chapter 18
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:07 pm
Stories by ken_r
I am dating my self in this post. Because Las Cruces is very near the Mexican border NMSU has always had trouble with students going to Mexico and getting in trouble. I do not know what they do now but this incident was repeated over and over when I was in college. Students going to a foreign country and forgetting laws are different there. I remember once a bunch of boys were across the border and they got drunk. One of them yelled, “Remember the Alamo.” They did.
The boys finally got out but they had some scary adventures before they were back at school. The incident of bringing booze across the border at that time was handled just as I describe it then. Everyone in the car was given a fine.
Some time ago it was mentioned that Kyle’s roommate didn’t get back from Juarez until long after school started. This happened to my son’s roommate.
I am sure Liz’s parents could have arranged to find the money but she would have to have stayed much longer and probably been put in jail until they got it. Plus I wanted Max to come to her rescue.
Chapter18
Max had to work that Saturday morning. Liz was just going to stay in the dorm and study. Katherine came by. “Liz, no Mr. Wonderful today?”
“No, Katherine, he is grading papers today,” Liz responded.
“Well, it is too nice a weekend to spend in your dorm. Saidra and I are going to Juarez for the day. Come with us, it will be a chance to see Mexico. With us so near, that is a must,” Katherine could be so convincing, especially since Liz really didn’t want to spend the day in the dorm anyway.
Liz, for some reason, didn’t tell Max that she was going. Maybe, it was some higher sense that told her this wasn’t a good idea. Or maybe, it was a spark of independence that if he was going to work the weekend away, there was no reason Liz should have to stay in. Max had always left their relationship open and he would probably want her to share this weekend with her friends.
Liz
Katherine was driving. Saidra was a friendly person, but she was daring in her conversation in what she expected to find. I wished I could be as free as Katherine and meet people without worry. Just think so close to home and it is a totally foreign country. The sights were something else. They were so flashy and out there in your face. The sounds were indescribable, the music, the shouting of the street hawkers, the people talking as they were walking by. Katherine parked her car at a lot and paid a little boy his Mordida (little bite) to watch the car. It was a little embarrassing to hear the street hawkers so blatantly advertising sex for sale. They were so explicit as to what they are offering. They acted as if their girls were just commodities to be chosen and picked over for anyone with the price. We went into a leather shop. The smell was slightly like a farmyard, but the leather was so beautiful. I bought a purse. I would like to return sometime and look at some of the shoes and other accessories. We looked at a jewelry store and we were impressed at the prices of the pieces. I looked at one bracelet and I saw that it was just cleverly disguised plastic. We went into a bar and I just ordered coke the other girls thrilled in the fact that they could order cocktails with complete freedom. We stopped in a small restaurant and had a delicious meal.
Story
Liz hadn’t noticed that from time to time Saibra would steal away and disappear for a few minutes. Liz was glad she took a chance and overcame some of her inhibitions and fears. This afternoon would long live in her memories. It was early afternoon when they decided to return. As Katherine approached the American checkpoint, a man in uniform directed her to get out of line and park under an overhanging shade. Liz noticed the other girls were getting nervous, but she had no idea what was going to happen.
The girls were told to get out of the car and they were ushered into a room. Liz began to get premonitions of something going very wrong. As they were getting out of the car, she saw the little boy Katherine had paid to watch the car leaving the building. From the barred window of the room, they saw men opening and going through their car. There was a uniformed man with a dog who was smelling everything. Other men in jump suits were checking the seats and trunk. Liz saw several bottles of tequila sitting on a bench near the car. After some time, a man came into their room and sat down.
“Girls this serious. Every year we get students from Las Cruces who try to buy liquor in Mexico and bring it back to the United States. You are in trouble in two ways. First, you are violating the law by not declaring what you have. Second, you are in trouble for possession of alcohol by a minor. We try to be tolerant of students, but there is a fine for anyone who tries to bring alcohol illegally into the country. You can each pay the two hundred dollar fine or you can be held to face charges in court,” said the man as he leaned back and looked at the girls.
