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True Love (M/L Adult AU) ch 25 Oct 9th (WIP)

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Title: True Love

Author: Francesca

Rating: Adult

Couple: M/L

Declaimer: I do not own any rights to roswell... The rights to the show belong to Jason Katims, the WB, etc.

Summary: Max is the boss of one of the biggest law firms in Roswell, New Mexico... to everyone who knows him, he has it all... but that all changes when he finds out that his girlfriend Tess Harding has been cheating on him with his co-worker Kyle Valenti... will Max be able to go on with life...??? And what will happen when hires Liz Parker...???






CHAPTER 1


“Morning Mr Evans” Stacy says as her boss Max Evans walks into his office in a rush.

“Morning” he calls behind is back, without turning around.

Max Evans … where to begin.

Max Evans is the boss of one of the biggest and greatest law firms in all of Roswell.

Now Roswell, New Mexico is a reasonable small town, but everyone in the town has heard of Max Evans.

After the death of his father Philip Evans in 2003, Max inherited the business, becoming the boss.

Max has it all a big house, top car, a sweet loving girlfriend who he loves with all his heart. Everything his ever wanted.

But what he didn’t expect was to loose the love.

…The love that he never knew was not true.

“Stacy cancel my 3 o’clock appointments” Max called into his office phone as he stared t a picture of him and his loving girlfriend of 2 years.

Tess Harding.

Tess is beautiful every guys stimulant, with her blond curls and round curves… who wouldn’t want her.

“Of course Mr Evans” Stacy replies.

The picture was taken on Max’s 26th birthday; they went out for a romantic dinner but ended up coming home early, due to a fight over a waitress who was checking Max out.

That was one of the things that they always fought about. Tess was jealous. She did not like any other woman’s eyes landing on Max and if they did then she would accuse Max of flirting with other people.

Max sighed as he slumped back in his chair as stare dreamingly at the picture.

What else could he do, he thinks to himself.

‘The girl is beautiful… but such a pain in the ass’.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


At 3 o’clock Max found himself driving home with the biggest smile plastered over his face.

He was planning on surprising Tess when she came home from visiting her sister-in-law.

He walked to the door of the house that he shared with Tess.

They had moved in together about a year ago, after Tess had a fight with her land lord over not paying the rent in time.

Max had then offered that she stay with him and assured her that she wouldn’t have to pay rent but he had expected her to get a job at least.

Max walks into the house and hears a banging noise coming from up stairs.

“Tess” he calls as he walks to the bottom of the stairs before making his way up to the top, a curious expression marrying his features.

“Tess is that you?” he ask as he walks to the bedroom.He stops dead in his tracks at what he hears next.

“OHH TESS” a male voice shouts.

“KYLEEEE, OHH YEAH” he hears his girlfriend’s voice exclaims in pleasure.

Kyle?

Max’s eyes grow wide as realisation settles in on him Kyle Valenti was one of Max’s co-workers.

Max may be the boss, but Kyle is the son of one of the richest men, known in Roswell, Jim Valenti.

‘If I could fire his ass’ Max thinks as his hands clench and unclench in anger.

He stares at the handle on the door and wonders weather to enter or not to enter.

“HARDER KYLE” she shouts again.

His blood begins to boil and he snaps, opening the door and entering to see Tess and Kyle fly apart.

“Max ummm- what are you doing home, so early” Tess asks while Max just stares on in shock.

They are both under the covers of his bed. The one he brought with his money. The one he had let Tess sleep in for the last year when they had moved in together.

Never had he thought that she would do this to him and it was pretty obvious what she was doing.

“How long- has this been going on?” Max asks a little too calmly.

“Max, I can explain” Tess says as she stands and the blanket covering her naked body falls away, exposing her to both men.

“I just want to know, for how long?” Max asks again lowering his head to avoid looking at her.

Tess is inwardly killing herself, how could she make Max find out.

What would she do now?

Max was her money, now that he found out about her affair he could not leave her or she would be broke.

“19 months” Kyle answers for her while Tess snap’s her head in his direction sending him all kind of death glares.

“What, you wanna keep lying well go ahead. You said you were going to break up with him a year ago anyway” Kyle says as he too gets out of bed and pulls on his clothes before looking to Max.

“I’m sorry Max” he says before stepping out of the room, and leaving.

Tess looks on stunned.

‘I have to do something’ she thinks to herself as she makes her way over to max slowly, and naked.

“Max honey I’m sorry- it won’t happen again” she says as she stares up at him with pleading eyes.

“Tess it’s over” Max says as he finally looks up at her disgusted.

“WHAT?” comes Tess shrilling reply.

“I want you out of my house as soon as possible… I’ll be back by 6 o’clock tomorrow night, I want you out by then” Max says as he turns on his heals and makes his way downstairs, before retrieving his keys and leaving.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


Max walks up to the familiar house and rings the door bell, as he continues to look down shamefully.

“Max” comes Isabel Whitman’s shock reply.

“Hey Iz” he says as he looks up at his sister brokenly.

“Ohh Max” she cries as she holds him close, knowing exactly what has happened to break him so deeply.

“Come on in” Isabel welcomes as she steps aside and Max walks into the living room.

“So it’s over?” she asks, after she talked to Max and they discussed it over some coffee.

“Yeah it’s over” Max replies as he smiles at her reassuringly, but the smile does not reach his eye.

“Max, I’m sorry”

“It’s not your fault. I mean I should have listened to you when you told me she was no good, but I didn’t- it’s my mistake and I deserve this”

“Max no one deserves to be cheated on” Isabel says as she shakes her head.

“Max, there are lots of other girls out there and I’m sure it will be no time, till you find your self falling for one of them” she adds.

“I think I just need a break”

“A break?”

“From dating- relationships” Max explains, staring down at his hands.

“I don’t think I’m ready to have my heart broken again” he adds sadly.

Isabel hated seeing her brother like this, she knew from the moment she laid eyes on Tess Harding that she was no good trash and did not deserve the love of her brother.

