Thank you again for the wonderful feedback. I love to hear what you think. I'm not sure if I liked how that chapter turned out but I tried several different ways to do that chapter and this one seemed to be the most believable.
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Chapter 11
Liz and Max are dancing to a slow song and are dancing close. Liz is grinding against Max and they are both starting to get turned on.
"Liz, baby I think if you don't stop we are going to end up getting kicked out." says Max in a husky voice.
"Uh-huh" is all she says as she takes he hands from around his back to put them around his shoulders. She hears him groan from the way that simple move made them become closer together only intensivying the feel of her grinding against him.
"Liz, honey, princess, really I mean it." he moans in her ear only turning her on even more.
"Oh, poor baby, now you know how I feel." she says as she lowers her hands to his cock to feel how hard he is becoming.
"Stop baby I'm begging you." he groans.
"What if I don't want to?" she asks.
"Okay, that's it were leaving." he says as he grabs her hand and pulls her over to the table to get her purse.
"Hey, guys were just gonna go on home now. It's getting a little hot in here." Max tells the rest of the gang as she is getting her purse and jacket.
"Yea, sure thing Maxwell." says Michael with a sly grin on his face. He saw the way the two of them were dancing and he felt slightly jealous that he didn't have that with Maria. Sure he had passion, but not the kind that turns every eye in the room.
"Bye guys. Call ya' tomorrow." says Liz. Then she turns and heads to the door before Max can say anything else.
He quickly turns and watches as he is walking behind her. "I just love the way she shakes her ass when she walks." He says to himself.
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When they get to their apartment. The heat only seems to intensify as they stumble through the door in a lip lock.
Their hands seem to be fondling each other without even thinking. They are so lost in the moment that they don't seem to notice the eyes that are staring at them through the window.
"Oh, Max baby I can't wait baby Please." whines Liz as she is unbuttoning his shirt to pull it down his arms.
"Just a few more minutes." he tells her as he picks her up and carries her to the bed. All the while he is kissing her and touching her in places that he never thought he would touch on her.
"Yes, Max right there. Just like that." She moans.
They are now ripping each other clothes off and trying to get to skin as quickly as possible. In the process Liz is pulling at his shirt and hits herself in the lip. It instantly gets fat.
"Oh, baby are you okay?"asks Max. "Do you need some ice?"
Liz looks up at him and shakes her head no, just before she kisses him with everything she has in her.
That's all it takes for them to go back to ripping clothes and kissing like there is no tomorrow.
"Max, I want you baby, now!" says Liz.
"Just one second" he tells her as he puts a condom on from his wallet.
He lifts her gently and wraps her legs around his waist as he sinks into her wet folds. This earns him a moan. He lays her down on the bed as he goes with her.
"Oh, yes Max, I love the way you love me. You are so thick and you know just what to do."she tells him.
As he is pushing in and out he starts to go deeper and deeper into the space that he gets pulled to everytime he is with her. It's his turn to see flashes this time though.
"Oh, Zan, baby your going to make me cum."
"Yes, Baby let it go. I want to feel your juices on me baby. I need to feel you cumming."
"Oh, Yes!" he hears her scream.
"That's it baby let it go! Oh Yes let it go!"he moans as she is cumming around his hard cock.
"Yeeessss! Oh Zan! Yesssss!"she releases just as he hits his climax and he thrust into her one last time deep as he lets his seed go in her.
Just as the flashes ended they begain and at first he thought he was imagining things until she looked up at him with shock in her eyes.
"What the hell was that?" he asked
"Well, what did you see?" she askes in answer to his question.
"I saw you with someone who looks so much like me we could be twins, only his name was Zan."he says.
"Did it feel like a memory and not a dream?" she asks.
"Yea, it felt like me, like I was the one you were calling Zan."
"Well, then dear I think it is safe to assume you are now having flashes. Welcome to a very exclusive club. We just happen to be the only members so far that I know anything about."says Liz barely able to keep from laughing at the look on Max's face.
"So, that is what it feels like? Wow, now I know why you say it hard to describe." he says looking at her with a new found respect. He never knew that he could feel so much about one person in such a short time.
He kisses her like he has never kissed her before and then he finishes what he started with her the first time. Only this time he concentrates so that he doesn't get "pulled" into that place again. He just wants to enjoy the feel of the woman he loves. He wants to show her how much he really feels for her.
