CHAPTER 10
MAX P.O.V
It’s Wednesday afternoon and I’m in my car driving home from work, lets just say I’m not in the best mood …
AT THE OFFICE
“Maxwell” Philip Evans screams as he barges throw his son office.
“To what do I owe this pleasure?” Max asks while lifting his feet from off the floor and placing them on his desk.
“Maxwell, I raised a son not an animal, Now remove your feet from the desk” Philip stated while fuming with furry.
“Well Philip it seems you don’t really know what you raised…unless screaming and abusing are you way to raise a family” Max said in a calm manner.
“Maxwell, you are so ungrateful … who put the food on the table and whose roof were you living under?” Philip asked with a raised eyebrow.
“Hmmm… well I guess the maids put the food on the table” Max said scratching his chin as if he were thinking.
“See dad that’s the thing, the maids were there for me and Izzy not you” Max said as he stood up from behind his desk and came to stand in front of his father.
“You weren’t there, you were here … and I would never do that to my children if I were you. Me and Izzy didn’t even know our father the way we should of, you never came to my football games and you never cared about my schooling, cause lets face it dad you expect me to be just like you …but I refuse to” Max said as he stormed out of his office leaving Philip stunned and baffled….
I pull into my drive way and turn off the engine, I open my front door and here the phone ringing upstairs.
“The answering machine can get it” I say aloud as I make my way to my bedroom while loosening my tie.
‘Hi you’ve reached Max’s voice mail please leave a message’ I hear my message play.
“Hi Max its Liz, Ummm I just wanted to see …” I hear the soft voice of an angel and run to the phone tripping over on the way.
“Hello” I say practically out of breath.
“Hi, I was beginning to think you weren’t home” she said into the phone and I smile as I picture her sweet smile.
“Nah … I just got back from work” I say as I take a seat on the couch near by.
“So I just got off work and I was wondering if you weren’t busy we could start our date now?” she says in a hopeful tone and I can’t help but smile.
“Sure” I say a little to fast and to over joyed.
I hear her chuckle on the other end and I feel my heart start racing, ‘why do I feel this way when I’ve only just met her’ I think to myself and I snap out of my daze to hear Liz saying.
“Umm … so should we say 5 o’clock?” she asks after recovering from her laugh.
“Yeah 5 o’clock is great… so I guess I’ll see you soon” I say while waiting for her reply.
“Yeah I guess umm…” she says and I know she wants to say something.
“Ummm what?” I ask with a raised eyebrow.
“What should I wear?” she asks and I smile at her uncertainty.
“I mean its been a while since my last date and I don’t really know …” she starts to apologise.
“No its ok umm… lets just wear something nice, you know something dressy” I say, not wanting to give away what I have planed.
“Umm ok” she says.
We talk a while longer before she gives me her phone number and we say our goodbyes.
Its already 4.15 and I hurry to get dressed.
‘What am I going to wear’ I think as I walk into my huge closet.
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CHAPTER 11
LIZ P.O.V
I’m here in front of my closet trying to find something appropriate to wear.
“Too pink, too ugly, too green” I say to myself as I throw all of my clothes out of my closet and onto my bed.
I finally decide on a black dress, its sleeveless, show’s just enough cleavage and finishes at mid thigh.
I walk into my joint bathroom and work on my hair and make-up.
I can’t believe I’m going on a date with mister tall, dark and handsom …Max Evans.
When he first told me his name I had a funny feeling I had heard it before, but the feeling passed.
RING RING
I hear my phone ring and run to pick it up just in case it is Max.
“Hello” I say into the cordless phone as I continue to look at myself in the mirror.
“Lizze… honey how are you? How is everything?” I hear my mum try to shout above the music in the back ground.
“I’m good mum, everything is ok” I say while rolling my eyes.
After Max dropped me off home Saturday night I came up to my room to find that I had 18 messages.
I mean honestly I’m 21 years old and she calls me 18 times, it’s like I’m suffocating.
“So your cousins are asking how you are and why you didn’t come” she says
It really irritates me, ‘why cant I just be normal and not have a family who is just waiting to marry me off’ I think.
“Lizze … we are not trying to marry you off we just want you to be happy” she says and I curse myself for speaking my thoughts.
Why does that always happen to me?
“You know what mum, sometimes I think that dad is the only person that really does love me, he doesn’t care if I go out and get married he loves me for me. Do you mum, do you love me for me?” I ask trying not to cry and smudge my eyeliner.
“Yes Lizze you know I do” I hear her say and she sounds a bit hurt.
“Well then go back to your party and have fun, because that’s what I’m planing to do. You can tell my cousins I can’t talk right now cause I’m getting ready for my date” I say proud to be going on a date.
“Ok honey, have fun bye” I hear her say with a hopeful tone and I know that she is waiting for the day I get married and have babies.
Its hard being an only child, you have to live you to all your parents’ expectations… and sometimes there hard.
‘DING DONG’
I hear the door bell and start to freak out …
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LIZ P.O.V
I’m here in front of my closet trying to find something appropriate to wear.
“Too pink, too ugly, too green” I say to myself as I throw all of my clothes out of my closet and onto my bed.
I finally decide on a black dress, its sleeveless, show’s just enough cleavage and finishes at mid thigh.
I walk into my joint bathroom and work on my hair and make-up.
I can’t believe I’m going on a date with mister tall, dark and handsom …Max Evans.
When he first told me his name I had a funny feeling I had heard it before, but the feeling passed.
RING RING
I hear my phone ring and run to pick it up just in case it is Max.
“Hello” I say into the cordless phone as I continue to look at myself in the mirror.
“Lizze… honey how are you? How is everything?” I hear my mum try to shout above the music in the back ground.
“I’m good mum, everything is ok” I say while rolling my eyes.
After Max dropped me off home Saturday night I came up to my room to find that I had 18 messages.
I mean honestly I’m 21 years old and she calls me 18 times, it’s like I’m suffocating.
“So your cousins are asking how you are and why you didn’t come” she says
It really irritates me, ‘why cant I just be normal and not have a family who is just waiting to marry me off’ I think.
“Lizze … we are not trying to marry you off we just want you to be happy” she says and I curse myself for speaking my thoughts.
Why does that always happen to me?
“You know what mum, sometimes I think that dad is the only person that really does love me, he doesn’t care if I go out and get married he loves me for me. Do you mum, do you love me for me?” I ask trying not to cry and smudge my eyeliner.
“Yes Lizze you know I do” I hear her say and she sounds a bit hurt.
“Well then go back to your party and have fun, because that’s what I’m planing to do. You can tell my cousins I can’t talk right now cause I’m getting ready for my date” I say proud to be going on a date.
“Ok honey, have fun bye” I hear her say with a hopeful tone and I know that she is waiting for the day I get married and have babies.
