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angelina
Eve
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Michelle in Yonkers
Jessah
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Chapter 11.
Max Pov
I know killing Kivar in this way is not what you call a strategically intelligent move.
With his armed guards everywhere and hundreds surrounding him there is no way I will come out of this alive.
Logically I know this but logic isn’t fueling the blood rushing through my veins right now.
Pain, betrayal, rage …these emotions are keeping my legs moving, my heart pumping as I run towards my target.
Fuck everything, fuck trying to save this pathetic little world.
I've given a lifetime of sacrifice to save countless lives and this is what I get in return.
Let someone else be the hero, the protector.
I want him to feel the agony I feel in my heart.
I want to look into his eyes as my blade rips into his beating bloody black organ.
I need to see the end as he sees it… as everything goes black before him.
As I push through the crowd I can see the couples clapping applauding the happy couple on their engagement.
Tears blur my vision momentarily as I brush them away.
Flashes of her looking up at me while I make love to her stab continuously into my heart, it was all a lie, her breathless moans her sweet kisses, it all meant nothing.
Just a few more steps and it will be over …the beast that took my love will pay.
And that’s when it happened.
From out of nowhere I feel a hand grab me from behind pulling me backwards.
“No!”
My scream is drowned out my thunderous cheers as Kivar places the largest diamond I've ever seen on her finger.
Within seconds I am tossed out the door.
With madness in my eyes I turn with the knife held high in the air aiming for whoever destroyed my chance at vengeance.
“Michael?”
“Get in the car.”
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Liz's POV
The caravan of dreams stopped for a few moments
and then where did you walk off, and where did I?
This story of hearts lasted only a few moments
and then where did you go, and where did I?
I've never taken the risk of breaking my own heart. I was too scared for that until now.
Becoming engaged to Kivar was probably the smartest thing I've done. At least lives for spared for now giving me enough time to think over my next move.
Yes I know I've also done a wrong thing by becoming the ultimate decision maker and shutting Max out; but it's for our benefit. He would have been hurt or killed tonight. I don't know which one is worse.
The diamond on my finger is worthless. I try to break it against the mahogany desk but it's fruitless and the wood chips on my skin. I feel disgusting, oh yes I do.
I never saw this day coming.
I could feel Kivar's thoughts. I could sense his next moves.
I was turning into an alien myself. The old me would have been disgusted but now I feel like I was destined to become an alien. If this is how I can save everyone including Max, then so be it.
I just need to convince Kivar a bit more and then find the golden opportunity to kill him. They say, keep your friends close but keep your enemies closer.
"Liz.."
I turn and see myself standing by the doorway. My dark hair is in locks and I look very powerful. Sleek black dress and the eyes have been doused with kohl. "You made the right move." She smirks.
Am I going mad?
Gasping, I stand up. "You're a shape shifter aren't you?"
"You know you hate the soppy part. You're built to cut straight to the chase. Max can survive a few days without you." She laughs. It's menacing. Could I ever look like that?
"No." Another voice comes from across the room.
To my shock it's another me but in a white dress. "You never should have left Max." She clicked her tongue, shaking her head in disapproval.
"Back off bitch. She made the right choice." The dark version of me snapped.
"Max needs her just the way she needs him."
"No, she can fight for herself."
"Love conquers all."
"What is going on here!" I scream, practically throwing a vase at the wall in agony. It's insane and pathetic.
They disappear and I'm the one left standing in the room, heaving and breathing harshly. I have lost my mind.
My tears are now released and I can't take this madness anymore.
The door opens and that blonde walked in. "Hello Liz."
"Tess is it?" I snapped irritably.
"So I see we were having a little heart to heart with ourselves huh?" She smirked and closed the door behind her.
"I don't need another bitch to piss me off." I hissed. "Get lost."
"I know you want to kill Kivar." She frowned. "I knew it the moment I played with your mind."
My eyes widened, so it was that bitch mind warping me. How dare she! Not thinking straight, I grabbed a couple of items from the desk and started to throw them at her. A perfume glass smashed on her forehead and caused her to wince in pain.
"STOP IT LIZ!"
"I'm not scared of you aliens anymore!"
When I had ran out of things to throw, I raised a hand and a blast shot Tess back. I was too mad to notice what I had done and came charging straight at Tess. I picked her up and pinned her to the wall. "You monsters will only have one place to go to and that's hell!" I screamed.
"Liz..." The blood trickled down her cheek and past her throat. "It's hurting." She sobbed.
That's when it hit me. I never saw another alien bleed like that. I saw Max with his injuries from the accident but to see warm blood from an alien...no, she was mind warping me again.
But I could smell the metallic blood dripping down her face and the shards of glass with the
perfume stains on her shirt. I slowly let her go.
Oh god, I've not only turned into an alien but I was becoming like them...a monster...
The rage, the power...it all got to my head in such a way....and I loved it for the moment.
Is this how they feel?
Tess straightened her shirt and in her eyes there were swimming tears. "I'm sorry Liz, I really am but this time I'm not the bad girl. I just want to understand how you feel."
"I feel like I've just killed my love!" I growled back, I was defiantly more powerful then Tess and the truth won't cost me my life.
"I am so sorry." She shivered.
"Sorry for what?" I laugh. "Sorry that you're on the side of the monsters?"
"Kivar had given me shelter." She said. "He's always looked out for me."
"Ha, because he was training you to be his slave."
"Yes." Tess nodded. "His intentions were those just to degrade me." Tess's face was genuine and I could feel the shame.
"Oh god...he..."
"Raped me." Tess admitted with eyes full of shame. "Just before he put that ring on you."
My eyes are full of horror. I can see the terror in her mind. "He..."
"He's always done this to me, I was too scared to go against him because those who had have perished Liz."
"So you need my help." I concurred,
"I will help you." She answered. "I will help you to destroy Kivar but I need a favor in return."
"Yes?"
"I need you to help me find my lover."