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An undying Love
Written By : Destiny Dreamer
Disclaimer : I do not own roswell in any way shape or form! I just write the fics! So please dont sue me katims or metz! All rights are given to both of you!
Couples : Mostly M/L

A/N - This fic is some what based around the movie West side story. But It wont exactly be like West side story. I'm going to change it around a little.


Proloque

Liz Stood On her balcony Letting her hair be blown by the breeze. She was waiting for him. She heard his soft whisper. She looked down and smiled. She seen him climbing up the side of the balcony.

“what are you doing? your going to Kill yourslef!” Liz whispered. He didnt care, he climbed over the balcony and pulled liz into his arms. He placed his forehead on her's.

“I had to see you” He whispered.

“you cant be here, if my brother finds you you are as good as dead” Liz whispered.

“I Dont care Liz, I would die thousand times over For you Liz” He said as he kissed her. He pushed her up against the balcony wall. His Breath was so warm on her face. Liz Loved everything about him. His scent was intoxicating.

“marry me” He whispered On her lips. Liz looked up into his eyes. Did he just ask what she thought he asked. Or was she hearing things.

“What? I..” She whispered softly as she pulled away from him.

“ I want to be with you, I want to grow old with you, start a family with you. I want all you” Max whispered.

“You cant have me” Liz whispered back. Someone whistled in the distance.

“look I..Love you. If you love me you will meet me at the church Tomorrow morning , as a soon as the sun rises. We will get married and start our life” again someone whistled and this time it was louder.

“Go” Liz whispered softly.

“promise me” Max said looking her in the eyes. Liz smiled and tear ran down her cheek, max wiped it away.

“I promise now go!” she said as she kissed him one last time.

“I love you” he said as he climbed down the balcony and disappeared in the distance.
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chapter 1




*West Roswell High*



Her eyes, they were so beautiful. And her hair it was the color of chocolate. Max wanted to run his fingers through it. And her lips, God! What was wrong with him? No girl ever made him feel like this before. Michael patted him on the shoulder and he came out of his daydream.



“Max? Are you ok?” Michael asked.



Max came out of it and looked over at his best friend. He was tired, yeah that explained it. He was exhausted from school and his surroundings. What was it, about this girl? Max came out of his daydream.



“Sorry what?” Max asked as he rubbed his eyes.



“I seriously think something is wrong with you today” Michael said looking at him curiously.



“I'm Fine I just have a lot on my mind, that’s all” Max replied.



“Are those punks from East Side bothering you again? Because, if they are I would love the opportunity to kick some serious ass” Michael said as he gulped down a Snapple tea.



“No, it’s something else” Max said.



“What ever it is you need to get over it. Because we have a match up tonight against East side and we need our captain there, ready and willing to play his heart out as if its his last game..” Michael said as he patted Max on his back.



*East Side Roswell High*



Liz Parker watched her best friend Maria Deluca bounce the pom poms up and down on the gym floor. Her routine was flawless. They were getting ready for tonight’s match up against West Roswell high. Liz was scared about tonight game. She knew that her brother played hard on the team but she didn’t want him to loose control. East Side Roswell high happen to be one of their rivals West Roswell hated East Roswell with a passion. Liz thought that it was all stupid. She started daydreaming as she watched the pom poms bounce up and down.



His eyes were the deepest brown and the way he looked at her was so amazing. She was suddenly snapped out of the daydream when her brother came up to her on the bleachers.



“Hey, Lizzie ready for the big game?” He said as he tossed her the basket ball.



“You bet” Liz said with a smile



“We are going to beat their sorry excuse for a basketball player’s ass tonight. I hope I go up against their captain”



“Max Evans? What do you have against him Nick? I mean he never did anything to you” Liz replied twirling the ball around in her hands.



“He has done a lot! For one thing he's a loser! He's not like us. None of them on their team is like us” Nick replied.



“So, you are saying none of them is rich like us?”



“Exactly!” Nick said.



“Or, is it because I heard that Max Evans has been accepted into one of the biggest name basketball camps and could be drafted into the NBA?” Liz said turning to him and throwing the ball back at him.



“How did you know about that?” Nick asked.



“I hear things, if it wasn’t for him joining the team, the Team wouldn’t be as good as it is now. Why do you make a big issue out this” Liz said as she jumped off the bleachers and headed out of the gym. Sometimes she didn’t understand her brother. She didn’t understand why everything had to evolve around money.




* Game Night *



Liz sat in the crowded bleachers. She waved at Maria who was cheering on the sidelines. She glanced over to the other side of the court and saw him. His eyes locked with hers. She thought for a moment, she thought she had stopped breathing. She felt someone sit next to her. She looked over and saw Alex Whitmen sit next to her. Alex had been her long time best friend since Kindergarten, longer then her and Maria were friends.



“Alex! What are you doing here?” She asked hugging him.



“I couldn’t miss the game of the century” he said as he stuffed a hand full of popcorn in his mouth.



“I saw the way he was looking at you” Alex said as he pointed towards Max.



“What?” Liz said shyly as she smiled.



“Max Evans, the captain of the East Side Roswell Bruins. He has been staring at you. He looks at you like you are a priceless piece of art or a goddess or something. I think he has it bad for you” Alex replied. 'Oh god' Liz said as she put her hands over her face.



“He's Max Evans?” Liz asked Glancing at him.



“Yep, the one and only, I heard he may turn pro if the right people get a good look at his skills at this basketball camp” Alex replied. Liz had no idea. She had been daydreaming about him all day.



“And, now for the Pre game show!” an announcer said as the cheerleaders for both teams started to line up.



“And, now may I present The Mighty West Roswell Comets Cheer and dance team!:” The announcer said. Liz watched Max closely. He was busy getting the plays for the game. He would glance over at Liz every little second. Michael noticed that Max's attention wasn’t in the right place. He looked to see what Max was watching. “Oh boy” Michael whispered as Max came back to sit back down with the team. Michael wasn’t going to say anything. He knew who the girl was in the stands that had so much of Max's attention. 'Boy is Max going to get a beating tonight' Michael thought.



“So, who's the girl?” Michael asked motioning towards her.



“What girl?” Max asked.



“The one you've been staring at all night long”



“I have no idea. Don’t lecture me on staring, you have had your eyes on the blond in West Sides Cheer and Dance Team” Max replied laughing.



“No, I haven’t!” Michael yelled. The girls finished up their routine and headed off the court. The game was about to begin. Nick looked over at Max.



“Do you think Nick saw him looking at me?” Liz asked Alex.



“I don’t know, if he did he will kill Max. You know how he is about you. He doesn’t want to see you happy with any guy. Most of all an East Side Basketball Captain Max Evans, he hate Max Evans more then anyone”




*half way through the game*



Max was playing his heart out. They were still getting a really bad beating. Nick Parker was being ruff through the whole game. 'I wonder if he heard my good news' Max thought. 'Maybe that’s why he is playing so ruff tonight'. Max wiped the sweat from his face. He glanced over at her one more time and then glanced away. God! What was it about her! Maybe that why he was playing so bad! Nick noticed Max looking at his sister like she was some kind of piece of meat. Anger was fueling in him. The game continued and ended before Max knew it. Nick had won the game for the West Roswell Comets.



“Good game, it would have been better if you didn’t have your head in the fucking clouds. Now, we gotta take the heat from the Comets again!” Michael yelled as he stomped off. Nick came up to Max.



“Great game Evans! And, by the way next time I see you eyeing my sister your dead” He said throwing the ball at Max.
“Your sister? She's your sister?” Max yelled back as Nick walked away. Max sat in the middle of the basketball court. Basketball was his life. But, people like Nick Parker didn’t make it easy.



“You are so pathetic” A female voice came from the bleachers. Max looked up and smiled.



“Why do you say that?” Max asked as he got up and bounced the ball on the court.



“Because it’s just a game, and you act like its going to be the end of the world if the right team doesn’t win” Liz said softly.



“It’s more then a game. Why are you talking to me, East doesn’t talk to West” Max replied as he shot the ball in the hoop.



“I'm not like the rest of the East of people” Liz said with a smile.



“Really” Max said.



“Really, so you are the great Max Evans. I had no idea” Liz said as she picked the ball up and bounced it on the court. She tossed the ball and made a three point shot into the basket. Max looked at her stunned.



“Damn!” Max said out loud.



“For being the sister of Nick Parker you have better three point shot then he does” Max said as he picked the ball back up and bounced it on the court



“The name is Liz and yes I happen to that Jackasses sister. And I do play a little bit of ball sometimes.” She said Max threw the ball at her and she caught it.




“So, am I going to get to see you again?” Max asked



“Maybe, if I make this shot then you'll see me again. If I don’t then well you are out of luck” Liz said with a smile as she got ready to shoot the ball. Max smiled and watched her take another 3 point shot. The ball went sailing into the hoop without touching the backboard or the rim.



“Damn, you are good!” Max yelled.



“Well, I guess you'll be seeing me again” Liz heard Nick yelling for her. She quickly gave Max a smile and walked out of the gym.



“Damn! She's got the skills just like her brother” Max said to himself as he went into the locker room. Liz waited outside in the courtyard for Nick. He came out with his teams patting him on the back.



“Good game tonight” Liz said as she walked with her brother to the parking lot.



“Liz I don’t want you talking to Max Evans” Nick said straight out. Liz looked him confused.



“What? You can’t tell me who can and can’t talk to Nick” Liz said with anger in her voice.



