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CHAPTER 21




MAX P.O.V

The car drive home is great.

We talk about are families and careers, of course leaving out the part that I am a millionaire.

I got to learn a lot about my girlfriend … god its good to call her that and to hear her calling me her boyfriend.

She told me how she always wanted to go to university but how she didn’t
continue; it’s a shame because she was so close.

I don’t want to push her but it sounds like there is something she’s not telling me.

I just don’t see what could have happened for her to not want to go and for fill her dream all of a sudden.

I make a note to myself to remember to ask her later.

We pull up to my house and I turn the engine of. We get out of the car and walk up to my 2 storie mansion.

I unlock the door and hold it open for Liz to walk in, after we are in the house I make sure to lock up.

I hand her the bag of clothes I packed for her, and see her look at me with a raised eyebrow.

“What’s this?” she asks, while holding up the bag.

“I packed you some clothes” I say praying that she won’t hate the fact that I was in her closet.

“What do you plan on making me stay?” she asks and I see the twinkle in her eyes.

“Well I was thinking I could keep you prisoner, in my house and never let you out” I say smiling back at her.

I see her take a few steps forward until she is straight in front of me.

“Well, that wouldn’t be so bad would it?” she asks while leaning down to capture my lips.

“No” I say pulling away only to attack her lips again with great force.

“Max?”

“Yeah” I moan as I kiss a trail down her neck.

“Do you want to stay…? I mean did you want me to stay the night here with you?” I hear her say while closing her eyes.

“Yes baby, I want you to stay tonight and tomorrow…forever” I say before I even know that it left my mouth.

“Ok” she moans and I see her eyes darken with desire.

As I look at her eyes dark with passion I know that my eyes are probably just as dark with hunger.

“Liz, we should stop” I say not wanting to force her to do anything she doesn’t want to.

“I know, but I can’t stop Max, I love you” she moans as we continue to kiss each other passionately.

RING RING

“Damn” I swear as I hear the phone ringing.

Who the hell calls at this time?

I pull away from Liz’s side and she goes and sits on the couch.

“Hello” I say with an irritated voice.

“Hey Maxwell”

“Damn it Michael, you really have great timing” I say looking over my shoulder to see Liz smiling and giggling all innocently.

‘That girl is going to be the death of me’ I think.

“I just wanted to call and see how your date was yesterday” I hear
Michael say.

“It was great and it still is great” I say staring at Liz while she watches’s television.

“You mean she’s still there?”

“Why is it so unbelievable that I would have a girl at my house” I think aloud and unfortunately Michael hears.

I hear giggling behind me and turn to see Liz laughing at me.

“So did you bang her?”

“MICHAEL” I shout.

I don’t understand him I mean honestly is that all he thinks about.

“Ok sorry man” he says and I tell him it’s ok.

“So when do I get to meet her?” I hear him ask and start to panic.

“You can’t Michael”

“What, why not?”

“Because you can’t” I say back forcefully.

“You didn’t tell her did you Maxwell? You didn’t tell her about the money?” he said and I feel a sudden rush of guilt.

“No, I didn’t” I say back.

“Well I’ll be over tomorrow at 1 o’clock to meet her and I’m gonna bring the guys” he says and I stare at the phone in shock.

“And don’t worry Maxwell your secret is safe with us” he says before hanging up.

‘God I hope tomorrow goes ok’ I think to myself before turning around and facing Liz.


TBC…


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CHAPTER 22



LIZ P.O.V

Its 12.30 at night and Max and I are still up talking and enjoying each others company.

It’s really great how much you can learn about someone.

Like how I learnt that Max despisers his father not that he tells me why but it must be a good reason.

“I’m going to go put my pj’s on” I tell him before getting up and walking to the nearest bathroom with my tweety bird night dress in hand.

I love his house it is so nice and comfortable and I feel so safe with Max around.

He told me after he finished his phone call that I was going to get to meet his friends and to tell you the truth I’m a bit nervous, I mean what if they don’t like me and tell Max that his making a bad decision.

I finish up in the bathroom and walk back into the living room to find Max in a pair of light blue boxes and a white singlet.

‘He has a great ass’ I think to myself while admiring the look of his ass as he moves to the kitchen to make some hot chocolate.

“Thanks” I hear him say.

“Dame I hate the way that always happens” I say aloud while cursing my mind for playing tricks on me.

“You have a great ass to baby” he says while winking at me.

