You Make Me Sick - AU M/L ADULT (Complete)

[DreamingOfMax84]

Title: You Make Me Sick

Author: DreamingOfMax84 a.k.a. *~Ria~*

Email: DreamingOfMax84@hotmail.com

AIM: DreamingOfMax84

Rating: ADULT.... so watch out kiddies!!

Category: M/L all the way baby!!

Disclaimer: I own nothing.... wait I own my diamond engagement ring, my school books, my cell phone, and of course my lovely fiancé. [grin] Just kidding. I own nothing that has to do with Roswell or any of its affiliates.

Summary: Max Evans and Liz Parker have know each other for about 17 years, basically their entire lives, and that’s exactly how long they’ve hated each other. This is purely a smut fic. And since this is pure smut there is no plot, if you find one you're looking too hard.... Come on it's just for fun. Plus this is AU. Meaning no aliens, Tess, baby any of it.

The songs belongs to Pink and Jordan Knight, I'm just borrowing them.




You Make Me Sick




They make me sick
I know I feel you
That's why we got to stick together
Yep, yep, yep
*laughs
I know it!

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

We was on our way home on the freeway
In the six double O bumpin' Isley
He was gettin' kind of close, kind of touchy
Guess he had a little too much Hennesy
He told me that he wanna go home
With me up on the hill to my condo
Told me he would keep it all on the low-low
But I told him go I don't really know though

He got closer to me
He started getting deep
He had me in a zone
When he started to show me things
I never saw before
Baby was smooth but I knew it was game
Helluva a cool but you man had the same
The way he licked his lips

And touched my hips I knew that he was slick

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enought of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

So hot in my six now
So hot, had to roll all the windows down
Isley got me thinking 'bout them sheets now
Wondering should I really take it there now?
He told me you would make it worth it
But thinking how many times have I heard this
Got him feeling but I'm not even nervous
All his slick ass lines were kind of working

I felt my knees get weak
But he was calling me
Just couldn't take the heat
Anyway it was two or three
I had to get out the streets
Baby was cool but I knew it was game
He was too smooth to be screaming my name
And even though we made the best of it
I still told him this

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

Hmm...Yeah

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

I want you and I hate it
Hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it
I gotta get a grip of this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't no, no, no, no
Oh, you make sick
I want you and I'm hating it

~*Pink - You Make Me Sick~*



Max Evans and Liz Parker have known each other forever, and in that time they have despised each other. They couldn’t stand to be anywhere in the vicinity of the other. At parties they were always segregated, Max and his friends on one side, Liz and hers on the other. At school they avoided each other at all costs, when the encountered each other, they’d quickly walk away.

Their friends had tried numerous times to get them to talk to each other, to resort their differences. The main ‘friend’ group consisted of: Alex, Isabel, Michael, and Maria and Max and Liz. Alex and Maria were Liz’s bests and Michael and Isabel were Max’s. So when the two of them fought the group was split up and they didn’t like it that way. They were fed up being split down the middle especially when they were going against their boyfriends or girlfriends. Yep, Alex and Isabel were dating for a few years and same with Michael and Maria. Back to the problem at hand, they all had two choices either get them to talk about was the hell was wrong with them or get them together, it was the only way the group could survive.

Alex and Maria were out on Liz’s balcony talking with her.

“I’m sorry guys there is no was I’m going to talk to ‘Mr. I’m Better Than Everyone Else’.”

“Why?” They ask in unison.

“I just don’t like him and choose not to talk to him.”

“Fine. Whatever we’re gonna go, we’ve got to do the double date thing. Night Liz, see you later.” Alex said giving her a friendly hug.

“Yeah. Bye Chica.” Maria too, gave her a hug goodbye.

Liz had to admit she was kind of envious of her friends’ relationships. Sure she dated Kyle but not long, not when she found out that he was just dating her to get in her pants. She did date a few other guys, but none were right for her. But seeing her friends at the Crashdown with their significant others was taking its toll on her heart, she wanted someone too. She always said that her excuse for not wanting a boyfriend was because school meant too much to her. Truth is, she hasn’t found the one person that she feels is right for her, and she’s doubtful it will ever happen.

Isabel and Michael were in Max’s room talking about the normal teenage stuff, more specifically Liz Parker.

“Maxwell buddy, what is your problem with Liz? She’s nice and sweet and is willing to talk about anything. Why are you guys at each other’s throats when you’re near each other?” Michael asked raising his eyebrows.

