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I have to say that at first I didn't want to post today, but I'm going to have a few busy days, so I just decided to not postpone it otherwise you would have to wait long.
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Chapter Five.d
Just as he was ready to leave the Crash, Max remembered he had to talk with Isabel. He knew he hadn't time since he had been there for more than an hour now and he had yet to go back to his house, shower and change, and he was sure Mickael was going to kill him when he would be back, but he had to let Isabel know he needed to talk to her.
"Hey, Iz!"
"Max…. how is it going?…. Anything new? " she asked immediately, though she knew her brother wouldn't be there if anything had happened.
"No… not yet…. Uh…. look Iz…. Could we talk later…. or tomorrow if I can't see you again tonight?"
"Yeah, sure Max…. but about what? Did something happen?" she asked him, not knowing what Max wanted to talk about with her. But what she knew was that it should be important for Max otherwise he wouldn't plan their talk.
"About Tess…" he replied "…… Mickael told me something happened between Liz and her, and that Liz left crying."
"Oh… about that! …… I understand… but well…. there is not much to say…. You know what she said, no? "
"Yeah…. Uh, no!" he corrected quickly when he remembered that since Mickael hadn't heard what had been said he wasn't supposed to know yet himself. " But look Isabel… I… I don't have time to talk about that right now….. but maybe later, okay."
"Yes… I will be there until Liz and Maria finish… and then I will go home…. Uh …. I guess Tess will have to sleep at home tonight, since I heard that Kyle and the sheriff are going to be with you guys….. She can not stay alone." Isabel said trying to see her brother's reaction.
No doubt that once he would learn about Tess's lie, -- if it was a lie of course, she thought -- , he would be pissed to know she was staying with them.
Tess was staying at their home? Thank God Maria had accepted and he wouldn't have to see her at his house tonight.
Anyway, even if Maria had said no, he would have find another way to avoid Tess, he would just have slept in his car with Mickael and the others, but no way he would have gone home tonight.
"Yeah, whatever!" he replied matter-of-factly. " So…..I see you later Iz…. if I can…. Oh and I'm not going to sleep at home … so tell Mum I'm staying at Mickael's if she asks, okay" he finished before finally leaving.
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Max had come back nearly two hours after he left and as he had predicted Mickael had been beyond pissed. He kept repeating that it didn't take two hours to go back to town and do what he was supposed to do, or that he couldn't be trusted and that anything could have happened during those two long hours when he had not been where he should have been.
Of course Tess seemed happy to see him back, though he could tell she also was wondering what had taken him so long.
Truth was he didn't care what she was thinking or not, he couldn't even look at her without remembering her lie and feeling again everything Liz had felt when she had told her he had slept with her.
Looking at the situation he realized that he had been wrong all along about Tess. He thought he knew her, but in reality what did he know about her, huh?
If she was able to lie so easily about things that were important to him and to the people he loved the more, to his friends and everyone else, what guarantees did he have that she wouldn't lie about anything or everything else.
Say that she had really deceived him was really under the truth. If it wasn't for Liz and to protect his still secret relationship with her, Tess Harding would already be hearing about him and what he thought of her right then.
But Liz was right, if Tess was able to lie about that and in front of everyone, she also was able to question anyone around them and find out that nobody had told him about what happened, not Isabel, nor Mickael, -- who anyway didn't know everything that had happened -- and since he wasn't supposed to have talked with Liz, nor were they supposed to be close enough for her to ask him such a personal question, he knew he had to wait. But as soon as he would have confirmation from Isabel, he would talk to her and make clear once and for all where was her place and where was Liz's.
The afternoon passed quickly since nothing changed and the skins didn't seemed to be willing to move nor Nicolas to appear. Mickael and Max had wondered why the little gnome as Maria called him hadn't been seen ever since the night he came and asked for the Granilith and threatened Liz's life to obtain it, but they couldn't come with a plausible explanation.
Why were his men here and not leaving this warehouse, and why wasn't he with them?
Was he just somewhere else with more skins and working on a new plan to have what he wanted ?