Its hard being an only child, you have to live you to all your parents’ expectations… and sometimes there hard.
‘DING DONG’
I hear the door bell and start to freak out …
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CHAPTER 12
MAX P.O.V
I pull up to The Crashdown and go around the back.
I park my SUV and walk up the steps leading to what I believe is Liz’s home.
She already told me on the phone that she still lives with her parents, she sounded almost embarrassed, but I think its great to stay home a while longer.
I walk up to the door and before I ring the door bell I wipe my hands on my trousers to get rid of the sweat forming and I begin to grow nervous.
‘DING DONG’
I hear as I ring the door hoping and praying I won’t say anything wrong tonight.
“Hey … wow” I say as Liz opens the door, I can’t believe my eyes she’s so beautiful.
“Hey” she says shyly as she leans up on her tip toes to kiss me.
“You look absolutely amazing” I say as we pull away.
I’m still trying, with great difficulty to remove my eyes from her dress.
“Thankyou, you clean up pretty well too” she says back with a cute smile, which makes my heart start beating fast.
“Shall we go?” I ask as I grab her hand.
“Sure, I’ll just grab my bag” she says as she disappears into the house and re-appears
Moments later with he small hand bag.
We walk to my car hand-in-hand and I hold the door open for her as she sits in.
I jog around to the driver’s seat and sit in.
“So where are we going?” she asks with a cheerful grin.
“It’s a surprise” I say back and I grab her hand and join our finger bringing the to the gear stick.
“Oh ok” she says with a smile and looks at me adding “I love surprises”.
I smile back at her as I pull over to the ‘Grapazopa’ a nice Italian restaurant I found while driving late one night.
“We’re eating here?” she blurts out with a worried expression.
“What’s wrong?” I ask as soon as I see her worried look.
“Max this is gonna cost a fortune” she says and I can’t help but smile.
I begin to wonder what she would think of me if I told her that I was rich or that I was a millionaire, cause let’s face it I am.
“Honey, it’s alright I have this night figured out” I say as I squeeze her had for reassurance.
“Ok” she says with a slight smile and I hop out of the driver’s seat and jog around to the passenger’s side to help her out.
‘I hope this night goes good’
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MAX P.O.V
I pull up to The Crashdown and go around the back.
I park my SUV and walk up the steps leading to what I believe is Liz’s home.
She already told me on the phone that she still lives with her parents, she sounded almost embarrassed, but I think its great to stay home a while longer.
I walk up to the door and before I ring the door bell I wipe my hands on my trousers to get rid of the sweat forming and I begin to grow nervous.
‘DING DONG’
I hear as I ring the door hoping and praying I won’t say anything wrong tonight.
“Hey … wow” I say as Liz opens the door, I can’t believe my eyes she’s so beautiful.
“Hey” she says shyly as she leans up on her tip toes to kiss me.
“You look absolutely amazing” I say as we pull away.
I’m still trying, with great difficulty to remove my eyes from her dress.
“Thankyou, you clean up pretty well too” she says back with a cute smile, which makes my heart start beating fast.
“Shall we go?” I ask as I grab her hand.
“Sure, I’ll just grab my bag” she says as she disappears into the house and re-appears
Moments later with he small hand bag.
We walk to my car hand-in-hand and I hold the door open for her as she sits in.
I jog around to the driver’s seat and sit in.
“So where are we going?” she asks with a cheerful grin.
“It’s a surprise” I say back and I grab her hand and join our finger bringing the to the gear stick.
“Oh ok” she says with a smile and looks at me adding “I love surprises”.
I smile back at her as I pull over to the ‘Grapazopa’ a nice Italian restaurant I found while driving late one night.
“We’re eating here?” she blurts out with a worried expression.
“What’s wrong?” I ask as soon as I see her worried look.
“Max this is gonna cost a fortune” she says and I can’t help but smile.
I begin to wonder what she would think of me if I told her that I was rich or that I was a millionaire, cause let’s face it I am.
“Honey, it’s alright I have this night figured out” I say as I squeeze her had for reassurance.
“Ok” she says with a slight smile and I hop out of the driver’s seat and jog around to the passenger’s side to help her out.
‘I hope this night goes good’
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CHAPTER 13
LIZ P.O.V
“Max dinner was great” I say as I finish my plate of ‘spinach and ricotta ravioli’.
“The night is not over yet, Liz” he says to me and I smile.
Just then the waiter returns with the desert menus.
“What would you like?” Max asks and I look at all the prices.
God … everything is so expensive.
“Liz don’t look at the prices, look at what you like” he says and I look up at him to find him smiling at me.
“I’ll have the chocolate pudding” I say as I hand the menu to the waiter who just smiles and waits for Max’s order.
“2 chocolate puddings” Max said, before handing his menu to the waiter who disappeared into the kitchen.
I look around the restaurant to find people staring at us and I begin to get uncomfortable.
“Sweetly, you ok?” Max asks with a raised eyebrow while looking at me.
“Why are they staring?” I ask not wanting to sound like a total dickhead, but probably am.
“Their just staring at you because your so beautiful they can’t resist” he says and I blush.
Max holds out his hand to me and says.
“Dance with me”
I place my small hand in his as we make our way to the dance floor.
It's undeniable
That we should be together
It's unbelievable
How I used to say that I'd fall never
The basics you need to know
If you don't know just how I feel
And let me show you now that I'm for real
If all things, in time, time will reveal
He places his hand on my waist and I wrap my arms around his neck while smiling.
One, you're like a dream come true
Two, just wanna be with you
Three, girl, it's plain to see
That you're the only one for me
And four, repeat steps one through three
Five, make you fall in love with me
If ever I believe my work is done
Then I'll start back at one
I let out a laugh when Max dips me and lefts me up again, back into his strong arms.
It's so incredible
The way things work themselves out
And all emotional
Once you know what it's all about, and
It's undesirable for us to be apart
I never would have made it very far
'Cause you know you've got the keys to my heart
'Cause...
I lean up as he leans down and when our lips meet its as if we were in a movie and there were fireworks all around us.
I know we’ve kissed before, but its all romantic know …
One, you're like a dream come true
Two, just wanna be with you
Three, girl, it's plain to see
That you're the only one for me
And four, repeat steps one through three
Five, make you fall in love with me
If ever I believe my work is done
Then I'll start back at one
It’s like a dream come true for a small town girl like me.
Say farewell to the dark of night
I see the coming of the sun
I feel like a little child
Whose life has just begun
You came and breathed new life
Into this lonely heart of mine
You threw out the lifeline
Just in the nick of time
We pull away and all I can do is looking into his eyes and I am shocked when I see love in them.
One, you're like a dream come true
Two, just wanna be with you
Three, girl, it's plain to see
That you're the only one for me
And four, repeat steps one through three
Five, make you fall in love with me
If ever I believe my work is done
Then I'll start back at one
“I think I’m falling for you Evans” I say as I look up into his eyes.