“You can stay here with me and Alex tonight” Isabel says as she sends him a small smile at the thought of her husband.

Max smiles, he has never seen his sister happier than when she is with Alex.

Alex and Isabel have been married for 3 years now and were the happiest couple Max had ever laid eyes on.

Max still remembers the first time he met Alex and how nervous he was at meeting his girlfriends family.

“Thanks Iz” Max replies as he smiles at his sister.

‘What a day’

TBC…


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Hey everyone,

I just wanted to say thankyou to all the wonderful people who replied, your feedback means alot to me :), so thankyou to :


veronica: :twisted: Ronald, thankyou for you reply... lol jokes ronnie i'm glad you like the begining of the story and i hope you will continue to read on (P.S. Holidays!! & 3 weeks 2 days till camp! woot woot)

begonia9508: Thankyou for your feedback! the rest of the story is just as interesting :wink:

Cocogurl: I agree, Tess is'nt good enough for Max ... or anyone else for that matter! thanks for you reply :)

Natalie36: bitch = Tess [True!] happiness = Liz [True!] Thanks for your feedback now Me = Happy!

martine: I'm back Yay! well without giving too much away ... they meet at the end of this chapter and begining of the next chapter so read on!!! lol Thanks for your feedback :P

roswell3053: Awww, thanks for your reply i'm glad you think the story looks good... i hope you will continue to read on :)

flyawayraven: Thankyou so much for your feedback, i'm glad you like the story :)

LegalAlien: thankyou for your reply! the answers as to how they meet and why she gets hired are in this chapter, but there are many more questions to be sloved throughout the story :)

roswell4life: LoL Yep now that is one word that sums Tess right up :P Thanks for your feedback and i hope you like this chapter!

tinie38: Thanks for your reply i hope you like the chapter and let me know what you think :)

futuremrsmcdreamy: Thankyou for your feedback i'm glad you liked the first chapter and i hope you like this chapter too :D


Thanks again :D

Francesca ... xOx






CHAPTER 2

MAX P.O.V

I wake up to the sun shining in my eyes and turn to see Isabel’s dog, Millie staring at me with questioning eyes.

I suddenly feel a wave of sadness hit me as I think back to yesterday.

I don’t believe that Tess has been cheating on me- for 19 months and not to mention with none other than Kyle Valenti.

“Hey” I hear Isabel’s voice call as she walks down the stairs followed by Alex.

“Max” Alex greets sympathetically.

“Sorry to hear bout what happened” he says as he picks up his brief case and kisses Isabel’s cheek before turning back to me.

“If there’s anything we can do, just ask” he says as he looks at me expectantly.

“Thanks Alex”

“Bye” he says as he leaves and I watch as Isabel waves to him from the door step.

I continue to watch as I see the sparkle of love shine in her eyes, and I see the happiness in them.

Will I ever find that?

“What’s wrong Max?” I hear Isabel’s concerned voice ask and snap out of my daze to see her watching me closely, from the other couch with Millie lying across her lap.

“I was just thinking”

“About?”

“Love” I state blankly.

“Love?” she asks confused.

“You know I got to think a lot last night and it suddenly flashed to me, that somehow deep inside I knew this was coming” I explain.

“Why?” Isabel asks.

“I don’t think I was truly happy with her, I don’t believe that deep inside I was in love with her” I state.

“But Max you always said you were in love with her” Isabel corrects.

“But that’s not what I’m talking about”

“It’s not?” she questions.

“No” I state with a knowing smile.

“Than what are you talking about?” she asks again with a raised eyebrow and I can understand her confusion I mean right now I’m not really making that much sense.

“True love”


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I walk into my office and collapse into my seat.

It is 9.30 and I am late, but what are they going to do- Fire me? I am the boss after all.

My mind drifts off as I begin to think.

I only hope that by the time I get home tonight Tess and her belongings are all gone.

I know it might seem a little mean and selfish- Wait did I say mean?

Who cheated on whom here?

“Mr Evans?” I hear my sectary, Stacy call and I look up at her.

“Yes, Stacy?” I ask as she continues.

“Umm, Liz Parker is here to see you” she states with a small smile, obviously knowing that something isn’t the same in me.

“Ohh the new employee” I say as I nod.

“Send her right in” I add as I straighten up in my seat and grab her files from my desk, before looking up to meet her.

What my eyes land on next stuns me to the core, WOW!

‘She’s sooo hired!’

TBC…
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Hello hello,

Thankyou to everyone who left feedback, it is greatly appreciated.



LegalAlien: thankyou for your feedback I’m glad you liked the chapter, yep yep Liz is his new employee :D

veronica: LoL I have to agree it does look like Max has his eyes on something a lot better than that ‘cheating slut banger’ [Sums her right up :wink: ] Thankyou for your reply I’m glad that your enjoying the story!

begonia9508: HeHe :lol: well I guess that’s why they say love at first sight … even though it was more like lust at first sight … :roll: thanks for your feedback :D !

tinie38: I’m sure Liz will find a way to keep Max’s mind off of Tess :wink: … thankyou for your feedback I’m glad you liked the chapter :P !

L-J-L 76: LoL, all really good questions and I have all the answers … in the next chapters :wink: thanks for your reply I hope you will continue to read on :)

Blink1lit: I’m back with more, I hope you will like it :D … thanks for your feedback!

Cocogurl: I think so too … :D :D

katydid: True love is what he wants, but he believes he won’t find, [he said it himself “I think I just need a break…From dating- relationships… I don’t think I’m ready to have my heart broken again”]… and they say when you don’t look you find :wink: , thanks for your reply!

ShatteredDreamer: Yeah Kyle didn’t even take into consideration what he did … and I can assure you that we’ll be seeing a lot more of Kyle in the future. To answer you question Liz is the new employee, its her first day at the job and Max is just checking up on her :) , thanks for your feedback!


