Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 1:49 pm
Earth2Mama~ I'm glad to see that you like the interaction between the kids! I love them both too! I tried to make it apparent who their parents are by making Marissa the little chatter box and Chris the shy one who listens.
Enjoy the next part!
Begonia9508~ I don't like the animosity between Max and Liz either... It won't last much longer, Liz has made a decision about their future... Hope it makes you happy.
strawberry_dreamer~ I'm glad you liked it! I hope you like this one too!
Cherie~ Ok... The whole thing between Max and Liz stems from before Liz even knew Max had "cheated" on her. If you remember in the first parts before she found out her and Max had a distant and not so loving relationship. Then Liz comes to find out that Max lied to her and she's still pretty hurt. The main reason no one is mad at Tess is because Tess wasn't mindwarped. She had no idea that Max thought they slept together. This was Nikolas's idea of Divide and Conquer and I guess I didn't make that clear. If you were a member of that group and Max said he slept with Tess and Tess said she didn't sleep with Max... who would you believe? I suppose I'd believe Max. But they figured out it was a mindwarp and the reason no one is mad at Tess is because she didn't lie, but Kyle did get kinda shitty with her while he was drunk. Tess didn't lie to Kyle, so he really has no reason to be mad at her. She was just a pawn in Nikolas's little game. As for everyone else being mad at Max, that's just hostility due to the way he treated everyone, especially Maria. Everyone's tired of his King act... I really didn't want to portray Max as I did in this story because I love him, but I didn't have a choice. So I hope that clears some things up for you and for anyone else... If you have any more questions just ask... Enjoy the next part!
Part 28
"Where were you earlier?" Maria asked Michael as they sat down on the bed in the motel outside Copper Summit.
"Out," He told her, a typical Michael response. Michael’s plan had been approved by King Max and the group was staying in a motel 10 miles outside Copper Summit. Tomorrow they would strike and end this once and for all, even if it cost some of them their lives. Now they were lying in bed, Michael facing the wall and Maria staring at the ceiling.
"Michael…," Maria started.
"Can we not do this right now? I may die tomorrow and I really don’t want to argue with you," he snapped.
She looked hurt. "I wasn’t going to argue with you. I was going to say it’s good you went to her grave."
"What?" he asked, not turning to face her.
"Liz told me. I was just going to see if you wanted to talk, but you obviously don’t. Goodnight." She curled up under the blankets facing Michael’s back and closed her eyes.
Michael sighed and turned to look at her. "I’m sorry Maria. I’m just a little stressed."
"We all are," she told him, opening her eyes. "We’re all scared. No one knows what’s going to happen tomorrow."
Michael pulled her into him and she buried her face in his chest. "It’s going to be fine. As long as Ava’s mind warp holds up, everything will go smoothly."
"When does anything go smoothly for us?" Maria said into his chest.
He pushed her away from him so he could look into her eyes. "I went tothe graveyard today because I feel guilty for moving on so quickly. I love you Maria, but I loved Laura… no I still love Laura. She was my wife. I mean, I love her. But I want to move on. I want to move on with you and I want us to be a family. You, Marissa, and me. So I just needed to go to her grave and… and talk to her, so that I can move on. Maria, I love you and I can’t imagine living without you anymore. I can’t imagine not waking up next to you or not being able to see Marissa everyday. I know that it’s really sudden, but I wanted you to know this in case something happens to me tomorrow. I love you, and I want to marry you."
Maria didn’t say anything; she just kissed him. He gladly returned the kiss, deepening it. She wrapped her arms around his neck, running one hand through his hair. He rolled over so he was on top of her and he found himself running his hand underneath her shirt, like he had in the car only a few days ago. He tugged at the bottom to take it off, and this time, she didn’t stop him.
* * *
"Are you ok?" Max asked as he sat down on the bed with Liz.
"Not really."
"Want to talk about it?"
"Not really," she told him.
"Are we ever going to get past this?"
She took his hand and kissed him gently on the cheek. "Yes, we will."
"I love you Liz; I never stopped loving you. I’ve always loved you."
"I know, and I love you, too. I just needed time, but I’m ready now. And tomorrow after everything, we’re going to get some much-needed rest and then talk about everything. And it’s going to be ok."
Max smiled at her. "You’re amazing you know that." He placed his hands on her face and pressed his lips to hers.
"We’re going to be ok. And we’re going to get Chris back. We’re finally going to be a family," she told him, lying down in his arms. It felt right, like nothing had for a long time.