“I’m right there with you Parker” he says and I smile as I lean up to kiss him again.
We walk back to our table and I notice the crowed we have and smiled shyly.
We finish our deserts and I go to stand up to leave but Max gets up and pulls out my chair.
“Thankyou” I say.
We leave the restaurant after Max pays the bill, which I wanted to pay for but Max insisted he pay.
“So what else do you have planed?” I ask as we walk hand-in-hand towards his car.
“You’ll just have to wait and see” he says as he pulls me away from his car and we begin to walk down the sidewalk.
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LIZ P.O.V
“Max dinner was great” I say as I finish my plate of ‘spinach and ricotta ravioli’.
“The night is not over yet, Liz” he says to me and I smile.
Just then the waiter returns with the desert menus.
“What would you like?” Max asks and I look at all the prices.
God … everything is so expensive.
“Liz don’t look at the prices, look at what you like” he says and I look up at him to find him smiling at me.
“I’ll have the chocolate pudding” I say as I hand the menu to the waiter who just smiles and waits for Max’s order.
“2 chocolate puddings” Max said, before handing his menu to the waiter who disappeared into the kitchen.
I look around the restaurant to find people staring at us and I begin to get uncomfortable.
“Sweetly, you ok?” Max asks with a raised eyebrow while looking at me.
“Why are they staring?” I ask not wanting to sound like a total dickhead, but probably am.
“Their just staring at you because your so beautiful they can’t resist” he says and I blush.
Max holds out his hand to me and says.
“Dance with me”
I place my small hand in his as we make our way to the dance floor.
It's undeniable
That we should be together
It's unbelievable
How I used to say that I'd fall never
The basics you need to know
If you don't know just how I feel
And let me show you now that I'm for real
If all things, in time, time will reveal
He places his hand on my waist and I wrap my arms around his neck while smiling.
One, you're like a dream come true
Two, just wanna be with you
Three, girl, it's plain to see
That you're the only one for me
And four, repeat steps one through three
Five, make you fall in love with me
If ever I believe my work is done
Then I'll start back at one
I let out a laugh when Max dips me and lefts me up again, back into his strong arms.
It's so incredible
The way things work themselves out
And all emotional
Once you know what it's all about, and
It's undesirable for us to be apart
I never would have made it very far
'Cause you know you've got the keys to my heart
'Cause...
I lean up as he leans down and when our lips meet its as if we were in a movie and there were fireworks all around us.
I know we’ve kissed before, but its all romantic know …
One, you're like a dream come true
Two, just wanna be with you
Three, girl, it's plain to see
That you're the only one for me
And four, repeat steps one through three
Five, make you fall in love with me
If ever I believe my work is done
Then I'll start back at one
It’s like a dream come true for a small town girl like me.
Say farewell to the dark of night
I see the coming of the sun
I feel like a little child
Whose life has just begun
You came and breathed new life
Into this lonely heart of mine
You threw out the lifeline
Just in the nick of time
We pull away and all I can do is looking into his eyes and I am shocked when I see love in them.
One, you're like a dream come true
Two, just wanna be with you
Three, girl, it's plain to see
That you're the only one for me
And four, repeat steps one through three
Five, make you fall in love with me
If ever I believe my work is done
Then I'll start back at one
“I think I’m falling for you Evans” I say as I look up into his eyes.
“I’m right there with you Parker” he says and I smile as I lean up to kiss him again.
We walk back to our table and I notice the crowed we have and smiled shyly.
We finish our deserts and I go to stand up to leave but Max gets up and pulls out my chair.
“Thankyou” I say.
We leave the restaurant after Max pays the bill, which I wanted to pay for but Max insisted he pay.
“So what else do you have planed?” I ask as we walk hand-in-hand towards his car.
“You’ll just have to wait and see” he says as he pulls me away from his car and we begin to walk down the sidewalk.
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CHAPTER 14
MAX P.O.V
We are walking towards our destination Hand-in-hand and I hear her gasp as we approach.
“I take that as you like” I say as I laugh at her stunned expression.
“You did this, for me?” she asks as she looks at the beach, I came over earlier and set it all up.
I have a blanket with a bottle of the dearest wine and a radio set up, right in front of the waves.
“Wow this is beautiful” she says as she runs over to the blanket.
“How did you do all of this?” she asks
“I had to do something special for someone special” I say not wanting to say that I’m rich and can do anything.
“I love you” she says before jumping up and wrapping her legs around me.
I’m court off guard but quickly regain my strength and kiss her back with the same passion.
“I love you too” I say as I pull away just long enough to say it.
A song starts to play on the radio and I can’t believe how perfect I feel right now.
I could stay awake just to hear you breathing
Watch you smile while you are sleeping
While you're far away and dreaming
I could spend my life in this sweet surrender
I could stay lost in this moment forever
Every moment spent with you is a moment I treasure
We lay down on the blanket kissing with such passion.
“I love you” she says again pulling away for an instant, and I’m still overwhelmed, I mean, she loves me.
I don't wanna close my eyes
I don't wanna fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
“I love you too honey” I say and we smile at each other before continuing in our passion.
Lying close to you feeling your heart beating
And I'm wondering what you're dreaming
Wondering if it's me you're seeing
Then I kiss your eyes and thank God we're together
And I just wanna stay with you
In this moment forever, forever and ever
“I’m so happy that you came to The Crashdown that day and that Maria asked you to come to the party, I’m glad you came” she says while kissing a trail down my neck.
I don't wanna close my eyes
I don't wanna fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
“I’m so glad you decided to have the party and that I got the courage to ask you out” I say speaking my mind, while enjoying the feel of her hands under my top.
I don't wanna miss one smile
I don't wanna miss one kiss
Well, I just wanna be with you
Right here with you, just like this
I just wanna hold you close
Feel your heart so close to mine
And stay here in this moment
For all the rest of time
We roll over on the blanket and continue to kiss.
God … I love this girl.
I don't wanna close my eyes
I don't wanna fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
“Mmmmm” I whimper as I feel the cold air hit my bear chest.
Don't wanna close my eyes
Don't wanna fall asleep, yeah
I don't wanna miss a thing
The song finishes and I pull away from Liz.
“Liz honey, we don’t have to you know … I don’t want to rush things” I say as I lift her up and look into her beautiful chocolate eyes.
“I don’t want to rush it either…its just that I love you so much” she begins to say but I interfere as I lean down and capture her lips in a sweet kiss.
“I love you… so much too” I say returning her smile.
We lay on the blanket for a while just holding each other happy to be in each others presences.
I see Liz start to doze off and I pull off my jacket and wrap it around her.
‘How is it that you could love someone so much?’ I think to myself as I look down at her.
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MAX P.O.V
We are walking towards our destination Hand-in-hand and I hear her gasp as we approach.