It was Katherine who spoke first, “How do you want the fine paid?”
The officer smiled, “We require a cash bond or certified check. You can also get it wired by Western Union from anyone you know.”
Katherine and Saidra both immediately went to the room where the phone was located. Liz just sat crying. The officer came over to her and said, “Don’t you have anyone who could raise the fine?”
Liz shook her head. She knew that her parents could do it, but it would take them several days to get that sort of money. It didn’t sound like much, but when your small business is run that close to a margin, raising cash money would be difficult.
The officer sat with Liz. “Isn’t there anyone you could call to help you?” The officer was feeling a little sad. The other girls seemed to be quite at ease with raising their fines, but this one was clearly scared.
Liz looked at the officer through her tears. “Maybe, there is Max. He is my boyfriend, but will he still be after this is over?” she sobbed.
The officer looked sympatheticly at Liz, “I hope he would be a good enough boyfriend to come to your aid and then be forgiving enough afterward.”
Liz nodded her head. She didn’t have much choice. Liz called Max, “Max, I am in serious trouble. I am being detained, by the US authorities, at the Mexican border. I went with Katherine and her friend into Juarez and they were caught trying to bring alcohol into the country illegally. They are fining everyone in the car two hundred dollars. My parents can’t raise that much money that quickly. Can you help me.
Max could tell that Liz was crying. He asked to talk to someone in authority. The officer complied. They were on the phone, it seemed to Liz, for long time. However, it was only a few minutes. When he returned, he put his hand on her shoulder and said, “Your fiancé seems like a nice guy. He said he would be here in a little over an hour.”
Liz frowned a bit at the mention of fiancé, but she kept quiet. Katherine and Saidra were released after their telegrams were received. They were told to leave immediately and even under their protest about their friend, Liz, they had no choice. Liz was taken to a room. She was allowed to use the bathroom and allowed to buy a coke to drink while she was in the room. There was a smelly couch and a table with three chairs. Liz sat at the table with her head in her hands. She had no idea of how serious the repercussions of this escapade would be in her life.
Max took a deep breath. He had a hundred dollar bill hidden in his truck for emergencies. He had about fifty dollars in cash in his billfold, but he had to think about how he was going to raise the rest. He could call Kyle, Maria and Michael, but did he want to subject Liz to this sort of embarrassment. It was Saturday and banks and credit unions which max could turn to were closed. There was one other way. Max always bought his groceries at a market nearby. He went to the market and asked to see the manager. Max had stopped to pass the time with him several times since Max had moved to Las Cruces. Max asked for a favor. He showed all of his identity, his driver’s license and his student identity card. He explained that a fellow student had been stopped at the border and detained pending a two hundred fine and he had raised one hundred-fifty dollars of it. Could the manager cash a fifty dollar check?
This was an imposition for the store. It was only because of the fact that the manager liked Max and really believed he was trying to help someone, that he finally agreed. The manager took Max’s check and personally went to one of the cash registers to retrieve a fifty dollar bill. With this, Max drove to El Paso and then to the border as quickly and carefully as he could.
Liz believed she had been in the room forever. A uniformed lady had taken her to the restroom again and kindly asked if she was okay. Okay? What was Liz to say? My life, as I know it, will soon be over. My boyfriend will no longer look at me as an adult, but rather as a child to get into this fix. My parents will eventually learn, how one afternoon I lost my scholarship and also my dreams of an education. Liz only managed to squeak out a quick, “I think so.”
An officer came back to her room. He was a person she had not seen before. He called out, “Elizabeth Parker.”
Liz nodded her head and he led her to a desk. She sat down and Max was introduced into the room. Liz started to say something, but he held his finger up to his lips signifying silence. Another man in a suit whom Liz had never seen before came in and sat down. “Elizabeth Parker, student of New Mexico State University, you are charged with attempting to bring illegal liquor into the United States and also being a minor in possession of alcohol in the state of New Mexico. How do you plead?”
