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Title: JUST AN AFFAIR?? ex-BETRAYAL
Category: Max and Liz
Rating: ADULT
Disclaimer:I don't own the characters, they belong to J.Katims and Melinda Metz
Summary: Max is a doctor and Liz a woman who is bored in her life. She meets Max at a party and they have an affair which puts a little once of salt in her boring life. But Liz began to be bored and she left him. What happened when 2 years later, they met again. Just know that it's a Max and Liz story. Just give it a chance to continue, if you want. A/N: I can't help, the demon of the writing abducted me and here I'm with another fic. I just want to give this a try, I don't know where I'm going, it's just an idea I had. I didn't ask for help to correct my english yet cause I don't know if you're going to like it or not. Fbs will tell me what to do....
thanks to Onarek for this beautiful banner and for her patience and thanks to _liz who sent it to me.
Just know that if this fic doesn't please you, I'll delete it.
Prologue
"What I am for you Liz? You don't care about my feelings! No, you use me and now you decide to leave me. You're a devil Liz! You make me fall in love with you...madly in love with you...and now...now you throw me like an old sock in that too big house." he said with tears flowing on his cheeks. "I was a stallion for you, only here to shower your craziest desires"
She looked at him. For a second, she was near to give in and stay, but she was determinded to take her life in her hands and to fully live it and she had to flee far from him, far from all the lies she lived with...She had a life waiting for her somewhere else.
She wanted to forget this life for a while, she was bored and locked in this life and she chose to leave it for a while, to play a role. She decided to seduce a man and to be the player for once, after all that was always the men who were the players!
She looked again at him "I'm sorry Max, I didn't mean to hurt you that way. I hope someday you'll forgive me. You deserve a good girl, I'm not the one for you. I'll never be. Just know that I'm sorry that it was you." she said and she walked out of the room, looking straight in front of her.
After she closed the door behind her, Max let go all his pain and collapsed on the couch, sobbing. She was gone...And the silent filled his house.
In the meantime, in the street, a petite brunette was starting her car but a ring stopped her "Hello?....Yeah, I left him....This affair is over, I'm coming home."
WHAT DO YOU THINK? SHOULD I CONTINUE OR GIVE UP THE WRITING?
Last edited by martine on Fri May 19, 2006 10:50 am, edited 24 times in total.
OK guys, I give just another try for this fic. I wrote the first chapter, I hope you'll like it.
This time, Liz is the villain...(but I'm a dreamer!). I wanted to write something close to the RL, even if people are wealthy. I wrote about Max acting like a devil, what if it's Liz's turn this time?
Hope you'll follow me here. That's the only way for me to continue this one. Bixie, I give another try and we'll see together after.
Thank you for your support
flyawayraven
icequeen
begonia9508
Behrsgirl1230
And LURKERS please stop for a while and tell me what do you think about that fic. Like I always said, I accept all the critics about my work.
And don't forget to take a look to MARRIAGE. I'll update it soon as well as REVENGE...
Chapter 1
6 months earlier.
"You know Maria, I get bored with my life. Nothing interesting is happening, it's always the same routine....shopping and house. We don't have fun with Sean anymore, I think that he's oblivious of my problem, he's happy in his life, I mean he has a good job, he has a beautiful house....."
"And a gorgeous wife?....I understand Liz, but what do you want to do to change your life. Do you want to leave him? Do you want to have an affair?" Maria asked septic.
"I don't know...Maybe if I had an affair Sean would more pay attention at me! Nah, it's not me. I never cheated on him and I don't think I'm going to begin. What are you doing today?" she asked disillusioned
"Well, Michael is coming home, I have to pick him up at the airport around 6. Do you want to come with me?" she inquired.
"Nah! You didn't see him since a month, I won't be a best friend if I ruin your reunion." she said laughing.
"Come on, you won't ruin anything, if you change your mind, give me a call, I'll leave at 5:00."
"Ok, go or your boss will harass you again." she said pushing her toward the door.
When Maria left, Liz wandered in her living not knowing what to do with herself. *Maybe Sean will be up to go out tonight, if Michael is coming, we could set something up together.* she thought and she called her husband.
"Hello?"
"Sean, Honey, it's me. Look Michael arrives tonight, don't you want us to hang out with them. We didn't have fun since long. You're always working and I get bored." she whinned
"Sweetheart, tonight I can't. I have a lot of work here, you know to be a successful architect is not easy. And I didn't know that you had a boring life. I mean you don't need to work like Maria or any of your friends! I thought that it was what you wanted for life. And I'm doing my best to offer you that life. Come on Honey. Look, why don't you go and hang out with Maria and Michael tonight. That could be fine!" he suggested.
"And whitness all their heavy making out, thank you! I've already given. No, I wanted to have fun with my husband. But I understand, you have to work. Does that mean that you're coming home late tonight?" she inquired.
"Sweetie, we are on a very important project. We have to see the owner tomorrow night, we have to finish the mock-up tonight. I'm sorry. I don't know if I'll be home tonight. It depends if everything is ready for the meeting, but don't count on it too much. I promise you that after that project, I'll take you to Hawaï or any destination you'll choose. Ok? do you forgive me Honey?" he pleaded on the phone.
"What do you want me to say? It's not your fault if I married a successful architect and everybody is eating our life. I'll see you soon." she said at the edge of the tears.
"Honey, I'm sorry. Don't you have any of your friend available to hang out with you?" he insisted.
"Bye Sean. I'm sorry if I disturb you in your job. I'll be fine."
"Bye Love. I'll do my best to come home if we finish....BIP.. BIP....BIP"
Sean looked at the phone dumbfounded *This time Liz is very upset. I'll bring her flowers when I'll go home* he thought certain that his wife was just a little angry.
When Liz hung up the phone, she was really angry with her husband *OK, Mr DeLuca, if you don't care, I'll show you what I'm able to do to your credit card. You'll regret to abandon me to my fate!* she thought and she grabbed her purse and keys and stepped out of the house.
At 5:00, Maria was at the airport waiting for her boyfriend. Michael was all around the States giving conferences with a colleague. Michael was a successful cardiologist.
"Hey Baby, I missed you" Michael said when he kissed her after the landing. "How is my girl? You look great." he said pulling her away.
"Did I change that much since last month, you jerk? I missed you too." she said kissing him then she noticed someone behind Michael, an gorgeous darkhaired man. He was smiling withnessing their reunion. "Michael.... I think that we have an audience." she warned him.
"Huh? What?...." and he turned back toward the intruder. "OH, no..no...that's my colleague..Max come here. Maria, this is my great colleague, Dr Maxwell Evans. We were together at the conferences. Max, this is my girlfriend Maria Deluca." he presents them.
"Nice to meet you, Maria. Let me tell you that Michael didn't stop to talk about you when we weren't in front of hundreds of persons." he said and held his hand out with a devasting smile.
"You're lucky cause he didn't tell me about you, Dr Evans" she said shaking his hand.
"Please call me Max. Dr Evans is just for my job and the conferences."
"Maria, we have a party, we are compelled to attend tonight, do you want to come with us. That poor Max is single but I'm sure he'll have any problem to meet some chick there." Michael said winking to his friend.
"A party? Humm..What a good idea! Of course I come with you! I'm eager to see all those gorgeous doctors... And Michael, if Max is single, maybe I'll have someone for him tonight. I'm sure he'll like her."
"Maria, I'm not so desperate. Michael, as always goes too far. Thank you for the help." he said frowning.
"NO...No, no..I didn't want to annoy you Max, but you see, I have a good friend of mine who would dye to go out to a party. That's all. I just wanted to please you. But you..."
"Who are you talking about Honey?" Michael asked surprised.
"Liz...my one and only best friend." she said smiling when she saw Michael's face.
TBC...IF YOU WANT IT..........................................
hey guys, I'm back with another chapter (I know I'm stubborn!!) and this time Emz80m corrected me. I hope you'll like it, what could I say? it's a dreamer part.
I see that this fic has some problems to please our readers, maybe by my fault, maybe because it's Liz's behavior. I don't know. I just hope that we'll like this part and we'll give a chance to that fic.