“I told you I can’t stand the girl. She’s annoying as hell and she thinks she’s a saint.

Isabel jumped in, “Why don’t you just talk to her, you know get to know her, maybe take her out on a little friendly date.”



“DATE!! No, there is no way I’m going to talk to ‘Miss I’m So Smart That I Don’t Need to Associate with Anybody Else’.... let alone take her out for a date.”

“Okay. We tried again and failed, so let’s go Isabel we’re gonna be late.”

“Late? Late for what?” Max inquired.

“We have a double date with Alex and Maria tonight; we’re going bowling. Well see you later tonight; tell mom and dad I might be a little late. Okay?”

“Yeah. Okay.”

“Later Maxwell.”

With that they left. Max didn’t really understand it, he’d had girlfriends before, but why did his sister and best friend’s relationships bother him so much? Was he jealous, angry maybe, he didn’t know, but what he did know was that it did in fact bother him. His stomach growled; he was hungry.

“I don’t feel like making anything, I think I’ll go out.” He said out loud to himself.

Walking out of his room, grabbing the keys to the Jeep he left his house to go out to eat. About 10 minutes later he pulled up to the Crashdown, but it appeared to be closed, early. He parked the Jeep and got out, walking to the entrance. He opened the door noting the closed sign was up. Most of the lights were off but he could hear faint music playing, so he knew someone was there.


They make me sick
I know I feel you
That's why we got to stick together
Yep, yep, yep
*laughs
I know it!

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

We was on our way home on the freeway
In the six double O bumpin' Isley
He was gettin' kind of close, kind of touchy
Guess he had a little too much Hennesy
He told me that he wanna go home
With me up on the hill to my condo
Told me he would keep it all on the low-low
But I told him go I don't really know though

He got closer to me
He started getting deep
He had me in a zone
When he started to show me things
I never saw before
Baby was smooth but I knew it was game
Helluva a cool but you man had the same
The way he licked his lips

And touched my hips I knew that he was slick

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

So hot in my six now
So hot, had to roll all the windows down
Isley got me thinking 'bout them sheets now
Wondering should I really take it there now?
He told me you would make it worth it
But thinking how many times have I heard this
Got him feeling but I'm not even nervous
All his slick ass lines were kind of working

I felt my knees get weak
But he was calling me
Just couldn't take the heat
Anyway it was two or three
I had to get out the streets
Baby was cool but I knew it was game
He was too smooth to be screaming my name
And even though we made the best of it
I still told him this

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

Hmm...yeah

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

You make sick
I want you and I'm hatin' it
Got me lit like a candlestick
Get too hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it, I gotta get a grip on this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't get enough of it
You got me going again
Baby you got me going again
You make sick

I want you and I hate it
Hot when you touch the tip
I'm feeling it
I gotta get a grip of this
Driving me crazy baby don't you quit
Can't no, no, no, no
Oh, you make sick
I want you and I'm hating it

~*Pink - You Make Me Sick~*


Max listened to the lyrics in the song, wondering who put it on. All of a sudden Liz comes through the door.

She gasped, then recognizing who it was said, “We’re closed, leave.”

“I’m hungry, make me something and then I’ll leave,” came his arrogant reply.

“Did you just order me? Oh I don’t fucking think so, buddy. You better get the hell out of here before....

He cut her off “I’m not leaving until I eat, then we won’t have to see each other again.”

Liz was so pissed off at this point she could spit fire. “I hate you!” She said staring him directly in the eyes.

“The feeling is mutual!” He yelled back.

“You are such a dick, leave I don't want to talk to you. I don't even want to look at you anymore, [b/]SO GET OUT![/b]”

“Bite me! I can stay here if I want. What are you gonna do, throw me out?”

“Fuck you, Max.”

“You are such a bitch!”

“Eat me!”

“I'd love to, if you weren't so damn frigid.” His voice softened a little, but still harsh.

Liz didn’t know what to do; she was completely and utterly speechless. Although she did begin to feel tingly and very wet.

‘What am I doing? I hate him. Why is he turning me on?’