Liz looked at Max, he imperceptibly nodded and she in a weak voice said, “Guilty.”
The man in the suit nodded and handed her a paper to sign and indicated Max to pay the cashier at the door. Then, he glared at Liz, “Miss Parker, from what was said by officer Fredreckson, I do not think you were knowingly guilty. However, the law is quite clear. You were in a vehicle that was bringing contraband into the United States. Your fiancé has made it quite clear, also, that you are a student with good grades and have never been in trouble, so I am binding you into his care. Please promise both him and myself that you will not bring trouble like this upon us again.”
Liz could only nod and say weakly, “Yes sir.”
Max took her by the arm and led her out the door. He leaned over to her ear and whispered, “Do not say anything until we get out of here.”
Max finally got out of the El Paso traffic. It was when he was on his way to Las Cruces that he said anything to Liz who was sitting as far away against the door as she could. Max could tell that she was still crying. Max pulled off the road and reached through his cab window into the back. He brought forth a jug of water and gave Liz his clean handkerchief. Liz wet the cloth and wiped her eyes clear. She took the cup built into the jug, poured a little water into it and drank to soften her dry throat. She then looked at Max, “Am I going to loose everything because of this?”
Max sort of laughed, “No, they agreed that you were paying a fine for contraband and as far as they are concerned, they are through with you. They filed no criminal charges against you.”
“Max, what was that fiancé stuff about?” Liz inquired.
“That was whispered to me by the first officer I talked to. As your fiancé, I could assume responsibility without any questions,” Max replied.
Liz just sat and hung her head. There still was one more question she had and she was frightened to ask it. Finally, she looked at Max and said as steadily as she could, “Max, are you mad at me?”
Max now laughed, “No, Liz, I am just happy we could work all of this out without problems. Now, would you pleases get over here to the middle and sit with me as you usually do. Pouting against the door is distracting me in my driving and we do not have anymore money with which to pay fines. In fact, I am hoping you have enough left in your purse to buy supper.” Liz slid over and re-belted the center seatbelt. She didn’t put her arms around Max, yet, but she did lean against him as he drove to his apartment.
This was the first time Liz had seen his apartment. She was surprised that it was so neat. She had been in Max’s apartment in Roswell with Isabel one time after graduation and it was messy, but Max was celebrating not being employed. Max washed his face and put on a clean shirt. Then with the promise of Liz paying, they went to a small restaurant to eat.
After dinner, Max took Liz back to her dorm. Liz still wasn’t sure that she hadn’t disappointed Max. He had come to her aid without any question. She was beginning to believe that Katherine was careless sometimes and didn’t have a good sense of safety. When she put her key in her door, it was yanked open buy a tearful Katherine. “Liz, we were so worried. I am so glad you got out. How did you do it?” Katherine couldn’t stop the questions as she cried.
Liz pushed Katherine away. “I had to ask Max to get me out. I don’t know how it is going to affect our relationship. Katherine, why were you doing those things? You knew they were illegal,” Liz was cross because she kept thinking of how much this Saturday could affect her whole life.
Katherine sat on the bed holding her hands, “Saibra said that if there were several of us, the custom guards wouldn’t even search our car. She claims to do this all the time.”
“Katherine, I saw the little boy you hired to watch the car at the custom authorities building,” Liz stated.
Katherine pursed her lips, “So that was it, the little brat turned us in probably, for a reward.”
Liz took both of Katherine’s hands, “No, Katherine, we got caught because we were doing something wrong.”
With that, Liz went to bed. She didn’t have peaceful dreams. She kept running from something that looked an awful lot like Katherine’s car. It was being driven, by the little boy they hired in Mexico.
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If you have time I would like you to look at my attempt at a novel. It is rated mature but it is no more sexy that anything else I have written. It is about a lady on a distant planet that rises from slavery to a position of respect and about her children and friends that stand by her.