LURKERS, stop lurking, your opinion is important for the writer.
I'd like to thank my faithful readers for the support they give to my work
begonia9508- really Eve, would you be happy with a husband who, you're right makes money, brings flowers and let you do what you want, BUT didn't spend time with you? all the women in the world want only one thing: LOVE (just my opinion)
FamersAmers- I hope you'll like this part too. She's not that bad here.
icequeen- I don't know if Sean deserves you to feel bad for him, after all he just have to take care of his wife. money is nothing regarding to love and attention,he has to give to his wife...and yes, I always like to have a Dr Max....just the name is sexy!
0megaRam1- I know Dr Max....
Emz80m- I agree with you for Sean but not for Liz. She needs only a husband who takes care of her....and Sean.....
A special THANKS to Emz80m, thanks for sharing your time with me, I hope it's was not too difficult to correct my english. THANK YOU Emma!
IF YOU DIDN'T READ IT YET, JUST KNOW THAT I'VE UPDATED "MARRIAGE" ALREADY, IF YOU WANT TO KNOW HOW WENT THE TASTING.......... AND I'LL TRY TO UPDATE "REVENGE" SOON, DEPENDS ON R.L.
Chapter 2
2 hours later
"Liz, you look gorgeous” Maria said when she came to pick her friend up. * I'm sure that Max will fall for you* she thought.
"So Sean is working again?" she asked
"Yeah. He said that he had this project to present and was too busy to hang out with us. Maria am I a bad wife if I'm here with you tonight, if I wanted to enjoy my friends company instead of staying at home waiting for my husband? I don't know!" she said a little lost.
Maria felt guilty, when she asked Liz to come with them to that party, she didn't tell her anything about Max, she thought that if something happened between those two, that it would be fate. But now, hearing her best friend talk, she wondered if she was really helping her by bringing her to the party. *It's too late Maria, you have to continue!* she thought.
"Maria? Are you ok?" Liz asked worried.
"Huh? Yeah, yeah...I was just pondering your question. Liz, stop feel guilty. Nothing will happen that you don't want. You're here to have fun, Sean will be happy to know that you didn't stay at home alone." she said and looking at her watch "What are the guys doing?, it's getting late!" she asked upset.
"GUYS? who else is coming with us?" Liz asked surprised.
"IforgottotellyouthatafriendofMichaelwastheretoo!" she replied holding her breath.
"Maria, slow down, I didn't understand a word you just said! Please repeat it slowly, who is coming?" Liz asked again.
"AfriendofMichaels!......A friend of Michaels" she repeated when she saw Liz glare at her.
"Maria? Did you set something up between that guy and me?" she asked a little more irritated.
"Come on Liz! I know that you're married, but I also know that you're bored with your life so why don't you accept this party for what it is....a way to forget about of your boring life!" she argued
"And your suggesting that a good way to forgetting is to have an affair with a gorgeous man!” she said really upset, completely forgetting that she had pondered having an affair only hours earlier. "He's really gorgeous, believe me. Dr Max Evans is the most exciting cardiologist I've ever seen in my life. And yet, I'm crazy about Michael. When you'll see him...." she stopped here, not knowing if Liz would agree to hang out with them or not.
*OK....Sean, this is fate! I called you to ask you to come with us but, as always, you chose work over me....If something happens between that doctor and me, I won't be responsible...at least, not the only one* she thought.
"Ok, Maria. We'll see. I just want to have fun, to see people and to enjoy my friends" she said with a smile.
"You're right...." they were interrupted by a horn "At least, they are here! Come on girl, let's have fun!" she said laughing.
Michael and Max were waiting for them in the car. Max was nervous, he didn't like it when he wasn’t in control of what was happening. When Maria had offered to introduce him to her best friend and he had been compelled to say yes, if not Maria would harass him all night long. He wondered then what this friend of hers looked like.
He didn't have to wait to long before he got to meet her and as far as he was concerned she was the most gorgeous woman he had ever seen in his life. Even if she was petite, she had a natural grace when she walked. He couldn't help but gaze at her long and tanned legs, he adored her soft and silky hair and he was literally captivated by her eyes, two magnificent dark lakes, where he seemed to get lost.
Liz was also captivated and under the spell too. Dr Max was more gorgeous and exciting than Maria said. He was tall, well built, dark haired...gorgeous. But what held her attention was that incredible colour of his eyes. They reminded her of a sea of honey and at the same time, they reminded her of the eyes of a tiger, the same golden eyes.
Maria and Michael witnessed this meeting, they felt that something happened between their friends and they just met. "Do you think it's a love at first sight?" Maria whispered in her boyfriend's ear.
"I don't know for Liz, but Max is conquered. Look at him, he can't take his eyes off Liz. Maria, Liz is married, I didn't want my friend to fall into this trap" he said angry.
"Michael don't you see that it's fate! They had to find each other! Look at them, Max is not the only one here, look at Liz, have you ever seen her stare at someone the way she’s staring at Max? I know she's married, but she's not happy in her life." she defended her best friend.
"I just hope for Max’s sake that it's not just an interlude for her. I don't want him to be hurt Maria! I just hope that it's not too late for that!" he said worried.
"Ok, it's time to go! Liz?....Max? we're ready!!" Maria said.
"Sorry. We're read...I mean I'm ready too....Liz?" he asked shyly.
"So am I" she said smiling. She took Max's hand and walked toward the car. Max squeezed her tiny hand, happily.
Behind them, Michael got more and more worried for his friend. He thought Liz was too bold for his friend. He glanced at Maria who shrugged.
In the car, they joked, Michael is the best at telling jokes and talked about their conferences. All of them carefully avoided talking about anything too personal.
They arrived at the Country Club. Obviously, Max and Michael have been caught by their colleagues since Maria and Liz sat at their table. Maria took advantage of the absence of the guys to talk with her best friend. "Liz, are you ok? Did you enjoy your evening?" she asked worried.
"Oh, Maria! I forgot to thank you for bringing me here. Max is so sweet, it's like I’ve known him for all my life, and the connection between us was immediate. Could you believe that?" she said excited.
"Liz...Liz! Listen to me. You're here to have fun not to fall for some gorgeous guy. You said that you wanted to hang out with us, ok.Max was unexpected....." she began to explain but Liz cut her off
"Maria, tonight wouldn't have been the same for me if he wasn't here! Thank you!" she insisted
"What for?"
"If you didn't invite me tonight, I wouldn't have met Max and I would have lost a lot! so thank you!" she said with a bright smile. She sipped her drink looking for Max discreetly.
"LIZ! Liz, God Michael was right, he's going to tear my head off! Liz, you're married, did you forget Sean already? I trust you Liz, your not planning on seducing Max into having an affair, are you?" she asked panicked.
"Maria, I'm a big girl and Max is a big guy! Talking about my husband, I asked him to come with us tonight, but he's married to his work, Maria! I'm nothing to him accept a pretty woman he's proud to show off as his wife. Maria, don't feel guilty, I can promise that I won't take Max somewhere he doesn't want to go.....but, if he's interested.....I won't say NO!....Am I a bad woman for that?" she asked with her most innocent look.
"Don't worry, Liz, you're not a bad woman and if you are....let me tell you that I like the bad woman you are!" Max said as they sat beside the girls. "Liz, come and dance with me?" he said with a devastating smile, he held his hand out to her.
"You know Max, tango is not my favourite dance, I hope you know how to dance it because I don't want to fall down." she said following him in the centre.
Michael and Maria were looking at them "Maria, I don't know if you did a good thing setting them up, you know. Max is under her spell and she's married. She didn't tell him!" he said worried.
"Honey, Max is a big boy and I'm sure he knows what to do with Liz. You're blaming her and why don't you wonder if your good friend Max doesn't expect to put her in his bed? He's not a saint!" she retorted defending her best friend.
"Baby, Max looks like a big boy, but he's a little child. I'm shocked that Liz didn't tell him that she was married. She's lying to him, she's hiding things from him. I can't agree!" he argued.
