Of Cabbages and Kings (CC,M/L,ADULT) (Complete)

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Hi everyone. :)

Glad that you all appreciated the way Liz, erm, 'foot'led the situation she found herself in. So, do you still think that Denda is this mysterious second that you all thought I was hinting at? :wink:

As always, thank you so much for taking the time to leave me feedback. I eagerly log on each day, hoping to see that little message from the auto rply robot. (Keep up the good work, robot!)

kissme4ever123 - Okay, you want Liz to meet Zan again? You wish is my command! :wink:

woodwinds - It sure looks like at least the bad parts of Liz's frem is true, if not the good. :twisted:

AJK001 - But you don;t think Denda will give up that easy, do you? :twisted:

roswck - I think Liz might just give Zan one more chance, don't you? :wink:

smokie - You know, maybe, just maybe, Denda spoke the truth!
Ah, speculation. Perhaps Rath and Zan 'womanize' only woman who are not as confident and indipendant as Liz and Maria. :)

roswellluver - I know something he will be holding! :wink:

frenchkiss70 - I agree. Let's hope tht Liz can encourage him in his studies. :)

aurorasky - I guess Liz is thinking how it's payback time! :twisted:

NorafanofMaxandLiz - I think you might find Zan's next lesson interesting :)

BrinatheDreama - Yup. YOu seemed to have grasped the finer points :) (Bone - "Max" will make an appearance very soon. :wink: See if you spot him. )

BehrObsession - Poor old Zan. No one wants him, only what he represents. Even Liz. :( Small wonder he is like he is.

BelevnDreamsToo - Who do you THINK Vilondra would meet and discuss the murder os Zan? Do you really think *MAX* would be involved in murder?

Roswelllostcause - Hmmmm.... Prophetic words if ever I read them! :wink:

Scottie - No, just hoping to 'mellow' her. Okay, the time honored seduction technique of getting her sloshed! LOL She did actually 'sip' some early on.

LTL - Yeah, it's difficult for me to post so early on a Friday these days. Real life and a daughter who is now officially a teenager! (Do you girls get lessons for those hormonal mood swings? LOL) I would have to say, that it seems we are more likely to have M&M action than we are M&L. :wink:

Okay - Ods Bodkins, Forsooth, and Tally Ho! Methinks tis time for Liz to take some direct action against yon varlets, what?




Crazy
Patsy Cline


Crazy, I'm crazy for feeling so lonely.
I'm crazy, crazy for feeling so blue.
I knew you'd love me as long as you wanted,
And then someday you'd leave me for somebody new.

Worry, why do I let myself worry?
Wond'ring, what in the world did I do?
Oh, crazy for thinking that my love could hold you,
I'm crazy for trying,
And crazy for crying,
And I'm crazy for loving you.

Oh, crazy for thinking that my love could hold you.
I'm crazy for trying,
And crazy for crying,
And I'm crazy for loving you.


Part 11

"Thanks for your help, Rath," Maria nodded after he had escorted she and Liz through the castle to her room.
Rath's eyes darted left and right, nodded, turned away and left.
"You two seem to be getting all cozy," Liz smirked.
"With him?" Maria's mouth fell open. "Please! He helped me to look for you, is all. Okay, enough about me. Come on, chica, spill."
Maria had been dying to cross examine Liz ever since they had found her emerging from the Inn called 'The Crown' with a self satisfied smirk on her lips. The guards posted at the door wanted to prevent Liz from leaving, but Rath said something to them, and they backed off. They looked like they didn't want to let Liz leave, but whatever Rath said frightened them enough to stand down. Maria wondered what Liz would have done, had the guards let her pass, and she had not turned up to collect her. Liz would not have made it to the castle without attracting unwanted attention from any number of young men, given the dress that she was almost wearing. Now, in the safety of their apartment, Maria wanted to know the meaning of Liz's smile.
"Tell me you didn't, Liz," Maria looked full of concern.
"I didn't," Liz grinned.
"So what's with the smirk," her face filled with relief.
"Do you remember what your mom taught us that time? What to do to guys who wouldn't take no for an answer?"
"Uh huh," Maria's eyes narrowed.
"Well, Denda wouldn't take no for an answer."
"So you... No! Tell me you didn't! Not the prince. You did!"
"I did," Liz repressed her laugh. "I kicked him so hard, he passed out."
"You go, girl," Maria smirked. "I just hope Denda doesn't have you arrested for assaulting his royal personage."
"I can't see him admitting what I did to him," Liz shook her head. "I can't believe how arrogant he was."
"Did he try to seduce you?"
"Yeah. But I just kept on talking about Zan. It seems that Zan annoys him as much as me."
"So you weren't tempted?"
"No," Liz shook her head, a look of shock on her face. "Of course I wasn't."
"'Cause he wasn't Max?"
"Got it," Liz touched Maria's arm. "So, tell me about your evening."
"Not much to tell," Maria shrugged. "I went for a walk, bumped into Rath, found out that it wasn't Zan who sent you that dress, charged to your rescue... Oh, wait! I heard some people talking."
"And this is interesting, because...?"
"There were three of them," Maria ignored her. "I don't know who the two guys were, but the chick sounded a lot like Vilondra. Liz, they were talking about killing Zan."
"Kivar and Nikolas," Liz murmured. "Sounds like that part of my dream is true, too."
Maria frowned. She thought about her next words with care.
"And... Ava? Is there an Ava on the scene too?"
"Yeah," Liz nodded with a pained look.

* * *

The new day dawned bright and clear. Liz awoke to the sound of Adaile scurrying about in the other room. She climbed from her bed and went into the bathroom, where she found her bath already drawn for her. When she emerged, ready to face the day, Liz found that Adaile had tidied up her room, hung away her dress from the previous evening and had laid out fresh clothing for her to wear. She found Maria sitting on the sofa when she went through to the main room.
"Morning, Ma..."
She was interrupted by knocking at the main door.
Adaile scurried into the room from Maria's bedroom. Maria and Liz looked from the door to Adaile.
"She makes me feel a little... I don't know," Maria whispered as she waved her hands. "I can't say that I like being waited on."
"I know what you mean," Liz agreed.

"You may leave us, Adaile," they heard Syrus's voice from the door that Adaile opened.
"My ladies," Adaile curtsied and excused herself.
They both waved her off as Syrus entered the room and closed the door behind her. He crossed to a chair to sit down.
"So," he seemed agitated beneath the calm exterior he was presenting. "How was your evening, ladies?"
Maria and Liz exchanged looks.
"Magical," Liz turned back to Syrus with a dreamy look on her face.
"Mine was okay," Maria shrugged.
"So..." he was barely holding it together, "what did you, uh, get up to?"
"Well, I was treated to a moonlight tour of the city," Maria smiled. "Course, the company wasn't up to much, but hey, beggars can't be choosers."
"And..." there was a catch to his voice. "And you, Lady Elizabeth?"
"I was invited to dinner," she smiled with a far away look. "It was so romantic. And the dress he sent me. Wow. What a guy."
"Oh, yeah," Maria nodded. "She was like, totally hot. How he kept his hands to himself as long as he did... And just what time did you get home this morning, Liz?"
"And, uh," Syrus looked uncomfortable. "That is... I... Who was it that you dined with?"
"Prince Denda," Liz sighed like a lovesick bimbo, clutching her hands to her breast.
"And you, uh... enjoyed his company?"
"He was so manly," her eyes glazed. "Any girl would near faint at the thought of being his Queen."
"Did you... uh..." Syrus's voice squeaked. "I mean..."

"Relax, Syrus," Liz rolled her eyes, her manner returning to normal. "Nothing happened."
"I don't know what you are talking about," Syrus seemed relieved.
"Cut the crap," Maria spat. "You heard that Liz was summoned to dinner with Denda and you just had to find out if she gave up her cherry to him. Well, she didn't." Maria wrapped her arms around her friend. "Liz is made of tougher stuff than that."
"But... you did stay with him. I was... afraid that he... and you, might... fall in... love."
"Why can't anyone understand?" Liz screeched in frustration. "I'm in love with Max, which is the only reason I'm stuck in this... this place putting up with, with, with people like you and Zan and Denda and the pervert who calls himself a king. All I want is Max, and if you don't start helping me find him, then I'm going to get mad. Very mad."
"And you don't want to see that," Maria smirked.
"If it helps," Liz seemed calmer. "I find Denda even more creepy than I find Zan. But least Zan's open with his leering."
Syrus seemed speechless.
"Oh, and while were in such an open mood," Liz continued. "Denda told me all about Kivar, Nikolas and... Ava."
"Oh," Syrus croaked.
"Yeah. Oh," Maria placed her hands on her hips.
"Is that all you have to say?" Liz demanded.
"I deliberately kept that information back from your dream," he nodded. "But not without reason. You remember how you admitted how... distraught you had become? Well, in your shell-shocked condition, I felt that news such as this might have pushed you over the edge. That was why I did not warn you about those three."
"You could have advised her about them in your dream," Maria peered through narrowed eyes.
"It would have made the dream seem more implausible," Syrus shrugged. "It might have affected her desire to piece together the clues that I would have left her."
"Clues she didn't need in the end," Maria reminded him.
"Does Zan love Ava?" Liz demanded. Her face twisted in pain. "You don't know how hard it was for me to have to endure the possibility that Max would one day remember his love for Tess and..."
"No," Syrus shook his head. "He may behave as though he does, but I honestly believe that he pretends for his mother's sake. She thinks that their union would be..."
"Advantageous."
Maria looked at Syrus and shook her head. She looked at Liz, hoping she too caught the way he did not look at her when he answered.
"Yes," he nodded. "And that is another reason why you are here. If Zan married Ava, it would be Kivar who rules. Through Ava. He would make Denda look like a kitten. And even if Zan's mother should somehow gain control, that too would be a disaster. In fact, with your permission, Lady Elizabeth, I would like to draw up a document that would prevent Zan from handing power to a third party, should he ascend the throne. If you could persuade him to sign it, it would negate the threat of any one ruling through Zan."

"Talking of Denda," Liz interrupted. "Syrus, there's something you should know. Denda plans to challenge Zan to a duel. At the next ball."
"But that's next week," Syrus gasped.
"No," Liz shook her head. "He said something about a full moon. There was one last night, so I make it that we have twenty eight days to bring Max out of Zan."
"Twenty two," Syrus corrected her. "Our years are shorter than yours. Each of our years has only two hundred and ninety six days. But what you say makes sense. Denda turns eighteen next month. He cannot rule without a Regent until then, and I doubt he would wish to risk a regent taking power away from him."
"But what about the King?" Liz asked. "Azande? Surely Denda can't rule until he's dead, too."
"Who knows what other plans Denda has laid."
"Wait, wait, wait," Maria pursed her lips. "Why can't Zan just refuse to fight him."
Liz turned to face Syrus.
"All members of the monarchy are bound by a set of rules and laws. They must each and everyone of them obey them all."
"But can't the king just, I don't know, cancel them?" Maria frowned.
"No," Syrus shook his head. "That's not possible. These rules were laid down centuries ago. As long as we have a monarchy, they are bound by them. It's something they have to swear to; that they will obey the laws, that they will maintain the monarchy, and that they will continue to rule if they ascend the throne. If Denda issues a challenge to Zan, to become heir to the throne, Zan has to accept the challenge, or..."
"Or?"
"Or he has to take his own life."
"Couldn't he just... run away?"
"He is bound by the laws," Syrus shook his head. "But they are the same laws that would give the document I will draw, teeth."
"Let's say that I turn Zan into Max and he becomes King. He has to maintain the same laws that his father upholds?"
"That's right," Syrus nodded.
"Max would hate that," Liz shook her head.
"But he needn't be so tyrannical about it."
"I wouldn't like to make Max do something he wouldn't want to do," Liz frowned at the ground. "Can he just refuse to take the throne?"
"No. Not if he is the legitimate heir, which he would be."
"As much as I hate doing this to Max, I agree that someone like him would make everyone's lives a lot easier."
"You are an incredibly astute creature," Syrus nodded. "You would make an awesome Queen."
"Denda certainly thinks so," she nodded. "Zan is three years older than him, you said?" Liz looked at Syrus.
"Yes," he narrowed his eyes. He wondered why she had so suddenly changed the topic of conversation.
"And Denda will be eighteen?"
"Correct," he continued to stare, trying to fathom her thoughts.
Liz started to smile.
"In earth years, Max is only seventeen."
Maria started counting on her fingers.
"And that makes Denda only fourteen? Eeeeew, Liz!"

"So now what, Syrus?" Liz collapsed back into the sofa. "I have twenty two days to find Max. Where do I start?"
"Well," he smiled. "It seems that Azande is furious with Zan over his reaction when he first met you. When he was told what had happened to his son, Azande had imagined you to be a tall, fiercesome warrior princess, bristling with muscles and weaponry. He was most disappointed when he saw you."
"I bet," Liz remembered the looks he gave her. "Sorry, but I'm no Xena."
"Who?" Syrus frowned.
"Never mind," she rolled her eyes.
"Zan has been ordered to step up his training and his studies. It is a direct order from the King and one which not even Zan can ignore without the risk of being accused of treason."
"And this helps her, how?" Maria asked.
"Zan has a fencing lesson in one hour from now. I suspect that while he will attend, as ordered, he will not take all that active a part. He will not put much effort into it. I wonder what might happen if you were to just... turn up and.... encourage him."
"Syrus," Liz was deep in thought. "I need you to rustle me something up. Something more... suitable to wear."
"What do you have in mind?" Syrus looked at her with suspicion.

* * *

Wearing a hooded cloak, Liz followed the map that Syrus had prepared for her. She soon found the gymnasium where Zan was scheduled to have his fencing lesson. A tall, lean figure was striding toward her, looking more than a little annoyed.
"Is this where Zan's having his lesson?" she asked the man.
"No," he stopped and looked at her. "This is where Zan is having his morning nap. He never takes part in his lessons."
"Oh," Liz frowned. "I thought the King ordered him to attend."
"He's in attendance," the man waved his arms in exasperation.
"Is his instructor there yet?"
"'I am his instructor," he groaned. "The King commands me to try to make sure that he can at least give a good account of himself should Denda ever challenge him, but I am a mere mortal. I turned up as commanded, but I have no command to stay. I will not waste my time."
"But he needs to be taught."
"I agree with you, my lady," he indicated the door with a grilled window on it. "But from whom will he learn?"
Liz peered through the window and saw a figure lying on the middle of the floor with his hands folded behind his head.
"Give me the swords," Liz commanded, holding out her hand.
"We don't use real swords, my lady," the instructor shook his head. "We use wooden staves. You'll find them just inside the door."
"You want to know who he's going to learn from?" There was a dangerous look in Liz's eye. The instructor nodded. "From his worst nightmare. Liz with PMS."
"PMS?"
"Post Max Stress!" She turned toward the door.

* * *

Pausing at the door, Liz placed her hand upon it, took a deep breath and pushed her way into the gymnasium. Zan remained motionless on his back. Disappointment flooded Liz's very being. Max would have known the moment she entered the room and acknowledged her in some way. Shaking her dark thought away, she turned around, searching the walls. She saw the weapon rack, holding wooden swords. She picked up two of them, testing them for weight and balance and crossed the large room to stand at the feet of the sleeping prince.
"Get up," she commanded.
There was no reaction from Zan.
"Get up!" she repeated, kicking his feet.
Zan's eyes flickered open. He looked up at her and rolled his eyes. He closed them again, rolled over onto his side so that his back was to her, folding himself into the fetal position. Liz gripped her wooden sword in her small fist.
"I said," she lifted her hand back, "Get up!"
Liz swung her arm bringing the sword hard against Zan's posterior. Howling in pain, Zan leapt to his feet, rubbing his hand against his backside.
"What did you do that for?" he demanded while glaring at her.
"'Cause I felt like it," Liz snapped, standing with her hands on her hips, leaning a little forward.
"Stupid woman," he spat. "I'll make you pay for that."
"You don't have it in you," Liz sneered as she tossed him the other sword.
"You're hardly dressed for this," he commented.
Liz unfastened her cloak, which fell to the floor to reveal her white all in one.
Zan's eyes widened in appreciation. He broke into a dirty smile.
"I'm going to enjoy removing that from you," he leered.
"You and whose army?" In spite of her bravado, Liz could not help feeling apprehensive. After all, Zan, like Max, was taller that she was, and he looked more powerful, too.
"I don't need an army," he scowled.
Grasping his sword, he swung at Liz's hips, trying to take advantage of his longer reach and smack it against her backside. Surprised by his sudden movement, Liz squeaked and threw out her arm to try and block his attack. She was surprised when she heard the sound of wood against wood and felt the force of his swing against her own.
"Come on, Zan," she laughed with relief. "Is that the best you can do?"
Zan growled and swung at her again. Liz stepped out of his way, rather than try to meet parry this blow. Unbalanced, Zan continued to spin around. Presented with his back, Liz brought her sword firmly across his buttocks again, eliciting another howl of pain. So it continued. Every clumsy attack that Zan attempted, Liz parried it, or avoided it with ease. Whenever she tried her own attack, she found that she could easily throw a feint, which he bought, allowing her to strike him in some unprotected part of his body. It seemed that the more she struck him, the less coherent, in words as well as deed, he became. At first she found it all amusing, that she, a small girl such as she was, could run rings around someone like Zan. But then she remembered that Denda, a man trained by the best swordsman, would be facing Zan with a real sword. Zan would be cut to ribbons, a fate that made tears well up in her eyes. If only he would learn during his lessons!

Then she became angry. She grew angry at his pathetic nature, at his lack of ambition, of his total disregard for her as an individual, at the fact that he was not Max. At everything. He really was useless, a fact that angered her still more. She was no longer fencing with him. She was beating him. Blow after blow landed on Zan's body, his legs, his arms and his head. She started to rage, calling him unintelligible names as her eyes were blurred with tears. Her anger turned to fury. She blamed him for everything.

For not being who he was supposed to be.
For ruining her relationship with Kyle.
For ruining her life with his stupid dream.
For damaging her friendship with Alex.
For bringing her here.
For making her do this.
For ruining her Prom.
For taking that stupid step back.
For giving her a police record.
For caring more about his son than her.
For giving her alien powers.
But most of all, for sleeping with Tess.

It all came out. And each accusation was delivered with a couple of solid blows to an exposed limb. Zan had long since dropped his sword and collapsed into a ball, trying to protect himself from her onslaught. His gesture was so weak, so submissive that a red mist filmed her eyes. She doubled her attacks, almost in a berserk frenzy. It was only when she finally heard his cries of pain as he begged for her to stop, pleading for mercy, that she stopped dead. Her mouth dropped open and her hand flew to cover it as the horror of what she had done sickened her. She dropped her wooden sword to the floor and fled from the gym, sobbing hysterically. She was gone before the sword had finished bouncing.

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Hi everyone!

Thank for your feedback, even though it seemes to have disappeared in the move. Oh well. We can't have everything. IF anyone can remember what they wrote about that last chapter, I would appreciate it if you mail it to me. Thanks.

Now, some sad news. For you, that is. Well, at least I hope it's sad for you. It's good forme though. I am away next Friday, not returning for almost two weeks, so there will be a delay between tonight's post and the next one. It's a good point to leave you as the cliff I'll leave you over isn't THAT big, and you all know that theres no way that I would let such a horrible.... oops. Better let you read it yourself.

Okay, on with the story...




Everytime
Britney Spears


Notice me, take my hand
Why are we strangers when
Our love is strong
Why carry on without me

Everytime I try to fly, I fall
Without my wings, I feel so small
I guess I need you, baby
And everytime I see you in my dreams
I see your face, it's haunting me
I guess I need you, baby

I make believe that you are here
It's the only way I see clear
What have I done
You seem to move on easy

And everytime I try to fly, I fall
Without my wings, I feel so small
I guess I need you, baby
And everytime I see you in my dreams
I see your face, you're haunting me
I guess I need you, baby

I may have made it rain
Please forgive me
My weakness caused you pain
And this song's my sorry

At night I pray
That soon your face will fade away

And everytime I try to fly, I fall
Without my wings, I feel so small
I guess I need you, baby
And everytime I see you in my dreams
I see your face, you're haunting me
I guess I need you, baby



Part 12

Maria opened the door to the room she shared with Liz, and peered through the doorway. She listened carefully, making sure that Adaile was not there. Maria still had not come to terms with having a servant see to her needs. It was not how her mother had raised her. After Liz had left for her training lesson with Zan, she had grown restless and had decided to take the map that Syrus had provided for both her and Liz and explore a little of the castle. She had encountered no mysterious voices and was no nearer learning the whereabouts of the Granolith than she had been before she had a map. Confident that Adaile was not there, she strode into the room, closing the door behind her and collapsed into the sofa.
"Peace," she smiled, leaning her head back and closing her eyes.
Her tranquility was rudely shattered when Liz burst into the room, crying hysterically and babbling something incoherent. She didn't even acknowledge Maria as she ran past her, through to her bedroom and threw herself onto her bed, burying her head in her arms as she continued with her storm of weeping. Staring at her open mouthed, the only sound Maria could hear was Liz's loud, heavy sobs.
"I swear," Maria growled. "She's cried more because of Zan than she ever did over Max."
She rose from the sofa, hurried into Liz's room and sat beside her distraught friend, gathering her in her arms.
"Are you all right, sweetie?" she asked in a soothing tone.
Liz did not answer, she just kept crying.
"Do you want to talk about it?"
Again, there was no answer. Maria doubted that she would get anything intelligible from Liz for quite some time but it was clear as to her the root of her distress. She pulled the bed cover over her distressed friend, and left the room.
"Zan!" Maria hissed, lifting up her map and looking for the route to the gymnasium. "You better not still be there or I'm going to beat you black and blue."

She found that, in fact, Zan was still there. Maria burst into the gymnasium to see him sitting against the far wall, his knees drawn up with his head resting against them. His arms were wrapped around the top of his head and his knees both.
"Whatever you did to my friend, Mr. High and Mighty," Maria stormed across the room, "I'm going to carve every tear she's shed outta your..."
Zan looked up at her.
"...hide," she finished in a soft tone as her face fell at what she was looking at. "What the hell happened to you?"
Someone had beaten her to it. Someone had already done a number on him. Zan was already black and blue. She could see bruises and red welts across his arms and legs, and on his face. Both his eyes were swollen and black. There were some rather large bumps on his head and some dried blood on his hairline. Blood had congealed around his nose, and there was a dry trickle from the corner of his mouth. He looked a complete mess.
"I think," he groaned, "you call it an Elizabeth." He gave a wry smile followed by a pained grimace.
"Liz did that?" Maria asked with awe in her voice.
"She must have been angry," Zan nodded.
"Gee! D'ya think so?" Maria shook her head. She reached a tentative hand toward him. "It looks painful. Are you okay?"
"I've felt better," Zan gave an ache filled shrug. "What about Lady Elizabeth? Is she all right?"
"Why?" Maria narrowed her eyes with suspicion. Her hand of sympathy drew back. "Don't tell me you hit her back."
"Chance would have been a fine thing," Zan snorted. He winced again. "No. I mean... this." He indicated himself. "I do not suppose that this sort of behavior is considered... normal for her nature."
"No," Maria shook her head. "I gotta admit. I never thought I'd see the day..."
"I suspect that she might be feeling a little... delicate. I hope she's not too upset. Especially over me." Zan's head dropped. "I'm not worth it." He returned to his original position.

Maria stared at him for a moment before sliding into a seated position next to him. She wrapped an arm over his shoulder.
"You are to her."
"Why," he turned to look at her. There was something in his eyes. "Why me? I mean, it's not like I'm ever going to be a king."
"That shows that you really don't know Liz," Maria shook her head. "At all. She's not interested in you because you might become a king."
"I heard she dined with Denda. Everyone prefers my younger brother. Even I agree that Denda is a better person than I. He's the one destined to be king. Me? I'm just this..." Zan shrugged. "Nobody."
"Well, you are most definitely somebody to her. She told Denda to take a hike, by the way. She wasn't interested."
"Take her home, Lady Maria," he clutched her arm and looked at her. His eyes filled with intensity and for a moment, the briefest of time spans, Maria thought she saw what Liz had only seen in her dreams. "Before she gets caught up in this mess. She deserves... better. She should return home and forget about me."
"You might as well ask Liz to forget how to breathe," Maria rolled her eyes.
"I am so afraid she will be doomed."
"So you do care for her?"
Zan gave a non-committed shrug. Maria's face lit up with a sudden idea.
"Look," Maria narrowed her eyes. "There is a way you can get rid of her. But it's kind of... drastic."
"How?" Zan looked at her with suspicion.
"She wants to turn you into someone else. Someone she... likes. A lot. Someone that you could be."
"How does this help in getting her to return home?"
"Because if you let her work with you, do as she says, then the sooner you become this Max, the sooner she will leave."
"You're sure she will leave? She doesn't seek to turn me into a king, marry me and share some sort of power?"
"No," Maria shook her head, crossing her fingers behind her back. "She wants to go home, but she wants to save you, first. All you have to do is let her change you to the Max she wants."
"The..." Zan looked nervous. "The truth is, Lady Maria. I don't... I don't know how to treat her."
"What do you mean?" Maria frowned. "Treat her like a lady."
"A lady," Zan snorted, but then winced as he again hurt some wounded part of his body. "To me, a lady is someone who offers me her virtue in exchange for power, rather than gold."
"I don't understand."
"No one sees me for me," he shrugged. "They only see the opportunity of becoming Queen."
"So treat her like your sister... no, no," A huge smile broke out on her face. "Treat her like she's the most precious thing in your world."
"Most precious..." he replied, slow and carefully. He nodded.
"So what's it going to be? Facing the claws and teeth of Liz the lion? Or cuddling with the kitten?"
"Liz?"
"It's a pet name," Maria shrugged. "Good friends only. Play nice and she might let you call her by that. And if you try anything funny with her, bucko, then what she just did to you will seem like a playful tickle by the time I'm finished with you."

