Magic in Your Eyes (AU,M/L,MATURE) Pt 8 - 06/28/04 [WIP]

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Magic in Your Eyes (AU,M/L,MATURE) Pt 8 - 06/28/04 [WIP]

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Title: Magic in Your Eyes
Category: AU M/L
Rating: MATURE
Disclaimer: I only own my thoughts..too bad, huh? Lol
Summary: lets just say another Max and Liz best friend/ Romance stories
A/N: I wasn’t going to start another story but I had to cause this one was begging me so much. It was itching to get written. (haha that rhymed)

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Part 1

I walk down the hallway, people wave, smile greet me. I just smile back. My dark brown hair flows across my shoulders and I can smell the shampoo I had used that morning.

I get to my locker, opening it to only be greeted with a bunch of flowers, white roses to be exact. I take them in my hand and smell them, and I close my eyes as the scent fills my nose, stimulating my sense’s.

I look around the hallway trying to the find the person that put these in my locker and when I don’t notice anyone suspicious I look at the flowers once more and notice a tiny white note attached to the stem of one of the flowers.

I feel myself get excited and a goofy grin line of my face as I open the little white card in my hand.

Liz,

You are a little bundle of joy, just like these flowers. I love you.

Dad


I feel the smile slide off my face and I stuff the card back into the flowers. I am destined to have a terrible life I think as I stuff the flowers into my locker after I grab my books.

Why does my father have to work in this school? Couldn’t he have gone somewhere else. I should have known he was going to ruin my life working here.

Walking down the hallway, I see Maria at her locker. “Maria, hey!” I yell as I walk over to her.

“Hey hun, what’s up?” She asks as she too opens her locker and a bunch of flowers spring out.

I notice the smile form on her face as she looks at the flowers adoringly. I groan as she takes them out and looks for a note just as I did. Finally she finds one and she looks at me anxiously.

“I wouldn’t bother reading it Maria.” I tell her knowing that it was from my father, he always felt like Maria was a daughter to him since she was always over our house.

She doesn’t listen to a word I say as she opens the little white card. The next thing I hear is her voice reading the card out loud.

I slap myself on the forehead ready to hear her disappointment and I’m ready to see her smile disappear.

“Okay it says, Maria. I know that we haven’t really talked but I was wondering if you would go out with me. Michael.” Maria says and I stand there looking dumbly at her.

I see and hear her squeals and excitement as I grab the card out of her hand. Looking it over making sure she read it right I look at her and smile.

“Liz can you believe this, Michael and me. I mean I have been in love with him for whole long?” Maria squeals.

“Five years.” I answer her with a monotone voice.

“What was that?” She asks and I’m surprised she even heard me.

“Five years.” I say again.

“Five years?” She questions me and I groan.

“You’ve been in love with Michael for five years.” I say to her as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.

“Oh yeah.” She says as she grabs onto my arm and keeps talking to me about how great Michael was.

“Michael is some sorta God, huh?” I mumble to myself, hating that Maria got flowers from some guy, when I got them from my father.

Let’s throw up now.

“What was that?” Maria asks looking at me.

“Nothing.” I say to her wondering when she got these good hearing skills. It must have come with the whole Michael package.

We walk into our homeroom and my eyes quickly scan the room, looking for one person. At first I don’t see him anywhere and I know that I was going to be stuck hearing Maria talk about Michael .

Then I see his dark hair pop up from under a desk and I thank God for bringing my savior to me.

“Maria, I got to go.” I say running over to Max grabbing onto his arm.

“Save me.” I say to him ducking behind him.

“Umm…Liz are you okay?” Max asks a grin on his face.

“No you have to save me.” I tell him quickly, holding onto his shoulder.

“From?” He asks.

“Maria, who else.” I say as if it was common sense.

The thing I hear though is Max’s laughter. The deep, musical noise vibrating throughout the room. Some people notice and quickly take notice of him but then they get back to their friends.

“Of course Maria.” He said glancing over his shoulder to me, a smile still on his face from his laughing session. “What happened now?” He asks.

I look at him wondering if I should tell him but then I shrugged my shoulders and figured what the hell.

“Well I found flowers in my locker, you know nice white roses, but guess who they were from?” I ask him my voice asking him to guess.

“Umm…Sean.” He says.

“No.” I say wrinkling my nose at the thought of getting flowers from him and I see Max smile.

“I don’t know your father.” He says with a little laugh and when I don’t answer, he looks at me. “You got flowers from your father.” He says and I nod my head and he is laughing again.

“Shut up.” I say smacking his shoulder over and over again until he stopped. “That’s not the point though.” I tell him as his laughter dies down.

“Okay, okay, I’m better now. So what’s up with you and Maria.” Max asked finally.

“I don’t know if I want to tell you anymore.” I say closing my eyes and crossing my arms across my chest., looking towards the opposite way.

“Come on Liz.” I hear him say, sliding out of his chair. I feel his hands rustle between my arms and start to tickle me.

I try to hold in the laughter but I couldn’t stop the smile, and then the laughter. I felt tears come to my eyes as my laughter proceeded. “Okay, okay. I’ll tell you.” I said to him through a fit of laughter.

“Good.” He said standing in front of me. “You can proceed now.” He said moving his hands around as he talked.

“Yea well Maria got some flowers too, and I thought they were from my father when actually they were from Michael and now she won’t stop talking about him. I swear she’s going to talk my ears off.” I said quickly, breathing as I stopped.

Max just stood there for a second. I couldn’t believe he couldn’t see the problem here.