"Michael, what if we let him manage alone. They don't need us! Look at them!" she said pointing her finger to the couple. "They seemed to be alone and very happy this way, why don't we forget Liz, Max and the rest of the world too? I'd like to dance." she said standing up. She took his hand and pulled him to the dance floor.
Liz felt like her body fitted Max’s perfectly when he pulled her into his arms. He was holding her hand firmly on his lapel, his other hand was on her back and they were swaying to the slow music. Liz was an excellent dancer and despite what she said early, she liked the intimacy the tango gave them, both the 2 dancers enjoyed each other as well as the music. And tonight she was really enjoying her partner.
She pressed her body against his, her free hand slid into his hair and she put her head against his stoned chest. Max tightened his grip around her waist, her scent was intoxicating him and he felt like he was being drugged and slowly becoming addicted to her.
Liz was under the spell too, pressed against this handsome man, she closed her eyes enjoying the feel of being in his arms, when all of sudden he made her whirl stretching out his hand, and slowly he took her in his arms, and her body came back to his instinctively as if it was the most natural feeling in the world to be against Max's body. She never felt so right in someone's arms before and she wanted to continue that dance until the end of the night.
Max was in the same state, he couldn't believe that he had that incredible woman in his arms, he couldn't let her go, he pulled her away and all the tenderness he had in his heart blazed in his eyes. Liz felt lost under that gaze, she knew that she had to push him away, but she was wrapped up by his strong arms and she couldn't take her eyes off his. She felt like if she was hypnotised.
"You are a very dangerous man, Max Evans" she said breathlessly.
"Why Liz?" he replied softly, his face so close that she felt his breath on her.
She shook her head as if she wanted to wake up "Max, we better return to our table." she said trying to clear her head. Returning to their friends was the last thing Liz wanted, all that mattered was staying in the marvellous refuge he had made for her. But a little voice in her mind kept reminding she had no right to be doing this.
While she was pondering, Max grabbed her wrist and walked with her toward the other part of the hall "Maax, where are we going?" she asked surprised.
He leaned to her ear and whispered huskily "I'd like to show you something Liz"
They arrived at a secluded corner. Before she realized what happened to her, Liz was against the wall and the world disappeared from her view, hidden by the tall guy "Max....."
Her protests were swallowed by the mouth which swooped down on hers. Resisting at first, she tried to escape but it only caused him to tighten his grip around her and imprison her by his increasing desire.
She gave in and wrapped her hands around his neck and pulled him to her, excited by his touch.
Fiercely, he ravished her lips, teasing her until she was demanding from him too. Liz was scared by the desire she had for him the yearning that she knew he was feeling too. Then she forgot everything that was not Max, his stoned body, his devouring mouth, his hands all over her......Liz gasped when she felt his fingers brushing her breasts.
Then he pulled away and stared at her, the blaze she saw in his eyes made her realize where they were, who she was. Max, feeling her stiffen slowly lessened his grip on her and breathed.
Liz felt relieved but disappointed too when he released her "YOU are a very dangerous woman Liz" Max said hoarsely, looking into her eyes.
"Is that what you wanted to show me, Max?" she asked trying to laugh but the trembling whisper of her voice stop her laugh.
"Yes...that and some other things” Liz didn't have to wonder what things he was referring to. She felt them against her body earlier and she knew it would take her hours trying to forget them.
"I better go" she said, not sure that she would be capable of resisting his charm again. She looked into his eyes *Maybe he's right, there is something dangerous in me....when I'm in his arms. She never felt this way with Sean...Max had an effect on me that no one ever had." she thought
Max was playing with a strand of her hair, his eyes locked on her swollen and wet lips "You're right. We better return to our table." he said, but unable to resist her sweet lips, he pulled her into his arms again and kissed her fiercely.
"Liz, I can't stop....I don't want to......Please tell me to stop!" he begged, but Liz was completely lost into his arms, turned on by his lips on hers, his hands on her body. The last thing she wanted to do was to stop this gorgeous man and his wonderful kisses, but in the back of her mind the little voice spoke up again.
"NO! I'm sorry Max...." she said and she left him there and ran outside. She needed some air.
TBC..IF YOU WANT IT.......................................
hey, I'm back with a new chapter. I hope you'll like it and you'll excuse if it's short. I prefered to write a longer chapter the next time, you'll see why.
some comments about that fic, the previous chapter. you're right, Liz should tell Max that she's married. She has a dilemma : tell him, hide from him. She doesn't know what kind of relationship she'll have with him or yet, if she'll have one. She is concious that he likes her, desires her..so maybe she thinks that it'll be a one night stand for them.
I want to add that since the begining of the fic until that chapter, she doesn't throw herself in his arms.
One last thing about that subject, you should re read the first chapter, you'll have a better view....
I want to thank Emz80m, for her help, she's my corrector for this one.
and thanks to the readers and lurkers for the support you give to that fic.
su-lyn- you're right but if you read the note I wrote above, you'll understand Liz's state of mind. and when you'll read that part, you'll see that she's not yet a bitch.
begonia9508- Eve, he's a jerk if he doesn't care about his wife. le bien-être n'est pas tout pour une femme. a woman needs a man who loves her and lives his life with her. Money is nothing if there is no love, true love!
Emz80m- Michael sees Max's interests and Maria, Liz's ones. And Liz, for the moment, she's a little lost.
icequeen- please, look above, I've answered at that. And Michael's remark is because Max was mostly busy with his career, he dated women yet but that was the first time Michael saw his friend so captived by a woman, let alone, a married one . he's scared for him.
g7silvers- I don't think so about Max, but if Liz gave in, that'd be a one night stand for her...at the begining. after....
MARRIAGE AND LOVE ON THE INTERNET HAVE ALREADY BEEN UPDATED, IF YOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON BETWEEN OUR COUPLE IN THOSE FICS, JUST TAKE A LOOK. (FBS ARE REALLY APPRECIATED!!)
Chapter 3
Liz ran out into the garden, her heart was racing in her chest, tears were flowing down her cheeks *I can't do it...I'm married...I've no right to cheat on Sean....I've no right to cheat on Max, he doesn't know anything about me........*
"LIZ! Liz....Why did you flee? Liz....You're crying. I'm sorry, I didn't want to scare you...." Max began to apologize.
"Max...I'm sorry...I mean, you didn't scare me. I hate what I'm doing...." she cried.
"What are you talking about? What are doing? And why do you say that you hate it? Liz? Tell me!" he pleaded worried.
Max couldn't understand Liz's behaviour, a while ago, she was in his arms and they were kissing fiercely. Did he hurt her with his passion? *No, she kissed you back, she was here in your arms and nothing there was nothing to indicate that she was annoyed or hurt, it was the opposite*
"Liz, tell me what’s upset you, I'm your friend."
Liz looked up at him and her heart melted when her eyes locked with his which resembled a sea of honey. She had that little voice in her mind saying that he deserved for her to tell him the whole truth and her heart just wanted her to throw herself into his arms, sure that he would never hurt her.
"Max...I...I have something important to tell you." she began.
"Ok, come, let's sit on that bench" he said taking her hand. They sat, Max kept her hand in his, unable to let her go "Liz, whatever you have to say, don't be scared. I'm your friend and you can tell me anything, I'm here to help you." he said genuinely.
"Max...It's not your help that I need. I mean, nothing annoys me except my behaviour. I'm not used to throwing myself into perfect stranger's arms. I don't know what got in to me, but this isn’t me" she said, knowing well that she had to tell him a truth even though she was not ready to tell him.
"Liz, I understand that you're not that kind of girl, neither am I. I mean I'm not used to swooping down on someone the way I did with you. Liz, I’ve had some women in my life, but none of them gave me the yearning to build something forever like with you. I don't know why, but from the moment I saw you, I felt like there was a connection between us and I don't want to fail something that important in my life." he said putting her hand on his chest.
She felt his heart racing under her hand "Liz, do you feel my heart? It’s beating for you tonight. Only you. We could take things slowly if you're not ready to commit yourself...."
"Commit myself? Max, you don't even know me. At least, before tonight, you didn't even know that I existed." she said panicked.