“He's a loser Liz and I saw the way he was looking at you tonight.”



“So, what! God! I can’t believe you! I can’t go anywhere without you anymore and now your telling me I can’t talk to him?” Liz said as she furiously started to walk away.



“Liz, don’t be like that! I'm just trying to protect you” Nick said.



“Yeah, well you need to back off!” Liz said as they came to the car. She didn’t want to get in the car with him.



“Get in the car Liz. I know you are mad at me right now but you will get over it” Nick said.



“You are an ass! I'm getting a ride from Maria” Liz said as she started to walk back to the school.



“Maria already left!” Nick yelled.



“Then I will walk home!” Liz yelled.



“Liz, just get in the damn car!” Nick yelled.



“Go to hell Nick” Liz screamed as she started to walk away. Nick grabbed her arm and looked into her eyes.



“If you don’t get your little ass in the car you will be very sorry.” Nick snarled out.



Alex saw the way Nick was acting and knew there was trouble there. He ran up to them hoping to catch them before all hell broke out.



“Hey, Liz and Nick can I get a ride with you I lost my ride?” Alex asked looking at Liz.



“Sure” Nick said letting Liz arm go as Alex noticed the red marks left behind.



Finally Liz got in the car and they drove home in silence.



Max stood outside the school waiting for Michael to give him a ride. He knew that Michael would be pissed at him for not winning the game. Michael sat next to him on the curb in front of the school.



“You know if I knew it was a girl I would have had no problem with it. If it was any other girl besides Nick Parker’s sister I wouldn’t have cared” Michael said as he picked up Max's stuff and threw it in the back of his truck.



“She's different Michael. You should see her basketball skills. The Girl has game” Max replied.



“Yeah, I bet but don’t let her get in the way of how you play Maxwell.” Michael said as they jumped in the truck and drove off. Michael dropped Max off at his house. He went up to his room. He was tired and he was hurting from head to toe. He took good beating by Nick through out the game. He took a shower and headed to bed. He knew that tomorrow at school would be a really bad day since they lost the game.



He wanted to see Liz again but he didn’t want to wait. To bad Nick Parker was her brother. There was no way that he could have a normal relationship with her. But, there was something about her that he just couldn’t put his finger on. He couldn’t wait to find out why he couldn’t tear his eyes off her tonight. He needs help if he team going to win the next game.



Max closed his eyes hoping to see his doe eyed dream girl ….









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Chapter 2


The next day -

The Crashdown cafe was Busy. Liz couldnt concentrate , she was dropping things it just wasnt like her. She heard The bells of the crashdown ring. She looked up and saw Michael and max walk in the door. She locked eyes with max and wasnt paying attention and ended up running into the table and dropping everything on the wall.

“Oh my god!” Liz said as she bent down to pick everything up. What was wrong her! She wasnt normally like this. Her mind was Just in different place. Max bent down next to her to help her out.

“let me help” Max said.

They both reached for the same Dish on the ground and they touched each's hands. It was like an Electric spark that went through Liz.

“I didnt make you do this did I ?” Max asked smiling.

“No I'm just not myself today” Liz said as she quickly Picked up everything and went into the back of the crashdown. Michael laughed, he knew that max had the hots for Liz parker.

“ You know your breaking the number one rule” Michael said as they sat in the back booth.

“What rule? I didnt know we had rules” Max said as He played with a papernapkin nervously.

“The Rule that says we hate all East side people” Michael replied.

“ Thats a stupid rule it deserves to be broken” Max replied. Michael looke at him stunned. What was wrong with him!

“What the hell is wrong with you! She's Nick parkers sister there is no way in hell your ever going to get with her!” Michael said.

“Can we not talk about this now Michael, I other things to worry about.”

“Like what?” michael asked.

“ Like If you have decided to go to basket ball camp with me. Your The second best player on the team you deserve a shot too” Max said. Michael smiled.

“your right I do” Michael replied.

Liz came out from the back.She needed a break. Where was Maria when you need her Liz thought. Liz looked over and realized that max and michael were sitting in her section.

“great” Liz whsipered. She Liked max, she liked him alot she had to admit to herself. And She knew max felt the same way. But she couldnt take it any farther then friendship thats if her brother doesnt find out. Liz went up to there table.

“What can I get you today” she asked.

“Well max would Like a date with one of the fine waitresses here” Max looked over at michael and Then kicked him under the table. Michael yelped in pain.

“ Sorry I cant Do that Because its not offered on the menu” Liz said looking at Michael sternly and then smiling at Max.

“Ok then well We will have to cherry cokes” Michael said.

“Ok coming right up” Liz said. Maria came running into the crashdown pratically dressing as she was running.

“Sorry I'm late liz!” Maria yelled as she went into the back to grabb an apron.

“Its ok maria” Liz replied as she getting 2 chery cokes for max and Michael.

“Arent you breaking the rule By drooling over the head cheerleader of East side” max said. He knew Michael had the hots for Maria Deluca, But he didnt see how it was different from him having a thing for Liz.

“Who said I was breaking any rules? I have a girlfriend. Remember her name is courtney? She's All upset because I might be going to this basketball camp” Michael said. Liz brought them their cokes.

“Anything else” Liz asked.

“ No” Michael replied.

Liz smiled at Max and walked away. max would glance at her every second.

“God! Can you be any more pathedic!”Michael yelled.

“What?” Max looked at him curiously.

“just go ahead and break the rule maxwell. Break the rule! the way you look at her its like she's a goddess or something or your in love with her” Michael replied.

“I'm not going out with her”max replied.

“You better do something max because you two with your googly eyes are making me sick!” michael took one last sip of his soda and got up.

“Where are you going?” Max asked.

“To practice Shots like your suppose to be doing right now since your the captain”Michael said handing him some money for the sodas and leaving. It was true it was suppose to be his day to have shot practice as he so called it but his heart wasnt into basketball at the moment.

Liz Finally Got a break. She noticed max sitting by himself. She went over to his booth and sat across from him.

“hey” She said softly. Max looked up and smiled at him.

“Hey”he replied back.

“dont you have Practice or something?” Liz asked him. She wasnt sure if the east team had grueling practices like the west.

“yeah But I dont feel like going” Max said as he sipped on his soda. Liz looked at him curiously.

“Arent you the captain? your suppose to be there. Nick Hasnt Missed one practice since freshmen year” Liz said. Max Looked at her and smiled. Max Felt himself falling for Liz parker more and more.

“When do you get off work?” Max asked.

“Around 5” Liz said with a smile.


Michael tossed the basketball into the basket. He glnaced over and saw his girlfriend walking into the gym.

“ hey can we talk?” courtney asked. Michael bounced the ball on the court.

“talk away” michael asked.
“ I know you and max are planning on going to go to this basketball camp” courtney said as she watched her botyfriend throw the ball into the hoop.

“yeah and?” Michael said making her continue.

“ basketball is your life and I dont want come between you and your passion in Life” courtney said.

“ Ok so what are you saying courtney?” michael asked.

“i'm saying this whole fued between you, max and Nick parker is stupid! And If want to play basketball then go the camp and forget about me ok? I'm not going to stop you from doing what you want” Courtney said as she ran off and started crying.


Five o'clock rolled around, Liz was off her shift. She noticed max waiting for her In the back of the crashdown.

“Max” she whispered softly

“Hey I thought Maybe after your shift we could umm....go shoot some hoops or something” Max said with a smile. Liz smiled she liked how he was nervous about asking her.

“sure Let me go get changed and we can go” Liz said as she hurried upstairs. Max waited in the alley behind the crashdown. Liz quickly got dressed as she was comign down the stairs she ran into Nick.

“Where are you going?” nick asked noticing what she was waring. Liz smiled and had to take a second to find something to say.

“Oh umm... I was going to go down to the school and shoot hoops or something and maybe Watch Maria practice her routine or something” Liz said as she hurried downstairs.

“ Liz, I....” He started to grabb Liz's arm but stopped her.

“ Dont nick, I can Go by my self I dont need a babysitter” Liz said as she headed out the back door. Liz looked over and saw Max. he smiled at her softly.

“ Ready to get beat” Liz said with a smile.

“ Sorry But I dont let girls beat me at the game of basketball” Max said laughing. Max Loved seeing Liz smiling. She had the most beautiful smile. god! he felt himself Falling more and more for her . He wanted to be with her every second and feel her ever moment, It was driving him insane. 'i wonder if she feels the same way?' max thought.


max Had borrowed His mother's beat up jeep. Liz climbed in. Within an Hour they were parked in the park. max Climbed out And grabbed the basketball He sometimes kept in His mothers car.

Liz Jumped out and max tossed her the ball.

“Lets see what you got parker” Max said laughing.

“Ok But you will be so sorry” Liz walked over to the court and bounced the ball. Max watched her closely. He was trying figure out his next move. Liz watched him closely. Max tried to the grab the ball from her. He grabbed her by the waist and tried to take the ball.

“No!” Liz yelled as she laughed. Max tickled her and They both fell to the ground laughing.

“Thats so cheating!” She yelled.

“there is no rule in the rule book for it” Max said as he continued to tickle her. Liz was laughing so hard she thought she would pee her pants.

“Stop it!” Liz yelled. Max stopped and realized he was practically on top of Liz. Their faces were so close that they could feel eachs breaths on there skin. Max's heart was beating so fast he felt like he couldnt breath. Max leaned in closer, he brushed his lips On across Liz's lips. Liz Wrapped her arms around max's neck. Max brushed her hair away from her face. He Then Kissed her harder. It was the perfect kiss. Max Knew it was probably Liz's first kiss so he wanted to be gental. Max had Kissed girls before but he never kissed a girl like Liz.

