Straightening You Out (M/L ADULT) - COMPLETE, 6/6/05

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A/N: Yay i'm in before the week deadline :!:

Anyway thank you for the great feedback i really appreciate it

Also, I'm posting a new fic. It will be here on the AA board so please stop by and check it out :wink:


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Part 11

Two Weeks Later

Liz was excited as she headed home from her first week at work. She loved her job, the kids were eager to learn and most were exceptionally well behaved, but that wasn’t what had her excited tonight. What she was excited about was that in less than three hours her best friend would be arriving from Boston.

It had been almost four months now since Liz had seen her and she couldn’t wait for her to come so they could spend the entire weekend catching up on each other’s lives but best of all Liz couldn’t wait for her to meet Max.

On her way home and stopped to pick up some last minute items that they would need like ice cream, chocolate and the essential chick flick with Brad Pitt in it.

“You look happy” a voice startled her as she made her way out of the video store.

“Alex!” she hugged her brother and gave him a kiss. Things were still a little awkward since the whole Max thing and she didn’t see him that much. He didn’t feel comfortable coming over to see her at the place he had spent time with Max at and in truth Liz didn’t feel all that comfortable with being in the same room with the once lovers either. But as time went by she was learning to now not only accept but live with those things just like Max had to with her.

“So how’s the job?” he asked.

“Wonderful” she smiled.

“Max?”

“Even more wonderful” she blushed, since they had admitted their love to each other things between them had become more serious and intense. Liz knew without a doubt that Max was her future and now they had started to talk about it and make plans for the future which she loved.

“And you had a good trip?” he smiled.

“Oh Alex it was so wonderful, I mean the place was beautiful, the beaches the people” she raved.

“So every is just wonderful?” he laughed at his sister, in truth he had never seen her this happy before.

“Yes I guess it is” she blushed “and there is also the fact that Maria flies in tonight” she informed him. She watched her brothers eyes light up in happiness too.

“and when were you going to tell me?” he asked.

“I swear I was just planning on hogging her for the weekend then I would have brought her around” she told him.

Alex smiled, Maria and Liz were as close as two people could be, and he actually found it amazing that they had been in different cities for as long as they had.

“Ok well don’t forget me or I’m coming over to find you” he told her.

“I won’t, love you Alex” she said.

“You too Lizzie”

They parted ways then and Liz made her way home, Max was just coming out of the bedroom and it was obvious he had a shower because his hair was wet and his chest naked.

“Hmm yeah” Liz groaned when she caught sight of him. He obviously hadn’t heard her come in and she could stand and watch him for a small while at the moment.

“See something you like?” his voice startled her and she lifted her head to his face and off his chest.

He was smirking when she looked at him. “Ooh yeah” she licked her lips.

She walked towards him like a tiger on the prowl and began pushing him back towards the bedroom.

“You have a guest arriving” he reminded her.

“You showered without me and that’s not acceptable” she whispered as she started taking her own clothing off.

Max didn’t wait to be asked, he pulled his jeans and boxers off and when Liz was naked he carried her to the shower.

“Is this the last time we’ll get to do this all weekend?” he asked as he pressed her against the glass of the shower screen as he cupped her breasts and kissed her neck.

“Fuck no” Liz groaned as he sucked on a particularly sensitive spot.

“Good” he moaned as her hand enclosed around his hard cock.

“Got any straight friends because Maria loves sex” she informed him.

“not as much as I love sex with you” he whispers.

“True but she’s a total slut” she laughed good naturedly but it didn’t last long when Max cupped her ass and pressed her against the wall positioning himself to take her.

He entered her in one hard thrust “OH yeah baby” he moaned.

They had enjoyed their week in Hawaii thoroughly. They had spent most of the time in the room fucking like bunnies and some days neither of them could walk because they were so sore. Max would do it all over again though, being back at every day life was hard. They both worked and when they got home they had other things like family and friends to deal with. Max Evans would be happy though if he could just stay at home and make love to Liz all day.

He fucked her hard against the shower wall as he thought about Hawaii.