Max strode up over to Liz, who was still in shock, and pulled her over to a booth. She just stood there, not moving an inch. He reached up and lightly touched her stomach; she gasped again, coming out of her daze. She looked up at him, his eyes were black and much softer than before, and her own began to cloud over. They just stared for a moment, then out of the blue Max grabs her arms fiercely, but not too hard and kisses her. The kiss on the other hand was very hard almost bruising, but she liked it. He released her arms, she raised them and placed them around his neck. Max pushed her a little and she was now sitting atop the table, with her sitting like this, he moved between her legs and continued to kiss her. After a few more moments they broke apart taking in much needed oxygen.

“I hate you, you know that right?” Liz whispered.

“No you don’t.... you want me.... just like I want you,” Max replied out of breath.

“So. It doesn’t mean anything.... nothing is going to....”

Max cut her off by kissing her again, she didn’t resist at all this time, she urgently kissed him back. This kiss was different, it wasn’t filled with fire and anger, it was soft and loving, like a mere caress of their lips. They pulled away again, this time frantically pulling at each other’s clothes. Their want for each other was deep they didn’t realize how much they were warming up to each other. First they hated each other and now their trying to get each other naked.

Liz was very wet and waiting by now, and Max was so painfully hard that he thought he would burst. He had only one thought at this point, he had to be inside her and soon. Max gripped her uniform between the buttons and with a sharp tug, they went flying everywhere.

“Hey!” Liz protested.

“Sorry I’ll get it fixed.”

“Nevermind, don’t care, just hurry.”

In a matter of seconds Liz was sitting there naked, having kicked her shoes off earlier. Max was just staring at how beautiful she was.

Max slid into the booth turning Liz around to face him; he hooked her legs over his shoulders, and leaned in. At first, he just breathed hot air over her, which was turning her on more and making writhe with want. He then began to place light butterfly kisses on both of her thighs leading to the treasure; Liz moaned and squirmed more.

Then his lips touched her heat and Liz thought she was going to cum right then. Max opened her to get better access at her sweetness. Max snuck his tongue out and tasted her fully; he’d run his tongue up not quite reaching her sensitive bundle of nerves, then move away.

“Max.... please don’t tease me,” Liz whimpered.

“It’s more fun that way,” he chuckled.

“Max, please.”

Giving her what she wanted he licked up to her clit and began to suck on it. Liz was so into it by now, she was moaning and breathing hard, whispering Max’s name, urging him on. Max darted his tongue in and out of Liz while his thumb paid special attention to her sensitive nub.

Max was great at this; he knew exactly what to do to get a rise out of Liz. Obviously Max was too, enjoying himself because he’d let her know by his moans or his comments. He moved his other hand to insert his index and middle fingers into her, thrusting them inside her while alternating between sucking and rubbing Liz’s clit.

He knew she was very close to orgasm by the tightening of her walls around his fingers, and in response he began to suck harder on her clit.


In no time, Liz felt very warm and a rush of sexual desire run through her body, screaming Max’s name she climaxed. Max wasted no time in lapping up her honey as she came down from her sexual high. When she stopped shuddering, he stood up and kissed her, she could faintly taste some of herself on his lips.

“Wow!! That was just wow.”

“So I did it right? I’ve never done that before. I didn‘t do it wrong did I?”

“If that’s how it’s done wrong, then I don‘t want it right.” Liz said this with a huge grin.

Liz noted he was still fully dressed. “You need to take yours off too,” she giggled, pointing to his clothes.

“Oh.... Yeah.... Okay.”

“I’ll help. She reached up and started undoing his shirt, successfully getting it off while he undid his pants retrieving his wallet, and the condom. Max kicked off his shoes, socks pants, and boxers. Liz took the condom from him and put it on his hard cock, Max just reveled in the feeling of Liz’s tiny hands touching him.

They couldn’t hear the music over their harsh breathing but the lyrics were somewhat symbolic to their situation.


You say its been too long
since you, had some
You say I turn you on
like a fire that's burning inside
You think that I'm the one
You see in your dreams
I know what you mean yeah
It's creepin around in your head
me holding you down in my bed
You don't have to say a word
I'm convinced you want this


He pressed the head of his cock lightly into her.

“Take me Max,” she demanded, closing her eyes.

He did, he eased his cock into her pussy. Slowly, until he reached her obstruction.

“Liz are you sure? There’s no turning back after.” He asked her with soft, loving eyes.

“Yes, Max.”