"I know Honey. But our encounter was written in the sky. I had to meet you tonight. Liz, have faith in me, have faith in us. Baby, I know that you think that things are going too fast, but I'm sure of my feelings for you. I mean, I'm sure that I want to be in your life for a long time.... to tell you the truth, I'd like to be in your life forever Liz. Are you scared?" he asked pulling her into his arms.
Once again, when she looked up at him, she was lost in his incredible eyes. "Liz, don't...don't be scared, we're together here Baby." he said, then he cupped her face with his hands and he kissed her passionately. *That's it* Liz thought *The temptation is too strong, and I've no desire to let him go. I know that I have a husband somewhere in Roswell, but he forgot that I was here, he's married to his work. I don't want to miss that opportunity to be happy, I mean a lot to Max so does he to me.*
She decided here, with his arms wrapped around her, to follow her hearts wishes and forget what that annoying little voice kept saying.
"Ok, Max...I won't be scared and yes....I want to be with you too." she said looking into his eyes.
Max locked his eyes with her, not believing that this gorgeous woman accepted him in her life. He tightened his grip and kissed her fiercely. He couldn't get enough of her, his hands were all over her, pressing her tiny body against his stoned one.
He massaged her lower lip and Liz granted him the access he was demanding. His tongue tangled with hers and they duelled for a while. He pulled away panting "Liz...I know that you want us to go slowly, but I want you Baby, like I’ve never wanted anyone else in my life." he said burning her with his hungry look. "Liz, let's say good bye to Michael and Maria and let's go to my place, please" he begged.
"We don't need to tell them good bye, Max, they'll understand. I mean, if we go and discuss it with them, I'm not sure I'll have the strength to follow you..." she said hesitating.
"You're right, let's go....." he said. He grabbed her hand and led her to the parking lot. He asked for a cab and when it arrived he engulfed them in the car. "I don't want you to change your mind, Baby." he said.
After he gave his address to the driver, he forgot everything that was not Liz, the goddess in his arms....
TBC..IF YOU WANT IT....................................................
Hi guys, I'm back with a new chapter of that fic. I've decided to change the title, cause it's not a question of betrayal really. it's about an affair between Max and Liz. it's a dreamer fic so the end would be as every dreamer expect...and don't worry it won't be immoral either even though Liz is married.
I hope you'll like the new title and most of all that chapter and don't forget that fbs are the food of a writer...
Thanks to the faithful readers for the support you give to that fic.
cocopucks - I really hope you'll like that part.
begonia9508- Eve, with all the respect I awe you, I'm not sure you're right. Max wants to be with her, right, but if she tells him that she's married, he won't stay with her. He likes her but I'm not sure he won't follow her. and you're completely right, love with a big bank account is better...
icequeen- I think that for the moment, all what she wants is to escape from her boring life and if an handsome guy helps her, she won't say no.... and Liz is not too honest in the begining of that story...sorry!
FamersAmers- you're right Amy, here Liz is the bad girl.....but it's a dreamer fic...I can't write anything else!
Emz80m - maybe you're right but maybe she's smarter than you think, cause for once a woman takes the pleasure she needs without wondering if it's good or not.
I WANT TO SAY THAT I'LL UPDATE "LOVE ON THE INTERNET" AND "MARRIAGE" TONIGHT (Bixie promised!), DON'T FORGET THAT I'LL POST "MARRIAGE" EPILOGUE....... THE OTHERS WILL BE UPDATED LATER
Chapter 4
When they arrived at Max's building, they engulfed themselves in the elevator. There, unable to resist, Max swooped down on her lips and ravished her mouth. He was making love to her mouth, dipping his tongue in and out, and duelling with hers. He couldn't stop kissing her even if he wanted too. She was his drug.
When the elevator stopped at the 13th floor, Max opened the door blindly and without breaking the kisses, he led her into his apartment. Liz was lucky; his apartment was the only one on the floor. She made a little note to ask him later how long he had it, because this was the first time they met. Did Michael hide his friend from all the Roswell's women?
But she forgot everything when she stepped into the apartment. Max didn't let her have the time to breathe, he took her lips once again and she felt like he wanted to swallow her, whole.
"Liz...I want you Baby...now." he pleaded looking his eyes into hers.
"I'm here Max and I don’t have any intention of fleeing.,” she whispered as she pulled away.
Max began to undress himself. He put his jacket on the back of a chair and untied his tie. Then he unbuttoned his shirt and waited. He stared at her hungrily.
"What?" she asked excited to see his stoned bare chest.
"Your turn Young Lady. You have to undress too.,” he said with a husky voice.
"Huh...huh...Ok, I'm doing it. Take care of your eyes Baby!" she said and she laughed throwing her head back. Max looked at her hair, it looked like a dark silky curtain moving in slow motion and he swallowed hard. Liz was driving him crazy without doing anything.
Eyes closed, breathing with difficulty, she took off her high heels shoes and sent her most seductive smile to him. The smile of a demon, tempting him like a snake.
Max felt his groin throbbing but he didn't want to hurry, to rush. He had to keep his control and lead Liz on the waves of pleasure.
Liz put her feet on the chair and slowly pulled down her stocking. A blaze of creamy bare skin appeared and Max couldn't help but groan. *Breathe Max...breathe! * He said to himself to calm down.
With the same slowness that she pulled down the first stocking, Liz made the second slide along her leg. The bright red of her nails.... the sensuality of her fingers sliding on her skin.... The soft noise of the silk stocking.... Everything was unbearable for Max.
All those erotica moves, under the moonlight shining through the window, made by that delicious and desirable woman, rocked him a lot, more than he could have thought. He had to restrain himself from jumping on her right now and ravishing her.
How to resist? How to not gaze under her short dress at the little piece of silk, which hid the intimacy, he so wanted?
*Air!* he thought *I need air....* He felt like he was suffocating. But he needed to calm down... to breathe deeply.... To sooth his body and his heart.... He tried to coach himself but a glance toward Liz and everything was vain.
In front of him, Liz was continuing to move like a divine tiger and Max received a shock when he saw her unzip her dress. Slowly, the dress slid down her skin, freeing her throbbing breasts still imprisoned in a silky ivory bra. Then Liz stopped.
*WHY? Why won’t she continue?
"Your turn...." she whispered
"My turn?"
She nodded and came beside him.
"You and me are at the same level. We are bare foot...our clothes are opened...It's your turn to take the next step!"
"Not at all! You're wrong Liz!"
"Why?"
"I'm bare chest, not you" he said his mouth was dry.
He wanted to discover her slowly but fully. He wanted to enjoy every second of that revelation and to see her appear completely naked. He wanted to hold her in his arms...eye to eye...mouth against mouth.... Skin against skin...
But he wanted to undo her bra and take her breasts in his hands to feel them under his fingers. "Wait!" he said.
*Why did he say suddenly to wait since he was dreaming to see her continue?
"What Max?" she asked worried
"Nothing...I swear. Everything's ok. I just don't want to miss a second of the glory you are unveiling for me."
She moved closer since she slid her dress inch by inch. "Am I close enough like this or do you prefer..." she whispered teasingly.
And saying those words, she moved her hips seductively and made her dress fall down beside her feet. At last, he was seeing her only with her underwear. He was breathless.... The image was divine and he would never forget it.
She was wearing lace panties, which didn’t hide anything of the intimate shadows, and her lace bra seemed to offer her breasts to his caresses. He felt a fierce yearning to possess her, right now...to jump on her...to grab her butt...to pull her against him and to take her.... Here on the floor...
"Max...it's your turn." she repeated softly.
She moved aside and bent to pick her silky dress up letting him a perfect view of her butt.... satin!
Then, she turned around toward him with a questioning look "Max?"
"Yeah...."
"I said...it's your turn!" she said looking at him with desire in her eyes. *He's so sexy! That a sin to be so hot! What a body! His strong shoulders...that stoned chest...and those hips! Thin and yet powerful...and his ass...*she was picturing him in the fire of the lovemaking when she saw his long legs emerge from his pants...
Now they were the same...underwear to underwear...He came closer and Liz couldn't help but looked at his boxer. What she saw pleased her a lot and Max felt himself very excited by her look.
"And now?" she asked softly.