“I love you” she moaned loudly as he pounded in and out of her.

“I love you too” he grunted.

They orgasmed hard together crying out each others names before washing off and getting out of the shower.

They had to leave in a little while to pick Maria up and Liz could barely contain her excitement anymore.

“Your going to love her” Liz told him, she knew he was slighly nervous that Maria would hate him.

“I know I will, if you love her how can I not?” he replied.

***

Maria squealed as she caught sight of her best friend across the airport and took off at a run towards her forgetting about the people who had tagged along with her. Liz saw her and moved just as quickly and the two met in huge hug which ended up with them falling on the floor together.

“I missed you” Maria cried “lets live in the same city from now on” she said.

“Only if it’s New York” Liz laughed.

“I missed you too”

Max walked up and picked up Maria’s carry on luggage off the ground.

Maria whistled when she saw the Adonis walking towards her. “Don’t look now but the hottest guy on earth is walking this way” she whispered to Liz.

Liz looked around and her eyes found Max walking towards them. “I’m gonna take him home” she told Maria.

“What!” Maria gasped “What bout Max the love of your life” she demanded.

Max reached them at this point and smiled “Hi”

“Hi yourself sexy” Liz replied.

Maria licked her lips as her eyes travelled his body, he was fucking gorgeous.

Max was a little confused until Liz winked at him.

“I’m Maria” she held out her hand and Max helped her off the ground before offering his hand to Liz.

“Can I take you home?’ Liz smiled.

Max smirked “Sure” she said.

Maria’s mouth fell open in shock.

Max moved closer to Liz and placed his arm around her, he thought Maria was interesting so far.

“Maria why did you run off?”

Max felt Liz tense in his arms as two guys approached Maria, Maria threw Liz an apologetic smile and Max wondered what was going on.

“Liz” the name rolled off one of the guys lips and Max wanted to punch him, he didn’t like the way he had stopped and started staring at his Liz.

His eyes turned to the guy wrapped around Liz then “Who the hell are you?” he asked.

Maria sighed “Sean we just met him he just helped us off the floor that’s all” Maria explained.

Max’s mouth fell open in shock firstly because he heard Maria call the guy Sean and then secondly because she told him that he was someone that they just met.

“Um actually Maria this is Max” Liz finally spoke up and explained to her friend.

Maria’s eyes went wide and then she flushed red “oh god I was checking out your boyfriend” to Liz.

Liz just laughed and Max squirmed next to her.

“Boyfriend?” Sean questioned speaking up.

Liz took a deep breath. “Kyle, Sean” she greeted “Why are you here?” she got straight to the point.

“Maria said she was coming to visit we wanted to see you as well” Kyle smiled moving to stand next to his step sister.

Stepping out of Max’s arms Liz enveloped Kyle in a hug to which he returned.

“Kyle Valenti this is my boyfriend Max Evans” she introduced. Max and Kyle shook hands and then the silence turned awkward again.

“Max this is Sean Deluca, Maria’s cousin” she introduced. Max offered his hand but Sean didn’t take it, his eyes just narrowed and turned to Liz.

“You look good Liz” he whispered. “I missed you” he said.

“Thank you” was her response.

They walked towards baggage then, Liz and Max with linked hands and Liz’s spare hand in Maria’s.

“So where are you guys staying?” Liz asked.

Both Kyle and Sean turned to Maria then.

“What! I never invited the two of you remember” she told them.

“Cant we crash with you and Alex, Lizzie?” Kyle asked.

Liz sighed “I don’t live with Alex anymore Kyle and our apartment only has room for one more and that’s where Maria is staying” she explained.

“When did you move out of Alex’s?” Sean asked stiffly from beside Maria.

“A couple of months ago” Liz answered simply.

“so the two of you live together?” Sean asked hurt. He had hoped that he would be able to fix things with Liz by coming here. He had been heartbroken when she had refused his proposal and then fled Boston.

“Yes” Max answered for her.

“Um I’ll give Alex a call and see if you can stay there, Kyle” Liz told him.