“I take that as you like” I say as I laugh at her stunned expression.
“You did this, for me?” she asks as she looks at the beach, I came over earlier and set it all up.
I have a blanket with a bottle of the dearest wine and a radio set up, right in front of the waves.
“Wow this is beautiful” she says as she runs over to the blanket.
“How did you do all of this?” she asks
“I had to do something special for someone special” I say not wanting to say that I’m rich and can do anything.
“I love you” she says before jumping up and wrapping her legs around me.
I’m court off guard but quickly regain my strength and kiss her back with the same passion.
“I love you too” I say as I pull away just long enough to say it.
A song starts to play on the radio and I can’t believe how perfect I feel right now.
I could stay awake just to hear you breathing
Watch you smile while you are sleeping
While you're far away and dreaming
I could spend my life in this sweet surrender
I could stay lost in this moment forever
Every moment spent with you is a moment I treasure
We lay down on the blanket kissing with such passion.
“I love you” she says again pulling away for an instant, and I’m still overwhelmed, I mean, she loves me.
I don't wanna close my eyes
I don't wanna fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
“I love you too honey” I say and we smile at each other before continuing in our passion.
Lying close to you feeling your heart beating
And I'm wondering what you're dreaming
Wondering if it's me you're seeing
Then I kiss your eyes and thank God we're together
And I just wanna stay with you
In this moment forever, forever and ever
“I’m so happy that you came to The Crashdown that day and that Maria asked you to come to the party, I’m glad you came” she says while kissing a trail down my neck.
I don't wanna close my eyes
I don't wanna fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
“I’m so glad you decided to have the party and that I got the courage to ask you out” I say speaking my mind, while enjoying the feel of her hands under my top.
I don't wanna miss one smile
I don't wanna miss one kiss
Well, I just wanna be with you
Right here with you, just like this
I just wanna hold you close
Feel your heart so close to mine
And stay here in this moment
For all the rest of time
We roll over on the blanket and continue to kiss.
God … I love this girl.
I don't wanna close my eyes
I don't wanna fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you, baby
And I don't wanna miss a thing
“Mmmmm” I whimper as I feel the cold air hit my bear chest.
Don't wanna close my eyes
Don't wanna fall asleep, yeah
I don't wanna miss a thing
The song finishes and I pull away from Liz.
“Liz honey, we don’t have to you know … I don’t want to rush things” I say as I lift her up and look into her beautiful chocolate eyes.
“I don’t want to rush it either…its just that I love you so much” she begins to say but I interfere as I lean down and capture her lips in a sweet kiss.
“I love you… so much too” I say returning her smile.
We lay on the blanket for a while just holding each other happy to be in each others presences.
I see Liz start to doze off and I pull off my jacket and wrap it around her.
‘How is it that you could love someone so much?’ I think to myself as I look down at her.
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CHAPTER 15
LIZ P.O.V
I wake up in a strange room that I have never seen before.
I feel strong arms wrapped around my waist and remember last night; it was honestly the best night of my life.
I turn around to face Max who is peacefully sleeping with his face just inches from mine.
I don’t remember how I got here but honestly I don’t care.
I look down under the covers to see that we are both fully dressed and thank god … I may be 21 but I believe in purity.
“Morning beautiful” I hear his deep voice say and feel shivers down my spine.
“Morning” I say back and look up at him shyly.
“You don’t remember coming here do you?” he asks and I look at him and nod.
“Yeah I don’t remember much” I say and he smiles.
“By the way… where are we?” I ask fully knowing where we are but wanting him to say it just in case in wrong.
“My house” he says with a smile.
“Why don’t we go freshen up and I’ll take you for a tour” he says and I cant help but smile and giggle.
“Sure, that sounds like fun” I say and kiss his cheek before getting up and walking into the jointed bathroom.
As soon as I walk in I feel like I’m in a palace, this room is huge and its just a bathroom.
I close the door behind me so that it is half opened and walk over to the sink.
“Can I use you r toothbrush?” I shout through the door.
“Sure” I hear his reply.
I wash my teeth and brush my hair. After I am done cleaning off my dress to get more comfortable, I walk into the bedroom once again to find max changed and in a pain top with blue jeans … and there just tight enough (need I say more).
“There’s another two bathrooms” he says as he looks at me.
Two more bathrooms what is this guy … a millionaire ‘hahaha’ I think to myself, when you think of rich people you do not think of nice and polite, you think of money hungry and snobby... not to be offensive or anything.
‘So are you ready for the tour?” he asks while sitting up off the bed and coming to stand in front of me.
“Yes, I am” I say and we walk out of the bedroom hand-in-hand.
As we walk out of the bedroom I notice a long corridor with while and baby blue walls, it is absolutely beautiful.
“Wow” I say as we continue to walk and out of the corner of my eye I see Max look at me and smile.
“Glad you like it” he says as he squeezes my hand.
We continue to walk until we reach a stair case, but it is not an ordinary stair case…it’s a glass stair case.
To tell you the truth I don’t really know if I want to risk stepping on it and falling straight through.
But I continue to walk with Max beside me talking and telling me about the house.
To tell you the truth the house is beautiful but there is something even more beautiful that has my attention.
‘His so beautiful’ I think but it comes out aloud.
I duck my head in embarrassment, “so are you beautiful” he says as he grabs my hand.
“You have a habit of speaking your mind don’t you?” he asks with a sly grin.
“Yeah, I do but it just happens I can’t help it, it’s really annoying I know” I say.
“I think it’s cute … and sexy” he adds as he looks at me and leans down to kiss my lips.
“Really?” I say just moments before his lips crash on mine and I get my response by the passion in the one kiss.
“Really” he says.
‘I don’t believe how fast I fell for this guy… I don’t know what I would do if anything went wrong’ are my last thoughts.
TBC
CHAPTER 15
LIZ P.O.V
I wake up in a strange room that I have never seen before.
I feel strong arms wrapped around my waist and remember last night; it was honestly the best night of my life.
I turn around to face Max who is peacefully sleeping with his face just inches from mine.
I don’t remember how I got here but honestly I don’t care.
I look down under the covers to see that we are both fully dressed and thank god … I may be 21 but I believe in purity.
“Morning beautiful” I hear his deep voice say and feel shivers down my spine.
“Morning” I say back and look up at him shyly.
“You don’t remember coming here do you?” he asks and I look at him and nod.
“Yeah I don’t remember much” I say and he smiles.
“By the way… where are we?” I ask fully knowing where we are but wanting him to say it just in case in wrong.
“My house” he says with a smile.
“Why don’t we go freshen up and I’ll take you for a tour” he says and I cant help but smile and giggle.
“Sure, that sounds like fun” I say and kiss his cheek before getting up and walking into the jointed bathroom.