So I know that I have been slacking off on a lot of my stories recently, so to make up for it I am posting two chapters today! woot woot :P

I hope you all like the next chapters and tell me what you think!

Thanks again … Francesca xOx






CHAPTER 3

MAX P.O.V

“Mr Evans?” I hear my sectary, Stacy call and I look up at her.

“Yes, Stacy?” I ask as she continues.

“Umm, Liz Parker is here to see you” she states with a smile.

“Ohh the new employee” I say as I nod.

“Send her right in” I add as I straighten up in my seat and grab the files from my desk.

I look up and our eyes meet-

WOW!

She’s beautiful.

That’s the first thing I think when I see her, but the thing that draws me in the most is her eyes.

Their so soulful, so-

“Hi Mr Evans, I’m- ” she begins to say but I stretch out my hand welcomingly.

“Liz Parker” I say and she sends me a smile.

“Yes”

“It’s a pleasure to meet you” Liz says as she takes a seat across from me.

“The pleasure is mine” I state with a welcoming smile, while I take in her appearance.

She has the most beautiful chocolate eyes I have ever seen and long brown hair which rests just above her collar, her skin is tanned and she is wearing a short black skirt which is exposing more of her tanned skin into sight.

She is also wearing a baby blue shirt and has left just enough buttons undone.

“So, how do you like the job so far” I find myself asking as she continues to smile.

“It’s really great” she says and I melt when I see the smile she sends me.

I begin to think- Thank god I don’t have a girlfriend anymore or I would actually feel guilty to be feeling this way about another woman.

“And the office?” I ask.

“Great, the view is really-” she says lost for words.

“Great” I finish for her and we share a laugh.

“Yeah” she sighs, as I raise my eyes to find her staring me up and down.

“I’m happy you like it” I say, almost unsure of what else to say. This girl is making my stomach do back flips.

The way she is looking at me right now, it’s sending all kinds of shivers down my spine.

The things I am feeling right now-

“Well, I should probably get back to work, but once again thankyou for everything” she says as she stands, throwing me one of her sexy smiles before walking out.

“Bye” I sigh from my seat as I watch the way her hips sway from side to side as she walks away.

Now that is a Wo-man!.


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CHAPTER 4

LIZ P.O.V

I walk out of his office and let out a breath I didn’t even know I was holding in.

Damn!

My boss is hot.

I smile as I walk to my office, thinking about how he looked and about what I could do the next time I walk into him.

That should be fun- understatement!

I have heard a lot about him, mostly stuff about him and his girlfriend Tess Harding.

It’s a real shame that someone as trashy as Tess can end up with someone as kind and caring as Max, or so I’ve heard he is.

Tess and I go long back! We used to go to High School together.

We were the best of friends until I found her making out with my first boyfriend, Scotty.

She tried to pin it on him, saying that she didn’t want him to touch her and that he was doing it on purpose.

She said that she would never hurt me like that and that me believing that she would do something that awful would show how little faith I had in her.

She told me that I was her best friend and like the idiot I am I believed her, which is until I found her making out with my dad when I turned 21.

How could your best friend even be a friend when they cause your parents to divorce?

-I have no idea.

It not that I felt angry with her- well I did and if I had the chance I would have bashed her face inside out.

Its just that all those years she lied to me and betrayed the trust I had in her over and over again. How could someone be that two-faced?

Like when you’re around them you act normal like nothing has changed between you, but you know that you’ve done something to hurt that person and you don’t tell them even though you have that nagging feeling at the back of your mind screaming ‘say the truth!’.

But knowing Tess she would have felt nothing but pleasure, in knowing that she was hurting and betraying me.

After my parents broke up I stayed with my mum, too disgusted with my dad.

Disgusted that he would even go for a ‘trashy-ho’ like Tess.

She has caused me great pain and I would hate to see her do that to someone else- someone like Max.

I walk into my new office to hear the sound of my office phone ringing from my desk.

I run over and answer it.

“Hello” I say.

“Hey Lizzie” I hear my sister Maria call into the phone excitedly.

“So how is your first day?” she asks.

“It’s really great I just talked to my boss” I say dreamily.

“Wowowo” she says making me stop.

“Did I just hear you right, were you just admiring your boss?” she questions and I know that she’s got a sly grin on her face right now.

“No” I say into the phone as I take a seat in my chair.

“Common Liz, the truth do you have the hots for Max Evans- owner of ‘E. V .A .N .S’” she asks and I just shake my head while thinking to myself.

No.

Maybe?

Kinda?

Sorta…

YES!

“I dunno Maria” I say as I chuckle.

“So why are you calling?” I ask trying to divert the conversation.

“Can’t a girl just call her sister to see how they are?” she asks as if she was insulted.

“No” I state blankly.

“Ok fine” she admits.

“I met this guy and I really, really, really…” she starts to say and I stop her.

“I get the point Maria you really like him” I state.

“Yes, and he asked me out” she says excitedly and I smile.

“That’s great sis, so where do I come in” I ask getting straight to the point, of the matter.

“Well, I didn’t want to go alone so I asked if I could come with my sis and he said ‘sure I’ll bring my friend and they can hook up’, so I’m like ‘yeah that’s cool’- cause I was only thinking about what was best for-” she starts to explain and I once again cut her off.

“What was best for you?” I ask cockily.

“Yes, and I know it was wrong, but I really, really, really…”

“Like him” I sigh.

“Exactly” she says.

“Ok, when is the date” I ask.

“Ohhhh Liz thankyou, thankyou, thankyou- you’re the greatest sister in the whole wide world” she cries and I smile.

“I’m only doing this because, well I guess we all have our chance at finding true love, and if this is yours then I don’t want to be the reason you turn out unhappy” I sigh into the phone.

“Yeah whatever, I love you too- it’s tonight at 8 I’ll pick you up and we’ll meet them at the club” she states bluntly with excitement.

“Club? Wait, what should I wear?” I ask in a hurry trying to get her before she hangs up.