“So about tomorrow when I meet your friends…umm what are they like?” I ask wanting to know as much as possible.

“Sweetie their great and don’t worry their going to love you” he says sending me a reassuring smile.

“Ok” I say coming to stand beside him.

“Liz there was something I wanted to ask you, but I don’t want you to feel pressured to answer me or anything” he says in a nervous tone.

“Sure you can ask me anything” I say smiling at him and urging him to continue.

“Why didn’t you want to continue school…? I mean it was your dream so why did you not go?” he asks and I start to shake uncontrollably.

“Liz sweetie you don’t have to answer it if you don’t want to” Max says while coming to stand beside me.

He pulls me into a comforting hug and whispers how much he love me.

“I want to tell you” I say looking up at him as tears spilt from my eyes.

“It’s just I’m scared that your going to hate me” I say to him while crying on to his bare shoulder.

“Honey I could never hate you” he says to me while leaning down and kissing me.

“Ok” I say ready to finally tell the first person my big secret…

TBC…



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CHAPTER 23




MAX P.O.V

I’m standing in front of Liz and I grab her hand and walk her to the couch.

I know this is going to be hard for her to say, it’s visible by the way that she is uncontrollably shaking and by the tears spilling out of her eyes.

“I’m here baby” I say while holding her close to me for comfort.

“It was the 2nd last day of school, so I was practically finished and everything. It was just after the 6th period and my homeroom teacher told me that I had to stay back” she begins to say.

I have no clue what going to happen next.

“The bell rang for the end of school and I waved to Maria and told her I would meet her at The Crashdown” she says closing her eyes to stop the tears.

She looks like she re-imagining what’s happening and I start to think that I’m the first person that knows

“After everyone had left my teacher Mr Gham started to talk to me, he was saying how special I was and how I was so special to him” she says.

I have a feeling I know where this is going and begin to feel angry.

“He placed his hand on my knee” she says while placing her own hand where his must have been those 3 years ago.

“But he began to move it up my thigh telling me that if I didn’t do what he said he wanted me to do … which was t-to hav-e sex with hi-m … he saud that he was going to make sure that I would never be accepted into university and that he would make sure that my life was a living hell” she says while crying and I squeeze her tight.

I want to meet this guy but if I do I’ll make sure he never sees the light of day again.

“I couldn’t do it, even if it meant that I had to give up my dreams… I wouldn’t do it. So I ran as fast as I could and never looked back … never went back” I look at the pain in her eyes and feel awful.

“I gave up my dream to stay pure” she says with a shamed look.

I tilt her chin and force her to look at me in the eyes.

“Liz what you did was what anyone would have done, don’t feel ashamed and don’t feel like it’s your fault cause its not” I lean down and capture her lips.

“I love you” she says looking at me straight in the eyes.

“I love you too” I say back.

“Max” she says softly and I look down into her beautiful brown eyes.

“Yeah baby?”

“Let’s go to bed…I’m getting tired” she says and I smile down at her…

TBC…


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CHAPTER 24



LIZ P.O.V

We tuck our selves in bed and get comfortable.

“Goodnight Max” I say.

“Night baby” he replies.

I lean up and give him a kiss mumbling ‘I love you’ sleepily.

The last thing I hear before falling to sleep peacefully is Max whispering.

“I love you too” while wrapping his arms around me…

I wake up the next morning feeling sweet kisses being placed on my neck.

“Mhhhhhhhhhh” I sigh as I roll over to face Max.

“Morning baby” he says while looking at me lovingly.

“Morning” I moan as I arch my back off of the bed to stretch.

“Honey are you trying to kill me?” I hear Max moan and I look down to find our lower bodies together.

“Sorry” I say with a giggle.

“How did you sleep?” I ask wanting to start a conversation.

“Not so good … you know you talk in your sleep” he says and I turn red.

“I do not”

“Do to”

“Do not”

“Yes you do baby, don’t you remember moaning ‘Oh Max’ and ‘Yeah’” he says while grinning.

“Oh my god … I do not believe you just said that” I say hitting his arm lightly.

“Only saying the truth baby” he says still grinning.

“So what time is it?” I ask remembering I have to meet his friends today at 1 pm.

“It’s 9.30 what do you want to do till 1 o’clock” he asks.

“I want to stay with you” I say.

“I know that much baby, remember you are my prisoner and you aren’t going anywhere without me” he says making my blush.

All I can think about is being a real prisoner with handcuffs …

“Sweetie are you thinking again?” I hear Max ask.