The Slave Girl
this is an attempt at an original story. it is very long. and in four parts. let me know if you like it. All of the parts will be posted at:
Writers Cave at Roswell Heaven
I am dating my self in this post. Because Las Cruces is very near the Mexican border NMSU has always had trouble with students going to Mexico and getting in trouble. I do not know what they do now but this incident was repeated over and over when I was in college. Students going to a foreign country and forgetting laws are different there. I remember once a bunch of boys were across the border and they got drunk. One of them yelled, “Remember the Alamo.” They did.
The boys finally got out but they had some scary adventures before they were back at school. The incident of bringing booze across the border at that time was handled just as I describe it then. Everyone in the car was given a fine.
Some time ago it was mentioned that Kyle’s roommate didn’t get back from Juarez until long after school started. This happened to my son’s roommate.
I am sure Liz’s parents could have arranged to find the money but she would have to have stayed much longer and probably been put in jail until they got it. Plus I wanted Max to come to her rescue.
Chapter18
Max had to work that Saturday morning. Liz was just going to stay in the dorm and study. Katherine came by. “Liz, no Mr. Wonderful today?”
“No, Katherine, he is grading papers today,” Liz responded.
“Well, it is too nice a weekend to spend in your dorm. Saidra and I are going to Juarez for the day. Come with us, it will be a chance to see Mexico. With us so near, that is a must,” Katherine could be so convincing, especially since Liz really didn’t want to spend the day in the dorm anyway.
Liz, for some reason, didn’t tell Max that she was going. Maybe, it was some higher sense that told her this wasn’t a good idea. Or maybe, it was a spark of independence that if he was going to work the weekend away, there was no reason Liz should have to stay in. Max had always left their relationship open and he would probably want her to share this weekend with her friends.
Liz
Katherine was driving. Saidra was a friendly person, but she was daring in her conversation in what she expected to find. I wished I could be as free as Katherine and meet people without worry. Just think so close to home and it is a totally foreign country. The sights were something else. They were so flashy and out there in your face. The sounds were indescribable, the music, the shouting of the street hawkers, the people talking as they were walking by. Katherine parked her car at a lot and paid a little boy his Mordida (little bite) to watch the car. It was a little embarrassing to hear the street hawkers so blatantly advertising sex for sale. They were so explicit as to what they are offering. They acted as if their girls were just commodities to be chosen and picked over for anyone with the price. We went into a leather shop. The smell was slightly like a farmyard, but the leather was so beautiful. I bought a purse. I would like to return sometime and look at some of the shoes and other accessories. We looked at a jewelry store and we were impressed at the prices of the pieces. I looked at one bracelet and I saw that it was just cleverly disguised plastic. We went into a bar and I just ordered coke the other girls thrilled in the fact that they could order cocktails with complete freedom. We stopped in a small restaurant and had a delicious meal.
Story
Liz hadn’t noticed that from time to time Saibra would steal away and disappear for a few minutes. Liz was glad she took a chance and overcame some of her inhibitions and fears. This afternoon would long live in her memories. It was early afternoon when they decided to return. As Katherine approached the American checkpoint, a man in uniform directed her to get out of line and park under an overhanging shade. Liz noticed the other girls were getting nervous, but she had no idea what was going to happen.
The girls were told to get out of the car and they were ushered into a room. Liz began to get premonitions of something going very wrong. As they were getting out of the car, she saw the little boy Katherine had paid to watch the car leaving the building. From the barred window of the room, they saw men opening and going through their car. There was a uniformed man with a dog who was smelling everything. Other men in jump suits were checking the seats and trunk. Liz saw several bottles of tequila sitting on a bench near the car. After some time, a man came into their room and sat down.
“Girls this serious. Every year we get students from Las Cruces who try to buy liquor in Mexico and bring it back to the United States. You are in trouble in two ways. First, you are violating the law by not declaring what you have. Second, you are in trouble for possession of alcohol by a minor. We try to be tolerant of students, but there is a fine for anyone who tries to bring alcohol illegally into the country. You can each pay the two hundred dollar fine or you can be held to face charges in court,” said the man as he leaned back and looked at the girls.