“So let me get this straight.” He tells me with a grin. “You get flowers from your father. Maria gets flowers from Michael, which you thought from you father too. Then Maria won’t stop talking about Michael.” He says to me.

“Exactly.” I see as if it was obvious as to why I was hiding from Maria.

Max just stares at me, no words, just a small smile. His chestnut eyes piercing mine, as he just stands there.

I watch him not doing anything, not saying anything and get slightly agitated. “Okay fine max don’t help me in my time of need.” I say as I start to walk away. “I’ll just find a new best friend.” I tell him as I walk over to Maria.”

It was then that I heard his laughter. His eyes shone brightly, a mischievous twinkle added in the depths of his eyes.

“What are you laughing at?” I ask slightly angry. I could never stay angry at long at Max.

“You.” Was all he answered simply.

“Any reason?” I ask him as he stands there.

“Only over the fact that your jealous of Maria.” He says walking up to me.

“I am not jealous.” I say shocked that he would even think that. I am never jealous of anyone, okay well maybe that’s a lie.

“Oh yea you are.” He says as he still makes his way over to me.

“Nuh uh.” I say to him shaking my head not looking him in his eyes.

I can feel him prowl around my body finally stopping in the back of me. I feel his mouth next to my ear and a little whisper come from his lips.

“You are so jealous.” He says to me and I can feel his grin.

“Okay fine I am.” I say not wanting to argue any longer. “Why the hell does Maria get a boyfriend? I want one.” I say stomping my foot on the ground like a child.

“Liz you have no reason to be jealous of anyone.” He says with a grin making his way in front of me.

“And why’s that?” I ask as I see him stand in front of me.

“Because you got me.” He tells me shinning his pearly whites.

I smile and laugh slightly. “Believe me Max, I think you are one too many guys to handle.” I say as I hear the bell ring and see the teacher walk into the room.

Tbc..??
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Wow guys I didn't expect that much feedback.. Thank you so much!!! I love it!! And I have a new part for u!! Yay!! :lol: Well I hope you enjoy it!


Part 2

Yawning, I can hear the clock on the wall ticking and tocking away. It seems to mock me as I sit here in silence, my eyes wandering around the room. I see the teacher up front sitting at her desk waiting for the first person to finish their test.

Test!!

Uh oh!

I look down at my paper and see that ten questions are done. I look at the clock. Five minutes left. I look through the packet, okay it’s multiple choice, I can finish this, I think as I feel my pencil fill in the little bubbles. A.A.C. D. A. B. That sounds good.

The bell rings and I see Max looking over at me wondering what just happened. Smiling I walk over to the front of the room placing my test on the pile of other tests.

“How was the test?” I hear Ms. Bakers ask me.

I smile at her. “It was okay.” I said as I make my way out of the room, excited to go home.

“Liz!” I hear Max yell to me as I make my way down the hallway.

I pretend I don’t hear him and I continue on my way to my locker.

“Liz!” I hear again and I quickly glance backwards with a grin and then go to my locker.

Quickly I put my combination in and groan as I see the contents of my locker yet again.

“Nice flowers.” I hear someone say in back of me.

“Bite me.” I say back annoyed that my father would do something like this.

“Love to.” I hear Max say and I feel his teeth on my shoulder.

“Hey.” I say moving away from him rubbing my shoulder. “Why the hell did you do that?” I ask with a fake pain filled expression on my face.

“You told me to bite you.” Max said with a grin, his eyes holding a mischievous expression.

“Well I guess I did.” I told him with a shrug, I didn’t really care either way.

“So what are we doing tonight?” Max asks me as I close my locker door and we start our way to his Jeep in the parking lot. I can feel all the girls eyes on Max and I just smile. Max doesn’t understand how many girls want him.

“Who said I was doing anything with you tonight?” I ask as we exit the front doors.

“What? You have something better to do?” Max asks looking at me.

“Did it ever occur to you that I might have a date tonight.” I say trying to act all serious.

“With who? Your father.” He says with a grin putting his arm around my shoulder.

I pull away from him and hit his shoulder and I hear him laugh, a full blown laugh. I feel a smile form on my face also and soon I am laughing with him.

“So seriously what do you want to do tonight?” He asks.

“Your house. Movies. Pizza. Popcorn. Make out session.” I say with a shrug as I enter the passenger seat.

“Sounds good. I’ll get the movies and food all you have to do is bring your lips and were all set.” He says looking at me with a smile on his face wiggling his eyebrows up and down.

“You would only be so lucky Mr. Evans.” I tell him.

“Oh but Ms. Parker didn’t you know you always get my engine going.” He says as he starts the engine and it comes to life.

I hear myself laugh as he pulls out of the parking lot and starts down the road towards my house. I know he enjoys playing around with my head just as I love playing with his. We love to just joke on one another.

I see the Crashdown coming up and Max pulls up in front of it. I see my apartment above it and I don’t want to leave yet. I look at Max for a second.

“I’ll see ya later Max. About sevenish.” I say as I open the door.

“What no goodbye kiss.” He says to me just as I’m about to put one foot on the ground. I grin and look at him.

Going towards him I feel my lips brush against his cheek and I smile and I can feel his smile too.

“Oh that was cheap.” He says as I leave the Jeep and walk to the Crashdown waving at him.

“I love you too!” I yell before I walk into the café.

I am so excited that it’s Friday that I hop towards my parents and greet them before I walk upstairs to my room. I open my door and hop onto my bed.

I lay down on my bed and let out a small sigh of relief at the sense of relaxation that flows throughout my body. I hear the phone ring and I groan. Rolling over onto my stomach I reach out to the phone and bring it to my ears.