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Isabel is waiting for Alex to open the door and she is looking at him in a new found light. She can't believe that there is someone out there that loves her for who she is and not what she is. It also helps that he is an alien too. She is snapped out of her thoughts when she hears Alex's voice.
"Penny for your thoughts?"he asks.
"Yea, I was just thinking how lucky I am to have a sweet, caring boyfriend like you."she replies.
Alex blushes slightly and leans over to kiss her gently on the forehead.
"I love you Iz, that is enough for me to want to give you the earth and our home planet if I knew where it was." he says causing her to laugh and the last part of his statement.
"That's another thing I love about you Alex. It's that you always know how to make me laugh." she tells him as she walks past him and in to the apartment.
"Well, isn't that what boyfriends are for?"he asks.
She reaches up and grabs his face in both her hands and says"I'll show you what boyfriends are for."
She then kisses him like there is no tomorrow. Just as he thinks he is going to die from lack of oxygen she pulls back.
"Well, then let me show you what girlfriends are for." he says as he quirks an eyebrow at her and nods to the other room.
"She follows his lead and they disappear into the bedroom.
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To All those whom were reading this Please forgive my absence. I am hoping this post will make it up to you all. Thank you so much for the feedback I love it. Now on to the update I have been promising for like forever.
Chapter 12
As Max and Liz are laying in bed, cooling off from yet another night of wonderful love making, Max feels the hairs standing up on his arms. Thinking that it is nothing more than just a cold chill from not having Liz laying on top of him anymore he just pulls the covers up and hold her a little tighter.
"Liz, baby I love you so much." he tells her.
"I love you too."she returns.
"Lets stay like this forever." he continues.
"I wish we could, but I don't think the rest of the world would agree to that." she tells him. "I tell you what though I will stay here like this with you until I have to get up and go to work and then when I get home we can start all over again." "What do you think about that?" She asks.
"That sounds wonderful, amazing and um soooo......good."he says dreamily. At that she gigles.
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Through the window someone is watching them for the third night in a row. This is begining to become a habit and if they aren't careful they are going to get caught.
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It's close to sunrise and Max awakens slightly. He notices that he and Liz are not longer laying tangled in each other and he misses her already. So, he turns over and he wraps his arms around her and the simple touch of her skin and he feel his member starting to get hard.
She stirs slightly as she feels him wrap his arms around her and sighs in her sleep. She is dreaming of this guy who makes her feel like a queen and is the most gentle lover. When she turns over to look into his eyes she sees Max, and knows instantly that it is not a dream. A smile starts to spread and then she leans forward and kisses him sweetly.
He smiles at her kiss and returns it with one that is just as sweet. Not knowing that he is succeeding in making her wet and horney for him with just one kiss.
They continue to kiss like this for what seems like an eternity and Max knows that he won't be able to control himself for much longer. He starts to feel the pull and can't believe that he is laying in bed with such a beautiful woman. He continues to kiss her moving his way from her soft lips to the curve of her jaw slowly making his way down.
The whole time he is doing this he can feel her getting more aroused by the second. He kisses her breast just above her nipple and goes in circles around it teasing her until she is squirming and then he takes her areola in his mouth sucking it gently.
"Mmm Max, that feels so good baby."he hears her moan. Knowing that he is satisfying her makes him that much harder. So, he moves back up and starts kissing her again. This time though he feels it and it is uncontrolable.
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"Zan baby I don't understand. Why can't we? They already know and it's just a matter of time."she says.
"Because I don't want there to be any reason for anyone to contest our marrage."he tells her back.
"Yea,but..."she starts to whine.
"No, and that is it. I will not allow you to ruin your reputation and your family's good name. We have to stop this instant. I wont to be with you just because I'm horny, you know if we do it now that it will mess up everything." He tells her so stearnly that she has no choice but to listen.
"Okay, but be warned that as soon as this wedding is over you are mine and I will not take no for an answer and baby you will be in so much trouble."she tells him as she stomps out the door.
As soon as the door closes another one opens only to reveal the most gorgeous woman in the entire universe.
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As soon as the images begin they are over once again. He snaps his head up to see Liz staring at him with wide eyes.
"What? I mean..Um honey I really think we need to work on the memory thing a little more, cause it seems to me that these images just keep getting stranger by the minute." she tell him.
"Yea, I agree. We also need to figure out a way for us to actually have some romance without them. It kinda puts a damper on the mood." he tells her while he is looking at her with all the love he feels for her in his eyes.