As soon as I walk in I feel like I’m in a palace, this room is huge and its just a bathroom.
I close the door behind me so that it is half opened and walk over to the sink.
“Can I use you r toothbrush?” I shout through the door.
“Sure” I hear his reply.
I wash my teeth and brush my hair. After I am done cleaning off my dress to get more comfortable, I walk into the bedroom once again to find max changed and in a pain top with blue jeans … and there just tight enough (need I say more).
“There’s another two bathrooms” he says as he looks at me.
Two more bathrooms what is this guy … a millionaire ‘hahaha’ I think to myself, when you think of rich people you do not think of nice and polite, you think of money hungry and snobby... not to be offensive or anything.
‘So are you ready for the tour?” he asks while sitting up off the bed and coming to stand in front of me.
“Yes, I am” I say and we walk out of the bedroom hand-in-hand.
As we walk out of the bedroom I notice a long corridor with while and baby blue walls, it is absolutely beautiful.
“Wow” I say as we continue to walk and out of the corner of my eye I see Max look at me and smile.
“Glad you like it” he says as he squeezes my hand.
We continue to walk until we reach a stair case, but it is not an ordinary stair case…it’s a glass stair case.
To tell you the truth I don’t really know if I want to risk stepping on it and falling straight through.
But I continue to walk with Max beside me talking and telling me about the house.
To tell you the truth the house is beautiful but there is something even more beautiful that has my attention.
‘His so beautiful’ I think but it comes out aloud.
I duck my head in embarrassment, “so are you beautiful” he says as he grabs my hand.
“You have a habit of speaking your mind don’t you?” he asks with a sly grin.
“Yeah, I do but it just happens I can’t help it, it’s really annoying I know” I say.
“I think it’s cute … and sexy” he adds as he looks at me and leans down to kiss my lips.
“Really?” I say just moments before his lips crash on mine and I get my response by the passion in the one kiss.
“Really” he says.
‘I don’t believe how fast I fell for this guy… I don’t know what I would do if anything went wrong’ are my last thoughts.
TBC
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CHAPTER 16
MAX P.O.V
We pull apart and I look into her eyes, she is so beautiful I don’t know what I would do if I lost her.
It’s like know that I know what I feel like when I’m with her I know that I want that feeling to last and I never want to return to when I didn’t have her … she’s a part of me and it may seem cheesy cause its only been a while but its true.
“So do you have swimming pool and tennis court?” I hear her ask sarcastically.
“Actually, yes I do” I say and look at the shocked expression on her lips.
I’m glad that she hasn’t asked me how I can afford it all and I don’t want her to get suspicious so I add “I’m a lawyer, we get a lot of money” I try to cover up.
I know that I’m lying but I really like Liz and what would happen if I told her I had money and she ran away scared.
I know she wouldn’t do what my first girlfriend did which was use it to her advantage, and then there was Tess who did the same thing.
Is it so hard to find someone who would love you for you and not for your bank book?
“What are you thinking?” I hear my angel say.
“Nothing, just thinking about how much I love you” I say back and see her blush.
“Do you know how you make me feel every time you blush?” I ask before I can help myself.
“Don’t say that or you’ll make me blush even more” I hear her say while hiding her head in the crook of my neck.
“So what did you have planed for today?” I ask praying that she wont have to leave.
“Umm… I think I’m free “I hear her say and sigh in relief.
“I just have to call Jose, she’s a girl at work, I’ll make sure she opening the Crashdown while mum and dad are gone” I hear her say.
“Ok” I say back while heading to the kitchen to make us some breakfast.
“What about you do you have work?” she asks while sitting in one of the stools near the bench.
“I was supposed to go, but I don’t feel like it” I say because honestly I have other things on my mind, more beautiful things.
“What about your boss won’t he get mad?” she asks in concern.
“I have a feeling he won’t” I say because I am the boss.
“Ok” she says looking at me and grinning from ear to ear.
“So what do you want to do today?” I ask her while braking two eggs and stirring them with my flour ready to make pancakes.
“I just want to stay with you “she says and I feel the happiest I’ve ever been.
I have something I want to ask Liz later today and I hope I don’t forget...
TBC
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MAX P.O.V
We pull apart and I look into her eyes, she is so beautiful I don’t know what I would do if I lost her.
It’s like know that I know what I feel like when I’m with her I know that I want that feeling to last and I never want to return to when I didn’t have her … she’s a part of me and it may seem cheesy cause its only been a while but its true.
“So do you have swimming pool and tennis court?” I hear her ask sarcastically.
“Actually, yes I do” I say and look at the shocked expression on her lips.
I’m glad that she hasn’t asked me how I can afford it all and I don’t want her to get suspicious so I add “I’m a lawyer, we get a lot of money” I try to cover up.
I know that I’m lying but I really like Liz and what would happen if I told her I had money and she ran away scared.
I know she wouldn’t do what my first girlfriend did which was use it to her advantage, and then there was Tess who did the same thing.
Is it so hard to find someone who would love you for you and not for your bank book?
“What are you thinking?” I hear my angel say.
“Nothing, just thinking about how much I love you” I say back and see her blush.
“Do you know how you make me feel every time you blush?” I ask before I can help myself.
“Don’t say that or you’ll make me blush even more” I hear her say while hiding her head in the crook of my neck.
“So what did you have planed for today?” I ask praying that she wont have to leave.
“Umm… I think I’m free “I hear her say and sigh in relief.
“I just have to call Jose, she’s a girl at work, I’ll make sure she opening the Crashdown while mum and dad are gone” I hear her say.
“Ok” I say back while heading to the kitchen to make us some breakfast.
“What about you do you have work?” she asks while sitting in one of the stools near the bench.
“I was supposed to go, but I don’t feel like it” I say because honestly I have other things on my mind, more beautiful things.
“What about your boss won’t he get mad?” she asks in concern.
“I have a feeling he won’t” I say because I am the boss.
“Ok” she says looking at me and grinning from ear to ear.
“So what do you want to do today?” I ask her while braking two eggs and stirring them with my flour ready to make pancakes.
“I just want to stay with you “she says and I feel the happiest I’ve ever been.
I have something I want to ask Liz later today and I hope I don’t forget...
TBC
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CHAPTER 17
LIZ P.O.V
After breakfast Max suggests we go for a swim.
I agree even though I am not the best swim.
I go into the guest bathroom while max goes into the one in his bedroom.
I decide just to wear my bra and panties, since I didn’t bring my costume and I don’t think Max will have anything appropriate.
I walk out of the bathroom and see Max sitting on a stool in the kitchen .
I walk up to him and wrap my arm around his neck.
He looked like he was thinking about something when I came down the stairs but the look disappeared when I wrapped my arms around him.
“You ok?” I ask him as he turns in the stool and looks at me, his lips inches from mine.