Eventually the sheriff had arrived and Max felt relieved to know that he wouldn't have to stay tonight. Like he had thought, or maybe it was hoped, Mickael was willing to stay, and Max would surely not contradict him, or deny him this pleasure. Mickael was too happy to deal with the situation and to show the world what a great and responsible soldier he was. So who was Max to deprive him of this opportunity? Of course if the situation hadn't been what it was, he would certainly have insisted to stay himself, but it was not, so….. he would not deny himself HIS pleasure.
Soon he would be in Liz's arms again, and if it wasn't because nothing was supposed to have changed in his life, he would be jumping up and down with happiness.
But before going back to the love of his life, he would have to take care of one or two little things. First he had to take Tess home and made sure she would stay with Kyle until Kyle would take her to his house so she would stay with his sister. Then he would have to go back to the Crashdown and sneak into Liz's room without being seen to prepare the surprise he had been thinking about almost all the afternoon, or at least ever since he had known that he would see her tonight.
And after that he would have to pick Liz up. And then…. then he sighed dreamingly, he would be able to spend another beautiful night with her, make love to her again, and sleep with her again.
When Max had taken Tess home he hadn't talked a word to her, in fact he hadn't even bother to try, knowing well that only the sound of her voice would be enough to upset him.
He still couldn't believe she would go to such length just to hurt Liz or make sure that she wouldn't want to see him, talk to him again, or whatever her intentions had been in fact. He couldn't wait to have this little talk with Isabel and then with Tess.
But right now he was finally heading to the Crashdown and nothing would stop him from enjoying the time he would, he could spend with Liz.
He had spent nearly half an hour in Liz's room and was ready to creep out through the window when he heard the sound of footsteps coming close.
Sure that it was Liz he hurried towards the door, and just when she was going to enter her room he stepped out, stopping her from looking behind him and see what he had been doing.
"Max…. god….. what are you doing here, you scared me!" she said while reaching her hand to her heart.
"Sorry… I didn't mean to!…. Are you ready?" he quickly asked hoping she didn't have to look for anything into her room.
"Yes…. I just need to go and grab my purse in fact… it is in….."
"NO… you don't need it… If you are ready, we can go now!" he said.
He then kissed her quickly and after he grabbed her hand he led her downstairs almost running.
"Max… you're crazy …. where are you taking me?……where are we going?" she giggled.
"I told you, Miss Parker… it's a secret… you will see once we will be there?"
"No Max… I want to know….. I'm not going anywhere if I don't know where I'm going!" Liz replied at the same time that she stopped in the restaurant backroom and waited for him to answer.
She really did want to know. She had been wondering all the afternoon what Max had planned for her, for them, and she couldn't wait anymore. She was sure that if she insisted a little or if she threatened him into not moving he would finally give in and tell her.
He couldn't resist her, could he?
No need to say that Maria hadn't help her to keep her head out of that since she had kept counting down the hours until her 'date' as she had insisted in calling it, though Liz had herself kept repeating it wasn't a date but some kind of meeting between two people who needed to catch up for the time they had been separated and not talking.
She had tried to convince Maria that there was nothing romantic there but of course she wouldn't hear about it. Eventually she had accepted to conceide that it wasn't a date, if Liz admitted that it was a more than just friends rendezvous and that she was willing to start things with Max again.
Like that was some news, huh?
Maria should have forgotten that Liz had every intention to win Max back until she heard that he didn't love her. But that was so long ago now and she didn't want to think about it anymore.
Max couldn't help but smile when he saw his Liz standing there in front of him, her arms crossed over her chest and pouting as he remembered she used to do each and every time he would not let her know, or do what she wanted to in the second.
Yes, some things never changed. But Liz was so cute when she pouted that he really didn't wish to see them changing.
"Well, tell me again, Lizziiiie…. I think I have forgotten…. it has been so long since we last talked…. how old are you, huh?" he asked knowing that Liz wouldn't like the fact that he wasn't answering, but he couldn't not tease her.
"Oh yeah…… I can see you're liking this Mister Evans…. You're liking this too much….. but ….I'm not moving!" She replied and continued pouting.
