Great Chapter!!!! Please please please plase please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what happen will happen next for Max and Liz. Wow I think that so great that Max and Liz are in love. I'm glad Liz stopped Max when she did. I'm happy Max wants him and Liz to get married before Liz is 16. I'm glad Max told Liz that she has to go before the granolith before they could get married. Hopefully the King will let Max and Liz get married before Liz turns 16. God I really hate Kivar for the way he is treating the humans. I can't believe what he is going to do with the human he is with. That man is a pig and he should doe like a pig does. I can't believe Nicholas. I hate them both. I hope someone finds Kivar and Nicholas find out what they have plan then hang them by their balls on an live electric wire. Sorry but I really hate Kivar and Nicholas. So Liz is noticing how Zane like Jenny. I'm glad she is trying to have Zane understand what happened to Jenny and Kat. I wonder what the king wants. Hopefully it is good news for Max and Liz.
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 24 7/1
Disgusting, this Khivar... he should have as sentence for himself the same treatment he gives these poor girls!! 
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 25 7/2
max and liz believer Yes Max and Liz have in love. I wouldn't worry too much about Kivar. 
L-J-L 76 Things have really moved forward for Max and Liz.
Eve Kivar's end is coming! Just not here.
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Part 25
Liz walked into the King's office and took the seats across from him.
"Thank you for coming Liz."
"May I ask why you wanted to see me You're Highness?"
"Liz, behind closed doors or with family it's just Philip."
"Yes sir."
"Now I asked you here because Max has requested that we move up your wedding."
"Yes sir."
"You knew he was going to ask?"
"Yes Philip, he did it with my blessing."
"I see. Liz, I don't know how much you have been told about marriage here."
"I know that most couples have a life bond. One that can only be broken by death."
"Yes, not all have the bond. Men like Kivar won't do it. Now I should make it clear to you that, if let's say Kivar were to get you and rape you. You wouldn't get pain in your head cheaters get. You have to be willingly cheating on your mate."
"I understand."
"Now has Max told you about going before the preistest?"
"Yes."
"I have no doubt that you will pass her test."
"Why?"
"Serena, would never have chosen you for Max if you wouldn't. She has the ability to see into the true nature of a person. She could see this beautiful, kind hearted woman behind that stonewall of stubbornness that you showed the world."
"I am sorry about how I acted."
"Don't be. That stubbornness of yours will serve you well as Queen. Let me tell you if Diane doesn't agree with me she let's me know it. In fact when I told her of my choice to bring you and the others here she when off and even threw me out of our bedroom. I had to sleep in the sitting room."
"Thank you sir."
"Liz, I will arrange for the test then. Once you pass the test we can set the wedding into motion."
"Ok."
"You may go. I will let you know when the test is."
"Thank you."
Liz headed out to find Max.
******
Zane watched Jenny as she walked through the garden.
"You could try and talking to her." Said Serena
"I have. She is still so scared of me."
"Zane, you do understand that she has been through a lot."
"I know. I so want to be the one to kill Kivar for what he did to both those young ladies."
"We have people hunting for him. Though he isn't on any planet in the empire."
"I think he is on Draygon. They have a history of mistreating humans brought there."
"I know. That is why my father stopped all trade with them."
"Yes. Well princess wish me luck. I am going to try and talk to Jenny."
"Good luck."
Zane walked over to Jenny who had sat down on a bench near a small pond. Zane stayed a few feet away knowing that she was still uncomfortable with men near her.
"It is a lovely evening." Said Zane softly
"Yes. It is." Said Jenny
"Jenny, I am not going to hurt you."
"I know Zane."
"How do you know that?"
"Miss Liz, wouldn't let you anywhere near me if you were."
"She is a very kind young lady."
"She is a year younger then me."
"That maybe true. But she is going to have a big job."
"Yes, I know. She will be queen."
"Yes. That is why I am her personal guard."
"Zane, you can sit down if you want."
"Thank you."
Zane sat down next to her and they kept talking.
TBC
L-J-L 76 Things have really moved forward for Max and Liz.
Eve Kivar's end is coming! Just not here.
saori_1902 Thanks!
Part 25
Liz walked into the King's office and took the seats across from him.
"Thank you for coming Liz."
"May I ask why you wanted to see me You're Highness?"
"Liz, behind closed doors or with family it's just Philip."
