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Sour Girl - CC M/L MATURE - Song Fic [COMPLETE]

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Title: Sour Girl
Author: Crashdown_51
E-Mail: Torch_jo@yahoo.com
Rating: MATURE may turn into ADULT; haven't decided
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Roswell characters; except Elias...hmm I don't know I think I own like 10% of him. Let's just say I don't own any. :D The plot was Angel Eye's idea.
Summary: Takes place during "Four Aliens and A Baby". What if Tess's ship wasn't the only ship that crashed in "Crash" and the passenger has a intriguing secret about one of them?
Notes: This fic was requested by Angel Eyes. The main plot of the fic derived from her head and asked if I could right it. Thanks for choosing me and make sure you post your kick ass banner here.


Preface


‘Why aren't you taking this thing more seriously? A UFO lands…’

‘Crashed. And I am taking it seriously. I'm just not obsessing over it like you.’

‘Obsession isn't always a bad thing. Maybe there are enemy aliens on that ship.’

‘All the more reason to stay away.’

‘I liked you better when you were brooding and paranoid.’




Chapter 1


Roswell Air Force Base


“Did you find it yet?” A Major asks on of his troops.

“Sir. No, sir. We canvassed the ‘hot zone’ perimeter and still no sign.” The trooper answered.

“Put more men out in the field.” The Major ordered leaning over with both hands flat on his desk. “I want that second ship.”

“Yes sir.” The troop sounded off and saluted before marching out of the office.

“We’ll get it sir.” The Major assured the General who had been watching two dozen scientists work on the recovered ship that crashed a few nights ago.

“For your case, you better hope so.” The General warns in an icy tone.


Liz’s Room

Liz is on her bed tucked underneath her covers reminiscing on Max and their interrupted make out session. She blushed when she pictured Max and her lying entangled on her bed, embracing and caressing each other as they kiss.

‘It's really nice to be able to be close to you again without...’

‘...setting something on fire? Yeah... ...You sure you're okay?’

‘Yeah, I'm fine. See? No green in sight. We're okay.’


She turned on her back, staring at her ceiling as she patted on her stomach like a drum. She could hear the beeping of her answering machine letting her know she had an unheard message. Pouting when she remembered the message had been from Max’s mom. She had called in the middle of their so called ‘biology lesson’ and completely killed the mood for them.

‘Can we continue this after...?’

‘My Dad'll be finished working the grill in half an hour.’

‘Well, meet me back at Michael's - it's safer, anyway.’

‘What about Michael?’

‘I'll get rid of him.’

‘...'kay.’


“Hey, Liz?” Liz heard Maria call out breaking her concentration.

“Yeah, come in.” Liz called out as she sat up on her bed watching Maria come in with a suspecting facial expression. “What?”

“You tell me.” Maria answered. “Is their some particular reason why you’re all flushed?” Maria asked crossing her arm.

“Uh, Max and I were…studying.” Liz blushed as she tucked her long strands of hair behind her ears and hugged her knees.

“Studying?” Maria repeated not convinced. The sounds of nearby helicopters circling the area and bright flashes of the spotlight on them distracted Liz from continuing their best friend interrogation.



The Evans House

Meanwhile at the Evan’s household, Max and Isabel were panicking, The both if them were tricked into coming over to their parents house for a family emergency dinner but in reality the reason why their parents wanted them there was because they had discovered Isabel using her powers by a hidden camera that Diane Evans hid inside Isabel’s room. But to add insult to injury, Tess had returned from Antar with Max’s baby.

“So what are you doing here? And, why did you come back?” Max asked bitterly as he watched the helicopters circle the sky from his bedroom window.

“Kivar betrayed me. He rejected Zan as the heir. And...he was going to kill him, so I escaped.” Tess replied.

“So that was you that crashed the other night with the Air Force jet.” Max asked already assuming what her answer was going to be.

“It was trying to shoot us down. I don't know why. Typical human response, I guess. My ship was destroyed, and I woke up just as they were about to take Zan.” Tess replied with a small shrug.

“And how many people did you kill in the process?” Max asked with overwhelming anger.

“Fifteen, maybe twenty! I didn't stop to count!!” Tess answered indifferently.

“I can't believe I ever cared about you...” Max admits in disgust.

“Well, you did. And that was not a mind warp.” Tess replied with an angry smirk.

“None of that matters now. We have to get our son out of Roswell.”


Liz Room

“What is going on out there?” Liz asked curiously as she climbed out her window and watched a helicopter flying over the buildings a block away from her house.

“You think it has to do with the crash?” Maria asked sitting on one of Liz’s plastic beach chairs.

“It could be.” Liz replied with a shrug and then turned to face Maria. “So what are you going to be doing tonight?” Liz asked walking over to her window and signaling Maria to come back inside. “You and Michael doing anything?”

“Maybe. He kind of left right after your dad said he was closing the restaurant early.” Maria answered bringing her up to date on Michael’s whereabouts. “You should have seen him. The smile when your dad broke the news was total Hallmark moment. Which means either he’s at home watching a hockey game or at home drinking Snapple. ” Maria said with a giggle. “What about you? You doing anything besides Max?” Maria asked with an instigating smile.

“Maria!” Liz exclaimed in embarrassment.

“So I guess that answers my question.” Maria said getting nudged by Liz. “Okay, seeing that you’re going to be very busy sucking face with Moon Doggie, I’m heading out.” Maria said walking back to the door. “Call me later. That is if your lips haven’t fallen off by then.”

