Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 12:55 pm
Yeah! A new part!!!!! Finally! It has taken me way too long, but here's finally a new chapter! Thanks for the feedback, you have no idea how much they mean to me!
Maxssoulmate
begonia9508
POM
sam_me
KatnotKath
Youre my dreamgirl
Believer
dreamer 19
Thank you guys
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xx Ivy
Part 10
Max is still asleep at my hand. Like I already told you, there’s no way in the world to wake him up . I rip my hand free and try to push the button to call someone.
10 seconds later the room is filled with doctors and nurses, trying to examine me. Through all this commotion Max finally wakes up, he stands up and he keeps looking into my eyes.
He walks away, not breaking eye contact with me and then leaves the room. I’m devastated. Don’t I mean anything to him anymore? But as soon as I think the words, I remember I left Max …
Max POV
I stand to the wall next to Liz’s room. She’s awake. Finally she’s awake. I can’t believe it. All the memories of the last two months; from the first time I came here to visit her until today, the day she woke up …
“Mr. Evans, this is the reason why Liz is unconscious … She was 24 weeks pregnant and went in labour, due to her rare medical history.”
“Is it a boy or girl?”
“Max, you have to sleep. You haven’t slept in ages.”
“Did you name her yet?”
“Max, she’ll be fine. It’s Liz we’re talking about.”
“Can she hear?”
“Miss DeLuca, if Liz doesn’t wake up soon, there’s a chance that maybe she might never wake up again.”
“Max!”
The memories of Liz’s words only some minutes ago, seemed like a dream to me. But they are true. I keep trying to remember all those moments of the last two months that I don’t notice Maria and Isabel enter. Some coincidence that they are just today in Roswell.
They stayed for a week and then came to visit when they had time. They still have their own lives. Maria as a singer and Isabel, well she manages Liz’s studio back in Boston, with the help of Evelynn, Liz’s assistant.
“Max, what happened? Suddenly all the doctors are running towards her room.” Isabel asks all hysterically.
“She … She’s awake.” I barely can say the words myself. I still can’t believe it.
Isabel starts crying and Maria also can’t hold her tears anymore longer. The two enter the room after an awkward silence. I decide I’m not ready to see Liz and I go home.
Well, not really home. But home for the last 2 months. The first thing I do is go to Liz’s old room to see my daughter, my little angel. She’s the only good thing that came from this mess.
Two months ago, I thought she wouldn’t make it, that I would both lose Liz and my little angel. But she proved me wrong. Although she was a premature, she was perfectly healthy. She had to stay in the hospital for some time, but they released her two weeks ago. I spent all my free time with her and when I was at the hospital, Nancy and Jeff would look after her. They’re still not used to being grandparents. But you can’t really see they love already her.
I enter the house and I see Nancy, who I assume is thinking something bad happened to Liz. Because normally, I wouldn’t be home until late this night and I told her if something happened I would come home early. Something happened, just not bad, good.
I realise Liz is indeed awake and I have to come to reality again. Liz and I still have our issues. And I don’t know if we are getting through them. But the top priority is that Liz is awake and now she finally can see our daughter.
Liz POV
The doctors are finally gone. At last, some time alone for me. Isabel and Maria will probably come back. I don’t want them to come back. It’s not that I don’t want them here, I’m glad they were here earlier, but they don’t need to come back. They are both hectic about me, they need to be sure that I’m okay. But I’m fine. They are overreacting and that’s not good for their babies. And I know there’s something they are not telling me.
There’s only one person I want to see right now and he is just the person who is too afraid to visit me.
I can’t believe I was in coma for two whole months. I mean two months, that’s like an eternity! I think it’s very long to be in a coma. I can’t believe I even woke up. But I woke up, so I mustn’t think negative and focus on the future. I have to decide if Max will be a part of my future or not.
You know, I’m actually a little disappointed. I read stories about deaf people who could hear after they went in coma. I also am deaf and I went in coma, but now I’m still deaf. I probably won’t ever hear again. And that frightens me. That I’ll never hear Max’s voice. I never heard his voice and I’ll never will.
I look outside the window. It’s a sunny day. I see a nurse enter, filling in some files and smiling and then she leaves. Is this all that’s gonna happen when I’m here? Then Maria enters and she’s still hiding something from me. She goes back outside and then enters again. What is she doing?
“Liz, there’s someone who would like to meet you …” Maria mouths to me and I get curious. Did they make some new friends while I was in coma?
Maria walks to the door, opens it and goes sitting in the chair next to my bed. I stare at the door, but nobody’s entering. I look at Maria, but she points at the door.
At that moment Max is entering. But he’s not alone. He’s holding a baby. A baby? Who’s baby is it? It can’t be Maria’s or Isabel’s. They’re both still pregnant. Max is looking happy. He smiles to the baby, who I assume is a girl, because she’s wearing a pink outfit. Then Max begins to speak and I look careful at his mouth. “Liz, this is Kaelynn, our daughter.”
