Title: my big brother
By: Lizamay
Warning: as of right now only a short story for i have three other stories i am in the process of finishing but this has been nagging at me in the back of my mind and i had to let it out but if anyone likes it enough i can elaborate on it because well there is more that i can put to it just not sure if i want to just yet for it wouldnt be a short story anymore!
Diclaimer: i do not own any of these characters! They all belong to jason, melinda, fox, upn, wb or whatever but i intend no harm to come from this story just borrowing them for a little while! O ya and thanx!
Summary: liz and michael are bro and sis and pretty much this story shows michaels love for liz and how he will do anything to protect her no matter what
Couples: really only shows M/L and then some M/T but some of the other CC’s will make cameos k!
I hope you all enjoy this for i had alot of fun writing it and ya i just hope you like it also this is my first UC fic so dont be harsh but feedback will be greatly welcomed!
~Dear journal,
I always knew life was full of choices, big small easy and hard, i just didnt know they came as hard and life changing as the one my friends, my brother and i had to face these past few days! It all started with max and me, we were doing fine until tess said somthing that just ( i think ) stopped maxs heart cold. From the second she said it i knew he was gone from me and i dont think i will ever get him back! I think he is trapped some where in his own mind and tess is somehow got a hold of him ( not in a mind warp but some other way because he, not she, is making all of his own choices and he is lost even when she isnt around.) Well after that my brother michael stepped in and things just got out of hand! See max and michael are best friends, they out of all the guys have one special thing in common that no other guy they know, see they came this planet called antar and well in easy and short ways they are aliens. They have this special bond that should never be broken even by family. And now i think that bond is so damaged and its all because of well...me.
~The story~
“Max! Do you not hear what you are saying? Do you even know what you mean?” screamed Michael “ You are hurting all of the people you love! Your sister, the girl you love, and all of your friends!”
“No! No i do know what i am saying, i am saying what i feel for once and god does it feel good to get it out there! I am so sick of being the responsible one! I want to have some fun and be with someone that i an be myself around!” Max yelled back
“Max understand this, You. Are. Not. Being. Yourself!”
“Whatever why dont you just stay out of my face! This friendship is over and your sister, tell her its done for good toq i dont want to see her! She isnt worth this shit! ” and with that Max started to walk away until he felt a hand on his shoulder pull him around
“Dont you ever talk about my sister that way”
just want to let everyone know i will be back with the rest of this tomorrow and it will be completed!
my big brother (UC, Mi/L=siblings, YTEEN) [COMPLETE]
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lizamay
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my big brother (UC, Mi/L=siblings, YTEEN) [COMPLETE]
Last edited by lizamay on Wed Jun 11, 2003 12:34 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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lizamay
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ok so i lied i dont have the rest done maybe tomorrow but here is a bit of the rest! if that even makes sence? whatever ok here it is! omg! do you know what i just realized!? no one is even reading this so i dont know why i am posting and i definatly dont know who i am talking to!
~Earlier that week~
“Hey Max how about we go see that new movie um whats it called? O ya Finding Nemo thats it, wanna go see it this weekend?” asked liz as she came up behind max
“ya i would love to but i have to work until 8 so how about 9ish?”
“sure i get off at around 8ish to so i will be here at nine tomorrow!” replied liz then she leaned forward and gave him a small kiss “sorry just had to”
“dont worry i dont...”
“MAX!!!! We need to talk now!” yelled tess as she walked into the front doors of the crashdown
“tess what is it?” asked max “what happened?”
“ALONE!”
“ok then lets sit down over here” max said pointing to the back of the crashdown
“fine.”
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“wonder what that’s all about?” said alex as he walked up to liz with isabel along side him
“dont know she came in, went into ranting bitch mode, now he and shedevil are backthere as you see” said liz
“well i havent seen tess in about a week so somthing must be up maybe we should go back there and see if we can help?”asked isabel
“ya sure lets go”
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one day forward
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“max why are you doing this?” liz asked crying “why are you doing this to us what is wrong with you?”
“nothing liz. Nothing is wrong with me dont you see? this, this is me! this is how i should have been from day one.” Said max
“but if you were like this from day one then me and you, we never would have been together.”
“exactly”
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the day before
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“ hey guys whats up?” asked alex as he isabel and liz walked to the back of the resturant
“nothing did i not say alone clear enough for you people?!” said tess with an irritated but distant tone
“hey! Dont talk to us that way you have no right to!” said isabel “max!?”
“hey she did say alone so i think you should all leave us alone.”stated max in the same tone
“max? Are you ok?” asked liz
“ya liz why wouldnt i be?”