“Oh, it’s my hands I’m worried about.” Liz teased back getting a shocked expression from Maria from Liz’s unexpected kinky talk. “Kidding. I’ll call you.”

“You better.” Maria warned closing the door after her. Liz could help but let out a small chuckle and shake her head in amusement. She then glanced at her alarm clock and noticed it was almost 8 o’clock. She quickly skipped to the bathroom to freshen up before heading out to Michael’s place for some one-on-one action with Max.



Michael’s Apartment

Max and Tess enter Michael's apartment with Baby Zan and startle Michael who was sitting watching television. Michael quickly but jumps to his feet at the sight of Tess and raises his hand to blast her. “Tess, you are not here!!”

“Michael, no!” Max yells rushing forward to get between Tess and Michael.

“Maxwell, get out of the way.” Michael warns. “Whatever she told you, she's lying.”

“She has my son.” Max pleads with pleading hands opened in front of him.

“Well, get the baby out of the way.” Michael instructs him.

“No, he needs her. If you kill her, my son will die.” Max notifies him. Michael hesitates for a moment but then backs off.

“Max, what the hell's she doin' here? “ Michael asked enraged.

“It's a long story. But we need to get them out of Roswell.” Max states walking over to Michael with Tess following behind as she cradles the baby.

“Yeah. My heart bleeds.” Michael comments with obvious sarcasm.

“Nice to see you, too, Michael.” Tess snaps back.

“Hey, don't start.” Max warns as he reaches down to take the baby from her.


Outside Michael's Apartment

Liz reaches Michael’s door straightening her hair and smiles anxiously look forward to her evening with Max. But when she enters the apartment she sees Tess arguing with Michael.

“You always were the quick one, Guerin.” Tess sarcastically says before an unforeseen blast throws her hard into the adjoining room. Max and Michael are shocked as they watch Tess struggle to rise to her feet and when they look back towards the door, they see Liz standing there with her outstretched hand that is crackling with green sparks.

“Get up, bitch!” Liz demands before she blasts Tess again, knocking her back into the wall. Max quickly hands Michael the baby and rushes to stop Liz. “I'll kill you!! You're a murderer! I'll kill you!” She screams befoe Max pulls her outside.

“Welcome back.” Michael mutters to Tess with a smirk.


Outsidein the street

Liz couldn’t believe Tess was back and on top of it Max was protecting her.

‘What?? What?? So you trust her now?’

‘No, Liz, far from it. But Tess and my son are linked. Killing her would kill him.’

‘Yeah, it's convenient.’


Liz could feel the chunks trying to retract back up Liz’s throat. Seeing her brought all this rage and hatred that she has never felt in her life. Not even towards the men that shot her.

‘She betrayed all of us! She killed Alex!’

The discussion she had in Michael’s hallway replayed back and forth in her head.

‘No, she has to pay for it! Max, promise me... when this is all over, Tess will pay for what she did.’

‘I promise.’

‘Let me know when it's over.’


Liz kicked herself mentally for leaving Max there with her. Even though she knew Kyle and Michael were there with him, she could help and feel that he’d be better protected from Tess’s manipulations if she were there. And the baby. Seeing the baby just made the fact that Max slept with Tess more real. Just that thought alone stirred her stomach. “Oh God!” Liz exclaimed before regurgitating in an empty parking lot beside the flower shop. She quickly gathered her hair and leaned on the brick wall with her forearm, spitting out the taste of the last two hurls. “Uh.” Liz moaned in pain feeling her abs sore up from all the air vomiting.

“Water?” Liz heard a man, with what she assumed was a thick French accent offer. Liz quickly turned around and saw a man in his late 20’s, with a well kept five o’clock shadow, holding out a water bottle.

“Oh, no thank you.” Liz stumbled politely hiding her breath behind her hand.

“So you rather walk home wit’ your hand over your face?” He asked puzzled. “I can not carry a conversation, mon ami, wit’ you covering such a beautiful smile.” Liz couldn’t help but blush starting to walk back in the direction she was going. “Wait! My name is Elias.” He introduced himself and stuck out his hand. Liz shook his hand but he turned it and kissed the back of her hand.

“Elias? French?” She asks with a puzzled look.

“Dat it is, but I’m all Cajun, mon ami.” He answers.

“Oh, well mine’s Liz.” Liz replied still not removing her hand away from her face.

“Well, if de lady does not wish t’ drink from my water, perhaps she would like a piece of gum.” He said with a smile pulling out a piece of gum.

“Thank you.” Liz said take the gum, unwrapping it and then chewed on it. Relieved to taste something other than vomit in her mouth. “I’ve never seen you before. Are you a tourist?” Liz asked curiously.

“I’ve visited before but I see know dat I missed one site on my visits.” Elias answers with a flirty gaze.

“Uh, I’m pretty sure my boyfriend wouldn’t be to happy with me talking to a complete stranger.” Liz said blushing.

“Boyfriend, eh?” He repeated flashing a smirk. “I don’t understand how he can let such a pretty thing walk alone at night. Who knows what you might run into?” Liz started to feel like she was a hundred yards away from Michael’s place or hers. She mentally struggled with the option of either using her powers or not if Elias decided to try anything funny. If she used them she’d be saving and endangering her life in one move. Now more than ever did she wished she’d stay with Max.

“I can take care of myself.” Liz answered shaky.

“I bet you can, mon ami. Dat Max of yours sure taught ya a t’ing or two, eh?” He asked. The sound of him actually knowing Max’s name without her saying it reminded her that in Roswell, there is no such thing as a stranger with no agenda.

