TAT: In The Beginning (M/L, AU, Mature) (Complete)

Emz80m · Post by **Emz80m** » Sun Jul 09, 2006 6:52 am

I read this from begining to end last night

It was a great story, i liked the way you managed the translations.

I was a little disapointed we didn't fine out what happened to LeeLee though and the tribe.

ruthandnina · Post by **ruthandnina** » Sun Jul 09, 2006 2:07 pm

Debbi

, that was the best ending, you could choose, because now I'm sitting here, while my mind is captured with the magic around Max and Liz or Max and Leelee or Max and….

To write about the inexplicable fascination from the love between two lovers seems to be so easy at first sight, but still so difficult on the second sight. It was a wonderful journey reading this story and I’m looking forward for your next story.

Ruth

BehrObsession · Post by **BehrObsession** » Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:25 am

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I'm looking forward to your future stories.

mareli · Post by **mareli** » Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:34 am

thanx for such a great story! It was really different but really wonderful and I enjoyed these strange pictures of Max and Liz in another time! (You know I love them in every time!

).

Mostly I loved how you ended the story. We really don't know what's happened but I want to imagine that Max found his Leelee and together they had a very long and happy life.

I'm sad about "Aftershock" (I was ready because I just finished to read "Aftermath" and "afterburn" again...

) but if you're going to write another story, I can't complain...

Thanx again

Scottie · Post by **Scottie** » Tue Jul 11, 2006 12:18 pm

First of all - I'm hoping for another chance to party with you too! Tribeca was the ultimate, wasn't it!

I loved the way you ended this. Actually, I'm like you and I loved BOTH endings. I'm a sap for happy endings and usually I hate it when something bad happens to either Max or Liz, but I liked your explanation of setting up the mythology of Max and Liz (LeeLee!) for the TAT stories. That makes all the sadness more bearable. Of course I'd love it too, if their baby was born and many more born in the ensuing years.

And I loved the adorable, dreamy couple at the fireside, finding their own attraction building, that was too cute.

Can't wait for your next fic, for a minute there I was scared to death that you were going to say you weren't going to write Rosfic any more. Thank goodness you are!

valkerie5 · Post by **valkerie5** » Tue Jul 11, 2006 5:55 pm

(sigh) how wonderful............................ What a great ending

At first I must admit I thought "What is going on with this Princess Bride stuff?" Then as I realized who was telling the story and who his audience was my little romantic heart began to beat double time!!!~ LOL!

I think this was great. Leaves me with a sense of hope that even if a story seems to end sadly there is still hope for a happy ending eventually.

Kudos to you!!!

isis7777 · Post by **isis7777** » Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:59 pm

Debbi..........
This story was so Enchanting and Beautiful !
Thanks for sharing one of your stories with us again..the way you write Max and Liz always makes my heart sing!
I can't wait for your new story to start.
KUDOS!!!
ISIS ... Goddess of Max & Liz Luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv'in !!

Leigh · Post by **Leigh** » Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:07 pm

Terrific from beginging to end, both of which were very imanginative. Many TAT stories don't fit into the format very well, but this was perfect. I loved both endings because, either way, Liz and Max will always be together.....

Thanks for another great story!

MamaDee52 · Post by **MamaDee52** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 6:37 am

Simply perfect.

I loved the ending. It was a little melancholy but full of possibilities. My Dreamer heart is soaring! Thanks so much Debbi for another memorable story. You've never disappointed me and I really appreciate all the time and effort you've given to Ros fiction. Looking forward to the next one, as always.

{{{{HUGS}}}} ~ Dee ~

Smac · Post by **Smac** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 9:15 pm

I'm with everyone else here that this was truly a very different, wonderful story. And you wrote it so well with keeping it in the feel of the TAT line. With this last chapter I was like HOLY HELL!!!!!OH NO!!!!! When I read that Max didn't make it in time to save his LeeLee but I loved the way you left the possibility open that he found her and they had many years together, making lots of babies. I love the idea of them making lots of babies in any story.

I so look forward to your next story you have in the works and I can't wait to start reading it!!!!

As always your stories are entertaining and reel me in and this was no exception. I loved the caveman period and I loved what you did with it. Great job as always but I never expect anything less than the best from you!

I hope you are around for years to come still sharing your wonderful gift with us and I look forward to chatting with you again!