Without a word, he put a finger on her throat. And let it run between her breasts toward her belly until the waistband of her panties. Slowly, his finger slipped under the material and touched the part the most hidden of her anatomy...insisted...caressed...and under his fingers Liz opened herself like a flower, praying that this was only the beginning of the fireworks...
"Continue.... Please, continue...." she begged.
Which man could have resist to that plea? Not Max.
He lifted her and laid her on his bed. He buried his head between her breasts licking her fresh skin with his hot tongue. Then he unhooked her bra. Free, her breasts emerged. With her hands she lifted them to bring the nipples before his mouth. He didn't waste his time to take one between his teeth and softly bit it. Liz began to moan under the sweet pain.
With his finger, he caressed her lips and Liz was arching toward his hand. She was moaning in his ear and when he couldn't stand it anymore, he undressed her completely.
Now he could see her in all her glory. "G-d you're so gorgeous" he said huskily.
Oblivious of his turmoil, she rubbed against him to make him know that she wanted him as much as he did. "Your turn now, Max. I want to see you fully naked too.,” she moaned.
Then, eager to see him, she pulled down his boxers. She wrapped a leg around his waist and for the first time took him in her hand.
Max growled when she caressed him. He took a condom from the drawer near his bed, but it was far from easy putting it on. When he was ready, Max grabbed Liz and then took her with a deep thrust. Liz groaned between pain and enjoyment.
"More...More..." she moaned "Oh Max you're so hard, Don’t stop please!"
As he was thrusting in and out of her soft body, his mouth made love to hers the same way. Their tongues were tangling...their fingers were entwining.... Their hands were grabbing each other’s body. "Baby...we have plenty of time...we don't need to hurry, this feels so good!"
She replied with a long kiss "So good Max...for the first time..."
"For me too Liz...That's the first time I’ve felt that way for someone. You're the one for me Liz...."
Then they were pumping against each other all over again...galloping toward the top of ecstasy which they finally reached with a howl...at the same time.
Exhausted and panting they quivered together..."Oh Max...I didn't know that.... that could be so..." she began to whisper
"So good? For me too Liz.... I saw the fireworks too Liz, for the first time of my life...." he said wrapping his arms around her little frame.
hey guys I'm back with a new chapter, thanks to Emz80m who corrected my mistakes. I hope you'll like it.
I'm waiting for your fbs, cause I don't know if you'll like that part...
as you read, Max and Liz met and unable to resist to the attraction that draggs them one to the other, they made love...now, they have to face the consequences of their acts.
before I let you with the chapter, I'd like to thank you for the support you give to that fic. Thanks for you READERS and thanks for the LURKERS...if you feel the fierce yearning to leave a fb, don't resist....do it (lol)
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Earth2Mama- Ellie, let me tell you that you have such an imagination that I'm surprised that you didn't think to write yourself. I'm sure all the readers will be there....so G-d agreed....hope He'll keep agreeing with you to be here!
kittens- she's not so happy with her life because Sean is always busy, but she has a comfortable life and a rather good husband!
SmileeUk- Thanks for the wow! in this fic Liz has not the good role.....at least at the begining....but who knows what life reserves.
Do you want to know what happened between Max and Liz in Harvard.....go and read the new chapter of REVENGE A DISH YOU EAT COLD.....and if you want to know what happened to Liz and "Alex" after she whitnessed her client's murder.....go and read the new chapter of MURDEROUS MASSAGES.....Just know that LOVE ON THE INTERNET will be updated later in the week.....
Chapter 5
The morning after.
When Liz woke up, she felt completely exhausted. Sean’s arms were on her stomach and....Sean? NOO...She wasn’t at home! *Where am I? What am I doing here in this bed and....Max! I'm in Max's bed!! *
She looked down *and I'm completely naked! What have I done? * She thought panicked. In her panic, she moved and almost woke up Max "What are you doing up? It's early Liz...let's go back to sleep.... I’ll drive you home later, don't worry!" he said in a sleepy voice.
He tightened his grip around her and fell back asleep.
But Liz couldn't stay here. Sean is surely at home; she was surprised that he hadn’t called her already. Maybe he thought that she was staying at Maria's....
Maria!! Michael!! They left them without a word last night. They must be angry and worried about her, silly girl, and here she was in Max's bed.... naked.... after a night of passion! *Yeah, that was really a dream! I've never felt this way with Sean...He never made me feel special like Max did last night.... * she reflected with a dreamy smile *Stop Liz! You're married! You should be ashamed of yourself; you've cheated on your husband!! * The little voice came back and kept reminding her of that small little detail *you're married! You cheated on Sean! Get out of here! *
She tried to untie Max's grip from her body but he groaned and opened his beautiful eyes "Liz? What's going on? Where are you going?" he asked fully awake now.
"Look, I promised a friend to help her this morning. I forgot to call her yesterday to cancel...so I have to go now, or I'll be late."
"Do you have to go so early? I'm sure your friend is asleep in her bed...Come on Liz. I promised I’d take you home later. When do you have to meet your friend?" he asked again
"Now.... I mean, I've got to go home, take a shower and then I'm going to her home. So you see I don’t have much time!" she insisted.
"Listen Baby...it's only 6:00 in the morning.... I’m more than sure that she doesn't want you until 9:00. So be a good girl and come back into my arms. You’ll be on time for your meeting, I promise." he said and pulled her towards his bare chest.
"Don't you think that it's a better place? I mean, that's your place.... here in my arms.... for eternity!" he said huskily.
*ETERNITY??? He's crazy!!! I'm married! What is he talking about? *
Before she could answer, she heard the little voice in her head *Poor Max, madly in love with you, in love at first sight.... he didn't know that he had a married woman in his arms last night. You didn't tell him!! *
"I CAN'T!!!" *Oh my G-d! Did she say this loud? * She closed her eyes, unable to look at Max, to see his disappointment on his face.
"Liiiz...Baby.... I can't let you go! I don't want to let you go! I need you. I mean I need you in my life forever but I need you now, in my arms and I need to be inside of you again. I want you!"
Liz stared at him, stunned...opening and closing her mouth like a fish...She couldn't say a word, shocked by his words.... *he has only known me since yesterday.... a few hours ago.... how is it possible to fall in love with someone that fast*
"Liz, stay with me a little longer.... Please" he pleaded with his beautiful eyes begging her. How could she resist to those eyes? Resist his plea? That's too cruel!
"Ok...I’ll stay a few minutes more...." she said but he didn't let her finish her sentence, he crawled on top of her and kissed her fiercely.
He had that fierce need for Liz like he never had for anyone in his life before. It was like if she was not there, he would be unable to breathe, to drink, to eat...to live! And yet, yesterday, he was ignoring that she existed. Life is weird sometimes, it makes you meet someone, and in only 2 seconds, you know that you’ve met your soul mate. Yeah, Liz was his soul mate and he decided to show it to her until she agreed with him.
For the moment, he had a yearning to possess her body, to claim her as his.... he was kissing her, ravishing every single inch of her delicious mouth with his invading tongue.
His hands were not idle either. He cupped her breasts in his hands and teased her nipples with his fingers. He rolled a nipple until it became harder then he left her mouth, lowered it to her breast and sucked it, bit down on it and swirled his tongue around her breast.
Liz was digging her nails in the sheets and was crying his name Maaaxx....Yessss...ooooohhhhh!!!!"
After he served the same treatment to the other nipple, he lowered his lips again to her navel...and then lower to her belly...on his way, he bit softly her skin..."OOOOHHHH Maxxxx!" she screamed.
That was the first time someone bit her belly, and she forgot that she would have the marks for a while.... only thinking about her pleasure and the handsome man who was giving her that pleasure.
Max couldn't hold longer "Liz...I need to be inside of you Baby...I can't hold on any more..." he said with a hoarse voice.
Liz just nodded yes and he penetrated her with a long and deep thrust. They gasped together. “I’m at home, Liz.... You’re my home, and your body is my home too." he said fervently.
Eyes closed, she registered his words, his words of love. He was the most romantic and creative man she ever knew. They were dancing the crazy dance of love that was violent and tender in the same time, like she wanted and yet, she was pushing him
"Harder Max.... faster...."