* * *

"Lady Maria," Adaile exclaimed upon her return. "I'm glad you're back. Lady Elizabeth is most upset."
"Yeah," Maria nodded. "I know."
"It was Zan, wasn't it!" It was not a question so much as an accusation.
"No fooling you, is there?" Maria rolled her eyes.
"She's too good for him," Adaile spat. "She deserves better. Someone who would look after her."
"Someone like Denda?" Maria turned to face her. "Someone who thinks all he has to do is snap his fingers and Liz will open her... You can have him, Adaile."
"But Denda never upset Lady Elizabeth."
"Only 'cause she gave him no for an answer that he had no choice but to accept."
Adaile's mouth opened and closed but no sound came out. She turned and left the room.

Liz was quiet when Maria joined her in the bedroom. She sat against the headboard of her bed in pretty much the same position that Maria had left Zan in. She climbed onto the mattress and pulled her friend into her arms.
"So, I just saw Zan," she whispered in a soothing tone.
"How is he?" Liz's voice still shook from her earlier hysteria but her concern over what she had done was obvious.
"He looks like road kill," Maria smirked. "Way to go you."
Liz rubbed her face.
"You know, maybe you should just fight his battles for him," Maria grinned, nudging Liz's shoulder. "And you said you were no Xena."
Liz could not help her laugh. She sniffed, reaching for her damp handkerchief and blowing her nose.
"Are you okay, babe?" Maria cuddled her friend, whose mood had calmed a little.
"No," Liz shook her head and wiped away a tear. She looked up at Maria. "Do you think we should go home now?"
Maria leaned back and looked at her.
"No," she shook her head after a short pause. "We should stay. Keep in his face, Liz. You might just start getting through to him now. I have a feeling he has this whole new... healthy respect for you."
"He needs an attitude transplant."
"Maybe you just gave him one." Maria started to laugh. "You know, the whole 'beating some sense into him' lark."
"I hurt him, Maria," Liz sniffed. "He was begging for mercy and he looked so pathetic. I just kept hitting and hitting..."
"He'll forgive you."
"He's not Max," Liz shook her head. "I haven't even felt him." Liz paused for a moment. "What do you think I should do?"
"What happened in your dream? Are there any clues there?"
"I don't know. There was so much going on."
"What started Max getting to know you? I mean, apart from stalking you?"
"Me getting shot," Liz shrugged, her voice still shaky.
"But what possessed him to save you? You said that he had this whole pact thing with the others, but he must have felt he could trust you. That doesn't happen from just watching someone."
"Not sure. He just... worshipped me from afar."
"There was never any contact?" Maria frowned. "He never spent any time with you? At a party or something? Somewhere he could get to know you?"
"No," Liz continued to shake her head. "Only when we were... lab partners..." Liz's voice trailed away. "I know!" her face lit up. She wiped the tears away. "We'll be lab partners here too. From now on, I'm attending Zan's lessons with him."
"I just hope he survives," Maria mumbled softly.

* * *

"Any idea what lessons he's supposed to have today?" Maria asked Liz over their breakfast table.
"No idea whatsoever," Liz shrugged. She still seemed raw from yesterday, but she was presenting a brave face. "It doesn't really matter though. As long as he learns something useful, it won't be a wasted day."
"Make sure that you leave anything that could be construed as a deadly weapon behind," Maria grinned.
"So I should leave my hairbrush here?"
"Totally," Maria nodded.
The two girls started to laugh.
"Thank you, Maria," Liz looked into Maria's eyes.
"What for?"
"For being here. For being you," Liz smiled. "For helping me get through this nightmare."
"I have a feeling that the nightmare might start to change," Maria gave a secret smile. "Become less..."
There was a knock at the door. Maria left the table and went to answer it.
"Can I... hey! Who do you think you are?"
Denda swept past Maria, pushing her to one side.
"Rude much?"
"Lady Elizabeth!" he exploded. "I came as soon as I heard."
"Denda!" Liz gasped as she jumped up and stood behind her chair. Maria felt the waves of fear coming off her friend.
"So you're Denda," Maria crossed her arms and gave him a look of disgust. She walked over to stand by Liz.
"And you are insignificant," Denda looked her up and down. "Leave us!" he waved his hand as if chasing off a wasp.
"Uh, no way, Jose," Maria shook her head. "Not unless Liz asks me to. And I know she's so not going to do that."
"And who do you think you are?" Denda sneered.
"Uh," Maria pointed to herself. "Best friend, actually. And according to the best friend code, I have to stay in the presence of said best friend while she's being pestered by some perverted..." she looked him up and down, "jackal."
"I will deal with you later," he glared.
"Yeah," Maria rolled her eyes. "Way to get on Li... Elizabeth's good side. Make her best friend your best enemy."
"I heard of your altercation with Zan," he turned away from the annoying woman. "Just say the word and I shall teach him a lesson."
"He's already been taught one," Maria smirked. "Your family hasn't had much success. So far, it's Elizabeth, three, Antarian Royal family, zip."
Denda ignored her but Liz couldn't help smirking.
"Like Maria says," Liz finally spoke. "That won't be necessary."
"At least grant me the courtesy of checking you to make sure you are well."
"Why wouldn't I be well?" Liz narrowed her eyes. "Zan never hurt me. My... distress was my own fault."
"Nevertheless, I would not consider myself a man..."
"I don't consider you a man either," Liz glared. "Not after the stunt you tried to pull the other night."
"A misunderstanding," he passed his hand across his hair, smoothing it. "Allow me to make amends by inviting you to dinner tonight."
"She's washing her hair," Maria stepped beside her friend.
"I did not ask you!"
"Just as well, 'cause I'm busy too."
"Lady Elizabeth," Denda was barely controlling his anger. "If not dinner, then I would like to bestow upon you the honor of accompanying me to the ball, three nights hence."
"You're too late," Liz placed her hand to silence Maria's retort. "I'm already being 'honored' by accompanying Zan."
Denda looked through narrowed eyes from one to the other, his face growing redder by the second.
"You would do well to reconsider," he spat.
"No," Liz shook her head. "I can't do that."
Denda turned on his heel and left the room.
"Did he?" Maria asked with her eyes widened with doubt.
"Did who what?"
"Did Zan ask you to be his Cinderella?"
"Not yet," Liz gave a weak smile. "But he will."
"So that was Denda, huh?"
"Yeah."
"What a...." Maria struggled for adjectives.
"My thoughts exactly," Liz nodded. "Come on. Let's eat."

They had managed to get halfway through their breakfast when there was another knock at the door.
"It's all go today," Maria looked around. "Where are the servants when you need them," she placed her napkin on the table and rose towards the door.
"You're getting decadent, Maria," Liz laughed.
"Yes?" Maria answered the insistent knocking.
A tall, middle aged woman with dark hair stood there.
"Is the Lady Elizabeth at home?" the woman had a haughty demeanor.
"Who wants to know?" Maria was suspicious.
"My name is Nadanne," she paused. "Queen Nadanne."
"Wait, Queen?" Maria held her hand up. "That would make you..."
"Zan's mother."
"I guess you better come in then."
Queen Nadanne stepped into the room. Her eyes met Liz's at once. Animosity blazed for all to see.
"Liz, Nadanne," Maria introduced with a roll of her eyes. "Nadanne, Liz."
"How can I help?" Liz tried to keep her voice from sounding too frosty. It was clear as to why this woman had showed up. Her manners would not desert her and she indicated an empty chair.
"You can help by leaving my little boy alone," Nadanne took the offered seat.
"Your little boy?" Liz's mouth fell open.
"Zan."
"I can't do that," Liz shook her head.
"You don't know what you're meddling with," the older woman cautioned. "You could ruin everything."
"Maybe I know more than you think. Maybe I'll stop things from being ruined. Unless you're talking about the ruination of some... Machiavellian plan?"
"Mach - a - vellian?" Nadanne looked confused.
"Underhanded."
"Our country is on the verge of a civil war," Nadanne leaned forward. "We have Kivar and his rebel army growing in strength by the day. To compensate for this, Azande is increasing the size of his army. Confrontation is inevitable. We are surrounded by a number of countries that champ at the bit, waiting for the opportune moment to sweep across the borders and seize whatever lands they can for themselves. In short, our very existence is under threat. And there is only one man who can prevent this."
"Zan," Liz nodded. "Which is why I'm here. To make Zan into the man who can do just that."
"Don't be foolish, little girl," she snapped.
"Hey!" Maria was the first to respond. "You don't come into our room treating her like that."
"You don't know with what you meddle," Nadanne ignored Maria. "There is only one way to prevent bloodshed, and that is to avert the civil war. And the only way that the rebellion can be averted is to unite the two factions. Only Zan would be acceptable as a leader of both the rebels and those loyal to the crown. It is Zan's destiny, and you are standing in his way."
"I am," Liz shook her head. "Me? How?"
"The only way to achieve this union is for Zan to marry Ava. She is the sister to the leader of the..."
"I know all about Ava," Liz shook her head. "What you mean is that you want Zan to take the throne, but with you pulling the strings. Only what you don't know is that Ava wants to do the same thing while Kivar will pull Ava's strings. Don't talk to me about destiny, okay? I know how it plays out. And trust me. You do not want Ava for a daughter-in-law."
"I'm sure Ava and I can come to a... an arrangement."
"Right," Liz rolled her eyes. "But aren't you forgetting Denda? I mean, he's not going to stand by and watch Zan take the throne."
"Denda is of no consequence," Nadanne snapped her fingers and waved her hand.
Behind her, Maria mimicked her actions.
"You'd better leave now," Liz covered her mouth to hide her giggle. "If the only thing I achieve here is preventing Zan from marrying Ava, then I have won."
Nadanne stood up, glaring down at Liz with hatred sparking from her eyes.
"I pray that you do not come to regret that decision."
"That was another threat, Liz," Maria observed.
"Yeah," Liz nodded while Nadanne stormed from the room. She gave a sigh.
"You know, Liz," Maria considered. "You really need to practice your 'how to win friends and influence people' skills."

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Hi everyone,

Well, I hope that my absence wasn't too hard on you :) I had a great vacation, and have returned, energized and ready to torment you further! :) Even though I was without a computer, I managed to use the old fashioned method and write two whole chapters. Good ones, too!

Thanks for all your feedback, and thank you for trying to remember what you wrote in the feedback that got lost.

Can I say a big thank you to the moderators for their efforts and hard work. :)

Regarding my daughter, yes, I give her all the love and comfort she needs (even though there are times she doesn't seem to want it :wink: ) But we have always had a good relationship, and it's still holding it's own.


polar vixen - Yes, you do get an update tonight :wink: Thank you :)

AJK001 - The problem with everyone's agenda's, there's a few that want to see Zan's own agenda terminated.

mezz - I'm sure you'll get to see Liz working with Zan sooner or later. As for falling under her spell...

roswck - Seeing that Liz did not reckognise Denda, I would say he did not appear in her dream, but then, maybe she had other things on her mind and never noticed him. :wink:

Smac - I think Liz has had to get tough to keep going. And there are so many extenuating circumstances for poor Zan. The deck is stacked against him.

smokie - You are correct. No one seems to want Zan for 'himself', not even Liz. But sometimes, being a tool of destiny has it's rewards. :wink: Denda plans to challenge Zan at the Ball, the next full moon. Liz noticed there was a full moon the night of her date with Denda, so she has a little less than a month.

roswellluver - I think Zan got the message :wink:

BehrObsession - Well, even at his worst, Zan could never have been that far removed from Max. Right?

BrinatheDreama - I feel that Liz might soon catch a glimpse of Max. Fear not.

roswellfiend - Liz needed an outlet. And poor Zan was it.

frenchkiss70 - Zan has his own problems, but I'm sure he sees Liz in a new light now.

youre my dreamgirl - FYI, in my first draft, Liz said that last line. Then I decided that it was too Maria for Liz to say it. :)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - I new you'ld like that part. And I know you will like this one too. :wink: I guess you missed the note about my vacation.

Roswelllostcause - Sorry about my timing. I hope you managed to get some new soap, though! :wink: LOL

mareli - Yup, you sure did. Definately a little bit Max.

auroraskey - Thank you :)

TaffyCat - Hi Taffy! :) You are right about being freed. I don;t have to conform to anything the show threw up and not give a damn. :) And as for unique, yes. Thank you. I tried so hard to find something new, and when I thought of this (early in BRH writting, I knew I had to explore it. Jen beta'd the first few chapters AGES ago. I did have to go back and reread some of your stories though (the one where they went back to rescue MAx on Antar) to make sure I didn't copy any of your ideas.
And no, only one update as I warned y'all I was going away. :wink: Nice try, though.

Scottie - I think that Liz definately needed to do something as drastic as she did, if only for her own sanity. Now it's out of her system, she can concentrate on the task at hand, turning water into Jack. :wink:

Okay, on with the story... and yes, quite a long one. :)




What A Wonderful World
Sam Cooke, James Taylor


Don't know much about history,
don't know much biology.
Don't know much about a science book,
don't know much about the French I took.
But I do know that I love you,
and I know that if you love me, too,
what a wonderful world this would be.

Don't know much about geography,
don't know much trigonometry.
Don't know much about algebra,
don't know what s slide rule is for.
But I know that one and one is two,
and if this one could be with you,
what a wonderful world this would be.

I don't claim to be an 'A' student,
but I'm tryin' to be.
For maybe by being an 'A'-student, baby,
I can win your love for me.

Don't know much about history,
don't know much biology.
Don't know much about a science book,
don't know much about the French I took.
But I do know that I love you,
and I know that if you love me, too,
what a wonderful world this would be.


Part 13

Her heart thudded heavily in her chest as Liz paused at the door and peered through the window. She could see that Zan had already arrived, sitting there in a half doze, his arm resting on the table and his face propped against his open hand. Her stomach twisted in revulsion at the sight of his wounds. Wounds that she had inflicted upon him. Memories of her uncharacteristic loss of control fueled her apprehension. Feeling a little unsure of her welcome, yet trying to display a confidence that she did not feel, Liz at last pushed through the door and into the classroom beyond. Sitting in a seat and desk combination, Zan looked up at the new arrival. His eyes widened in surprise but when she stepped toward him, he flinched, leaning back as far as his seat would allow him to and raised his hands to protect himself.
"Relax," she forced her light laugh as well as her smile. She blanched at the terror in his eyes. She held her hands up in a universal signal. "I'm unarmed. I come in peace."
Zan gave her a careful nod and relaxed only to the equivalent of Defcon 3.
"What, uh," he seemed to be considering his words with care, "what are you doing here?"
Liz paused and considered each word, checking them for hidden meaning or insult. Satisfied that he was not baiting her, she took a deep breath.
"I was told that, uh," she stared hard at the floor, "you were kinda ordered to attend extra lessons, 'cause of me." She looked up again. "So I thought, if you had to endure them, it's only fair that I do too."
His eyes widened for a moment, showing the panic that he felt.
"You don't have to do that," he looked away.
"I know," she nodded, rewarding him with a friendly smile. "But it's time I learned a little about Antar, anyway."
"What about your friend," he looked past her. "Lady Maria. Will she be joining us?"
"She's not the scholarly type," Liz shrugged.
"But you are?"
"Yeah," Liz nodded as she sat in the seat next to him. She looked him in the eye, daring him to make a comment. "Yeah, I guess I am."
"You don't have to do this," he reiterated.

"Are you okay," Liz extended her hand toward the huge bruise on Zan's upper arm."
"I'll survive," he nodded with a small smile.
He flinched when her fingers brushed against the mottled skin but Liz was pleased that he did not pull away.
"I'm, uh, really sorry," Liz tried her best to show her sincerity. "I'm really sorry that I lost control like that."
Zan looked at her for a moment before he replied.
"No," he gave a rueful shake of his head. "It is I who should apologize, Lady Elizabeth," his eyes turned downcast. "I have acted less then honorably. I have treated you with less civility that you deserved."
Liz's eyes darted around the room while she tried to come up with something to say.
"Maybe we should just, you know, start over," she shrugged.
Her eyes were open, and honest. Zan looked sideways at her for a moment before turning in his seat so that he was facing her. He extended his hand.
"Zan t'Azande."
"Liz Parker," she took his hand and they shook.
"Liz?" he asked, not letting her hand go.
"It's a short form of Elizabeth," she looked at their joined hands. "My friends call me Liz."
"I see," he frowned at the movement. But then he looked up. "And may I call you Liz?"
"Okay," she smiled, realizing that he was offering a whole peace proposal in that one request. She broke into a mischievous grin. "If I can call you Zan."
"I am pleased to meet you, Liz." Smiling at her joke, Zan raised her hand and kissed the back of it.
The kiss was light, and tender, though in no way did it make her feel uncomfortable. It was not the kiss of a man who had ulterior motives. Liz blushed a light pink color and gently eased her hand back. It may have been a new beginning between them, but he was not Max. Yet.

* * *

The teacher entered the room with an expression that made it obvious that he would rather be somewhere else. He glanced up to satisfy himself that Zan had turned up, as ordered, and turned to leave again, his duty done - albeit at the lowest level. He turned to face Zan again, shock registering on his face. Not only was Zan not asleep- as he had expected - but there was an attractive young lady in the room with him.
"Are you, uh, lost, my lady?" he asked with a frown. He was a different teacher to the one who had come to teach fencing. "Are you in the right place?"
"If you've come to give Zan his lessons," Liz sat up straight, "then, yes, I am in the right place.
"I've come to make sure that Zan has at least obeyed his father's orders and turned up for my lesson," the older man scoffed.
Beside her, she felt, rather than saw, Zan wriggle with discomfort in his chair.
"Is it your job to teach Zan?" she asked in a gentle voice.
"Yes," he nodded as he watched her through wary eyes.
"Then teach us," Liz waved her hand at the front of the classroom, wondering when she had grown so bold. "I'd like to learn, too.
"I... I hadn't actually prepared a lesson plan," he stammered. "I expected this lesson to be much like all the others. With Zan," he indicated the prince, "sleeping."
"Well, he won't be sleeping in this lesson," Liz smiled. "Will you, Zan?"
"Uh," he glanced at her with a look of panic. "No." He turned to the teacher. "No, not this time."
"But what shall I teach?" he scratched his head.
"Well, I'm kinda new here," Liz opened the journal she had asked Syrus to get her. "Maybe you could give me an overview of Antar. You know, its geography, its politics... That sort of thing."
The teacher stared at her for a moment.
"But I have no books, no maps, no... charts."
"Well," Liz struggled for ideas. "Can't you just... teach?"

The man gave her a long, hard stare. Seeing that she would not back down, he released his breath, and stepped over to the lectern.
"Imagine a pentagon," he waved his hand in the air and a misshapen five sided shape appeared. "The point at the top like so. This is Antar. From the top, and moving from left to right, the five sides are bordered thus: down this first side, a large lake protects us. It's almost an inland sea. Other countries call it by a different name, but to us, it is Lake Antar. Like the others who border it, we have a small fleet to protect ourselves. This next side, we share a border with Gutenland. Gutenlandians are similar to us, in that we were one nation, centuries ago. The third side, the flat part across the bottom, is our border with the desert kingdom of Tarnay, and is protected by an almost impassable mountain range. It is rumored that Kivar has made his lair, somewhere among the unreachable valleys of these mountains. The few passes to Tarnay are easily defended, which forces their armies to only attach us as an ally of another, through one of our other neighbor's lands. They fight with huge, wicked barbed sabers."
While Liz scribbled down notes into her journal, she noticed that Zan was not writing. He did, however, seem to be paying attention.
"Small mercies," she smiled to herself and returned to the teacher. "At least he's awake."
"This fourth side is our border with Helsadoria," the teacher continued. "Probably our greatest foe. Whenever war breaks out, invariably it is with them. The other nations choose their sides. The fifth and final side is our border with Keltica. Although not strictly a country, their land is littered with fierce, nomadic tribes. Often warring among themselves, they unite together against any common enemy that dares to cross their borders. Few will try. Azande is on particularly good terms with them, and harbors hopes that they will ally themselves to him should the others decide to try to invade us. Now up here," he drew a small dark circle near the pentagon's apex, "is our capital city. Z'ndrina. Protected by the castle Z'ndrina, which is itself protected by an elbow of insurmountable cliffs."
Liz finished labeling her roughly drawn map. She wrinkled her nose at the hand drawn image and raised her hand.
"Yes?" the lecturer seemed surprised.
"Is there a map available anywhere? I mean, can I see Antar's geography, in respect to the rest of the world?"
"You mean an atlas?"
"Yes," Liz grinned.
"I'm sure I can find one for you," he made a note in a small pocketbook, "somewhere."
He paused, waiting to see if Liz wanted to ask another question. Satisfied that she was not, he returned to his lesson. He explained how much land had been lost to Antar's neighbors during the wars prior to Azande taking the throne, and showed, almost battle by battle, his fight to reclaim their surrendered territory. Once he had finished with the history, he turned to the geography. He explained in great detail the soil types of the different provinces, and which crops grew best in which regions. The whole economy fell under his microscope, as too did the county's demographics. The lesson seemed to go on forever, and soon Liz felt something she had never before experienced in a school lesson. The sensation of falling asleep.
"I see that I am fatiguing you," the teacher said in mid sentence as he was explaining the fishery rights on Lake Antar. "I have perhaps gone on too much, but as you can see, this is a lengthy topic."
"Thank you," Liz nodded. "Yeah, I am kinda tired. Sorry. But you've given me a lot to think about. Isn't that right, Zan?" She nudged the prince who had given in to the call and had fallen asleep.
"Huh?" he looked up. "Yeah. Uh... what?"
The teacher nodded to his pupils and left the room.
"So," Liz turned to Zan. "Did you learn anything?"
"I did," he nodded with a smile.
"What?"
"Not to underestimate you again, for one thing."
Liz lifted her book to hide her smile
"What's next?" Liz clutched her book under her arm and rose from the table.
"Luncheon," Zan shrugged. "And then..." he paused. "uh... fencing."
"Oh, good," Liz nodded. "Cause, you know, you really need the practice."
"No need to rub it in, Lady Elizabeth," Zan prodded a bruise with his fingers.

* * *

"Rath!" Maria cried out.
She had been out exploring - again - when she had spotted a familiar figure across the courtyard.
"Wait up, Rath!" Maria started to trot.
Rath turned to face her. His face widened in alarm when he saw her and shrank against the wall.
"Don't hit me," he raised his arm to ward off any potential blow.
"I'm not going to hit you," Maria frowned at his antics. "Whatever gave you that idea?"
"I saw what your friend did to Zan," he accused.
"And you thought..." Maria started to laugh.
Rath turned to leave.
"No, wait," Maria grabbed his arm. "What are you up to?"
I'm on my way to meet Zan for lunch," he glared at her. "Not that it's any concern of yours."
"He won't show," she smirked.
"Why do you say that?" his eyes narrowed with suspicion.
"'Cause Li... the Lady Elizabeth is attending his lessons with him. And if I know my friend, yours won't get the chance to escape."
"She's...?" his face turned red. "After what she did to him?"
"Relax, okay?" Maria glared. "She's not going to do it again. He might even have some fun, too."
"I doubt that," Rath started to sulk.
"Oh, cheer up, Space boy," Maria linked her arm through his. "Why don't you treat me to lunch?"
"What did you call me?" he blinked.
"Okay," she sighed. "I guess you're not him."

