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su-lyn - I hope I'm living up to your expectations with this story. It was an awesome challenge and I've loving writing it!Emz, the goldstar comment struck gold with me. Brilliant stuff, girlfriend. The morning after scene in Liz's bed is sexy, sweet and fun. They are going to put Isabel through hell if they have more sleepovers there. But what a fun way to torture your sibling.
Isabel is so herself when she want to shop for the perfect dress for her date. Loved this chapter.
obsession - so glad you found this and are enjoying itI finally found out where Some Girls was posted and finished reading til the last chapter.
It is quite interesting in the begining. Never read something like this before.
However, I love the shy Liz and how she speaks her mind. The jealous Max is a total bonus.
I really have to say, I don't like Kyle much in this story, but Isabel is so funny.
I truly enjoy it and can't wait for more.
FSUMSW94 - Hey La'shon so glad you like this!Em, I finally had the time to come over here and read this story! I was so pleasantly surprised to have 20 parts to catch up This story is completely amazing Em! I really like how Max and Liz are falling in love and entering into a relationship. I hated how Max got his heart crushed by his ex best pal Kyle and Meg what scum! If Max ever finds out Izzy was screwing Kyle, he will have a fit. In fairness to Izzy though, she didn't know it was the same Kyle. I was glad Maria and Liz are trying to be friends again. It has to be hard going from being intimate for years to only being platonic friends. Hopefully Michael will open Maria's heart to the possibility of dating a man. Who knows? Love Izzy and Alex together also
I cannot wait until you post a new part!
A/N: Hi everyone! I'm dropping by the new part slightly early so i hope you dont mind
which i'm sure more of you wont 
Thank you for your wonderful feedback. I know i only have two stories left on the board now but I'm working on another two as well. I want to get a fair bit of them written before i post though.
Welcome to all the new readers and a big wave to the lurkers!
I hope you enjoy this part
Part 21
Maria sighed as she looked around her empty apartment. Alex had left for his date with Isabel and she was at a loss for what to do. She had gotten so used to having Alex around over the past couple of weeks that she had stopped doing all the normal things she did when she had spare time. She contemplated giving Liz a call and seeing what she was doing but she decided against it, it was a Sunday night and normally Liz liked to just veg around at her apartment.
So she turned on her computer and waited for the Internet to boot up.
Her eyes popped open when her mail came in, she had almost 30 new mail messages.
“Wow I guess someone missed me,” she said to herself.
Maria had never really been into computers or the Internet until Alex had bought her a computer for her Christmas the year before. He had showed her how to connect to the Internet and to set up an account and Maria had never looked back.
Normally through the week she would spend at least an hour on every night. She had gotten herself addicted to the wonderful world of fan fiction, she had been surprised to find out how many talented people there were out there that wrote wonderful stories about her favorite TV characters.
Her eyes drifted down then and she noticed her messenger and she looked at it for a while. She didn’t have many contacts only Alex and Liz and she didn’t think Liz would be online since it was unusual for her to log on outside of work hours. Her mind drifted to Michael Guerin then. She had overheard him telling Alex the day before that he was on messenger and she had also heard him tell Alex his username.
Normally she wouldn’t have thought twice about adding someone she hardly knew to her contact list, especially a male but surprisingly she had enjoyed Michaels Company quite a lot yesterday. Deciding to take the plunge and assuming that he wouldn’t be online she typed in his username and selected add to contact list option and imagine her surprise when seconds later a message popped up on her screen.
Space boy: Hi?
Maria hesitated in replying. She had never expected him to be online but now that he was and she had added him she would have to talk to him.
Space boy: Maria is that you?
HurricaneDeluca: Yeah! Hi
Michael had been surprised when the request came through to allow Hurricane Deluca to add him to her contact list. At first he had no idea who the person was and was going to decline but then he remembered that Maria’s last name was Deluca.
Space boy: What’s happening?
He wasn’t sure how she got his messenger details but he was glad, he really liked her but after his conversation with Max this afternoon he knew he didn’t stand a chance. He had been shocked when Max had informed him that Maria was Liz’s ex. She didn’t look like a lesbian but then again Liz certainly didn’t either.
He wondered what the story was behind it but all Max knew or would say was that they had hooked up during high school and had been together ever since. He had also informed him that the break up hadn’t been exactly mutual so Liz was trying to be sensitive to Maria’s feelings by not telling her about Max straight away.
HurricaneDeluca: Not much. Just home alone and it’s a little strange I’ve gotten used to having Alex around.
Space boy: is he out with Isabel tonight?
HurricaneDeluca: Yeah!
Space boy: so do you get online often?
HurricaneDeluca: Um yeah you could say that!
Space boy: cool me too so maybe we can talk more often J
Michael sat back and crossed his fingers waiting for Maria to respond to his message. It didn’t matter to him that she wasn’t available to date him he would be just be happy if they could become friends.
Maria smiled at his message and hesitated in responding. She thought Michael was a nice guy but she normally made it a rule not to be friends with males with the exception of Alex.
HurricaneDeluca: That would be cool J
***
“Do I look ok?” Isabel asked Liz as she stood in front of the mirror examining her clothes. When she had called Alex and asked him how she should dress he had said dressy casual which she had found amusing but apparently having two girls for best friends had taught Alex a thing or two. So here she was dressed in a simple black shirt and a red satin tank top, which was covered with beads.
Liz smiled at Isabel “You look gorgeous you’re going to knock Alex’s socks off so stop worrying” she assured her.