She could hear his panting breath and his groan each time his body slammed into hers. But that was the best love making of her life. He could be violent but she didn't care. That was how she liked him making love to her.
Max was pumping inside of her like he was going to break her into pieces. But he couldn't let her go and when they climaxed, they screamed out each other’s names. Max collapsed on top of her, but not wanting to crush her, he moved away a little so he had his chest on the side but they were still connected....
It has been enough for Liz to adjust herself and to make him grow hard again and without her doing anything to arouse him, he was pumping inside of her again.
"Maaax!!! Agaiiin!!! Oh my G-d! Are you an alien or some kind of animal?" she asked amazed but laughing.
"It's YOU.... Only YOU Liz!!! Never.... never in my life...." he was talking with difficulties.
"Max, please stop talking.... You have no breath anymore!" she said and she kissed him softly on the forehead "You're the most amazing guy I’ve ever known! I mean that even if I only have Sean for example,” she blurted out.
Max was too worn out to react...and Liz bit her tongue and berated herself for her madness.
A few minutes later, Max was sitting in the bed, Liz against his bare chest "Liz? Who is that Sean guy?" he asked pretending to ask casually.
As he couldn't see her face, he missed Liz turning pale then blushing...." Sean? Did I say Sean?" she asked innocently.
"Yes...You said that I was an amazing guy even if you have only Sean for an example.... Is he your boyfriend? Or maybe an Ex-boyfriend?" he asked again.
"YES!" she said
"Yes what? Your actual or your ex?" he insisted.
"Does that matter you?" she asked searching in her mind for what she could say to save her skin.
"Not if you're with me now. You’re in my life, really in my life, that's all what matters me!"
"Max, I'm with you.... in your bed.... what more could you ask for?"
"You're right.... for the moment, nothing more...We'll see later." he said before he fell asleep, exhausted
One hour later, Liz was arriving back at her house. She left Max asleep in his bed and took a cab to come home. As she came into the apartment, Sean ran toward her, worried and upset "Where were you Liz, I was worried to death! You didn't tell me that you were going out..."
TBC...IF YOU WANT IT...................................................
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Hey guys, I'm back with a new chapter, I hope that you'll like it.
I wonder what you'll think about Liz character, just don't kill her. things will be better later, much later, but BETTER.
Ok, like always, I want to thank you readers and lurkers too. even if I wonder why don't you come and leave a word, even if you don't like it.
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I WILL UPDATE LATER,TODAY, LOVE ON THE INTERNET(hot, hot), and LATER THIS WEEK THE OTHER FICS....HOPE TO SEE YOU THERE TOO.... and please don't stop coming here!!!!
here is the chapter....
Chapter 6
Liz entered in her house and glared at her husband. "I didn't tell you because you were busy with your damn job! I did tell you that I wanted to go out.....WITH YOU!.....but you told me that you were busy at your office!" she cried "Did I answer your question good enough?" she asked and then she passed beside him and walked toward their room.
"I'm not in the mood to fight with you Sean, it's late and I'm tired." she added heading to the bathroom.
"Isn't it fair to ask to my wife why is she coming home at 6:00 in the morning, tired? Cause I don't care if you're tired or not. I was tired too, when I came back home and I didn't find you here. I stayed awake to wait for you!" he yelled at her. "And as your husband, I'm asking you where have you been that night?" he insisted folding his arms.
"Look Sean, I called you at your office, I asked you to go out with me and with Maria and Michael...You said that you were busy with your dreamteam..So please, don't come to ask me anything about where I was till now! " she said looking at him into his eyes.
"So if I understand you well....because I'm too busy at my office, YOU, my wife you have the right disappear who knows where? maybe to cheat on me? Is that what you're telling me?" he retorted
Liz couldn't answer this time. Should she tell him that she met a wonderful guy? Should she tell him that he made love with her like he, Sean had never done? Should she tell him that she wanted to continue her affair with Max despite the fact that she was married? What could she tell him?
In front of her, Sean was reading her betrayal on her face. The way her eyes were sparkling since she was reflecting showed him that he was right. Liz, his wife...the woman he cherished the most in that world had an affair with another man.
"That's it, huh? You cheated on me! Who is this bastard you slept with? Do I know him? And how dare you? How could you betray the vows we pronounced in front of G-d, our family and friends? Does our marriage mean nothing for you? Did I marry a slut? A whore?" he kept yelling at her. He needed to scream, to howl his pain. He looked at her with a disgusting look "How dared you?" he almost whispered.
Liz looked at him "So, you needed me to cheat on you to wake up, huh? Before that I didn't exist, before that that was only your job, your office, your team. I didn't exist. What do you think my life is with a man like you? I'm bored with you!" she screamed too.
Sean was devasted *She cheated on me! And she dares to come to face me like if that was bullshit!* he thought feeling the fury overwhelm him. "You bitch, I was working for you to have everything you wanted.....I was working for us to have a good life....I love my job, but you think that I would spend all that time at my office if it was just to annoy you, just to make you bored. I'm sure you were waiting for an opportunity to cheat on me and you found that man...Does he know that you're married?" he asked with contempt
Liz shut up again. Sean made the point with that question, she never said to Max that she was married and she went out without her wedding ring tonight. *I should have told him, Max deserved that I told him the truth.....But I wouldn't spend those wonderful hours with him if he knew! He's not the kind of man who sleeps with another man's wife.* she thought.
"You didn't huh? He doesn't know that you have a husband....a house....Phwee.....Poor guy! And I'm sure he fell into your spell like me....like how many Liz? How many times did you cheat on me? Tell me!" he asked torturing himself. "If you did it once, you should have done it even more! Tell me bitch!" he screamed with all his pain.
"STOP YELLING ON ME SEAN!!! It doesn't help!" she shouted
"I don't need you to know what could help me or not...Tell me....How many times did you cheat on me?" he insisted
"That's the first time..." she whispered. "Even if you don't believe me, I swear to you that Max is the first." she blurted out.
"Max! He has a name....Max!.....Tell me Liz, do you think that it's easier for me to know that MAX is the first....by the way, you said FIRST not the only one! Do you expect to find another one soon? Did you hear what you said?" he kept screaming.
He was trembling with pain...anger...disgust! His beloved wife Liz, he loved all along his life, cheated on him and the worst was that she didn't seem to regret it. She even said that she did it because of him! his job!
"I made a mistake...." she began
"Which one? Cheating on your husband?" he howled
"NOO! When I said that Max was the first...Of course I'm not having another lover! Who do you think I am?" she asked without realizing what she was saying. She didn't see that she was killing her husband.
"What do you want us to do?" she stammered. She was scared that he asked her to leave her house...Where would she go? Maria? Impossible, Michael will refuse, even if Sean is not his best friend, not even his friend, Michael is respectful of the traditions. She's married, he won't protect a married woman who is cheating on her husband with his best friend!
"What do you think I'll do? Forgive your disgusting behavior? Do you think that I'll say "it's ok Liz you cheated on me but I don't care, I love you! Do you expect that from me?" he asked
"I don't know what I expect from you Sean. I never cheated on you...." she said knowing that she was trying to weaken her husband anger.
"I don't know what to do...all what I feel is betrayal from the woman I loved all my life and I married...I need to think about that. For the moment I don't know if I want to divorce or to stay married with you. I just don't know." he said and walked out of the room.
Liz was relieved, she was scared that he threw her out of her house... For the moment, all that she needed was a bath and she walked toward her bathroom. She heard Sean moving things and she found him with a blanket and a pillow walking to the couch. "Sean...you don't need to..." but she stopped when she saw the look of pure hatred he had in his eyes. He almost scared her.
She went to the bathroom and opened the faucet.Then she began to undress.....
In another appartment,
Max still asleep was searching Liz's body in his bed and woke up when he found the place still warm but empty "LIZ?" he called. *Where is she?* he wondered. He didn't hear anything from the bathroom, he stood up and walked toward the living or the kitchen, but she was nowhere. *Gone? She's gone! Why? Did she regret what happened last night? That was the best night of my life!!!* he was thinking since he came back to his room.