“ Wow” Liz whispered when the kiss was over. Max smiled and helped Liz up.

“Lets keep that a our little secret Especially from your brother ”max said as he pulled her into his arms again and kissed her.

“ Max We cant do this” Liz said pulling away from him.

“Why not? I feel and I know you feel it other wise you wouldnt of kissed me back” Max said.

“ My brother is going to kill me!” Liz yelled.

“Fuck your brother! He doesnt control you!” Max yelled.

“ I dont want anyone to get hurt” Liz said.

“ We wont get hurt as long he never knows” Max replied as he took liz's hand in his. Liz started to cry, Max wiped her tears away.

“dont Cry it will work out. your so different from any other girl. You dont care about this East and west side Rivarly crap” Max said touching her face.

“yeah But My brother hates you and if he sees us...” Max stopped her from saying another word.

“Lets not talk about your brother. I realy dont care what your brother thinks.” Max said as he leaned in and kissed her again. Suddenly Max heard a ball bouncing on the court. He Looked over and saw michael.

“Whats going on max?” Michael asked.

“nothing Me and Liz were just talking thats all” Max replied.

“ Yeah talking my ass! Do you know whats going to happen to your ass if nick sees you with her?” Michael said as he tossed the ball at max.

“ Michael we were just talking its no big deal” Max said tossing the ball back and fourth in his hands.

“ yeah you metioned that twice now. Look Max I dont care who you screw around But just dont make things any worse then what they are. Maxwell told me that you have Some skills. And he says your different from the rest of the girls. I'll let it slide that your Nicks sister, anyways I kind of like you.” Michael replied smiling.

“what?” Max asked looking at him curiously.

“you heard me, I've been sitting here watching you two for the past 20 mintues. you are different Liz and If max likes you I Like you. He sees something good about you thats different from the rest of the girls. Max has the ability to do that. You see if it wasnt for him, I wouldnt be as good of a player as I am now. And My girl friend wouldnt of broke up with me because of basketball camp and this stupid School rivarly.” Liz smiled and went up to Michael and hugged him tightly.

“What was that for?” Michael asked.

“for everything you said, Thank you” Liz said smiling.

“Well you know I do have a heart sometimes. But you know this wont stop me from kicking your brothers ass on the court every once in a while” Michael said laughing.

“you have my permission to kick his ass” Liz said laughing.
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Chapter 3


*West Roswell high *

Liz was trying to unlock her locker door. Nick came up to her locker gave it a little tap and it opened.

“So what time did you get in last night?” Nick asked. Liz smiled reply last night in her head.

“ Oh I dont know I didnt check the clock when I came in why is mom and dad freaking out about it?” Liz asked.

“No I was just curious thats all because I didnt hear you come last night and I went to check on you and you were sound asleep in your bed”

“ Oh so now your checking up on me at night?” Liz said with angry tone.

“ I was worried about you”

“yeah right” Liz said as she swung her backpack on her shoulder.

“ what the hell is wrong with you?” nick asked.

“Nothing I'm just tired I have to go talk to maria” Liz said as she went down the hall and met maria. Maria saw the look on nicks face.

“Tell Your boyfriend to back off” Liz said with a stern tone on her face.

“Your brother is not my boyfriend we broke up last night. He freaked out when he saw talking to michael guerin so I told him to go jump in a lake and eat shit for all I care” Maria said laughing.

“wow” Liz said walking down the hall with her.

“yeah Suprisling Michael guerin is a nice guy even if he goes east side” Maria said with a smile.

“yeah so I max Evans” Liz said as smiled spread across her face.

“ohh really, Michael told me about you and max.”

“No one is suppose to know maria”

“Dont worry your secret is safe with me” Maria said with a smile.

“ if Nick Finds out I'm dead” Liz replied.


*East Side*


Max saw the look on michael face. He knew something was up. Max waited for him to say something.

“Whats going on?” Max asked.

“ Well it looks like your going to basketball camp without me. My parents wont let me go. They found the papers in the mail yesterday for the camp. They wont let me go” michael said.

“Why not? do they not know this is an opportunity of a life time! I mean Michael we could go into the NBA if the right people see us at this camp” Max replied angry that michael's parents were fools and didnt see that Michael had talent too.

“They dont give a dam. They If I go to camp without their permission I have to move out” Michael replied.

“ Come live with me michael, My parents love you! I'm not letting you give up this opportunity!” Max said.

“I dont know maxwell”

“Think about it” Max said patting him on the shoulder. Tess harding passed them in the hall and winked at max.

“What the hell was that?” Michael asked.
“ That's Tess harding, were partners in chem” max replied as he unlocked his locker.

“ She winked at you max”

“yeah so, I'm not interested in her. Besides I dont want to ruin what I've just started with Liz” max replied.

“oh you better not say that any louder because you know all the girls are after you! they all fall for the captain of the basketball team. And you dont want the gossip meter to go up!” Michael yelled.

“I dont care anymore” Max replied.

“Look I told you two last Night what I felt, But we have to keep a low profile about it. Because once It circulates there is no stopping it” Michael said as the bell rang signal for the next class.

“I'll see you at practice” Michael replied as he ran down the hall.



*West Roswell High * later that day*

Liz Didnt have a 6th period class, so she sat in the gym and watched maria run through her routine. Alex came into the gym and sat next to her on the bleachers.

“ So..tell me whats going with you? I feel like I havent seen you in days” Alex said.Liz laughed and Laid her head on his shoulder.

“Nothing, so how are things going with you and isabel” Liz asked.

“me and isabel? there is no me and isabel”Alex replied.

“What happened?” Liz asked.

“Nothing I cant get the nerve to talk to her. How about you and Max?” Alex asked. liz smiled and alex knew it was getting serious.

“That serious?” alex asked.

“ No one is suppose to know about me and max Especially nick.”

“Thats understandable, well speak of the devil here he is and the rest of the team. I better go” Alex said as He hugged Liz tightly and quickly left the gym. Liz didnt feel like watching her brother and the team practice for the upcoming game this friday. So she made her way home she had alot of school work to do.
*Later that night *


Liz was trying to study, she heard a thump outside her window. She went to teh window and saw max Climbing up the balcony.

“What are you doing!” Liz yelled.

“ trying not to kill myself” Max replied as he quickly got up.

“what ae you doing here?”She asked Max as she brushed his hair away from his face.

“ I wanted to see you.” He said softly.

“ My brother will be home any minute from practice” Liz replied.

“ I missed you” He said as he leaned in and kissed her.

“I missed you to God it be so much easier if we were in the same school” Liz replied.

“yeah it would be but we dont” Max said as he took Liz's hand in his and they both sat down in the lawn chairs that were on the balcony. Max Looked at Liz, he reached over and Pushed her hair away from her face.

“ God what are we going to do. Every time I look at you I fall for you more and more” Max said softly. Liz smiled and looked down , kind of shyly. She had never had a guy tell her things like this before.

“you have to go I have to finish studying” Liz replied, she didnt want to get behind in her school work because of max.

“ Your kicking me out and choosing studying over me?”Max said with a pouty look.Liz laughed.

“yeah I am”

“What will change your mind?” Max asked Leaning in closer to kiss her.

“That might” Liz replied as she kissed him back.

“what are you studying?”Max asked.

“Alegrbra” Liz said with a disgusted tone.

“Thats no fun” Max said as he leaned back in the chair. Liz Moved her chair closer and laid her head on his shoulder.

Nick came into the kitchen and Noticed his parents at the kitchen table. His Mother held out an envelope with nicks name on it. Nick took it from her.

“What is it?”Nick asked. Nick Read the front of the enevelope and smiled.

“This isnt what I think is it?” He asked quickly opening it.

“ yeah it is” his father said with a smile. Nick quickly pulled out the letter that was inside. He Read the first Few lines and his expression changed. he crumbled up the letter and threw it across the kitchen.

“What did it say?” His mother asked.

“I wasnt accepted into the basketball camp because all the spots were taken” Nick said with an upset tone.

“Nick its ok” His mother said huggingh him tightly.

“ yeah I guess I thought you reserved a spot for me?”Nick asked them.

“We did , but...” his mother started saying.

“ But what?” he asked.

“ We tried to get a spot for you but they told us that this is a very highly known camp that since we were to late in regestering you that you were put on the waiting list and that they would send a letter to notify you if you were accepted or not” His father replied. Nick just walked back up stairs angry.

Liz Loved being in max's arms. he had strong arms. She laid in bed with him she was half way asleep when she heard stomping in the hall.

“Stay here” She whispered as she entered the hall. She saw Nick go into his bedroom and slam the door. She went back into her room.

“Whats going on?” Max whispered.

“Ohh nothing” Liz said as she laid back down next to him.

“you know I could stay here all night and look at you” He whispered as he ran his fingers through her long dark hair.
“you have to go its getting late” Liz replied as she curled up closer to him.

“ I cant if you curl up any closer to me” Max replied as he kissed the top of her head.

“sorry” She whispered as she got up so he could leave. Max started to climb out the window but Liz stopped him.

“ Can you meet me tomorrow night?” Max smiled and reached over to her and kissed her.

“ yeah where?” max said not wanting to leave.