“Hello.” I say cheerfully into the phone.

“Hey Liz.” I hear Maria’s cheery voice on the other side of the phone and I wonder how she can be so happy all the time.

“What’s up Maria?” I ask her, caring and not caring at the same time.

“Nothing really. I was just wondering if you had any plans tonight because well I wanted to go out one last time with my friend before I get snatched away by Michael, you know.”

I smile on the other side of the phone. “I’m sorry Maria, but I already got plans.” I tell her truly sorry.

“With who? Maxie” She says playfully.

She thinks that I like him and he likes me but that is so not true. We are best friends we like each other as best friends and nothing more.

“Maria come on. Max and I we are best friends, that’s it.” I tell her with a grin on the other side of the phone.

“Okay Liz whatever you say.” Maria says and I can hear her grin.

I just laugh a little before she continues to talk to me.

“Well I guess I’m going to go then. I call Isabel or someone. Don’t worry about me. Bye Bye Hun. I’ll talk to you later. Love you.” She tells me and hangs up before I get a word in. Maria is very high strung, she’s always on the run.

I stare at the clock for a second. 4:32 it says and I have about 3 hours before I have to go see Max. Letting my eyes close I let my exhaustion give in and I fall asleep on my bed.

Tbc..?? You want another part…I’m not happy with this part as much as my first.
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Wow guys itotally forgot about this story...my bad... :D But i got a new part for you guys!! yaya! it's a speicale treat seeing as i was forgetful, lets just hope it came out okay!! thank you guys for all ur feedback!


Part 3

Slowly I feel my eyes open, adjusting to the light in my room.

“Uhh. What time is it?” I mumble to myself letting my eyes focus on the clock next to my bed.

I see the read numbers shine 7:32. That was a good nap I think as I close my eyes again resting my head on my pillow.

All of sudden I feel my eyes open, and realize that I’m late. I quickly get out of bed, throwing on my socks and shoes. I brush my hair once, twice, three times and I shrug figuring that was good enough.

Grabbing my car keys off the counter, I yawn once before walking outside into the cool night air. I feel the engine roar to life and I turn the key in the ignition and I can’t help but think back to this afternoon with Max.

He was my best friend, someone I could rely on to make a lame ass joke, and I would start to laugh. He was the person that would laugh at my lame jokes. I think that we were insanely one of a kind. That thought brought a smile to my face.

Pulling from my driveway, I start down the street. Making a couple of turns here and there and stopping at a couple of stop signs I finally reach Max’s house.

Pulling the keys out of the ignition. I take a deep breathe and make my way to his front door. I knock on the door three times until I see the knob start to turn.

Next I see his smiling face standing there.

“Yes. Yes. I know I’m late.” I say as I push past him into his house. I’ve been here enough times that it almost feels like home.

I feel his eyes on me, yet he wasn’t saying anything. I was expecting some smug comment about how I’m always late but it never came.

“Aren’t you going to say anything?’ I asked him sitting down on the couch in his living room, taking off my shoes.

He just stood there with that little grin on his face. His eyes were shinning with some emotion I couldn’t quite place.

“Hello Max are you in there?” I yelling to him from across the room.

“Liz you know you scared me half to death. You can’t tell me 7 and then show up at 7:30.” Max said talking for the first time. “I mean what was I supposed to do with myself for that half an hour.” He said slowly walking towards me and I knew that I had to prepare for battle.

He inched forward. “You know what little children get when their bad?” He asked about a step away from me. He leaned into towards me, his head next to mine and my heart jumped a bit, surprising me.

“I could only imagine.” I said inching away from him on the couch until my back was against the arm rest.

His grinned widened as he saw that he got me cornered. I watched his hands rise up and come down to right below my ribs, tickling me again.

“Stop Max” I yell through my laughter, trying to push away his hands. “Please Max stop!” I yell to him and finally he lets up.

Max’s face was inches from mine, my back still against the arm rest as I spoke. “So was that my punishment?” I asked my voice coming out in a whisper, my eyes glancing at his lips for a second.

I saw him grin. “If you want it to be.” He said to me his breath falling across my face sending shivers up and down my spine.

I stared at him my body warming up, my pulse quickening and I wondered what was wrong with me. I shouldn’t feel like this with Max, he was my best friend.

“What does that mean?” I asked him softly.

“Well I can think of plenty other ways to torture you.” He said with a playful grin, his eyes growing a bit darker. “Torture that will leave you standing there in shock and bewilderment, that would leave you unable to fight anymore.”

Oh God, was all I could think. His face lowered a bit towards mine. Was I really going to kiss my best friend? His face was close to mine, so close.

“I dare you to try.” I said to him my challenging nature breaking through.

I watched as his eyes lowered to my lips before looking back to my eyes. Unconsciously I licked my lips. “You asked for it.” He whispered as his lips moved towards mine.

Slowly my eyes closed as our bodies moved closer to one another’s. I felt his lips brush against mine…

“Max, I ne- Oh I’m sorry guys.” Isabel said as she blushed from embarrassment as Max and I jumped apart from one another.

I stared at Max as he told Isabel where his notes for Biology were. She looked at us once more apologizing before walking away.

Max looked at me and grinned as did I. Finally snapping out of my daze I glanced at the television in front of us.

“So, Maxie, what movie are we watching tonight?” I asked as if nothing had happened glancing at him from the corner of my eyes. His grin was still there but his eyes were no longer the dark color, they were before and for some reason that caused a weird pain to shoot through my body.

“Well you know we got Scream or My Best Friend’s Wedding, which I know is you favorite.” He said grabbing the two movies off the table in front of us. “You know Maxie, so doesn’t fit me, I think you should find some other nickname for me.” He said as he handed the movies over to me to pick.