“How did you know his name?” Liz asked stopping dead in her tracks. “Do you know Max?”

“I don’t know Max but I know a t’ing or two about Zan, darlin’” Elias answered with a twinkle in his eyes. Liz tried to run but felt his tight grip around her waist. “Don’t do dat, chere. You would want t’ make ol’ Elias mad now would ya?” He asked.

“Who are you?” Liz asked struggling to get away.

“You forgot my name already? Tsk.Tsk.” He said moving his finger back and forth like windshield wipers. “If you can not remember Elias, try Kivar. I’m sure you won’t forget it.”
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‘Hello?’

‘They didn't make it.’

‘What happened?’

‘They got turned back. We need to meet back at your apartment. It's the only safe place left.’



Chapter 2



Isabel’s Apartment


Michael, Maria, Isabel, Jesse, Kyle and Valenti waited for Max, who was putting Zan to sleep, in Isabel’s room. Maria was on the edge of practically running to Tess and choking the life out of her, but her train of thought was interrupted when she heard Max open the bedroom door.

“Zan’s asleep.” Max says as he closing the door and joining everyone in the living room noticing Liz wasn’t with them. “Where’s Liz?” He asked looking at Maria.

“I went to the Crashdown to get her but her dad said she left around eight and hasn’t seen her since.” Maria informs him.

“She probably needed time to cool off.” Michael suggested.

“Why? She knows already that Tess is here?” Maria asks worried.

“Yeah, and now she’s Super Woman again.” Michael answers.

“I have to call her.” Maria said heading to her purse to get her cell phone.

“Wait, we can’t waste time. They’ll find us.” Tess pleaded terrified.

“Wasting time?” Maria yelled. “Your right we are wasting time…on you. Michael why didn’t you kill her yet.”

“What am I a hit man? I already said that Max wouldn’t let me.” Michael answered crossing his arms.

“Max, as much as I hate to say this, but Tess is right. We’re running out of time.” Valenti warns as he paces to the other side of the room. “It’ll be harder to get Tess and the baby out of Roswell when morning comes.”

“We need to come up with a Plan B.” Kyle added. Tess see she’s run out of options, sitting conquered on the couch.

“Then go. Go without me. Just get Zan to safety.” She breathes out. Max shifts his weight not knowing what to do.

“You said he couldn't survive without you.” Max’s voice trembled with anger. “Another lie?”

“I knew it.” Michael said shaking his head.

“You were going to kill me! I was just trying to stay alive. To keep our son safe.” Tess confesses. “Now the only way to keep him safe is to let him go.”

“So the baby's not linked to you... at all??” Max asked with his jaw tightening along with his fists.

“No. ...Zan is completely human.” She admits shocking everyone by the news. “That's why they rejected him on Antar. That's why I had to come back.”

“How is that possible?” Max asked baffled.

“Wait, let me get this straight. If the baby doesn't need you to survive, then we can kill you.” Michael asked his anticipation.

“Michael.” Max called out hinting it wasn’t the time for his humor.

“We could. But the Air Force would still be looking for an alien. Looking for us.” Isabel added.

“If the Air Force wants an alien, then why don't we just give'm one?” Michael suggests.

“Turn her in?” Isabel asks to clarify Michael’s plan.

“Yeah, then they won't be looking for an alien, and they'll leave us alone.” Maria adds with agreement to Michael’s idea.

“I'm sensing a Plan B.” Kyle comments.

“No. They would throw her in a white room and study her like a lab rat for the rest of her life. I've been there. I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy.” Max admits.

“Max, this isn't a decision that you get to make. It affects all three of us.” Isabel tells him in a shaky tone.

“Oh, no, no, no. This is not an alien decision only. She killed Alex. She killed my best friend.” Maria quickly adds with a wounded voice. “I think that we should all get to vote.”

“All right. Fair enough. Let's put it to a vote. 'Yes', we turn her in. 'No', we try to help her.” Max proposes.

“Wait. Liz has a right to vote to.” Maria adds. “We should decide until she gets hear.” She says dialing Liz’s number. The ringing is consistent. Maria finally stops try after numerous attempts to reach Liz in both her house phone and cell phone, alternating with Max as he attempted to reach her with his cell phone. Suddenly, Maria jumps startled by the loud ringing of her cell phone that echoed throughout the quiet room. When she looks at the screen of her ringing phone it says the word ‘Mom’ on it and she picks it up disappointed. “Hello? Mom? What is it?”

‘Maria, Liz just left from her. She told me to call you as soon as she leaves and let you know that she left a present for you in your room.’

“A present?” Maria repeats confused. “Did she say what it is or where she was going?”

‘No, she looked like she was in a hurry. Maria why didn’t you tell me Liz and Max broke up?’

“Broke up? Max and Liz never broke up.” Maria answers giving Max a perplexed look as he was giving her on back. “Did she tell you that?”

‘No, her friend did.’

“What friend?” Maria asked sitting down on the couch. Michael moved around the couch and signaled to Tess to ‘hit the road’ with his thumb so he could sit next to Maria.

‘A real stud muffin or I guess I should say he’s a croissant, I think he was French or something exotic like that.’

“Okay, first of all, ‘French’ and ‘exotic’ are not words that could be used in the same sentence with Liz. And second of all Max and Liz are practically joined at the hip for any of that to be true. I’m her best friend I doubt she would forget to mention Pierre or Max, especially when I’m dating his best friend.” Maria snapped practically in one breath as Max paced back and forth imagining the worse from the small bits of information Maria was letting out.