“Something sexy, Bye little sis” she says as she hangs up and I sigh.

“Bye”.

TBC…
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Just a quick thankyou to everyone who posted feedback!

L-J-L 76: I agree 100% Tess is a 'slut and a whore' in this story and i'm glad you picked that up :D, I'm also glad that you liked the chapter and have so many questions and :P ... and i'm sure that there will be many more questions as the story goes on ... but there will be even more answers :D ... thanks for your feedback!

tinie38: I'm glad you liked the last chapter :), Tess is very disgusting and i'm sure 'old habits die hard' ... she will probably be back later on with another nasty plan :twisted:. Thanks for your feedback!

Cocogurl: Well that is what make Liz a bigger person than me too! :wink: , thankyou for youyr feedback... its great to see what you think!

begonia9508: :x i would of too! :P, thanks for your feedback!

Natalie36: LoL yeah Mr Parker is a bit blind!!! Max and Mike ... Maybe yes ... maybe no :wink: thanks for your reply!

martine: Michael might be Max's best friend and the double date might be M/L and M/M ... or maybe not ??? :wink: I know what you mean i would of killed Tess too but thats why Liz is potrayed as the angel and Tess is as an evil bitch :D, Thankyou for your feedback!

angélina: Tess will be re-appearing later on in the story... however she is niot the only person trying to create havoc for M/L ... thankyou for your feedback :)

veronica:
Of course Tess has to sleep with everyone elses boyfriend! ... who else is going to sleep with her about for cheating son of a bitch$!!! :twisted: ... well i do like to keep things interesting :wink:, thanks for your reply!

Thanks again... xOx Francesca




CHAPTER 5


LIZ P.O.V


Its 8 o’clock and I am on my way to the club with Maria.

I guess I am kind of excited to meet the guy that has my sister so nervous over, but at the same time my mind keeps drifting back to Max- I mean Mr Evans and the way he looked today in that suit of his, but mainly the way he would look out of it-

Stop! Bad thoughts Liz, he is your boss and you are his employee

I mean she’s my big sister and she always has everything under control, and now I see her and she is freaking out over some guy.

Ohhhh the things love, do to ya!

“We’re here” Maria announces as she turns to me and smiles.

“You ok?” I ask.

“Yeah, I’m fine it’s just that I -i” she starts to say and I just smile as I grab her hand once we are out of the car and making our way inside.

“Really like him” I finish for her and she nods.

“Yeah” she sighs, love struck!

Once we are inside I follow Maria as she searches for our dates.

“There he is” she says as she pulls my along with her.

Once I am on my feet and we have stopped I look up to see a guy in his late 20’s with spiky brown hair and mischievous eyes.

“Hey Blondie” he says to Maria and I chuckle at the new nick name.

“Hey Spaceboy” she replies flirtatiously.

“This is my little sis, Liz” Maria introduces me.

“Hey, it’s nice to meet you” Spaceboy says as he shakes my hand.

“My names Michael, and my friend is around here somewhere” he says as he looks around the club for my ‘date’.

“Oh, it’s fine I’ll just take a seat somewhere” I say as I go to turn away, not really wanting to have to talk to some guy that cant get his own date.

Trust me; I know all about set-up dates.

After all Maria is my sister and she has tried to set me up with over 50 snotty, geeky, self centred, want to get you in my bed, cocky guys.

“Hey, there is” he says as he point behind me. I turn around while rolling my eyes but freeze at who I see standing in front of me.

“Mr Evans?” I ask shocked.

“Miss Parker”


EARLIER THAT DAY

MAX P.O.V



“Well, I should probably get back to work, but once again thankyou for everything” Liz says as she stands and once again throws me one of her sexy smiles before walking out.

“Bye” I sigh from my seat.

RING RING – RING RING

I hear my phone ring and sigh as I answer it.

“Hello?”

“Hey Maxwell” I hear my best friends voice say from the other end.

“Michael hey” I say.

“Max let me get straight to the point” he says and I bite back a smile.

That’s Michael, no beating in the bushes just straight down to business.

“Ok”

“I need a favour” he states and I chuckle.

“Why else would you be calling, it’s not like you ever call to just see how I am or what is going on in my life” I say jokingly.

“Yeah, whatever- Listen” he says and I roll my eyes.

“Ok, what’s up?” I ask wanting him to go on.

“I asked this girl out and I like really, really think she’s hot and you never know she might be the one and I didn’t want to say no when she asked if she could invite her sister- so I kinda said that I would hook her sister up with you and me ‘n’ her could you know chill” he says all in once and I sigh while leaning back in my chair.

“So, you set me up with your girlfriend’s sister?” I ask, in other words.

“Yeah, but you see she isn’t my girlfriend yet- which is why I need you to do this, I mean I bet her sister is a real knock out” he states and I just laugh at his attitude.

“Ok, I’ll do it” I state.

“What, you will? Why?” he asks shocked and I frown.

“Because everyone deserves a chance at true love and since mine didn’t work out with Tess maybe it’s ok to I don’t know -” I start to say not finding the right words.

“Wait a second, you broke up with Tess?” Michael asks and I hear the shock in his voice.

“Yeah”

“Why?”

“She was cheating on me” I admit shamefully.

“WHAT? That slut, with who?” he asks angrily.

“Kyle” I state blankly.

“Valenti?”

“Yeah”

“Don’t worry about it Maxwell there are plenty of other girls out there better than ‘that slut’- who aren’t just after your money” Michael says and I sigh

“I guess everyone knew except for me, ayy?” I ask then wondering how I could be so blind.

“Yeah” he says openly.

“I guess I just need to move on you know?” I say not finding the exact words I wanted.

“You mean get back out on the field?” Michael asks.

“Yeah I guess” I state.

“Well, I’ll pick you up at 8. We’re going to a club so you know, No suits” he says and I laugh.

“Cya Mikey” I say as I start to hang up.

“Bye”

I guess it’s true, I need to get back out there- I need to date again.