“But Maxie.” I said whining. “I thought you liked my nickname for you.” I said playfully.

“Yeah but Lizzie, honeybunch, it makes me sound like a dog.” He said before taking the movies from me seeing as I wasn’t picking one.

“Well I like little puppies.” I said to him as I watched him tick a movie into the VCR.

“Well you see, I don’t want to be a little puppy I want to be a big dog.” He said grabbing the VCR remote and sitting down next to me as the movie started to play.

“Yeah but I can cuddle with puppies.” I said cuddling with him placing my head on his shoulder.

“Well, then I guess I could be a little puppy for tonight.” Max said running his hand through my hair as the opening sequence of the movie started.

“Thank you Maxie.” I said as I noticed he put on my favorite move, “My Best Friend’s Wedding,” but making it sound like I was saying thanks for him succumbing to a little puppy.

“Your welcome little Lizzie.” He said and I knew he knew the true extent of my words.

Tbc..??that is if u want! Oh and sry it was so short!

Edited: to say wow i can't believe how many speeling error i had on this..sry..i fixed them..even though the majority of you prob read it! Sry again!
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I just found this! I love this! I always enjoy the max and liz friendship twist and you are doing a wonderful job writing this...by the way is this only Liz Pov or will we see into Max's mind a bit? I am just curious....as to if he realizes his feelings as well!
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Hmm..Its been awhile.. I left this story on the backburner for a little longer then I would have liked...But I want to thank you guys for all the feedback and i am pleased to annoce that I got a new part for everyone!! Hope you like it although its sorta short, but I promise to make up for it...Oh and its Max's Pov since someone was wondeirng if we would hear what was going through his mind. Sorry if it's not very plotty but first we have to see what's going on with him right?


Part 4

Max Pov

I feel Liz's head laying on my shoulder. Her breathing is even and I can tell she is asleep. Gently I move myself out from under her, laying her down gently on the couch.

Lowering myself down to her beautiful face, I run my hand through her hair. Her long, silky hair. Hair that tickles my skin, or playfully brushes against me.

Her beautiful brown eyes. Earlier today, I could tell that she wanted to kiss me just as much as I wanted to kiss her. Her glorious eyes, growing darker as our lips gravitated to the others. It was magic.

Her soft lips. I bring my finger up to her lips and gently brush my finger agaisnt them. I've wanted to kiss her for so long. I've wanted to feel her lips on mine. I've wanted to feel that feeling of completement inside of myself.

She's been my best friend for so long but when I first saw her I wanted to be more then just friends. But I knew that I never had a chance. We were seven years old and neither of us fully acknowledged the concept of love at first sight. I didn't completely understand the feelings that she erupted inside of me, that is until now.

I didn't plan this night to go the way it did. I figured she'd come over, we'd eat popcorn and watch movies but even though that did happen, the events earlier made this night one of the best.

I planned on just joking around with her about being late but when I saw her standing at the front door looking ravished, probably from rushing around all I could feel was a grin fall across my face. I was captivated by her and had no words, she was beautiful.

As she brushed past me, I could smell her. She always smelled of vanilla, tingling my senses, making me want her even more. Then as she sat on the couch I knew that it was my opportunity to see what she really felt for me, and to basically tell her what I felt for her.

As I moved towards her, I could sense her curiosty, her playfullness and then the seriousness as I threatened to shock her to no end.

I glanced at her smooth, soft lips once before I felt her and I slowly move towards the other, my body basically on top of hers. With a brush of our lips I felt complete for once. I was elated at the feeling running through my body, and although it was the just the brush of our lips, and not a full kiss I knew that what I was feeling wasn't lust, but I was falling for my best friend.

After the experience, I was confused just as I could guess she was, so we each resorted back to our old playful ways. But I know I would never forget the way her eyes stared into mine, or the way she eagerly allowed our lips to touch.

"Max." I heard a voice call to me, with a yawn afterwards. I looked down at my best friend laying on the couch.

"Yeah Liz." I answered her, loving the way her name rolled from my tongue.

"What time is it?" She asked pulling her hair back from her face.

"11:15." I said glancing at the clock on the wall and she nodded.

"Max?" She asked again.

"Yes Liz." I answered her.

"Call my parents and tell them I'm staying here again tonight." She said closing her beautiful eyes once more, but I could see the small smile on her face.

"Of course." I said with a small smile almost mirroring hers.

It was normal for Liz to sleep over, we basically did it every weekend. Our parents never seemed to care, they trusted us and well Mr. Parker made it clear that if I ever hurt his litle girl he would make sure I pay and believe me I took his words seriously.

I glanced once more at Liz before rising from my spot next to her. Her eyes were closed but I knew she awake. She looked so calm and peaceful at the moment, she just seemed perfect. Her parents don't have anything to worry about.

Were only best friends, anyway. Right?


Tbc...??if ya want! Sry for the short part. I apologize yet again but im just setting up some stuff.
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Wow that was like feedback galore or a feedback feast, whatever you prefer. thanks so much guys, It means so much to me. So since my long absense here is another part for you guys...Enjoy!! :D


Part 5

Liz’s Pov

“Max?” I say not wanting to open my eyes again but knowing that I had to some time, I opened them slowly letting them get used to the intensity of the lights around me.

“Hmm.” He said from the doorway, as he hung up the phone.

“What time is it now?” I asked him knowing that I just asked him a couple of minutes ago.

“It’s five minutes after the last time you asked me.” Max said with a grin.