‘Okay. Okay, Maria. Maybe it was a joke. Is not like the were kissing now.’

“Kissing?” Maria repeated, Max head snapped to Maria, hearing the word ‘kissing’ without hearing his named mentioned.

‘Listen, I got to go to Dexter. I’ll be home late.’

“Okay. Ilove you.” Maria answered.

‘Love you too. Bye sweetie.’

“What the hell was all that about?” Max asked in a stiff tone when Maria hung up her phone.

“We have to go to my house.” Maria demands.

“Wait what about me?” Tess asks seeing everyone heading towards the door.

“What about you?” Maria snapped.

“The entire Air Force is looking for me and Zan…”

“I'm sorry. Did I give you the impression that a gave a crap? Right now all that’s important to me is finding out where Liz is.” Maria said looking Tess up and down in disgust.

“You guys should go. There’s no point of all of us going to Maria’s. It might cause to much suspicion.” Valenti suggested.

“Your right.” He replies and then looks at Kyle, Isabel and Jesse. “The less we are. The less we stand out.” Max states.

“Be careful, Max. I have a really bad feeling.” Isabel advised. Max hugs her and then follows Michael and Maria out the door.


The Chevelle

“What was Liz doing at your place anyways?” Michael asked turning to his side to get a glimpse of Maria who was sitting in the back, but then assumed that she probably went over for comfort after seeing Tess back with Max’s baby.

“My mom said Liz went over to give me a present.” Maria answered crossing her arms in the back seat.

“A present?” Max questioned glancing at Maria from the rearview mirror. “Do you know what it is?”

“No, but when we get there I’m assuming we’re going to find out.” Maria comments.

“It better be a Metallica Christmas ornament she made Tess break when she flung her on top of it.” Michael added, getting a look of disbelief from both Max and Michael. “What? It’s a collectable.” He defended.

“Wait, so Liz really got her powers back?” Maria asked.

“Yeah, that’s an understatement.” Michael replied with a chuckle. Max had told him about what had happened in Winnaman Academy, but when he saw her use her powers back at his place, he was shocked to see how strong her powers had gotten. "Wait so you didn't believe me before?"

"We're here." Max announced, saving Maria from an argument with Michael.
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Chapter 3

Isabel’s Place

“Did you have something to do with this?” Max asked swinging the front door open so hard that a made a dent in the wall. "Did you?" Max repeated to Tess with fury in his tone as he walked quickly to her and clasps tightly to her arms, making everyone stand fearful and baffled by his sudden attack.

"Did I what?” Tess asked frightened.

“What happened?” Isabel asked standing behind Max.

“It was a trap.” Maria answered hugging herself.

“What are you talking about?” Kyle asked.

“Liz’s present was a bomb.” Michael said as he leaned on the doorway to the kitchen with his arms crossed.

“What?” Kyle and Isabel said at the same time.

“What aren’t you telling us? And you better not lie to me or so help me God I’ll turn you in myself and pray they put you in a white room.” Max threatened as her stared down at her with hatred.

“Wow, he’s pissed.” Kyle whispered to Michael who was smiling in amusement, enjoying the sight of Max threatening Tess as much as Maria was.

“Alright, let go of me!” Tess pleaded. “You’re hurting me.” Max looked at her with a warning gawk and then let her go. Tess rubbed her arms and circled around the back of the couch to sit down. “The reason I crashed was because someone rammed me…trying to get in control I flew by a military jet, clipped it's wing and then it tried to shoot me down. But someone else beat them to it.” Tess confesses.

“Who?” Max asked, staring a hole in the back of her head.

“I don’t know. It could be anyone of Kivar’s men…”

“Or Kivar himself.” Michael suggested. “He has visited more than once and not to mention the little grudge he has against us.”

“Yeah, but why would he come after Liz? Isn’t he like obsessed with Isabel or something?” Maria asked.

“He’s obsessed with Vilandra, not me.” Isabel corrected, getting a flash back of Kivar crashing her wedding and her honeymoon with motives of bringing her back to Antar.

"She could be a hostage." Kyle suggested.

“When we were in my room, you told me Kivar tried to kill you…why? Is it just because the baby's human?” Max asked.

“No.” Tess answered lowering her head and playing with her nails.

“Then why?” Max asked.


Liz’s Room

“Come out now, darlin’.” Kivar calls out to Liz who’s changing into an Artarian, two-piece, red and black, vinyl outfit in her bathroom. “Don’t we look alien today.” He comments after making an examining circle around her. “What’s de matter love? Cat’s got your tongue?”

“Your gonna kill Maria.” Liz whimpered with tears falling from her eyes.

“Now why would I want t’ do a t’ing like dat for?” Kivar asked wiping the tears away from her face.

“But the bo…”

“Bomb?” He finished off her question getting a nod from Liz. “See, Chere. You already know what it is, like she do, so she’ll be fine as long as Rath is there t’ protect her pretty head.” He said tacking a strand of her hair to smell it.

“I don’t understand. I thought you were suppose to be in love with Isabel?” Liz questioned.

“Vilandra. I sure do miss her.” He says taking in the memories as he said her name. “Whoever dat girl is now she’s not Vilandra anymore. I loved no one, but what better way t’ infiltrate de throne den t’ make de enemy of my enemy my friend.” He confesses. “I sat and watched how de four I feared de most turn into…teenage humans. I only have one desire…t’ have de Royal Queen at my side.”

“Well, Tess is around here somewhere.” Liz said relieved.