“Yeah”

“About what?”

“Handcuffs”

“You do realize your saying this aloud” he asks and I smile.

“Yep … and I wouldn’t have it any other way” I say leaning up and kissing him.

“Why don’t you go have a shower and I’ll make breakfast?” he asks.

“You can cook?” I ask

‘I must have got the jackpot’ I think …aloud.

“Thankyou baby” …

TBC …


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CHAPTER 25




MAX P.O.V

I walk down stairs and start to make breakfast.

I’m no so sure what to make since I don’t really know what Liz likes.

I decide to make us a healthy strawberry shake each … I hope she like it.

“Hey baby” I hear her sweet voice call from the top of the stairs as she makes her way down them.

“Mmmmm that looks delicious” she says while licking her lips and I cant hello but feel a little giddy inside.

“So do you?” I say while leaning down and kissing her sweet lips.

“So what did you plan for today, I mean apart from your friends coming over at 1 and me being totally petrified.” I add.

“well, I was thinking that I could take you shopping and show you off to everyone” I say and I see a sly smile spread across her face and wish she would say her thoughts this time.

You wan to show, me of as your property” she asks and I nod.

Before I know it she’s got her legs wrapped around my waist and her arms around my neck.

I grab her by her waist t make sure she wont slip and I place her on the kitchen counter.

“Well, I want to show you off to” she says and I can’t help but smile.

“So how about you go drink this while I get dress, since you’re all ready dressed and may I add looking beautiful” I as y and I get a sweet kiss in return.

I should learn to say the truth more often if that’s going to be my reward.

But then I don’t think that a kiss will be my reward if I where to tell her truth now.

And to tell you the truth I don’t want to.

Don’t look at me like that … let me explain.

Well since I told Liz I was a normal guy I have actually felt like a normal guy … you see I haven’t gone to work in a while which means that I have seen my father, who might I add likes to show just how rich we are.
Not only that but also since I haven’t been to the offie I haven’t really had any cases which means that I haven’t been in the media.

I walk up stairs and get ready to go.

I decide to wear tight black jeans and a whit long sleeve button up shirt … I roll up my sleeve and go down stair to get Liz and go.

But what I see when I get down stairs is not what I expected.

“Honey hi how are you?” I see Tess … that’s right Tess as in my ex-girlfriend.

I haven’t seen her in a long time and now that I do I thank god that I’m not blind anymore.

“What are you doing here?” I ask as I walk more into to family room to see Liz sitting on the couch frowning.

And I know that can’t be good.

“I came here because we’re getting back together” she says.

Oh my god … she did not just say that … tell me she didn’t say that.

I look back over at Liz and see tears spill from the corners of her eyes.

“Liz” I say as I walk over to her.

“Are you ok?” I ask.

“Who is she Max?” she asks me and I look over at Tess and know that I’m screwed.

“That’s my ex-girlfriend sweetie” I say and she looks at me with a raised eyebrow.

“We broke up about a year ago” I add and I see that she still cant understand why she would come back after all that time/.

But you see like I said before Tess is a money hungry bitch and I’m her target …. Again.

“She cheated on me with my cousin” I say and Liz looks at me and places her hand on my shoulder.

“I’m sorry Max, I shouldn’t have started crying it’s just that...” she starts but she gets interrupted by Tess.

“Who are you and why are you talking to my boyfriend?” Tess asks and I swear if she wasn’t a girl which sometime I think she’s not, I would wipe that smile off of her face.

But the next thing I know Liz gets up and walks towards her.

“Listen bitch … I don’t know you and I don’t want to but if you do not leave this house and stop calling my boyfriend yours, I will not be held responsible for my actions” she says and I can’t believe it.

Damn I love this girl.

I see Tess’s shocked look and then she turns on her heels and leaves.

I walk up to Liz and kiss her as hard as I can.

TBC …



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CHAPTER 26




LIZ P.O.V

Ok so what happened this morning was pretty rough.

I mean I really thought that, that girl was Max’s girlfriend.

But when he told me that she cheated on him and not only that but with his cousin I was just so angry.

After she left we sat down and had a little talk about who she is and what she did, and I understand now why max haters hies father so much.

It’s because his father was pushing him into relationships with people he didn’t wasn’t too be with.

I don’t blame him; I feel the same with my mum.

But it’s not really her fault I just wish that they didn’t have to push me to get married.