-And I should start with Parker, but I guess I could just keep dreaming for that.

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I'd like to say a quick thankyou to:

martine: hehe, you know me to well! :D

veronica: Well Tess will be back, but not right away... i think we need a little more M/L action (i mean interaction :wink: ) before that!

begonia9508: LoL sorry, this ones a bit longer :P

Natalie36: :D:D

roswell3053: I'm back with more Yay! :) :P

tinie38: Yeah, i guess Max will have another chance after all ... after all her needs to 'get back onto the field!' :wink: LoL

L-J-L 76: Thankyou for your feedback! :) I'm glad you liked it

Cocogurl: Well you won't see Tess again for a long time, but we all know that bitch can't stay away forever ... we just aren't that lucky :x

Thankyou for finding time to post feedback! it is greatly appriciated :)

Francesca ... xOx





CHAPTER 6


MAX P.O.V

“Mr Evans?” I hear her say, and I can hear the shock in her tone.

“Miss Parker” I state as I look at her.

“Well that’s great you know each other” Michael says as he wraps his arm around Maria.

“Yeah umm, Mr Evans is my boss” Liz states as she continues to stare at me shocked.

I look at her and nearly drop the drinks I am carrying when I see what she is wearing-

She has a short denim skirt with a black singlet top, which is ripped in the chest part showing off her hot pink bra, which lies underneath.

“That is Mr Evans?” Maria, who I’m guessing is Liz’s sister asks shocked.

“Yeah” Liz blushes as she lowers her head.

“Well umm, we’ll leave you two alone” Michael says as he grabs Maria’s hand and they walk off onto the dance floor together.

“So this is kinda awkward, ha?” Liz says as she looks at me and I nod shyly as I place the drinks onto the table.

“Yeah, it is” I reply.

“Wait Mr Evans-” Liz starts to say but I cut her off.

“Call me Max” I say and she smiles.

“Only if you call me Liz” she replies and I grin, Ohh she’s cute!

“I will”

“So- Max, I thought you had a girlfriend?” Liz asks clearly confused and I sigh.

“Yeah, I did but we broke up recently” I state.

“Ohh, I’m sorry” Liz says apologetically.

“Its fine” I say as I look at her to see her looking at me strangely.

“What?”

“It’s just that I’m happy for you” she states and, now I am the one looking at her strangely.

“Why?”

“I used to know Tess” she says as she looks down at her hands while she takes a seat.

“You did?” I asked wanting to know more.

“Yeah”

From the tone of her voice and her sudden stiffness, it is clear that Liz’s feelings for Tess are quiet the same as mine.

Hatred, anger… betrayal.

“Obviously you don’t like her, so what happened?” I ask as I look at her and I watch as she tries to deny it but finally agrees.

“Well we were best friends” she says and I look up shocked.

Liz and Tess? best friends? Never in a million years would have I thought that was possible.

They are way too different.

Liz is the working kinda girl, the one that wants a family or that’s what I think anyway.

Tess is a non-working kinda girl- the one that wants money and thinks that she is a gift from god to all men and only wants what is best for her.

“Really?” I ask.

“Yeah, well we were until I saw her making-out with my boyfriend back in year 11, she said that it wasn’t what it looked like and that he had come onto her and she was trying to push him off” she explains and I nod before asking.

“Did you believe her?”

“Yeah, I thought she was my best friend” she says sadly and I sigh, knowing and now seeing the way Tess has not only hurt me but others too.

“What happened next?” I ask curiously.

I see the pain flash across her face as she looks down again, shamefully.

“I walked in on her and my father” she says blankly.

“What?” I ask stunned.

“After that my parents divorced and I know its wrong but I kind of hold her responsible” she adds.

I feel my heart grow sore as I look at Liz.

She has been in so much pain in her life because of Tess and in all this time I could not realise that Tess was bad for me.

“I’m sorry” I say.

“It’s ok” she says as she sends me a small smile. “You didn’t do anything” she adds with a small giggle, trying to lighten the mood.

“So how did she hurt you?” She asks and I chuckle.

“Am I that obvious?” I ask.

“Yeah, you kinda are” she replies and I smile up at her.

“She cheated on me- for 19 months- with one of my co-workers” I state.

“I’m soo sorry” she says as she reaches out and places her hand on top of mine, and I smile.

As I look down at our hand I grin before replying.

“At least this way I will have a chance for true love”.

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Hey! i just wanted to leave a quick thankyou note to all the people who left feedback! I'm so glad taht you are liking the story and i hope you like the next part to.

veronica: Thankyou for your feedback! P.S. camp this week :D

LegalAlien: I'm glad you liked the chapter :P, thankyou so much for your feedback!

ShatteredDreamer: Yes i'm sure as the story goes on they will have a lot more in common than they both thought they might of... thanks for your feedback! :)

Natalie36: Possibly :D, thanks for your reply!

tinie38: They are opening up to each other and thats suprisingly fast considering that this is still the first day that they met, thanks for your reply!

L-J-L 76: As the story continues you will see what will happen with the whole Tess situation and the whole Tess and Jeff situation aswell. I'm glad you have so many questions and i'm also glad that i will be able to answer them in the next few chapters :P

begonia9508: well you know Tess, she's one sick bitch :twisted: ... thanks for your feedback!

roswell3053: It might lead to something more or maybe not ... :wink:, this chapter has some of the clues as to what will happen between their growing 'friendship/relationship' thanks for your feedback, i'm glad you liked the chapter!

martine: Of course i won't diprive you of some good M/L moments I'm not that slack :twisted: and as for Tess she wont try anything too bad... but- well i'm not going to go there just yet, but lets just say that someone else is going to have a regular occurance in the folling few chapters ... (not yet) P.S. the next part is loooongerrrrr this was just a quick update :) Thanks for your feedback!

Thanks again! ... xOx






CHAPTER 7

LIZ P.O.V

“At least this way I will have a chance for true love” Max sighs.