* * *

"I don't get it," Maria held the fork filled with food in mid air. "He's the first born, he's an heir and he doesn't want to rule? I mean, what is it with that?"
"Like I said," Rath shrugged. "He isn't interested."
"Surely, he was raised to be a king, wasn't he? You can't just," she raised her other hand, "choose not to do it."
"Zan's childhood was" he looked awkward, "different."
"Different, how?" Maria frowned. "You mean, he wasn't raised to be a king."
"I'm not supposed to talk about this," Rath shook his head. "He's my friend."
"You remember what my friend did to your friend?" Maria gave him a sweet smile.
"Yeah," he nodded.
"She's a pussy cat compared to me." Her eyes grew dark. "So tell me."
Rath's eyes widened with fear.
"Okay," he looked around the dining area. "But you must promise not to tell a soul."
"Pinky swear," Maria nodded.
"What?" Rath looked confused.
"I promise," she rolled her eyes, crossing her fingers behind her back.
Rath looked around the room, filled with people eating.
"Come with me," he motioned, rising from his seat.
Maria followed him as Rath led the way from the dining room, through some corridors and out into a large courtyard. He crossed this, with Maria scurrying to keep up, and left the castle grounds through the main gate and over the drawbridge. On the other side, he went to a stone bench that stood near some small, red flowers. He sat down and indicated that Maria join him.
"You sure know your way around," she smiled.
"I have lived here a long time," he shrugged.
"So... are you going to tell me Zan's life story, or not?"
Rath looked around, checking for any eavesdroppers. There was no one in sight, and the nearest cover was easily out of earshot.
"When Zan was born, there was great rejoicing. The King had a son and heir. At once, plans were put into place. His entire life had been mapped out for him. I shouldn't wonder if somewhere, a plan exists for his coronation, his wedding and even his funeral."
"The price of having a king for a dad," Maria shrugged.
Rath simply nodded.
"Even as a babe in arms, he was protected," he continued. "After all, Azande had... has many enemies. Enemies who would not like his line to continue. So even in the castle, he had bodyguards."
"Even in the castle?" Maria's eyes widened.
"Men, even women can be bought," he shrugged. "I would imagine that the purse to be won for a royal assassination would be quite high."
"Yeah," she nodded. "I guess."
"When he was just two years old, Zan went missing. It was completely inexplicable. The guards outside his room swore, even upon the rack, that no one entered or left the room. They kept their story right up to their deaths, four hours later."
"Nice guy, this Azande," Maria rolled her eyes.
"Anyway," Rath nodded. "He was found. That night. Quite safe. In the church."
"In the church? Did a priest or someone take him?"
"No one knew. Once reunited with his mother, who, as you can imagine, had been going..."
"Frantic?" Maria offered with sympathy.
"And more," Rath nodded. "From that moment, Zan's life changed. His mother insisted on protecting him herself. There wasn't a moment that she was not with him. She chose his playmates for him, tutored him herself and supervised his every waking minute."
"Poor guy," Maria shuddered.
"While his peers learned war craft, Zan learned needle point. It wasn't until he turned twelve that his father finally stepped in and cut the umbilical cord. He withdrew all normal protection from Zan and took steps to try to harden him up."
"That explains why he's the way he is," Maria nodded. "But that doesn't explain his reluctance to rule, and why he so... I don't know, willing to give his younger brother a free run at the job."
"You see, the reason Zan disappeared..." Rath started to look uncomfortable. "Look, you have to remember, I heard this from Zan, okay? And he was only two years old at the time."
"So about eighteen months in our time."
"What?"
"Nothing. Carry on."
"It might appear a bit, uh, sketchy, but it's what he told me. And I believe him."
"Okay, so tell me already."
"He was in his room, alone," Rath's voice fell to a near whisper with overtones of conspiracy. "When this... I don't know, a door appeared. Out of nothing. Zan, of course, was terrified. A strange woman stepped through the door and looked around. Zan told me that years later, when he was able to recognize such looks, she appeared confused. When the woman saw Zan, she asked him his name. He was terrified of her and some inner voice said to keep calm and do as she said. He told her that his name was Zan. She seemed disappointed. At that moment, one of the guards started to come in to check on the prince, so the woman lifted Zan up and stepped into the strange door. They spent the afternoon talking, rather, they spent it with her talking to him. She started by asking him if he had any brothers. At that time, Denda wasn't born, so he said no. Again, she seemed disappointed. 'No matter,' she said. 'I'm sure he will be born any day now.' She then proceeded to tell Zan that his brother was destined to grow up to be a mighty king. That he would be the most famous man in all of the known worlds, and that with his wife, they would practically rule the heavens themselves. It was his destiny. She kept on stressing that. She told him that all would pay tribute to them and that they would hold the fate of kingdoms in their hands. That they would become... immortal. By the time she finished telling him about his brother, it was late. The castle was crawling with guards, so the woman left Zan at the church. She vanished, never to be seen again."
"So that's it? Some strange woman tells Zan that his brother has this whole rule the universe prophecy and he's going to just... stand aside?"
"How would you feel, Lady Maria, if you were told that you do not matter in the scheme of things? That such great power is destined for your younger brother and not you. For the next ten years, Zan was wrapped in cotton wool. While he was growing ever weaker, his brother has been showing just why fate has chosen him as the King of the Universe. Although he is still young, he is as strong, as talented as any grown man." Rath's eyes darkened. "I don't think there is one man in all the kingdom who would willingly stand with Denda in an arena. Zan had a choice. To die under Denda's sword in a challenge for the throne, or to let Denda take it, unchallenged." He looked back at the castle and then let his head drop. "No man can defeat his destiny."

* * *

"So you basically grew up... alone?"
"Yeah," Zan nodded, as he fed another piece of bread into his mouth. "My mother was... overprotective. In the extreme. I was never allowed out of her sight. I suppose that there was some justification to her attitude, considering that..." Zan's voice trailed away, and his eyes went distant, suggesting that he did not want to finish the sentence. Liz did not press him. "It wasn't until I was... twelve or so that I was finally able to escape from her constant vigilance. I met with the other boys of my age - for the first time - but at best, they only tolerated me. I was, after all, their prince. But they were never my friends. Not like they were with Denda. But then I met Rath. No one liked him, either, so we sort of gravitated to one another."
"Why didn't anyone like him?"
Zan looked at Liz, his eyes narrowed in thought.
"He wasn't what you would call sociable. He was gruff and... mean, and given to sudden bursts of violence to those who irritated him."
"That does not sound like Rath," Liz started to smirk. "Don't you mean cowardly, timid and sudden bursts of panic?"
"This was before his father was murdered," Zan shrugged. "His mom died just after he was born, in a border raid, so he was raised by his father. They grew close. Very close. One night, his father was on his way home from a lesson he was giving when he was just stabbed in the back as he cut through an alley way."
"That's awful," Liz held her hand to her mouth.
"Whoever it was didn't even take his purse. It was still full of gold. But it really affected Rath. He turned into... well... Rath. But he was my friend, and I stood by him. Even though he was no longer my, uh, protection."
"Protection?" Liz raised her eyebrows. "Why would you need protection."
"By this time, my father thought it would be a good idea to try to make me, um... I don't know," he pushed his hand through his hair, "a fighter or something. He let it be known that he would not be displeased if the boys beat me up."
"Did it happen a lot?"
"Not too often while Rath was more like he used to be. Everyone was terrified of him. But after his father died..."
"How long ago was that?"
"Two years."
"And you still get beaten up?"
"Frequently," Zan nodded. "Although I have to confess that you have been the first girl to do so."
"Sounds like you had quite a childhood," Liz murmured softly.
"It was..." Zan nodded, "interesting."

* * *

"That's better, Zan!" Plachette, his fencing instructor applauded him.
He had been instructing Zan how to defend himself against Liz's attacks. True, she held back, afraid that she might hurt some of his earlier wounds, but he was making progress. He now held the sword without it falling from his fingers every time he blocked her. She had not struck him once during the last hour. Plachette started to work him harder still. He even gave Liz a rest so that Zan might experience what it would be like if a grown man attacked him. Although he managed to block half of Plachette's attacks, the other half evaded Zan's parries. Fully in control, Plachette stopped the stick a hair's breadth away from Zan's body.
"Much better, your highness," Plachette again congratulated him when the lesson had ended. They stood by the door, mopping the sheen of sweat from their brows. "I suggest that until you have fully grasped the basics - blocking and parrying - we concentrate on your defense. That way, perhaps you can stay alive until help arrives. We can cover offense once you can prevent me from getting through."
Zan nodded, and watched his fencing instructor leave through the door.

"Pretty good," Liz smiled. "See how easy it is? If you'd have concentrated on all this earlier, I wouldn't have been able to... hurt you."
"I don't know why I'm bothering," Zan shrugged. "It's not like I'm ever going to need all this stuff."
Liz studied him for a moment, wondering how a man who appeared to be in as good condition as her dream Max had been could be such a... flake.
"Zan," she stepped closer to him. "You do know that Denda's planning to challenge you to a duel, right? At his birthday ball."
"Why would Denda do that?" Zan looked down at her. He had confusion all over his face.
"'Cause he wants the throne."
"The throne is already his, Lady Elizabeth," he narrowed his eyes. "I've told him he can have it. Even I know he will make a better King than I. If I was king, we would lose half our lands before the crown touched my head."
"Only because you haven't paid attention to the things you were supposed to have. Denda told me what he had planned. I think he thought his display of power would impress me or something. He's going to kill you, Zan."
"No," Zan shook his head. "Not Denda. He wouldn't challenge me. He's my brother."
Liz knew that she could not make him listen to her about Denda's plans. Not yet, anyway. It did, however, remind her of something else she needed to resolve.
"Baby steps," she muttered.
"Excuse me?" Zan looked up.
"Nothing," she smirked. "Oh, you know there's a ball coming up, right?" Go on. Ask me.
"Yes," Zan nodded and looked away.
"Will you be going?" Ask me to go with you.
"No," he shook his head. His face dropped. "It's not the sort of event I... have any fun at."
"Oh," Liz nodded. Ask me, already. "Did you know that Denda invited me to go with him?" Damn you! Ask me!
"I see," Zan frowned. "I'm sure you'll have a good time.
"I said no." Oh well. If the mountain won't come to Mohammed... "I told him I wanted to go with someone else."
"You did?" Zan raised his eyebrows. "Who?"
"You." This is playing just right.
"You want to go to the ball with me?" the look on Zan's face was incredulous.
Bingo.
"Thank you, Zan," she reached up and gave him a gentle kiss on his cheek. Gullible, or what? "I'd love to go to the ball with you."
His eyes narrowed. Zan pursed his lips and pinched them between his thumb and forefinger.
"What just happened here?" he shook his head with a wry smile. "You, my lady, are very dangerous."
"Uh huh," Liz nodded. "Now, as you are aware, I'm a visiting dignitary, so I can hardly attend the ball without my chaperone."
"Of course," he nodded gravely. "The Lady Maria will be attending you?"
"She will," Liz nodded. Her eyes sparkled as her lips twisted into an impish smile. "And you will, of course, be attended by Lord Rath."
It was not a request. Zan could only chuckle as he nodded in agreement.
"I expect to see you at my apartment two hours before the start of the ball. Alone, yeah?" she continued.
"What about Rath?"
"We can pick him up on the way."
"And the Lady Maria?"
"She will be getting ready in her own room."
"So..." his eyes narrowed with suspicion. "I will be in your chamber... with no chaperone?"
He seemed a little uncomfortable which surprised Liz, considering the information that Denda had given her.
"I trust you to be on your best behavior, Zan," She gave him a hard look. "If I want to, I can still hit you with one of those sticks."
Zan's eyes widened and he nodded his head.
"Why do you require my presence two hours before the ball starts?"
"I really think we should, you know, just talk. Get to know each other better. I mean, with all these lessons, and things, we're not going to get much time to find out things."
He paused, deep in thought. At last he shrugged his acceptance.
"Thank you for attending the lessons with me, Lady Elizabeth," he nodded. "But you needn't come anymore. I will give you my word that I will pay attention from now on."
"But I want to come," Liz smiled. "It's kind of fun."
"Well," he scratched behind his ear. "Okay then. I had better get going. I was supposed to meet Rath for lunch. He's probably worrying where I am. I'll see you tomorrow." He took Liz's hand and gave it a gentle kiss. "Good night, Lady Elizabeth. Sleep well."
"You too, Zan," Liz rewarded him with a broad smile. He turned to leave. "Uh, Zan?"
"Yes?" he looked around.
"It's Liz. Remember? Friends?"
"Liz," he smiled. With a final bow, he was gone.

* * *

Liz stayed in the gymnasium, a small smile on her lips as she considered how much she had achieved in just one day. Zan was finally taking small steps towards becoming Max. He was behaving more like she thought he would and less like the arrogant jackass she had met just the other day. She wondered if her beating had - as Maria predicted - literally knocked some sense into him. With a soft chuckle, she pulled her cloak over her body suit, and pushed her way through the gym's doors.

"Are we not close to where Zan's lessons are taking place?" a familiar voice made her stop. Where had she heard it before?
"His lessons ended an hour or more ago," another answered. "If he really attended them."
This voice, Liz recognized. It was the voice of King Azande. She knew at once that the other voice was that of his oily seneschal. They were somewhere close by, unseen. A small voice warned her to remain still and quiet.
"But what if someone passes by?"
"No one comes this way unless they are attending lessons. And no one attends lessons at this hour." The king sounded impatient. "Now tell me. You have heard from your spy?"
"I have, you majesty."
"But he still persists with not informing you as to the whereabouts of Kivar's hideout?"
"Alas, yes. He does not believe his life will be spared."
"What has your spy told you?" the king demanded.
"Kivar has told his men that when he returns, they are to plan another raid. In the region close to the Keltican border. He thinks Kivar plans to start working to end your plans to use the Keltican tribes."
"Does he know how many will ride? Wait! What did you say? When he returns? Where is he?"
"My spy thinks that Kivar is here, in Z'ndrina."
"Rutting with my daughter whore, no doubt," Azande growled. "Have you put guards out to search for him?"
"Of course," the seneschal sounded hurt. "I have Kharden watching Vilondra's every move. If she meets with him, he knows what he must do."
"What of Ava? Is she here too?"
"All I know is that she is not at their camp. So I can only assume that she's here. No doubt, Zan will try to sneak away for his own assignation."
Liz's blood went cold.
"Keep a tighter watch on Zan," Azande ordered. "He's been acting strange these past few days. I have a sneaking suspicion that he might try to assassinate both his brother and me."
"Were you aware that both your sons have been seen in her presence?"
"I wonder if either has found out about the prophecy and thinks it refers to him?"
"I fail to see how, my lord," the seneschal whined. "It's been locked away for almost twenty years."
"It's me who it refers to, seneschal. Everyone knows that it is I who am destined to rule this world. It is I who shall receive tribute for all eternity."
"It is obvious, sire. As if any might gainsay you. But just in case, perhaps you should... take some precautions."
"Yes," the king agreed. "I might need to take a few steps to pull the teeth of my young cubs. But I think I should bring this to a swift conclusion. I shall use the tournament."
"The tournament, sire?" the seneschal gasped. "Is that wise? Young as he is, Denda has no equal in the saddle and his sword craft is second to none."
"Fear not, my trusty seneschal. I have a trick or two up my sleeve. It shall be I who will take the new and claim my immortality."

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It's that time again! :)

Hi everyone. Glad to see you back. But then, with everyone excited that Max has made an appearance, I'm not surprised. As always, thank you for your feedback, and thank you for reading my convoluted tale. :)

So many have asked about the prophecy. NO, you do not get to see it yet, and yes, you will see it soon. As to who it pertains to, how it came about, etc, all will be revealed, eventually. :)


TaffyCat - That would have been clever, setting Zan up like that, but Liz has other fish to fry. ;) And yup, Distant relatives to the Celts. ;) PS - Apart from you two latest stories, I think I've read all your works.

kissme4ever123 - Well, I have no love scene between Max and Liz planned yet, but maybe this chapter can keep you going. :)

smokie - Ah. Pulling of teeth does not necessarily equate to murder. As to why Liz, revealed later. ;) Oh, and good call. ;)

BehrObsession - Let me know if you still think Zan only made nice with Liz cause of Maria, after this chapter :) ;)

missjamie - Well, if you were a king and heard that there was some way of becoming immortal, wouldn't you try to take it? ;) Welcome, by the way. :)

roswellluver - Whip being the operative word? ;)

AJK001 - And Liz gets to work some more on her agenda tonight. ;)

frenchkiss70 - I wass missed? Aw shucks! ;) Yes, now you can see why Zan is the way he is, it's easier to accept. When did Max/Zan EVER stand a chance against Liz? ;)

auroraskey - Are you sure the prophecy refers to Liz and Zan? Ah, the woman as a ruse, huh? :) ;) Would I do something like that? ;)

Smac - I'm sure he is all too aware of Liz's influences. ;)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - And I think you will like the next few, too. ;) Yup, looks like your Max is back. ;)

LTL - Yes, Maria is making a great defensive wall for Liz. I hope no one seeks to... remove it. ;)

roswellfiend - One can certainly hope that their lives will get better, :)

Roswelllostcause - Everyone is out to get Zan. ;) Even Liz wants him! LOL.

Itzstacie - I'm sure the journey will be worth it :)

BelevnDreamsToo - By pants, I assume you mean 'Hose'? LOL.

Okay, on with the show... :)






She Will Be Loved
Maroon 5


Beauty queen of only eighteen
She had some trouble with herself
He was always there to help her
She always belonged to someone else

I drove for miles and miles
And wound up at your door
I've had you so many times but somehow
I want more

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
She will be loved

Tap on my window knock on my door
I want to make you feel beautiful
I know I tend to get so insecure
It doesn't matter anymore

It's not always rainbows and butterflies
It's compromise that moves us along
My heart is full and my door's always open
You can come anytime you want

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
She will be loved

I know where you hide
Alone in your car
Know all of the things that make you who you are
I know that goodbye means nothing at all
Comes back and begs me to catch her every time she falls

Tap on my window knock on my door
I want to make you feel beautiful

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved

Please don't try so hard to say goodbye
Please don't try so hard to say goodbye

Yeah
I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain

Try so hard to say goodbye




Part 14

"Morning," Maria yawned, pulling on her dressing gown as she stumbled out to the table to have her breakfast with Liz.
"Late night?" Liz smirked.
"Uh huh," Maria nodded. "I made Rath show me the city last night. He's such a wuss, I only have to raise my voice and he does anything I ask."
"His eagerness to do things for you might be a little more than his being a wuss," she teased.
"Please," Maria rolled her eyes. "How come he hasn't even asked me to tonight's ball, then?"
"So you do want to go with him?"
"No," Maria shook her head. "I have to 'attend' you, remember? It would have been nice to have been asked, though. Which reminds me. How are his highness's lessons going?"
Liz's face fell.
"What?" Maria looked concerned.
"He attended them all," Liz frowned. "He even stayed awake for most of them, but that's not what worries me."
"So, what is?"
"His fencing. After that first day when he made so much progress... it's all come to a standstill. He hasn't seemed to get any better. I can easily block any attack he makes, and I can still get through his defenses."
"Maybe these things take time."
"Time he doesn't have," Liz reminded her. "Denda's going to carve him up. I spoke to the fencing teacher who told me that he doesn't know of a single man in the entire kingdom who could hope to beat Denda. And Zan still won't believe me that Denda plans to kill him."
"But he's behaving himself?"
"Yeah, but..."
"Keep plugging, Liz," Maria shrugged. "It's all you can do."

There was a knock at the door.
"Who do you think has come to warn you off, today?" Maria raised her eyebrows.
"I have no idea," Liz giggled. "They've all turned up already. Unless it's Kivar or Nikolas."
"I'll go check then," Maria raised her eyes.
"Would you?" Liz smiled. "Thank you Maria."
"And you said I was getting decadent."
Maria threw her napkin onto the table and rose. She crossed to the door, opened it, and stepped back inside, looking a little startled.
"Is the Lady Elizabeth in?" Liz heard the deep voice ask.
"Uh, yeah," Maria nodded. "Who should I say is asking?"
"Would you please pass his majesty's compliments and request that she accompany me to an audience with the king?"
"She's uh..." Maria glanced at Liz, "not dressed."
"I will wait," he nodded. "Please tell her to hurry."

"Wonder what that is about," Maria frowned as Liz made herself ready for her invitation with the King. Dressed at last, she made her way to the room.
"Ready?" she looked at Maria who was finishing the buttons of her dress.
"Yeah," Maria nodded. "Let's go see what the pig wants."
Together, they stepped out into the corridor. There were six guards waiting for them. Two stood to attention on either side of their door. All of them wore regular uniform, rather than ceremonial. The two girls exchanged nervous glances.
"Lady Elizabeth has been summoned," he looked down his nose at Maria. "You have not."
"Nuh, uh," Maria shook her head. "Where Li... Elizabeth goes, I go."
"I have been authorized to detain you by force, if necessary, Lady Maria. Please do not make me do so."
"And I'll use force..."
"Maria!" Liz looked her friend in the eye. "It's okay."
"Are you sure, Liz? I mean, this is..."
"I'm sure," Liz nodded.
"Kay," Maria agreed. "But I'll find Zan. I'll tell him..."
"You will remain in your room," the officer snapped. The guards have been ordered to allow no unauthorized excursions."

* * *

"So," Liz's voice did not sound as confident as she wanted it to be. "What's going on, guys?"
She looked around at the four escorts, each moving along the corridors in a state of caution. Each had their hand on their sword hilts. There were additional guards situated at the doors they passed. They, like her escort, said nothing.
"Is everything okay?"
The soldiers remained silent so Liz gave up. The throne room's antechamber was deserted, apart from a squad of soldiers who stood by each doorway, their halberds held at the ready. Even the guards at the door to the throne room itself were dressed for battle rather than ceremony. As her escort approached the door, the guards opened it. There was no repetition of the formal procedure.

Inside the throne room were as many soldiers as there were outside. The King smiled at her when she entered the room. Beside him, Queen Layola glared with what could only be described as pure venom.
"Lady Elizabeth," King Azande nodded.
"Your Majesty," Liz gave her head a brief nod. "Perhaps you can tell me what's going on? Why are there soldiers everywhere?"
He looked at her for a moment.
"There was an attempt on my son's life early this morning," he told her.
"Oh, my God!" Liz raised her hand to her mouth. "Is Zan all right? Was he hurt?"
"The attempt was not on Zan's life," he spoke slowly through clenched teeth. "And Denda is quite well. The assassin fled after his failed attempt, which is why we have extra guards. We will find him."
Liz felt torn. On the one hand, she was glad that Zan had not even been the target, let alone hurt. On the other, she was disappointed that Denda had survived, as horrible as she realized that made her sound. If Denda had died, Zan would be safe.
"And when we do," Azande's voice went cold. "He... or she, shall die. Horribly. But not before we learn who they were working for."
"She?" Liz jumped. "You don't think...?"
"No," he chuckled. "As frightening as you were to Zan, I have no doubt that you do not have it within you to take a life."
"So, who do you think did it?"
"Let's just say, that nobility of any kind will not protect the 'would be' murderer from the executioner's block," he shrugged. "Now, the reason I summoned you... there is something that I need your assistance in."
"How can I help?"
"Tell me, how old are you?"
"How old?" Liz blinked. "I... I'm sixteen."
"I see," he nodded, rubbing his chin. "Tell me about your schooling."
"What do you want to know?"
"Can you read and write?"
"Yes," Liz blinked with surprise. "Of course I can. I'm considered to be a very good student, actually. Probably the best in our school. Some of the other students even call me a brainiac."
"What is a brainiac?" the king frowned.
"In the dictionary, it says 'See Elizabeth Parker'," Liz smirked. She had always wanted to do that.
"You mean someone clever," the king responded dryly. "Tell me about your family status."
Liz cast her mind back to her discussion with Vilondra.
"My father's a... this merchant. He's... like responsible for feeding a huge section of the community. He even arranges these special functions for visiting, uh... dignitaries, and for the most senior people among us. He says he's the richest man in all the world, and I believe him."
"Richer then I?" the king's eyes widened.
"From what I've seen," Liz smirked. "I'd have to say, yes."
"So your father is prominent amongst his peers?"
"Yeah," Liz nodded. "I'd say so. Everyone important knows him."
"Is he related to your royal family in some way?"
"No," Liz shook her head. "We don't uh... we don't have a royal family. We elect a new leader every four years or so."
"Elect?" Azande stood up, looking angry. "You are one of those who propose the abolition of the monarchy? Like Kivar?"
"I don't want to change any system," Liz shook her head. "And trust me, I hate Kivar as much as you do. Probably more."
"I see," the king sat down, placated by her answer. "And you are as yet, unbetrothed?"
"Unbetro... Um, no," Liz shook her head. "No, no one's asked me to marry them yet. And I don't plan to until I'm ready."
"But has your father made... any arrangements? With another merchant, perhaps?"
"For me to get married?" Liz stared at him with her mouth hanging open. "Of course not."
"And do you still maintain your maidenhead?"
"What?" Liz turned scarlet.
"He asked," Layola sneered, "if you're a virgin."
"I know what he said," Liz spat, glaring at the queen. "And you know what? That's kind of personal."
"Nevertheless, I require an answer."
"Of course she's not," Layola looked at her with disdain, her nose wrinkling. "She was with Denda the other night, wasn't she?"
"For your information," Liz's eyes narrowed with hate, "I never allowed your obnoxious son to... touch me, nor will I ever allow that lecherous... person do so, ever."
"So you are still a virgin."
"Of course I am!" Liz turned to stare at the king, anger sparkling in her eyes.
The king looked at Liz, staring hard at her. When his eyes started to appraise her body, she started to feel more than a little uncomfortable. She longed to see the green streaks of energy flickering on the back of her hands so that she could blast him.
"Is that all?" she demanded. "Can I go now?"
"Of course," the king nodded. He waved his hand.
As Liz left the throne room, accompanied again by her guards, she heard Layola's explosion even through the heavy doors.
"What the hell was that about?" the Queen screeched.
"My thoughts exactly," Liz muttered to no one in particular.

* * *

"So what was that all about?" Maria exploded with relief when Liz returned.
"I heard that a lot," Liz rolled her eyes. "And to be honest, I have no idea."
"So he must have said something."
"He asked me questions about myself. My age, schooling, marital status..."
"Maybe he wants to give you your Social Security card," Maria grinned.
"Right," Liz giggled.
"So, what's with the beefed up security?" Maria glanced at the door outside of which the two security guards were still standing guard. "They weren't there just to stop me following you." She paused. "Were they?"
"No," Liz shook her head. "Someone tried to kill Denda."
"Tried?" Maria raised her eyebrows. "As in the pig's still alive?"
"Yeah," Liz nodded. "But whoever tried it escaped and is probably still in the castle."
"Hence the guards. I thought Denda was supposed to be, like, superman or something. So what did they use? Green Kryptonite?"
"All I know for sure is that someone tried to kill him but failed.
"I'm sensing that you're worried about this," Maria frowned.
"I think..." Liz looked concerned. "Azande said that when they caught the assassin and found out who hired him, that they would be executed."
"So?" Maria shrugged. "This is their way of justice, even if I do think Denda's an obnoxious braggart who deserves to be bumped off."
"Even if they were... royalty."
"You think Zan had something to do with this?" Maria's eyes narrowed.
"I told him about Denda's plans," Liz dropped her voice as she glanced at the door. "And he's made no improvements in his fencing." She looked around the room and leaned closer to Maria. "What if he realized that I was telling the truth and knowing that he doesn't stand a chance against Denda, he hired an assassin?"
"You don't believe that," Maria stated. "You know as well as I do that Zan could never do such a thing. Basically, he'd still be Max at heart, right?"
"Yeah," Liz sighed. I guess you're right." Liz threw her arms in frustration. "It's just... he's getting so close to being Max and then all this happens. Kivar and Ava and now... this. Maria, he's going to be killed."
"You still have time, Liz," Maria placed a sympathetic hand over Liz's arm. "At the ball, tonight, show him such a great time that he'll move heaven and earth... Antar, to sample that again."