"Yes sir."
"Now I asked you here because Max has requested that we move up your wedding."
"Yes sir."
"You knew he was going to ask?"
"Yes Philip, he did it with my blessing."
"I see. Liz, I don't know how much you have been told about marriage here."
"I know that most couples have a life bond. One that can only be broken by death."
"Yes, not all have the bond. Men like Kivar won't do it. Now I should make it clear to you that, if let's say Kivar were to get you and rape you. You wouldn't get pain in your head cheaters get. You have to be willingly cheating on your mate."
"I understand."
"Now has Max told you about going before the preistest?"
"Yes."
"I have no doubt that you will pass her test."
"Why?"
"Serena, would never have chosen you for Max if you wouldn't. She has the ability to see into the true nature of a person. She could see this beautiful, kind hearted woman behind that stonewall of stubbornness that you showed the world."
"I am sorry about how I acted."
"Don't be. That stubbornness of yours will serve you well as Queen. Let me tell you if Diane doesn't agree with me she let's me know it. In fact when I told her of my choice to bring you and the others here she when off and even threw me out of our bedroom. I had to sleep in the sitting room."
"Thank you sir."
"Liz, I will arrange for the test then. Once you pass the test we can set the wedding into motion."
"Ok."
"You may go. I will let you know when the test is."
"Thank you."
Liz headed out to find Max.
******
Zane watched Jenny as she walked through the garden.
"You could try and talking to her." Said Serena
"I have. She is still so scared of me."
"Zane, you do understand that she has been through a lot."
"I know. I so want to be the one to kill Kivar for what he did to both those young ladies."
"We have people hunting for him. Though he isn't on any planet in the empire."
"I think he is on Draygon. They have a history of mistreating humans brought there."
"I know. That is why my father stopped all trade with them."
"Yes. Well princess wish me luck. I am going to try and talk to Jenny."
"Good luck."
Zane walked over to Jenny who had sat down on a bench near a small pond. Zane stayed a few feet away knowing that she was still uncomfortable with men near her.
"It is a lovely evening." Said Zane softly
"Yes. It is." Said Jenny
"Jenny, I am not going to hurt you."
"I know Zane."
"How do you know that?"
"Miss Liz, wouldn't let you anywhere near me if you were."
"She is a very kind young lady."
"She is a year younger then me."
"That maybe true. But she is going to have a big job."
"Yes, I know. She will be queen."
"Yes. That is why I am her personal guard."
"Zane, you can sit down if you want."
"Thank you."
Zane sat down next to her and they kept talking.
TBC
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 25 7/2
Great Chapter!!!!Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. Wow I'm so happy the king is going to let Max and Liz get married sooner. I'm glad Philip and Liz talked and Liz told Philip what she knew from what Max told her. I like how Serena and Zane talked. I like how Zane is with Jenny. It seems Zane and Jenny both like each other. I'm glad that Zane and Jenny are talking more and are trying to get to know each other. Where is Max? Will Max go and see Liz? Will Max and Liz talk? Will Liz pass the test before Kivar and Nicholas try and get Liz? Will Max and Liz get married before Kivar and Nicholas come after Liz? Will Max and Liz have a peaceful wedding? Will Kivar and Nicholas start a war? Will Max, Liz, Michael, Maria, Alex, Isabel, Kyle, Serena, Zane, Philip and Diane fight in the war? Will Max, Liz, Michael, Maria, Alex, Isabel, Kyle, Serena, Zane, Jenny, Kat, Philip and Diane live through the war? Will Max, Liz, Michael, Maria, Alex, Isabel, Kyle, Serena, Jenny, Kat, Philip and Diane have a long and happy life? So sorry for the questions I was just wondering. Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz.
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 25 7/2
It appears that the King was ready for Liz to take the test and proceed with wedding plans.
Jenny is happy to be with Liz and feels safe with her.
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Jenny is happy to be with Liz and feels safe with her.
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 25 7/2
Finally Liz has brought down her thick wall and that good so; having caracter is always good but more, she has the quality of recognize when she did something wrong!
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 26 7/3
L-J-L 76 I wouldn't worry about Kivar too much.
Carolyn Yes the King knew that this might happen. Jenny does feel safe with Liz.
Eve Liz is letting her wall down.
Part 26
Liz watched from the balcony as Zane and Jenny talked.