“No, no, Chere.” Kivar chuckled, taking Liz to the full length mirror and waved his hand in front of her for head revieling the the V-shaped constellations. “You’re de Queen.”
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Chapter 4


Isabel’s Apartment

“What do you mean you’re not the Queen?” Max asked confused, sitting next to her to keep the room from spinning.

“I mean I’m not the Queen.” Tess answered with a trembling voice.

“But the Destiny Book and the orbs…our mother said you were.” Max pointed out in disbelief, covering his face from frustration with his hands.

“Hey, I’m suppose to be the Queen.” Tess stood up and yelled. “Something happened. I don’t know what. But when I took the Emissary test…Kivar threatened to kill me when he found out I didn’t have the seal, so I ran.”

“The seal?” Michael repeated. “I thought it was just for the king?”

“The Emissary told me we all have the same symbol but their distinct in the way the seal lights up.” Tess replied.

“Max, if she’s not the Queen, maybe we…” Isabel trailed off not wanting to jinx the possibilities.

“No.” Max puffed as he stood up to look at everyone. Valenti and Jesse weren’t there so he made a mental note to ask about their whereabouts later and just assumed Zan was still sleeping in Isabel’s room. “I passed the Emissary test when I went to New York. I have the Royal seal, and Lonnie and Rath told me that they didn’t, so that must mean you guys do.” Max speculated.

“I hope your right, Maxwell cause I don’t need to be chased down if I’m not the man, you know.” Michael said getting slapped in the stomach with the back of Maria’s hand. “And whoever has your sign is probably out there flipping out.”

“What?” Tess asked not understanding.

“When Max died, I inherited his position, the seal and it made me flip out.” Michael admitted.

“It made you flip out?” Maria repeated in disbelief on how lightly Michael was describing the traumatizing event. “You attacked Max, went on a power spree, and not to mention threatening to kill me before you left me stranded! I think flipped out is a pretty loose term, don’t you think?”

“So you’re the king now?” Tess asked confused.

“No.” Max answered shoving his hands in his pockets. “Max took the seal back.”

“How did he do that?” Tess asked curiously.

“I…” Max was about to explain but the thought set off a domino effect of theories in his head.

“What is it?” Tess asked seeing Max was in deep thought.

“Nothing.” Max said shaking his head. All of a sudden, Valenti and Jesse come storming in the room.

“Thank God, you guys are back.” Jesse said relieved when he saw Michael, Max and Maria had returned.

“Any luck with Liz?” Valenti asked.

“No.” Max answered shaking his head and then looking down at the ground.

“Where were you guys?” Michael asked intriguingly.

“We went to talk to Phillip.” Valenti answered as he went to Isabel’s room.

“You went to see my dad? Why?” Max asked curiously.

“We’re taking the baby to the office. Their searching homes, not businesses.” Jesse answered.

“But we have to leave now.” Valenti announced coming out with Zan in his arms.

“Please, be careful with him.” Tess pleaded, kissing Zan on the forehead before Valenti took off again.

“Max, I’m going with them.” Isabel stated getting a nod of acceptance from Max.

“I’ll go with you.” Kyle added following behind her and closing the door after him.

“So, what do we do now?” Maria asked.

“We have to find Liz.” Max answered.

“Easier said then done, Maxwell.” Michael commented.

“The last time Liz used her powers, the energy kept flowing through her for about two hours. There’s no way whoever’s got her is going to pass through the checkpoints unnoticed with her glowing like that.” Max establishes.

“So…” Maria said rotating her hands in a circle for Max to elaborate on his speculations.

“It means Liz is still in Roswell and there aren’t so many places they could be at.” Max concludes.

“So what if it’s Kivar? Shouldn’t we have Isabel with us?” Michael asks.

“I need someone to be with Zan who can protect him and not attract attention to themselves. Isabel and Jesse are married. No one will question the idea of them having a baby.” Max explains.

“So what do we do?” Maria asks.

“I think the bomb thing was a signal.” Max assumes.

“A signal for what?” Maria questions.

“For me to find them.” Max answers.
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Chapter 5


Liz’s Room


“How is this even possible?” Liz asked mystified as she watched the seal disappear.

“You are de Queen now.” Kivar whispered in her ear
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“No. It’s not possible. It can’t be. I saw the message myself, Tess is the Queen.” Liz recalls shaking her head not really accepting what was happening even though she felt an unusual current coursing through her body. Something was wrong.

“Tess ‘was’ suppose t’ be de Queen.” Kivar answered as he glanced at Liz’s alarm clock and then glanced at his own wristwatch. He noticed Liz detected him keeping an eye on the time and stared at him curiously. “Time t’ go, darlin’.”

“Go where?” Liz asked worried as she seen him walk over to a picture of her and Max standing in front of an alien mannequin that they took at the UFO Center three days ago.

“Where your Maximus would find us, mon ami.” Kivar answers taping up the picture on the full-length mirror. “Let’s go.”


Max’s Chevelle

“Maxwell, what do you plan to do drive around until we find her?” Michael asked.

“If that’s what it takes.” Max answers.

“That could take hours.” Tess added unenthusiastically.

“Hey, shut it.” Michael snapped. “This is all your fault to begin with.”

“What?” Tess questioned in disbelief. “Max you can’t believe that.” She asked looking at Max for his answer.

“I do.” Max answered. “We have to find Liz.”

“Uh guys, I don’t think we’re going to be driving much. Look.” Maria said pointing to a man pulling Liz inside the UFO Center.



