohhhh feisty I like feisty”
“Ok Zan I’m being serious and god your gonna have fun with the whole thing I’m about to say!”


“Babe I’m sorry come on tells me….”
“Well Maria was my first real friend, well I did have Kyle but that’s another story he stopped talking to me when he got his jock status anyway you know the whole sleeping with my father thing”
“Yeah the whole drew Berrymore movie thing- poison ivy”
“Yeah it’s funny you should say that! Have you seen that movie? When she befriends the loser girl and you know how she is sleeping with the father and sorta leads on the girl……”
“Babe what are you saying?”
“ok there was a guy Kyle he was my friend for like forever we started sorta dating and then he made the football team so he kind of dumped me… it was hard it was always us and well I gave up on guys - then Maria came along and well….”


I didn’t have to finish my sentence before he knew what I ment and once again he was wearing that “hey how you doin?” grin- men!!!!






a small tease to tantalise those tatebuds keep reading luv ya!!!!!!
channi
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Zan's girl- im sorry to leave ya like that hope this makes it better and your right half nekkid Zan is all a girl needs to pass time
abbs007- hi :D glad you like my little story here is more


chapter 11

“Wipe that grin of your face Zan I’m being serious! It was only a couple of kisses and well I was very confused heat broken and all that and and I can’t breathe”
“Ok babe relax ok take same deep breaths So there was some girl on girl action ok I can handle that…..”
“Zan”
“Hey let me finish like I said you and this chick together great especially if she is hot!!! But if she used you that aint right! No one hurts my girl”
That was the most sweetest thing augh I can’t help it its so pretty and he is in a towel still come on ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh im speechless


“Come on you’s go shower and make yourself look all sexy and I’ll go home change and we’s can got to Whitman’s and dance. Cause mmm I love to dance with you”
And he kisses me sweet and smoothly.
“Ok babes we have to stop cause I have to work and if ya keep touchin me like that well Alex gonna fire me”
“You working at the bar tonight?”
“yeahs helping out”
“Ok I will get dressed do you want me to meet you there?”
“Nah babe im a gentleman
He says while standing up and offering his hand to help me up
“I will pick you up”
And kisses my hand lightly goes to the bathroom and comes out with his clothes on and it’s a kiss and a see you in half an hour… shit gotta get dressed


Ok first things first shower wash off all the hamburger grease and milkshake smell. Then what to wear???? Ok ok ok I have to shave the legs I have a boyfriend now and well you never know??? So if im going to the trouble may as well wear a skirt. I’m thinking hot new denim mini that Ava bought me! Yeah the frayed edges work. Ok I think just a singlet to balance out the way to short mini skirt.


Ok showered shaved how’s my eyebrows going? mmmm ok a few strays but that’s easily fixed but my legs need some moisture stat. heels ready sexy red bra oh yeah so I’m thinking black top and some shadowy eyes yep. Ok skirt on ohhh damn this is short ok breathe girl you can do this. Leave heels to last minute don’t want to kill me calves. Ok got some time might put some curls through the hair.
I feel better this is good focusing on menial things and not obsessing over the Maria thing yes she did some horrible things but that was over a year ago. Zan is great and Ava is more friends then I ever thought plus there is Isabel damn phone


“Hello”
“Hi um Liz its Isabel you know Isabel Evans from the club?”
“Yeah hi Isabel what up?”
“Not much Zan called and said you were coming in early to Whitman’s when he and Alex set up”
“Yeah I’m just getting ready now”
“Oh thank god your gonna be here it’s just me and Al and he is busy with all the set up and no one gets here before 10”
“Yeah Zan’s picking me up in a minute so I will be there soon”
“Ok se ya soon I will get Justin to make us up some fancy cocktail”
“Sounds great oh I think I hear the door so I will see you in a sec”
“Ok bye”
“Bye”


ok opening the door I went absolutely ga ga over my boyfriend standing in his tight in all the right spots light denim jeans and that olive green t shirt that’s oh to tight and compliments his skin….
“Babe I said get sexy not down right seductive”
And he is picking me up and blowing over exaggerated kisses on my neck.
“zan stop I have to get my shoes plus Isabel is expecting us”
“But babe you look delicious and taste mmmmm”
“Zan you have to go to work”
“You spoil all my fun”