Did he just say that?

Is he for real?

I stare at him admiringly and I see him blush before he asks.

“What?”

“Not once in my life have I met a man who actually believes in love- who actually believes that maybe there is someone out there for all of us and we will get our chance to meet them” I state passionately.

I always believed that there was someone else out that for everyone and that if you haven’t met them yet you would get a chance to later on.

When I was little my grandma used to tell me about how her and my grandpa had met and how she knew at that moment that he was the one for her.

She told me about soul mates and how someday she was sure that I would meet mine.

I just never actually thought that someone like Max Evans would think that way too.

“Some guys aren’t just after sex, some want the whole shebang, you know the house, the car, the wife and the kids” he says and I nod.

“That sounds a lot like me” I say.

“Well if you want it Liz then I’m sure you’ll have it one day, you’ll find prince charming and he’ll come and sweep you off your feet” Max adds with a smile and I sigh inwardly as I look at him.

Why can’t he be prince charming?

Ummm, because he’s my boss!

DUMB ASS!!!

“And you, don’t give up because you’re an attractive guy, you could get a girl at a click of the fingers” I say truthfully as I look at him.

I see him stare back at me and my breathing get caught in my throat as I think of how soft his lips must be, and how sweet his tongue might taste.

“What about you Liz, could I have you at a click of the fingers?” he asks and I stare up at him shocked.

Ummm, did he just say that? I think he was thinking aloud? He couldn’t of! I mean- god look at those eyes!

He did not just ask me that. Tell me he didn’t!

He did-

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Hey everyone!

Addicted2AmberEyes:
LoL! i think she has to recover from her shock before she can answer :lol:

begonia9508: I agree that does put her in a difficult position, but if Max is the man we all dream about then we can expect him not to fire her for her decision but to respect it.

martine: Ok so after this chapter things might look a little down for M/L but dont worry i wouldnt do that to you :P thanks for your feedback :D

Cocogurl: LoL sometimes it is good when your lips start talking and your mind has no idea, it gets out all the things that you know you wouldn't really have the guts to say :)

Natalie36: Yep! :D

L-J-L 76: i have a feeling Max and Liz have already fallen for each other, even if it has been less than 24 hours, the question is ... will they act on their feelings?

ShatteredDreamer: LoL i know i would say "hell yeah", not so sure about Liz though ... :roll:

veronica: LoL i dunno ;) you'll have to read on. There will be chemistry at work but its nothing they can't handle ... it's not like Max can get fired hehehe, and if he fires Liz that will raise suspicion because of the feelings they shared :?:

angélina: I'm back YaY! and i have Liz's answer :P

roswell3053: i agree its like they say, you can't help who you fall in love with and i think that its always better to give it a go than to take a step back and to keep thinking about what 'could have been'

Thankyou to everyone who posted feedback, i reallyu appriciate it :) i hope you all enjoy the next part and i will be back as soon as possible!




CHAPTER 8

MAX P.O.V

“And you, don’t give up because you’re an attractive guy, you could get a girl at a click of the fingers” she says as she stare me in the eyes.

I stare back at her and a moment later I find myself asking.

“What about you Liz, could I have you at a click of the fingers?”

I see the shock plastered over her face and I feel my heart clench.

YOU IDIOT!

Since when have I ever been that bold? What a time to finally step out from behind the tree.

“Yes”

“What?” I ask as I look up at her.

Am I hearing things or did Liz Parker, my new, sexy employee just say that I could have her?

Does that mean she’s attracted to me?

“I s-said y-yes” she replies and I watch as she blushes, embarrassed.

God she looks so adorable when she’s shy.

“Really?” I ask just to be sure that I’m not hearing things.

“Yes, really” she giggles out nervously.

“Would you want a girl like me at the click of your fingers?” she then asks and I look at her as if she has grown two heads.

“Of course I do”

We laugh, both embarrassed and unsure of what else we can do.

I mean we just met earlier today and now we are both admitting to our attractions for each other.

Is that to fast?

I mean does it really matter if we just met? Should it matter?

“Do you want to dance?” I find myself asking her and I watch as a smile spreads across her face.

“I would love to” she says as she welcomely takes my hand, which I offered.

We walk onto the dance floor just as one of the fast songs finished, and a slow song started…

Damn! That DJ and his bad timing.

I swear by the moon and the stars in the sky
and I swear like the shadow that's by your side

The song starts to play and I look at, just as Liz looks at me and we stand in awkward silence.

I place my hand on her hip as I pull her slightly to me and she leans into me while wrapping her arms around my neck.

I see the questions in your eyes
I know what's weighing on your mind
You can be sure I know my part
Cause I stand beside you through the years
You'll only cry those happy tears
And though I make mistakes
I'll never break your heart


We sway together to the music, my hand resting below her waist and the other wrapped protectively around her.

And I swear by the moon
And the stars in the sky I'll be there
I swear like the shadow that's by your side I'll be there
For better or worse
Till death do us part
I'll love you with every beat of my heart
And I swear


I stiffen when I feel Liz lay her head on my shoulder and sigh, she is so beautiful and I am so glad that I decided to hire her.

You see one of the girls at the office had just quit and with so little time to do the searching myself I left it all up to my faithful assistants at the firm. They held the interviews and chose based on who they all thought would do a great job and I gave the ok.

Ok, bad time to be thinking about work when you have a beautiful girl swaying in your arms.

I'll give you every thing I can
I'll build your dreams with these two hands
We'll hang some memories on the wall
And when (and when) just the two of us are there
You won't have to ask if I still care
Cause as the time turns the page
My love won't age at all


“Max” I hear her sigh as she slowly pushes away from me so that she can look into my eyes and I reply.

“Yeah?”

And I swear (I swear) by the moon
And the stars in the sky I'll be there (I'll be there)
I swear (and I swear) like the shadow that's by your side
I'll be there (I'll be there)


“I like you” she says as if it is wrong and I stare at her before replying.