“thanks” he nodded.

Luckily they all fit into Max’s car and it was quiet and awkward on the way into the city.

“nice car” Kyle commented.

“Thanks” Max replied.

Liz talked on the cell with Alex who agreed reluctantly to let them crash for a few nights.

“How long are you guys staying?” Liz turned and asked.

“I’ve gotta head back in a couple of days” Kyle answered.

“Sean?”

“That depends” he answered.

“On?” Liz asked him her eyes darting to Maria who was shaking her head.

“On how long it takes to convince you that you belong with me” he said straight up.

Before Liz could even think of a response the car jerked sharply and Max slammed the breaks on.

“Max what are you doing?” Liz asked startled.

“Turning around” he said.

“What why?” she asked confused.

“Well I figured Sean is wasting his time and might as well catch the next flight back to Boston” he told her.

Liz smiled at him and Max instantly felt reassured.

“Listen Max you’re probably a great guy but Liz and I have history I’m sure you can understand that” Sean said smugly.

Max’s eyes never left Liz’s “I know where I belong thanks Sean” she said.

Maria and Kyle were watching Liz and Max is astonishment, they had so much chemistry Maria thought and Kyle was just wondering if they would start going at it in front of them all.

Sean was furious “Liz” he snapped.

“Max’s right Sean, if that’s why your here your wasting your time. I love Max” she said.


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A/N: Hi everyone, sorry it's been so long but i've been really struggling with this part. So i aplogise because it's a little blah :?

This is the second last part of this story, so thank you for the wonderful feedback.


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Part 12

“I can’t believe you let them come!” Liz yelled at Maria as they finally walked into the apartment her and Max shared.

Maria sighed she knew Liz was right and she had every right to be angry as did Max who was ready to tear Sean apart.

“I know I’m sorry but they kind of just landed it on me this morning” she told them.

“Yeah well remember that thing they invented 50 years ago called the telephone” Liz sighed.

Maria hung her head in shame.

“I really am sorry” she whispered.

Liz closed her eyes “Listen Ria I’m sorry I yelled but it was just a shock and..”

Maria took a seat next to Liz on the couch “No you had every right to yell” Maria told her.

They were quiet for a few minutes then “So Max…….” Maria smiled.

Liz grinned “I really had you going at the airport” she giggled.

“God yeah, I couldn’t believe you were checking him out when you already had a good boyfriend at home”

“I know the look on your face when he put his hand around me was priceless” Liz continued to giggle.

Max walked into the room then and smiled at the sight of the two of them giggling on the lounge. His anger over Sean in the car almost disappeared as he watched how happy Liz was with her best friend.

He couldn’t get over how beautiful she was, her long hair flowing over her face as she giggled at something Maria said, the twinkle in her eyes as she teased her. But it was the smile on her face when she turned and caught his eye that made Max’s heart race because he knew that smile was reserved for him and him alone.

They hadn’t really settled anything with Sean in the car. Max reluctantly pulled the car back onto the road and drove towards Alex’s apartment, dropping Sean and Kyle off

Then him, Liz and Maria headed back to his apartment.

“So what are we doing tonight?” he smiled at the two girls.

Maria squealed at Max’s words “Oh god I’m going out in New York City” she cried.

Max was shocked at her outburst not used to the Deluca dramatics but Liz just rolled her eyes and laughed.

“So we’re going out?” Max asked sitting on the arm of the lounge and wrapping his arm around Liz’s shoulders.

“Sounds like it” Liz laughed.

“Ok” Max smiled.

“So will Alex be coming?” Maria asked Liz. Liz stiffened slightly when Maria asked her the question, Liz hadn’t been completely honest with Maria when she told her how she knew Max.

“We can ask him” Max suggested.

“Oh I can’t wait to see him” she smiled.

“But if Alex comes that will mean Kyle and Sean will be coming” Liz told Maria hoping she would change her mind.

“Look Liz I think the best thing for Sean is too see that you’ve moved on. You’ve told him you have and he knows about Max and that you live together now he has to live with it” she told her.