Chapter 12
As Max and Liz are laying in bed, cooling off from yet another night of wonderful love making, Max feels the hairs standing up on his arms. Thinking that it is nothing more than just a cold chill from not having Liz laying on top of him anymore he just pulls the covers up and hold her a little tighter.
"Liz, baby I love you so much." he tells her.
"I love you too."she returns.
"Lets stay like this forever." he continues.
"I wish we could, but I don't think the rest of the world would agree to that." she tells him. "I tell you what though I will stay here like this with you until I have to get up and go to work and then when I get home we can start all over again." "What do you think about that?" She asks.
"That sounds wonderful, amazing and um soooo......good."he says dreamily. At that she gigles.
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Through the window someone is watching them for the third night in a row. This is begining to become a habit and if they aren't careful they are going to get caught.
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It's close to sunrise and Max awakens slightly. He notices that he and Liz are not longer laying tangled in each other and he misses her already. So, he turns over and he wraps his arms around her and the simple touch of her skin and he feel his member starting to get hard.
She stirs slightly as she feels him wrap his arms around her and sighs in her sleep. She is dreaming of this guy who makes her feel like a queen and is the most gentle lover. When she turns over to look into his eyes she sees Max, and knows instantly that it is not a dream. A smile starts to spread and then she leans forward and kisses him sweetly.
He smiles at her kiss and returns it with one that is just as sweet. Not knowing that he is succeeding in making her wet and horney for him with just one kiss.
They continue to kiss like this for what seems like an eternity and Max knows that he won't be able to control himself for much longer. He starts to feel the pull and can't believe that he is laying in bed with such a beautiful woman. He continues to kiss her moving his way from her soft lips to the curve of her jaw slowly making his way down.
The whole time he is doing this he can feel her getting more aroused by the second. He kisses her breast just above her nipple and goes in circles around it teasing her until she is squirming and then he takes her areola in his mouth sucking it gently.
"Mmm Max, that feels so good baby."he hears her moan. Knowing that he is satisfying her makes him that much harder. So, he moves back up and starts kissing her again. This time though he feels it and it is uncontrolable.
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"Zan baby I don't understand. Why can't we? They already know and it's just a matter of time."she says.
"Because I don't want there to be any reason for anyone to contest our marrage."he tells her back.
"Yea,but..."she starts to whine.
"No, and that is it. I will not allow you to ruin your reputation and your family's good name. We have to stop this instant. I wont to be with you just because I'm horny, you know if we do it now that it will mess up everything." He tells her so stearnly that she has no choice but to listen.
"Okay, but be warned that as soon as this wedding is over you are mine and I will not take no for an answer and baby you will be in so much trouble."she tells him as she stomps out the door.
As soon as the door closes another one opens only to reveal the most gorgeous woman in the entire universe.
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As soon as the images begin they are over once again. He snaps his head up to see Liz staring at him with wide eyes.
"What? I mean..Um honey I really think we need to work on the memory thing a little more, cause it seems to me that these images just keep getting stranger by the minute." she tell him.
"Yea, I agree. We also need to figure out a way for us to actually have some romance without them. It kinda puts a damper on the mood." he tells her while he is looking at her with all the love he feels for her in his eyes.
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Now on with the story......
Chapter 13
Alex and Isabel are walking through the courtyard at the local Mall. As they come up to the corner and turn they practically run right into Maria and Michael.
"Hey guys, What are you doing?" asks Maria.
"Oh, you know the usual." says Alex, with a grin on his face.
"What are you two doing tonight?" asks Isabel. She looks at Michael and notices he is lost in thought.
"I'm not sure yet why what did you have in mind?" asks Maria she is now looking in Michael's direction and notices his vacant stare.
"Earth to spaceboy anyone home?" Maria says as she is waving a hand in front of his face.
He snaps back to the present at this and smiles shyly."Sorry guys just saw something really wierd." This causes all of them to turn and look around. None of them seeing anything that caused them any concern.
"What was it Michael?" Alex asks as he is still scanning the crowd.
"I'm not sure exactly, but she looked really familar but strange at the same time. Does that make any sense to you at all?" he says.
"Not really spaceboy are you feeling okay? Maybe I should take you home." Maria says to him as she places her hand on his head to see if he is feeling warm.
"No, Maria I'm fine." he tells her while swatting at her hand on his head.