I smiled too, sitting up on the couch, trying to wipe the sleep from my eyes. I brushed my hair back with my fingers and looked towards Max.

“Max, do you think anyone’s ever going to give me white roses?” I asked and I was shocked as the words left my mouth. I didn’t know what I was saying. Maybe I was delirious, or maybe my head was still asleep, or maybe i was just crazy.

Max looked at me weird, his eyes piercing mine as he walked towards me.

“Of course someone will get you flowers, but I’m not sure if they will be white roses.” Max said with a grin. “Maybe they’ll be lilies, tulips, or maybe a couple of weeds.” He said with a sideways grin, sitting down next to me.

“Yeah.” I told him.

In that second I knew exactly why I asked. I knew I wanted to be loved, cared for. I wanted someone to know me, inside and out. If they knew my favorite flower then I know that maybe I have found my perfect someone, the person I was meant to be with, my soul mate.

“May I ask why you asked me that, Lizzie.” He said to me calling me the nickname that he always calls me.

“You can ask, but you will never know, Maxie.” I said to him getting up from the couch and stretching my arms.

“You know I really hate that name Maxie, but when you say it’s different.” Max said looking up at me.

“Yeah?” I said. “It just sounds right when I say it right?” I said almost sure of myself.

“Well, actually.” He said with a pause. “I hate it even more when you say it.” He said with a chuckle.

I stared down at him in shock. “Hey!” I said before I jumped on top of him, grabbing a pillow and swatting at him with it playfully.

He too soon grabbed the pillow from the other side of the couch and we had a full-blown pillow fight. I know how childish it may seem, but Max and I are both children at heart, so throughout the years I just deemed our childish antics normal.

Boom! One pillow hit into Max’s chest.

Whoosh One pillow flew right in front of my head.
Pow![/b] One pillow hit me in the side.

Then with one more bang feathers were flying around the room, slowly drifting to the floor where Max and I now laid laughing. I could feel his chest shaking as his laughter ripped through his body and I’m sure he could feel mine too, seeing as I was laying right next to him, our bodies touching enough to feel the other.

Our later slowly drifted downwards just as the last feather did. Slowly it feel downwards and finally landing on the top of Max’s forehead.

Max’s Pov

I watched as Liz’s hand made it’s over to my forehead. She slowly drew her hands over to my forehead and I could feel the skin of her hand come in contact with my forehead and I felt a shiver run through my body gently.

I laid there for a minute waiting for the weight of the light feather to be moved from my forehead and to be held in Liz’s delicate fingers, but that didn’t happen.

I tried to search around me with my eyes, not wanting to move. I could see Liz’s arm reaching to my forehead but she seemed to be just sitting there but it was then that I felt a dull pain my head.

“Oww.” I said sitting up rubbing my forehead, right where the feather was. I looked at Liz and I could see her trying to hold in her laughter. “What did you just do?” I asked.

“I flicked the feather off your head.” She said with a shrug a smile on her face.

“You flicked it off my head?” I asked her.

“Yup.” She answered with simply.

I was going to question her but I knew that it was no use. I knew that I would have probably done the same thing the situation occurred any other way, it was just the way our minds worked.

I looked around the floor as I rose up from the ground. Feathers lined almost ever inch of the carpet around us and I couldn’t help but smile.

“What am I going to tell my parents?” I asked watching as Liz too climbed up from the floor.

Her eyes stared into mine as she said the next words. “Just tell them the dog did it.” She said with a little grin.

“Liz, we don’t have a dog.” I said looking at her skeptically wondering what was going on in her mind.

“But I was pretty sure you did it Maxie.” She said with a mischievous twinkle in her eyes.

I watched her stand there with that little grin and I smiled back at her.

“But I thought I was a little puppy. I guess you can’t call me Maxie anymore, now that I’m a dog.” I told her happy that I finally found a way to get rid of that nickname.

“Nope I can’t.” She said I smiled grateful. “Mow your Maximus.” She said to me.

“Maximus?” I said with a playful groan. What the hell? I lose one embarrassing nickname and I earn another, but at least now I was a dog and not a puppy.

“Maximus, I think you should go get the vacuum and clean this mess up before you parents get him.” Liz said to me as she glanced around the room.

Nodding my head obediently like a dog I walked over to the closet wondering how I ever earned a life like this. But I knew the answer. The day I met Liz Parker my life just started to spiral into space, but in a good way.

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I am so sorry for the long delay...but I did get another part done for you guys!! I am so grateful for your feedback otherwise this story probably wouldn't have been continued because well I sorta forgot about it! :D whoops! Im back now though, so no worries... I hope you like this new part!



Part 6

Liz Pov

I could hear the murmurs down the hallway. Everyone seemed excited, seemed a bit antsy. Opening my locker my thoughts of the crowd leave as I spot the dead white roses left inside.

I hear a moan leave my throat as I see the wilted petals surronding my locker.

I spot a white note on the bottom of my locker. I groan, wondering why my father had to plant that embarrassing thing in my locker.

The little white note seems to mock me as I hold it in my hands and I chuck it on the floor, but not before ripping it into little pieces.

"Don't you think the school is going to be mad that your polluting their property?" I hear a voice whisper in my ear.

"I think they'll understand." I said to Max rolling my eyes. "I mean they have to understand that no daughter likes to be embarassed by their father."

"Yeah, well no father likes his notes to be ripped up." Liz heard her fathers voice behind her.

"Oh daddy!" I said turning around trying to hide my open locker with the dead flowers inside.

I could see Max's grin on his face. He was loving this.

"Lizzie, didn't you like my flowers?" He asked me.

