The Heat of the Moment (M/L ADULT) ~{COMPLETE}~
Posted: Sat May 01, 2004 9:26 am
Disclaimer: The author of this fan fiction does not own any aspect of Roswell. Those rights belong to Melinda Metz, Jason Katims, WB, UPN, 20th Century Fox, etc. Disclaimer added by moderator.
Okay, I'm trying my hand at plotless smut. Don't ask me why with so many good writers on this board, but I thought I'd give it a go. I'm a little nervous so take pity.
Unlike "Everything to You" (for those of you who are reading) this one is already mostly written except for maybe the last two parts. When I say plotless I mean almost no plot to speak of. The prologue is just a teaser but I'll start posting the rest a few days to a week at a time if you guys let me know you want me to continue. And don't worry, I'm part way through the next part of ETY, so I'm not ignoring it.
Oh and I need to thank Lindsay (Applebylicious) for inspiring me with her writing.
Let me know what you think.
The Heat of the Moment (Prologue)
The wind was glorious. Liz Evans closed her eyes against the feeling of it making her hair dance as she and her husband Max drove through the wooded countryside towards their destination.
She was so happy. They were finally going to take a break from their busy lives to have a few days just to themselves. The house was large and secluded, on a lake in the mountains. A few years ago, one of her colleagues at the lab had mentioned that he and his wife had stayed there and how wonderful it was. Liz had jumped at the chance to rent it and since then, they had been going as often as possible. Now they had it for a long weekend.
She and Max needed this time together. Liz shivered as she thought about what it could mean.
Not that their lives weren’t wonderful already. She had known Max Evans since they were children in Roswell New Mexico, having met in the third grade. Liz distinctly remembered the feeling of the new boy’s eyes on her as he’d gotten off the school bus with his sister. When she’d looked up from playing, his large hazel eyes had been trained on her and even at that young age, it had struck her in some indefinable way that there was something special about him.
Of course, it wasn’t until they were in high school that she found out just how special. Although they’d known each other since grade school, she and Max hadn’t really been friends. In fact, Max hadn’t been friends with anyone except for his sister and one strange boy named Michael. But that day in the CrashDown, her family’s alien themed diner where she and her best friend Maria worked as waitresses, changed all of their lives forever.
Liz had had a secret crush on Max Evans since she was old enough to admire his uniquely beautiful features and beautiful body, not to mention his polite shyness and quiet studious demeanor. Everything about him appealed to her, but her own feelings of inadequacy had kept her from trying to get him to notice her as more than a lab partner in their science class. Her only saving graces were that he never had a girlfriend and Maria’s insistence that he secretly had a crush on her too. Of course, Liz didn’t believe it for a minute. Who would pick a short, studious science nerd over some of the other girls in their school, especially someone as drool-worthy as Max Evans?
She’d said as much to Maria that day in the CrashDown, even though it had looked like Max had been staring at her. But when the shot rang out and she’d felt the numbness take over as she hit the ground, she found out differently.
Max, it turned out, was an alien. He, along with his sister and Michael had crash landed in Roswell in a spaceship in 1947 where they had incubated in pods in a cave in the desert until they’d hatched in 1989, looking like six year olds. Wondering around in the desert, Max and Isabel had been picked up by Phillip and Diane Evans from the side of the road and adopted by them. Michael had been too afraid to show himself and had subsequently been found and turned over to child services where he eventually gained a foster father who it turned out later was abusing him.
The three of them gradually found out that they had powers that humans didn’t possess. Max had the ability to heal and he used it that day to heal the bullet wound in Liz’s abdomen. She found out later that no one knew of their secret and Max had risked exposing them all to save her life.
Long story short, Maria was right and Liz was wrong. Max Evans did have a crush on her. Actually Max Evans loved her. He’d loved her for as long as he’d known her and at the age of 16, she came to know and love him too. They were soulmates and the day he healed her, Max had formed a permanent mental connection to her that allowed them to see into each others souls.
Liz kept his secret along with Maria and their other friends Alex and Kyle and they had all been friends since. She and Max had eventually gone to college together, gotten married and were currently living in Colorado Springs where Liz was a molecular biologist and Max was a counselor. They’d been married for five glorious years and their lives couldn’t be more perfect.
Well, that wasn’t strictly true. There was one thing that would make their lives even better. Liz looked over at Max, wondering if she should tell him what she’d done, when she noticed the way his hands were gripping the steering wheel. His knuckles were white. Concerned at first, she stared at him, but as her eyes slowly traveled his torso she saw the cause of his problem and she smiled. This was definitely going to be a good weekend.