“ On the court in the park, 11 o'clock. Nick will be asleep then” she said as she kissed him one more time.

“Ok” max said as he climbed out the window. Liz followed him and watched him leave.

“Dont forget!” She whispered to him.

“I wont” Max whispered back as he disappeared in the darkness.

Max was walking home when he felt someone following him. He turned and saw Jake Morrison from the west roswell team.

“Well If it isnt max Evans The star captain of east side” He said sternly.

“What do you want jake?” Max asked turning towards him.

“Nick told me to keep a close eye on you” he said stepping towards max wearing His west roswell high comets lettermens jacket.

“ I dont need Nick and His Morons following me” Max said as he started to walk away.

“ Oh he will beat the crap out of you once he finds out that you have been crawling out of his babysisters window at night” Jack said laughing.

“ leave out of this! If nick has beef with me then his ass needs to face me on the court!” Max yelled.

“ Here's A little message for you from nick. Stay away from Liz or else” Two more comets players came out of the shadows. before max knew it they were beating the crap out of him.

*The next morning*
Max walked into the East Side with a black eye and bruises. Michael noticed he looked like hell.

“what the hell happened to you?” Michael asked.

“ Our friends paid me a visit last night” max said Holding his stomach.

“ Its payback time maxwell”

“ I'm not getting the middle of this Michael. Its not worth it anymore” Max said.

“ They beat the crapout of you! How are you going to be ready for the game?” Michael asked.

“Dont worry I will be ready”max said.

“ Does Liz know about this?” Michael asked.

“No and your not going to tell her either” Max said as he went to class. Michael Knew Liz needed to know about this. He would have to drop by the crashdown later and pay her and nick a little visit.
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chapter 4

-West Roswell High-

Liz sat in her history class bored out of her mind for some reason. She was usually always alert in class but her mind was else where. Maria nudged her on the shoulder.

“What?” Liz said loudly.

“Ms parker is there a problem today?” Mr ackermen said.

“Umm no sorry”

Liz said looking back down at the page in her history book. She couldnt stop thinking about max. She couldnt wait to see him tonight. The bell rang and maria quickly stopped her best friend in the hall.

“What is your problem today liz? I mean when did you stop payin attention in class?” maria asked curiously.

“ I'm fine Ria I swear, Its just that I have alot on my mind.” Liz said. Nick came up to her and grabbed her by the arm and pulled her down the hall. Maria followed them.

“Whats going on?!” Liz yelled.

“We need to talk, Maria can you leave please” he asked maria.

“Umm whatever it is you can say to me I'm liz's best friend” maria said as she crossed her arms in front of herself.

“fine whatever, so why is that I have to find out that you max Evans has been crawling out of your bedroom window at night now” Nick asked sternly. Maria looked at liz confused.

“I have no idea what your talking about” liz said as she started to walk away.

“you know Exactly what I am talking about” Nick said grabbing her arm and squeezing tighly.

“Let go your hurting me!” liz yelled. Everyone in the hall stopped and stared.

“ Nick I think you need to back off” maria said standing between them.

“ If I find he has touched you in any way he's dead.” Nick said as he walked away.

“What the hell was that all about!” maria yelled turning towards her best friend.

“Nothing” Liz said as she hurried down the hall.

“Dont tell me nothing Liz Parker. I know you like the back of a book!. Are you seeing max Evans?” Liz stopped and turned towards her best friend. She didnt know what to tell her. She didnt really know what her and max were. It sort of just happened. She liked him alot. There was something about him she couldnt explain.

“I...I dont know what is ok. All I know is there is something there. And nick doesnt like it” Liz replied.

“of course he isnt going to like it! Its max Evans! The captain of East side. To nick , max has taken everything that nick has earned” maria said.

“Ria He didnt take anything from Nick. Its just that Nick is mad because he cant get things his way. And its not my fault that Max happens to be a better player then My brother” Maria laughed. It was the truth, Max was some what better then nick. But they werent going to admit that to him.

“your right there, But thats not the point. The point is your have a thing for an east side boy” Maria said. Liz laughed.

“And you dont? I seen the way you look at michael guerin” Maria looked at her suprised. They entered the bathroom and Liz took a Wet paper towel to her arm.

“Are you saying that I have a thing for Michael guerin! Ohh gross liz! Me and michael in the same sentence makes me gag!” maria said as she fixed her hair in the mirror.

Later that day

Liz was busy at the crashdown after school. She was trying to keep her mind off things by giving herself an overload of work. Liz was scrubbing tables when she noticed Michael walked in.

“Hey what can I get you today” Liz asked.

“Nothing I just wanted to know if we can talk” Michael said.

“Sure what about?” Liz asked curiously.

“Max and what happened to him” Liz looked up at michael with concern.

“Did something happen? Tell me michael” Liz said as she sat in the booth across from michael. Michael knew that max would be pissed if he said anything to liz. But he felt Liz needed to know.

“The other night when max left your house. Some of Nicks friends ruffed him up” Michael said.

“What?” Liz said with anger in her voice. Michael looked down at liz's arm, he noticed it was red and bruised.

“What happened to your arm?” Michael asked. Liz looked down at her arm.

“Ohh nothing” Liz said casually.

“Your lying, Nick did it” Michael said seeing her expression.

“He got upset because he found out that Max was in my room with me that night and he grabbed me”

“ He's an ass and if he hurts you again liz you let me know”

“ he wont hurt me again. Why didnt max tell me about this” Liz asked.

“ I dont know he told me not tell you but I thought you should know. This is getting out of hand Liz”

“yeah it is and I dont know what to do about it. I really like max”

“And he likes you I can see it in the way he looks at you.” Michael said with a smile.


Max came into the crashdown and saw michael with Liz. He turned around and walked out. Liz ran after him.

“Max Wait!” Liz yelled. Max wouldnt stop.

“Please!” Liz yelled. Max stopped and turned towards Liz. Liz Noticed his battered up face.

“Oh my god they did this to you!” Liz said touching his face. Max pulled away from her touch.

“His Moron friends Did it.” Max said.

“ Come on let me put something on your face to heal those cuts and scraps” Liz taking him by the hand and leading him to the bathroom upstairs.

“Liz you dont have to do this I'm fine” max said as he pushed him into the bathroom and made him sit on the toliet lid.

“Max, I'm going to have serious talk with my brother. If he doesnt leave us alone I...” Liz looked over and saw the expression on his face.

“What?” Liz asked softly.

“Maybe we should just be friends nothing more.” Max said.

“Friends...yeah how can I be friends with you after that night. After that kiss? God! If it wasnt my brother you wouldnt be saying this!” Liz yelled as she pulled the first aid kit and slammed it down on the sink top.

“ He will eventually kill me Liz eithe off the court or on the court! Maybe I should Just give up my spot at camp to him so things wont get so difficult!”

“Why are you talking like this! you said that things didnt matter and that you didnt care about my brother! god I'm not letting you go!” Liz said grabbing him by the shirt and kissing him.

“Wow” Max said out of breath.

“ I'm going to kill my brother” Liz said as sat on max's lap and kissed him.

“Dont you have a shift to attend to downstairs” Max said in whisper.

“Maria will cover me and dont talk like that again. I dont care what my brother thinks I dont care what he wants. Its what I want and what I want is you” Liz said smiling.

“Ok That sounds good to me.” max said. There was a pounding on the bathroom door.

“Liz parker! I knwo your in there and I know max is with you! Open this door! I am not covering for you so you can Nookie with the east sides captain!” Maria yelled through the door.

“Ria , I'll be out in a minute! I had to use the bathroom really bad and the one down stairs was taken!” Liz yelled through the door. Max started kissing her and she giggled loudly.

“Liz!” Maria yelled.

“Ria give me a sec” Liz said as she opened the door and peaked her head out.

“ Liz, I know your in there with max” Maria said.

“ Ria I ...” Maria pushed the door opened and saw max.

“you were what Liz?” Maria asked.

“ I was just giving max some first aid treatment” Liz said with an innocent smile.

“yeah I will believe that one” maria said as she went back down stairs. Max Followed them both.

“Ria..” Liz said.

“Dont! I just have something to say to max” She stood in front of max with a stern look upon her face and her arms crossed in front of her.

“Look, max Liz is my best friend. And Ever since you've entered the picture she has been acting really weird”

“Maria!” Liz said.

“I'm not finished! If you hurt her in any you'll have to deal with me! I dont know you to well, But I can learn to like you. So just remember you dont want to get on my bad side” Maria said as she walked back into the main part of the crashdown.

“is she always like that?” Max asked.

“yeah she is her and michael would make a great couple”

“We should hook them up” Max said laughing.

“Naa! They would be arguing too much. you better go before my brother gets here” She said kissing him quickly.

“11 tonight, you me and the court?” Max asked.

“Its a date” Liz said he went through the back door of the crashdown and left.
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Chapter 5

Liz Came up to the court and saw max shooting hoops. She smiled as she watched him. Max didnt notice her watching him. He went to shoot again.

“Miss!” Liz yelled and the ball hit missed the hoop completely.

“ you have to stop distracting me” Max said with a smile.

“Oh so you admit that I am a distraction? Am I a good distraction or a bad one?” Liz asked playfully.

“Thats a hard question to answer” Replied laughing. Liz punched him in the shoulder.

“ you better give me an answer” Liz yelled.

“Ok! your a good distraction” Max said pulling her into his arms.

“ Its good to know that I am a good distraction” Liz said kissing him.