* * *

Both Liz and Maria were nearly ready for tonight's ball. Dressed in long bathrobes, their hair and their makeup had already been completed by Adaile.
"Apart from your dresses," Adaile looked over her two young charges and smiled, "that's all I can do." She looked at Liz. "And I know of at least one heart that will race at the sight of you."
"No you don't," Maria rolled her eyes. "The person you're thinking about doesn't even have one."
"I must protest!" Adaile glared at Maria. She turned to face Liz again. "Prince Denda cares a great deal for you, Lady Elizabeth. If you would just give him a chance, you'd see..."
A knocking at the door halted her praise for the prince.
"Excuse me," Adaile huffed, annoyed at the interruption. She crossed to the door.
"What are you doing here?" Adaile's voice was cold and filled with loathing. She did, however, remember her protocol. She curtsied. "Your highness."
"I, uh," Zan's voice was heard from the door. He sounded confused. "I was... summonsed."
"Summoned, Prince Zan?" the lady in waiting sounded insulted. "I don't think so. The ladies are still getting ready."
"Oh, I..."
"Show him in, Adaile," Liz commanded.
"Lady Elizabeth?" she turned to face her mistress. "But it is Prince Zan."
"I know. I asked him to come by," Liz tried to hide her smile at Adaile's reaction. "I thought it would be nice to talk to him, you know, get to know him better. Seeing as he's my date for the ball tonight."
"But... I thought..." Adaile spluttered. "What of Prince Denda?"
"I hear he's free," Maria smirked. "If you hurry, maybe you can offer yourself as a replacement. You might even get lucky."
Adaile's eyes flashed with anger.
"If I have my ladies permission," she forced through clenched teeth, "I shall retire."
"I don't think she likes me," Maria grinned as Adaile departed.
"I can't think why," Liz rolled her eyes.
"So, Zan," Maria called, grinning. "You gonna stand there all day, or what?"
"Is it alright to come in?" his eyes went from one to the other, though Maria noticed that they lingered longest on Liz.
"Oh, Zan," Liz scurried to the door. "Of course it is."
"She took his arm and guided him into the apartment.
"But you are as yet, undressed!" his eyes widened.
Liz flashed him a warm smile as his eyes roamed up and down her robe clad figure. He seemed genuine in his concern for her dress.
"No, no," she lowered her eyes in a bashful display of shyness. "It's uh, okay."
"Miaow," Maria rubbed her arm against Zan. She gave him a wink and purred like a contented kitten. "Okay. So you two have plans, huh? I'll make myself scarce. Three's a crowd and all."
"Oh, Maria," Liz apologized to her friend with her eyes. "You don't have to... I mean, Zan wouldn't mind..." She glanced at the prince for confirmation.
Although he looked confused, Zan nodded, tearing his gaze from Liz to look at Maria.
"Nah," she shook her head with a laugh. "You two pussy cats have fun." Maria scurried into her bedroom, hiding her giggling behind her hands before she closed the door behind her.

"Do you have any idea what that was about?" Liz frowned at Zan. "What was with the talk about cats?"
"She's your friend," Zan shrugged, using every politic muscle in his body to feign his ignorance. "You uh, wanted to talk to me? To get to know me better sort of thing, you said."
"Yeah," Liz nodded, her eyes twinkling.
"Would you, uh," Zan looked down from Liz's face, "like to finish dressing first?"
Liz looked down at her robe.
"It's okay," she smiled. "I'm all covered up, right? And Maria's only in the next room, so..."
"Okay," Zan nodded, taking a deep breath. "What was it you wanted to know?"
"Well, actually..." Liz gave a mischievous grin.
"Actually, what?" Zan's eyes narrowed with suspicion.
Liz took Zan's hand, pleased that he did not resist and led him into her bathroom. She pointed at the bathtub filled with hot water and soap suds.
"Bath," Liz pointed, stopping at the door.
"I already bathed," he complained, backing his way from the room.
"Then do it again," she pushed him in again. She saw that he was about to say something. "Do it for me, okay? And pull that curtain around in case I need to get something."
"Okay," he nodded, albeit with reluctance. He entered the bathroom, paused for a moment and with a soft smile at Liz, pushed the door closed.

* * *

"Uh, Liz?" Zan called from the bathroom door. "Where is my clothing? I, uh... left them hanging here on the back of the door."
Liz smirked at Zan peering through the narrow gap as he hid behind the door.
"I, uh, took them. Thanks for putting them where I could reach."
"What?" he gasped.
"Relax," she chuckled. "I didn't peek."
"But what am I to wear?" Zan sounded a little worried.
"Oh, yeah," Liz's eyes went dark. "Uhm, here." She passed a large robe through the gap.
Moments later, Zan, now wearing the robe, entered Liz's bedroom from her private bathroom.
"This is a man's robe," his voice held an undercurrent of betrayal.
"Well, yeah," Liz smiled. "You'd look silly in a ladies one. I sort of arranged for one to be left here."
"Oh," Zan whispered. His eyes fell to the floor. "Perhaps this wasn't such a good idea."
"What?" Liz started to panic. Then she realized where his thoughts were leading him. "No, Zan. I had it brought here for you. No one else. Especially not your brother." She stepped closer to him. "I'm really not interested in him. At all."
Zan looked up.
"Really?" his eyes brightened.
"Really," she smiled. "Friends again?"
"Always," he rewarded her with a lopsided grin.
"Good," mischief danced across her eyes. "'Cause it's time to lose that beard and that moustache. Can you, you know," she passed her hand in front of her face, "take it all off?"
"I will not!" he gasped with indignation.
Too fast for him to stop her, Liz reached up to his face, grabbed a tuft of his facial hair between her thumb and forefinger and tugged. Hard.
"Ouch!" he cried, trying to swat her hand away.
Liz reached with her other hand and pulled some more hair on the opposite side of his face.
"Stop that!" he glared at her.
"I will not!" Liz tried to copy his stern look of indignation but failed due to her inability to stop giggling. She reached for another tuft.
"Okay!" he tried to duck this new attack from Liz, but failed. "I give! I give! I'll remove it."
With a smirk of self satisfaction, Liz stepped away and laced her fingers behind her back while smiling innocently. Zan snorted, but passed his hand across his face, removing every last trace of the tatty beard and the moustache.
"Satisfied?" he demanded, trying to sound hurt.
Liz's huge, bright smile would have been reward enough but when she checked the smooth results of his handiwork by gently caressing his face between her warm, small hands, he felt his knees start to tremble. They all but melted when she reached up on her tip toes, with Zan's face still cupped in her hands and gave him a light, warm kiss on his lips.

Feeling pleased with herself, and fighting her own wave of jelly legs, she pressed on with her plan.
"Sit down," she squeaked. She cleared her throat. "Sit down over there." She pointed to a seat in front of her large vanity mirror.
Looking more than a little suspicious and still reacting to her kiss, Zan did not question her and sat where he was told. Liz stepped behind him and ran her fingers through his hair. She pulled a face, clearly not impressed with his cut.
"What are you doing?" his eyes widened when she produced a pair of scissors and a comb.
"I know you could easily do this yourself," Liz remarked as she cast a critical eye over him, "but it's hard to explain just how I want it. It would be simpler for me to do it myself."
"Are you sure you know what you are doing?" his eyes narrowed.
"Yeah," Liz nodded with confidence. "And even if I do make a mess - which I won't - you can just..." Smiling, she passed her hand over her head.
"You make awfully free with my abilities," Zan relaxed back into the chair, granting Liz permission to begin.
While she passed the comb through his hair, holding up tufts and using the scissors to cut it, Zan watched her reflection in the mirror. He marveled at the serious expression of concentration as she worked. He held back the grin when he saw her dainty tongue poking through the side of her luscious lips while she cast her steady eye over her task. His own lips started to tingle as he remembered her kiss and hoped that it would not be too long before he would experience that particular sensation again. He broke into a wide, happy smile when he realized that with his compliance to her demands, that was a distinct possibility.
"What?" Liz couldn't help smiling back.
"Nothing," he forced his mouth into a neutral expression but couldn't prevent his eyes from continuing to smile. He looked at his hair in the mirror instead. "You're, uh, doing a good job."
"Thank you," her eyes sparkled.

"That looks... good," Zan twisted his head this way and that as he inspected his new hair style.
"Do you like it?" Liz bit her bottom lip.
"I do," he nodded. "Is... Is this what... uhm, Max, in your dream, looked like?"
"Yeah?" Liz nodded, a momentary sadness appearing in her eyes. "Do you mind? That I made you look like him, I mean?"
"No," he shook his head, giving her a smile to ease her discomfort. "He was a lucky man. You must tell me about your dream, some time."
"Not right now," Liz caressed Zan's shoulders. "We need to finish getting ready for the ball."
"You're okay with this? With me taking you to the ball, I mean."
"Of course I am," Liz couldn't help smiling. "It's what I wanted. Why do you think I went to all that trouble to persuade you to ask me?"
"Wouldn't you rather Max take you?"
"You are Max," she smiled, touching his face. "Maybe not completely, but there's hope for you, yet."
"Then, I shall take encouragement from that and leave you, while we dress for the occasion."
"Well, actually..."
"Again?" Zan raised a single eyebrow.
"I, uh, already have your formal clothes, here."
"You are full of surprises," he chuckled. "And you know my size?"
"I know Max's size. And if I got it wrong, there's always..."
"My powers again," Zan finished, dryly.
"Sorry," Liz grimmaced. "I mean, please don't think I'm using you, but..."
"You really are afraid for me, aren't you," Zan's voice was low and throaty.
"Yeah, Liz nodded. "Denda told me what he was going to do and I know you won't believe it... It's just that I couldn't handle it if anything happened to you. Zan, I almost went mad when I found out that Max was just a dream."
"I thank you for your concern," Zan stepped closer to her. His face leaned forward and their foreheads touched. "I promise you that nothing will happen to me, in this castle."
Liz nodded.
"Now, pass me my clothing so that we might finish our preparations." He started to grin. "It wouldn't do to turn up to collect my lady, late."
"Yeah, sure," she grinned. Liz handed Zan a bundle of clothing. "You change here in my bedroom. I'll, uh, get dressed in my bathroom."

Although technically a doublet and hose ensemble, Zan's outfit resembled a traditional suit that Liz was more accustomed to. It was made in Royal blue with a white trimming. Zan's eyes widened, but he nodded in appreciation as he ran his hands over the cloth. When Liz emerged from the bathroom, it was all Zan could do to keep his heart from beating a military tattoo. Her dress was all white, worn off the shoulder. Waves of lace cascaded down her body and as she walked, Zan was sure he could see right through to her bare flesh. Her hair, previously bound about her head, now fell like a series of curly waterfalls, about her shoulders.
"Is everything okay, Zan?"
"Barely," he managed to gasp.

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Hi everyone!

I love it when scenes I write get the desired reaction. You all seemed to have enjoyed Liz and Zan's touching og foreheads. :) I wonder why? :wink:

Thank you all so very much for your feedback. It really help to make my day when I log in and see your messages for me. :)

youre my dreamgirl - Yes, the ball will be most interesting! :wink:

Doublestuf - Hello and welcome. Like the name, BTW! :wink: I hapen to have a weakness for oreos, but sadly, am unable to satisfy my cravings! I'm glad you enjoyed BRH. Thank you for telling me. Thank you for your kind words. :) Have you read my other stories? Check out my web site (button at the end of my post) You'll have to ask the other's if it's worth it. LOL! As for this story, well, I hipe you will stick around for the ride and that my ending will impress you as much as BRH. :wink:

kissme4ever123 - Slowly but surely, Max is getting closer. :)

TaffyCat - Ah, Zan's confidence. That's a need to know basis, and as yet... LOL. You will find out about Zan's confidence all in good time. :) Rath is attending Zan in the same way that Maria is attending Liz. :)

roswellluver - Denda? Do you mean Azande? All in good time :)

Smac - I knew that chapter would be enjoyed :) Did you appreciate how I got the bad part over with and left you with the good? How about that for a change? :wink:

Sarah Whitman - Ah yes, Zan and his healing. Well, as yet, no one seems to have displayed any of their 'dream state' powers, so maybe Zan cannot heal. And perhaps it was a measure of Liz's belief that Max is there that she trusted she could lose it in front of him, when she couldn't in front of Denda. Ah, the forgotten second. Remember how the old woman told Liz that she would have her heart torn by two? Seems that someone surmised that Liz would fall in love with Denda as well as Zan. :wink:

cherie - Actually, I don;t think it was the first time Zan scratched his ear. :wink:

aurorasky - Well, the answers will come out, just not yet. :)

frenchkiss70 - :) Glad you likedthe dreamer scene, even if it WAS tame. Liz does seem to be having a positive effect, doesn't she? :wink:

roswellfiend - Pretty much everyone loved it. Except Denda. :wink:

smokie - YOu're welcome. Heck, you deserved it :) Interesting, my beta was uncomfortable with Liz doing that to Zan. But as I pointed out, if he didn't like it, he could bring it back. As for a part in the middle of the week, how about I miss next friday and post the following wednesday instead? :wink: Tell you what. I will post a bonus midweek part right after we share a Jack Daniels. Deal? :wink: Oh no! Please don;t stop speculating! I love it!

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Well, the King may have been rude, but he had his reasons. I guess for the duration of the Ball, we have Max rather than Zan. Well, almost. Glad you enjoyed it. More to come :)

Asabetha - Or maybe it's the other way around? :wink:

LTL - Yeah. :) I enjoyed writing those baby steps. And some more on the way. You see what is wrong in Denmark tonight, BTW. And it ain't Hamlet nor Ophelia!

missjamie - Well, wait no more! :)

AJK001 - Well, with me writing it, you know that the obstacles ill never be small. :wink:

mareli - Who can resist immortality? And with someone like Liz beside you for all eternity? :wink:

BehrObsession - Yeah, but in her dream, Max ALWAYS loved her.

BelevnDreamsToo - Well, I had to get Zan looking like Max, didn't I? That three stooges haircut was just too much for me to think about any more. :wink:

foreverdreamer15 - Well, seeing that I tend to concentrate on Liz's point of view, we won;t really see what the other's think. But you can guess.

Roswelllostcause - I hope I can keep going with the better and betters. But then, I know what's coming up, so I think I can keep you interested. :)

Okay, I hope you all enjoy the next part. Take care everyone. And know my thoughts are with you tomorrow. And also with anyone unfortuneate to be living near the hurricane sites.

Wayne




Wonderful Tonight
Eric Clapton


It's late in the evening
She's wondering what clothes to wear
She puts on her make up
And brushes her long blonde hair
And then she asks me
Do I look alright
And I say yes, you look wonderful tonight

We go a party
And everyone turns to see
This beautiful lady
That's walking around with me
And then she asks me
Do you feel alright
And I say yes, I feel wonderful tonight

I feel wonderful
Because I see the love light in your eyes
And the wonder of it all
Is that you just don't realize
How much I love you

It's time to go home now
And I've got an aching head
So I give her the car keys
She helps me to bed
And then I tell her
As I turn out the light
I say my darling, you were wonderful tonight
Oh my darling, you were wonderful tonight



Part 15

They entered the grand ballroom together, with Liz having placed her hand formally over Zan's arm. Behind him, still shaking his head in wonder over his friend's startling transformation at the hands of this newcomer, Rath escorted Maria, her hand also formally over Rath's arm.
"This isn't really my thing," Zan whispered to her as the people they passed gawked at them. They seemed as... stunned as Rath had been. "Tell me again how you persuaded me to come?"
"You asked me, of course," Liz smiled up at him.
"I'm sure treachery was involved somewhere along the way."
"Do I look treacherous?" Liz fluttered her eyebrows.
"Treacherous, no," Zan groaned. "Devious, maybe. Absolutely... wonderful...?" He nodded. "Definitely."
"Well, that's all right then," she laughed. "Now relax. You'll do fine." Liz glanced at the area in front of the orchestra where there were long lines of couples moving in what appeared to be formal dance moves. "You'll, uh, have to teach me how to do that."
"You don't dance where you come from?" Zan looked surprised.
"We do," Liz nodded. "Just not like that."
"I, uh... I'm not so sure that I'm the one to teach you," he looked down at his feet. "I dance as well as I fence."
"But I don't want to learn from anyone else," Liz shook her head. "If you won't dance, then neither will I."
"Do you like to dance? At home, I mean."
"I love it," Liz grinned.
"Then," Zan sighed, "I shall endeavor to do my best."
"Thank you, Zan," Liz squeezed his arm.

"I would like a word with you!" Vilondra's icy voice appeared from nowhere, calling Liz's attention from her 'date'. The couple turned to face her. "Just what..." Vilondra stopped. She stared at Liz's partner. Her mouth fell open in disbelief. "Zan? Is that... you?"
"Hello, Vilondra," he smiled. "I see you've already met my date."
"Your da...?" She grabbed Liz's spare arm and gave an ungentle tug. "Excuse us, brother mine. Girl's talk."
Zan could only watch as his sister pulled his date to a quiet corner of the room.
"There's a first," Rath smirked.
Zan turned to face his friend.
"Shut up," he spat."
"Will Liz be okay?" Maria stared at her friend and Zan's sister. The conversation she had overheard sprang to mind.
"Vilondra won't hurt her," Zan nodded. "She's just being..."
"Vilondra," Maria did not seem pacified.

* * *

"Why haven't you gone yet?" Vilondra demanded.
"Why do you seem so surprised that I haven't?" Liz retorted.
"I told you to leave!"
"And I told you that I had something to do."
"Just what have you done to my brother?"
"Do you like it?" Liz turned to smile at Zan. "It's a work in progress." Her eyes grew hard. "I'm trying to make sure that neither you nor Kivar gets the chance to kill him."
"I... I don't know what you're talking about," Vilondra sounded indignant.
"Don't you?" Liz smirked. "How is Kivar, by the way? I heard he paid you a visit, recently. He and his sidekick, Nikolas."
"How do you know about that?" Her indignant demeanor turned to shock.
"I have eyes and ears everywhere. Tell me. Does Zan know that you plot to kill him?"
"You don't know what you're talking about," Vilondra gave a defiant snort. "I love my brother."
"Yeah, right," Liz rolled her eyes. "You love him so much, you try to keep the only girl who isn't after his kingdom away from him."
"Fine!" Vilondra snapped. "Play at being a couple. But remember this. I'll be keeping an eye on you."
"And 'I' will be keeping all of 'my' eyes on you."

* * *

"Is everything alright, Liz?" Zan's voice was filled with concern upon her return.
"Fine!" she spat.
Liz regretted her outburst the moment she saw Zan's eyes cloud over. She wished she could take it back.
"Sorry," she placed an apologetic hand on his arm. "Even in my dream, your sister and I had our moments. It was wrong of me to take it out on you."
"Sometimes," Zan sighed as he watched his sister stamp across the ballroom, "I think Vilondra cares too much for my well being."
"Something like that," Liz commented dryly. "Come on," she took his hand and pulled him in the direction of the dance floor. "Time you taught me to dance."
Zan looked over to Rath for help but he was met with the sight and sound of Rath laughing at him.
"Come on, Spaceboy," Maria grabbed Rath's arm, silencing his mirth. "Ditto."

"Okay," Zan gave a sigh that suggested that while he was unhappy being on the dance floor, he was pleased that it was with Liz. "First, you give me a curtsy."
Liz lifted the sides of her dress, lifted them slightly, tucked her left leg behind her right and dipped a little.
"Then, I give you a bow," Zan bowed to her. "Then, you take my right hand in yours. Like this," Zan carefully folded Liz's small hand into his, remembering how warm and soft it felt against his cheek. He raised it about head height. Beside him, Zan saw Maria copy the motion with Rath. "Okay, take two steps back, we walk a wide circle, like so," Zan led Liz to walk in a complete loop, both ending up where they had started from. "We take two steps toward one another and then change hands."
"Don't tell me," Liz smiled. "Then we do it again?"
"Yeah," Zan grinned back. "Except for the circle. We, uh, walk the other way."
"I'm not sure I can take all the excitement," Liz chuckled.
Zan remained silent as they finished their walk.
"Now, you loop your right arm onto the right arm of the gentleman to my right. You walk around him till you face him. You curtsy, he'll bow and so it goes."
At the appropriate moment, Liz reached for Rath's right arm. He escorted her full circle whereupon she gave him a curtsy.

"Was the haircut your idea?" Rath asked as he bowed to Liz.
"Yeah," Liz nodded, letting Rath take her hand. "Do you like it?"
"It seems... strange. I have not seen Zan's face devoid of his whiskers since he started his walk to manhood."
"There's a first time for everything, Rath. Don't you think that it makes him more... handsome?"
"Handsome like Max?"
"Is that so wrong?" she widened her eyes. "Am I hurting him in any way?"
He studied her for a moment, before casting a glance around the ballroom.
"I fear that you may be hurting the young ladies of our aristocracy more," he smiled. "I think that they wonder why it was that you saw what they could not."
"You didn't answer my question," Liz accused, glancing at the smitten younf ladies.
"Which one?"
"Either," she grinned as she came to complete her final circle with Rath. "Do you like it and am I hurting him?"
Rath guided Liz toward the older gentleman waiting for her.
"Yes," he called. "And I don't know."
"Look after him, Rath," Liz replied as she finished her promenade. "Protect him."

Rath nodded as Liz looked up at her new partner, a man who appeared to be at least in his mid fifties. He was grinning like a cat that had just swallowed the canary. Rolling her eyes, Liz curtsied.
"You look particularly lovely," he commented as he bowed in return. "Lady Elizabeth, isn't it?"
"Thank you," Liz sighed. "And yes, it is."
"I am Count Valerin."
"Pleased to meet you," Liz's eyes looked down the line where Zan was now dancing with an elderly dowager. She had to struggle to hide her smile when she saw his bored, petulant expression. It was one that she had not seen for some time.
"As well as my vast land holding in the west, I hold a commission in His Majesties army," Count Valerin continued. "I am probably the fourth or fifth wealthiest man in all of Antar, including the members of the royal family."
"How nice," Liz nodded, stifling her giggle when the dowager reached up and ran her hand along Zan's smooth chin.
"Are you, perhaps, not yet betrothed?"
"Excuse me?" Liz turned to glare at the man. "Why does everyone keep asking me that?"
"Because," he smiled, "you are an attractive young lady, of child bearing age. My own wife passed away six months back and I am yet heir-less. I am seeking a new bride who will present me with a fine son. With whom should I speak concerning our engagement?"
"That will be difficult," Liz grimaced. "You will have to speak to my father. He's in America. Roswell, New Mexico," a pang of homesickness swelled through her.
"Is it far? Perhaps I should arrange to visit him. Or will he perhaps, be visiting Antar?"
"No point," Liz rolled her eyes. "I, uh, we... are looking elsewhere."
"The old man caught Liz's eyes drifting to Zan.
"The prince?" he raised his eyes. "I should look elsewhere, if I were you."
"It's a good job you're not me, then, isn't it?" Liz danced across to the next person in the line.

"When do I get to dance with Zan again?" Liz looked down the line again to where Zan seemed to be getting farther away.
"My dear," her new partner chuckled. "With the number of people in attendance tonight, you might be lucky and dance with the prince one more time. Unless he uses his royal prerogative and cut into a new line position."
"I see," Liz's voice grew distant. "If you will excuse, I feel kinda tired."
"Of course," the man failed to hide his disappointment but he gave a gracious bow. "My Lady."

"Excuse me," Liz tapped Zan's current partner's shoulder. "I'm sorry to bother you but there's something that I must urgently discuss with Prince Zan."
The woman looked a little bemused but she gave Zan a curtsy and backed away.
"Is something wrong, Liz?" Zan's face was filled with concern.
"Yes," Liz nodded. "Something is very wrong."
"Is it something I might be able to rectify?"
"As a matter of fact," she grinned. "It is. I wanted to come to this ball so that I could spend time with you. Not with every Tom, Dick and Harry."
"I don't know these people," Zan shook his head.
"Never mind," Liz rolled her eyes.
"I tried to warn you," Zan led her away from the dancers. "That is the reason why I don't dance. Too many people asking too many questions."
"We could always dance my way," Liz's eyes sparkled in the light.
"I don't know how," Zan shook his head.
"It's easy. Want to learn?"
"My Lady," he gave a florid bow. "I place myself completely in your hands."
"Are you making fun of me?" Liz narrowed her eyes.
"Only a little, Liz," Zan smiled. "Only a little.

* * *

Once again, Liz took Zan's hand and pulled him to the dance floor. She found a small space not taken up by the lines of the other dancers.
"Okay," Liz turned to face him. She took a deep breath. "You place your arms around my waist, like this." She pulled Zan's hands around to the small of her back, pulling his body against hers. "And I do this," Liz laced her hands over Zan's shoulders and behind his neck. "Higher, buster," she commanded when she felt his hands start to move over the gentle swell of her buttocks.
Zan's hands moved causing Liz to giggle.
"Now what?" Zan asked, basking in the strange sensations that were coursing through his body.
"Now, we just move with the music." Liz murmured into his chest. She too was enjoying the feelings that Max, no, Zan was evoking within her.
"Uh, Liz?" Zan whispered. "Everyone's staring at us."
"Let them," Liz giggled. "Just shut up and dance."
It felt so right, so perfect dancing with Zan like this. He was so Max like that she did not complain when his hands started to lightly caress her backside again. Neither did she pull away when she felt Zan's obvious arousal pressing at her, even as he tried so very hard to hide it.
"Did I tell you how lovely you look, tonight, Liz?" Max's soft words tugged at her heart. "So beautiful, so loyal, so... true."
"Max," she sighed, pushing herself against him. This was almost pure heaven. Nothing could break the spell that had been cast over her. "Perhaps dreams can come true," she murmured softly.

"Mind if I cut in, big brother?" Denda's higher pitched voice intruded upon Liz's bliss. "That looks like fun."
"Or not," Liz groaned. "Zan, no. This is supposed to be you and me."
Zan looked from Liz to Denda.
"It's only for one dance, Lady Elizabeth," Denda smirked. "And Zan doesn't mind. Do you, Zan?"
Convinced that Zan would submit, Denda was already attempting to wrap Liz into his arms. Liz was struggling to resist.
"Ouch!" Zan cried as a sharp pain on his shin dragged his attention from Liz's plight.
Having kicked him, Maria was now glaring at Zan.
"What are you, Zan?" she demanded. "A man or a mouse? Liz is trying her best for you. She got on the wrong side of almost everyone, just for you. Can't you see that she doesn't want to dance with him? Especially like how she danced with you."
"But... he's my little brother," Zan complained. "He will become the King one day."
"Were you aware that he tried to rape her?"
"What?" Zan's face grew angry. "Is this true?"
Beside Maria, Rath nodded.
"It was the night she had dinner with him. She fought him off."
Zan took a deep breath and stepped over to where Liz was trying to keep Denda's hands above her waist.
"Sorry, little brother," he pulled Denda away. "The lady doesn't seem to want to dance anymore."
With Liz safely wrapped in his arm, Zan led her away.
"Why is everyone gawking like that?" Maria glanced at the people staring with looks of incredulity.
"That's the first time Zan's stood up to him," Rath pointed at Denda who was glaring at the departing couple in a near rage.
Twice, his anger all too apparent, Denda's hand strayed to his hip. The side where his sword should have been.
"About time," Maria smirked.