UFO Center

When they entered the UFO Center, there was something peculiarly different about one of the exhibits. Two throne chairs replaced the exhibit that had the re-enactment of the crash with the whirlwind symbol engraved on it and Liz was sitting on one with Kivar standing beside her.

“Liz?” Max called out not recognizing her at first. She looked completely different, her make up was darker and her clothes were something he had never seen her wear before, but the thing he noticed the most were her dark eyes.




Human Behavior – Bjork


If you ever get close to a human
and human behavior
you better be ready to get confused




“Zan, how nice t’ see you again.” Kivar said with a smirk.

“Kivar?” Max asked unsure if it was him.

“Bingo.” Kivar answers with a smirk as he walks forward with his hands behind his back, when he stepped up closer he noticed Tess hiding behind Max. “Well, well. Ava, nice t’ see you survived.” He snorted unsympathetically.

“Sorry to see you did.” Tess snapped back. “And why are you talking like that?”



There's definitely no logic
to human behavior
but yet so, yet so irresistible




“Is dis body, love de attention it gives me and de accent not bad either. Without it I don’t t’ink Liz would have been so…how do you say…generous.” Kivar gloated running his fingers through Liz’s hair.



There is no map
to human behavior




“Get away from her!” Max yelled throwing one of his energy charges at him, but unexpectedly Liz lifted her hand and a green shield she conjured up stopped the blast from hitting Kivar. Maria and Michael’s jaws dropped and Max’s eyes opened wide in surprise.

“What the hell?” Michael exclaimed shocked.

“Very nice, my love.” Kivar said holding out his hand to help Liz stand up.

“Don’t you ever call her that.” Max commanded taking a step forward. “Liz, it’s me, Max.”



They're terribly, terribly, terribly, terribly moody
of human behavior
Then all of a sudden turn happy
but, oh, to get involved in the exchange
of human emotions is ever so satisfying




“Max?” Liz repeated softly before shaking her head and returning with her emotionless expression.



There's no map and
a compass
wouldn't help at all




“Why did you come back?” Michael asked inquiringly.

“For three t’ings. I have one standing right beside me.” He said displaying Liz.

“What possible reason do you have for wanting Liz?” Maria asked.

“Jealous?” Kivar asked arching his eyebrow to Maria in interest, but Michael pulled her behind him giving Kivar a warning stare.


Human behavior


“Answer her.” Michael demanded.

“I t’ought it be obvious by now.” Kivar said waving his hand over Liz’s forehead again and revealing the Royal seal on her forehead.

“Oh, my God!” Tess cried out at the sight.

“How is that possible?” Max questioned. “Liz is human.”



Human behavior



“I assure you she is not just some insignificant human…you saw t’ dat.” Kivar answered.

“What does that mean?” Max asked.

“Have you read de Destiny book lately? Dey may have left out de part of a Royal Antarean wedding where de King joins his soul wit’ his bride’s, finalizing deir union, de King bestows her wit’ de Royal seal making her de Queen. You made her your bride and Queen but didn’t even know it. Oh, Zan, how have you changed.”

“You’re saying when I healed Liz I married her?” Max asked dazed.


Human behavior
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‘Did you like, read my mind or something?’

‘No, I-I don't read minds. When I healed you, I made this, this, I don't know, this connection. And I got this rush of images...I've never tried this before, but maybe I can make the connection go the other way. So you can see…you know that-that I'm still me.’



September 23rd

Journal entry one: ...I could feel everything he was feeling. I could feel his loneliness. For the first time I was really seeing Max Evans. I saw me as he saw me, and the amazing thing was, in his eyes, I was beautiful. Max Evans has put a force on me. It's like my whole life changed in an instant. It's just so ironic that when something like this finally happened to me, it was with an alien.


Chapter 6


“According t’ her t’oughts, she was de one who began de ritual when she gave herself t’ you.” Kivar answered. When Maria heard that, she felt a sunken feeling in her stomach and clasped on Michael’s shirt, feeling him un-eased as well.

“We never…”

“I meant fully trusted you. T’ connect mentally and emotionally. You could have told her t’ jump off of de highest mountain and she would have done it. Anything t’ be wit’ you. Very romantic, is it not? And den you did de same wit’ her.” Kivar added. “Do you understand now?”

“What I don’t understand is why you won’t leave us alone?” Max said with a sound of defeat and desperation in his tone. “You have your throne. Take it. I don’t want it. We won’t stop you. So let her go. You don’t need Liz, so please let her go.” Max begged with his voice trembling.

“I’m afraid it’s not dat simple, Zan. You see as long as you live I’ll never be de true King and even if I kill you, your parents retched backing secured in your DNA, Rath, t’ be your successor, as always. Cursing me in both your lifetimes as third.” Kivar said bitterly.

“What the hell is that suppose to mean?” Michael asked wishing he would’ve brought a dictionary to translate.

“It means in order for me t’ be de King officially, I have t’ kill you both in order t’ become heir t’ de Royal seal. Pointing out items two and three dat I came for…your lives.”

“Wait, Kivar.” Tess warned, stepping out in front of him. “Why don’t you just take it from them?”

“Did you not just hear me? Dat’s exactly what I plan t’ do.” Kivar said with a skeptical stare.

“Yeah, I heard the plan. But if you kill them, words gonna get back to Antar and the city will find out you killed them again and this time they’ll be sure to make you pay for it.” Tess said.

“And how exactly do you know dat?” Kivar asked intrigued.