“you want to go back to my house watch a movie or something? My parents arent home” Max said smiling.

“Sure sounds like fun. But we cant, I have to get home before My parents get worried.”

“Right” Max said softly looking away.

“What is it?” Liz asked.

“I dont see how this is going to work” Max looked down and saw liz's arm. Liz pulled her jacket sleeve down over her arm.

“What happened?” Max asked with a furious angry tone.

“I ran into a wall thats all” Liz said softly.

“Dont Lie Liz just tell me. Did...He do this to you” Liz looked away and crossed her arms in front of her.

“Yes” Liz said softly.

“I'll kill him if he hurts you!” Max yelled with anger.

“Max stop!” Liz yelled.

“ Does your parents know he did this to you?” Max asked.
“No they dont care, they dont listen to anything I have to say. Its always Nick. Nick and his basketball career.” Liz said as she went over to the benches and sat down.

“ How can your parents be like that?” Max asked.

“I dont know, They dont see me sometimes.” Liz said softly. Max Leaned closer to liz and took her hand in his.

“I see you Liz” he said softly as he pulled her hair away from her face. Liz half smiled and looked down. She had never had a guy say such wonderful words to her.

“Thank you” She said softly.

Maria was working late at the crashdown. She looked up at the clock and realized it was after 11. She was exhausted everything was done so she decided to study a little bit before she went home. She saw some peep into the window. She went to the door and opened it.

“Were closed do you not read? It say clooosed!” maria said pointing out the sign.

“I can read Maria” Michael Guerin said.

“Then what the hell are you doing here?”

“ I couldnt sleep have alot on my mind” Maria let him in. She went back to her studying.

“Could I at least have piece of your famous alien chocolate cake?” michael asked he winked at her. maria cut a piece of the cake and put it on a plate and handed it to him.

“Its on the house” Maria said as she went back to her books.

“ So I Heard you like to sing” Michael said as he bit into his pie.

“How the hell do you know that?”

“Lucky guess” Michael said. Maria looked up and saw Max and Liz entering the crashdown.

“The two love birds are here” Maria said smiling.

“Hey” Liz said as she sat the counter with max next to her.

“What are you guys doing here so late?” Max asked.

“We were going to ask you the same thing?” Michael replied with a mouth full of chocolate cake.

“ We couldnt sleep so we were just shooting some hoops out on the court” Max replied. Maria and Michael both laughed and replied at the same time, “yeah right sure whatever”

“ well me and max are going to go upstairs and watch a movie or something you two can join us if you like” Liz said with a smile.

“No, I have to get home” Maria said as she stuffed all her books in her bag.

“ Yeah umm I have to get home too before my parents get worried” Michael said as he got up.

“Goodnight” Liz said softly as her and max went upstair to watch a movie.

Max and Liz were too into each other to watch the movie.


“Max were missing the movie” Liz said softly.

“ Well I've seen this movie twenty times already” Max said as he kissed her. This was crazy to Liz. She was going crazy how could she fall for someone so bad? She usually wasnt like this.

“ max we have to slow down” Liz said looking into his eyes. Max didnt want to slow down. He wanted her side. If he didnt have her he felt he was going to go crazy. But he could see that they were going way too fast for her.

“Ok” Max said softly kissing her again. Liz curled up next to him and laid her head on his shoulder.

“What time is it?” Liz asked softly. Max looked over at the clock and realized it was 2am.

“2am” Max said softly kissing the top of her head.

“We can stay here, my brother is probably at the main house.” Liz said softly.

“ you have two houses?” Max asked curiously.

“This is like an apartment here, and sometimes I stay up here a when I work and my parents sometimes rent it out over the summer .” Liz said softly trying to watch the movie.

“cool, so there is a room up here too?” Max asked.

“yeah” Liz said softly.

Before Liz and max knew it they were fast alseep on the couch. It was 7am in the morning. Mr parker went upstairs because he heard the tv running. He Thought that it was maybe one of the kids. He entered the room and found Liz and max asleep on the couch. He clicked the tv off. Both max and Liz woke up.

“ young man I think you need to get home” Mr parker said. Liz got and max quickly left. Liz looked up at her father and knew she had a lot of explaining to do.

“Downstairs now Lizzie” Mr parker said in a stern voice.


Liz sat in one of the booths with her father across from her.

“Lizzie what is going on? you dont come home, you have brusies on marks on you, your grades have gone down and Now I find you with a boy asleep on the couch” Jeff parker said to his only daughter.

“Nothing is going on Dad I promise you. Max is A great guy” Liz said.

“How did you get the marks on your arm” Liz couldnt look him in the eye.

“From nick” Liz said softly. Liz knew he didnt believe her.

“ I'm suppose to believe that your brother did this to you? Why would he do this?”

“because he is mad at me! He doesnt want me seeing max.”

“Well I dont want you seeing max either, If your lying and staying out all night” Jeff parker said he got up and went to the back.

“Thats unfair! You cant keep me away from max! I love him!” Liz yelled. Liz just realized what she said. She loved max evans. Her father turned to her and gave her a stern expression.

“Lizzie, I want whats best for you” He said.

“What about what I want! Its always been what you want what nick wants! When Do I get what I want!” Liz yelled as she stormed out of the crashdown.


Maria heard someone knocking on her door. She looked out the window and saw Liz.

“Liz what are you doing here so early?” Maria asked letting her in.

“ I'm sick of my life I'm sick of everything! My parents dont want me seeing max, nick doesnt want me seeing max. I dont undestand them!” Liz yelled as she paced back and fourth in maria's living room.


“Well umm Sweetie I need some coffee so I can wake up before you say anything more to me” maria said as she went into the kitchen. Liz felt like her world was crashing beneath her. maria came out of the kitchen and handed Liz a cup of steaming coffee.

“I Dont know what to do Ria” Liz said as she sipped on her coffee.

“ Do whats in your heart” Maria said softly.

Max walked into his house hoping his parents wouldnt know that he had been gone all night. As he made his way to the stairs he was stopped by his mother.

“Max we need to talk”His mother said motioning for him to sit down.

“Whats going on mom?” Max asked.

“where you all night?” She asked as max sat across from her.

“I was ...at Michael's you know how he is. We got carried away with practice and stuff so I just decided to spend the night at his house” Max hated lying to his mother.

“Why didnt you say something, why didnt you call? I was worried sick about you”

“Sorry it got so late I didnt want to call because I thought you were asleep” Max saif lying out of his teeth.

“ok,so is michael going to camp with you?” His mother asked.

“His parents wont let him go, They told him if he goes they will disown him”

“Thats a shame! His has such talent! Tell michael he needs to live with us!”

“I did, and you like michael way too much mom”

“Sorry, He is a great boy and has such potential and I think you and him would make a great ball players. Max just dont screw anything up. I want you to live your dream, I want you to suceede in life” his mother said smiling.

“I wont I will make you proud mom” He said hugging his mother. Michael came walking into the house.

“Hey, Mrs Evans, hey max wanna shoot some hoops?” Michael said tossing him the ball.

“Yeah, I'll be back in a couple of hours mom”

“Ok” She said smiling at her son.

“Your mom doesnt know about Liz does she?” Michael asked.

“No she doesnt, And she wont not for a while.” Max said as he hopped into michael's truck. They pulled up in front of East side roswell high.

“you have a key to the gym?” Max asked curiously.

“yeah the coach gave it me he said that you and I need a little practice because he said we have been off balance lately”

They walked up to the gym doors and michael noticed that the gym doors were unlocked.

“ Thats not good” Max a said.

They both walked in and noticed the gym was trashed. There was trash and paper everywhere. And Someone had Sprayed painted graffti all over the walls and bleachers.

“Oh my god!” Max said.

“Ohh boy west side is going to pay!” michael said as he dropped the ball on the court.
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Chapter 6


michael Slammed the door to the gym. He was angry max could see it in his eyes.

“pay back is going to be a bitch for them!” Michael yelled.

“Michael dont do anything stupid” max said calmly.

What? You dont want me to do anything because your relationship with liz will be on the line! I want them to pay!” Michael said. They both Got into the truck and drove off.

“Michael please use your brain before you do something your going to regret” max said.

“Maxwell,you dont get it”

“I do get it but I know how you think! You dont think before you act and you do something stupid!” Max yelled.

“I'm not going to do anything!” michael yelled.

Maria was Busy working in the crashdown. She hated Nick with a passion. She didnt know why she dated him for the amount of time she did. Him and his friends were complete morons. Maria walked by his table. Nick smacked her on the rear.

“Hey sexy” he said laughing. Maria turned to him and smiled.

“if you do that again I will knock your lights out. I'm not your girl anymore, and not someone you can smack around!” Maria yelled. Maria walked away and went behind the counter to make some milkshakes. She looked up and saw Max and michael coming through the door. 'uh oh' Maria thought as she watched michael and max go to their usual booth. Maria went up to them to take their orders.

“what can I get you guys?” She asked as she gave nick a death glare.

“Is he bothering you?” Michael asked.

“No I took care of him. How about a cherry coke its on the house”Maria said as she went behind the counter to make 2 cherry cokes. Michael sat there trying to keep his cool.

“Michael keep your cool” max said glarring over at nick.

“Maxwell I want to beat his ass” Michael said. Maria walked past Nick's table again with the cherry cokes and Nick smacked her on the rear again.

“I told you!” Maria yelled, but before Maria could do anything Michael jumped up.

“leave her alone!” Michael said standing between them.