* * *

"I'm sorry, Liz," Zan turned her to face him. "I didn't really understand how uncomfortable he made you feel. Most women love Denda's attention."
"Not this woman," Liz shook her head. "But I am annoyed that he broke the spell. Things like that kept happening to us in my dream, too."
"Liz," Zan looked around at the crowd. "Perhaps now would be a good time to tell me about this dream of yours. Maybe then, once I understand who this Max is that you say I can become, I will know what path to take to progress."
"You're already a lot more like Max than you were during our first meeting," Liz closed the small gap between them, placing her hand on his chest.
"You are being kind, Liz," he smiled. "But I fear that I have yet a ways to go."
"Okay," she smiled. "But I have to warn you, it's a long story."
"Then I shall enjoy the time that I get to spend with you, learning how to make your dream come true."

* * *

"Don't you find this style of dancing a little... intimate?" Rath was holding his hips away from Maria as he danced with her, 'Earth' style.
"You mean you're sporting a woody and it embarrasses you, right?" Maria laughed.
"I don't understand."
"You're, uh... aroused."
"Are you suggesting that I am unable to control my own body in your presence?" He sounded offended.
"Where I come from," Maria smirked, "we call a spade a spade."
"And if you think that any such, uh, arousal has anything to do with you..."
"Uh huh. If not me, then who?" Maria looked around. "Those manly guards over there?"
Rath looked at the guards and then at himself.
"You think they look more masculine than me?"
"Face it, Rath," Maria shook her head. "You're a wuss. You're even too scared to admit that you got a stiffy dancing with me. Back home, you expect it. And sometimes, it's a compliment. I mean, it shows that you're not a block of wood, right? I'd have been worried if I got no reaction at all. That would have meant that you don't find me attractive, which," Maria waved her hand over herself, "let's face it, I'm hot. So that would only mean that you prefer guys. Which reminds me. I'll have to ask Liz if Zan got a woody. You didn't see 'him' pulling away, so who knows? Either they're as comfortable here as they were in her dream or he swings the other way too. Hey, you two aren't...?"
Rath shut Maria up the only way he could think of. He grabbed the back of her head and pulled her face to his. Their lips locked and although Maria initially struggled to break away, she soon relaxed, leaned into Rath and enjoyed the kiss. She idly wondered if, as in Liz's dream she kissed her Czechoslovakian before her friend kissed hers.

* * *

"Wow," Zan raised his eyebrows. "That was some dream."
"Tell me about it," Liz gave a sad, wry smile.
"So this Max, he really must have meant something to you. I mean, most other women would have given up on him."
"Yeah," Liz nodded, wiping away the tears that had returned during her retelling of the dream.
"And you must have meant a lot to him, because he never stopped loving you. If I had found the woman I love in the bed of another, I don't think that I would be as forgiving. I don't think that my heart is as big as Max's."
"If you had asked Max if he could forgive an act like that, before it happened, he would have said no, too. But he did forgive me. Eventually."
"You must have been most distressed when you awoke and discovered that it had all been a dream."
"You have no idea," Liz shifted in discomfort.
"So what led you to believe that I am, or rather can become your Max? I mean, how did you know that I was here?"
"I went to the rocks in my dream; they were real. We found the silver handprint and the door opened when I put my hand on it. At first, I thought I would find you inside. But I found the, uh..."
"The granolith," Zan completed in a chilled hush.
Liz noticed that his face had gone white.
"What is it, Zan?" Liz stroked his arm. "That's the second time you've reacted... like that when I mention... it."
"What happened when you arrived here?" Zan changed the subject. "Oh, wait. You met me for the first time." He gave a self-mocking grin. "I'm surprised that you didn't jump back in and high tail it home after that, first chance you got."
"We almost did," Liz smiled. "Except that we couldn't find it." Her face fell. "Was that what I was supposed to do? Go straight home?"
"Well," Zan frowned, "seeing that I have no idea who set all this up and you seem reluctant to tell me, I must confess a lack of clarity as to the plan in which you seem to be playing an important part."
"The plan is simple, Zan," Liz poured every ounce of her sincerity into her gaze. "To turn you into Max."
"But, why?" Zan frowned, taking Liz's hand in his. "Do you plan to remain in Antar for the rest of your life? Or do you perhaps hope that I will return to Roswell, New Mexico with you?"
"I know there's no hope for the latter," Liz gave a sad sigh. "If I'm successful then you would do what you had to, to become the great King you're supposed to be. It's what Max would have done. As to staying, no, I couldn't do that either. My family..." Liz left it hanging.
"So, in order to succeed," Zan's voice went quiet, "you must yet again, sacrifice your own happiness and break your own heart."
With tears stinging her eyes, Liz just nodded.

"Zan!" Vilondra hissed from a short distance away.
He turned to look at her; she was gesticulating that he should join her.
"Go see what she wants," Liz rolled her eyes, happy for a quiet moment so that she could compose herself.
She watched him go. When he joined his sister, she was talking urgently. Twice, Zan looked back at her, his face unreadable.
"I wonder what lies she's telling him about me," she asked no one in particular.
Liz started to move across to join him when three loud bangs from a raised stage behind the orchestra called for the room's attention. The king's seneschal, still dressed in black, was waiting.
"Pray silence for the King!" he demanded, his voice booming out across the hall.
With Queen Layola in attendance, King Azande mounted the steps to the stage. He walked to the middle and gazed with what Liz assumed he considered to be benevolence before raising his arms in a gesture of all encompassing fraternity.
"My lords and ladies," he smiled. "Are we all having a wonderful time?"
The crowd reacted suitably - like the sycophants they were - bringing a big smile to the king's face.
"Normally, I would leave such matters to more suitable times, but I have an announcement to make concerning something that has troubled me greatly during this past week."
Liz caught Zan's face. He seemed on the verge of panic while Vilondra continued to talk to him. She seemed more urgent now. Had they even listened to their father?
"Lady Elizabeth," the King's call caught her by surprise. "Join me up here on stage."
Liz became aware at once of the guards that appeared at her shoulders. She knew that she had no choice but to do as ordered. She made her way through the crowd, who parted like the Red Sea and with trembling legs, joined Azande on the stage. Queen Layola's look was filled with sheer venom. Liz looked out into the sea of faces, but only one caught her attention. Zan was pulling Maria to the side of the hall. What was going on?

* * *

"What's going on, Zan?" Maria demanded, on the verge of hysteria. "What's the king gonna do to Liz?"
"Maria," he grabbed her shoulders and turned her to face him and not Liz. "I really need you to be Liz's best friend right now."
"Hey!" Maria's fear fell, to be replaced by a look of hurt. "I 'am' her best friend."
"Good," Zan nodded. "Remember that protective instinct that brought you to me after Liz had... remember?"
"Yeah, I remember," Maria's eyes narrowed.
"Good. Now listen. Liz needs that protection, now more than ever. Never allow Liz to be alone with anyone. Not even the king. Protocol will not allow you to be removed from Liz's side if she demands that you stay. All conversation must go through you, Maria. Liz must never talk directly to anyone, except you, and never, under any circumstances, accept anything as a gift. No matter how innocent. Only answer questions after the two of you have considered the implication. Tell the party that 'you' will get back to them."
"Why, Zan?" Maria's eyes grew wide. "Why can't you be her protector? Zan, what's going on?"
"It will all become clear," Zan looked up at the stage to see Liz watching him. Her face was easily readable; filled with concern.
"Go to her, Maria," Zan sighed. Maria was shocked to see Zan look so sad. "Never leave her side."

* * *

"Many of you have already heard of the lovely Lady Elizabeth, a noble visitor from the distant country of Am-er-ica," the king intoned.
In the audience, Liz could see that Maria had left Zan and was wending her way through the crowd toward her.
"Those who have come to know her have already fallen under her spell and several parties have come to blows in attempting negotiation for her betrothal."
Liz turned to the king, her eyes wide with dread.
"Even Syrus, the head of our church, was forced to point out to me how the beautiful young lady has no family here in Antar to speak for her. As such, she is, to all intents and purposes, an orphan."
There was a buzz of murmuring from the crowd. Liz felt as though she was being auctioned.
"She has no one at all to look after her interests."
Looking around her, Liz caught sight of Layola. The Queen was glaring at her with what could only be described as hatred. And jealousy.
"Syrus has requested," Azande continued, "and I agree with him; that I appoint a guardian for her. Someone to look after her and her interests. So that she may be properly cared for, and to ensure that when potential suitors call, she gets the best deal that can be arranged."
"From the corner of her eye, she saw Maria climb the steps to the stage. From the look of determination in her eyes, Liz hoped that none of the guards try to stop her. Wait, did he say guardian?
"After much deliberation," he puffed up his chest, "I have decided to appoint as Lady Elizabeth's guardian..."
"Please," Liz whispered to Maria who now stood close beside her with an almost defiant bearing. "Let it be Zan."
"...me."

* * *
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Hi everyone!

Firstly, I hope everyone in the path of Ivan stays safe and sound. And also this new one. Genevive or something?

Thank you all so much for your feedback. It's great seeing it. :) I appreciate you taking the time to give me your thoughts, and I love seeing your guesses and speculations. :)

youre my dreamgirl - Nope. Not good at all. Glad you enjoyed the ball, though.

TaffyCat - Azande can, if he wants. History is littered with just such arrangements - usually to 'aquire' the ward's lands and money. :wink: The relationship is nothing like a daughter, as he will not have to provide a dowry for her. But yes, Azande now holds the cards andthere's nothing anyone can do about it. Or is there? :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Of course, it took Maria's intervention to gice Zan a spine. :wink:

kissme4ever123 - Because she has no one to 'speak' for her, and because the Nobles will need 'someone' to aske for her hand from. :twisted:

roswck - Yes, Azande most definately wants to marry her off to someone! :wink:

SarahWhitman - Ah yes. That quoted part should worry you. :wink: It worried me. Trying to get it right. LOL.

roswellluver - As I knew you would. :wink:

Smac - I think that Liz is making him believe in himself a bit more. Or rather, maybe she's giving him an excuse to grow a backbone. :wink:

Butterflies - (I guess, from you location, another Canuck? :) ) Yup - he can do that. Now you know where MAx inherited that gene from! (contol) :wink:

LTL - The problem with that is that Antar has no formal relations with America and so no embassy has been set up. Not only WHAT was Vilondra telling him, WHY? :wink:

aurorasky - Whatever Azande is up to, you can bet you're not gonna like it. :wink:

polar vixen - :) Gotcha :) Both Zan and Liz are in a hard place. KNowing that their relationship is doomed from the start. Yet, how great is it that neither cares? :)

Lindsey - Thanks for the bunp :)

smokie - I do indeed :) Vilondra and Zan. How interesting. First she plots to kill him, then she apparently warns him about something. Hmmmm.....
As to the point of finding one another... as a great literary character once said, "We shall see, precious. Oy yes. We shall see." :wink: Looking forward to that Jack one day :)

BelevnDreamsToo - Perhaps Azande merely cares that Liz has no one to keep the unscrupulous nobles that inhabet his castle away? *smirk* Yeah, right.

AJK001 - Yup. Setting you up for a HUGE fall. There isn;t a roller coaster built with this one! :wink:

ILYMEFOREVER - Yup. Bad with a captial 'T'. :twisted:

mareli - Well, there's always THAT possibility! :wink: Maybe now would be a good time for Liz and Zan to find the Granolith together. :wink:

NorafanofMaxandLiz - I'm sorry to say that we reached the top of the hill, Nora. You know what comes next, right? :wink: Well, maybe Liz gave him the edited hightlites, but she told him the facts. LOL

BehrObsession - Yes, he does. :) Really rotten. Now, as for Zan having what it takes...

Roswelllostcause - Really? :( You'ld want to kill me? :( :wink: Well, I had better make sure that I keep the suspense high to prevent you from coming over with such an evil intent. Unless of course, your version of killing me is talking over coffee (or Jack Daniels) :wink:



Holding Out For A Hero
Frou-Frou


Where have all the good men gone
And where are all the gods?
Where's the street-wise Hercules
To fight the rising odds?
Isn't there a white knight upon a fiery steed?
Late at night I toss and turn and dream of what I need

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life

Somewhere after midnight
In my wildest fantasy
Somewhere just beyond my reach
There's someone reaching back for me
Racing on the thunder and rising with the heat
It's gonna take a superman to sweep me off my feet

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life

Up where the mountains meet the heavens above
Out where the lightning splits the sea
I would swear that there's someone somewhere
Watching me

Through the wind and the chill and the rain
And the storm and the flood
I can feel his approach
Like the fire in my blood

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life



Part 16

Liz's first reaction had been to find Zan. From her new position, seated slightly behind Azande and Layola, she could not see him. She could, however, see Denda, smirking at her from his seated position nearby.
"Maria," Liz leaned over to her friend. "Can you go and find Zan for me?"
"No way," Maria shook her head. "Zan told me to stick to you like glue. I'm not going to let my best friend down. That would be you."
"He knew this was going to happen?" Liz raised her eyebrows. Perhaps that's what Vilondra was telling him. "Please, Maria. I need to see him. And I'm not allowed to leave the stage now."
Maria remained resolute.

Liz's second reaction had been flight. Feigning a headache, she declared that she would like to retire for the night. Azande infuriated her by declaring that she would have to remain in attendance till the end. So, for the rest of the evening, Liz watched in horror as a procession of Azande's sycophants paid homage to him, each one transparent in their hopes of currying favor and doubtless, Lady Elizabeth's hand in marriage.
"This is really bad, Maria," Liz complained. "I've seen the films. He could marry me off to anyone and I don't get a say in the matter. Not to mention what rights he's got once I do get married. We need to find Zan. I think it's time we went home."
"But what about Zan and Max and this whole King deal?"
"I can't help him if I'm shipped off to some castle somewhere," Liz started to cry. "This is turning into a nightmare again. I was so close. Oh Maria. I don't want to get married to some stranger and most definitely not here. I want to marry Max."
Maria could only embrace her friend and give her such comfort as she could.

* * *

At long last, the ball ended. What has started so brightly had turned into an unendurable ordeal. Liz had been made to dance again, Antarian style and under Maria's direct supervision had not spoken to a single one of her dance partners, in spite of their best efforts to try to draw her into conversation. Every time Liz had started to reply, Maria had shut her up and answered for her.
"What was all that about?" Liz demanded when they were safe and alone in their apartment.
"Zan somehow knew this was coming," Maria told her.
Liz again remembered his discussion with Vilondra and the strange look on his face. Had Vilondra warned him of Azande's plan? If so, where did that leave the scheming sister and plots against him? Why would she do such a thing? Her actions that evening did not sit with her discussion with Kivar that Maria had overheard.
"He told me," Maria continued, "never leave you alone, never let you talk to another man and never, ever accept any gifts."
"He's afraid," Liz shook her head in understanding. "He's worried that I might get tricked into accepting a marriage proposal."
"You looked pretty cozy with him this evening," Maria tried to cheer her up. "Dare I ask if Max made an appearance?"
"Almost," Liz smiled, thinking back on her dance with Zan. "But then Denda turned up and spoiled the moment."
"God, I hate him."
"Me too," Liz agreed. "And I have a really bad feeling that Azande's going to make me marry him."
"Not if I can help it," Maria shook her head.
"We need to find the Granolith," Liz considered.
"We need Syrus," Maria huffed.
Liz rose, almost on autopilot, when there was a knock on the door.
"No," Maria climbed to her feet, pulling Liz back. "Better let me." Maria crossed to the door and opened it. "Ah, talk of the devil. Hello, Syrus. It's a bit late for you, isn't it?"
"Ladies," Syrus bowed as he entered their apartment.
"Was what Azande said true?" Liz demanded through gritted teeth. "That this whole guardian thing was your idea?"
"Well," Syrus looked flustered. He was clearly caught off guard. "That is to say..."
"Yes or no!" Liz bellowed.
"Yes," he hung his head. "However, in my defense, it was a good idea that somehow, got... corrupted."
"I'll say," Maria rolled her eyes. "Corrupted how?"
"I went to Azande with the idea, yes," Syrus sat down in a chair. "But I asked that he make you 'my' ward, not his. That way, I could control who could and who could not speak with you."
"Only now, Azande is the one who chooses," Liz retorted.
"Yes," Syrus nodded. "And I'm afraid that this complicates things."
"No," Maria feigned a look of surprise. "Really?"
"As a ward of the King, you are forbidden contact with any unmarried man without the king's personal consent."
"So..." Liz considered carefully, "that means that I can't work with Zan any more. Nice one, Syrus," she growled.
"You were moving too slow," Syrus complained. "I had to do something."
"You know how much Azande favors Denda! I can't believe that you practically gift-wrapped me for him." Liz glared at the priest. "Take us to the Granolith, Syrus. We're leaving. I'm not marrying Denda. Not for anything."
"I'm afraid that won't be possible," Syrus closed his eyes against the expected reaction.
"What?" both Liz and Maria exploded at once.
"Why not?" Liz's voice sounded very dangerous.
"It's been moved," his voice was hushed. "I don't know where and I don't know by whom."
"Great," Liz groaned, collapsing back into the sofa. "Just great."
"All is not lost," Syrus looked up. "While Zan may not approach you, Lady Elizabeth, everyone saw how close Rath and Lady Maria have become. No one would question his visiting her. He can act as a go between.
"Like that'll work," Maria rolled her eyes.
"Do you have a better idea?" Syrus snapped.
"No," Maria stared hard at him. "But if I did, it would be a thousand times better than the ones you're coming up with."

"So how does this betrothal system work, Syrus?" Liz asked. "I mean, just because I'm now the... King's ward... do I get a say in things?"
"Most certainly!" Syrus nodded. "A potential suitor must first petition your guardian, King Azande for permission to speak with you. Certain... deals are probably negotiated against a successful outcome. Once permission is granted, the suitor will visit with you, either here or in a neutral area. Those with patience will call for you a number of times, seeking to win your affection before asking for your hand. Others will try less subtle methods seeking to trick you into an agreement. Watch your words with care, Lady Elizabeth, as often times, an unscrupulous suitor may construe the most innocent of remarks as a promise. But you have every right to refuse any request for your hand."
"If Zan asks to speak with me," Liz looked glum, "Azande's going to say no."
"There is one way to guarantee a yes," Syrus looked up with a bright light in his eyes.
"Well," Maria tapped her foot on the floor. "Spit it out!"
"Tomorrow's tournament. If Zan wins just one event, he will be granted any request. He then asks to speak with you, asks you for your hand and presto! You are betrothed to Zan."
"You're kidding, right?" Maria rolled her eyes, "Even Liz can beat Zan."
"Then," Syrus sighed. "We must pray for a miracle."

* * *

Neither of the two young women slept well that night. Both had things on their mind. For one, it was her evening spent in the arms of a man she was coming to like. The other, was comparing the dream against the reality, and considering the nightmare. In the morning, Adaile roused them with new dresses.
"To wear for the tournament," she informed them.
They were both so tired, they relied on auto pilot to get them through their morning rituals. They ate their breakfasts in silence and retreated to their bathrooms where they bathed. Adaile brought them both their dresses to wear, silver edged with black. To add a splash of color, Liz picked up a pink kerchief and looped it around her neck. When Maria saw, she grabbed a pale green one. Ready at last, they followed Adaile and their guards through the castle, out into the courtyard, through the gates and down into the city to the tournament field that had been set up.

"Where do we sit?" Liz stared at the tiered buildings constructed to surround a long rectangular field of grass and dried mud.
Each of the buildings had a temporary look to them, similar to the rows of bleachers used at high school sports fields. One was surrounded with colorful banners and covered with a roof. Even the seating on that one seemed more luxurious than the rest.
"With your guardian," Adaile pointed to the royal stand.
Adaile had seemed far happier since Azande's proclamation.
"I don't get her," Maria whispered. "You'd think that she'd want you as far from Denda as you can get."
"We have that in common, then," Liz forced a smile.
Unlike Adaile, she was not in a very good mood.

When the crowds started to arrive, Liz and Maria took their seats in the royal stand, to the immediate left of King Azande. Layola, sitting to his right, glared at her. Liz ignored her, scanning the crowds for a sign of Zan. She found Syrus, sitting in the same stand, further to the back. Denda was sitting in the bleachers, across from her, staring at her with a strange smile on his face. She resolutely ignored him. She could not find Zan anywhere. She wondered if he had even bothered to turn up. Just as she was beginning to believe that he had simply abandoned her, Liz found him. Standing between two sets of bleachers, he looked as happy as she did. He was watching her, his face mirroring the helplessness that she felt.

"Do you know anything about tournaments like this?" Maria asked in a hushed whisper.
"No," Liz shook her head, still locked with Zan. "Only from films that I've seen. But they were fiction. I never really studied anything like this."
"Do you think it's all about horses and specially tipped lances like that film with that guy from the teen flick version of that Shakespeare play?"
"Huh?" Liz looked away from Zan to stare at Maria. "What are you talking about, Maria?"
"You know. That film where some bimbo wants to date the school hotty, but she can't go on dates until her older sister does, and she's like, totally not into that. So this other kid who wants to date the girl gets this idea to set the older sister up with some stud who he pays, only the original bimbo doesn't go with this other guy... or something. You know. And it's based on Shakespeare or something."
"What does this have to do with the tournament?" Liz could feel her frustration rising.
"Well the studly guy, he plays a knight or something, in this other film. About knights and horses and lances. Only he's not. A knight, I mean. He's like... a partridge, or something."
Liz shook her head, trying to get her mind around Maria's ravings.
"I think the answer is, yes," she looked down at the wide field enclosed by the stands. Down the middle of the rectangle was a kind of handrail, but at shoulder height. "This is all about horses and lances." Liz shook her head and smiled. "Or something."

A sudden fanfare from trumpeters at the back of the royal stand called for everyone's attention. The king's seneschal strode out into the middle of the 'avenue'.
"Duke's and Duchesses," he called out, his voice booming, "Counts and Countesses, Barons and Baronettes, my Lords, Ladies, gentlemen... and the rest of you..." He took a deep breath. "Pray silence for your God of all Antar and the five kingdoms, his royal majesty, King Azande!" He turned and with a great flourish, pointed at Azande.
The king, decked out in red robes and almost covered with gold and jewels, rose to an enthusiastic reception.
"He missed out Layola," Maria whispered.
Liz nodded. She had noticed too. She risked a quick look across the King to his wife. She too had spotted the omission and did not look pleased. Neither of them joined in with the reception of the monarch. The king held his arms aloft, basking in his universal adoration before using those same arms to call for calm.

"As you know," Azande's voice called out across the amphitheater, "this tournament has long been the arena for the bravest and the best to show off their martial prowess amongst their peers. We have seen the mightiest and the best come and go. We have also seen some with great promise. We will long remember how my youngest son, Prince Denda, so famously won the fencing category last time, the youngest man ever to do so."
A ripple of agreement swept through the stands.
"We all expect much from him this time, especially as he wishes to enter for every event, while my... 'eldest' as yet, has entered... none."
Liz caught Zan's eye. His face fell, as though he had somehow insulted her. She kept watching, hoping that he would look up and see that she didn't care.
"I'm told," the king continued in a dry voice, "that the bookmakers are not accepting any bets on Denda."
His comment was met with laughter. A few customers even shouted their boos at the bookmakers.
"Good odds are available, however," Azande started to laugh, "on Zan even entering one event."
This comment was met with even louder laughter.
"One side effect of Denda's reputation is that no one else has seen fit to contest their might against him. So, rather than cancel the tournament, I have decided, after long and careful consultation with my most trusted advisors, that this tournament will be different. Special." He looked around, smiling. "Unique."
Azande waited for the susurrus of whispering die down.
"This year, the field will be contested by a select field," he started to grin. "Invitation only."
Across the field, Liz watched as a courtier approached Zan and handed him a parchment. He split it open and read it. Liz saw his face fall.
"That field shall consist of myself," he paused for his applause. "Prince Denda." Again, he waited for his youngest son's reception - almost as enthusiastic as his own - to die down. "And Prince Zan."
This announcement was met with silence. Somewhere, someone started to chuckle. Others joined in. Soon, the stands were roaring to the sounds of hysterical laughter. Liz looked at Zan, to show him that she was not laughing at him. He met her gaze and shrugged his apology. An apology for the fact that he would be so humiliated in front of her.
"To even the numbers," the king continued as the laughter died down. "I shall invite my champion, Lord Kharden to contest his considerable skill with us."
There was a muted reception as Liz saw the scarred soldier who had carried out the public flogging of the old man in the throne room rise to his feet and take a bow. He turned and looked up at Maria. He gave her a grin. Liz could feel Maria shudder next to her.

"Now," Azande continued, "such a unique contest with such unique contestants deserves a unique prize. And I have such a one. To the winner of today's tournament, I offer the hand of my lovely young ward, Lady Elizabeth. The runner up shall receive the hand of her consort, Lady Maria."
The crowd cheered. Two did not cheer with them.
"What?" Maria cried.
"No way!" Liz exploded.
Azande turned and winked at her. Two guards forced them to sit down, holding them firm even as they continued to voice their outrage. They grabbed each other's arms for comfort. Across the field, Denda was practically bouncing in his seat, eager to start. All the while, the audience, many of whom did not even know Liz, nor Maria, continued to cheer. Liz finally risked a look at Zan, perhaps hoping to see some steel, some determination from him. Instead she found him with Rath and Vilondra. They appeared to be having a very animated argument. Not one of them looked happy. Neither was Liz.