Liz was a little annoyed by the comment still unable to believe that Maria had let her ex boyfriend tag along on the trip.

“Fine” she said.

***

Liz almost laughed when she walked out in her leather pants and black sparkly top when she saw what Maria was wearing.

“Um Ria I think you’re dressed a little too bright” she suggested, she was wearing a tight bright aqua strapless dress and a pair of old style white gogo boots.

“What?” she asked confused but when she turned and saw Liz’s outfit which was a close match to Max’s black leather pants and black cut off top.

“Oh” she frowned.

“Maybe the boots are a bit much” Liz suggested.

In the end Maria pulled the white boots off and placed a pair of strappy silver shoes on instead.

They were meeting Alex, Kyle and Sean at the club as well as Michael who Max had invited at the last minute. He decided a little back up in case things got ugly was a good idea but he didn’t tell Liz that.

Sean’s eyes roamed Liz’s curvy body like a starved man as she walked into the club, her leather pants fit her in all the right places and all he could think about was running his hands over her tight ass. He frowned when he caught sight of Max, dressed similarly to Liz and looked down at his dark jeans and a blue top comparing their outfits. He thought he looked good and Liz certainly used to think so.

“Alex” Maria squealed when she caught sight of her friend.

Alex hugged her back eagerly and listened as best he could over the music as she began talking a mile a minute.

He greeted his sister then and shook hands with Max.

Maria and Liz took to the dance floor then while the guys all ordered drinks at the bar.

Uh huh, this is my shit
All the girls stomp your feet like this

A few times I've been around that track
So it's not just gonna to happen like that
Because I ain't no hollaback girl
I ain't no hollaback girl


“Maxwell” Michael greeted as he arrived.

He’d gotten over their fight finally realising that it was completely wrong of him to meddle in Max and Liz’s relationship and was now trying to be a better brother.

“Hey Michael. Um this is Alex, Kyle and Sean” he introduced the other guys.

Ooooh ooh, this my shit, this my shit

I heard that you were talking shit
And you didn't think that I would hear it
People hear you talking like that, getting everybody fired up
So I'm ready to attack, gonna take you out
That's right, put your pom-poms downs, getting everybody fired up

A few times I've been around that track
So it's not just gonna to happen like that
Because I ain't no hollaback girl
I ain't no hollaback girl

Ooooh ooh, this my shit, this my shit


“Who’s the hot blonde with Liz” Michael asked when he caught sight of Liz and Maria on the dace floor.

Max laughed she should have known his brother would like Maria at first sight, he wasn’t so sure how they would get on once she opened her mouth though.

“Liz’s best friend Maria” he answered.

So that's right dude, meet me at the bleachers
No principals, no student-teachers
All the boys want to be the winner, but there can only be one
So I'm gonna fight, gonna give it my all
Gonna make you fall, gonna sock it to you
That's right I'm the last one standing, another one bites the dust

A few times I've been around that track
So it's not just gonna to happen like that
Because I ain't no hollaback girl
I ain't no hollaback girl


Maria looked up and her mouth fell open in lust when she saw the tall guys standing next to Max.

“Liz who is that hottie with Max?” she asked.

Liz discreetly turned around, dancing in a circle and throwing Max and Michael a smile.

“Michael?” she asked.

Maria nodded “Max’s brother” she informed her.

“Oh girlfriend you are so setting me up” she told her causing Liz to laugh.

Ooooh ooh, this my shit, this my shit

Let me hear you say this shit is bananas
B-A-N-A-N-A-S
(This shit is bananas)
(B-A-N-A-N-A-S)

A few times I've been around that track
So it's not just gonna to happen like that
Because I ain't no hollaback girl
I ain't no hollaback girl

Ooooh ooh, this my shit, this my shit


The song changed then and Michael dragged Max out onto the dance floor. “Maria this is my brother Michael” he introduced over the loud music.

“Hi” Maria gave Michael a dazzling smile.

