Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19

[keepsmiling7]

Finally they are back!
Thanks,
Carolyn

[Natalie36]

i was on the edge of my seat. they are back what is next

[L-J-L 76]

Yay happy dance Max and Liz are alive and back. And finally the command and his men are dead. What are Max and Liz going to do now that they are alive and back????

From:
L-J-L 76

[begonia9508]

OH! MY! GOD...

That... I did really not thought about!

First, it looked like Liz and Max were dead or at least, dreaming they were dead... then a nightmare and an Horror Scenario!!!

Also the death of Command came as a big surprise but you must have a answer to it, no?

Anyway - as always - every part is a new challenge to read - because so full of surprises not expected!

Loved it anyway... Thanks EVE

[Morning Dreamgirl]

Not gonna lie. I'm kind of checking this all the time. Command's group isn't completely annihilated. There's still a war going on. And they died for a minute there. Plus the whole Command dying part... come back!

I'll share some (virtual) chocolate! See? I haven't forgotten that trick.

[max and liz believer]

Not gonna lie. I'm kind of checking this all the time. Command's group isn't completely annihilated. There's still a war going on. And they died for a minute there. Plus the whole Command dying part... come back!

I'll share some (virtual) chocolate! See? I haven't forgotten that trick.

And I love you for it. I love that you're here checking for an update. And I love that you have virtual chocolate ready. Thank you '

So I've returned to let you know that I'm working on the next chapter. I'm helping my cousin to start up her own business and doing some extra work for (one of) my jobs, so this week has been really busy with extremely little time to write. But maybe I'll have 30 minutes or something to put into writing tonight Starting now...

Just wanted to give you some info <3

[Morning Dreamgirl]

But maybe I'll have 30 minutes or something to put into writing tonight Starting now...

Just wanted to give you some info <3

I knew you loved me! *Heart eyes*

Skips along happily... with a stick

See? I love you too! I have a stick to beat off anyone who tries to distract you. I'll be right outside the door. Let me know if you need anything. Food. Water. Sounding board. The handcuffs loosened. You know - whatever.

[max and liz believer]

Hi!

Just emailed the next chapter to my beta for editing. So an update is in the close future


- Jo

[Morning Dreamgirl]

Hi!

Just emailed the next chapter to my beta for editing. So an update is in the close future


- Jo

Squeals happily

Yay!

Thank goodness! That stick was getting heavy.

[SmileeUk]

You know, I felt like an ostrich since your last post. I had been resisting to read the last chapter because I did not want to wait tooooo long and had serious withdrawal symptom (again)

Here I am now Happy as Larry Max & Liz are alive!!! Yippee.......(doing a happy dance)

Beautiful chapter! Beautiful writing! (With Cheshire Cat grin)

You did say the next chapter is with your beta. Not long to wait then I guess my tactic works
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Ps, I have been re-reading Snapshot again to save me from this withdrawal symptom & it works