Thanks so much, Jan! The funny part is that this chapter didn’t exist until yesterday. I was really feeling the pressure and just wondered: What would Khivar do?Janetfl![]()
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My god Paper I think that was the best chapter so far!!! You could feel the panic that Khivar was experiencing! Oh I really want to see how he's going to get himself out of this mess!! The way you described the different senarios on each planet was just fantastic. I LOVE THIS!!!! FREAKIN' AWESOME CHAPTER!!! JAN
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Thanks art_junkie! This whole thing is way longer than I ever expected.art_junkie wrote:Wow, part 50!! Way to go! I love the way Khivar's trying to calm himself down.. lol, its hilarious, he really is one of a kind!hehehe.. i loved that part! Keep writing! XDpaper wrote:‘Why didn’t she stop me before I blew the whole zamn galaxy to Haydeez? Some good she is!
I don’t even think we’re really related.’
He purses his lips in distate. ‘She always thought Zan was such a prize. I’ll bet she even had a crush on that slug. He thought he was THE MAN. Bastard! How did he get away with the Granolith right under my nose? Someone else helped him.
Someone. Someone. But who?
Probably his fracking Momma. I’m so glad I never have to see HER fugly face again.


Hi Ken! Thanks for your feedback! I was thinking of Nero when he was having his breakdown!ken_r: I might suggest that Khivar gets a fiddle. He seems to have a lot in common with Nero. Once i wrote a story where each side pulled their world just a little out of kilter each time they fought each other. Eventually they managed to change the whole universe. that is the fear when weapons get so big that their influence on the universe becomes measurable. ken r


51 - Seeriously
Do you ever feel like breaking down? Do you ever feel out of place?
Like somehow you just don’t belong and no one understands you
Do you ever wanna run away? Do you lock yourself in your room?
With the radio on, turned up so loud that no one hears you screaming
No you don’t know what it’s like when nothing feels alright
You don’t know what it’s like, to be like me
To be hurt, to feel lost, to be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you’re down, to feel like you’ve been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down when no one’s there to save you
No you don’t know what it’s like. Welcome to my life.
Tension has been brewing all week as the Vid Screens have been ablaze with the news nonstop.
The coverage of Fubar’s demise was spectacular but it pales in comparison to the harangue of dire warnings spewing forth currently, concerning more impending disasters of epic proportions.
Terror of the unknown is causing mass panic.
Doom-mongers on the VidScreens hawk the latest dire warnings with extreme prejudice:
“The lush diversity of the Whirligig Galaxy is in peril.”
“Can the Zhatchar and Zinder disasters happen here also?”
“Billions of lives could be lost in mere minutes.”
The whispers have turned to shouting in the street. “Why hasn’t Khivar brought forth the Granolith?” they cry.
The temperature continues to rise and tempers flare correspondingly.
A maelstrom of violent storms is wreaking havoc on Antar’s already fragile ecosystem.
Wild fluctuations in air pressure have generated torrential rain and ghale force winds which are causing rivers and lakes to overrun their banks. Homes and businesses were swamped by floods and deadly mud slides. The waterways have become fouled by pollution. Wind damage continues to erode infrastructure as structures collapse under the onslaught of storm after storm.
His advisors, that know the Granolith is gone, can only suggest building scads of ships in case evacuation becomes the only solution.
“Why is this happening to me?”
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Do you wanna be somebody else? Are you sick of feeling so left out?
Are you desperate to find something more before your life is over?
Are you stuck inside a world you hate? Are you sick of everyone around?
With the big fake smiles and stupid lies when deep inside you’re bleeding
No you don’t know what it’s like when nothing feels alright
You don’t know what it’s like to be like me
To be hurt, to feel lost, to be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you’re down, to feel like you’ve been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down when no one’s there to save you
No you don’t know what it’s like. Welcome to my life.
Khivar has his spin-doctors working overtime on placating the distraught public with false promises and misinformation campaigns.
People are rioting in the squares.
The Military is on high alert. Martial law has now been declared and curfews are being enforced. Emergency supplies are flowing from his storehouses to give people some semblance of hope.
Part one of his emergency plan has been to assemble transport ships to evacuate his subjects. For what is an Emperor without subjects? Serena and her team quickly started the ball rolling on ship specifications and preliminary plans for the evacuation. His Military Advisors scrambled to carry out their orders and insure that the new ships would be battle ready. Production of the long-range transports are priority one.
Hostilities have been temporarily put on hold due to the massive problems plaguing the entire galaxy. There isn’t much reason to conquer his neighbors if the Granolith is not obtained.
Khivar feels “under the gun”. He has to think fast. And Khivar always thinks on a grand scale.
Being an omnipotent Emperor gives him vast resources. He will conquer this latest obstacle without delay.
He refined his ingenious plan while performing the rote movements of his morning swim.
He decided to forgo his usual massage and get right to work on his flash of inspiration. He assembled his Scientists (the few that the rebels left behind), his advisors, his top politicians and his most trusted Seers. He even invited “bad-news Nelly,” his sister.
The Seers would play a major role in his solution to the current dilemma.
‘It’s about time they earned their keep. They sure haven’t pulled their weight so far!’
What he wants them to do will take immense power and compromise their personal resources. It is on such a grand scale that it will be nearly unattainable. Serena has the audacity to tell him it will be all but impossible, but he feels he has to try. One doesn’t scoff at the Emperor’s plan without reproach.
He sent her packing.
At this point in time, he refuses to listen to any naysayers! His people have been dabbling in these kinds of mind-journeys for countless generations. But while it is indeed possible for a combination of 20 Seers to take over the consciousness of some weak-willed humans, it is entirely another thing to breach to walls of an Antarian’s strong resistance, especially at such an immense distance. In spite of the overwhelming constraints he gathers ALL his resources to the Palace Courtyard on Pinatubo Mountain to make the attempt.
Failure is not an option.
No one ever lies straight to your face and no one ever stabbed you in the back
You might think I’m happy but I’m not gonna be okay
Everybody always gave you what you wanted. You never had to work, it was always there
You don’t know what it’s like, what it’s like
To be hurt, to feel lost, to be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you’re down, to feel like you’ve been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down when no one’s there to save you
No you don’t know what it’s like
Burly guards line the perimeter. General Tove, looking both commanding and menacing in full regalia, supervises the attempt and puts the fear of the gods in all participants. The man is a real motivator. There isn’t a person there who doesn’t realize the stakes.
Apprehension is spiking among the participants who recognize that Khivar is already unhappy with the lot of them. If nothing else, he will accomplish this goal through sheer force of will. Two hundred Seers struggle and toil for countless hours to bridge the space-time continuum. The formidable task to unlock the mind of a King from such a distance in the unrelenting heat takes everything they have to give.
Tove keeps them striving for the coveted prize until too many have become incapacitated by exhaustion or simply passed out from the monumental stress and strain. The few still standing are weeping and gnashing their teeth together in pain. It looks like the last of his luck is washing down the drain.
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It doesn’t work.
To be hurt, to feel lost, to be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you’re down. To feel like you’ve been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down when no one’s there to save you
No you don’t know what it’s like
Welcome to my life.
Welcome to my life.
Welcome to my life.
Welcome to my life by Simple Plan