“When did you become her bodyguard!” Nick yelled.

“I'm not going to let you smack her around, and trash our gym all in one day!” michael said looking like he was about ready to throw down. Nick got up and stood in michael's face. Max came between them.

“You dont have beef with him, you have beef with me” Max said. nick laughed and sat back down.

“ I cant believe someone like you would ever get the chance to get into camp. You dont have what it takes” nick said.

“Oh really? Well At Least I earned my way in and didnt have mommy and daddy buy My way into the camp.” max said.

“Take that back!” Nick said getting in max's face and pushing him.

“Stop! Not here not now!” Maria yelled.

“your not worth it!” Max yelled.

“Payback is going to be a bitch for you” Michael said getting in his face.

Nick Smirked and motioned for his team to leave and they left crashdown. Max sat down and laid his head on the table.

“Thanks” maria said to Michael with a smile.

no problem Have a slight problem with guys like Nick” Michael said.

“I want to pay you back for the gester”

“you dont have to” Michael said.

“No I really do”

“you know what you can do?”

“What?” Maria asked.

“you can help me and max clean our gym”

“That I can do” Maria said with a smile.


That Night -

Liz was sitting at her desk trying to study. She looked over and saw max watching her.

“What are you doing here?” She asked curiously.

“Watching a beautiful angel” He said softly.

“For real what are you doing here?”

“ I was wondering if you would like to help me, maria and michael clean up our gym” Max asked softly.

“ Whats wrong with your gym?” Liz asked curiously as she made her way closer to her.

“ your brother and his friends trashed it”

“ Oh my god why didnt you tell me?” Liz said softly.

“ because I didnt want any problems, were going to clean it up tonight before anyone notices” Max said.

“Count me in” Liz said climbing out the window.


Several hours later -

Michael was sweeping up the gym floor. When he noticed maria was bouncing around the gym floor with headphones and music blarring. Max and Liz were taking out bags of trash to the dumpster.

“Hey Deluca!” michael yelled. Maria didnt hear him as she Started painting over the grafitti that Nick and his friends left on the wall. Michael walked up to her and tapped her on the shoulder, she jumped and The paint brush flung and she ended up painting Michael's face.

“oh my god I'm so sorry!” Maria yelled.

“yeah thanks” Michael said whipping the paint from his face.

“Are you almost finished?” Maria asked him.

“yeah just about. Wait you have some paint...on your face” Michael said as he took his thumb and whiped The paint off her cheek. There eyes locked. Michael felt this irrestiable urge to kiss her. He leaned in closer and just as he was about to kiss her, the doors of the gym open. max and Liz stroll in.

“good timing” Michael said softly.

“I think were just about done” Liz said .

“yeah lets get out of here” Michael said as he left the gym with them. They Headed towards the parking lot. Michael went to step off th curve and Max noticed a car speeding up towards them.

“They are not slowing down watch out michae!” Max pushed Michael out of the way and The Car Hit Max. The last thing max remembered was the car and then everything went black. Michael Quickly got up off the ground. And saw max's lifeless body laying on the payment.

“Max!” Liz screamed as she went to him. Michael kneeled down beside him.

“Dont move him! maria call an ambulance!” Liz said as she started crying as she touched his face.

Liz, michael and maria sat in the waiting room of the hospital. Liz felt like her world had crashed beneath her. Who would Want to run a person down with there car. Anger fueled in her. She knew exactly who did it. She recognized the car.

“jeremy mayfield” Liz said softly.

“jeremy mayfield? why would you be thinking about him at a time like this?” Maria said outloud.

“because that was his car that Hit max! I bet My brother got him to do his dirty work!” Liz said outloud.

“Oh god you cant be serious!” Maria yelled.

“I am” Liz said.

“ It should of been me!” Michael said as he covered his hands with his face.

“Dont talk like that” Maria said.

Max Slowly opened his eyes. He looked around and didnt know where he was at first. Then he saw The nurses and realized he was in the hospital.

“Where am I?” He asked softly.

“Roswell memorial, you were in a hit and run” The nurse said.

“What?” Max said feeling the pain run through his entire body. His Mother and Father came rushing into the room.


Nick pulled the car up into the jeremy's Dads garage. He turned the engine off. They Both sat in the car for a moment.

“We could of killed him” Jeremy said.

“He deserves it, The son of a bitch took my chance to be an NBA star!” Nick yelled.


“ He didnt take it away! you did! you screwed it up!” Jeremy yelled.

“Shutup!” Nick yelled.


Michael and maria let Liz have some time alone with max in his hospital room. Liz Pulled the chair up next to his bed. He looked battered and beaten.

“ I Thought I lost you” Liz said softly. Max Looked over at her and smiled.

“But you didnt, I'm ok, just a little banged up” Max said. Liz started to cry.

“ God, I just keep thinking, what if you never met me. What if I never fell in love with you this would have never happend.” Liz said softly as she whiped her tears.

“ Did you just say you fell in love with me?” Max asked smiling through his pain. Liz laughed and smiled.

“yes, I'm in love with you max” Liz said softly.

“god, I'm in love with you liz. If I could move right now I would be kissing you” He said. Liz leaned over and kissed him on the cheek.

“I know, get some rest you'll be out of here soon” Liz said softly.
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Chapter 7

A week later -

Liz was ready to leave, she had her clothes packed in a bag. All she had to do was leave. But something was stopping her. She threw the bag on the bed. There was a soft knock on her bedroom door.

“Hold on getting dressed!” She yelled. She quickly threw the bag in the closet and went to open the door. He brother stood behind the door.

“dinner is ready” Nick said softly.

“Oh I'm not hungry.” Liz said as she started to slam the door on his face. Nick stucj his foot in the door.

“how long are you going to do this?” Nick asked.

“ I dont know what your talking about?” Liz said.

“ you know what I am talking about. How long are you going to be mad at me and realize I had nothing to do with max evans so called accident” Nick said.

“Oh my god! I cant believe your standing here in front of me lying! If My mom and dad hadnt of gotten you out it you wouldnt be here right now. I cant believe your Lies were so believeable!” Liz yelled as she headed downstairs.

“ What can I say I have good friends who are good liars” Nick said with smug look on his face. Liz left the house and slammed the front door. She wasnt about to stay in her house with her parents who didnt believe a word she said. She needed to get away, away from her life and everyone around her.

Max needed closure. when the doctors told him he wouldnt beable to go to camp he was devastated. He had felt now since he was in the hospital but the dam doctors didnt want to the chance and have him play and hurt himself even worse.

Max Stood at Liz parkers Doorstep. He wanted it to be well known that Nick got what he wanted. He knocked on the door. Nick got up to answer the door. He opened the door and was suprised to see Max there.

“What the hell are you doing here?” nick asked as he closed the door behind him.

“Look I didnt come here to start a fight with you. I came here to end the fight. I..Just wanted to let you know that you got what you wanted. I cant go to camp, you can have my spot.....and as for Me and Liz well thats something you cant take away from me.”

“ you touch her and your dead Evans” Max said with anger in his tone.

“ Then so be it, kill me right now! you almost did a week a ago! What is wrong with you? Why do you like hurting people so much? Liz is the best thing that has come into my life why do you want what I have with her? Why do you hate me so much!” Max yelled.

“ get off Our property! And If I see you touching my sister I will call the police!” Nick yelled as he slammed the door in his face.

“ bastard” Max said as he turned and walked away. He ended up walking to the crashdown. He saw Liz in the crashdown by herself. She was crying her eyes out. Max Knocked on the glass. Liz looked up and didnt realize at first it was max.

She went to the door and whipped her eyes. She looked closer and realized it was max.

“max?” She said as she opened the door. Max didnt say anything to her. he just kissed her.

“God I missed you” He said softly.

Max went inside with her and told her everything that was going on. He Knew that everything he had worked for was no going down the drain.

“God max, I dont want to see him go off to camp. I dont want him take everything from you” Liz said softly.

“He didnt take everything, I still have you and I will always have you. But...Maybe we need to keep our distance.” max said softly.

“What? How...how can I keep my distance from you? I love you max!” Liz yelled agravatted that he was saying this.

“ I know...but..”

“Dont say anything!” Liz said kissing him.

“Liz dont...I”

“Shhh, max I cant keep my distance from you. We have to work this out, I mean I know My brother doesnt want me near you. But I need you, your the only thing thats keeping me alive right now” Liz said softly.

“ you dont know how hard this is Liz. your brother wants to Kill me! If he sees us ...” Liz stopped him from saying another word.

“ He doesnt have to see us. We can together without him my parents knowing. I'm not going to let his idle threats keep us apart! I love you too much max!” Liz said kissing him.

“Ok, we can meet at the crashdown. Everynight after closing” Max said kissing her.

“yes” Liz said not wanting him to stop kissing her.

“I have to go” Liz said softly.

“I know” Max said not able to let her go. Liz didnt want to leave she wanted to stay in his arms forever.

“ One of us has to go” Liz whispered. Max kissed her softly. max took Liz up stairs to the empty bedroom. Liz glanced at the bed.

“Max...I really have to go” Liz said softly.

“dont go, stay with me. Be with me, Love me Liz” Max said Kissing her. Liz wanted Max more then anything in world.

“We cant do this” Liz said softly.

“I want you liz, I want all of you” Max whispered in her ear. Liz could feel his heart beating faster and faster and faster. Every touch was amazing to liz. His skin was so warm on hers.