“Ok” she smiled reaching for her lipstick and placing another coat on her lips.
“So your staying at Max’s tonight?” Isabel confirmed. If her date with Alex went the way she hoped it did then she was planning on staying at the apartment and she knew she wouldn’t feel comfortable doing that if Liz was asleep next door.
Liz grinned, “Yes” she looked at her watch “in fact I should call a taxi and get going”
“You’re getting a taxi?” Isabel frowned that was going to cost Liz an absolute fortune.
Liz nodded.
“Max should have picked you up,” she told her.
“He’s cooking for me, he can’t do two things at once” she explained.
“Liz do you realize its more than a fifty dollar cab fare out there?” she asked.
“Yeah but he’s worth it” she smiled back.
Isabel scoffed “Your so gone. Ok it might be ok for now but you can’t keep doing that. If your going to be traveling back and forth to Max’s your going to have to start using the subway or buy a car,” she said.
“Your right” Liz sighed “I guess the subway won’t be so bad I might try it tonight instead of getting the cab.
Isabel turned and looked at Liz then “call Max and ask him to come get you” she hated the idea of Liz using the subway after dark.
“What! No” Liz refused.
Liz pushed herself up off the bed then “Well have a great night and I’ll see you tomorrow night I guess” she said.
“You sure will” Isabel smiled “and thank you so much for all your help today”
“Not a problem I had a great time” Liz assured her before disappearing out of the room.
The minute Isabel was sure Liz was out of earshot she picked up her cell and dialed her brother.
“Max” she greeted him quickly and quietly.
“Listen I was just talking to Liz and do you realise that she’s planning on either getting a taxi or the subway out to your place tonight?”
Isabel smiled when Max immediately grew concerned and after he assured her that he would ring Liz and make arrangements to pick her up straight away he wished Isabel a good night and hung up.
Five minutes later the doorbell rang and at the exact same time the phone started ringing. Assuming it was Max on the phone and Alex at the door Isabel yelled out to Liz “I’ll get the door since it’s for me can you get the phone Liz”
“Yep” Liz yelled back picking up the phone up immediately.
“Hello”
“Liz hi” Max greeted.
“Hey there how are you?” she asked.
“I’m good” he replied smiling on the other end of the phone, he was already in his car on the way to pick her up “Listen I’m just leaving now so I should be there to pick up in about fifteen minutes depending on the traffic” he informed her.
“What?” Liz asked confused “why?”
Max grinned, “Your still coming tonight aren’t you?” he asked her.
“Of course I am but I was going to catch a cab or the subway I didn’t expect you to drive twenty minutes out of your way to come and get me,” she argued.
“Baby I appreciate that but there is no way I want you on the subway by yourself after dark and a cab fare is way too expensive. I’m happy to come and get you,” he told her.
Liz smiled “thank you but it was no problem to catch a cab” she told him.
“Noted but tonight you don’t have too. I’ll see you soon okay”
Liz grinned brightly on her end, how had she gotten so lucky again she asked herself “Cant wait” she told him.
***
Isabel smiled as she opened the door; she was so excited about her date with Alex. Alex stood on the other side dressed in a pair of dark blue jeans and a nice going out shirt holding a bunch of the most beautiful red roses she had ever seen.
“Hi” he smiled at her.
“Hi yourself” Isabel grinned as she leaned her hip against the door.
“Come in”
Alex stepped inside and immediately put a hand gently on her waist and leant in to kiss her ruby red lips. Isabel leaned into the kiss as well and her own hand reached up and rested on his hard chest.
“You look gorgeous,” he whispered when he pulled back.
Isabel blushed “Thank you, you also look very nice” she told him.
“These are for you,” he told her as he handed her the brilliant bouquet he held in his hand.
“Oh Alex these are beautiful thank you so much” she said.
“Beautiful flowers for an extremely beautiful women” he murmured in reply. He was finding it very difficult to take his eyes off her, the red shirt she wore suited her to perfection and if he hadn’t already thought it before he did now, Isabel Evans was the most beautiful women he had ever laid eyes on and he wondered what on earth she was doing going out on a date with him.
“Ready to go?” she asked coming back after placing the flowers in a vase.
“Yep” he nodded and taking her hand they made their way out of the apartment.
***
Liz was waiting downstairs with her overnight bag when Max pulled up exactly fifteen minutes. He grinned at her as he hopped out of the car and ran around to grab her bag.
“Hey babe” he whispered leaning in and kissing her lips softly.
Liz blushed when she looked around and noticed all the people that were watching them. The two of them were a gorgeous couple.
“Hi” she said.
After helping her into the car Max jumped back in and they were immediately on they’re way back out of the city “thank you again for coming to get me, you really didn’t have too” she said. She felt so bad that he had just made a twenty minute trip for her.
Reaching for her hand over the gear stick Max brought it to his lips and kissed her knuckles softly “Stop apologizing” he admonished “a forty minute trip is more than worth it in return for your company tonight” he assured her.
“Well I’m very thankful”
“Well you can show me how thankful you are later” he whispered huskily his hand rested high on her thigh.
Liz unconsciously opened her legs wider to accommodate his hand “you can be sure of that” she told him.
TBC.......Wednesday or maybe earlier so look out for the update
I will be updating The Part I'm Hoping For tomorrow night
Thank you for the feedback glad your liking this so far! I hope you all like this next part too.
Sorry!!