Baby you know I can give it to you
I can't deny, you do it right
Just let me know and I'll give it to you
Show me where I’ll taste you there
Baby you know that I'll give it to you
Your body needs a man like me
Anything goes when I give it to you
Without a doubt, I'll turn you out
I'll give it to you
The feeling is fine, giving you everything of mine


With that he kissed her and in one swift thrust was fully in, her breaking her barrier, Liz cried out in pain, and Max froze. A tear ran down her cheek and Max felt like a dick, the last thing he wanted was to hurt her.

“I’m sorry Liz. I’m so sorry.”

“It’s okay Max it’s supposed to happen this way,” she said reassuringly.

He kissed her tear away and held her a little tighter; it wasn’t until she began to rock her hips that he started to move again. The pace began slow and loving, soon getting more frantic. With his hands on her hips he began to thrust wildly making her squeal with delight.


I'm the place to be
and soon, you'll see
I don't care who leads
As long as we move horizontally
Anyone can make you sweat
But I, can keep you wet
It's creepin around in my head
Me holding you down in my bed
I can't wait to give you some
I'm convinced you need it


She squeezed the walls of her pussy tight with each thrust, his loud, guttural groans of approval telling her not to stop. Her squeals turned into screams which got louder and more frequent as he pounded into her. She rocked against Max’s cock, knowing he too, was close to the edge.


Baby you know I can give it to you
I can't deny, you do it right
Just let me know and I'll give it to you
Show me where I’ll taste you there
Baby you know that I'll give it to you
Your body needs a man like me
Anything goes when I give it to you
Without a doubt, I'll turn you out
I'll give it to you
The feeling is fine, giving you everything of mine

It's creepin around in my head
Me holding you down in my bed
You don't have to say a word
Just relax, I'll do the work
I can't wait to give you some
I'm convinced you need one

Baby you know I can give it to you
I can't deny, you do it right
Just let me know and I'll give it to you
Show me where I’ll taste you there
Baby you know that I'll give it to you
Your body needs a man like me
Anything goes when I give it to you
Without a doubt, I'll turn you out
I'll give it to you
The feeling is fine, giving you everything of mine

I want to satisfy your every wish and mine baby

I know just what you need, (you need) to get you off baby

No one could ever do you like I do you right baby

There’s nothing we can’t do....
The feeling is fine giving you everything of mine
~*Jordan Knight - Give It To You~*


With a final deep, penetrating thrust they both cried out in ultimate pleasure. Max and Liz reached climax together, whispering each other’s names. They held each other just like that, both breathing on each other’s neck. They were both completely drained and felt utter completion. Max finally pulled out and away from Liz, Liz protested in the process. He discarded the condom in a bag of garbage next to the counter, and walked back over to Liz, kissing her yet again.

Liz broke the silence, “So why did you hate me, or do you still?”

“You realized that it all started because you started dating Kyle, don’t you?”

“You were jealous so you thought of nothing else but to hate me?”

“I don’t hate you, I never have, I just acted that way because, I was pissed that someone got to you before me.”

“Well, from what happened here tonight, you can’t still possibly think that someone else got to me first, unless you are truly as dense and I thought you were.”

“No. I got you first, I’m the winner, go me, I rule all....”

“Max....”

“Huh?”

“Enough.”

“What about you?”

“What do you mean, ‘what about me’?”

“Hate. Why do you hate me?”

“Kind of a Defense Mechanism. You hated me for no apparent reason, so I saw it fitting to hate you back for no reason. I never had any problem with you, at all, that is until you started to be a dick to me. By the way I don’t hate you”

“I’m sorry for that.”

“I’m sorry for being a bitch.”

“You were rather mean, seeing how everyone thinks you’re the sweetest girl in town.”

“Max?”

“That’s me.”

“I think I’m in love with you,” Liz stated shyly.

“Yeah?” Max asked with wide eyes.

“Yeah,” she nodded her head.

“I love you too Liz, always have....”

“Always will,” she butted in kissing him.

“I love you, you love me, we love each other....”

Liz playfully smacked him in the arm, “Max you’re babbling.”

“Okay, I’ll stop now.”

Liz ran her hand over his abs saying, “Lets get dressed and go upstairs, my parents went to visit some friends this weekend; they won’t be back till Monday night, it’ll give us a chance to make up.... properly.” Casting a glance at the table she was sitting on, “A bed would be nicer, huh?” She looked at him and raised her eyebrows.

“What are you a closet nympho? They always say it’s the quiet ones.”

With that said, Liz just winked at him. They dressed as quickly as humanly possible and ran upstairs; to Liz’s awaiting bed.

THE END