He looked at the watch 6:30 *Where is she gone so earlier?* he asked again. He climbed back in his bed and laid looking at the ceiling. *That was the best night of my life! She is the love of my life....I never felt for any woman what I feel for her...It's LOVE and nothing else! Maybe she has been afraid of the feelings we had and she came back home to think about that. I could understand that she's afraid if I wouldn't be so in love with her...* he thought smiling. *LIZ...LIZ...* he was chanting. *I hope that I'll see you today again....and I don't worry we'll talk about that night and our feelings.* he said to himself and with a happy smile, he fell asleep again.
No far from here, in another appartment.
"Hi Sweetie. Did you sleep well?" Michael asked giving her a cup of coffee.
"Not really...I was thinking about Liz."
"And you feel guilty for Sean...."
"Not really for Sean..after all he dug his grave himself! No I feel bad for Max. It was obvious that something happened between them last night, but let me tell you that Max has been hit by a lightning. Love at first sight for him....and I wonder how Liz felt.. She was under the spell too, but you were right...she's married." she said sadly.
"I'm sure she'll call you later to tell you what happened between them. I just hope that they didn't push too far. I mean I hope that he just drove her to her house last night and nothing happened between them." he said with a doubtful smirk...
Back to Liz's house, one hour later...
"Max, it's me Liz....I'm sorry I had to leave before you woke up...I had a lot to do...I hope you'll call back soon."
TBC...IF YOU WANT IT.........................................
hey guys, it's very late here but I wanted to post that chapter before. I hope you'll like it...I'm not sure cause you're going to hate Liz.
Keep in mind that she's a modern woman and keep in mind that this fic is a dreamer one. keep faith in me!
I know that you have a lot to say about Liz or Sean...and I'm scared that you'll refuse to continue to read that fic.
This chapter is hard...but I will say that it won't always be like this in the future.
I'd like to thank all the READERS and LURKERS who come to read that fic.
Thank you for being here to support that fic....
Eartama- yeah Sean knows but don't worry you have time before Max will find out..
begonia9508- That's the modern world where the job and the money are the most important things in life. yeah poor Max....
FamersAmers- she has to deal with Sean her husband first Amy...wait a little for Max....
Topy458- I hope you'll always find her cool after that part...I'm not sure!
icequeen- you're right...she called Max but she doesn't know that.....and she'll have to deal with...you'll find the answers here...
Emz80m- yeah, she's very bold in this fic...
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I want to say that I've already updated MURDEROUS MASSAGES and THE JOKER and I hope to find you here soon. I'll update LOVE ON THE INTERNET and REVENGE A DISH... very soon too.
here we go
Chapter 7
As soon as Liz hung up the phone, she felt someone looking at her. She turned around and startled seeing Sean leaned against the doorway. It was obvious that he just woke up but obvious too that he heard when she left the message to Max.
She prefered to shut up and wait for his reaction, cursing herself for her stupidity. She could have wait until he was out to call Max.
"You can't wait to call your lover, huh? As soon as I turn my back, you call him. He might have been really great to have you addicted to him!" he said and she read on his face his pain and his anger.
"Sean....I want to apologize, I left him....Sean, I'm sure that you don't want me to explain my phone call to Max...Listen I don't want to hurt you..." she began
"It's already done Liz and you didn't care yesterday when you were under his sheets... Why did you want to apologize?" he asked.
"Seeaan!" she whinned "I don't want to talk about that with you...I'm very embarrassed and..."
"Sorry dear wife, you'll be compelled to tell me even if I'm disgusted, of course I don't want to know the details! Just imagining my wife having sex with another man gives me the yearning to vomit. But I'm going to get over this and listen how amazing that man has been." he said with contempt
"Sean! Stop that crazyness! I know that you're hurt..."
"HURT??? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?? You betrayed me....you cheated on me with that asshole....HOW DARED YOU? Who is that man who is able to sleep with a married woman? More than an asshole!! I can't define him!" Sean yelled.
"He doesn't know." Liz mumbled
"WHAT??? What did you say?" he asked shocked
"Sean...I couldn't tell him that I was married! That would have been crazy! Nothing would have happened, if he knew...I didn't say anything." she whispered, concious that she didn't only cheat on Sean but she betrayed Max too. He talked about his feelings for her, he was sincere and she didn't care of it.
Face to her, Sean was speechless. *Did I married a monster? A whore? A fool? I don't know...But to tell the truth, Liz is not the same woman I fell in love with and married. She is a stranger for me now. I can't understand her anymore.* he thought.
"Who are you? What did you do to my wife? I married a wonderful woman but she's gone...I don't know you. The old Liz won't have cheated on me...Won't have hidden that she was married!!"
"I know that I'm the bad girl here, but look at you! if you were a good husband who cared about your wife, I wouldn't have to look at someone else. I'm bored in my life...Can't you understand that!!" she screamed. "I called you first! I wanted to do something with you last night...I almost begged you to go out with us...But NOOO! Mr DeLuca was too busy with his fabulous project and his dream team. You got what you deserved Sean. I had told you day after day that I was bored, that I needed you beside me sometimes to have fun....what did you say? Busy! Busy.....and always busy! I'm not ashamed, sorry!" she finished and turned around to walk out of the room.
"Wait a minute?" he said and grabbed her shoulders "You're not ashamed of what you did? Are you saying that it's my fault if you cheated on me? Are you saying that I pushed you in this guy's arms? Is that what you saying? Is that your answer for you unbearable behavior?" he asked and was shaking her while he was talking. He couldn't believe that she had any regrets.
Liz was silent. She didn't want to say yes and risk to enrage him. But of course it was his fault, he was married with his job and team not with her.
"So, that's what you think! It's my fault, isn't it?" he asked again but here again Liz kept silent. "Ok, I'll make a deal with you....." he said and gripping her wrist he pushed her on the bed.
Liz was a little afraid, she knew that she hurt him badly but she didn't think that he would react this way. She sat and waited for the deal he wanted to offer to her still wondering what kind of deal he could have in mind...
"Ok...It's a fact that you cheated on me...I would have thrown you out of my house but I didn't. You can't say that I'm weak...Maybe I am...But I know that you're not ready to leave me too. I know that you like the comfort my awful job can offer to you...Don't try to deny Liz, I know....So I'm not scared of you leaving me for that man, for the moment..."
"I didn't know what you wanted to do Sean...I'm relieved that you don't think about a divorce." she said looking at him.
"Think about a divorce? Maybe I should think about it...But I told you, I'm weak when it comes of you Liz, you're my weakness and I can't find anything to heal me...But that's not the purpose today. I've told you, we're going to make a deal, you and me. So here is the deal....You can stay and fuck your lover as much as you want it....but it'll last 3 months....after that you'll break up with him...you'll come back here....we'll never talk about your affair....you'll never try to look for him!" he said calmly like if he was telling a story.
"Do you agree to do what I'm asking Liz?" he asked very calmly "Cause if you don't agree....I'll have no reason to keep you here with me!" he added.
"If I agree, what will happen?" she asked not believing what he was asking her and what he accepted her to do.
"Simple, you break up with him and you come back here..and we'll live our life like we always did. But you'll have taken your pleasure with that Max guy."
"That a devilish plan, Sean. If I agree, I'm a bitch...If I disagree I'm a bitch too..." she stated. "I have to think about that alone. I tell you my answer." she said and walked out of the room.
TBC..IF YOU WANT IT......................................................
hey guys! I'm back with a new chapter..I hope that you'll like it..I don't want to talk about it, I don't want to gave away what Liz did after Sean's deal.
I could resume that part, and all the fic with that famous sentence :"the heart has his reasons that the reason ignores."that's the "morale" of that fic.
It's in this part...I just want to say that I'm trying to present another side of Liz, here, you already found out, she's not really the good one.. I hope that you'll follow me with that fic, like you followed me in HATE, with Max and his villain sides.
All I can say is that this fic is a dreamer one..I mean, you can't see it for the moment, because of Liz....but it is...Don't you know that I'm a 1000% dreamer?
Now, I can thank you READERS and LURKERS for reading that fic. That means a lot for me and I hope you'll keep doing it till the end..