“I know it because I heard Nicholas telling you it before my Emissary test.” Tess said with a cocky smile.

“Tess, what the hell are you doing?” Max questioned furious.

“What I do best. Look out for myself.” Tess answered with an infuriated gaze.

“We should have killed you when we had the chance.” Michael declares as he tightened his fist.

“None of this would have happened if Max would have just followed the rules.” Tess yelled. “I’m your wife not her. That’s the way it was suppose to be. But you’re infatuated with her. Do you know how hard it was to kiss you, sleep with you, when all that rushed in your mind were images of her!” Tess cried out.

“I love her.” Max yelled back.

“You’re supposed to love me!” Tess yelled using her powers to send Max flying.

“No!” Liz yelled, using her powers to levitate Tess in front of her.

“Max!” Michael and Maria run to his aid.

“Are you okay?” Maria asked.

“Michael, Maria has to get out of here.” Max ordered.

“No, Max. I’m not leaving you guys.” Maria said shaking her head.

“Maria, Max is right. We can’t protect you right now. You need to run. Run and get Isabel.” Michael implored giving her the keys to the Chevelle. Maria looked at him with helpless eyes and kissed him before running to find Isabel. Michael was helping Max rise to his feet when they both noticed Liz using her powers on Tess.

“Ah, what’s she doing to me?” Tess yelled with her chest pointing up as she was being electrified by Liz’s powers. “Kivar, stop her!”

“Liz, play nice.” Kivar murmured coolly and Max and Michael watched as Liz’s arm dropped as if it had no life.

“Liz!” Max yelled as he started to run to her with Michael following, but they were stopped by Kivar’s shield-like fence.

“Not yet.” He warns them.

“How is she doing that?” Tess asked him as she tried to regain her breath.

“It’s her Antarian energy dat she received wit’ de seal.” Kivar inform Tess as he looked at Liz proudly, still blocking Max and Michael from coming nearer.

“She never had them before.” Tess states.

“Dat’s because I awakened it for her. Wit’ my powers guiding her, she’s developing her powers rapidly.” Kivar said with a smile.

“Let me help you.” Tess volunteers. “I can help you get Max and Michael’s seal without killing them.” Tess bluffed.

“In exchange for what?” Kivar asked interested.

“I want what’s mine.” Tess answers viciously.

“Spoken like a true Queen.” Kivar says with a smile. “But Liz is pure and not t’ mention dat she belongs t’ Max, which I’m really going t’ enjoy flaunting me ravishing her t’ him. Why should I trade her for you?”

“Because you’ll have to keep her in order with your powers all the time. Trust me, with her all you’ll see is Max. Just as all I saw in Max was Liz.” Tess explained. “I’m already on your side. So do we have a deal?”

“We do.” Kivar answers after much consideration. “Now how do I get deir seals?”


Control - Poe

Don't you mess with a little girl's dream
'Cause she's liable to grow up mean

Surprised you to find that I'm laughing?
You thought that you'd find me in tears
You thought I'd be crawling the walls
Like a tiny mosquito and trembling in fear

Well you may be king for the moment
But I am a queen understand
x And I've got your pawns and your bishops
And castles
All inside the palm of my hand

While you were looking the other way
While you had your eyes closed
While you were licking your lips
'Cause I was miserable
While you were selling your soul
While you were tearing a hole in me

I was taking control
Now I have taken control
...CONTROL
Now I have taken control
...CONTROL
Now I have taken control
...CONTROL

This is beginning to feel good
Watching you squirm in your shoes
A small bead of sweat on your brow
And a growl in your belly YOU'RE scared to let
through

You thought you could keep me from loving
You thought you could feed on my soul
But while you were busy destroying my life
What was half in me has become whole

While you were looking the other way
While you had your eyes closed
While you were licking your lips
'Cause I was miserable
While you were selling your soul
While you were tearing a hole in me

I was taking control
Now I have taken control
...CONTROL
Now I have taken control
...CONTROL
Now I have taken control
...CONTROL
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First of all, I would like to thank Angel Eyes for nominating my fan fiction "Erase and Rewind". I am really honored. And thank everyone that have been reading my fics, Don't Let Go, Czech;Erase and Rewind; Relativity and Sour Girl.

Second, I don't know if I was spelling Kivar/Khivar's name right so can anyone tell me how to spell it and what does "OMB" mean?



Chapter 7


Behind Khivar’s Shield



“Maxwell, we got to do something.” Michael advised. Max nodded and tried to break through the shield without hurting himself, but ended up being knocked out by the defense blast that the shield shot him with. The impact of the blast caused a rush of images to flash before his eyes.

The first flash was of Liz and Max in AP Bio. He remembered Liz wasn’t feeling good because of her new powers.


‘You feeling worse?’

‘Yeah, it's like my head is fogged in and my head is just being dragged along for the ride’



The second flash was Liz and Max in the library when the December heat wave engulfed Roswell. Liz had been telling him about Kyle dating Vicky Delaney and about the party she invited him to.


‘Right. Oh, and apparently it's gotten really serious. Because they're going to this party together on Friday night. You know, at the old soap factory.’


The third flash was of Liz and Max hiding from her father and making out in the kitchen of The Crashdown. He recalled the big ‘Superman-like’ surprise he had for her that night.


‘Listen. Friday. Midnight. I want you to meet me. Dress warm.’


The fourth was of Max dressed in a Air Force uniform and Liz stopping him before he exited from a door.


‘Hey... Be careful. If there really is a space ship, don't get on it’

‘Not a chance in hell.’