* * *

PS - Really appropriate music, don't you think? - Wayne.
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Hi everyone!

A big thank you to all you feedback leavers out there :) I say this every week, and I really do mean it. I enjoy it all. :) But remember, that as long as it is constructive, I WILL accept criticism. :)

Now, just short comments tonight. I am absolutely samped right now. I have not had a chance to write at all this week. Luxkily, I have this chapter, plus another completed, and a third almost complete. Hopefully, the current crisis will have passed by the time you catch up.




frenchkiss70 - Uhm, sorry, but yes, it is. :wink:

youre my dreamgirl - Aw. I thought you MISSED my cliffhangers. LOL :twisted:

mareli - Look for help where you least expect it. :wink:

ILYMEFOREVER - Yup. Zan is no where near ready, but sometimes, brain can triumph over brawn. :wink:

kissme4ever123 - Somehow, I don;t think Liz will be. Would you? LOL :twisted:

Smac - Looks like Liz can't escape this nightmare. :wink:

TaffyCat - Cruel with a capital 'K' :wink:
I'm sure the Granolith could be used for just that - if they knew where it was. :wink:

smokie - Evil will only win if good men do nothing. Are the good men doing nothing? *smirk* - Nice edited call, BTW.

AJK001 - AH, but that was just a little fall. :wink:

roswck - Maria, being seen as Liz's 'companion' would be considered fair game by the King, fit to hand her to whomever he wished, one Liz was married. That's putting it nicely. :wink: It's all to do with chattels and vassels and varlets and stuff.

BehrObsession - Evil streak out in full force, getting warmed up for later. :twisted:

roswellfiend - Yup. I do. :) What can I say? It's in my nature. :)

BelevnDreamsToo - Yup. King wants fair maiden for self. Ah yes. What is Vilondra up to?

auroraskey - I can neither confirm nor deny such a fact. :wink:

roswellluver - Bleaker and bleaker. :)

mezz - For your edification, tournament will be explained. :wink:

NorafanofMaxandLiz - I think Syrus meant well. Just that the King was two steps ahead. :wink:

Behr-y Roswellian - Thank you, and welcome. :) (BTW - I am using that evil laugh lots lately. :wink: )

Roswelllostcause - Thank goodness for that little pond. :wink:

missjamie - It would take a miracle of monumental proportions. :) And who knows where help might come from? :wink:


Take care, everybody,
Wayne

Toy Soldiers
Martika



Step by step, heart to heart
Left right left, we all fall down
Like toy soldiers

It wasn't my intention to mislead you
It never should have been this way
What can I say...
It's true, I did extend the invitation
I never knew how long you'd stay
When you hear temptation call
It's your heart that takes, takes a fall
Won't you come out and play with me

Step by step, heart to heart
Left right left, we all fall down
Like toy soldiers
Bit by bit, torn apart
We never win, but the battle wages on
For toy soldiers

It's getting hard to wake up in the morning
My head is spinning constantly
How can it be...
How could I be so blind to this addiction
If I don't stop, the next one's gonna be me
Only emptiness remains
It replaces all, all the pain
Won't you come out and play with me

Step by step, heart to heart
Left right left, we all fall down
Like toy soldiers
Bit by bit, torn apart
We never win, but the battle wages on
For toy soldiers




Part 17

The expectant buzz of the audience was a constant sound in the background as Liz and Maria watched Azande and his champion, Kharden, rise from their seats and make their way down through the stands to take their place out on the tournament field. Liz looked over to Zan, to see him walking out to where Denda had already appeared. Denda's confident swaggering was in direct contrast to Zan's gait. His shoulders had fallen and he walked hunched over.
"It's as though he's already lost," Liz murmured to Maria.
"That's 'cause he already has," Layola snapped from two seats away. "I suppose this is what you wanted. To replace me in the King's bed. All that garbage about Zan was a ruse, wasn't it!" Her eyes were narrow and cold.
"No," Liz shook her head, biting back her own anger. "I want to marry the king as much as you want me to."
"He's going to win, you know," Layola did not sound soothed.
"How do you know that?" Maria leaned forward. "I thought that Denda was the bees knees."
"Azande's done something," she shrugged. "Kharden will allow the king to beat him, but Denda does not stand a chance."
"What about Zan?"
"Don't make me laugh," Layola rolled her eyes. "Azande need do nothing to Zan to defeat him. He's hopeless, as I'm sure you have witnessed first hand."
"Perhaps he will surprise us," Liz shrugged. "Ma... Zan can be pretty resourceful when he wants."
"I'll tell you how this will play out, shall I? Zan will lose to everyone. No points. Denda will be defeated by both Kharden and Azande. Kharden will come second, and win the hand of your maid there," she sneered at Maria. "That's the deal he struck with the King. Azande will win, and take you for his third wife. But don't expect the honeymoon to last long."
"There won't be a honeymoon," Liz growled. "Nor a wedding. Not if I can help it."
"But don't you see?" Layola started to laugh at her. "You can't."

"Where's Syrus," Liz turned to find him again. Spotting him, she waved him down. "Get your ass down here," she mouthed theatrically. "Now!"
Syrus jumped, rose from his seat and started to make his way down the stand to join them. He did not sit in the seat vacated by Azande, choosing instead to sit back on his heels, next to Maria.
"Tell me I can still say no, Syrus," she growled at him.
"Me too," Maria added in no less angry a tone.
"I, uh... would like to, ladies, but..."
"But?" Maria shrieked. "But? You didn't tell us about any 'buts' last night!"
"This is the one situation that you have no rights to decline marriage," he looked apologetic. "Not in a trial by arms."
"You are full of surprises, aren't you?" Liz closed her eyes and bit her words out. "Why don't you just slice my neck with a knife and be done with it?"
"Great," Maria complained, collapsing back into her seat. "Just great. Have you seen that... that...? He's like, a hundred or something, and makes Quasimodo look good."
"You must have faith, my ladies. I'm sure that Zan will surprise us all."
"Yeah," Maria folded her arms across her chest. "Like, maybe he will stay on his feet for a whole minute."

"Just how does this tournament work, Syrus?" Liz looked out where the four contestants were being briefed on the contests.
"There will be three events," Syrus inwardly sighed, relieved that the talk was moving away from his failings. "Sword, Bow and Lance."
"Lance?"
"They ride horses at one another, each holding a lance and try to knock the other off their horse."
"Ah," Liz nodded.
"The bow is simple enough. They shoot at a target, slowly moving farther and farther away. When you miss, you're out. As for the sword, you basically beat each other to a pulp until one of you deals what is deemed to be a death blow."
"Death?" both girls sounded horrified.
"Not literally," he smiled. "Firstly, the swords will be blunted. Secondly, they will shield themselves with their energy, which will prevent any accidents. They can also add energy to their weapons, making them almost feather light. Don't worry. No one has died in the tournament for over one hundred years."
"Somehow," Liz glared, "coming from you, that is not comforting."
"Do they use those thin pointy swords?" Maria asked. "Like in the Three Musketeers?"
"Ah, no. They use whichever sword they like. They each have their preferences."
"And is it a free for all?" Liz asked. "Is it like, last man standing?"
"Only in the Archery contest," Syrus nodded. "For the sword and for the lance, they will draw pairs, to see who fights who. The two winners then face one another, while the losers do the same. That way, the ranks are decided. The contestant with the most points is considered the tournament champion, and your..."
"Don't even say it," Liz groaned.

* * *

When the crowd's noise had died down, the four participants were escorted in single file toward the royal stand.
"Rise," Syrus whispered.
"What?" Liz glanced at him.
"You have to greet them. Be careful what you say, or do. Best not say anything, actually. Give them a polite curtsey."
Azande was first; he looked up at her and placed his clenched right fist over his breast.
"My lady," he nodded. "Beauty such as yours lends strength to my arm. I shall not waver in my duty. I shall not let you down."
Cringing, Liz gave a very short curtsey.
"My Ladies," Kharden nodded. He then looked at Maria. Leered would have been a better word. Both girls simply nodded.
"Lady Elizabeth," Denda's smile was wide. "I will never be able to repay my father for such a gift. I shall defeat them all, of course and claim you as my bride, as is my destiny. And don't worry. I won't humiliate Zan. Too much."
Liz didn't even acknowledge him. Denda gave a smirk, ignored Maria and moved on.
"Do your best, Zan," Liz encouraged him with a smile when it was his turn. "For me."
"I shall try," his eyes seemed troubled. "Liz... I... I'm sorry. I wish... I wish..."
"I know," Liz nodded. Her face fell. "And I'm sorry too. I know this isn't your fault. Just... just don't get hurt, okay?"
He nodded.
"Here," Liz continued. She removed her pink kerchief from around her neck and held it out to Zan. "For luck. I think this is traditional, or something. Right?"
"I shall wear it with pride, my lady," Zan bowed. He gave Liz a smile as he tied the kerchief around his neck.
"Here, Zan." Maria smiled, handing him her green kerchief. "You couldn't come first AND second, could you?"
They both gave Zan a flowery curtsy.

* * *

"Ladies and Gentlemen," the seneschal announced. "The contestants will now select their weapons."
He stepped up to the king, and leaned forward to hear what his liege said.
"His royal majesty, King Azande has selected his bastard sword."
A small, thin man wearing a brightly colored tabard came from the side of the stand carrying a large sword. He placed it in a rack in the center of the tournament field. Liz recognized the man as the King's page. She looked at Zan and saw him staring hard at the sword, his eyebrows knitted together, deep in thought.
"It's a sword that can be used either in one hand, or in two," Syrus murmured. "Usually, Azande chooses a long sword, 'cause the bastard sword can sometimes pull you off balance. He's going to have to be on his toes to beat Denda with that thing. Of course. You can't stand to be hit too many times by that thing."
The seneschal approached Denda next.
"His highness, Prince Denda has chosen a two handed sword."
Another man who looked like a page, wearing Denda's emblem, brought out the heavy two handed sword. To the girls, it certainly looked a very vicious weapon.
"In the hands of a skilled warrior," Syrus whispered beside them, "and in a real battle, you can cut a man clean in two with that. Just one hit during this tournament will knock his opponent out. Of course, it's even more unwieldy than the bastard sword, being longer."
Both girls blanched as the seneschal went to the king's champion, Kharden.
"Lord Kharden has also selected a bastard sword."
Another sword, similar to the king's was brought out by whom Liz assumed to be Kharden's page. There were now three swords in the rack. Finally, it was Zan's turn. The seneschal stepped back from him, as though in surprise. He asked Zan to repeat himself. When Zan repeated it, the seneschal shook his head.
"His highness, Prince Zan has chosen..." He looked at Zan again, who nodded. "Prince Zan has chosen a short sword and shield.
Everyone started to laugh. Even the three other contestants were laughing.
"What's so funny?" Liz looked at Syrus.
"Zan's sword has less reach than any of the others," he pointed to the man, rather, a boy bringing out Zan's short sword. It was half the length of the others. "He'll never get close enough to anyone to use it. And as for the shield," he shrugged. "When you can use your energy to make the best shield in the world, why bother with an additional one?"
"So even before he starts, he's screwed?" Maria moaned.
"But it's lighter, right?" Liz considered.
"Normally, yes," Syrus nodded. "But when filled with energy, all swords are as light as... a practice sword."
"I never realized Zan had a page," Liz narrowed her eyes.
"He doesn't," Syrus shook his head. "No one wants to be one for him. Rath would normally do this sort of thing, but I guess..." Syrus went red. "Given the fact that you," he looked at Maria, "and he were rather... ah... at the ball... last night... he, uh..."
"Couldn't bear to watch, the coward." Maria finished with a huff, crossing her arms across her chest. "That is so like him!"

* * *

"The first to compete will be..." the seneschal spun some colored wheels attached to the central rail. "King Azande," he called when one wheel stopped. "Against Lord Kharden," when the other did.
"It's impossible to fix the results of the 'Wheels of Fate'," Syrus looked down to the two combatants as they approached the rack to collect their swords. "This is good, in a way. If Zan should somehow defeat Denda," even Syrus did not sound too hopeful, "that will guarantee him at least second place."
"Nuh uh," Maria shook her head. "He's Liz's man. Not mine. Best friends don't do that sort of thing."
"Who do you think will win, Syrus," Liz watched the two men reach for their sword hilts.
"Azande," Syrus shrugged. "Kharden will let him win, settling for second place," Syrus looked at Maria. "He has always preferred blondes. There was a rumor a few months ago that Azande was going to betroth Vilondra to him. Then Kharden heard about Kivar. He said he wouldn't take a whore for his wife."
"Maybe I should..." Maria looked at Liz.
"Don't even go there," she shook her head.
"It's not you he wants to marry!"

Down on the field, Azande and Kharden lifted their swords. Azande seemed to struggle with the weight. When the judges dropped the black and silver flag, a blue glowing light surrounded both men as well as their weapons. Azande no longer struggled with his sword. Instead, it seemed as though it were a part of him, an extension to his arm as he and Kharden danced around one another, each seeking to deliver a telling blow. The ringing sound of metal striking metal echoed through the stands, almost drowned out by the crowd's cheers.
"This is pitiful," Syrus shook his head.
"What?" Maria could not tear her eyes from the fight.
"It's like an exhibition. They have planned out their moves carefully."
Liz realized that she was watching no more than a dance and not a struggle between two men each, trying to bash the other's brains in.
"So this is like, a fix?" she looked up.
"It is," he nodded. "In Azande's favor. I wonder what will happen when he faces Denda?"
"If Denda beats Zan," Liz reminded him.
"Right," Syrus did not sound convinced.
After a further ten minutes, the judges decided that Azande had struck a killing blow, although Liz had failed to see how and where.

* * *

Denda almost sprinted to the weapons rack, eager to get his dress rehearsal for the removal of Zan from the line to the throne underway. Zan followed, though with a lot less enthusiasm. Denda wrapped both of his hands around the huge sword's hilt and had to drag it, rather than lift it clean away. Meanwhile, Zan reached his hand through the shield straps, clasping the leather loop on one side. He moved his arm around, testing his grip on the traditionally shaped shield. Satisfied, Zan reached to the rack and picked up his short sword. He swung it through the air with it a few times, testing both the weight and his grip. Together, both men moved to the center of the field, Denda's huge sword leaving a furrow in the dried soil. They turned to one another, Zan looking apprehensive while Denda smiled with what could only be described as an evil grin. Zan held his sword upright, signifying that he was ready. Denda raised the massive sword above his head, although it took all his effort to do so, and held it in an attacking pose. The official waved his flag and the contest had begun.

* * *

"Something's wrong," Syrus frowned as the crowd cheered the start of the contest.
"What?" Liz demanded. She looked at Zan and Denda, both of whom were now surrounded by their blue energy glows. "What's gone wrong? What's the matter?"
"Their swords," he pointed at Denda who had just swung his sword in a wide arc against Zan's shield, raised to ward the blow. There was a loud crash and Zan was knocked to the floor.
"There's no energy flowing through their swords. They should be lined in blue, too."
"What does that mean? Oh!" Liz squealed as Zan rolled away from Denda's follow up attack, only just avoiding it. Instead of hitting Zan, as he had hoped, Denda's sword hit the ground.
"It means that Denda missed Zan because of it," Syrus heaved a heavy sigh of relief. "If Denda had put energy into that sword, it would have been so light, his strike would have been too fast for Zan to avoid. The contest would already be over."
In the arena, Zan had managed to scramble to his feet and held his shield up at the ready. Denda swung his sword again, but Zan leapt clear of the danger. As he regained his balance, the sword was coming at him again. He had to use his shield and once again, found himself knocked to the ground. Denda struggled to raise the heavy sword and Zan's moment of danger passed.

"So why hasn't he done it?" Maria asked. "Zan too, cause his sword ain't lit up, either."
"Lodal," Syrus shook his head.
"Who is Lodal?" Liz asked.
"Not who," Syrus shook his head. "What. Lodal is, uh... a metal that we can't use our energy on. It's the remnants of a material that's had the particle ionization properties removed."
"Depleted uranium," Liz nodded. "So how come the swords belonging to the other two glowed okay?"
"I guess that the king isn't above a little royal cheating," Syrus frowned.
"Pulling the teeth of his cubs," Liz nodded. She glanced at Layola. "Azande's done something, she said."
"Boy," Maria growled. "The king must really want to marry you."
"At this time," Syrus indicated the combat, "it's working in our favor. Because Zan chose a lighter weapon, he's not tiring. Look. Denda is already struggling with his heavier, two handed sword."
It was true. Denda's attacks were carried out with less and less aggression as the weighty weapon sapped his strength. Zan was evading his lunges with ease now. Those he could not avoid deflected harmlessly off of his shield.

"Do you think Zan knew?" Maria turned to face Liz. "Maybe that's why he chose the short sword."
"He didn't know," Liz shook her head. "He guessed." She remembered the look on Zan's face when Azande chose his weapon. "He knew something was up when Azande didn't choose his normal weapon."
"It would seem, Lady Elizabeth, that you are reaching Max, after all."
A stunned silence descended upon the arena. Out on the field, Denda had swung a mighty blow at Zan. The older brother had stepped back to avoid it causing the exhausted Denda to follow through too far and completely lose his balance. He fell to the floor, lying prone on his back heavily gasping for air. Zan stepped over his chest and held his sword to Denda's throat. The judges indicated that attack would be considered fatal. Zan had won. Both Liz and Maria leapt to their feet, two lone voices cheering Zan's victory as they hugged one another with glee. Who cared if Zan hadn't once swung his sword in anger and had technically won by default? Against all the odds, Zan had won.
"Now," he faces his father," Denda brought them back down.
"Who just happens to be a cheating..." Maria searched for the word, "what his sword is."

* * *

Denda and Kharden had to compete before Zan and Azande. Stuck with his selection of the heavy two handed sword and still exhausted from his unrewarded efforts against Zan, Denda didn't stand a chance against a fresh Lord Kharden and his energy affected sword. The contest was over almost s soon as it had begun. Denda was howling with tears of rage as his page scurried out to help him. Liz almost felt sorry for Denda until she saw him take his frustration out on the unfortunate young man. Kicking him with a ferocity she could not believe possible, the young man fell to the ground. Denda did not stop kicking him until the young page stopped quivering. Her face went pale at the thought that he might have just kicked a man to death.
"Talk about your poor loser," Maria rolled her eyes. Her face was white, too. "I don't think he enjoyed being humiliated like that. Especially by Zan."
"And not with me here to see it," Liz smirked, trying to hide from the sight of two men carrying the inert page's body away.

She looked around the stands, to see for herself the crowd's reaction to Denda's defeats. Everyone seemed stunned, discussing where the talented young prince might have gone wrong. From the occasional looks her way, she figured prominently in their discussions. At the back of the royal stand, hidden in the shadows, Liz spotted Queen Nadanne, in a heated discussion with a middle-aged man. He looked mean, and wore a tight fitting leather vest. The Queen slapped a pouch into his hands and stormed away. The man looked around, tucked the pouch into his vest and then slunk away into the crowds.
"Curious," Liz's eyes narrowed.
She turned to speak with Syrus, but her words were lost in the loud cheer that greeted King Azande's triumphant re-entry onto the playing field. He held his sword aloft - like a conquering hero.
"He's gonna kill Zan," Maria groaned.

From the start of the duel, Azande was like a tornado. Zan's non-glowing sword was all but useless as he was forced to rely on his shield and his defensive skills - limited as they were - to block Azande's energy supported attacks. Sometimes, he had to rely on his agility. Once or twice, Zan had even been forced to use his own smaller sword in a defensive capacity. It was never a matter of who would win. It was only a question of when Azande would deliver the mortal blow to defeat Zan.

"I can't look," Maria covered her eyes with her hands and turned in her seat.
Liz could not turn away. She watched as Zan put everything he had learned in his fencing lessons together. She knew that he was excelling himself out there. If he should defend himself against her like that, she would never again be able to land a blow against him.
"If only he knew how to attack," Liz groaned. "Perhaps he could make his youth count."
"If only he was fighting on equal terms," Syrus sounded impressed. "He's doing very well, considering."
Zan was tiring. It was clear that the advantage of youth and strength no longer evened out the unequal contest. The prince stumbled beneath the king's onslaught and fell backwards. He lost his grip on his shield, which bounced free of his hand.
"Oh, no!" Liz screamed, lost amid the roar from the crowd.
Fervently hoping her god would hear her halfway across the universe, Liz hurriedly cast a prayer for a miracle.

The gates at the far end of the tournament field flew open to admit a man, charging in on horseback. Azande paused with his sword raised above his head, ready to deliver the blow that would end the contest.
"To arms!" the newcomer bellowed in panic. "To arms! Kivar is attacking the city! Look!" He pointed southwards.
Above the tops of the stands, plumes of smoke billowed upwards into the air, merging into a large, gray cloud that drifted away on the wind.
"Call out the guard!" Azande ordered, allowing his sword to fall. "Soldiers, to me!" He turned to the royal stands. "See that the ladies are escorted to their chambers. Keep them there. Ride, everyone, ride!"
Liz had never thought she would see the day when she would be glad that Kivar had arrived.

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Gosh! Is it Friday already? Where does the week go? Did it fly as fast for you? :wink:

Yes, we see the (welcome?) return of Wayne's dreaded cliff hangers. What can I say? I love them :)

Thanks for all your great feedback, and thanks for reading my story.

frenchkiss70 - Well, I guess the result will be declared null and void, with a potential rematch. Think Denda will be as stupid again? *smirk*

kissme4ever123 - Thank you :)

Alma - :) Liz having Max, hmmm.... LOL. Maybe. :wink:

youre my dreamgirl - Thanks. I think. :) Yeah, I think Zan is making bigger steps toward Max. :)

Butterflies - As a King AND God, he can have as many as he wants. His word is law. But methinks he wants Liz for something OTHER than a nubile young girl. That's just a bonus. :wink:

g7silvers - No. Just a soldier. Nadanne was up to something else. Actually, you were supposed to infer that she was either paying off the assasin who failed to kill Denda, or hiring another for a second attempt. Gosh. I must be getting mellow. :wink:

BelevnDreamsToo - Zan/Max would not be so low. Now Denda, on the other hand...

TaffyCat - I couldn't resist. When I decided I needed a diversion to end the tournament (I could not have Zan WIN the damned thing :wink: ) I thought, How prosaic.

roswellluver - :) Somethings are worth fighting for. :)

smokie - Glad you appreciated my efforts. :) As for people watching the King cheat, hey, we have a history of cheating kings in this country. Ever hear of Henry 8th? LOL - Azande is sort of modeled on him. :wink:

BehrObsession - Wow. Kivar? A hero? LOL.

ILYMEFOREVER - Yup. Things look bad. ANd now Kivar - while saving the day, appears to be on the scene. And we suspect that he has foul things planned for Zan, too.

AJK001 - Won;t Kivar kick himself when he discovers what he interupted? :wink:

Emz80m :) Thank you :)

mareli - Methinks that Kivar wants to be rid of them ALL. :wink:

auroraskey - Well, who knows what plan the King will come up with next. Does Zan have enough time?

foreverdreamer15 - Thank you :) Maybe Vilondra was involved, and maybe not. That is something I will leave unresolved... for now.

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Remember that when Denda chose the two handed sword, he was assuming he would use his powers to make it featherlight. While Zan chose a sword he knew he could handle should the worst happen. I'm sure things will work out... eventually. :twisted:

Smac - According to the laws of primogeniture, neither son can take the throne while the father still lives... unless the father abdicates. Which he's unlikely to. So, Zan needs to think quick. Or Liz does. As to teaming with wife #2 - nope. Can't see that happening. :wink:

roswck - If Azande is killed, the two sones will have to duke it out for real. Survival of the fittest. :wink:

SarahWhitman - Remember that Denda did not know of his father's duplicitnous. LOL.

Roswelllostcause - Killing you softly, I hope! :wink:

magikhands - Thanks to whoever recomended it and thank you for reading. Glad you're enjoying it.


Stuck in the Middle With You
Steelers Wheel

(Gerry Rafferty and Joe Egan)

Well I don't know why I came here tonight.
I've got the feeling that something ain't right.
I'm so scared in case I fall off my chair,
and I'm wondering how I'll get down the stairs.

Clowns to the left of me!
Jokers to the right!
Here I am stuck in the middle with you.

Yes I'm stuck in the middle with you,
and I'm wondering what it is I should do.
It's so hard to keep this smile from my face.
Losing control and running all over the place.

Clowns to the left of me!
Jokers to the right!
Here I am stuck in the middle with you.

When you started off with nothing
and you're proud that your a self-made man.
and your friends they all come crawling,
slap you on the back and say
Please . . .
Please . . .

Trying to make some sense of it all
but I can see it makes no sense at all.
Is it cool to go to sleep on the floor?
I don't think that I can take anymore.

Clowns to the left of me!
Jokers to the right!
Here I am stuck in the middle with you.

When you started off with nothing
and you're proud that your a self-made man.
And your friends they all come crawling,
slap you on the back and say
Please . . .
Please . . .

Well I don't know why I came here tonight.
I've got the feeling that something ain't right.
I'm so scared in case I fall off my chair,
and I'm wondering how I'll get down the stairs.