Stepping closer Michael leaned down and whispered “Hi yourself Blondie”

Max moved to Liz and wrapped his arms around her then “Hey baby” he whispered leaning in to kiss her. Liz moaned and eagerly responded.

Sean watched Liz and Max all over each other on the dance floor angrily, Alex could see him clenching his fists.

“Give it up Sean” he told him.

“What” Sean said.

“Get over it, you’re not going to win her back” he shrugged.

Sean shook his head, there had to be a way to convince Liz to give him a go.

Max’s hands cupped Liz’s body and guided her grinding hips against his hardness.

“Your so sexy” he told her.

“You too” she agreed, they had both forgotten about Michael and Maria who were getting on nicely from their own spot on the dance floor.

Liz looked around the club when she felt eyes staring at her and she locked eyes with an angry Sean and sighed “man I wish he’d just fuck off back to Boston” she told Max.

“Yeah” Max agreed clenching his teeth to stop himself from charging back over to Sean and knocking him out for the way he was staring at him girlfriend.

“I love you” Liz told him with a smile, she wanted to reassure him that she wasn’t going anywhere “it’s you, no one else baby”

“Me too” he whispered.

A dozen rounds and five hours later a drunk group of almost friends left the club and headed back to Max’s. They all sat around the living room and Max pulled some more grog out of the cupboards.

“Lets play a game” Kyle suggested “Everyone gets to ask the group a question if your answer is yes you go through if it’s no you skull” he said.

Everyone else agreed.

Alex went first “Have you had sex in a public place”

Max and Liz chorused yes, as did Kyle, Michael, Sean and Maria.

“Have you ever cheated?” Sean asked his eyes blazing into Liz’s.

“Yes” came from Kyle, Michael, Maria and surprisingly Max.

“No” from Liz and Alex who skulled their vodka shots easily.

“Have you ever had a threesome” Maria asked the group with a giggle.

“I wish” cried Kyle and Sean agreed. Michael and Alex simply sighed no but Liz and Max looked at each other awkwardly before answering “Yes”

“What!” Maria gasped.

“When the hell did that happen?” she asked Liz.

“Maria” Liz hissed. By now everyone was eyeing Max and Liz. Michael of course already knew and Kyle wanted to know but Alex was shocked and Sean wanted to tear Max apart.

“Change of rules” Kyle called. “Answer the question or you skull” he laughed.

Liz glared at him and emptied her shot glass.

“Oh come on Liz, you’ve gotta share I’m living voraciously through you” Maria cried.

“It’s none of your business” Liz laughed.

They called it a night then and Maria hopped in a taxi and disappeared home with Michael and Alex, Sean and Kyle crashed on the floor.

Liz started stripping her clothes off once they were in their room while Max used the bathroom. When Max walked back into the room she was in nothing but a tiny g-string. He shoved his leather pants off and walked towards her with a ferrel smile. His cock was hard and ready for her.

Without words Liz pushed him on his back in the middle of the bed and climbed on top of him. “I want to fuck you” Max growled attacking her breasts with his hands and mouths. Liz smiled and pulled her g-string off before sinking down on his cock.

Sean hopped up and struggled through the dark to find the bathroom. He opened a door and squinted through the darkness but he realised it was too big to be a bathroom, he was just about to close the door when he her.

Liz rode Max’s cock hard “Oh yes Max, oh you feel so good baby” she moaned.

“Of Fuck yes Liz ride my cock” Max groaned. They didn’t care about the people in the living room as the fucked. Max played with Liz’s tits and lifted his hips to meet every thrust.

“Oh fuck yes, oh Max baby I love you oh yes” she moaned.

Sean felt his heart clench when he heard it and turned his head to wear the noise was coming from. The sight of Liz astride Max and riding him in bliss was too much for him and he knew then it was over. Liz loved someone else, she didn’t love him.