We are actually on our way after Zan little sulk he has his arms around me walking down the street the sun is still up its around 6.
“I like that color on you it bring out your eyes”
“Well thanks sweets and I like the skirt on you it brings out those shapely thighs”
“Zan”
“What???? I like it and I although I like you in red- black is also sooo beautiful on you”
“Well I am wearing red”
“What”
“Just no where you can see …..”
And I walk in front of him through the doors of Whitman’s and straight to Isabel I give her a kiss on the cheek and she hands me a pretty green drink with some pineapple on the side.
“Hey Liz can I ask what you said to Zan? Cause the boy is standing by the door with his mouth hanging open ?”
“Nothing much, just talking clothes!”





ahhhhhh new part and its all happening! this last part actually sorta happened. i was upset and Beau the guy my Zan is based on treid to make me pancakes burnt them and took me out and we flirted outrageously ahhhhhhhhhh :D :D :D
ahh life stinks he is still with my roomate and i dont eat of other peoples plates soooo i live in this fantasy land :cry:
new part soon luv ya Channi
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Oh my god I was talking to beau (the hot guy im infatuated with) last night and he told me he is thinking of changing his name back…. I was like what’s your name and why did ya change it? He told me that when his cuz came to live with him when he was 12 they decided to change because they both had the name Alex as in Alexander I was like ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
He said he was sick of Beau and always hated it so he wants to go back! I told him soo he won’t get confused with his cuz he should call himself Xan and he likes it!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG :shocked!: :shocked!: :shocked!:
I get to call him Zan yummmmmy but he is still with my roommate and I would never ever jeopardize that but is name is Zan now eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee- ok sorry to bore you with that now on to the fanfic
sorry its been so long new part and posting regurarly from now on
besides i have no life but my fanfic soo here it is enjoy



chapter 12

Isabel and I chatted while the men worked people have started to drift in and Isabel and Alex have gone off to play hosts. Zan grabs my hand and we make our way upstairs to the comfy couch from the other night.
“Tell me about you Zan I don’t really know you?”
“My name is Alexander ‘sex god’ Evans I’m 3 minutes younger then my twin Michael ‘saw my girls panties first’ Evans then we have Isabel ‘queen’ Evans our baby sister. Born and raised in New York. Me olds still together, my dad is a hard son of a bitch and a lawyer very prestigious one and me ma sometimes helps out at the office but mostly she is just mum.”
My bro is my best friend and he likes to travel take on small towns and basically see how many people he can annoy. But other then that he is the best cook.
Isabel is the ultimate girl and likes thing her way and me I’m more of the laid back one who likes to get his hands dirty under a car.
Alex is our rich bastard friend who made some good investments in school and managed to make a good sum of cash for us all. We me and Bren and Isabel have shares in Whitman’s so its pretty cool. Plus I wouldn’t trust anyone but Al with my sister”


“He is a funny guy and sounds amazing”
“Hey I’m sitting right here”
“Don’t worry I like you”
He snuggles into my neck like a cat
“So are we a couple?”
“Babe we have something special right”
“Yeah I just wanted you to say it I guess”
I choose this moment to blush I have had this man in my bed granted we didn’t do anything but still and not 1 hour ago I was flirting with him about my underwear so why get shy now? Stupid me
“mmmm kitten you know what you do to me when you flush like that, I wonder how far it goes down?”
“Zan”
“Baby I look I’m not good with the emotion thing but me and you’s got something special”
“So it’s not just a get in my pants thing?”
“Grrr”
“Did you just growl?”
“Sorry got a visual about your panties little red ones right?”
“Zan I’m being completely serious I know I put you through a lot and you wouldn’t put all this effort just to have sex with me but still can you say it please”


He detaches himself of my neck sits up and takes my hand between his large ones
“Liz we’s got something special, that morning when you got up to see the sunrise I never seen anything more beautiful and wanted to see more- plus I caught ya checking out me chest!!! Dats why I never wore a shirt around yas”
I can see it in his face he is being completely honest and true plus truly pretentious
“I feel it when I see ya I mean I feel I really see ya! Whens I’m with other chicks I see right through them and to the next chick I wanna bang or another town I wanna see. But you I see you- like you make these lil noises in your sleep and yas the clumsiest person I know but you make it adorable you are shy but like to try anything- like me I’m just happy you wanted me”