“I’m fine” I hear him say and just as I’m about to lean down and kiss him, but I hear him gasp.
“Wow” he says while looking at my outfit.
“I didn’t bring my cozzie” I say and hear him laugh.
But soon all thoughts leave my mind as my eyes begin to travel down his body.
I see his golden chest, and wow does he work out or what.
My eyes begin to wonder even lower and I see him wearing board shorts that start at his hips giving me the best view.
“Not to bad yourself Evans” I ask as I look back at his face to see a proud smile.
“So shall we go?” he asks in a English accent.
“Yes we shall” I as trying to do and accent myself but sounding like a sick dog.
We walk sown to the sliding doors that lead to the outside.
Max pulls them open and waits for me to walk through.
I feel him place his hand on the small of my back and I start to shiver, this guy has a big effect on me.
We walk over to the pool and I see Max jump in.
“Are you gonna join me?” he asks with a raised eyebrow.
“Well, actually I don’t really know how to swim” I say … ok I lied I’m not a bad swimmer, in fact I’m not a swimmer at all.
“Ok well why don’t you step in and I’ll help you out” he says while
swimming to the steps and reaching out his hand to me.
But I don’t move in fact a stay perfectly still.
“Is it cold?” I ask like a 4 year old baby.
“No its very nice actually” I see him say with a small smile.
I take a step back and then I hear Max say.
"Don’t you trust me?”
When I hear the words leave his mouth I take step forward and then another until I’m in front of the pool.
“Now give me your hand, I promise I won’t let go” he says with hopeful eyes.
“Ok, but you better not let go” I say while placing my small fragile hand in his strong masculine one.
As soon as I am in to the water I start to shiver from how cold it is, but Max pulls me to his chest n and I feel warm, again.
His face is close to mine and I resist the erg to kiss him right now, butt I don’t only because we’re in a pool and I don’t feel like drowning right now.
“Wrap your leg around my waist” I hear him say and I look at him.
Is he for real if I do that I don’t know what else I may do.
“Just do it sweetie” I hear him say looking down at me with those cute eyes.
“Ok,” I say as I jump upas he grabs my wist and I quickly wrap my legs around him.
“That wasn’t so hard was it?” I hear him laugh and I want to kiss him so he would shut it.
We start to move to the other end of the pool and I begin to get frightened.
I Don’t want to sound like a scaredy cat but when I was younger we went to the pools for the day.
I was walking with my mum when one of our family friend and her started to talk.
Me being a little 25 year old kid who didn’t listen to a thing, decided it would be fun to run in without mum, even though I didn’t know how to swim that well.
When I click back to reality I see Max looking at me.
“Sweetheart” he says and I nod.
“You said it out aloud” he laughs as he leans in and kisses and stunned me while continuing to swim us down to the deep end of the pool.
We spend a while swimming together and Max says that by the end of the month he thinks I will be a great swimmer.
The only reason I agreed was that that means I’m going to get to see him again.
We take a break and sit and I lay on the lounge chair out side to bake while Max goes inside to make us some lunch.
I see him come out of the house with a tray of food and a serous expression on his face.
“Liz there’s something I want to ask you” he says and I smile and nod my head ready for whatever will come.
TBC...
Hey everyone... thankyou for all the replies and keep the feedback coming!!!
I am not so sure if i should continue with this story ... What do you think ???
LIZ P.O.V
After breakfast Max suggests we go for a swim.
I agree even though I am not the best swim.
I go into the guest bathroom while max goes into the one in his bedroom.
I decide just to wear my bra and panties, since I didn’t bring my costume and I don’t think Max will have anything appropriate.
I walk out of the bathroom and see Max sitting on a stool in the kitchen .
I walk up to him and wrap my arm around his neck.
He looked like he was thinking about something when I came down the stairs but the look disappeared when I wrapped my arms around him.
“You ok?” I ask him as he turns in the stool and looks at me, his lips inches from mine.
“I’m fine” I hear him say and just as I’m about to lean down and kiss him, but I hear him gasp.
“Wow” he says while looking at my outfit.
“I didn’t bring my cozzie” I say and hear him laugh.
But soon all thoughts leave my mind as my eyes begin to travel down his body.
I see his golden chest, and wow does he work out or what.
My eyes begin to wonder even lower and I see him wearing board shorts that start at his hips giving me the best view.
“Not to bad yourself Evans” I ask as I look back at his face to see a proud smile.
“So shall we go?” he asks in a English accent.
“Yes we shall” I as trying to do and accent myself but sounding like a sick dog.
We walk sown to the sliding doors that lead to the outside.
Max pulls them open and waits for me to walk through.
I feel him place his hand on the small of my back and I start to shiver, this guy has a big effect on me.
We walk over to the pool and I see Max jump in.
“Are you gonna join me?” he asks with a raised eyebrow.
“Well, actually I don’t really know how to swim” I say … ok I lied I’m not a bad swimmer, in fact I’m not a swimmer at all.
“Ok well why don’t you step in and I’ll help you out” he says while
swimming to the steps and reaching out his hand to me.
But I don’t move in fact a stay perfectly still.
“Is it cold?” I ask like a 4 year old baby.
“No its very nice actually” I see him say with a small smile.
I take a step back and then I hear Max say.
"Don’t you trust me?”
When I hear the words leave his mouth I take step forward and then another until I’m in front of the pool.
“Now give me your hand, I promise I won’t let go” he says with hopeful eyes.
“Ok, but you better not let go” I say while placing my small fragile hand in his strong masculine one.
As soon as I am in to the water I start to shiver from how cold it is, but Max pulls me to his chest n and I feel warm, again.
His face is close to mine and I resist the erg to kiss him right now, butt I don’t only because we’re in a pool and I don’t feel like drowning right now.
“Wrap your leg around my waist” I hear him say and I look at him.
Is he for real if I do that I don’t know what else I may do.
“Just do it sweetie” I hear him say looking down at me with those cute eyes.
“Ok,” I say as I jump upas he grabs my wist and I quickly wrap my legs around him.
“That wasn’t so hard was it?” I hear him laugh and I want to kiss him so he would shut it.
We start to move to the other end of the pool and I begin to get frightened.
I Don’t want to sound like a scaredy cat but when I was younger we went to the pools for the day.
I was walking with my mum when one of our family friend and her started to talk.
Me being a little 25 year old kid who didn’t listen to a thing, decided it would be fun to run in without mum, even though I didn’t know how to swim that well.
When I click back to reality I see Max looking at me.
“Sweetheart” he says and I nod.
“You said it out aloud” he laughs as he leans in and kisses and stunned me while continuing to swim us down to the deep end of the pool.
We spend a while swimming together and Max says that by the end of the month he thinks I will be a great swimmer.
The only reason I agreed was that that means I’m going to get to see him again.
We take a break and sit and I lay on the lounge chair out side to bake while Max goes inside to make us some lunch.