"Did you need anything else tonight Liz?" Asked Kat
"No. Thanks Kat."
"Can I ask something?"
"Sure. What do you want to know?"
"Do you think there is a man out there I could love me knowing what happened to me?"
"Kat, I believe that everyone has a soulmate. So yes there is. It looks like Jenny is finally healing."
"I think she and Zane would make a cute couple."
"They look good together."
"They do."
"Kat, go get some rest."
"OK night Liz."
Kat headed off to her room. Liz finished getting ready for bed and climbed into bed.
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Max stood on the balcony and watched Zane with the young human. He was happy that the young woman was healing. Tomorrow he would tell Liz her test would be in one week, and after she passes they would have the bonding right away. They would have a formal wedding in three months for everyone of importance to come to.
"She will be fine Max." Said Diane
"I know mom."
"Jennifer is healing. She and Zane will be good for each other."
"What about Kat?"
"It will be a while before she meets the right man for her."
"I hope so. They both deserve to be happy."
"Yes they do. Get some sleep."
"Right mom."
Max gave his mom a kiss and she left.
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Nicholas walked into his house and watched as the girl was dragged in. He grinned as he thought about fucking her. It had cost him a lot of money to have her brought here. But it was going to be worth it once Kivar took over. She would be just the first of his whores. She struggled as she was dragged to the bedroom stripped and chained to the bed.
"This is going to be fun for me. Not so much for you bitch." Said Nicholas
Nicholas removed his clothes forced the girl's legs apart and pushed into her hard taking her innocents from her. She cried the whole time as he filled his needs with her. When he finished with her he had his men take her away.
TBC
Carolyn Yes the King knew that this might happen. Jenny does feel safe with Liz.
Eve Liz is letting her wall down.
Part 26
Liz watched from the balcony as Zane and Jenny talked.
"Did you need anything else tonight Liz?" Asked Kat
"No. Thanks Kat."
"Can I ask something?"
"Sure. What do you want to know?"
"Do you think there is a man out there I could love me knowing what happened to me?"
"Kat, I believe that everyone has a soulmate. So yes there is. It looks like Jenny is finally healing."
"I think she and Zane would make a cute couple."
"They look good together."
"They do."
"Kat, go get some rest."
"OK night Liz."
Kat headed off to her room. Liz finished getting ready for bed and climbed into bed.
******
Max stood on the balcony and watched Zane with the young human. He was happy that the young woman was healing. Tomorrow he would tell Liz her test would be in one week, and after she passes they would have the bonding right away. They would have a formal wedding in three months for everyone of importance to come to.
"She will be fine Max." Said Diane
"I know mom."
"Jennifer is healing. She and Zane will be good for each other."
"What about Kat?"
"It will be a while before she meets the right man for her."
"I hope so. They both deserve to be happy."
"Yes they do. Get some sleep."
"Right mom."
Max gave his mom a kiss and she left.
*****
Nicholas walked into his house and watched as the girl was dragged in. He grinned as he thought about fucking her. It had cost him a lot of money to have her brought here. But it was going to be worth it once Kivar took over. She would be just the first of his whores. She struggled as she was dragged to the bedroom stripped and chained to the bed.
"This is going to be fun for me. Not so much for you bitch." Said Nicholas
Nicholas removed his clothes forced the girl's legs apart and pushed into her hard taking her innocents from her. She cried the whole time as he filled his needs with her. When he finished with her he had his men take her away.
TBC
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 26 7/3
Khivar and Nicolas; the same types, and we do know what to do to them...
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- L'amour vous rend aveugle et le mariage vous redonne la vue!
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Re: A New Home (AU, M/L Adult) Pt 26 7/3
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. I like the way Zane, Jenny are with each other. And I like how Liz and Kat can easily talk to each other. I'm glad Liz told Kat that she will find her a soul mate. And I like how Max and Diane are with each other. Wow Max has some good news for Liz. I'm glad Liz's test is coming up. Hopefully she will pass the test. And hopefully Kivar and Nicholas won't try anything before or during Liz's test. Hopefully after the test Max and Liz can bond quickly before Kivar and Nicholas do anything to stop them. I really hate the way Kivar and Nicholas are treating the earth women by kidnapping or dragging them away to some place they can have their way with them. I hope someone catches Kivar and Nicholas and kills them once and for all.
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