"Okay, fine then your okay I get it." she says as she turns back to Isabel and Alex.
"So, where were we?" she asks.
"I was just thinking we should get together tonight."says Isabel. "I can call Liz and Max and we call all have diner and then go to the club. "What do you think?" she says as she is looking from person to person waiting for an answer.
"Sure that sounds like fun, what time?" asks Michael.
"Let's say 7:00pm." she replies.
"Great see you then." replies Maria.
"Okay bye guys." says Isabel.
"Bye." says Maria.
"Later Man" says Michael.
"Later Mikey and Maria." says Alex.
Once they walk off Isabel and Alex look at each other.
"That was wierd"they both say at the same time. Which causes them to both start laughing then they walk off holding hands.
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Isabel calls Liz and tells her the plans and asks if she can make it. Liz agrees and hangs up the phone.
"Who was that honey?" asks Max.
"That was Isabel, they want us to meet them and Michael and Maria for diner and dancing.
"I told her we would. I hope that is okay."she replies.
"Sure baby girl whatever you want as long as I get what I want when I get home." He says with an evil grin.
"As long as you promise to be rough and spank me baby." she says giggling. She loves how he talks to her and the way he makes her want to be naughty and a good girl all at the same time. He makes her go weak in the knees.
"I think we better get ready to go it is already 6 and you know how Izzy gets if anybody is late."says Max.
"First one to the shower gets to be in control of the radio."says Liz as she takes off running to the bathroom with Max close on her heels.
Liz makes it to the bathroom first, but Max gets undressed about a half a second before her and starts to get in when he feels her hand reach over and grabs his manhood stopping him dead in his tracks.
"No, fair that's cheating." he starts to complain when she lets him go and jumps in the shower first with a big canary eating grin you would find on sylvester the cat.
"Hey nobody said nothin' bout playing dirty." she tells him as she pulls him into the shower with her and then continues to play with him until she feels him growing hard.
"I guess I can forgive you but you will so pay for it tonight you dirty little girl."he tells her.
She continues to play with him as she reaches up and kisses him on his cheek and then the corner of his mouth and then she kisses him on his lips.
He grabs her face with both hands and kisses her back slipping his tongue into her waiting mouth. He feels her reciprocate the kiss and then he reaches one hand down until he reaches her breast. He palms her breast and then plays with her nipple a little until he hears a moan escape her lips.
"Yes baby, harder." she moans as she pulls out of the kiss to get some much needed air.
"Tell me how you want it babygirl." Max moans back to her.
"Just like that baby not too hard but not too soft."she moans in response.
He keeps doing this with one hand as he reaches the other hand down and puts his fingers into her curls and rubs her bundle of nerves. This gains him a rather healthy moan that causes him to get so hard in her hand that he feels like he is about to explode.
She doesn't know how much more of this she can take so she pulls away and gets down on her knees where she sucks him until she feels a slight pulsing in her mouth then she gets up just as quickly and pushes him against the wall.
"I want you Maxwell Evans right now and it's not nice to keep a girl waiting."She tells him with desire so thick in her voice that she can hardly talk.
At the sound of that he turns her around where her back is to the wall and he thrust into her with one swift movement. He pounds into her until he feels her walls get tight around his shaft and then he reaches between them and rubs her bundle once more till he feels her going over the edge. He hears her scream his name and this causes him to go over the edge about 2 seconds after her.
They stand there panting for a few minutes until he snaps and realizes the whole reason they were in the shower to begin with.
"Um babygirl, you should really do stuff like this when we have more time. Or did you forget that we only had an hour to get ready." he says.
"No, baby I didn't forget I just wanted to give you a taste of what you will get when we get home if you can be a good boy until then." she tells him as she gets the sponge soapy and starts to bathe herself.
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By the time they make it to the prearranged Italian restaurant, they were about 10 minutes late and neither her nor Max really wanted to feel the rath of Izzy so they parked the car and were both walking rather quickly across the parking lot with this car came speeding towards them and just as they were about to step up on the side walk Max saw the car careening towards them.
"Watch out!!!!" he screamed at Liz, as he pushed her toward the restaurant. Luckily they both got out of the way of the car and made it to safety.
What they didn't know was that this little incident was no accident at all.
"Are you okay babygirl?" Max asks her as he looks her over from head to toe.
"Yea, I'm fine, but what the hell was that?" she asks.