“Sweetie are you ok?” Max asks placing his hand on my shoulder.

“Yeah sorry I was thinking” I say.

“Ok”

We’re at the mall and it’s been so fun so far.

We have been going around from shop to shop and suggesting clothes for each other.

I ended up buying a short black skirt that Max said he liked and I new top, only thing is its see through … again one of Max’s favourites.

“You having fun?” he asks and I nod.

I see a group of guys sitting to the side watching people go buy and I grab Max’s hand … coz he makes me feel safe.

“Hey sexy” they start calling out when we walk by and I fel Max tense up.

“You ok?” I ask.

“Did you not hear what they just said?” he asks and I smile while I grab his hand and place it on my lower back.

“Max that happens to everyone, you have to get used to it and remember that I’m yours” I say while leaning in to him.

“I know sweetie and I’m sorry” he says but I can see that it’s still bugging him.

“Do you love me?” I ask him and I see him soften up and raise his hand to my cheek where he places a kiss and says.

“Yes I do”

“Good cause I love you” I say back and I get a smile.

I look back to see the guys still looking at me.

I see max look in their direction too and I know what to do.

“Kiss me” I say.

“What?”

“Kiss me”

“Ok” he says as he leans in and captures my lips in a sweet loving kiss.

He goes to pull away but I grab him around his waist and he stays longer.

I pull away and see the dazed expression on his face and I know that my face is the same.

I look over at the guys to see them stalking off and talking to each other.

“See that wasn’t so hard was it?” I ask.

“It was great” he says and I smile.

We are on our way back to the car.

Its 12 o’clock and we don’t want to be late, even though we have an hour and his house is like…12 minuets away.

I wounder what we can do in the spare time ….

TBC …


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CHAPTER 27




MAX P.O.V

We make it back to the house and I suggest that we watch some television until the guys get here.

I’m still nervous about the guys coming, I mean what happens if they say something…

I sit down on the couch and pull Liz so that she has her head on my chest.

“Did you have fun?” she asks me and I smile down at her.

“Yes I did sweetie” I say back.

“Max, what if they don’t like me?” she asks ands she sounds like a frightened school girl.

“They will baby”

“But if they don’t … would you leave me?” she asks and I’m shocked, I pull her away from me and turn her in my arms so that she is facing me.

“I would never leave you” I say back.

“I don’t want to lose you max” she says and I smile at her.

“I feel the same way baby” I say back.

We sit content in each others arms and before we know it the door bell rings and its 1 o’clock.

I get up to answer it.

“Hey Maxwell” I hear Michael say as he slaps my shoulder and walks in.

I look at the girl he is holding close to him and realise that it’s Liz’s friend Maria.

“Hi, we haven’t met properly I’m Maria” she says and stretches out her hand for me to shake.

I shake her hand.

“Maxie, how ya doing bro?” I hear Jason say.

Jason and I met in college and we have been friends ever since.

“Hey Jas not to bad” I say back.

I look back at Liz to see her with a smile on her face as she meets my friends.

“Buddy, how’s it going?” I hear non- other than my cousin Ted say.

Ted and I are the same age and we’re cousin so you can just imagine the things we did at family gatherings.

“Great man” I say back.

I close the door and turn around to see Liz coming to my side.

“Hey baby” she says and I smile at her.

“Hey sweetie” I say back.

I lean down to kiss her and I hear.

“Hhhhmmm” I turn around to see Jason clearing his throat.

“Guys this is Liz, Liz these are my friends” I say and I see the smile on her face.

“It’s nice to meet you” she says.

“Nice to meet you too sugar” Jason says and she blushes.

“So what are we doing Maxwell?” I hear Michael ask.

“What do you mean?”

“Are we going out?”

“Ummm if you guys want to” I say as I wrap my arms around Liz’s waist.

“I say we go out and eat, and then we’ll go and leave you love birds alone” Tod says and I agree.

“Ok looks like we’re going out” I say …

TBC…




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CHAPTER 28



LIZ P.O.V

We decided to go to this new night club that opened down town, but since it was only 1 o’clock when we left we went by a game arcade and we got to play all different kinds of games.

Then at around 4.30 Max asked me to go for a walk with him and I agreed, because that means alone time…

He asked me if I would stay the night again and of cause I said yes.

It was around 7 o’clock and just getting dark when we left to go to the night club.

It was no problem getting in which surprised me.

“Want to dance?” some guy comes up to me and asks.