Coming Soon: The battle to get Tess back...

Begonia9508~ I don't like the animosity between Max and Liz either... It won't last much longer, Liz has made a decision about their future... Hope it makes you happy.
strawberry_dreamer~ I'm glad you liked it! I hope you like this one too!
Cherie~ Ok... The whole thing between Max and Liz stems from before Liz even knew Max had "cheated" on her. If you remember in the first parts before she found out her and Max had a distant and not so loving relationship. Then Liz comes to find out that Max lied to her and she's still pretty hurt. The main reason no one is mad at Tess is because Tess wasn't mindwarped. She had no idea that Max thought they slept together. This was Nikolas's idea of Divide and Conquer and I guess I didn't make that clear. If you were a member of that group and Max said he slept with Tess and Tess said she didn't sleep with Max... who would you believe? I suppose I'd believe Max. But they figured out it was a mindwarp and the reason no one is mad at Tess is because she didn't lie, but Kyle did get kinda shitty with her while he was drunk. Tess didn't lie to Kyle, so he really has no reason to be mad at her. She was just a pawn in Nikolas's little game. As for everyone else being mad at Max, that's just hostility due to the way he treated everyone, especially Maria. Everyone's tired of his King act... I really didn't want to portray Max as I did in this story because I love him, but I didn't have a choice. So I hope that clears some things up for you and for anyone else... If you have any more questions just ask... Enjoy the next part!
Part 28
"Where were you earlier?" Maria asked Michael as they sat down on the bed in the motel outside Copper Summit.
"Out," He told her, a typical Michael response. Michael’s plan had been approved by King Max and the group was staying in a motel 10 miles outside Copper Summit. Tomorrow they would strike and end this once and for all, even if it cost some of them their lives. Now they were lying in bed, Michael facing the wall and Maria staring at the ceiling.
"Michael…," Maria started.
"Can we not do this right now? I may die tomorrow and I really don’t want to argue with you," he snapped.
She looked hurt. "I wasn’t going to argue with you. I was going to say it’s good you went to her grave."
"What?" he asked, not turning to face her.
"Liz told me. I was just going to see if you wanted to talk, but you obviously don’t. Goodnight." She curled up under the blankets facing Michael’s back and closed her eyes.
Michael sighed and turned to look at her. "I’m sorry Maria. I’m just a little stressed."
"We all are," she told him, opening her eyes. "We’re all scared. No one knows what’s going to happen tomorrow."
Michael pulled her into him and she buried her face in his chest. "It’s going to be fine. As long as Ava’s mind warp holds up, everything will go smoothly."
"When does anything go smoothly for us?" Maria said into his chest.
He pushed her away from him so he could look into her eyes. "I went tothe graveyard today because I feel guilty for moving on so quickly. I love you Maria, but I loved Laura… no I still love Laura. She was my wife. I mean, I love her. But I want to move on. I want to move on with you and I want us to be a family. You, Marissa, and me. So I just needed to go to her grave and… and talk to her, so that I can move on. Maria, I love you and I can’t imagine living without you anymore. I can’t imagine not waking up next to you or not being able to see Marissa everyday. I know that it’s really sudden, but I wanted you to know this in case something happens to me tomorrow. I love you, and I want to marry you."
Maria didn’t say anything; she just kissed him. He gladly returned the kiss, deepening it. She wrapped her arms around his neck, running one hand through his hair. He rolled over so he was on top of her and he found himself running his hand underneath her shirt, like he had in the car only a few days ago. He tugged at the bottom to take it off, and this time, she didn’t stop him.
* * *
"Are you ok?" Max asked as he sat down on the bed with Liz.
"Not really."
"Want to talk about it?"
"Not really," she told him.
"Are we ever going to get past this?"
She took his hand and kissed him gently on the cheek. "Yes, we will."
"I love you Liz; I never stopped loving you. I’ve always loved you."
"I know, and I love you, too. I just needed time, but I’m ready now. And tomorrow after everything, we’re going to get some much-needed rest and then talk about everything. And it’s going to be ok."
Max smiled at her. "You’re amazing you know that." He placed his hands on her face and pressed his lips to hers.
"We’re going to be ok. And we’re going to get Chris back. We’re finally going to be a family," she told him, lying down in his arms. It felt right, like nothing had for a long time.
Coming Soon: The battle to get Tess back...