"I don't know but why don't you go inside and let everyone know we're here and I will call the police and let them know." he tells her.
"Okay, but don't get on the road and I will be right back."says Liz as she kisses him and heads for the door.
In the meantime, Max is already pulling out his cell phone and calling the police.
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At the table everyone is talking when Liz walks up. Noone notices at first that she is shaking and has tears running down her face, until Michael looks at her.
"Liz? Where is Max? What the hell happened?" Before she could even answer he was up on his feet and headed to the door. This cause everyone to turn and look at her and immediatly the girls were on either side of her leaving Alex to go chase after Michael and find out about Max.
"Liz, chica talk to us. What happened?"asks Maria, as she is handing Liz a napkin and a glass of water.
"I...I almost..got hit...by a...car." she says between sobs.
"What?!!" asks Isabel not believing what she is hearing.
"She said she..." Maria starts to repeat it but Isabel cut her off.
"I heard what she said. I just wanted to make sure I heard her right." snapped Isabel.
"Well, you heard her right so stop being crabby and lets help out our friend." snaps Maria right back.
Liz is too busy crying to say anything to this. The guys come walking back in then and Max immediatly is nealing at her side. He takes her in his arms and is hugging her like there is no tomorrow.
"Shh it's okay now. Your safe babygirl. I would never let anything happen to you." he whispers to her to let her know she is okay.
After she calms down a bit and stops crying he tells her the police need to get a statement from them and are waiting on her outside.
She stands up and they all walk outside together. After the police get id's and statements they tell them they will find out who did this and be in touch. They then tell Max that he was lucky that he had gotten the license plate number or they may not have ever found out who did this.
tbc......
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Now on with the story......
Chapter 13
Alex and Isabel are walking through the courtyard at the local Mall. As they come up to the corner and turn they practically run right into Maria and Michael.
"Hey guys, What are you doing?" asks Maria.
"Oh, you know the usual." says Alex, with a grin on his face.
"What are you two doing tonight?" asks Isabel. She looks at Michael and notices he is lost in thought.
"I'm not sure yet why what did you have in mind?" asks Maria she is now looking in Michael's direction and notices his vacant stare.
"Earth to spaceboy anyone home?" Maria says as she is waving a hand in front of his face.
He snaps back to the present at this and smiles shyly."Sorry guys just saw something really wierd." This causes all of them to turn and look around. None of them seeing anything that caused them any concern.
"What was it Michael?" Alex asks as he is still scanning the crowd.
"I'm not sure exactly, but she looked really familar but strange at the same time. Does that make any sense to you at all?" he says.
"Not really spaceboy are you feeling okay? Maybe I should take you home." Maria says to him as she places her hand on his head to see if he is feeling warm.
"No, Maria I'm fine." he tells her while swatting at her hand on his head.
"Okay, fine then your okay I get it." she says as she turns back to Isabel and Alex.
"So, where were we?" she asks.
"I was just thinking we should get together tonight."says Isabel. "I can call Liz and Max and we call all have diner and then go to the club. "What do you think?" she says as she is looking from person to person waiting for an answer.
"Sure that sounds like fun, what time?" asks Michael.
"Let's say 7:00pm." she replies.
"Great see you then." replies Maria.
"Okay bye guys." says Isabel.
"Bye." says Maria.
"Later Man" says Michael.
"Later Mikey and Maria." says Alex.
Once they walk off Isabel and Alex look at each other.
"That was wierd"they both say at the same time. Which causes them to both start laughing then they walk off holding hands.
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Isabel calls Liz and tells her the plans and asks if she can make it. Liz agrees and hangs up the phone.
"Who was that honey?" asks Max.
"That was Isabel, they want us to meet them and Michael and Maria for diner and dancing.
"I told her we would. I hope that is okay."she replies.
"Sure baby girl whatever you want as long as I get what I want when I get home." He says with an evil grin.
"As long as you promise to be rough and spank me baby." she says giggling. She loves how he talks to her and the way he makes her want to be naughty and a good girl all at the same time. He makes her go weak in the knees.
"I think we better get ready to go it is already 6 and you know how Izzy gets if anybody is late."says Max.
"First one to the shower gets to be in control of the radio."says Liz as she takes off running to the bathroom with Max close on her heels.
Liz makes it to the bathroom first, but Max gets undressed about a half a second before her and starts to get in when he feels her hand reach over and grabs his manhood stopping him dead in his tracks.