I see him come out of the house with a tray of food and a serous expression on his face.
“Liz there’s something I want to ask you” he says and I smile and nod my head ready for whatever will come.
TBC...
Hey everyone... thankyou for all the replies and keep the feedback coming!!!
I am not so sure if i should continue with this story ... What do you think ???
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CHAPTER 18 + 19
MAX P.O.V
I look up into her eyes and find the courage to continue.
“Liz we have been seeing each other for a while now, well you know a week or so and we’re pretty close, but I want to make it official” I say, nervous as hell.
“I guess what I’m asking is, will you be my girlfriend?” I ask as I look up at her eyes anxiously.
“Of cause I will” she says and I let out a breath that I didn’t even know I was keeping.
“Great” I say as I lean up and capture he lips in a sweet passionate kiss.
We break apart, what seem like moments later but really was near to an hour.
“We better eat” I say as I hand her a toasted sandwich of the tray.
“It’s probably cold” I add, but she just miles and continues to eat.
“So I guess this makes you my boyfriend, ha?” I hear her ask moments later.
“I guess so” I say while grabbing her hand and bringing it to my lips.
“So when do I get to introduce my wonderful boyfriend to my baby” she says with a mumble.
Did I just hear her right coz I thought she just said that she had a baby.
“What?” I ask dumbfounded.
I don’t want her t get the wrong idea but, she has a child that means responsibility.
“My baby” she says looking at me with a que Ionate look.
“What about right now” I say while getting up.
God I love this girl and if that means I’ll have to take care of her kid then I guess you can call me ‘dada’.
“Right now?” She asks.
“Yes right now” I say grabbing her hand and leading her into the house to get dressed so we could leave.
“Ok” I hear her say cheerfully, while walking to the bathroom to grab her clothes.
I run into my room and grab my pants putting them on in a hurry.
I then run down the stairs and nearly into Liz.
“Max babe” she says and I look at her while buttoning up me shirt.
“Yeah” I say back looking at her amused face.
I don’t believe she thinks this is funny.
“Your pants are on backward” she says while laughing and giggling hysterically.
I go back up stairs to fix myself up, and Liz stays downstairs ready to go.
Once I’m down stairs and ready to go, we leave the house and jump into my SUV ready to go.
I don’t believe I’m in a car right now on my way to go see my girlfriend’s baby…
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MAX P.O.V
I look up into her eyes and find the courage to continue.
“Liz we have been seeing each other for a while now, well you know a week or so and we’re pretty close, but I want to make it official” I say, nervous as hell.
“I guess what I’m asking is, will you be my girlfriend?” I ask as I look up at her eyes anxiously.
“Of cause I will” she says and I let out a breath that I didn’t even know I was keeping.
“Great” I say as I lean up and capture he lips in a sweet passionate kiss.
We break apart, what seem like moments later but really was near to an hour.
“We better eat” I say as I hand her a toasted sandwich of the tray.
“It’s probably cold” I add, but she just miles and continues to eat.
“So I guess this makes you my boyfriend, ha?” I hear her ask moments later.
“I guess so” I say while grabbing her hand and bringing it to my lips.
“So when do I get to introduce my wonderful boyfriend to my baby” she says with a mumble.
Did I just hear her right coz I thought she just said that she had a baby.
“What?” I ask dumbfounded.
I don’t want her t get the wrong idea but, she has a child that means responsibility.
“My baby” she says looking at me with a que Ionate look.
“What about right now” I say while getting up.
God I love this girl and if that means I’ll have to take care of her kid then I guess you can call me ‘dada’.
“Right now?” She asks.
“Yes right now” I say grabbing her hand and leading her into the house to get dressed so we could leave.
“Ok” I hear her say cheerfully, while walking to the bathroom to grab her clothes.
I run into my room and grab my pants putting them on in a hurry.
I then run down the stairs and nearly into Liz.
“Max babe” she says and I look at her while buttoning up me shirt.
“Yeah” I say back looking at her amused face.
I don’t believe she thinks this is funny.
“Your pants are on backward” she says while laughing and giggling hysterically.
I go back up stairs to fix myself up, and Liz stays downstairs ready to go.
Once I’m down stairs and ready to go, we leave the house and jump into my SUV ready to go.
I don’t believe I’m in a car right now on my way to go see my girlfriend’s baby…
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CHAPTER 20
LIZ P.O.V
We pull up in front of the Crashdown just as it is staring to get dark.
I see the look of terror in his eyes and can’t help but smile.
This guy must really like me if his ready to come meet my ‘kid’.
He jumps out of the car and comes around to my side to help me out...
“All ready?” I ask as we begin to walk to the back door of The Crashdown.
I looked while we were driving into the alley and I see that Jose had already come to clean the place up before closing.
So that means its just Max and me…
I grab my key and unlock the door; I open it and move to the side.
I see Max looking down into space and I ask.
“You going to come in?” with a smile.
“Yeah” he says and he looks at me before looking into space again.
“This way,” I say as I lead the way to me bedroom.
I see him look nervous and feel sorry for the guy, so I grab his hand and bring it to my lips like he did to mine earlier to day.
Just then I start to remember today when he asked me to be his girlfriend and I said yes.
I don’t believe he actually thought I would say no.
We walk into my room and I see him loo around.
“Where’s the baby?” he asks with a raised eyebrow.
“Missy” I call out and just then you see my cute little Jack Russel run towards us.
I called him missy and I’ve only had him for a while.
“That’s your baby?” he asks with a smile and I’m glad his not angry.
I nod my head, as I pick up Missy and say.
“Yeah his still a baby” I smile as missy starts to lick me but then I hear Max burst out laughing.
“What’s so funny?” I ask and he just continues to laugh.
“His a boy” he says with a chuckle.
“Yeah” I say back still not understanding.
“You called your boy dog ‘Missy’?” he laughs and I finally understand.
“Yes I did” I say with a pout as he continues to laugh.
As he sees my pout he stops and looks at me.
I place Missy on the floor and he runs around the room hysterically.
“So I guess it’s just you and me” he says and I shake my head.
“No, and Missy” I say as I close the distance between us and our lips touch in a soft kiss.
We continue to kiss until the phone starts to ring and we pull away.
I lay on my bed and Max joins me, by lying on the other side.
“Hello” I say when I grab.
I look over at Max, to see him looking at me with sweet eyes.
“Lizzie… honey I called last night to see how your date was but you didn’t answer, you scared my shitless” I hear my mum say on the other end of the phone.
“Mum I’m kind of busy right n-now” I stutter as I feel Max’s sweet lips on the crook of my neck.
“Honey how did your date go?” she says and I really don’t feel like responding.
“It was great” I say speaking the truth.
“Mum I really got to go, my boyfriends here” I say whispering the last part before clicking the end button, still hearing my mother scream ‘ha-ha boyfriend harray’.