Clowns to the left of me!
Jokers to the right!
Her I am stuck in the middle with you.
Yes I'm, stuck in the middle with you . . .
stuck in the middle with you . . .
here I am stuck in the middle with you





Part 18


For the rest of that day, Liz felt like a trapped tiger, pacing a cell much too small for such a creature. Cloistered in her apartment with only Maria and an occasional appearance from Adaile for company, she had no idea what was happening down in the city. Neither her concern, nor Maria's was for Azande and his soldiers fighting Kivar. Her concern was for Zan, ordered by his father to accompany him into battle.
"I wish I knew what was happening," she complained yet again. "I hope he's all right."
"I'm sure he is," Maria had been doing her best to calm her friend. "Just... stop pacing and calm down. Please? He's got plenty to live for, so... he'll be fine."
"I'd feel happier if Rath was with him," Liz growled. "He'd look after him."
"I haven't seen him since before the tournament," Maria shrugged. "He probably got lost in the crowd. But who knows? Maybe he is with him?"
"I hope so."
The door opened to admit Adaile.
"Any news?" Liz demanded, reaching her side at once. "Is Prince Zan alright?"
Adaile's eyes darkened.
"No, my lady," Adaile shook her head and ignored the suspicious glare from Maria. "No news. However, I know that Denda is quite safe."
"Can't trust Kivar to do anything right," Maria rolled her eyes.
"Kivar is apparently not riding with them," Adaile shook her head. "The rebels, I mean. I've heard that they were led by Nikolas."
"Never send an adolescent to do a man's job."
"Is the fighting over, Adaile?" Liz asked in a hoarse voice.
"The news is confusing," she shook her head and narrowed her eyes. "Sketchy. Some say that the rebels ran away as soon as Azande's army arrived. Other's say that Nikolas is trapped in one section of the city and is even now being besieged by the king while they - the traitors - fight to the last man. I do know that fires still rage and that no one is putting them out. That is all I know for fact."
Neither one of them slept well that night.

* * *

"Leave us," Syrus commanded Adaile as he stormed into the room without knocking.
"But, your grace," Adaile curtsied, "the ladies are not yet dressed."
In their dressing gowns, Liz and Maria sat at their table, trying to eat a breakfast that neither had an appetite for.
"This is church business, Adaile. I need to speak with them. Alone.
"My ladies," Adaile curtsied again, looking more than a little displeased at her dismissal.
"Don't even think of ordering me away," Maria glared at him.
"More good news, Syrus?" Liz eyed him with suspicion.
Syrus looked at her with narrowed eyes.
"No, wait," Maria interrupted him before he could speak. "Tells us about what happened yesterday. With Kivar."
"It was not Kivar," he shook his head.
"Yeah," Liz nodded. "We heard that only Nikolas was involved. So what happened? What was it all about?"
"It was only a hit and run raid, it seems," he shrugged. "It seems that Nikolas and a handful of soldiers rode into the city's warehouse district, set fire to a number of buildings storing supplies, and rode out again. The soldiers that arrived were so jumpy, they attacked anyone they found, convinced that they were rebel bandits."
"So Zan's okay?" Liz held her breath.

"He is," Syrus nodded. "Though the same cannot be said for a certain Count Valerin."
"Why?" Liz remembered the man who had proposed to her at the ball. "Did something happen to him?"
"They appeared to have been his warehouses that burned. He claims they were empty, but as they burned all day and most of the night, I suspect they were stuffed to the rafters with goods he had not paid taxes on."
"Trying to make a fast buck," Maria smirked. "So no one managed to end the toad's life then?"
"Which, uh..." Syrus looked confused. "Of whom do you speak, Lady Maria?"
"Nikolas," she spat. "There's only a handful of reptiles in this country. Azande, Denda, Kharden, Kivar and Nikolas."
"Vilondra, Layola, Nadanne, Ava..." Liz continued.
"I get the picture."
"But you're certain Zan is okay?"
"I am," he nodded. "And he is the reason I have come to speak with you today. You must find the opportunity to speak with the prince. It is important that he find a way to defeat both Azande and Denda. Now, more than ever."
"What's the urgency, Syrus? The tournament was cancelled. I'm off the hook, for a while, at least."
"I'm afraid not, Lady Elizabeth," he shook his head with a heavy sigh.

"So," Maria narrowed her eyes. "What fun and exciting - not - information do you bring today?"
"At noon, the day after tomorrow, Azande will declare himself to be the winner of the tournament and announce your betrothal to him."
"What? Liz screamed.
"Can he do that?" Maria demanded.
"As to whether he can, or cannot, who is to stop him? He is the King and God."
"Why?" Liz's eyes narrowed.
"Why what? Why is he King and..."
"No. Why does Azande want to marry me? I mean, what's so important that he's arranging tournaments, cheating, and making sweeping assumptions like this? Apart from the obvious, I mean."
Syrus looked around the room and sat himself down in a large, comfortable arm chair.
"You might as well make yourself comfortable," he indicated the sofa. "It's that kind of story."
Liz and Maria exchanged glances, wiped their hands and faces with napkins, rose from the table and crossed to the sofa.
"Go on," Liz ordered, tucking her feet beneath her.

"For generations, the Greater Church of Antar has been forced to change its deities at the whims of one King or another. First, it's some stick and mud creature that lives at the bottom of Lake Antar, then it's a collection of giants who live in the mountains and make sport by playing with our day to day lives my moving metal figurines around games boards. Another time it was a mortal man who had strange powers and now, we have a megalomaniac King who sees himself as divinity personified. As you can imagine, changing doctrines is not something to be taken lightly but we must bend with the wind or it will break us, I'm afraid. But for so long, now, we have long suspected that there is a single force that watches over all of creation and not just Antar. We of the Church of Antar have recently been shown proof that that such a god exists. He has sent us a sign."
"Or She," Maria grinned. "Hey, it's a possibility, right? I mean, mud and stick men? Please."
"What happened, Syrus," Liz ignored Maria. "What was this sign this deity showed you?"
"We woke up one morning to find our proof, in the very middle of our church. It was nineteen years ago. I remember the day so clearly. There had been a huge commotion up here at the palace. Guards were searching everywhere. I don't recall what it was that was lost, but they even came and searched the church from top to bottom. We had all been ushered outside while they searched. Later that day, after the commotion had died down, after what had been lost was found, we discovered it. Our proof. Large as life. Emanating a strange power, glowing an eerie blue color. Its appearance mystified us. We knew it could only have come from some greater power. We all agreed at once that it was a portent. A sign that He wanted us to know of His existence. That we had to worship its creator."
"What was it that appeared?" Liz's voice was hushed.
"The Granolith."
"So..." Liz's voice was low, awed, almost. "You think you should worship whoever it was that created the Granolith?"
"The power of it is immense," he nodded. "You yourself have been witness to but a fraction of its capabilities. Only a god could have created such a thing."
"But what if it really was only man made? I mean, you said it could do anything, right? In my dream, it was used to..." but Liz remembered that he didn't know about that part.
"Used to do what?" Syrus frowned. "In your dream, it never did anything."
"Well, I mean," Liz blushed, "it brought me here, didn't it? Why couldn't it have come from some... other place? Maybe more advanced than you? I mean, come on, Syrus. Why would a god need to make such a thing?"
"Why does a god do anything? He had to let us know of his existence somehow."
"So then why haven't you spread the word?" Maria asked. "Why is the Granolith and its creator so... secret?"
Beside her, Liz nodded.
"Can you see Azande accepting the fact that he might not be divinity after all? He would never allow us to openly worship anything... anybody, other than him. So we hid it. Which is another reason why we wish to replace Azande with Zan. We... believe that he will be more inclined to accept this new religion, than take on the task of pretending to be a god."
"Yeah," Liz agreed.
"I was younger then and, with my inquisitive nature, I was tasked with the study of the Granolith so that I might learn more of its capabilities and of its creator. It is an incredible thing. It's almost as if it has a mind of its own."
"You obviously learned enough about it to send that dream that Liz had," Maria remarked.
"I must confess," Syrus looked a little embarrassed. "Much of what I discovered was in the book I found inside the device itself."
"You found a book?" Liz looked confused. "Inside?"
"That's correct."
"Don't you think that's a little... Why would a god leave a book behind?"
"Instruction manual?" Maria smirked.
"It's more like a... 'con'-struction manual," Syrus shrugged. "Except that I can't understand many of the symbols used to specify the materials used, nor many of the scientific terms."
"Could I see it?" Liz asked trying to be nonchalant. "The book, I mean."
"Of course," he nodded. "I will bring it for you to study. I will take it back for safe keeping, though. I would not want it to fall into the wrong hands."

"So what does this have to do with the King wanting to marry Liz?" Maria was not satisfied. "The arrival of the Granolith and a potential new god does not add up to anything like a reason to act the pervert."
"The Granolith itself, nor its creator, has anything to do with Azande's reason," he nodded at Maria. "You see, outside of this room, only a handful of priests, who voluntarily had their tongues removed so that they would never divulge this secret, no one knows of its existence."
Liz and Maria looked at each other.
"I guess you're right," Liz said, looking into Maria's eyes, hoped that she would not announce Liz's act of telling Zan.
"Sadly," Syrus frowned. "The same cannot be said of the other thing that appeared. The very same night."
"And what exactly was that?" Liz turned back to Syrus.
"The Prophecy Scroll."
"What exactly is a prophecy scroll?" Maria frowned. "What does it say?"
Liz, however, recalled Azande's conversation with his seneschal.
"Does this have something to do with me?" she narrowed her eyes.

* * *

"Remain here," Syrus told the two guards stationed outside of Liz and Maria's apartment. "The ladies are only coming to the chapel with me, so that they may pray for guidance."
"Just take them to Azande's chambers," Liz heard one smirk to the other, under his breath. "He'll guide them, all right."
"I wish I could blast them" Liz murmured to Maria.
"That would shock the hell out of them," she laughed back.
"Wouldn't it, though?" Liz grinned, holding her hand up, palm outward.
"Keep up, ladies," Syrus hissed.
"Where are we going?" Liz hurried to catch him up.
"We're not really going to the chapel," Maria added. "Are we?"
"No," Syrus shook his head. "We're going to the... I suppose trophy room is as good a word as any."
"Trophy room?" Liz looked confused. "What on earth would we want from there?"
"You'll see," Syrus smirked.

* * *

"I don't think anyone else knows this room is here," Syrus looked around the hallways to make sure there were no hidden watchers. "I discovered this accidentally, during Azande's youth."
"What exactly is it?" Liz wondered. "And if no one knows about it, why store trophy's here?"
"It... I guess... Azande like to, uh, come here. When he wanted to be... you know, alone." Syrus was fiddling with something in the lock,
"Okay," Maria shook her head. "That makes sense. Not."
"You'll understand when we go inside. But I must warn you, ladies. You might be shocked."
Liz and Maria exchanged nervous looks.
"It's not his hunting trophies, is it?" Maria frowned. "Like animal heads, and skins and stuff?"
Syrus looked up and grinned.
"In a manner of speaking," he nodded. There was a click from the locking mechanism. The door swung open. "Ladies," he stepped back and indicated that they should enter.

"Oh," Maria looked around with distaste. "That's just..."
"Sick?" Liz finished for her.
"Yeah," Maria nodded. "I mean, I don't think even Kyle would stoop so low."
"I must confess," Syrus looked impressed. "I thought your reaction would be more..."
"Hey," Maria shrugged. "We're twentieth century girls. Modern, right? This isn't no big deal. Just proves what a sicko the perv is."
"So by trophies," Liz walked around the circular bed in the center of the room, looking at all the undergarments pinned around the walls, "you mean he kept... these... as a memento of his... conquests."
"Yes," he nodded. "He used to bring young ladies... and some not so young... here to seduce them, away from the prying eyes of his parents." Syrus's face turned from an amused smile, to one of shock and then suspicion.
"What?" Liz caught it at once. "What's the matter?"
"Someone's been here. Footprints. In the dust."
"Ours," Maria rolled her eyes, stopping next to Syrus.
"No," he pointed. "Those are ours." Two sets of prints circled the bed. Liz and Maria's footprints. Syrus's stopped where he did. He pointed to another set that continued to the far wall. "Those are not."
He almost sprinted to the small chest of drawers there, and pulled open the top drawer. He rummaged inside, holding his breath until he finally released it in an explosion of relief. He lifted something out.
"This," he smiled, "is the prophecy scroll."

The parchment he held in his fingers was old. It crackled as Syrus moved it around. The paper was yellowed with age, tattered, dog-eared and crumpled. Dark lines made from folds in its distant past marked the aged crease lines. Down one side, ran a symmetrical, jagged edge; a series of tiny semi-circles.
"Shall I read it to you?" Syrus asked in a hushed voice."
"Yes, please," Liz nodded.
Beside her, Maria could only nod.

* * *
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Hi everyone!

Well, as always, a big thank you to those who left feedback, and a big thank you for just reading my work. A big hello to the newbies (I hope you take the time to read my other stories now :wink: ) and a thankyou to your friends who recommended me. :)

dreamer19 - All will be revealed.

roswellluver - :) Yup. Slimeball with a capital 'P'.

Smac - It's definately a visual worth thinking about :wink: Yup. I knew what reaction that trophy room would get. LOL

mezz - Ah yes. Zan and Liz meeting again. Funny you should bring that up.... :wink: :twisted:

BelevnDreamsToo - Muxh will be explained as we go... when appropriate. Otherwise. it might pay you to reread selected bits. :wink:

AJK001 - Bearing in mind Denda's probable plans, I doubt Kivar will have his chance. :wink:

g7silvers - Well, once you read the prophecy - which like all prophecies is a bit... well, you'll see...

frenchkiss70 - Ah, I wish I COULD tell you that Liz will be safe... but maybe that's not what you really want to hear right now... :twisted:

Alma - Ah, Alma. The burning question. How can I leave it there? Because I can. :wink: LOL :)

TaffyCat - Well, we can assume that Zan/Max was not in the thick of things. :wink: Hmmmm.... you seem to be seeing spooks in every corner. Well, seeing as it's me writing, maybe that's wise. LOL
Antar - while being medieval, is more advanced in some ways. They hold to certain old fashioned ideals, and strive to maintain their very patriarchal (as it was back then) society.

Doublestuf - Hope the exams went well. :) And I hope TIOBE didn't distract you from your revising! :wink: As for MAria's comment, well, stranger things have been spoken in jest. :wink:

Butterflies - When have you ever seen a prophecy as succinct as that? LOL :wink:

SarahWhitman - Correct. Apparently. :wink:

Evans3 - Wll, your wait is over... at least for this week. Here is more. :)

mareli - FULL of answers? Do I ever do such a thing? :wink: YOu should no by now that answers only bring more questions :)

foreverdreamer15 - Well, you can read for yourself what the scroll says. Does it refer to Liz? Zan? Hmmm....

magikhands - Well, I think Liz suspects the reasons for Azande's behaviour. :wink:

Roswelllostcause - Hey. Maybe I will answer it. But leave more to ponder, of course! :wink:

Teresa - Scroll contents approaching :)

missjamie - Well, at least it's not notches in the bed post. :wink:

LTL - Well, it's nice knowing that even if you don;t leave fb, you are still reading. :)

smokie - I hear you :wink: Glad you enjoyed your break. :) Yes, I had to have Zan win without actually wiunning, if that makes sense. :wink:
Now, although Azande 'considers' himself a God, I'm sure he knows that he truly is not onem and is aware of his own mortality.

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Ne'er to be outdone, t'would be but a fair boon to grant thee pardon for thy tardiness foreasmuch as it pleases me that thow saw fit to dwell upon my tale and bless mr with thy thoughts. Fair maiden, I thank thee from the bottom of mine heart. :wink:

Little_Miss_Roswell - Greeting to Shropshire from Hampshire. :) Wait till you see how much Max and Michael, Zan and Rath appear tonight! :)

roswellfiend - Well, personally speaking, my trophy room - okay, my tropy corner of the cupboard - has but a single trophy in. :wink: And it's nothing as worn by a member of the opposit sex. Or any sex, for that matter. LOL

aurorasky - Maybe she won't want to. :wink:

Okay -

Storm doors and shutters in place? Check.
Doors and windows locked? Check.
Bars in place? Check.
Security at all international entry points informed? Check.
Food and water stored to last at least one week? Check.
Part 20 written and ready to post, just in case precaution prove inadequate? Nope. This might save my life. :wink:

Okay, it appears that I am ready to post the next chapter.

Lights fuse and runs!


Jailbreak
Thin Lizzy


Tonight there's gonna be a jailbreak
Somewhere in this town
See me and the boys we don't like it
So were getting up and going down

Hiding low looking right to left
If you see us coming I think it's best
To move away do you hear what I say
From under my breath

Tonight there's gonna be a jailbreak
Somewhere in the town
Tonight there's gonna be a jailbreak
So don't you be around

Don't you be around

Tonight there's gonna be trouble
Some of us won't survive
See the boys and me we mean business
Bustin' out dead or alive

I can hear the hound dogs on my trail
All hell breaks loose, alarm and sirens wail
Like the game if you lose
Go to jail

Tonight there's gonna be a jailbreak
Somewhere in the town
Tonight there's gonna be a jailbreak
So don't you be around

Tonight there's gonna be trouble
I'm gonna find myself in
Tonight there's gonna be trouble
So woman you stay with a friend

You know it's safer

Breakout!

Tonight there's gonna be a breakout
Into the city zones
Don't you dare to try and stop us
No one could for long
I can see the Searchlight on my trail
Tonight's the night all systems fail
Hey you good lookin' female
Come here!

Tonight there's gonna be a jailbreak
Somewhere in the town
Tonight there's gonna be a jailbreak
So don't you be around

Tonight there's gonna be trouble
I'm gonna find myself in
Tonight there's gonna be trouble
So woman you stay with a friend






Part 19

"Rejoice," Syrus read out in a voice that echoed in the room. "A time shall come to pass when she from the new shall become one with he of the old, after they are brought together by the instrument of her mind. Then shall discord be counseled of its demise, for when dominion of the new is granted to the old shall one world be linked to the other. With this triumph shall old and new be united, totally and completely for all eternity. Immortality shall be their fate as they receive tribute and just dues till the end of the universe as befits their legendary status. I have seen this for it is so."
He placed the scroll face up on the desk. The room seemed strangely quiet after Syrus had finished reading.
"Wow," Maria raised her eyebrows.
"Okay," Liz shook her head, blowing away the numbness that had filled her mind. She started to think. "So Azande thinks that this gibberish refers to him... and to me?"
"So it would seem," Syrus nodded. "Yes."
"Why?" Maria wanted to know. "I mean, this could mean absolutely anything..."
"Or nothing," Liz interjected.
"Or nothing," Maria nodded. "What makes him connect those particular dots?"
"He thinks that the 'old' refers to him," Syrus grinned. "For obvious reasons. He is, after all... old. And to us, you come from a place that can be considered... new. No one, apart from myself, has ever heard of the planet Earth, let alone be familiar with the country called America."
"Why Liz, and not me?" Maria frowned. "Not that I want to be married to that pervert or nothing. Just... how come Liz? I come from the same place."
"Because since you arrived, you have seemed... subservient to Lady Elizabeth. It would not be seemly for the King to marry a... maid."
"What?" Maria face turned scarlet with rage.
"So," Liz brushed Maria's complaints to one side. "Azande thinks that by marrying me... we'll become..." She swallowed. "Immortal?"
"As in live forever?" Maria's anger was replaced with awe.
"That is indeed what immortal means," he nodded.
"In his dreams," Liz spat. "I'll never submit to him. Never."
"But it's supposed to be Max, right?" Maria picked up the chain. "Not Azande, not Denda, Max. Or, Zan, rather."
"Azande obviously knows about this prophecy," Liz narrowed her eyes. "So who else does?"
"Azande certainly," Syrus nodded. "I'm not sure if Denda knows, although judging from his pursuit of you, I would have to conclude that he is aware of it. Perhaps those footprints belong to him?"
"How could he consider himself the old?" Liz shook her head. "Zan, the eldest son, I can understand. But Denda?"
"I don't know," Syrus shrugged his shoulders. "Perhaps he considers that when he has eliminated both Zan and Azande, he would then be the oldest. I don't know. Perhaps it refers to something else and not the person's age. Like old place, or something."
"Anyone else?"
"Nadanne must know," Syrus' eyes rolled.
"Nadanne?" Liz was surprised. "But she warned me to stay away from Zan. I mean, she clearly wants him to be with Ava."
"Ah," Syrus shifted in discomfort.
"What?" Maria glared. "What do you mean, ah?"
"You see," he coughed, "in ancient Antarian... Ava... means..."
"New," Liz finished for him, nodding.
"Figures," Maria rolled her eyes.

"I do not know if Kivar is aware of the prophecy," Syrus continued. "I also do not think that Zan knows, otherwise his attitude to you would have been more..."
"You mean he'd have been hitting on me from the start."
"Right," Syrus agreed. "So unless Nadanne told her, I doubt that Ava knows, as well."
"I wish no one knew," Liz growled as she placed her journal next to the prophecy. In her neatest handwriting, she copied the contents of the ancient paper to her book. "When I find the Granolith, I'm using it to go back in time, find the moron responsible for writing this, and break their fingers before they get the chance to do it."
"Travel back in time?" Syrus stared at her. "How did you know that it could do that?"
"Oh," Liz looked to Maria for support. It was difficult to remember that Syrus knew nothing of that part of her dream. Her friend could only shake her head. "You said that it was powerful," she shrugged. "I'm guessing that it would be able to do something like that."
"I believe it can," Syrus nodded. "Though its instructions were a little vague. Incomprehensible."
"You already tried?" Maria seemed surprised. "Dare I ask why?"
"We, ah, wanted to try and prevent Denda's conception," he smiled.
"Nothing works like it's supposed to in this place," Maria groaned.

"Elizabeth," Syrus turned to face her. "There is no time to lose. Denda is bound to bring forward his plans to face Zan. After his humiliation yesterday, he cannot afford that he will learn still more. Neither will he risk losing you to his father. It kind of stunts your plans when the man you want to replace is immortal. I'm sure that given the alternatives, he will accept a regent for a few days as the lesser of the evils. Which means that Zan is in great danger. You must redouble your efforts."
"But," Liz glared, "thanks to you, I've been forbidden to see Zan."
"Would that really stop you?" Syrus widened his eyes. "If you were home on Earth and your father had just forbidden you to see a boy that you loved but he felt unsuitable, would you just roll over and accept it?"
Liz was about to remind Syrus of her dream, how she and Max had disobeyed her father, but a timely cough from Maria reminded her of Syrus' ignorance.

"Now," Syrus continued. "Here is the document I told you about. The one preventing the transference of power to a third party. You must ensure that Zan signs this."
"I'll show it to him next time I see him," Liz tucked the rolled parchment into her sleeve.
"Yes," Syrus nodded, his finger going to his chin. "Or perhaps you might obtain his signature without his knowledge? It would be better for the both of you."
"I'm not sure I like the idea of that," Liz frowned with a shake of her head. "Why the secrecy?"
"Because to suggest to Zan that you believe he would be so easily manipulated so as to hand over power to those he feels close to... I suspect that he will think all the less of us for it."

* * *

"You know what we could do?" Maria asked over lunch. "We could just take off. Hide out in the city somewhere until Syrus finds the Granolith."
"Yeah," Liz nodded, her fork wavering between her plate and her mouth. Her mind was deep in thought.
"Or we could, you know, hire an army of trainers and work on Zan's skills twenty four seven."
"Uh huh," Liz agreed, her fork going no nearer her mouth.
"We could always just nuke the place," Maria looked at Liz through narrowed eyes.
"Sounds good," Liz replied with an automatic sounding voice.
"Or, you know what? You could accept the deal with Azande, stay here forever and breed tons of little Azandes."
"Yeah," Liz nodded.
"Which one?" Maria asked.
"Hmmm?" Liz showed no sign that she understood.
"Liz!" Maria called. "Liz."
Maria moved to Liz's side and placed a hand on her arm. "Where were you, chica?"
"Huh?" Liz looked at Maria. She put her fork down. "What?"
"You seemed somewhere... else."
"Sorry," Liz released a heavy sigh.
"Wanna talk about it?"
"What?" Liz looked confused.
"Whatever it is that's bothering you."
Liz took a deep breath and released it, slowly.

"When... when we first arrived," Liz started, "Zan was this... I don't know. Zan wasn't very nice."
"Yeah," Maria nodded. "And?"
"And then, last week, he like, changed. He was more like... Max."
"And this is a bad thing?" Maria leaned back.
"Well, no. It's just..." she paused.
"Just?"
"Maria, you saw those footprints in Azande's secret room. What if they were Zan's? What if he had just found out about the prophecy? What if Zan is only being nice to me because he wants to become immortal too?"
"I would say that doesn't sound like something the Max you told me about could do."
"But don't you see? He's not Max. Not yet. Maybe not ever. What if..."
"Here's a thought," Maria interrupted. "What if you talked to him? Asked him outright? You guys seemed pretty cozy the other night and no way can someone fake sappiness like that."
"You're right," Liz sat upright and straightened her spine. A smile came to her face. "Thank you Maria." She hugged her friend. "Let's go find Zan and Rath."