Seeing that she wouldn't come with him if he didn't give her some information he just told her:
"Okay… Liz…. I can't tell you where we're going… but I swear that it will be worth the wait… at least I hope that you will find it is worth it!"
With that he pushed open the back door and Liz had no choice but to follow him if she didn't want to be left behind.
Of course when Maria saw them together, she couldn't help but tease them. She could be sooo bad when she wanted , but she couldn't let this opportunity pass her by. No way she would let Max leave before embarassing him some more.
She kept repeating that if it wasn't a date Max didn't need to pick Liz up and that they could have met wherever he wanted, because usually, when a guy picked up a girl, that automatically meant that he would have to take her home. And usually that meant that there was a possibiliy he would kiss her goodbye, and that was what a date did.
She had asked Max at least five times if this was his intention, and like she had predicted the only thing Max could do was to deny and blush. Of course all this only made sense for her, but she really didn't care.
Say that she had been enjoying the ten minutes or so they had needed to make sure everything would be alright and that she would be able to take care of everything alone until the closing was a clear understatement.
Well alone, was not exactly the truth. Jose and Agnes would be there with her and she would just have to supervise everything, something that Maria really loved to do.
And then Mickael was supposed to come and pick her up so that she would not go home all by herself. Anyway, he had her car so it wasn't as if he had any choice there.
What he didn't know yet was that she was supposed to go and spend the evening at Max's place, with Isabel…. and Tess.
How she had gotten mixed up in this she couldn't even tell anymore. All she remembered was Isabel telling her that she really didn't want to have to spend too much time with Tess alone and that it would be safer for her and everyone else anyway if they all stayed together since the guys were out. Liz had been invited too of course, -- not that Isabel wanted to have to deal with Liz AND Tess in the same place, but due to the circumstances they didn't really have any other choice but to stick all together --but Maria had informed her that she would have to wait for her parents and then they would probably want to spend some time with their daughter since they hadn't seen her for almost a week.
Of course Maria being Maria, she couldn't keep her mouth shut and she had let out that Max was supposed to wait with her anyway so she would be safe too.
No need to say that this only confirmed the suspicion Isabel already had that something big was happening between Liz and her little brother. 'Maybe not so little anymore now', Isabel had thought.
Eventually Maria had accepted to help Isabel but on the condition that she would not have to stay all night and that she could sleep at her home and in her bed.
There was simply no way she would sleep in the same room, nor even the same place than the gerbil. Who knew what Tess was capable of. She could kill her during her sleep for all the nasty things she had told her ever since she had set foot in Roswell.
She would rather sleep on her jetta's hood, or with Nicolas himself than share a room with the last embodiment of Lucifer.
At least Nicolas was evil, yes, but he didn't pretend to be anything else.
Everything about Tess, from her hair, to her lips, her teeth or her boobs -- yeah, Maria was sure that there should be a touch of alien powers there -- , but most of all her personality and her supposed affection for the gang seemed just so fake.
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"Max….. can I take this blinfold off now?" Liz asked impatiently for at least the hundredth time when she realized that Max had finally stopped the car.
"No, not yet…. We're almost there Liz… be patient just a few more minutes." Max answered while he went around the car and opened her door for her.
He reached out his hand so that he could help her, and took hers in his.
He couldn't help but smile when he saw that she had yet to stop pouting.
He was sure she would kill him if she had to wait any longer to take off the blindfold he had delicately placed over her beautiful doe-eyes when they had left the Crashdown and when he was sure they couldn't be seen anymore, or maybe he should say spied, by the official gossips spreader of Roswell, also usually and better known as Maria Deluca.
Liz hadn't stopped questioning him all along the way to their destination and he thanked God it had only taken him ten minutes to take her there otherwise he would have told her everything she wanted to know, from the place where they were supposed to spend the evening, or at least part of it since he had yet so many other things planned for them once they would be back to her room, to the number of times he had masturbated while thinking about her over the years -- what?? he was a guy, no? and well his imagination and the lower part of his anatomy always went in overdrive when he thought about Liz, so no need to say that Roswell had not enough hands and fingers to help him to count them -- though that was something he so didn't want anyone to know and definitely not her. But he would have, just to see her stop asking questions and trying to seduce him.