“Your mother sound nice” Max whispers as he pulls away for a quick second before reattaching him self to my collar bone.
“Mhhhhhhhhhh” I moan.
“My mother’s crazy, but my dad is great” I say slowly with my eyes shut
tight as he continues to kiss me.
“Mmmmhhhhhhhhh” he says and I can’t help but pull his head back and attack his lips as I roll us over so I’m on top.
“What about your family?” I ask and I make my way down his neck to his
collar bone.
“My dads a dick but I love my mum and my older sister” he says.
“You have an older sister?” I ask as I look up for a moment.
“Yeah, by like 2 minuets” he says back and I laugh at him.
RING RING
“Nooooooooo” I scream as I hear the phone and slump down on top of Max.
I see him start laughing and give him a death glare.
“Maybe we should go back to my place” he says and I nod eagerly as we get up.
I know from experience that if we stay here all night the phone will be ringing all night.
As we make our way down the steps and out the back door I remember something and ask.
“So you really thought I had a child?” I ask as I look at him and see him squirm.
“Well I guess I did, I mean you made it sound so believable”
“But I never said it was a child” I say and he begins to laugh before turning to me and looking with que Ionate eyes.
“What?” I ask self consciously.
“I was just thinking that’s all” he said and I am determined to know what he is thinking.
“Thinking about what?” I ask.
“Nothing … nothing important” he says as he opens the car and we get in.
He turns on the engine and now I am dieing to know.
“MAXXXX … what were you thinking?” I half scream.
“I was just thinking if you were … you know a- a v-i…” he begins and I finally understand.
“You want to know if I’m a virgin or not” I say with a grin, it’s funny how shy he looks.
“Well yeah but it’s not important” he says.
“I am … a virgin that is” I say and I see him sigh in relief.
“What about you? Are you a virgin Max?” I ask with a smile, already knowing the answer.
“Yes I am” he says and I look at him shocked.
“You are?” I say.
“Yeah” he says stopping at a red light.
“I’m sorry but it’s just that it’s impossible to find a great guy that is pure”
I say as I lean over and kiss his check.
“I’m glad” I add and he smiles.
TBC …
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LIZ P.O.V
We pull up in front of the Crashdown just as it is staring to get dark.
I see the look of terror in his eyes and can’t help but smile.
This guy must really like me if his ready to come meet my ‘kid’.
He jumps out of the car and comes around to my side to help me out...
“All ready?” I ask as we begin to walk to the back door of The Crashdown.
I looked while we were driving into the alley and I see that Jose had already come to clean the place up before closing.
So that means its just Max and me…
I grab my key and unlock the door; I open it and move to the side.
I see Max looking down into space and I ask.
“You going to come in?” with a smile.
“Yeah” he says and he looks at me before looking into space again.
“This way,” I say as I lead the way to me bedroom.
I see him look nervous and feel sorry for the guy, so I grab his hand and bring it to my lips like he did to mine earlier to day.
Just then I start to remember today when he asked me to be his girlfriend and I said yes.
I don’t believe he actually thought I would say no.
We walk into my room and I see him loo around.
“Where’s the baby?” he asks with a raised eyebrow.
“Missy” I call out and just then you see my cute little Jack Russel run towards us.
I called him missy and I’ve only had him for a while.
“That’s your baby?” he asks with a smile and I’m glad his not angry.
I nod my head, as I pick up Missy and say.
“Yeah his still a baby” I smile as missy starts to lick me but then I hear Max burst out laughing.
“What’s so funny?” I ask and he just continues to laugh.
“His a boy” he says with a chuckle.
“Yeah” I say back still not understanding.
“You called your boy dog ‘Missy’?” he laughs and I finally understand.
“Yes I did” I say with a pout as he continues to laugh.
As he sees my pout he stops and looks at me.
I place Missy on the floor and he runs around the room hysterically.
“So I guess it’s just you and me” he says and I shake my head.
“No, and Missy” I say as I close the distance between us and our lips touch in a soft kiss.
We continue to kiss until the phone starts to ring and we pull away.
I lay on my bed and Max joins me, by lying on the other side.
“Hello” I say when I grab.
I look over at Max, to see him looking at me with sweet eyes.
“Lizzie… honey I called last night to see how your date was but you didn’t answer, you scared my shitless” I hear my mum say on the other end of the phone.
“Mum I’m kind of busy right n-now” I stutter as I feel Max’s sweet lips on the crook of my neck.
“Honey how did your date go?” she says and I really don’t feel like responding.
“It was great” I say speaking the truth.
“Mum I really got to go, my boyfriends here” I say whispering the last part before clicking the end button, still hearing my mother scream ‘ha-ha boyfriend harray’.
“Your mother sound nice” Max whispers as he pulls away for a quick second before reattaching him self to my collar bone.
“Mhhhhhhhhhh” I moan.
“My mother’s crazy, but my dad is great” I say slowly with my eyes shut
tight as he continues to kiss me.
“Mmmmhhhhhhhhh” he says and I can’t help but pull his head back and attack his lips as I roll us over so I’m on top.
“What about your family?” I ask and I make my way down his neck to his
collar bone.
“My dads a dick but I love my mum and my older sister” he says.
“You have an older sister?” I ask as I look up for a moment.
“Yeah, by like 2 minuets” he says back and I laugh at him.
RING RING
“Nooooooooo” I scream as I hear the phone and slump down on top of Max.
I see him start laughing and give him a death glare.
“Maybe we should go back to my place” he says and I nod eagerly as we get up.
I know from experience that if we stay here all night the phone will be ringing all night.
As we make our way down the steps and out the back door I remember something and ask.
“So you really thought I had a child?” I ask as I look at him and see him squirm.
“Well I guess I did, I mean you made it sound so believable”
“But I never said it was a child” I say and he begins to laugh before turning to me and looking with que Ionate eyes.
“What?” I ask self consciously.
“I was just thinking that’s all” he said and I am determined to know what he is thinking.
“Thinking about what?” I ask.
“Nothing … nothing important” he says as he opens the car and we get in.
He turns on the engine and now I am dieing to know.
“MAXXXX … what were you thinking?” I half scream.
“I was just thinking if you were … you know a- a v-i…” he begins and I finally understand.
“You want to know if I’m a virgin or not” I say with a grin, it’s funny how shy he looks.
“Well yeah but it’s not important” he says.
“I am … a virgin that is” I say and I see him sigh in relief.
“What about you? Are you a virgin Max?” I ask with a smile, already knowing the answer.
“Yes I am” he says and I look at him shocked.
“You are?” I say.
“Yeah” he says stopping at a red light.
“I’m sorry but it’s just that it’s impossible to find a great guy that is pure”
I say as I lean over and kiss his check.
“I’m glad” I add and he smiles.
TBC …
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