It was Katherine who spoke first, “How do you want the fine paid?”
The officer smiled, “We require a cash bond or certified check. You can also get it wired by Western Union from anyone you know.”
Katherine and Saidra both immediately went to the room where the phone was located. Liz just sat crying. The officer came over to her and said, “Don’t you have anyone who could raise the fine?”
Liz shook her head. She knew that her parents could do it, but it would take them several days to get that sort of money. It didn’t sound like much, but when your small business is run that close to a margin, raising cash money would be difficult.
The officer sat with Liz. “Isn’t there anyone you could call to help you?” The officer was feeling a little sad. The other girls seemed to be quite at ease with raising their fines, but this one was clearly scared.
Liz looked at the officer through her tears. “Maybe, there is Max. He is my boyfriend, but will he still be after this is over?” she sobbed.
The officer looked sympatheticly at Liz, “I hope he would be a good enough boyfriend to come to your aid and then be forgiving enough afterward.”
Liz nodded her head. She didn’t have much choice. Liz called Max, “Max, I am in serious trouble. I am being detained, by the US authorities, at the Mexican border. I went with Katherine and her friend into Juarez and they were caught trying to bring alcohol into the country illegally. They are fining everyone in the car two hundred dollars. My parents can’t raise that much money that quickly. Can you help me.
Max could tell that Liz was crying. He asked to talk to someone in authority. The officer complied. They were on the phone, it seemed to Liz, for long time. However, it was only a few minutes. When he returned, he put his hand on her shoulder and said, “Your fiancé seems like a nice guy. He said he would be here in a little over an hour.”
Liz frowned a bit at the mention of fiancé, but she kept quiet. Katherine and Saidra were released after their telegrams were received. They were told to leave immediately and even under their protest about their friend, Liz, they had no choice. Liz was taken to a room. She was allowed to use the bathroom and allowed to buy a coke to drink while she was in the room. There was a smelly couch and a table with three chairs. Liz sat at the table with her head in her hands. She had no idea of how serious the repercussions of this escapade would be in her life.
Max took a deep breath. He had a hundred dollar bill hidden in his truck for emergencies. He had about fifty dollars in cash in his billfold, but he had to think about how he was going to raise the rest. He could call Kyle, Maria and Michael, but did he want to subject Liz to this sort of embarrassment. It was Saturday and banks and credit unions which max could turn to were closed. There was one other way. Max always bought his groceries at a market nearby. He went to the market and asked to see the manager. Max had stopped to pass the time with him several times since Max had moved to Las Cruces. Max asked for a favor. He showed all of his identity, his driver’s license and his student identity card. He explained that a fellow student had been stopped at the border and detained pending a two hundred fine and he had raised one hundred-fifty dollars of it. Could the manager cash a fifty dollar check?
This was an imposition for the store. It was only because of the fact that the manager liked Max and really believed he was trying to help someone, that he finally agreed. The manager took Max’s check and personally went to one of the cash registers to retrieve a fifty dollar bill. With this, Max drove to El Paso and then to the border as quickly and carefully as he could.
Liz believed she had been in the room forever. A uniformed lady had taken her to the restroom again and kindly asked if she was okay. Okay? What was Liz to say? My life, as I know it, will soon be over. My boyfriend will no longer look at me as an adult, but rather as a child to get into this fix. My parents will eventually learn, how one afternoon I lost my scholarship and also my dreams of an education. Liz only managed to squeak out a quick, “I think so.”
An officer came back to her room. He was a person she had not seen before. He called out, “Elizabeth Parker.”
Liz nodded her head and he led her to a desk. She sat down and Max was introduced into the room. Liz started to say something, but he held his finger up to his lips signifying silence. Another man in a suit whom Liz had never seen before came in and sat down. “Elizabeth Parker, student of New Mexico State University, you are charged with attempting to bring illegal liquor into the United States and also being a minor in possession of alcohol in the state of New Mexico. How do you plead?”