"I loved them dad, but well I just would have rather gotten them at home and not in school." Liz said to her father honestly, there was no use lying.

I looked at Max once more. He looked like was about to burst at any moment.

"Well, Max told me that it would be better to do it this way. He said you would appreciate it more." My father said to me with a shrug. "Oh well no one was hurt." He sad. "I'll see you later Lizzie."

I threw a glare towards Max.

He smirked at me. "What?" He said innocently.

"I can't believe you." I said walking up to him poking him in the chest.

"What?" He said but I just continued to poke him. "Hey! Stop that! It hurts!" He said aloud.

"Well you deserve it." I said playful. "I mean Maximus, why can't you just be a good boy." I say to him shaking my head in disappointment.

"Well, we big dogs are known for our mischievous behavior." Max said as he pulled my poking finger away from me. He raised an eyebrow and I felt my heart start to quicken as I watched his eyes start to darken.

He pulled me closer to him, our bodies inches apart.

"Umm Max?" I questioned my voice but a whisper.

"Yes Liz." He said huskily, his eyes staring into mine.

At that moment I had nothing to say. All I wanted was for him to kiss me. I wanted to feel his lips on mine. I wanted to taste him. I wanted to feel him.

I licked my lips and I felt his hands run down my sides, landing on my hips and I almost gasped for air.

"Liz." He whispered into my ear. "Us big dogs are known for our mischieve ways." He said as a smile formed on his beautiful before his fingers started to tickle my sides.

I gasped for breath, as I started to laugh. "Max! Stop!" I yelled to him. I could see his eyes twinkle with happiness and for some reason I wanted them to stay like that forever. They were enchanting.

"You want me to stop?" Max asked and I knew now that there were people staring.

"Yes." I said between my laughter.

"You really want me to stop?" He asked once more.

"Yes Max. I really want you to stop." I gasped.

"Then you have to promise to never call me Maximus again." He said to me.

"I promise!" I said qiuckly wanting his torture to end.

It was then then his hands left my sides. He still had that small smile on his face but he seemed to be more distant. I missed the shinning in his eyes.

"Now that we got Maximus out of the way I can finally live my life." Max said to me and all I could do was smile.

"Yeah, I never really did like that name anyway." I said I couldn't stop the smile from forming on my face. I saw Max look at me curiously and my smile widened.

"What are you thinking?" He said raising an eybrow.

"Nothing important." I said knowing that if I don't tell him he'll just want it more.

He stared at me knowing that I was thinking something in my head.

"I know you're thinking something in there." He said tapping my head gently.

I turned to close my locker while I spoke. "Well, you know my head only works on one track..." I felt my voice stop as I saw Max not paying attention he was looking at something, well, someone.

She was walking down the hallway, her blonde curls bouncing as she walked. She was petite, with bright blue eyes. I felt my heart drop as I watched her smile in Max's direction and Max smile back at her.

"Max?" I said trying to get his attention. "Max?" I said again, getting no reaction.

Who the hell was that girl?

"Maximillion." I said calling him by the new nickname I had for him. I felt the loneliness overcome me as he payed no attention to me, his best friend.

Finally I just slapped him on the shoulder.

"Ow." he said rubbing his shoulder looking at me. "Oh sorry what were you saying." He said glancing once more over his shoulder at the new girl.

"Nothing important." I said

I knew I should be angry but I wasn't. I was devastated. I felt sick, my heart seemed to pound a little less. I was jealous of the blonde haired girl that bascially signified the exact opposite of everything I am. But most of all, I was jealous that she had Max's attention.

"We should get to class." I said to him, no my playfulness left in my voice.

"Are you okay Liz?" He said and I felt the tears sting my eyes.

"I think I may be getting sick, or something." I said before walking towards my classroom.

Max POV

I watched as Liz walked away, the girl of my dreams. I knew something was wrong. She was the center of my universe, I knew everything that went through her head. She and I were two people from the same soul.

I remember watching her eyes darken as I ran my hands down her body. All I wanted to do was kiss her and I knew she wanted the same thing.

But as that girl walked in the school, everything seemed to shift. I felt some sort of attraction to her.

"Liz!" I yelled to her. "Maybe I should take you home." I said running up to her. I couldn't just let her walk away from me.

"Max I'm fine. It passed." She said with a forced smile. "Now come on we have to go to class." She said to me. She never wanted to be on time, so I knew something was wrong.

I watch her for a second. She's beautiful. Her dark hair flowing around her shoulders. Her matching eyes shinning with an unnameable emotion. Her lips, so perfect and full. She was perfect to me.

I smiled at her.

"What are you smiling at dufus." She said to me and I faked a frown.

"Oh that hurt Liz." I said placing my hand over my heart.

I heard her laugh, and I couldn't help but notice how much I missed that.

"You're so stupid." She said to me.

"You know all these names are really hurting my feelings. Maybe I should get your father to buy you some more flowers to shut you up." I told her playfully and she responded by hitting my in the chest.

"Let's go Max. We've got a long day ahead of us." She said grabbing my arm as I trailed behind her.

"As long as I get to admire the view from back here, I'll follow you everywhere." I said playfully.

She turned around and looked at me with her mouth open. "I can't believe you just said that." A smile forming on her face.

"Well believe it sister." I said to her and I smiled as her laughter echoed throughout the hallway and I knew for right now everything was normal.

tbc... should I stick to one Pov or do you guys like both of them....its up to you guys.!
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hey guys!! Another part is here for ya right from the press!!

Behrsgirl77 Questions? Questions? I love when you guys are left with so many questions makes my duty as a writer more fulfilling! :D I'm glad you liked the part and i think I'm going o stick it the alternating POVs too... thanks for your feedback!