* * *

Their plans, however, were delayed by a caller to their room.
"Oh," Maria's face hardened when she opened the door. "It's you."
"I wish to speak with Lady Elizabeth," Queen Layola barged through Maria and into the apartment.
"Uh huh," Maria closed the door behind her. "Come on in, why don't you? Gee. Rude much?"
"What do you want?" Liz narrowed her eyes when she entered the room and saw Layola.
"You to learn some manners, for a start," Layola complained. "You clearly show a lack of respect for your betters."
"You're not better than me," Liz spat. "Maybe when you start to act like a normal person, I'll show you some respect. The same goes for that... man you call a husband and the pig you call a son."
Layola was lost for words, her mouth opening and closing without sound. At least, for a while.
"I wish to speak with your mistress," Layola turned to Maria. "Alone."
"Yeah," Maria nodded. "I'm sure you do." She sat down on the sofa.
"Please leave!" Layola barked. "Now!"
"Uhm," Maria looked up as Liz sat next to her. "That would be no."
"Do you know who I am?" Layola straightened herself to appear taller.
"Do you know how much I care?" Maria smirked. "Like I give a..."
"Maria," Liz warned. She turned to Layola. "No one speaks to me alone, Layola. Not the king, not Denda and certainly not you."
"I see," her eyes narrowed. "And what of Zan?"
"Him, I'll talk to alone," Liz grinned. "Seeing as he's the only member of this god forsaken society I trust."
"Very well," Layola sat in a seat across from the sofa. "It is about your relationship with the princes that I wish to discuss."
"I have a relationship with only one prince," Liz smirked. "I have a close friendship with Zan. I want nothing to do with the other."
"Please," Layola retorted. "Azande wants you for himself. Your precious Zan has no chance. But I believe that I have a solution that would prove beneficial to all concerned parties. Except Azande."
"What might that be?" Liz remained wary.
"Before Azande can announce that you are to be betrothed to him, you accept a proposal from Denda."
"Has hell frozen over?" Maria looked at the window.
"Not in this lifetime," Liz shook her head. "Or any other."
"It will be a marriage in name only," Layola pressed on. "After the ceremony, you will be free to see whomsoever you wish. Zan, if it is still your desire to do so. Discretely, of course."
"Of course," Maria rolled her eyes. "This has to be just about the stupidest idea I've ever heard. And I've heard one or two, lately."
"That is for Lady Elizabeth to decide," Layola snapped.
"What she said," Liz shook her head. "I trust you as far as I can throw Denda, who I trust even less. I'm not going to marry anyone. I want to go home and make my own mind up."
"What's in it for you?" Maria asked. "Or Denda, for that matter? Why would he agree to marry someone and let them conduct this huge affair?"
"Because with the appearance of a strong queen..."
"No deal," Liz shook her head.
"But you fail to understand..."
"Neither do you! This conversation is over. You have our permission to withdraw."
Layola glared at Liz with undisguised hatred.
"Let us hope that you do not come to regret that decision."
"What's one more?" Liz murmured as Layola slammed the door behind her.
"One more what?"
"Decision I've regretted. Now let's go find Zan before anyone else comes."
"Okay," Maria headed for the door. "But remember. Let me do the talking if we meet anyone."
"Anyone but Zan," Liz smiled.

* * *

"My apologies, Lady Elizabeth," the guard in the antechamber bowed. "As you have been forbidden contact with either of the princes, I would not inform you of Zan's whereabouts, even if I knew them. Perhaps if you spoke with the king..."
"I don't want to speak with the King," Liz barked. Along with Maria, they had been trying to find Zan all day, blocked by the king's men, usually. It was now late afternoon.
"Come on, Liz," Maria pulled her friend away before she could do something that totally uncharacteristic like... lose her temper. "Let's try out in the courtyard. Maybe the gate captain is less of a bootlicker."
With a contemptuous glare, Liz turned her back on the soldier and followed Maria to the door.

"How about we try something different," Maria suggested as she slowed Liz down from her headlong march toward the soldiers on duty at the gate.
"Like what?" Liz's voice was icy. "Violence?"
"Might work," Maria grinned. "But not exactly what I had in mind, no. How about we do what we agreed and let me do the talking?"
"Might as well," Liz huffed. "God, I hate this place."
"You and me both," Maria sighed. "How about we kidnap Zan and Rath, dump them in the Granolith and high tail it back to Roswell?"
"Slight problem," Liz smirked. "As much as I like the sound of that, we don't know where the Granolith is."
"Minor detail," Maria laughed.
"Okay, there's the gate captain. You go ask if he knows where Zan is."
"Better idea," Maria smirked. "Hey you. Captain man! Have you seen Lord Rath?"
"Aye," he nodded, looking Maria up and down. "Lord Rath passed these gates not ten minutes past, my lady."
"Really?" Maria rewarded him with a smile. "And was he alone?"
"No," he shook his head. "He was in the company of Prince Zan." He finished with a slight sneer.
"Any idea where they were going?"
"They didn't say. And I didn't ask."
"Ten minutes, you said?"
The guard nodded.
"Come on, Liz," Maria grabbed her hand. "Maybe we can catch them."
Together, they ran through the gate.

* * *

"This makes me feel like I'm in a James Bond film," Maria whispered as they peered over the top of a burned out crate.
Liz and Maria had followed Zan and Rath into the part of the city that Nikolas had attacked the day before. The two of them appeared to be surveying the damage. Or perhaps they were attracted by some ghoulish fascination, like so many of the other passersby. Every now and then, they stopped someone and spoke to them.
"What does?" Liz stared hard at Zan as though trying to read his lips.
"All this sneaking and skulking around."
"We are not skulking, Maria," Liz shook her head. "That makes it sound like what we are doing is so... underhanded."
"Well, isn't it?" Maria raised her eyebrows. "Why don't we just go up and say hi?"
"I just want to see how he behaves," Liz turned to her. "You know, when his guard is down."
"So, what do you think?"
"He obviously cares," Liz decided. "At least, I assume he's checking on the welfare of the people."
"Maybe he's checking on some contraband he's lost in the fire."
"Tell you what," Liz grinned. "Let me do the speculating. You stick to the skulking."
"Got it. Oh, looks like they're leaving."
"Come on," Liz urged,
"Yeah, I know, I know," Maria rolled her eyes. "Follow them."

As the two men worked their way through the city streets and alleyways, the condition of their surroundings changed almost block by block. The state of the housing deteriorated at a steady pace as they moved from the more affluent districts to the... not so affluent ones. Many times, the girls saw people huddled in dark corners. These people looked upon the two young women with more and more suspicion as the quality of the buildings fell.
"What do you think they're doing down here? In these... slums." Liz whispered, pressing closer to Maria for comfort.
"Making their way to more slums," Maria pointed to some houses that looked as though they were made from mud and sticks.
The air reeked of all sorts of unwholesome odors. One or two men watched their passing with more than a mild interest; some even followed them for a while.
"I wonder where they're going?" Liz's voice sounded timid. She was not feeling comfortable being here, especially with the fading light.
"There's your answer," Maria pointed at a building that Rath and Zan had stopped in front of. Although more solid in construction than its neighbors, it had the same look of decay about it. A faded, peeling sign above its door showed the remains of a picture of a bunch of grapes. From inside came the sounds of raucous laughter, shouting and women's squeals.
"Excuse me," Liz shepherded her bravery and called to a passer by; a chubby, pasty-faced man with a thin, scraggly beard.
"How much?" He stopped and appraised the young, wealthy looking women. From his expression, it was clear that he liked what he saw.
"Too much for you," Maria snarled.
"That building," Liz pointed, ignoring the man's question, and his looks. "It's an inn, right?"
"Among other things," he laughed. "Yeah."
"What do you mean?" Liz frowned. "What else is it?"
"A lady such as you need not share your taking with the innkeeper. Just tell me how much. If we can come to some... arrangement, you can keep all your profits for yourself."
"You mean... it's a..."
"Brothel," Maria finished.
"Don't play the coy innocent with me," the man's face flushed with anger. "You high born ladies are always coming down here for a bit of rough. Now are we going to make a deal, or what?"
Both girls ignored him, staring at the house of ill repute. Sensing that he would not be having fun with either of these two tonight, the man left, muttering curses under his breath, leaving the young ladies alone in their silence.
"Come on, Liz," Maria placed her hand over Liz's shoulder. "Let's get back. I don't know about you, but I really need to have a bath."

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Hi everyone! :)

I would like to take this opportunity to wish a speedy recovery to one of my readers who supplys feedback by e-mail, after a serious car accident resulted in a lengthy hospital stay. I'm glad that you are back at a computer so you can keep up again. :) My Spanish is nowhere near as good as your English, so I hope that you get well soon.

Now, a kind of warning. Some of you may not be aware that I have struggled over the past few years with employment. A company I worked for went bust, owing me stacks of money, and I have been unable to find similar work. (This is why I had to bail from the Bowlathon - a promised payout never turned up :( ) However, I have just joined a web site authoring outfit, working part time from home - evenings and weekends. I have to keep up 'my not so well paid' day job, because this may not pan out. Therefore, I have less time than I am used to, so my updates MIGHT be a little more infrequent than I have hitherto spoiled you guys with. :wink: I WILL do my best, though.

roswellluver - Well, Denda did warn you what Zan and Rath were like. Didn't you believe him? :wink:

Alma - Yup. I expect Zan saved a woman for Rath, and Rath saved on for Zan. :wink: :twisted:

TaffyCat - Yup. Great places to... uhm... well, meet... people... of the opposite sex. :wink: When this story is done, you MUST reread it. You'll understand why later. :wink:

ILYMEFOREVER - Me? I didn't do anything. It's that Rath and Zan! :twisted: Liz? Make bad decisions? Never! LOL

BehrObsession - Well, his tastes may have changed, but his urges still seem to be the same, and I can't see Liz satisfying them for him... yet. :wink:

Butterflies - They have a pretty good reason. :wink: Lots of them :wink: And they are all soft and curvy and... :twisted:

frenchkiss70 - They went there to relieve an urge. There. I said it. This made you sad? Oh my. Better not read tonights chapter then. :wink: Prophecies. I once read a book where the hero asked why they are so cryptic. The answere was to prevent the people not concerned from turning up to watch the monumental event like some side show. As good an explanation as any. :wink:

mezz - And of course, she would be mistaken for a... an employee, leading to all sorts of misunderstandings and... Imagine what I could do with that? :twisted:

Realistic Dreamer - It's okay to lurk. It's better to leave me a little note every now and then :) And what fun it is to write Azande and Denda! :)

kissme4ever123 - I would hazard a guess and say she wants her son to become immortal? :wink:

mareli - There is nothing going on in that brothel but... brotheling. :twisted:

SarahWhitman - When I write, I opften chuckle when I do those lines. I often thionk - Oh yeah, so and so HAS to say this. I love it when I'm told it worked. :) Thank you. Hope you're feeling better. :)

Evans3 - You can find my stories at... heck, can't be bother with all that url stuff. Click the web button at the bottom of my post - where all the email stuff id. :wink: And I warn you now. According to feedback I have recieved, you will end up sitting in front of your computer for lots of consecutive nights losing all kinds of sleep :) BTW - SOME might consider what they are doing as NOT stupid! :wink:

Zans Desire - But then, that's me, right? What do you mean, you missed this? :wink:

smokie - Problems? Whatever for? *smirk* It's interesting that the more questions I leave unaswered, the safer I am, so I will leave ALL yours alone. :wink:

AJK001 - :) Well, got a penchant for a surprise coming right up! :wink:

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Hmmmm.... meaning that Max would go into a brothel? :wink: I think Syrus's problem is one of gross incompetence. He wants his plan to succeed and forgets that others have their own plans.

Little_Miss_Roswell - Action all the way, baby! :wink:

LTL - As I said, what fun I could have if Liz went in! :wink: Ah, but does the prophecy speak of who we think (hope) it does? :twisted:

Doublestuf - Really? All that and good beer too? Wow. :wink: Serena? She sent the dream, did she? Hmmmm... Have we met Serena yet?

foreverdreamer15 - It depends upon your definition of the term... 'valid' :wink:

SpiderGirl - Hmmm... Well, I hope you uhm... love missing this bit? Then love catching up. Erm. LOL :) Thank you, I think.

Teresa - I love how everyone hopes they are in that brothel for something else entirely. :wink: All I can say is that they do the same thing in that brothel as everyone else. :twisted: (Quote me on that later)

BelevnDreamsToo - Ah, but maybe she will now see Azande in a new light! :wink:

missjamie - Backbones as well as front ones! LOL Sorry. Couldn't resist. :wink:

magikhands - Maybe it would have been better NOT to have followed them.

StrawberryShortcake17 - And the twists and turns haven't finished yet. Although, it is nearly time for me to start reeling them all in soon. :) Answers are almost around the corner. :wink: As are more questions, of course.


Warning: Readers of a nervous disposition might want to skip this chapter. :wink:



Brothers In Arms
Dire Straits


These mist covered mountains
Are a home now for me
But my home is the lowlands
And always will be
Someday you'll return to
Your valleys and your farms
And you'll no longer burn to be
Brothers in arms

Through these fields of destruction
Baptisms of fire
I've witnessed your suffering
As the battle raged higher
And though they did hurt me so bad
In the fear and alarm
You did not desert me
My brothers in arms

There's so many different worlds
So many different suns
And we have just one world
But we live in different ones

Now the sun's gone to hell and
The moon's riding high
Let me bid you farewell
Every man has to die
But it's written in the starlight
And every line in your palm
We are fools to make war
On our brothers in arms




Part 20

Mist clung to the ground like a thick, translucent blanket. Dew dripped from the leaves that still clung to the trees not yet denuded by the oncoming winter. A small group of oddly assorted men stood around the large fire, warding off the chill from the early morning mountain air, their boots stained dark by the moisture collecting on the grass. As they turned their hands over in the rising heat, no one said a word. Through an opening in the canopy of treetops, large black carrion birds spiraled in the clear air, their guttural calls shouting out warnings to one another, as though they knew that the men below would provide their next meal. Through the dew covered grass, a tall, red haired man made his way to join them.
"Nikolas," they all greeted him with a nod as he too warmed his hands over the fire.
Nikolas grunted by way of his greeting.
"Will Kivar be joining us this morning?" one of them, the designated leader of the group finally plucked up the courage to speak to the mean looking man.
"Breakfast," Nikolas growled.
"Here he comes now," someone indicated the tall man in a long gray cloak moving toward them.
The man's long, nearly white hair almost shone with the sun straining through the low cloud cover. Kivar joined his comrades at the fire but he did not raise his hands over it. He gazed skyward, shielding his eyes against the bright light with his hand. He stared for a moment before dropping his eyes. He looked worried for a moment.
"Twenty one," he frowned. "Not good. Not good at all."
Nikolas cleared his throat.
"Ah, good morning, gentlemen," Kivar surveyed his companions, as if seeing them for the first time. His voice had an almost hissing quality.
"Kivar," they all returned his greeting. Even Nikolas grunted.
"Before we start, have you all breakfasted?"
"We have," some one spoke to add to the nodding of heads.
"Just bring them all up to date," Nikolas snapped. "Some of us have had a long journey to get here and some of us want to return to our beds."
"Hot company?" someone smirked.
Nikolas glared at the joker with narrowed eyes, silencing the laughter that had hardly started.
"Before you begin," the leader interrupted, a short dumpy man, "there are things we wish to discuss." There was a unanimous nodding of heads. "We have been hearing rumors. We have seen the coming and goings of our spies and yet you keep us in the dark. Please, Kivar. Tell us what is going on?"

Kivar looked hard at the man who almost shrank under his gaze. Finally, he released his breath.
"You are right, Jipson," Kivar nodded. "Much has been happening lately, and I have been less than generous with my counsel. Decisions will need to be made soon, and you deserve to hear all. But there has been a good reason for this, the details of which I won't bore you with. As to what is going on... there has been a slight shifting of power within our royal family."
"And do we know the cause of this shift?"
Raised eyebrows suggested that everyone already knew what the answer was.
"Well, it seems that of her many... choices, the newcomer, Lady Elizabeth, has chosen Prince Zan."
"She's chosen the weakling over Denda?" Everyone looked confused. "So where does this leave us?"
"The same place we were before the young lady's arrival," Kivar shrugged.
"Is it true that changes have been noticed in Zan's behavior? In his appearance?"
"It is true," Kivar nodded. "He has taken an interest in his studies and has shown... some... talent with the sword."
Nikolas released a derisive snort.
"But what if this girl turns our mouse into a lion? Dealing with Zan as he is... was... is one thing. Denda is something else entirely. I do not find the thought of facing two Dendas particularly appealing."
"When the time comes," Nikolas hissed, brandishing his wicked looking sword and running his finger along its edge, "I shall gut Denda like the pig he is and show just how good a swordsman he really is."
"We do not need to worry about Zan," Kivar gave a mysterious smile. "I have witnessed him with the girl and as good a job that she is doing with him, we have no need to fear him. No matter what he may - or may not - become, Zan's doom has already been written and there is no escape from the plans that have been laid."
"Your words do little to placate us, Kivar," another voice shook his head. "It has been reported that Zan has already stood up to his brother, as well has having defeated him in combat. All due to this Lady Elizabeth."
Kivar looked to Nikolas, his eyes questioning. Nikolas sighed and nodded.
"Very well then," Kivar nodded. "I shall implement steps to ensure that they are... separated."
"The sooner, the better, brother dear," a newcomer announced her arrival. "I've had another communication from Zan's mother."
She was as tall as Kivar, but much younger, appearing only nineteen or twenty. Her shoulder length hair was filled with curls and was the color of lemons. Her steely gray eyes seemed devoid of life.
"Ava," Kivar nodded as she joined them around the fire.
"What's this?" Jipson looked up sharply. His comrades were all as looking concerned as he was. "Why would Nadanne be communicating with you, Ava?"

"Ah," Kivar coughed. "Yes. It, ah... seems that there's a rumor circulating Z'ndrina regarding a certain... affection that Zan and Ava have for one another."
"Are these rumors true?" Jipson turned to Ava.
"In a manner of speaking," she grinned. "Yes, they are. But Nadanne talks of a marriage of convenience. And trust me. There's as much chance of me marrying Zan as there is of Kivar marrying..." she glanced around, "Vilondra."
"These rumors are useful tools, nothing more," Kivar smirked, holding his hand up to gain everyone's attention. "It keeps everyone in the castle guessing. However... I do admit that Nadanne is starting to become rather tiresome with her constant proposals. As is Elizabeth with her interfering. Perhaps we should take steps to remove their machinations from the game."
"Why bother?" Ava laughed. "Azande's planning to announce his own betrothal to Elizabeth next weekend. On the holy day. He's going to make his lapdog, Syrus, pronounce the agreement and spend the whole day celebrating with a great feast."
"I think," Kivar rolled his eyes, "that Lady Elizabeth may have something to say about that."
"It's not so much the ladies," Jipson stared into the fine, deep in thought. "Denda turns eighteen soon. Perhaps we should take steps to eliminate one of the sons. My preference is to remove Zan. Denda is arrogant and over confident. Men like that make mistakes. Zan is... Zan is starting to use his brain. I for one do not like the thought of that. I say kill Zan now. Denda will do us all a favor and slay his father. Then, we kill Denda. And that is the end of our monarchy."

"Is this how you all feel?" Kivar surveyed his lieutenants. "Do you agree with Jipson?"
Every one gave slow nodes of agreement.
"Very well," Kivar stroked his chin. "I will put our spies on to Zan's movements. His part in the game has come to an end and it's time to remove his piece from the board. Let us arrange to... deal with this the day before the holy day and spoil Azande's feast at the same time. Now, on to more pressing matters. I believe that a visit to the village of Orest, in the west, is in order. It is the next one on the list, is it not?"

* * *

Zan, looking drawn and tired, was already sitting in his usual seat when Liz entered the classroom in which they shared their lessons. He had been 'gone' for two days and no one knew where he was. At least, no one admitted to knowing where he was. The exception to this was Prince Denda. He had called on Liz that first evening, taking great pleasure in informing her of Zan's whereabouts, describing in Technicolor detail his probable activities and finished with a healthy dose of 'I told you so.' He had not left Liz in any better a mood than he found her. In fact, it was probably worse. And now here was Zan, looking no worse for wear except for his tiredness. As if he had spent his time away on innocent activities.

"Good morning, Liz," Zan looked up, the surprise on his face at seeing her being replaced by pleasure. "As lovely as it is to see you here this morning, should you be here? Considering..."
Liz did not acknowledge him in any way as she took a seat as far from Zan as she could physically get. Zan widened his eyes but showing his growing wisdom, made no comment. A frosty silence descended upon the room.
"Are you well?" he asked at last.
Again, Liz made no response, choosing instead to study something in her journal.
"Is, uh... everything alright," Zan paused, "Lady Elizabeth?"
"Fine," Liz's response came out like a glacier. Slow and icy.
"Ah," Zan sighed. "Nevertheless, it is still nice to see you."
"Right," Liz nodded, not looking up from her book.

Zan was spared from further efforts at conversation by the arrival of the teacher. If he noticed the distance or the cold temperature between his two students, he showed no sign. He was too busy showing surprise at Liz's presence.
"Lady Elizabeth," he squeaked. "Surely you are aware that the King has prohibited you contact with Prince Zan."
"Oh," Liz raised her eyebrows. "As much as I like the idea of little or no contact with 'Prince Zan'," Zan winced, "I will continue to see who I want, when I want. The man you refer to as your king has no jurisdiction over me. Got that? Now, as I am stuck on this god awful planet, I intend to make the most of it. I plan to learn all about what a messed up dump this place is so when I go home, I can make sure it doesn't happen there. As Zan has been ordered to attend lessons, I fail to see how I can be here and avoid... 'him' at the same time."
Zan shrunk in his seat.
"But... the King..."
"Is just a dirty old man," Liz spat. "Like the rest of his family."
"Perhaps," Zan interrupted the teacher's reply with a heavy sigh, "we should proceed with the lesson. Lady Elizabeth and I will keep our..." Zan looked across the empty room to Liz, "distance. That should please my father and the Lady Elizabeth both."
"It's just..." the older man seemed unconvinced. "What with the King's anger over Orest..."
"Who's Orest?" Liz asked.
"Not who," Zan shook his head, his face falling with a sense of sadness and loss. "Orest is a what. Orest 'was' a thriving little community, to the west of here. Over three hundred citizens. My father's spies learned that Kivar had planned a strike on the town and naturally, sent out reinforcements to protect them. They arrived too late."
"That's awful!" Liz held her hand to her mouth.
"When the relief column arrived, the village had been burned to the ground. Everything of value had either been destroyed or taken. Not a single soul had been left to tell the tale of what happened. Some men were apparently found in the woods. They've been brought back to the castle, where they've joined the army, wanting revenge, I expect. Anyway, they're sort of in quarantine right now. Can't have them spreading stories about how 'invincible' Kivar is."
"Not so invincible as to attack somewhere that can defend themselves," Liz sneered.
"No," Zan shrugged. "He is, after all, just a bandit. We have nothing to fear from Kivar. I'm sure his destiny will end at the end of a rope."
"Something has to be done about him," Liz shook her head. "Can't you, like, patrol these small villages, or something?"
"There are patrols," Zan nodded. "But some of these villages are very isolated."
"So how did Azande learn of their attack?"
"We have out spies," Zan smirked. "Right in the heart of his camp. Seems Kivar isn't so beloved amongst his men as rumor would have us believe."
"But how come the news always gets here too late?"
"I would imagine that it can't be very easy to get word back to the castle when you are stuck in the middle of a camp of hostile enemies. There is nothing worse than the fate of a captured spy." He looked at Liz's face, still hard and cold. He shivered. "Well, almost nothing."

* * *

"That's good, Zan.," the fencing master, Plachette called as Zan blocked another of Liz's wild attempts to hit him with her practice sword. "You really are mastering the use of a sword as a defensive wall. I saw your display in the tournament and was most impressed. It was hard to believe that it was you."
"Thank you," Zan grunted, fending off another attempt to strike his head.
Liz's frosty attitude toward him had changed. It had been replaced by one of fire. Liz was letting out her anger by trying hard to cause Zan some physical pain. She knew that there was little chance in actually hitting him but there was still some therapeutic value in releasing her anger by trying. Besides, the hope that she might get lucky gave her some satisfaction.
"Perhaps," Plachette looked hopeful as he broke the sparring partners apart, "we can try teaching you a few offensive maneuvers?"
"That sounds like fun," Zan smiled. "But not now. We should call it a day. Learning something new would necessitate the need to let my guard down. Lady Elizabeth seems somewhat... cross with me and I really would not like to be on the receiving end of another of her lessons."

* * *

"So how long will you keep this up?" Maria looked up at Liz over breakfast. "You've been giving him the iceberg treatment for a week now."
"Two days, Maria!" Liz barked. "Three, if you include the afternoon we followed him. He spent all that time in a... a brothel. Why shouldn't I be angry?"
"Disappointed, yes, but angry?" Maria shrugged. "Zan is who he is. It's not like he didn't do this before, is it? It's not like you're together or anything."
"I know," Liz sighed. "But I thought things were different now."
"Just because you're showing an interest in him, there's no reason for him not to... you know, do what he does when he goes there. I mean, he's not going to get it from you, is he? You wouldn't have let Zan actually do anything? Would you?"
"Of course not!" Liz snapped. "It's just... It's not Max."
"He's not Max, Liz," Maria wrapped her arm around her. "When he is, worry about what he gets up to, then."
"Yeah, but..."
"Look, he's trying hard to please you, isn't he?"
"How come you're so calm? Rath was in there too, you know."
"You know me, babe," Maria smirked. "Teflon. I can leave him just like that." Maria unsuccessfully tried to snap her fingers. "I'm not the one who has this... how did you say I put it in your dream? This whole look into my eyes soul mate thing?"
"But, Maria..."
"But me no buts," Maria laughed. "As soon as we find the Granolith, we can leave. Until then we need Zan on our side, trying to find a way to prevent you from becoming Mrs. Azande the third. That is, unless you want to take Layola up on her offer."
Liz glared at Maria.
"Thought not."
"What am I going to do?"
"I can't help you there, Chica. I can only support you. Just don't wipe out all the good work you've done with Zan by playing silly mind games he probably doesn't understand. Tell him you know where he went and let him know how disappointed you are in him. But don't give him the traditional cold shoulder and hope he works it out. Somehow, I think that might have the wrong effect on Zan."

* * *

The thing that Liz loved most about talking to Maria was how she made her see sense through the clouds that were her life. She felt much better about going to attend the lessons with Zan, after a week of dreading them - even though it was all self inflicted as she could easily have given them up. She was feeling so good, she even managed to lose the guard that followed her around like a lap dog. Her spirits were high as she moved through the hallway toward the classroom, and Zan. Not that she would apologize to him for her behavior for that would imply that it had been her wrongdoing that created the situation in the first place. Although Maria warned against playing games, it never hurt to keep the guys on their back feet. She would behave as though nothing had happened. Liz would enter the class, smile at Zan, and take her seat next to him. She might even reward him with a warm 'Good morning'. The cheerful young girl with the spring in her step was so focused on how the morning would go that she did not see the dark shape step out of the shadows until she was almost on top of it. She did, however, see the very long, very sharp dagger that glinted in the light as it drove straight for her heart.

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