“I like you too”

And its true, never before have I told a girl on the first date let alone the first day that I know her, that I liked her.

Firstly because I would never fall for someone I barely know and secondly because I’d never be so bold and lastly… because I’ve never had the chance. All this time I’ve either been wrapped up in work or had Tess.

I thoughts she was the one. I thoughts that maybe I could stop searching for my other half and live out the rest of my dreams, but I was wrong and I know now that she was never my other half and that I had convinced myself that she was so that I could get on with other stuff.

If this had not happened then I would still be with her and she would be betraying me and I would be pretending I was happy. The sad thing though would be that I would actually think that I was happy.

For better or worse
Till death do us part
I'll love you with every beat of my heart
And I swear


You see all you need is to have your girlfriend cheat on you to snap out of it and for another door to open as one closes. Another door with new opportunities- with a new adventure and with a new ending which you can decide on.

“No, you see that’s the thing” she says as she shakes her head and places her hands on my shoulders, slowly pushing me away.

“What thing?” I ask confused.

“You like me because you just came out of a relationship where your heart is broken, so you’re only looking for reassurance and then you’ll be gone”

And I swear (I swear) by the moon
And the stars in the sky I'll be there (I'll be there)
I swear (and I swear) like the shadow that's by your side
I'll be there (I'll be there)


“No” I deny as we stop our dancing and stand on the dance floor, the music forgotten.

“Yes Max, you’re my boss and I felt something for you today at work and now that we were set up for a date, I am seeing the real you and I am feeling them again- but I can’t feel them because it is wrong”

“Why is it wrong?”

“Because, we just met and you’re my boss” she states as if it is obvious.

I pull Liz to me and look down at her, our mouths only millimetres apart, I feel the adrenaline rushing through my veins giving me the balls to speak my mind.

“Who cares if I’m your boss and who cares if we just met? I like you because of the way you make me feel and the things that I am feeling for you. Not because I am feeling lonely- but because I am feeling something that I haven’t felt for a long time, something that I thought didn’t exist anymore”

“And what’s that, Max?” she asks curiously

“Hope”

“Hope?” she asks in confusion.

“Hope that maybe you feel the same things for me that I feel for you” I say.

“I do- but I’m not going to do this, I don’t believe in love at first sight” she admits as she looks deeply in my eyes.

Love?

“I like you, but you’re my boss, and I’m a professional”

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Thankyou to everyone for your feedback! I know that at the moment it does seem like Liz has 'been hit with a stupid stick' and is acting like a 'very dumb girl' but things can only get better - right?

Some of you say that you can understand where Liz is comeing from and so do i. It would be hard to start your first day on the job and already feel insecure thinking that if you have a relationship with your boss and something goes wrong then thats the end of the relationship and the job. And its not like you can turn around an say 'hey, well his a nice guy i'm sure he wouldn't do that', but Liz just met him so she doesnt know him to well.

Anyway i hope you all enjoy the chapter and let me know what you think! ... Francesca XoX





CHAPTER 9

MAX P.O.V

It’s been a week since our ‘set-up date’ at the club and Liz has tried her very best to avoid me all week, with great success.

I haven’t seen her at all but I do know that she has been showing up for work everyday.

I just wish things had gone differently that night, I wish that she could have seen that I liked her because of the chemistry and not because of my loss.

Maybe then she would have stayed and really seen how I felt and feel and just maybe she wouldn’t be avoiding me, and running away from our growing feelings.

Now if you think guys don’t think like this, think again.

We guys are probably more sensitive than girls when it comes to our hearts.

After what happened on the dance floor Liz left and I searched for her everywhere until Maria had told me that she had went home.

I left soon after that and returned back to my house to find that Tess and her things were gone.

Now that’s all good right?

Wrong.

Someone needs to teach her a lesson about what is mine and what is hers.

Apparently Tess thought that the sofa, television, table and bed were also hers, so she decided to take them along with her- somehow.

I don’t really care about the bed, due to the fact that I could never sleep in it again knowing that she was fucking Kyle in it.

Then again I still had been sleeping in it for the last 19 months that she had most probably been fucking him in it, without the knowledge of it or else I would have burnt it.

But the television, my brand new plasma screen television which cost me a fortune, yes that was mine.

And it’s not as if I can find her and take them back, no.

Because that would involve seeing her again, and that is a no, no.

“Mr Evans” I hear Stacy say as she knocks on my door.

“Come in” I say loud enough for her to hear and watch as she opens the door and smiles at me before saying.

“Miss Parker is here, and she would like to see you” Stacy then says and I drop the file which I am currently going through.

“Send her right in” I say anxious.

“Will do” she says as she leaves and moments later Liz walks in.

I watch as she comes to the front of my desk and takes a seat, while staring down at the ground and avoiding our eyes.

“Hey” she says as she looks up slowly.

“Good morning Miss Parker” I say professionally, and I watch as she closes her eyes in pain.

“This was a mistake, I’ll just go” she says as she stands up prepared to leave.

“No, wait” I call as she starts to leave.

She turns around and I see the tears that sting her eyes.

“Hey, I’m sorry- I’m a dick” I say as I walk to her and pull her into my arms tightly, not wanting this moment to end.

I hear a sob escape from her lips and I pull her to me tighter for comfort.

“Liz, I’m sorry” I begin to whisper in her ear repeatedly.

“Max, I really do like you and it’s been hard avoiding you it’s just I don’t want to be used because Tess left you broken hearted and that was kind of how I felt that night- I’m sorry” she says as she looks up at me tearfully.

“It’s ok, I understand” I state.

“I don’t want to have a relationship with you just yet, because I don’t want my job to be awkward, and I’m afraid that it would be” she adds and I nod.

“I do like you Max: she says as she stares deep into my eyes.

“I do” she adds.

“I like you too and you will never be used as Tess’s second best, not to me” I say as I hold her close.

“Thankyou, for listening” she says as she pulls away and I smile at her.