Earth2Mama- Ellie, read that part and you'll see that even if Sean seems to be crazy, he loves his wife. He just tries, even if it's painful for him, to keep her at any costs...
Topy458- That's what I wanted to do, break a little the always good side of Liz..But she's not that bad and continue to be a dreamer, so am I, and keep coming here, you'll see that everything is possible!!
icequeen- NO..He just loves his wife, I know it's hard to believe but people like him exist, and he want to keep her by his side at any costs. humm, Jazzy, what do you think that a woman who is bored by her life will do having 2 gorgeous men at her feet??? huh?
Roswell10/2/00- Hi Erin glad to see you here and thank you for the support.
begonia9508- Eve we are in the 21th century and things are turning upside down, you know it. relationships don't escape that state of things. Just keep faith, love exists in my fic like in the world!
touched by an alian- oh, you're agreeing that Liz takes the deal! interesting. I hope you'll like this part, you're going to find out what did Liz
googi- hey glad to see you here!! first you'll get Liz's answer here, in this part. and you have to know that Liz is bored in her life but she has all what she wants with Sean, on the financial and freedom side. She loves him too and sorry to tell you that, Sean is in love with Liz, and he chose to let her do what she wants, for a while I agree, rather than loosing her forever. I know that people like Sean exist.
Behrsgirl1230- sorry to annoy you, but I like when Max is needy, that's my revenge with Liz acting like a doormat in the show. Like I said to the others, Sean loves his wife and he's not ready to loose her, he chose to let her go for a while rather than loosing her forever.
Emz80m- I hope you'll understand better Sean's behavior here.
OK, now some news about my others fics : I've updated THE JOKER and MURDEROUS MASSAGES already, I'll update soon LOVE ON THE INTERNET and REVENGE...and I decided to update soon A TIME TO FORGIVE, one of my first fics...
You'll find them too on the WORK BY AUTHOR thread PLUS some others SUMMARIES of my coming soon fics.
here we go...
Chapter 8
Max woke up and after his shower, he went to the kitchen for his breakfast *I'm going to call Liz to see what she's doing today..Maybe we could have lunch together....or I could take her out tonight...* he thought, and with his cup of coffee in his hand he walked toward his room to take his phone..
When he opened it, he found out that he had a message and his eyes were sparkling when he heard her voice *She called...and she asks me to call her back! I knew that she wouldn't be upset or worried about the last night.* he thought and unable to repress himself he dialed Liz's number.
"Hello!"
"Liz, it's M...." he stopped when he realized that it was not Liz on the other side of the line. "Sorry, I made a mistake.." he said and hung up, perplex.
He looked at the number and wondered if he really mistook. Liz gave him that number last night, he had let her insert it in his phone...*I could mistake but that would be weird if Liz put the wrong number. Maybe that's the guy she talked about...what is his name?.....Sean, yes, that's Sean...Maybe that's Sean who answered me....* he thought really worried now.
In the other appartment...
Sean handed her phone to Liz "I think that your lover just called...sorry I answered but he didn't give me time to talk, he hung up before I can tell him that he didn't mistake." he said with a smirk.
"You could have come and given me the phone instead of answer. But you were too curious to see who was calling, huh? You're crazy Sean! You're breaking my intimity and you have no right to do it! Do you think that I would like to stay with you if I know that you'll spy on me every time?" she screamed.
"Don't worry my dear wife, I'll be so busy that you won't see me at home a lot. This way you'll have all the room to do what you want. Of course you won't bring him at home! Isn't your life beautiful? Do you know a husband who allows his wife to have an affair with another man? You're a lucky woman Liz. You should think about your luck to have me as husband instead of yelling at me because I answered to your phone at your place." he said sarcasticly.
"You're crazy Sean! Do you really think that I will agree with you to do what you're asking me?" she asked irritated.
"If you're smart, of course you'll agree with me. Think about what you have with me, and think about what you'll have with him...I'm not worried, you like your life even if it's a little boring. You better look for job than have an affair, but since you're not used to do anything of yourself..."he replied.
He always wanted her to take care of herself instead of work and she agreed with him since she didn't know what to do. They were so happy at the begining of their marriage, he was not so busy and they spent a lot of time together, enjoying their newlywed life.
But he opened his own business and he got a lot of work. People appreciated his work and they asked him to realize their dreams. He built a lot of luxurious houses and he began to be well known in his business.
That's why Liz become bored in her life, he was not so available for her. In a way, he understood that she looked for someone else, he spent so much time outside of his home...but he couldn't bring himself to let her go. She was the woman of his life since they graduated. They went to college together, they were planing their life together since then, and he really thought that he was going to give her the life she deserved.
Liz was looking at her husband. First she was furious against him, he had no right to answer at her place, then she was contemplating his deal. Even if it seemed crazy, she knew that Sean was thinking about herself first.. *He's right...I'm lucky to have him as husband..We were so happy before he became the great Sean DeLuca! I can't forget that. I loved him.....and I still do. I can't erase so many happy years together. He was my first in everything in my life...* she thought.
"Liz...Despite everything, you know that I love you...you're right I'm too busy, but my job didn't change my heart...It changed our way of life, I'm not always available...But you're my wife, the woman I loved since graduation. You can't forget that for one night...Do you know if that man will be able to give what I'm giving you? A faithful and loving husband...The man who always thought about you first before everything when it comes to please you..to love you...My only flaw is my ambition in my job...You're right, I let it get the best of our life...."
"And can you promise to change that? I mean, if I let Max down, are you ready to take care of me like you did during the first year of our marriage?"
Sean looked at her silently. Could it be possible that she forgot everything about that man and stayed with him? Is that what she wanted? Is it the reason of her betrayal last night? A warning for him to look after her...to take care of her? Could he trust her? He tried to read in her eyes....but they had spent so much time apart than she is like a stranger for him now. He couldn't read in her eyes like he was used to do it at the begining....or maybe it's his fault, he forgot how to do...
He looked again at her *G-d! How much I love her!!!* "Liz...I'll do my...." he began but she cut him off.
"I don't want to expect something that might never happen Sean..I know that you love me but you love even more your job...I'd like to promise that I won't betray you again, that I'd stay quiet, waiting for you to come back home after an harrassing day....But I can't. I'm not strong enough to tell you that and be bored in my life like I'm until now." she said.
"So what do you want to do? Are you accepting my deal?" he asked disappointed and hurt.
"As crazy as it seems, I think so. I accept your deal...But I should say that I agree with the idea only, cause I don't know what will happen in 3 months, maybe I'll be so in love with Max than I couldn't leave him...That's a risk you have to agree to take, Sean. If you want to play with the fire, you have to agree to get burn!"
"I take risks every day of my life Liz, but what you're asking me is the hardest thing I'll ever have to do in my life. I don't want to loose you Liz, so.... I'm going to let you do what you want...I keep that limit of 3 months cause I'm sure you'll come back to me...after you'll have worn out that poor guy. I feel bad for him cause I know what is it to love you Liz, and he's going to love you like a damned, like a fool..I know that feeling...You can call him back to announce him the good news!!!" he said and walked out of the room.
Liz stayed alone in her room, stunned. She has agreed with that stupid deal! Sean might be confident, he didn't know the future. Even her, she didn't know what her future will be.. For the moment, she has to call back Max and try to find an excuse about Sean.
"Hello!"
"Hi Max, it's Liz...You called me back?"
"Liz who was that man who answered?" he asked sternly.
Oops, she didn't expect him to be so rude..."That was Sean...I was not in my room and he answered at my place, sorry."
"Liz, he was in your room...he answered at your place...Who is he? Your boyfriend?" he asked again suspicious.
"Humm...We're not together...I mean we agreed to let the other live its life..."
"But he was in your room...Did you ended things together on your pillow?" he insisted, scared to hear that he was right.
"No, Max...You wore me out enough for one day." she giggled.
Max couldn't help the smile on his face...."So what are you going to do now?"
"It depends on a gorgeous man I met yesterday...I'm waiting for an invitation for lunch...or maybe more..."
TBC...IF YOU WANT IT...............................................