"No, fair that's cheating." he starts to complain when she lets him go and jumps in the shower first with a big canary eating grin you would find on sylvester the cat.
"Hey nobody said nothin' bout playing dirty." she tells him as she pulls him into the shower with her and then continues to play with him until she feels him growing hard.
"I guess I can forgive you but you will so pay for it tonight you dirty little girl."he tells her.
She continues to play with him as she reaches up and kisses him on his cheek and then the corner of his mouth and then she kisses him on his lips.
He grabs her face with both hands and kisses her back slipping his tongue into her waiting mouth. He feels her reciprocate the kiss and then he reaches one hand down until he reaches her breast. He palms her breast and then plays with her nipple a little until he hears a moan escape her lips.
"Yes baby, harder." she moans as she pulls out of the kiss to get some much needed air.
"Tell me how you want it babygirl." Max moans back to her.
"Just like that baby not too hard but not too soft."she moans in response.
He keeps doing this with one hand as he reaches the other hand down and puts his fingers into her curls and rubs her bundle of nerves. This gains him a rather healthy moan that causes him to get so hard in her hand that he feels like he is about to explode.
She doesn't know how much more of this she can take so she pulls away and gets down on her knees where she sucks him until she feels a slight pulsing in her mouth then she gets up just as quickly and pushes him against the wall.
"I want you Maxwell Evans right now and it's not nice to keep a girl waiting."She tells him with desire so thick in her voice that she can hardly talk.
At the sound of that he turns her around where her back is to the wall and he thrust into her with one swift movement. He pounds into her until he feels her walls get tight around his shaft and then he reaches between them and rubs her bundle once more till he feels her going over the edge. He hears her scream his name and this causes him to go over the edge about 2 seconds after her.
They stand there panting for a few minutes until he snaps and realizes the whole reason they were in the shower to begin with.
"Um babygirl, you should really do stuff like this when we have more time. Or did you forget that we only had an hour to get ready." he says.
"No, baby I didn't forget I just wanted to give you a taste of what you will get when we get home if you can be a good boy until then." she tells him as she gets the sponge soapy and starts to bathe herself.
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By the time they make it to the prearranged Italian restaurant, they were about 10 minutes late and neither her nor Max really wanted to feel the rath of Izzy so they parked the car and were both walking rather quickly across the parking lot with this car came speeding towards them and just as they were about to step up on the side walk Max saw the car careening towards them.
"Watch out!!!!" he screamed at Liz, as he pushed her toward the restaurant. Luckily they both got out of the way of the car and made it to safety.
What they didn't know was that this little incident was no accident at all.
"Are you okay babygirl?" Max asks her as he looks her over from head to toe.
"Yea, I'm fine, but what the hell was that?" she asks.
"I don't know but why don't you go inside and let everyone know we're here and I will call the police and let them know." he tells her.
"Okay, but don't get on the road and I will be right back."says Liz as she kisses him and heads for the door.
In the meantime, Max is already pulling out his cell phone and calling the police.
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At the table everyone is talking when Liz walks up. Noone notices at first that she is shaking and has tears running down her face, until Michael looks at her.
"Liz? Where is Max? What the hell happened?" Before she could even answer he was up on his feet and headed to the door. This cause everyone to turn and look at her and immediatly the girls were on either side of her leaving Alex to go chase after Michael and find out about Max.
"Liz, chica talk to us. What happened?"asks Maria, as she is handing Liz a napkin and a glass of water.
"I...I almost..got hit...by a...car." she says between sobs.
"What?!!" asks Isabel not believing what she is hearing.
"She said she..." Maria starts to repeat it but Isabel cut her off.
"I heard what she said. I just wanted to make sure I heard her right." snapped Isabel.
"Well, you heard her right so stop being crabby and lets help out our friend." snaps Maria right back.
Liz is too busy crying to say anything to this. The guys come walking back in then and Max immediatly is nealing at her side. He takes her in his arms and is hugging her like there is no tomorrow.
"Shh it's okay now. Your safe babygirl. I would never let anything happen to you." he whispers to her to let her know she is okay.
After she calms down a bit and stops crying he tells her the police need to get a statement from them and are waiting on her outside.
She stands up and they all walk outside together. After the police get id's and statements they tell them they will find out who did this and be in touch. They then tell Max that he was lucky that he had gotten the license plate number or they may not have ever found out who did this.
tbc......
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