“No problem, I hope it’s less awkward now” I say and she nods in agreement.

“Me too” she agrees.

“So you better get back to work” I say as I pull away from her and she nods, as she begins to make her way to the door.

“Yeah, thanks Max” she says as she walks out and closes the door behind her.

Once I am sure that she is gone I finally sigh and throw the first thing that is in my hand across the room instantly smashing it to pieces.

She doesn’t want a relationship with me- because I’m her boss.

There would be plenty of women in this office that want me and want a relationship with me.

Why not her?

The only one that in my eyes matters.

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Thankyou to: madroswellfan, veronica, Cocogurl, roswell3053, martine, Natalie36, begonia9508. I hope you all enjoy this chapter :)

CHAPTER 10


LIZ P.O.V

It’s been 2 weeks since I went to Max and confessed why I couldn’t have a relationship with him.

And during those two weeks I realised just how wrong I might have been to think that me having a relationship with my boss might affect my job.

But you have to understand where I am coming from.

I was feeling things for him that I had never felt for anyone, ever before and that’s not what scared me the most either.

What scared me the most was that I had just met him.

I was falling for someone that I hardly knew anything about.

I mean the only things I knew about him were things that I had heard about him from other people but how can you judge someone on someone else’s portrayal of them

I’ve been working here at E.V.A.N.S. for 3 weeks now and one thing that I have noticed is how every female employee throws themselves at Max.

Yet, I feel as if, if I do it might interfere with my job.

Will I still have one if something goes wrong and we separate or break up?

I know that I probably hurt Max a lot when I told him I didn’t want to have a relationship with him.

But it was the only way I could make him forget it.

Forget me.

If he thought I wasn’t interested then he wouldn’t be, right?

I walk into the elevator as I wait patiently for the doors to close; I press my floor and continue to wait.

Just as the doors are about to close a hand stops them and I watch as Max walk in with a load of files in his arms.

“Hey” I say as I look at him in amusement.

“What floor?” I ask, since he’s hands are full, I guess it is the only fair thing to do.

“Eight, please” he says as he smiles at me from over the files

The doors close and it is only Max and I in the lift and I admit it is a bit nerve raking.

I look over at Max who is trying to manage all the files at once and I offer to help.

“Need a hand?”

“No, I’m fine” he says as he turns to me, but as he turns the files fall and are scattered all over the floor.

“Damn” he curses.

“Here, let me help” I say as I squat down and begin picking up some files.

One of the folders are open and I see a telephone number with writing next to it and can’t help but read it.

‘Hey sexy,

Call me when you get the time and remember you can visit anytime…

Love Sonia’

Names, messages, with the telephone number next to it.

I look and see that there are many more papers with numbers on them, from girls around the office who apparently love Max.

“You sure do get a lot of love letters” I mutter under my breath not expecting him to hear but he does.

“Yeah, but I never feel anything for them, funny how you were a first and probably a last for in the work place” he replies cocky.

“So what if I wanted to keep my legs closed, I’m not like the rest of the tarts in this place” I spit out before I can help myself.

“No wonder why I liked you”

“Liked?”

“Yeah, past tense- I don’t feel anything anymore due to the fact that I don’t want you to risk loosing your job, you know the boss might find out” he adds and I feel my blood boil.

But not with anger, but passion

Call me crazy but a girl can only hold back for so long before-

Before I know what I am doing I press the emergency stop button and press my lips to Max’s passionately, plunging my tongue into his mouth as he kiss’s me back with just as much desire.

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Yay! tomorrow is the last day of school for this year! wooohooo! :P:P:P


CHAPTER 11


MAX P.O.V

“You sure do get a lot of love letters” I hear Liz mutter under her breath, thinking that I have not heard.

“Yeah, but I never feel anything for them, funny how you were a first and probably a last for in the work place” I reply, intending on hitting a nerve.

“So what if I wanted to keep my legs closed, I’m not like the rest of the tarts in this place” she spits out catching me off guard.

“No wonder why I liked you” I say, using pass tense on purpose.

If she wants to have no relationship then I can’t have any feelings, am I right?

“Liked?”

“Yeah, past tense I don’t feel anything anymore due to the fact that I don’t want you to risk loosing your job- you know the boss might find out” I say acting like a total dickhead and loving every minute of it.

I watch as she begins to breathe heavily and I roll my eyes, imagining that she is boiling with anger.

I watch on in shock as she presses the emergency stop button and flings herself into my arms before sealing our lips together.

I react by sliding my arms around her waist and lifting her trim body so she is able to wrap her tanned legs around my waist.

“Ohh Max” she moans as I press her against the wall of the elevator while lifting her skirt with one hand.

“So you do still like me” I say with a sly grin and she playfully smacks my shoulder.

“I do, do you?” she asks as she pulls away to look into my eyes in question.

“Yes, yes I do beautiful” I reply as I kiss a trail down her neck.

“More” she moans and I look up to see the passion in her eyes.

“No, we can’t not here” I say as I kiss her lips one last time before lowering her legs to the floor and once again picking up the files.

“What? Why?” she asks confused and I smile at her.

She is leaning against the wall of the elevator trying to hold her balance; my guess is that her legs are weak.

Oh, she wants me bad!

What? I’m a guy!

“I’m not going to let our first time together be in a lift” I state and she lets out a breathe of relief.

“I thought you didn’t want me there for a minute” she says as she looks at me with a smile.

“Never going to happen” I say as I kiss her once again before straightening out our appearances and pressing the button to start the elevator again.

Once the doors open we step out as others step in and Liz helps me carry the files to my office.

“So umm-” she says lost for words as she fidgets.

“I want to take you out” I state confidently.

“You mean on a date?” she asks with a smirk.

“Yes on a date-” I say as I chuckle at her as I walk towards her and I wrap my arms around her waist.

“Tonight at 7” I say and she nods as she leans up on her tip toes to kiss me goodbye, before strutting out of my office sexily.

Yes!

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