And I don’t know what to say.
Maxssoulmate
begonia9508
POM
sam_me
KatnotKath
Youre my dreamgirl
Believer
dreamer 19
Thank you guys

xx Ivy
Part 10
Max is still asleep at my hand. Like I already told you, there’s no way in the world to wake him up . I rip my hand free and try to push the button to call someone.
10 seconds later the room is filled with doctors and nurses, trying to examine me. Through all this commotion Max finally wakes up, he stands up and he keeps looking into my eyes.
He walks away, not breaking eye contact with me and then leaves the room. I’m devastated. Don’t I mean anything to him anymore? But as soon as I think the words, I remember I left Max …
Max POV
I stand to the wall next to Liz’s room. She’s awake. Finally she’s awake. I can’t believe it. All the memories of the last two months; from the first time I came here to visit her until today, the day she woke up …
“Mr. Evans, this is the reason why Liz is unconscious … She was 24 weeks pregnant and went in labour, due to her rare medical history.”
“Is it a boy or girl?”
“Max, you have to sleep. You haven’t slept in ages.”
“Did you name her yet?”
“Max, she’ll be fine. It’s Liz we’re talking about.”
“Can she hear?”
“Miss DeLuca, if Liz doesn’t wake up soon, there’s a chance that maybe she might never wake up again.”
“Max!”
The memories of Liz’s words only some minutes ago, seemed like a dream to me. But they are true. I keep trying to remember all those moments of the last two months that I don’t notice Maria and Isabel enter. Some coincidence that they are just today in Roswell.
They stayed for a week and then came to visit when they had time. They still have their own lives. Maria as a singer and Isabel, well she manages Liz’s studio back in Boston, with the help of Evelynn, Liz’s assistant.
“Max, what happened? Suddenly all the doctors are running towards her room.” Isabel asks all hysterically.
“She … She’s awake.” I barely can say the words myself. I still can’t believe it.
Isabel starts crying and Maria also can’t hold her tears anymore longer. The two enter the room after an awkward silence. I decide I’m not ready to see Liz and I go home.
Well, not really home. But home for the last 2 months. The first thing I do is go to Liz’s old room to see my daughter, my little angel. She’s the only good thing that came from this mess.
Two months ago, I thought she wouldn’t make it, that I would both lose Liz and my little angel. But she proved me wrong. Although she was a premature, she was perfectly healthy. She had to stay in the hospital for some time, but they released her two weeks ago. I spent all my free time with her and when I was at the hospital, Nancy and Jeff would look after her. They’re still not used to being grandparents. But you can’t really see they love already her.
I enter the house and I see Nancy, who I assume is thinking something bad happened to Liz. Because normally, I wouldn’t be home until late this night and I told her if something happened I would come home early. Something happened, just not bad, good.
I realise Liz is indeed awake and I have to come to reality again. Liz and I still have our issues. And I don’t know if we are getting through them. But the top priority is that Liz is awake and now she finally can see our daughter.
Liz POV
The doctors are finally gone. At last, some time alone for me. Isabel and Maria will probably come back. I don’t want them to come back. It’s not that I don’t want them here, I’m glad they were here earlier, but they don’t need to come back. They are both hectic about me, they need to be sure that I’m okay. But I’m fine. They are overreacting and that’s not good for their babies. And I know there’s something they are not telling me.
There’s only one person I want to see right now and he is just the person who is too afraid to visit me.
I can’t believe I was in coma for two whole months. I mean two months, that’s like an eternity! I think it’s very long to be in a coma. I can’t believe I even woke up. But I woke up, so I mustn’t think negative and focus on the future. I have to decide if Max will be a part of my future or not.
You know, I’m actually a little disappointed. I read stories about deaf people who could hear after they went in coma. I also am deaf and I went in coma, but now I’m still deaf. I probably won’t ever hear again. And that frightens me. That I’ll never hear Max’s voice. I never heard his voice and I’ll never will.
I look outside the window. It’s a sunny day. I see a nurse enter, filling in some files and smiling and then she leaves. Is this all that’s gonna happen when I’m here? Then Maria enters and she’s still hiding something from me. She goes back outside and then enters again. What is she doing?
“Liz, there’s someone who would like to meet you …” Maria mouths to me and I get curious. Did they make some new friends while I was in coma?
Maria walks to the door, opens it and goes sitting in the chair next to my bed. I stare at the door, but nobody’s entering. I look at Maria, but she points at the door.
At that moment Max is entering. But he’s not alone. He’s holding a baby. A baby? Who’s baby is it? It can’t be Maria’s or Isabel’s. They’re both still pregnant. Max is looking happy. He smiles to the baby, who I assume is a girl, because she’s wearing a pink outfit. Then Max begins to speak and I look careful at his mouth. “Liz, this is Kaelynn, our daughter.”
And I don’t know what to say.