Liz looked at Max, he imperceptibly nodded and she in a weak voice said, “Guilty.”
The man in the suit nodded and handed her a paper to sign and indicated Max to pay the cashier at the door. Then, he glared at Liz, “Miss Parker, from what was said by officer Fredreckson, I do not think you were knowingly guilty. However, the law is quite clear. You were in a vehicle that was bringing contraband into the United States. Your fiancé has made it quite clear, also, that you are a student with good grades and have never been in trouble, so I am binding you into his care. Please promise both him and myself that you will not bring trouble like this upon us again.”
Liz could only nod and say weakly, “Yes sir.”
Max took her by the arm and led her out the door. He leaned over to her ear and whispered, “Do not say anything until we get out of here.”
Max finally got out of the El Paso traffic. It was when he was on his way to Las Cruces that he said anything to Liz who was sitting as far away against the door as she could. Max could tell that she was still crying. Max pulled off the road and reached through his cab window into the back. He brought forth a jug of water and gave Liz his clean handkerchief. Liz wet the cloth and wiped her eyes clear. She took the cup built into the jug, poured a little water into it and drank to soften her dry throat. She then looked at Max, “Am I going to loose everything because of this?”
Max sort of laughed, “No, they agreed that you were paying a fine for contraband and as far as they are concerned, they are through with you. They filed no criminal charges against you.”
“Max, what was that fiancé stuff about?” Liz inquired.
“That was whispered to me by the first officer I talked to. As your fiancé, I could assume responsibility without any questions,” Max replied.
Liz just sat and hung her head. There still was one more question she had and she was frightened to ask it. Finally, she looked at Max and said as steadily as she could, “Max, are you mad at me?”
Max now laughed, “No, Liz, I am just happy we could work all of this out without problems. Now, would you pleases get over here to the middle and sit with me as you usually do. Pouting against the door is distracting me in my driving and we do not have anymore money with which to pay fines. In fact, I am hoping you have enough left in your purse to buy supper.” Liz slid over and re-belted the center seatbelt. She didn’t put her arms around Max, yet, but she did lean against him as he drove to his apartment.
This was the first time Liz had seen his apartment. She was surprised that it was so neat. She had been in Max’s apartment in Roswell with Isabel one time after graduation and it was messy, but Max was celebrating not being employed. Max washed his face and put on a clean shirt. Then with the promise of Liz paying, they went to a small restaurant to eat.
After dinner, Max took Liz back to her dorm. Liz still wasn’t sure that she hadn’t disappointed Max. He had come to her aid without any question. She was beginning to believe that Katherine was careless sometimes and didn’t have a good sense of safety. When she put her key in her door, it was yanked open buy a tearful Katherine. “Liz, we were so worried. I am so glad you got out. How did you do it?” Katherine couldn’t stop the questions as she cried.
Liz pushed Katherine away. “I had to ask Max to get me out. I don’t know how it is going to affect our relationship. Katherine, why were you doing those things? You knew they were illegal,” Liz was cross because she kept thinking of how much this Saturday could affect her whole life.
Katherine sat on the bed holding her hands, “Saibra said that if there were several of us, the custom guards wouldn’t even search our car. She claims to do this all the time.”
“Katherine, I saw the little boy you hired to watch the car at the custom authorities building,” Liz stated.
Katherine pursed her lips, “So that was it, the little brat turned us in probably, for a reward.”
Liz took both of Katherine’s hands, “No, Katherine, we got caught because we were doing something wrong.”
With that, Liz went to bed. She didn’t have peaceful dreams. She kept running from something that looked an awful lot like Katherine’s car. It was being driven, by the little boy they hired in Mexico.
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If you have time I would like you to look at my attempt at a novel. It is rated mature but it is no more sexy that anything else I have written. It is about a lady on a distant planet that rises from slavery to a position of respect and about her children and friends that stand by her.
The Slave Girl
this is an attempt at an original story. it is very long. and in four parts. let me know if you like it. All of the parts will be posted at:
Writers Cave at Roswell Heaven