“Liz I...can I...” Max said out of breath taking her to the bed.

“yes, Max I want you” She said as she kissed him.


Liz's mother glanced at the clock and realize it was after 7am. Liz hadnt even come down stairs for breakfast. Mrs parker went upstairs to Liz's room. Nick stoppe her before she reached the stairs.

“She's not there, She left last night and I dont think she came home” Nick said to his mother.

“Where the hell is she?” Mrs parker asked.

“I think I might know I'm going to skip My first few classes this morning to find her” Nick said.

“No I'll find her” Mrs parker said as she grabbed her things and headed out the door.

Max Opened his eyes and saw a beautiful angel laying next to him. He smiled as he watched her sleep. He glanced over at the clock and realized what time it was. 7:30am.

“oh shit!” Max said jumping up out of bed. Liz woke up hearing him yelling.

“Whats going on?” Liz said as she sat up pulling the sheet across her naked body.

“Its 7:30” Max said trying to gather his clothes.

“What?” Liz looked at the clock and quickly got of bed.

“Oh god My parents are going to be up here looking for me!” Liz yelled she hel she threw on a shirt and helped max find his clothes. she found his cothes and threw them at him. He quickly dressed. Liz heard footsteps coming up the stairs.

“oh god! Hide in the closet!” Liz said as she pushed max in the closet.

“Liz! Are you in there!” Her mother yelled through the door. Liz opened the door.

“Hey” Liz said with a tired look on her face.

“Why didnt you come home last night?” She asked.

“Oh, Well I went for a walk and it got late and I didnt want to walk back home so I decided to Stay up here” Liz said lying.

“Well Lizzie you should of called we were worried” Mrs parker said.

“Well I'm fine” Liz said.

“Your late for school I'll call the school and tell them”

“Ok mom I'll get ready” Liz said as she shut the door.


She leaned against the door and was relieved that she didnt get caught. Max came out of the closet.

“That was close” Liz said softly.

“Were going to be late for school” Max said with a smile.

“So” Liz said sofly and she motioned for him to come closer. Max wrapped his arms around her and kissed her softly.

“Last night was...The best night of my life.” liz said

“It was amazing, you were amazing ” Max said brushing her hair away from her face.

“ you better go” Liz said kissing him again.

“How am I going to sneek out.” Max asked.

“go down the fire escape” Liz said softly.

“I dont want to leave, not after everything is cemented between us” max said softly.

“ Meet me tonight Same place” Liz said kissing him quickly.

“Ok , I Love you”

“I love you” Liz said watching him leave. He climbed down the fire escape and left. Nick watched max Leave from the back alley behind the crashdown.

“Son of a bitch!” he said softly as he drove off and headed to school.
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Chapter 8

West roswell high -

Liz couldnt concentrate in class. Her mind kept drifting to max. The Way he touched her, the way he kissed her was...amazing. She pulled out of her daydream when Maria tapped her on the shoulder.

“ Are you listening to me and Alex?” maria asked looking at her curiously.

“umm what? Sorry I didnt realize you were talking to me” Liz said.

“We see that. What happened? your acting really weird today” Alex said as they walked down the hallway.

“Nothing I was just thinking about something” Liz said with a smile.

“is that something Max?” maria asked curiously.

“ actually No its not” Liz said Lying. Lying was becoming a habit now for her. Out of no where jeremy Mayfield Grabbed Liz by the arm and pulled her into the an empty class room.

“What are you doing!” Liz yelled.

“We need to talk, I'm... sorry that What happened to max happened. I didnt want to be a part of it. And I want to let you know I am going to go talk to the police” jeremy said.

“good, And I know you didnt want to do it. And I know your not that kind of guy to hurt someone like that” Liz said.

“ When Nick told me what he was going to do It was too late.”

“I know, Just do the right thing jeremy” Liz said softly.

“is..max ok? Have you seen him?” jeremy asked.

“Oh well he's more then wonderful but he wont be playing ball for a while.”

“ Thats ashame because he is a good player and I never had anything against him” Jeremy said. Liz hugged jeremy tighly.

“I'll take any punishment that comes my way since I was involved in his accident”

“your good man” liz said softly.

“thanks” he said.


When school was finally out for the day Liz hurried Home. She plopped down on her bed and thought about that night. She looked over and saw Max sitting in the window seal.

“what are you doing here?” She asked as she made her way to him.

“ I came to see my girl” Max said as he kissed her softly.

“ you came at the perfect time, My parents are at the crashdown and nick is at practice” Liz said looking into his eyes and smiling.

“ I missed you” he said softly.

“ I missed you too. All I think about was last night.” Liz said softly. Max smiled and laughed.

“There will be plenty nights like that” He said kissing her.

“ Fore seeing the Future are we?” Liz asked smiling

“ yes, because your my future Liz” Max said softly.

“come here” Liz said pulling him into the room.


Maria knocked on the door four times and no one answered. She decided to walk right in. She went upstairs to Liz's room. She heard Giggling, she walked in and saw max and liz on the bed.

“Oh sorry!” Maria said as she quickly shut the door.

“She has perfect timing” Max said as he got up.

“yeah she does, let me go see what she wants, you stay here” She said as she gave him a quick kiss.

“Oh ny god Liz! Please tell me I did not see what I thought I saw!” Maria yelled.

“Ria stop acting like a child. Were teenagers ok, and its no big deal were just making out”

“making out! Who are you! When does my best friend Liz parker start making out with guys!”

“Ria stop! Your blowing this way out of the water”

“Liz , just tell me please that you havent had you know...the “s” word” Liz smiled and laughed.

“ I dont want to talk about it and its none of your busines now what do you want?” Liz said.

“Well I wanted to talk to you about something. alone” Maria said motioning at Max who was coming down the stairs.

“I can take the hint” Max said as he went to give Liz a quick kiss and left.

“Ok what is it Maria because you have really bad timing” Liz said sitting across from her.

“Well... Its about Michael” Liz looked at her confused.

“What about him?” Liz asked.

“Well that night we were at the gym he tried to kiss me...I..Dont know if there is something there or not. I havent seen him all week” Liz smiled and laughed.

“ your trying to tell me that..The Michael Guerin tried to kiss you?”

“Did you not hear me the first time”

“Thats so sweet! you two would make a cute couple” Liz said smiling.

“Why does it sound like that you seem to think this is Funny?”

“Well you were the one that said to Me that you and michael in the same sentenc makes you gag” Liz said as she got up went to the kitchen.

“yeah I did say that , but that was before he tried to kiss me”

“Ok Ria, I really do think michael has a thing for you. “

“Do you really think so?” Maria asked.

“yes” Liz said.

Michael Heard a knock on his front door. He opened it and was suprised to see Max.

“maxwell?” He said.

“That would that me, and I need to talk you about something.” Max said walking into the house. Michael knew something was up.

“ok by the sound of that it doesnt sound good” michael replied.

“ You know I cant play ball for a while Because this accident” Max said softly.

“Its no big deal were doing ok, is there something else?” Michael asked.

“yeah umm I gave my spot up. I gave it to Nick because I cant play at camp either” Max said softly. Michael looked at him with shock and horror on his face.

“your kidding right?” Michael said.

“Does it look like I am kidding?” Max said with an emotionless face.

“ Camp is your dream max!” Michael yelled.

“I know it is, But I am willing to put my dreams on hold”

“ On hold for what?” max looked at him as if he should know the answer.

“Ohh, I get it. Your going to give everything up for Liz”

“yes, I want to spend the rest of my life with her”

“Maxwell you need to get your head out of the dam clouds! your giving everything up for a girl!”

“Not giving basketball up I'm just putting it on hold” Max said.

“ Well thats your call not mine. I'm glad you Picked Liz to put everything on hold with. I like Liz she is amazing. If it was any other girl I would so be kicking your ass right now”

“Thanks , Thats good to know” max said.

That Night -

Liz Sat outside on her balcony writing in her journal. She kept thinking and Thinking led her to thoughts she shouldnt be thinking or wouldnt ever want to think about. Her brother came out on to the balcony. And sat across from her.

“what do you want?” She asked him closing her journal and waiting for him to answer.

“I want to make a deal with you” he said softly.

“I dont make deals with anyone that tries to hurt the people I care about” Liz said as she started to go back inside.

“I'll Give Max's spot back to him at camp, Under one condition.”

“Whats the condition” Liz said softly.

“That you dont see him anymore, And I promise that I will leave him alone from now on”

“your joking right?” Liz asked curiously.
“No I'm not, I dont want him anywhere near you. I know you slept with him. And if you dont do my end of the deal I will tell our parents that you have been sleeping around with him. And I will have them send you away.”

“you bastard!” Liz said as she slapped him across the face. Nick held his face for a moment.

“Its the best deal your going to get. Take or suffer, its your call” He said as he went back into the house.

Several hours later -



Max Climbed Up the balcony to Liz's room. As he made his way to the window he notice nick sitting there.

“She's not here” Nick said softly. Max turned toward Nick.

“Where is she?” Max asked.

“I'm not going to tell you. But I know she doesnt want to see you again” Nick said standing up to face him.

“ what?” Max asked curiously.

“ She doesnt want to see you anymore. What part of that sentence do you not comprehend?”

“What did you say to her!” Max yelled.

“Nothing, she is a big girl she makes her own decisions.”

“your a liar! I want to talk to her!”

“I'm sorry you cant She's going to be leaving soon” Nick said.

“leaving?” max asked.