She had been doing such a great job, kissing his neck, licking at his earlobe, purposely stroking him in the most intimate parts while begging him to give her some clue about his plan, that two minutes more and he would have had to turn back and go home and change his pants first.
"Here you go" Max said once they were inside and at the same time that he finally complied with her request and help her taking off the blindfold.
Liz hadn't known where they were, but as soon as she entered the place she was sure it smelled like food, maybe chinese food.
She could hear people talking though she thought they had stopped when Max and her had entered the room. But what was she expecting? Obviously they were in a public place, a restaurant if she guessed right and it wasn't everyday that two people entered a restaurant with one of them blindfolded. She had heard them whispering but she couldn't understand what they were saying and then finally they seemed to have resumed their previous conversation and activities and they didn't seem to mind them anymore.
No need to say that she was relieved and of course thrilled when she was finally freed from the dark piece of material. Not that she didn't like the surprises but right now she wasn't the most patient person. This was Max and she was too eager to find out what he had prepared for her to be able to be.
"Oh, Max…… we are….. it's so beautiful…. you remembered…." she said tears brimming at her eyes as soon she recognized the place. She couldn't even come up with a coherent sentence too moved with what was just in front of her
"I will never forget that Liz!" he whispered huskily and wrapped his arms around her from behind holding her tightly to him.
"Our first real date" they both said in unison.
They were at 'Senor Chow's' again.
Max had taken her to the place where he had taken her for their first date.
But tonight the place seemed to have nothing to do with what it had been that first time they had come there.
They were in an isolated portion of the restaurant and obviously they would be all alone, no one to interrupt them, no one to disturb them. In fact she didn't know yet that Max had made sure of that when he had booked.
In the middle of the little room she could see how the table had been set for two people in a very romantic way, a bunch of flowers, white roses in fact, -- her favorite ones -- , and a set of candlesticks standing on it. The candles light was giving the room an unreal glow and definitely adding to the intimate ambiance.
"So was it worth the wait?" Max asked her when he saw that she still had to talk and give him her impression.
"YES!" she replied immediately, not wanting him to think she didn't appreciate what he had done. She had thought about many things over the afternoon but she definitely hadn't think about that. "Of course… Max, is just so beautiful…. I can't believe you did that…… you shouldn't have…. How….. and … when did you… "
"I called this afternoon before going back to the warehouse….. I would have had the food already served but I wasn't sure when we could be there….. But I called again before picking you up and we should eat soon." he provided for her knowing that she was surely wondering how he had had time to set all this up. ".. I …. well…… here is where everything really started between us…. here is where I really felt normal for the first time… taking you on a date… playing pool with you … and here is where I really started believing and not just hoping and praying like I used to, that one day you would be able to love me just as much as I already did love you…. I just thought that this would be the better place to forget about the past and all we have gone through….. and start again ….as if this was our first time and then create new memories to erase ….. well…..the bad ones."
He still hadn't released his hold on her so she turned around in his arms and wrapped hers around his neck before standing on her tiptoes so that she could almost be face level with him. She looked lovingly into his eyes before declaring softly but sincerely:
"What did I do to deserve you Max Evans?" But she didn't let him answer. Instead she kissed him with all she had inside wanting him to know what this meant to her.
They might have had many problems and she still remembered the time when Max would be so mean to her almost each and every time he would see her, acting as if he wanted to hurt her just as much as she had hurt him, but right now he was again the Max she had fallen in love with that day she had seen his soul, the one she had always loved and still did.
The Max Evans who had only eyes for her, who was caring, considerate and attentive to her every needs.
The Max Evans who would do anything for her, and whose main purpose on life and on this Earth was to take care of her and make her happy.
"Hey… I think that was my line! " he said as soon as they came apart. "What did I do to deserve you" he added before locking their lips together again and darting his tongue out right away to deepen the kiss.
This time only the low cough behind them made them come apart.
Liz immediatley buried her head in Max's chest when she saw the waitress behind them with their starter in hands, completely embarassed to have been caught kissing Max like she had been when they were in a public place. Thank God there weren't other customers where they were.