“well i dont know you just seem alittle...well...i mean...i dont know what i mean”
“oookay...well me and tess have to go now then if everyone is done being rude” max said while standing up from the both and giving tess his hand to help her out of her seat
“MAX! I need to talk to you for a minute in the backroom please!” isabel hissed pulling max away from tess and a stunned alex and liz
“o great a lecture from the all mighty isabel!” max laughed
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maxs house present day
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“what? Im sorry i didnt understand what you just said. Who now?” said max with a small smirk across his lips “o right your sister, liz the human. You know i dont understand how you and isabel care for that race so much! They are nothing but trouble”
“Thats it!” michael roared launching himself at max and punching him square in the nose hearing a loud snap and feeling the blood start to run down maxs face “dont you ever, ever talk about my sister or any of the others like that!”
“see! See what i mean giving up your own kind to be with them! Liz isnt even your sister you were adopted! ADOPTED michael!” Shouted max while pushing michael off of him and standing up “we shouldnt be around people like liz, alex, kyle, and maria! It should only be me, you, isabel, and tess!”
“no! Sorry but no. Liz is my sister in every way that counts! I dont give a crap about the blood running threw my veins or hers! We. Are. Family!”
“michael you are being stubborn!”
“no im not im am making a choice and my choice is not you!” with that michael turned and left
“fine!” max shouted after him “fine make the biggest mistake of your life michael!”
~Earlier that week~
“Hey Max how about we go see that new movie um whats it called? O ya Finding Nemo thats it, wanna go see it this weekend?” asked liz as she came up behind max
“ya i would love to but i have to work until 8 so how about 9ish?”
“sure i get off at around 8ish to so i will be here at nine tomorrow!” replied liz then she leaned forward and gave him a small kiss “sorry just had to”
“dont worry i dont...”
“MAX!!!! We need to talk now!” yelled tess as she walked into the front doors of the crashdown
“tess what is it?” asked max “what happened?”
“ALONE!”
“ok then lets sit down over here” max said pointing to the back of the crashdown
“fine.”
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“wonder what that’s all about?” said alex as he walked up to liz with isabel along side him
“dont know she came in, went into ranting bitch mode, now he and shedevil are backthere as you see” said liz
“well i havent seen tess in about a week so somthing must be up maybe we should go back there and see if we can help?”asked isabel
“ya sure lets go”
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one day forward
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“max why are you doing this?” liz asked crying “why are you doing this to us what is wrong with you?”
“nothing liz. Nothing is wrong with me dont you see? this, this is me! this is how i should have been from day one.” Said max
“but if you were like this from day one then me and you, we never would have been together.”
“exactly”
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the day before
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“ hey guys whats up?” asked alex as he isabel and liz walked to the back of the resturant
“nothing did i not say alone clear enough for you people?!” said tess with an irritated but distant tone
“hey! Dont talk to us that way you have no right to!” said isabel “max!?”
“hey she did say alone so i think you should all leave us alone.”stated max in the same tone
“max? Are you ok?” asked liz
“ya liz why wouldnt i be?”
“well i dont know you just seem alittle...well...i mean...i dont know what i mean”
“oookay...well me and tess have to go now then if everyone is done being rude” max said while standing up from the both and giving tess his hand to help her out of her seat
“MAX! I need to talk to you for a minute in the backroom please!” isabel hissed pulling max away from tess and a stunned alex and liz
“o great a lecture from the all mighty isabel!” max laughed
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maxs house present day
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“what? Im sorry i didnt understand what you just said. Who now?” said max with a small smirk across his lips “o right your sister, liz the human. You know i dont understand how you and isabel care for that race so much! They are nothing but trouble”
“Thats it!” michael roared launching himself at max and punching him square in the nose hearing a loud snap and feeling the blood start to run down maxs face “dont you ever, ever talk about my sister or any of the others like that!”
“see! See what i mean giving up your own kind to be with them! Liz isnt even your sister you were adopted! ADOPTED michael!” Shouted max while pushing michael off of him and standing up “we shouldnt be around people like liz, alex, kyle, and maria! It should only be me, you, isabel, and tess!”
“no! Sorry but no. Liz is my sister in every way that counts! I dont give a crap about the blood running threw my veins or hers! We. Are. Family!”
“michael you are being stubborn!”
“no im not im am making a choice and my choice is not you!” with that michael turned and left
“fine!” max shouted after him “fine make the biggest mistake of your life michael!”
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lizamay
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hey here is the rest of it thanx to nickimlow for reading my story and if you want me to write the second one to this than let me know and tell peoople to read my story and for them to tell me too k thanx again for reading and here it is
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two days before
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“Listen max I know I have said this before but you have to listen now and don’t tune me out!” said Tess
“what is it tess? If it is about or around anything having to do with destiny then i am out of here.” Said max in an annoyed tone
“max someone is after us! And i dont think you understand what could happen to any of us if we are not together!”