Max wraps his arm around me protectively.

“No she’s fine” he says and I smile up at him.

“Thankyou” I say before leaning up and capturing his lips.

“No problem” he sighs back.

“Listen, why don’t we get us a drink and grab a seat” he suggests and I agree.

We all sit down at a table, and I must admit I like this club.

The tables are high and they have these really cool stools to sit on.

Unfortunately I was too small to reach the stool, but the good part is Max lifted me into his arms and on to the chair.

But I would prefer the arms.

“So what are you love birds up to tomorrow?” I hear Ted say.

“Not sure yet” I hear Max‘s reply.

I love being with Max he has this way of making me feel like the only girl in the room.

“I’m gonna go get us a drink” I hear Max say and I nod.
“So chika, what you been up to lately?” Maria asks with a raised eyebrow.

“Nothing” I say not wanting to play 21 questions.

You see Maria has this way of making a simple game of 21 questions, a very hard game of 101 questions.

My attention goes to the other direction were I see a group of guys pointing to us.

“Maria I think we should find the guys” I say while Maria follows my glaze over to the guys who are now on their way over to us.

From my stool which is pretty high, I look over to the bar to see Max and Michael buying us drinks.

“Hey ladies” I hear them say.

There are 4 guys and they look pretty scary if you ask me.

“Want to go back to our place and have some fun” one of them says.

His got short black hair and big blue eyes.

“We’re waiting for our boyfriends” Maria says while smiling politely.

“We weren’t asking” another one says.

This one has long blond hair and it’s in a braid, he has 2 diamond ear rings in one ear and pitch black eyes.

“Yeah come on baby” the guy with the braid says while grabbing my arm and pulling me towards him.

“Ochhh” I scream as I feel the pain in my arm.

That dick head just twisted my arm.

“Hey” I hear and angry voice say, the guy holding me looks behind him and sees Max and he doesn’t look so happy.

“Let her go” he says, and I can hear the roar in his voice.

“Fine” the guy holding my arm says.

He twists it some more until it cracks and throws me at Max.

“Aahh” I scream.

I think that idiot just broke my arm.

The next thing I know Max is a handing me over to Michael who looks at my arm.

I look over at Max to see him punch the guy out, and when I say punch I mean punch.

The guy falls to the floor holding his jaw.

I rush over to Max and grab his hand.

“Are you ok?” I ask looking at his hand.

“I should be asking you that” he says while pulling me into his embrace and caressing my arm.

“Better?” he asks and I nod.

“Much better” I reply.

“Can we go home Max?” I ask not wanting to stay here but wanting to go home and stay in his arms.

“Sure” he says while smiling down at me.

He tells the guys that we’re going and I get to say bye.

The drive home is silent but not uncomfortable.

Once we’re inside I look at Max and smile.

“I love you” I say.

“I love you too baby” he says and I lean up to kiss him.

We continue to kiss and end up on the couch …

It’s different seeing Max at the club all angry and seeing him now, when we’re kissing.

His got a softer side when his with me and I love it.

“Max lets go to bed” I say … but not planing to sleep for a while.

TBC…

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CHAPTER 29



MAX P.O.V

“Max lets go to bed” I hear her say and I’m not sure what she means by it.

“Ok sweetie” I say while pulling away and standing.

“Max, I didn’t mean to sleep”

“Ohh” I say finally understanding what she means.

To tell you the truth I’m jumping for joy inside, but I don’t quit understand why.

“Why?” I say.

“I mean …” I add but she cuts me off.

“What you did for me at the club tonight, it was the sweetest thing anyone has ever done”

“You mean punch a guy in the face or save you from breaking your arm” I ask with a slight smile.

“Both” she says while making her way over to me.

“Well it was my pleasure, I mean after all you are my girlfriend” I say and I see a huge smile brake out onto her face.

“Yes I am” she says and I lean down to capture her lips.

I feel her sigh next to my lips and smile.

I pull away and see her questionait look.

But it soon disappears when I grab her from around the waist and she wraps her legs around me.

I carry her up the stairs, but nearly faint when I feel her attach her lips to the crook of my neck.

“Sweetie we’re not even going to make it to the bedroom” I say.

I hear her giggle and feel my pants tighten.

Once we are in the bed room I place her on the bed and I see her start to unbutton my shirt.

I take the opportunity to do the same as I pull the bottom of her shirt up, revealing her smooth stomach.

“Max” I hear her moan my name, as I kiss a trial up her smooth stomach.