Max held her tightly a few more precious seconds too happy to have her in his arms before finally leading her to the table and pulling her chair for her.
He had made sure everything would be perfect for her.
He had asked to be set on a part of the restaurant where they could have some privacy.
He had had the roses delivered directly to the restaurant and had made sure they would be put on their table with the candles.
And finally he had ordered her favorite food, remembering everything she liked, from the starter to the main course or the drink.
She couldn't have wished for a better way to 'start again', and she couldn't wait to thank him for all his efforts and for this beautiful and amazing night.
And the night was still far from over she thought.
They had spend most of the meal talking, catching up for lost time, and Liz was relieved to know that she wouldn't have to lie about everything when Maria would question her.
And she would, of that she was sure of.
But no matter what she would tell her next time she would see her, whether she told her that Max and her were together again, some things were for her alone.
Some things were personal and private and would stay between her and Max, and she would cherish those memories until the day she would die. She would never forget this night, just like she had never forgotten their first date, their first kiss, their first dance.
Music had been playing all through the meal and now that they had finished Max knew he would not wait a minute more to dance with her and hold her in his arms again.
He pushed back his chair and held out his hand for her.
"May I ask the most beautiful girl of Roswell if I can have this dance?" he asked her once she stood up.
"I'm sorry but I think Brittany Williams is not here tonight Max" she replied refering to the one who was supposed to be the most beautiful girl of Roswell. At least that was what most of the guys who went to West Roswell thought.
"Uh?" Max just said confused and not understanding who she was talking about. Who was this Brittany Williams and why would he ask her to dance with him.
"Nothing Max…… I was just kidding….. It would be my pleasure" she finally told him when she realized he had not the slightest idea of who she had been talking about.
Maybe Maria was right after all and Max had never paid any attention to any other girl but her. Because if he didn't know who Brittany was, he couldn't know the others.
She took his hand just when a new song started and after he encircled her with his arms and her head came to rest on his hard chest, they began to slowly swing to the music.
Since the beginning of time
Since it started to rain
Since I heard you laugh
Since I felt your pain
I was too young, you were much younger
We were afraid of each other's hunger
I have always loved you
There's never been anyone else
I knew you before I knew myself
Oh my baby
I have always loved you
"I could have written that…." Max told her when he heard the lyrics.
He didn't know who the man who was singing was but his words were really reflecting his own inner feelings.
He had only loved once in his life, had always been in love with Liz Parker, ever since that day he had stepped out of that bus in third grade and had seen her playing with Maria.
He had instantly loved everything about her, her smile, her laugh, her eyes, the way she seemed to light the whole area. And his love for her had only kept growing the more he saw her, the more he learnt about her.
But he had never dare coming too close to her even when he had realized what he felt was, too afraid of their differences, too afraid she would not love him back, too afraid he would scare her and he would lose her completley once she would know who he was.
What he was.
Only when her life had been threatened did he dare doing it, exposing himself, and risking his own life in the process. But he would do everything he did this day all over again if that meant that he could be with her like he was just then.
Liz had been listening to those words too and when he spoke she understood everything he meant, everything he felt, but she just couldn't talk, couldn't answered.
She knew no sound would come out of her mouth even if she tried with all her might. She was too overwhelmed with emotion. So many things were crossing her mind.
So instead of trying and failing to express her feelings she just kissed him, letting her body, her lips, her tongue tell him what she couldn't tell herself with words.
She showed him how she loved him, how she needed him, how she wanted him.
She tried to show him what he had said, what he had done meant for her, how this meal, this date had touched her, and before any of them realized it they were slowly but surely losing control.
Since we kiss the first time
Since we slept on the beach
You were too close for comfort
You were too far out of reach
You walked away, I should have held you
Would you have stayed for me to tell you?