“no tess! No i dont love you i love liz and i cant be with someone i dont love!”
“fine then will you just look at this picture really quick i found it in my room.”
“sure” said max as he picked up the picture next thing he knew the picture was gone and liz alex and isabel were standing by him and tess
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Present day Michael and Liz’s house
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Liz crying in her room and Maria trying to comfort her
“Liz sweetie you have to understand max is not being max Tess did something to him!” said Maria rubbing Liz’s back while she cried on her bed
“But Maria you should have seen his eyes! You should have seen the way he acted! It was him and nothing or no one was controlling him!” cried liz
~knock knock~
“Ya?” Maria answered for Liz
“Hey its Michael can I come in for a minute?”
“Ya sure come on in Michael.” Said Liz
Michael came in and sat on the bed next to Liz “hey Ria do you think i could have i minute alone with Liz?” he gave her a small smile when she nodded her head yes and got up to walk out the door
“hey liz listen im sorry for how max is acting he is being a total ass and he just told me that he wanted me and isabel to pick hima nd tess or all of you guys and i told him to go to hell and that i would never leave my family behind.” Michael said remembering back to what happened at maxs
“but michael max and tess they are the same as you they are your family why didnt you pick them?” asked liz
“no liz see thats not the max i know he isnt the brother that i had for the past 11 years he is different now and tess i never liked tess in the first place beside you made me feel like i was loved you mom and dad made me part of a family and i would do anything for you guys!”
“but what about isabel what if she picks her brother and tess? What will you do then?”
"same as im doing now because then isabel wouldnt be isabel anymore and you maria kyle and alex would still be the same and i guess that as long as i have you four mom and dad my life would be complete even if i never spoke to max iz and tess again.” Said michael “besides i would do anything for you dont you know that?”
“ya i do now.” Said liz “ i do now”
liz starts to cry again and michael pulls her to him and they hug.
Michael thinks to himself ‘ ya i will do anything for you liz.’
ok so for my first U/C story i dont think it was so bad hopefully whoever read it liked it cause i liked writing it! well ya so what im going to do is if i get enough feedback and people want me to im gonna make the second part for this and kinda lengthen it up a bit k so ya thanx for reading and peace out
love lizamay
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two days before
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“Listen max I know I have said this before but you have to listen now and don’t tune me out!” said Tess
“what is it tess? If it is about or around anything having to do with destiny then i am out of here.” Said max in an annoyed tone
“max someone is after us! And i dont think you understand what could happen to any of us if we are not together!”
“no tess! No i dont love you i love liz and i cant be with someone i dont love!”
“fine then will you just look at this picture really quick i found it in my room.”
“sure” said max as he picked up the picture next thing he knew the picture was gone and liz alex and isabel were standing by him and tess
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Present day Michael and Liz’s house
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Liz crying in her room and Maria trying to comfort her
“Liz sweetie you have to understand max is not being max Tess did something to him!” said Maria rubbing Liz’s back while she cried on her bed
“But Maria you should have seen his eyes! You should have seen the way he acted! It was him and nothing or no one was controlling him!” cried liz
~knock knock~
“Ya?” Maria answered for Liz
“Hey its Michael can I come in for a minute?”
“Ya sure come on in Michael.” Said Liz
Michael came in and sat on the bed next to Liz “hey Ria do you think i could have i minute alone with Liz?” he gave her a small smile when she nodded her head yes and got up to walk out the door
“hey liz listen im sorry for how max is acting he is being a total ass and he just told me that he wanted me and isabel to pick hima nd tess or all of you guys and i told him to go to hell and that i would never leave my family behind.” Michael said remembering back to what happened at maxs
“but michael max and tess they are the same as you they are your family why didnt you pick them?” asked liz
“no liz see thats not the max i know he isnt the brother that i had for the past 11 years he is different now and tess i never liked tess in the first place beside you made me feel like i was loved you mom and dad made me part of a family and i would do anything for you guys!”
“but what about isabel what if she picks her brother and tess? What will you do then?”
"same as im doing now because then isabel wouldnt be isabel anymore and you maria kyle and alex would still be the same and i guess that as long as i have you four mom and dad my life would be complete even if i never spoke to max iz and tess again.” Said michael “besides i would do anything for you dont you know that?”
“ya i do now.” Said liz “ i do now”
liz starts to cry again and michael pulls her to him and they hug.
Michael thinks to himself ‘ ya i will do anything for you liz.’
ok so for my first U/C story i dont think it was so bad hopefully whoever read it liked it cause i liked writing it! well ya so what im going to do is if i get enough feedback and people want me to im gonna make the second part for this and kinda lengthen it up a bit k so ya thanx for reading and peace out
love lizamay