He closed the door softly and returned to the lounge room deciding he would be on a plane out of her life the next day.
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Part 13

It was a relief for both Max and Liz when Sean and Kyle finally left to go back to Boston. Maria had stuck around and was now sharing an apartment with Alex. It seemed as though every thing in their life that could have possibly come between them had and they had pulled through it and dealt with it all. They had dealt with their ex’s their siblings and as far as Max was concerned the only thing left to do was to find their happy ever after.

“Hey sweetie” his mother greeted him as he walked through the door.

“Hi mum” he kissed her.

“Where’s Liz?” she asked, normally where one was the other wouldn’t be far behind.

“Oh I just dropped by for a short visit” he told her.

Dianne smirked at her son she knew that there was something going on “Sit down sweetie” she encouraged.

“So what’s on your mind?” she asked.

“Am I that easy to read?” he laughed.

“No not normally but tonight yes” she told him.

“Remember Nana’s ring that she left for me?” he asked. His grandmother had left him her antique engagement ring when she had died and it had always meant more than anything to Max, but after accepting and telling his family he was gay he gave the ring back to his mother in case Michael wanted it some day.

Dianne smiled brightly “Yes”

Max fidgeted, he knew he could probably have just bought Liz a new ring but being able to give her his grandmothers meant a lot to him. “Do you think Michael would mind if I asked for it back?”

“Of course not sweetie, it never meant as much to him as it did to you” she assured him “Can I ask why?”

Max laughed at his mother “I think you know why”

Dianne squealed and moved to give her son a huge hug “Oh sweetie I’m so happy” she told him. “you know I love you and that I accept you for who you are but I’m so glad that you picked someone as lovely as Liz” she told him.

“Me too Mum which is why I’m going to snap her up before I do something stupid and loose her” he told her.

Dianne shook her head “Impossible” she told him “I see the way she looks at you, she loves you just as much as you love her, Max the two of you are meant to be” his mother had always been a romantic, it probably came from the fact that she had been married to her high school sweetheart for almost 40 years.

“Thanks Mum”

Dianne hopped of her seat and went into the study then so she could retrieve the ring out of Phillips safe. She handed it to Max in the same box that it had been in when he gave it back.

“What about Michael?” he said.

“I never told Michael that you gave it back” she assured him and Max smiled.

“You never gave up on me did you?” Max asked his mother. It had been the hardest thing he had ever had to do telling his parents that he was gay, he saw the disappointment in his mothers eyes, the disgust in his fathers and siblings eyes and had to live with that because it was who he was. So seeing his mother so happy about his relationship with Liz meant more to Max than he could express, because he felt acceptance and pride like he hadn’t felt in a long time.

“No sweetie, but I was happy as long as you were happy”

“I am” he kissed his mother then and headed out

“Max sweetie” she called out.

“Yeah?” he said.

“Can I ask when you’re planning on asking my future daughter in law?” she grinned.

“Soon” he told her, he had to keep some surprises to himself.

***

Liz was in the shower when Max got home that night so he took the opportunity to put the ring some place that she wouldn’t find it accidentally, she wasn’t the snooping type but he didn’t want to take the risk that she would find it whilst looking for something one day.

In truth Max didn’t have a plan for asking her to marry him, it had been during Sean’s visit when he was so scared that he was going to loose her that he realised he was thinking about forever with Liz. He never believed he would find that with someone, it wasn’t often that gay men found long lasting relationships like that.

After hiding the ring he stripped out of the suit he wore to work and decided to join Liz in the shower.

Liz turned surprised when she felt his hard body press up against hers “I needed a shower too” he whispers reminiscent of their first time together to which Liz obviously picks up on since she laughs as she turns in his arms.

Max reaches out and caresses her breasts “Hey beautiful” he says as he leans in and kisses her softly.

“Hey yourself handsome” she replies when they pull back from their heated kiss.

Max leans in and takes her mouth again “How was your day?” he mumbles as he begins trailing kisses down her neck.

“Oh um good” Liz moans in reply.

“You?” she asks

“Good” he mumbles against her neck.

Max tweaks Liz nipples with his fingers while Liz’s small hand strokes down Max’s chest towards his hard cock where she starts stroking it with her wet hand.