I want to cry it’s the most sincere and beautiful thing but screw that!!!!!!
I think I shocked him when I straddled him I went to kiss him to fast and we ended up bumping heads
“Like I said clumsy but I forgot to mention sexy as hell”
And this time there were no head buts just passionate body shuddering over heated kisses
In one of our intervals of very desperate needs of oxygen I hear someone clearing there throat I slide of Zan’s lap a little embarrassed but keep my leg up on his for good measure. For a second I was worried about who it was but it was just Justin with drinks. He doesn’t look impressed and they are both doing that stare down thing again as he leaves
“What was that?”
“Nothing babe just letting him know his place? Your mine now”
I think some people would find it offensive but being Zans just excites me
“Well he will never flirt with me again that’s for sure”
“He flirted with you”
ohhhhh he looks pissed, he is looking straight ahead at Justin across the room- I tell ya if looks could kill


“I like this possessiveness on you its sexy”
That got his attention and it didn’t take long for us to be making out again until someone cleared there throat we stopped and looked up again.
Oh great Mickey and non other then poison ivy herself
Maria


more soon i pwomise thistime wid all my heart thanks for the feedback much apprecated i hope your all still reading :puppydogeyes: [/color]
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chapter 13

“Beth?”
“Maria…….hey Mickey”
a little wave and a little clinging to Zan. I wrap my arms around one of his large muscular one, I need him close I’m a little scared and possessive I want to show her what I got!
“ok if yous to have stopped swapping spit I’m heading to da bar yous guys want sumfin?”
“No thank you”
“Wes good Mickey aren’t ya gonna introduce me? Hi I’m Zan Michael’s baby bro”


mmmm my man is so sexy standing up and talking right to the shocked Maria I’m glad cause I cant seem to find my voice and the view of Zan’s ass right now isn’t helping me. He puts out his hand to shake and when Maria takes it without speaking it annoys the hell out of me!
I have no idea why I just didn’t want her touching Zan and smirking that way at my honey. Huh I thought Zan was possessive but I think I take the cake.
“ya want anything hun?
“Surprise me Rath”
There little display of affection sickened me not because I wanted Maria just because I cant stand her. Mickey is hot he could do so much better.
“umm im just going to the ladies”
she scurried of in her trashy leather skirt and barely there top it was gold with no back tramp


“mmmmmm so you and that hot thing had a ….. A hot thing?”
“You think she’s hot?”
“Um is this a bad boyfriend thing I just did?”
“Yes! No I just I don’t know?”
“Well I can’t lie now that I have seen her the thought of you and her sends me to my happy place……..”
And he sorted drifted of there till I slapped his chest and ouch hard chest
“awww babe let me finish but you are the girl for me with you I think about more then your hot ass and that beautiful tummy plus those lips mmmmmmmmmmm sorry I lost my train of thought?”
And then we both got lost in each other….


“Do you guys ever not make out? I mean Bethy you never I mean it’s not like you?”
Damn Maria and her shrill voice penetrating our sexual haze. Ok internal giggle penetrating Sexual haze when did I become a cheap romance novel?
“Hey everyone enjoying the festivities? Liz might I say you look ravishing tonight and by yours and Zan swollen lips and flushed faces I’m going on you already being ravished”
ahhhh Alex my life saver with his innuendo and raised eyebrows, he would look like a complete geek if not for the beautiful blonde on his arm. Maria is staring at him like he is a huge dork and has this look of who the hell are you and why are you talking to us?lucky Mickey is back with drinks.


“Al my man was up buddy this is my girl Maria Maria this is my boy Alex”
I tuned them out as entertaining as Maria’s discomfort and embarrassment is my whole focus is on tonight I want to make love to Zan Evans tonight I will loose my innocence and I’m soooooooooo ready!



new part soon i hope peps are reading me still and little hi and thanks to burningchaos for tuning in i hope you enjoy the rest
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hey this is channytell formally known as channibella. i want to know if you guys want me to continue this? its been awhile i had some troubles with my old log in so i finally just got a new one.
i will write the next chapter and post later tonight
please let me know if i should continue or leave it
thanks
honesty always appreciated
chantelle
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