Vicki LVCM - I agree! if i was reading this I would want to know
what both Max and liz were thinking. Thanks for you feedback

Venus_star2.com Roswell, Smoswell.... This my own little dreamwell, so there is dreamer insurance for the end, incase any of you were wondering. But we are in Roswell and anything can happen! :D Thanks for the feedback!

roswellluver Thanks for reading and your feedback. I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!!


Itzstacie Yup! I'm sticking with the alternatin pov's...Hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!!

BehrObsession Why did i add tess? well I got some big plans for her. I mean I wouldn't let her ruin M/L now could I? Max and Liz, you've seen them on the show, they should have just gone for it right at the beginning but hey, we have to have a story, right? :D

anonymousarfan I'm glad I'm back too...I hope you enjoy the rest of the stryo and don't worry about Tess...i think you may come to like her by the end of this story... :wink:



Part 7

What the hell was with that girl? I mean what was so attracting about her. Maybe it was my fear of rejection with Liz, or my own males hormones.

I know she knows that I'm staring but I can't help but look. She glances over her shoulder a small smile on her face.

My eyes shy away and I look at Liz sitting next to me. She doesn't seem to notice but I can see some emotion shining in her eyes. Was that pain?

"Mr. Evans?" I hear the teacher call out my name.

"Yeah." I reply confused.

"Care to pay attention." She says and I look at her dumbly, as she starts to teach again.

What was it with teachers? They must have fun finding students to pick on. I notice the small smirk on Liz's face and I know she enjoyed those brief five seconds.

I watch as she rips a piece of paper from her notebook and scribbles something down on it. Folding it, I watch as she slides it across the table.

Sucks to be you

It says and I grin.

I flip it over and scribble my own little note.

At least I'm not you.

I push it over to her and watch the smile grow on her face, as she writes furiously back.

Maximillion when will you learn that all the girls want you, including our so-called Biology teacher.

I read the note and wonder how she came up with the name Maximillion. I make a note to self to yell at my parents for naming me something that could be used agaisnt me in so many ways.

I stare at the note for the second before I start to write once again.

So...are you saying that you want me too, Miss. Parker.

I grin as I pass the note over to her. I watch as emotions flicker through the depths of her eyes. Happiness, to love, to ear, then desire and then back to playfullness.

You would only be so lucky.

I glance at her once more before the bell rings and I am shocked to see her staring at someone in front of us.

I follow her gaze to see the blonde haired girl from earlier walking towards me.

"Hey." She says to me. "I'm Tess."

"Um...Hey, I'm Max." I say looking at her wondering what it was about her that made me seem to go hazy. '

Liz Pov

I stare at Max and this Tess girl and I wonder what the hell was happening. I mean Max is normal one moment and then kaboom this girl comes over and he goes all goo goo gah gah over.

I clear my throat hoping to get one of their attention. I notice the Tess girl look at me for a second.

"Max, whose this?" She asks and I feel my anger start to boil. For some reason I don't really like this girl.

Max looks at me and I can see his guilt.

"I'm Liz." I say with a bright, plastered smile, my voice cheery.

Max stares at me and I can sense his grin. I know he's wondering what was wrong with me.

"Where are you from?" I ask trying to be nice, trying to see what Max was attracted to.

She looks at me curiously as a smile forms on her face. "Florida." She says and I mentally groan and I don't know why.

"So Liz are you dating Max?" She asks.

Am I dating Max? Why would she every think that? I mean he was my best friend. I see Max look at me and then back at the blonde haired Florida girl.

He seems to be contemplating the same thing as I.

"Umm...Well, no." I say not sure why it took me so long to asnwer her question.

"Yeah, we're just friends." Max's finishes up with but I couldn't leave it at that.

"Best friends." I say throwing my arm around arm's shoulder, a smile adorning my face.

I expected the girl in front of me to frown in distaste, of jealousy, but nope, she just stood there with that silly smile on her face.

"That's great." She said cheerfully and I groaned again.

"Liz!" I hear someone yell out my name and I spotted Maria by the door. I glance and Max and Tess one more time wondering if I should leave them alone.

I look at Maria at the door and she seems to be begging me to get over to her.

"Hey guys, I got to go." I say and I see Max glance at me. "Maria's calling and you know it's not good to keep her waiting."

"Do I know." He says experencing Maria way to many times.

"Okay then. I'll see ya later Max." I place a kiss on his cheek and look at the girl in front of me. "I'll see you around too, Tess."

I walk towards the door.

"What's with the new chick and Max?" Maria asks even before I get to her.

"I have no idea, but I don't think I want to know." I say to her and Maria looks at me curiously.

"What?" I ask, as we walk out of the room.

"You really do have a crush on him." She says with a shocked smile.

"On who?" I ask dumbly.

"Max, stupid." She answers with and I pause in step.

"No I don't." I say positively.

I see Maria shaking her head. "Yes, you do." She says.

"It's impossible Maria, I mean he's my best friend." I tell her as we walk towards my car.

"Haven't you ever heard that quote about the two friends and love, and something about dwarfs." Maria said itching her head.

"Dwarfs?" I question raising one eyebrow.

She shrugs her shoulder. "Must have been something my mother told me." She says simply.

I look at her strangely but smile. Maybe she was right, though. Maybe, I do like Max, maybe it's true that I can or might fall in love with Max, and maybe we will have little dwarfs, or they will steal our hearts, or they will cast a spell upon us.

Okay never mind there is no way that dwarfs could fit into that theory.