I have always loved you
There's never been anyone else
I knew you before I knew myself
Oh my baby
I have always loved you
Years go by in a matter of days
And though we go separate ways
I never stop dreaming of you
I have always loved you
And when you call it makes me cry
We never made time for you and I
If I could live it all again
I'd never let it end, I'd still be with you
Oh God, I miss you
I have always loved you
There's never been anyone else
I knew you before I knew myself
Oh my baby
I have always loved you
Years go by in a matter of days
And though
We go separate ways
I never stop dreaming of you
I have Always loved you.
They stayed there dancing and kissing during a long time, song playing after songs, and only when the music suddenly stopped did they came apart and realized what had happened.
"I think we ….. should go…. home" he rested his forehead against hers and whispered once he had caught his breath again.
"Home ……… I like how it sounds" Liz replied before taking his hand and leading him towards the cash register.
She couldn't wait to be in her room and to give herself up to the passion, to give herself to this man she loved beyond words. She swore she could have made love to Max right there on their improvised dancefloor and there was simply no way she would have been able to stop, nor would she be able now to stay there another minute and not do something that would embarassed her, both of them in fact, even more than when the waitress had caught them before.
She just couldn't. Not when her mind was only and completely filled with sensual and sexual fantasies. Fantasies she wanted Max to make true, just as he had made each and every of her dreams come true until now.
Max was sure he had never driven so fast in his whole life, and he was hoping that they wouldn't be in an accident or get arrested. He needed to be with Liz. ALONE. Before he lost the little remains of control and sanity he still had.
Though he was dying to make love to Liz like right then, when they were climbing the stairs to her room he suddenly remembered that he still hadn't finished to surprise her.
He had been preparing this for almost half an hour this afternoon and he really hoped she would like this surprise too.
He knew she had lost more than she deserved, they had lost more than anyone could imagined, more than anyone their age should, when he had come back from the future, and he would do anything he could to make up for this, though the one thing he had in mind that would really make her forget about all of this nightmare would have to wait.
But one day, maybe sooner than he thought he would be able to give her everything she deserved.
"Wait!" he said and held her hand when he saw that she was ready to open her bedroom door.
"What is it Max?" she questioned immediately a little confused. She had thought he wanted to reach their private alcove just as much as she wanted to, so why was he stopping her now, here in the middle of the hallway.
"I…. uh….could…. could you close your eyes first?" he asked tentatively.
"Max… oh no…. please…. I don't want more of your little games…. I think I have been patient for a lifetime tonight." she said but couldn't help but smile and wondered what Max could want now.
That was when she remembered he was getting out of her room before they left and that he hadn't let her get inside.
"Liiiz, pleeaase" he said with a little child like voice. " Close your eyes…. It's going to take two minutes…. two little minutes…. and then… no more games, I swear…. Can you do that for me?"
"Fine, fine…. I will do like you want…… MysteryBoy" she replied using again the little nickname she had given him when she had first heard about their secret date
After asking her to wait for him outside he entered her room and went to her hifi-system. He searched for the cd he had brought with him when he had first came and switched the power on.
He checked everything one last time and only when he was sure everything would be perfect did he let Liz enter the room too.
Coming behind her and wrapping his arms around her again he whispered in her ear.
"Are you ready?"
"Yes!"
"Open your eyes love."
At the same that she did as he said he waved his hand around the room and Liz's breath immediately caught in her throat.
"OH-MY-GOD, MAX!" she yelled completely shoked.
End of Chapter Five
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I know what you are going to say! I'm sooo bad!! But hey, this story needs some suspense, no?….. and I personally need a break!
God I can believe that I 've written 5 parts in only one week!
I really hope that you liked them!
Now tell me what you think about all this.
And if you want to know what happens next….. leave me many, many, many feedbacks…. I'm sure I work faster when I read a great amount of FEEDBACKS!!!!!
Max didn't know who was singing but I do!!
(isn't that normal since I am the one writing this, duh!)This song is from Enrique Iglesias's album 'Enrique' and it's called I have always loved you and for those who don't know it or have never heard it before…. Guys go and find it cos I can assure that it's simply BEAUTIFUL. Definitely a MAX AND LIZ 's song.
C U all very soon…. If you want me to come back of course!!!
Rebecca
what else… oh yeah, I use one of your anecdote in this part, 
…. Too busy contemplating Shiri/Liz! 