“Oh Liz” he cries out.

Reaching across he turns the shower off before cupping Liz’s ass and pulling her up his body.

“God it feels like the first time all over again” she moans as he starts walking them towards bed.

Max laughs and throws her down on the bed and looks at her with a feral grin “No baby it’s going to feel ten times better than the first time” he says.

He crawls over her then and leans in and takes one nipple into his mouth, swirling his tongue around it over and over again while his hand trails down her body and in between her legs.

He teases her lower lips with his finger as his mouth works havoc on her breasts.

“Oh god baby that feels so good” Liz moans.

He cups her breasts in his hands then and begins crawling down her body until he’s settled in between her legs “This will feel better baby” he promises before he uses his fingers to open her pussy up to him before diving his tongue deep inside of her.

He had become a fabulous lover over the last six months Liz thinks as she arches into his mouth and begs him to give her more. Max replaces his tongue with two fingers and covers her clit with his mouth.

“Oh god Max………….ah yes baby yes, yes, yes” she screams out as her orgasm rocks her body.

Max wipes his mouth with the back of his hand and crawls back up Liz’s body with a smile. His smile soon disappears when Liz flips him over onto his back and climbs on top of him.

“Your right it does keep getting better and better” she says huskily “and if I remember correctly the next part went a bit like this” she said as lowers herself over his thick hard cock.

“Oh god yes” Max cried out “I love it when you ride my cock, Liz” he told her.

“Hmm I just love you” she moaned in reply.

“Me too baby” he groaned as his hands moved to her hips to help her move faster.

Liz rode him to he was screaming her name and spurting his hot seed inside of her causing her to fall over the edge all over again before falling onto his chest in exhaustion.

“That was…..” she sighed.

“amazing, earth shattering” he answered for her.

Liz nodded her agreement.

“I love you” he told her leaning in and kissing the top of her head.

Liz looked up at him and smiled “I love you too baby” she told him before settling back on to his chest.

Making a decision Max reached down and grabbed Liz’s small hand in his own “Liz baby?” he said.

“Hmm” Liz sighed.

“If I told you that I want to be with you forever would that scare you?” he said.

Liz looked up and smiled and shook her head.

“Stay here” he whispered then, Liz rolled off him and watched as he got up naked and walked to the closet. When he came back though instead of getting back on the bed he knelt down on one knee.

Liz gasped “Max what are you doing?” she asked.

Max chucked “I know this isn’t very romantic or conventional but we’ve never been either of those. But what I’m doing Liz Parker is getting down on one knee and asking you to be mine forever” he produced the box then and opened the lid “Will you marry me, Liz?”

“Oh my god” Liz gasped again and crawled forward till she was at the edge of the bed.

Her hand reached out to finger the most beautiful ring she had ever seen “It was my grandmothers” he explained

“It’s beautiful” she told him, tears springing to her eyes.

“beautiful ring for the most beautiful women in the world” he told her.

“Yes” she whispered then.

“Yes?” Max asked just to be sure

“Yes” she said nodding her head at the same time.

Max pounced on her then wrapping his arms around her and kissing her soundly “I can’t believe we just got engaged naked” she giggled when they pulled apart.

Max laughed with her too before pulling back “Now lets get this ring on your finger because I cant wait to make you Mrs Max Evans” he told her as she slowly slid the engagement ring on her small finger, the ring was too big and he instantly apologised and promised to get it resized but Liz didn’t care about that, she was just too happy to care.

They rolled back on the bed their mouths coming together again until Max rolled on top and settled his cock against her wet folds “I’m going to love you forever” he promised as he slid inside her again.

“I’m counting on it” Liz said.

They made love slowly savouring every second of their love together and in the aftermath of their love Liz looked at her fiancée and smiled.

“What are you smiling about?” he asked

“I did a good job” she said.

Max raised his eyebrow at her in question.

“I did a good job straightening you out” she said.

Max’s eyes widened before he pounced on her “You little minx you’ll pay for that” he told her.

“I’m counting on it” she laughed.

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