I nearly faint when I notice she’s not wearing a bra.

“You can touch me Max” I hear her say and I look up to see her smiling back at me.

Hey … this is my first time too.

I place my hand on her breast and I see her close her eyes.

She is too beautiful for words.

Before I know it we are both naked and our bodies are touching as we kiss each other passionately.

“Liz are you sure?”

“Yes, are you?”

“Yes”

I hover above her and look into her eyes.

I enter her slowly and I see her close her eyes, I feel her barrier and slow down.

From what Michael told me a girls first time hurts.

I push slightly and hear her cry in pain.

“Did I hurt you? I’m sorry” I say as I begin to pull out.

“No Max don’t keep going” she says as she looks up at me and I wipe the tears from her eyes.

I continue to move in and out of her as she reaches for my lips.

“Faster … Max” she moans.

“Ohh …god” I scream as I feel her tighten.

“Ohhhh Max your so big” I hear her scream louder and it only makes me want her more.

“God … I love you Liz” I scream out as I cum.

“Oh Max … I love you” she screams out as she reaches her climax.

I pass out on top of her but when I gain my energy I roll off pulling her with me.
Her head lies on my chest and I hear her breathing even.

“That was …” she starts but gets lost for words.

“Amazing” I finish for her and she agrees.

“I love you so much Max” she says and I feel my heart grow weak every time she says those words.

I don’t think I will ever get tired of hearing them.

“I love you too Liz” I add.

We make love all night until we pass out in each others arms.

TBC…


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CHAPTER 30

LIZ P.O.V

I wake up in Max’s strong arms and I remember our night of making love.

It was even sweeter than I imagined.

I look up to see Max awake and brushing my hair back behind my ears with his hand.

“Morning sleepyhead” he sighs and I lean up and capture his mouth in a sweet kiss.

“Morning handsom” I reply.

“How are you feeling?” he asks with concern and I smile at the amount of love shining in his eyes.

“Never better” I smile as I look up at him.

“How bout you?” I add looking up at him.

“I feel like I’m in heaven” he says and I blush.

“Are you hungry?” he asks.

“Kind of” I say.

“How about you go have a hot shower and I’ll go make …” he starts to say but I interfere.

“I’m not that hungry, so we can have a shower together” I say and I see him smile.

“Ok baby” he says.

I try to sit up but I feel a pain in between my legs and fall back to the mattress.

“Sweetie, are you ok?” Max asks as he rushes to my side.

“I’m fine, the pain will go away” I say as I smile up at him.

His so cute when his worried.

The next thing I know I’m in his arms and his carrying me to the bathroom.

Once we are inside we decide to have a bath, since his bath is twice the size of mine.

“Your house is beautiful” I say once we are in the bath and comfortable.

“Thanks” he says and I start to doze off.

“It must have been expensive” I say while my eyes shut and a smile spreads across my face.

I feel Max stiffen behind me and straighten up.

“Is everything ok?” I ask.

“Yeah, it’s nothing” he say and I smile at him.

After our bath we dressed each other and made our way down stairs to the kitchen.

RING -RNIG RING -RING

I hear my mobile ringing and rush over to my bag.

“Hello” I say.

“Lizzie, I can’t talk for long but I have to tell you something” I hear my mother shout into the phone.

I swear I can hear her without the phone to my ear.

“Ok, what’s the matter mum?” I ask waiting for her reply.

You see they should be coming back from the family get together sometime today, which will mean that I won’t get to spend as much time with Max… but I still have to tell him.

“Well, we decide to stay a bit longer” she says and I am actually jumping for joy.

“That great, I mean ok” I say and I can’t wipe the smile off of my face.

“Ok well have fun bye” she says and I hang up.

“Your mother, I’m guessing” Max says as I walk into the kitchen again to find him making pancakes.

“Yes” I say and I smile.

“You look extra happy” he says with a raised eyebrow.

“Well, mum and dad were suppose to get back today which meant that I would have to go home, but they are going to stay longer” I reply and I see a smile spread across his face.

“So you can stay longer?” he asks with a hopeful smile and I nod.

“That’s great” he says.

“Ohhhh, but I need to go back home so I can get missy” I say.
I haven’t been home in a while, but I know the Jose has been feeding him.

But to tell you the truth I miss my baby.

“Ok so how about we eat and then we’ll go get a change of clothes and Missy” he asks and I nod ok.

TBC…

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