What the hell was Maria talking about?

"Dwarfs?" I question once more.

"Hey, what do you want me to tell ya. Strangeness is etched in the Deluca gene." She said with another shrug of her shoulders.


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Part 8

Liz Pov


Will customers ever become any more civil? I mean all they do is complain. My hamburgers too cool, my soda doesn't have enough ice in it. I groan as I walk to my next table.

Forcing a smile on my face I greet the new customers from hell. "Hello, I'm Liz and i'll be you waitress today. How can I help you today?"

I stare at the two adults sitting there staring at the menu, almost ignoring me. I stand there with my pad in one hand and my pen in the other, the stupid smile still on my face. What I do for money, is all I can think. I stand there for a couple more minutes wondering if they even acknowledged my yet. Nope.

"Can I get you guys something to drink?" I ask this time politely.

One of the guy looks up at me and growls and I mean literally growls. The other guy then looks up apologizing. "We'll just have two cokes." He says to me. Finally a civil customer.

"Okay then I'll be right back with that." I say before turning away from the growling customer and his gracious friend.

"Could these guys be any more hellish today?" I ask as I walk over to Maria.

"I know what you mean. That guy over there just asked if he could pinch my ass for 20 dollars." Maria said shaking her head back and fourth in disapproval.

"Well you didn't let him do it, did you?" I ask looking at Maria. A smirk forms on her face. "I can't believe you Maria!" I screech.

"Hey it was 20 bucks." She says and walks off, the smirk still plastered to her face.

I smile at her behavior and turn around and start to fill up my weirdest customers of the day's drinks. Half way through, I hear the bells on the door jingle and a male's oice yell out my name.

Turning around quickly, I was just in time to watch Max tumble to the ground, my name on the tip of his tongue.

Laughing I walk over to my friend.

"You like that I'm experiencing a whole lot of pain right now." He says rising from the ground.

Nodding my head, I feel my lips start turn upwards once more into a smile.

"Nice to know what kind of friends I have." He said and I started to laugh once more.

Calming myself down I looked over at Max.

"Sorry." I say." Now what were you so excited about that you had to rush all the way in here screaming my name." I say wanting so much to joke about his little fall.

"I don't think I want to tell you know." He states like a little child sitting down at the counter, crossing his arms.

"I said I was sorry." I say but that grin was still on my face.

He looks at me, as if questioning my sincerity. I throw on my best puppy dog eyes and instantly he crumbles.

"Fine I'll tell you." He says turning to face me.

"Well I was just talking with Tess." He starts to say and I feel my smile start to disappear. Not her again, I think. "We just talked about stupid things for a while and then she asked for a date." He said to me a huge smile on her face.

"Well did you accept?" I asked not knowing if I really wanted to know the answer. He was breaking my heart with every word.

"She didn't ask me for a date?" He said and I knew he was on the verge of laughter and his mouth started to twitch.

"Well then who did she ask?" I say happily knowing that Max wasn't in the picture any longer.

"Do you really wanna know?" He says teasing me.

"Yes I really wanna know." I say anxious.

"You really really wanna know?" He says and I'm getting annoyed.

"Yes Max."

"She wanted to know if one of my friends would be willing to go out with her." He told me.

"Who? Michael?" I ask cuious.

"Nope. Another friend." He says and I see his smile widen.

"Alex, I don't know." I say. "I give up."

"Well she wanted to know if you would want to go out with her." He says and he starts to laugh.

"Me?" I question. Then it dawns on me why she wasn't shooting bullets at me when I was hanging all over Max this afternoon. "You mean she..." I start.

"Likes girls?" He finishes. "Yup. And your on the top of her list."

"Me? Why me?" I ask.

"Because you are very beautiful. That was a direct quote from her." Max says.

"Well what did you tell her?" I ask and when I see that smile on his face once again I know it's not good. "What did you tell her Maxwell Evans." I say demanding him to tell me.

"I told her that you would go to the movies with her on Saturday." He said with a shrug, but his grin was what fumed me the most.

"You told her I would go out with her?" I ask trying not to sound pissed off at him, in case he was joking.

"Yup." He stated and I knew he wasn't joking, because even though he was grinning his eyes held seriousness.

Max's Pov

I watch as she stares at me for a second, trying to decide what to do. Her eyes were flaming, and I couldn't help but think that she was beautiful when she was pissed.

"I can't believe you." She says as she storms away over to Maria.
I watch as they talk for a minute and I smile when I hear Maria's laughter from across the room.

"I'm going to kill him Maria!" I hear her yell as she storms behind the counter grabbing two drinks and walking over to a table. she basically throws the drinks down, and takes their food order. It was then that I swear that I hear a guy growl.

Liz then goes back to the counter, taking their orders. As she makes her way towards me, she glances away.

"Wait Liz." I say halting her from moving any farther.

"I would like a cheeseburger and fries." I say and she mumbles something to herself.

She doesn't even glance upwards as she starts to move away from me once again.

"Wait Liz." I say once more and she looks at me. She looks mad, oh well, I think. "Can you come here for a second, I have to talk to you."

I notice that she thinks about. She brushed a piece of her hair behind her ear and she reluctantly comes over to where I am sitting.

"What is it Max." She says and I can say that pissed was an understatement.

"Well, Tess told me to make sure you bring some money for saturday because she wants to make sure that you pay for everything, like a real date." I tell her before I feel her fist in my shoulder and storms off once again. "I won't be needing that burger anymore." I yell to her as I run out of the building because no matter how much I love her, right now, I think she would kill me if she saw me once more.

But all I can say is that paybacks a bitch.

tbc.....
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