“yeah our parents decided that It would be best for her if she spent some time with our aunt in florida”

“you son of a bitch!” Max yelled.

“I suggest you leave before I call police on you for breaking and entering” Nick said holding the phone out in front of him. Max quickly left.

He jumped in his jeep and drove over to the crashdown. He saw maria in there working.

“Where she?” Max asked furiously.

“Where's who?” Maria asked curiously.

“Liz, is she leaving to go to Florida?” Max asked.

“ who told you?”

“Who do you think! Where is she!”

“She isnt here, I dont know where she is. She came over here and then left she told me that she was leaving tomorrow”

“I Have to stop her”

“max, I know how you can stop her”

“How?” Max asked.

“Ask her to marry you” Maria said softly.

“ I was planning on asking her anyway” max said.


Liz Came Home and entered War zone that was in her house. Her parents were yelling at her non stop. Nick sat there with a smug look on her face. All she knew was she was leaving for ASAP tomorrow.

“Are you done yelling at me now” Liz asked as she went upstairs to start packing her things.


Liz Stood On her balcony Letting her hair be blown by the breeze. She was waiting for him. She heard his soft whisper. She looked down and smiled. She seen him climbing up the side of the balcony.

“what are you doing? your going to Kill yourslef!” Liz whispered. He didnt care, he climbed over the balcony and pulled liz into his arms. He placed his forehead on her's.

“I had to see you.” He whispered.

“you cant be here, if my brother finds you you are as good as dead” Liz whispered.

“I Dont care Liz, I would die thousand times over For you Liz” He said as he kissed her. He pushed her up against the balcony wall. His Breath was so warm on her face. Liz Loved everything about him. His scent was intoxicating.

“marry me ” He whispered On her lips. Liz looked up into his eyes. Did he just ask what she thought he asked. Or was she hearing things.

“What? I..” She whispered softly as she pulled away from him.

“ I want to be with you, I want to grow old with you, start a family with you. I want all you” Max whispered.

“You cant have me” Liz whispered back. Someone whistled in the distance.

“look I..Love you. If you love me you will meet me at the church Tomorrow morning , as a soon as the sun rises. We will get married and start our life” again someone whistled and this time it was louder.

“Go” Liz whispered softly.

“promise me” Max said looking her in the eyes. Liz smiled and tear ran down her cheek, max wiped it away.

“I promise now go!” she said as she kissed him one last time.

“I love you” he said as he climbed down the balcony and disappeared in the distance. Max climbed down and Met Michael at the bottom.

“Are you sure this is going to keep her from leaving? you dont what time they have her scheduled to leave?” Michael said.

“yeah I Know but this is something I have to do. I love her with all my heart and soul, Michael. Just be ready in the morning. I want everything to go smoothly.” max said.

“lets just hope to god your plan works out and she dont leave before she gets a wedding.” Michael said.

“Everything will work out I know it will. the hard part is telling my parents”

“Good luck” Michael said as they jumped into the truck and drove off.


7am the next morning -

Liz walked down the Aisle of the church. She looked into max's eyes. He looked so hansome in his suit and tie. Michael didnt look too bad either. Maria smiled at her and Alex gave her the usual half smile he has. Liz stood beside max nervously.

“Do you Maxwell Evans take The Liz parker to be your wife to have and to hold through sickness and health till death do u part? The priest asked with a smile.

“I do” max said softly.

“Do you Elizabeth Parker take the Maxwell evans to be you husband, to have and to hold through sickness and health and untill death do you part?” Liz smiled and replied.

“I do”

“you may now kiss the bride” Max kissedLiz softly. Everything went by so quickly , Liz didnt even have a chance to comphrend everything around her. Her and Max went his house first to break the news to his parents. Liz didnt want to risk anything by Breaking the news to her parents first. Max Entered the house with Liz by his side.

“Mom! Dad!” he yelled.

“Whats going on? shouldnt you be in school?” Mrs evans knew something was up. He seen the look on his face and then see Liz at his side.

“Mom we need to tell you something” Max said with a smile.

“We?” She asked.

“yeah Umm I dont know how to say this but...Me and Liz got married this morning” His mother looked at him suprised and Then fainted.

Liz didnt want to be in the middle of the hurricane that was about blow so she told max she would Go to her house, she knew that telling them would be the hardest thing, because are expecting to leave for Florida today.

When she got to her house she found all her bags at the doorway ready for her to leave. her mother noticed her coming in through the door.

“Where have you been! Were going to be late” She started to pick up the bags but Liz stopped her.

“Mom I'm not going to florida” Liz said.

“What? yes you are sweetie”

“No I'm not, I'm just going to come out and say this, me and Max got married this morning” Liz was waiting for her mother to say something instead she slapped her across the face.

“Why would you do a thing like that! Are you pregnant! Is that why you Married that trash!” she yelled. Nick came down the stairs and heard everything.

“you married him didnt you?” Nick said.

“Nick wait dont do anything please!” She stopped him from going out the door.

“ Move or I will move you!” Nick yelled.

“Please Nick! Dont do anything to him! I love him! There is nothing you can do its done!” Liz yelled.

“There is something I can do” Nick said pushing her out of the way and running out the door. He Jumped in the car and took off.

“Stop him mom! He will Kill max!” Liz yelled.

“What do you want me to do? you put it upon yourself! I want you out of my house now!” She took her bags and threw them out the door.

“please mom!”

“Go!” She yelled. Her mother pushed her out the door. She fell hard on her knees onto the payment. She sat there crying. She quickly got up and jumped into her Father's car and took off.

max wanted to makesure that everything was settled with him nick now that him and Liz were married. He Waited on the court with Maria, alex and michael. He noticed Nick's truck pull to the court.

“Umm he doesnt look to happy” Alex said. Nick got of the car and Pulled out a gun and pointed it Max.

“ you son of a bitch!” he said pointing the gun at him. Liz pulled and jumpe out of the car.

“Stop! Nick please!” Liz yelled.

“shutup! How can you marry trash like him!” Nick yelled.

“Nick I dont want to do this, I Love your sister and I wouldnt hurt her for the world”

“Fuck you Evans!”

“Nick ! Please!” Liz yelled.

“Put the gun down Nick” max said trying to reason with him.

“no!” Nick yelled.

“Shoot me then! Shoot me and get it over with! Put me out of my misery and see what will happen to liz once I die!” Max yelled.

“Dont push me!” Nick yelled.

“ do it” Max said standing face to face with the gun barrel. Michael then came up behinf nick and grabbed him. They wrestled for a while. And Michael took the gun away from him and pointed it at nick. Liz ran to max's arms.

“dont you touch her!” Nick yelled as he ran towards Max. Michael jumped out of the way and Max and Nick started beating each other. Michael threw the gun down and Pulled Nick off max and shoved him to the ground.

“Stop! Before someone gets killed!” Liz yelled through her tears. Max Picked up the gun and pointed it at Nick. He had his hand on the trigger and was ready to shoot. he threw the gun down .

“your not worth it” Out of no where Nick pulled a knife out and stabbed max in the stomach. Max held his stomach and fell to his knees. Nick dropped the knife and took off running.

“max!” Liz yelled. She held him in her arms. Michael took his jacket and pressed it against his wound.

“your going to be ok maxwell dont leave me or liz!” He said pressing the wound tightly while Maria quickly called 911.



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A/ N- sorry this chapter is so short! I didnt want to drag it on! But the next chapter will be longer I promise!


Chapter 9 -



Reality hadnt hit Liz yet. All she could feel was numbness. She curled up into a ball in the hospital waiting room chair. She had so many emotions running through. She didnt know whether to be angry, sad or hurt. Max's mother came into the room and seen Liz. She came up to her and hugged her tightly. That was when they both lost it.


Michael went to the vending machine to get a drink. He Pushed for a cherry coke and nothing came down. he kicked the machine.

“god!” he yelled as he kicked the machine. maria came up to him.

“Dont take it out on the machine” maria said stopping him from destroying the coke machine.

“Why did this happen? Why did it happen to max. max is a good man, he doesnt deserve this” Michael said.

“I know, No one deserve anything like this”Maria said.

“He's going to pay” Michael said with anger in his tone.

“Michael dont try to do anything stupid. It wont help max”

“ I know that! I cant sit here and just wait! He's out running free!” Michael yelled.

“The sheriff is looking for him now. They will find him and put him in jail and then everything will ok” Maria said as she tried to comfort Michael. Maria hugged michael tightly. The warm embrace felt good to michael.

The doctor came into the waiting room. Liz's heart stopped. She felt her legs getting weak. Max's mother had to hold her up.
“We did all we could, right now he is a coma.” the doctor said.

“For how long?” Liz asked.

“I dont know it could months, weeks or even...years” the doctor said.

“Thats not exceptable!” Liz yelled.

“there is nothing to do now but wait, you can go see him if you wish” The doctor said. Liz feel to her knees crying.


Several weeks later -

Liz was asleep in the waiting room. Maria cameinto the waiting room. She wanted to tell her that The sheriff had arrested Nick, but she didnt want to wake her she looked so peaceful. Liz Woke up and sat up in the chair.

“hey I got you some coffee, and The sheriff arrested Nick” Maria said. Maria and Liz looked up and saw the doctor come into the room. Liz seen the look on the doctors face. Her heart dropped. She knew it wasnt good. She couldnt breath as she stood up to hear what the doctor had to say. Then everything went black . Liz had fainted and fell to the floor.


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