TBC...?
Okay, I'm trying my hand at plotless smut. Don't ask me why with so many good writers on this board, but I thought I'd give it a go. I'm a little nervous so take pity.
Unlike "Everything to You" (for those of you who are reading) this one is already mostly written except for maybe the last two parts. When I say plotless I mean almost no plot to speak of. The prologue is just a teaser but I'll start posting the rest a few days to a week at a time if you guys let me know you want me to continue. And don't worry, I'm part way through the next part of ETY, so I'm not ignoring it.
Oh and I need to thank Lindsay (Applebylicious) for inspiring me with her writing.
Let me know what you think.
The Heat of the Moment (Prologue)
The wind was glorious. Liz Evans closed her eyes against the feeling of it making her hair dance as she and her husband Max drove through the wooded countryside towards their destination.
She was so happy. They were finally going to take a break from their busy lives to have a few days just to themselves. The house was large and secluded, on a lake in the mountains. A few years ago, one of her colleagues at the lab had mentioned that he and his wife had stayed there and how wonderful it was. Liz had jumped at the chance to rent it and since then, they had been going as often as possible. Now they had it for a long weekend.
She and Max needed this time together. Liz shivered as she thought about what it could mean.
Not that their lives weren’t wonderful already. She had known Max Evans since they were children in Roswell New Mexico, having met in the third grade. Liz distinctly remembered the feeling of the new boy’s eyes on her as he’d gotten off the school bus with his sister. When she’d looked up from playing, his large hazel eyes had been trained on her and even at that young age, it had struck her in some indefinable way that there was something special about him.
Of course, it wasn’t until they were in high school that she found out just how special. Although they’d known each other since grade school, she and Max hadn’t really been friends. In fact, Max hadn’t been friends with anyone except for his sister and one strange boy named Michael. But that day in the CrashDown, her family’s alien themed diner where she and her best friend Maria worked as waitresses, changed all of their lives forever.
Liz had had a secret crush on Max Evans since she was old enough to admire his uniquely beautiful features and beautiful body, not to mention his polite shyness and quiet studious demeanor. Everything about him appealed to her, but her own feelings of inadequacy had kept her from trying to get him to notice her as more than a lab partner in their science class. Her only saving graces were that he never had a girlfriend and Maria’s insistence that he secretly had a crush on her too. Of course, Liz didn’t believe it for a minute. Who would pick a short, studious science nerd over some of the other girls in their school, especially someone as drool-worthy as Max Evans?
She’d said as much to Maria that day in the CrashDown, even though it had looked like Max had been staring at her. But when the shot rang out and she’d felt the numbness take over as she hit the ground, she found out differently.
Max, it turned out, was an alien. He, along with his sister and Michael had crash landed in Roswell in a spaceship in 1947 where they had incubated in pods in a cave in the desert until they’d hatched in 1989, looking like six year olds. Wondering around in the desert, Max and Isabel had been picked up by Phillip and Diane Evans from the side of the road and adopted by them. Michael had been too afraid to show himself and had subsequently been found and turned over to child services where he eventually gained a foster father who it turned out later was abusing him.
The three of them gradually found out that they had powers that humans didn’t possess. Max had the ability to heal and he used it that day to heal the bullet wound in Liz’s abdomen. She found out later that no one knew of their secret and Max had risked exposing them all to save her life.
Long story short, Maria was right and Liz was wrong. Max Evans did have a crush on her. Actually Max Evans loved her. He’d loved her for as long as he’d known her and at the age of 16, she came to know and love him too. They were soulmates and the day he healed her, Max had formed a permanent mental connection to her that allowed them to see into each others souls.
Liz kept his secret along with Maria and their other friends Alex and Kyle and they had all been friends since. She and Max had eventually gone to college together, gotten married and were currently living in Colorado Springs where Liz was a molecular biologist and Max was a counselor. They’d been married for five glorious years and their lives couldn’t be more perfect.
Well, that wasn’t strictly true. There was one thing that would make their lives even better. Liz looked over at Max, wondering if she should tell him what she’d done, when she noticed the way his hands were gripping the steering wheel. His knuckles were white. Concerned at first, she stared at him, but as her eyes slowly traveled his torso she saw the cause of his problem and she smiled. This was definitely going to be a good weekend.
TBC...?