“Max. Maxwell.” Max could faintly hear Michael calling out to him. Max stared up at who he suspected was Michael hovering over him, but when he tried to focus on the image, it was Liz.


‘Max, I can’t talk long or Khivar will notice. Follow the clues. I love you.’


And just as quick as her image came it disappeared. Max shook his head as Michael helped him up. “Are you okay?” Michael asked as Max rubbed his head.

“Liz. She was speaking to me.” Max said in shock.

“What?” Michael questioned not knowing if the blow made him delusional.

“It was just like in New York. When I saw Liz and she warned me about the fire escape before it crashed.” Max said trying to see if Liz was still by Khivar. She was and Tess and Khivar were in deep conversation.

“Liz was helping you. What did she say?” Michael asked relieved.

“What? I don’t know I just had flashes.” Max said confused.

“Maxwell, she gave you the flashes for a reason just focus on them.” Michael demanded.



By The Exhibit

“I need proof that you won’t betray me when you get the seal.” Tess demanded from Khivar.

“Fine, what is it dat you need?” Khivar asked.

“I need to know where the portal is that is going to take us back home.” Tess answered. “So incase something happens, I know where it is.”

“Okay, it’s in de…” Just as Khivar was about to reveal the location of the portal two electric charges blasted Tess and Khivar to the ground, causing Khivar’s shield that was blocking Max and Michael to shut down.

“Max! Michael!” Both of them heard their names being called out and when the looked at the UFO Centers entrance at the top of the stairs, they both saw Isabel with her hand held up.

“Let’s go!” Michael yelled as he headed for the stairs.

“I can’t. I have to get Liz.” Max yelled running to Liz as he saw her running to him.

“Max!” Liz cried out running to him, but before they could join Khivar rose to his feet and used his powers to make Liz fall forward and slide back to him.

“No!” Max yelled but before he could throw is energy balls, he was taking cover for the swarm of energy balls that Tess and Khivar shot his way.

“Max!” Isabel yelled as she watched Max draw out his shield and run up the stair to her. “We can’t save her now.” Isabel advised as Michael and her dragged him out and forced him into the running Chevelle that Maria was waiting in.

“Where’s Liz?” Maria questioned frightened.

“Drive.” Michael ordered. Maria stomped her foot on the gas and headed towards Michael’s place.



The Chevelle

“We have to go back for Liz!” Max demanded.

“Max, we can’t. Khivar’s to powerful and you’re not thinking rationally right now.” Isabel directed.

“Where are you going?” Michael asked Maria.

“Back to your place, why?” Maria answered.

“No. It’s not safe. Go back to Isabel’s.” Michael ordered pointing in the direction of Isabel’s house and then turned to look at Max who had a dejected expression. “Maxwell, we’ll get Liz. I promise, but you need to focus on the flash.” Michael suggested.

“Liz gave him a flash again?” Isabel asked.

“Yeah, but like she did when Max was in New York.” Michael explained.

“Without me?” Isabel asked shocked and confounded.

“Yeah, she has more powers too.” Michael puffed sitting to the side.

“They’re not hers.” Max announced. “The one’s she was using on us belong to Khivar. He’s just multiplying her strength.”

“How is he doing that?” Maria asked.

“I don’t know. But if he’s mind warping her like Tess was with Alex…” Max trailed off hearing everyone’s heart sink in fear. “…he could end up killing her.”
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Chapter 8

Isabel’s Apartment


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“That’s everything.” Max said opening his eyes after focusing back on his flashes.

“Okay let’s go over it again.” Isabel demanded as Maria pointed into a notepad with the tip of a pen.

“His first flash was of Liz not feeling good, maybe she’s letting us know that he’s changing her or that she’s changing with him controlling her?” Maria suggested.

“She said ‘her head was being dragged along for the ride’,” Max added.

“Maybe he’s just controlling her like Brody, as a vessel, so maybe he’s not mind warping her?” Isabel suggested trying to give some positive tidbits into the horrible mix.

“The body he has now is his vessel.” Max reminded, throwing that theory out the window.

“Okay, so mind control it is.” Michael stated impatiently. “What was the next one?” He asked looking over Maria’s shoulder, reading her notes she wrote in the note pad.

“Uh, the heat wave party at the old soap factory.” Maria answered.

“Could be a location.” Michael said amazed. “The old soap factory.”

“What was the third one?” Isabel asked.

“Max and Liz sucking face before their romantic ‘Lois and Clark’ adventure.” Maria answered. “That could be a location too.”

“No, the flashes were specific.” Max debated pacing back and forth. “She wanted me to see something.” Max strain to figure out her clues. ‘Listen. Friday. Midnight. I want you to meet me. Dress warm.’ He remembered. “It’s a time.” Max exclaimed with a smile startling everyone. “The party and our date were both on Friday. Today is Friday. I told her to meet me at midnight. She wants me to meet her at midnight at the old soap factory.” Max declares proudly.

“Alright, Sherlock Holmes.” Maria said with a smile. “So what does the last flash mean?”

“She told me not to get on any space ships. Not to go home.” Max replied.

“Maybe what’s going to be at the old soap factory is a way back home.” Michael suggested, triggering Max and Michael’s memory to Isabel’s honeymoon.

“The portal.” Max and Michael said simultaneously.

“What time is it?” Max asked.

“11:42P.M.” Isabel answered looking at her wristwatch.

“Let’s go!” Max commanded as everyone followed.



The Old Soap Factory

“I can’t leave without de seal!” Khivar said kicking a crushed can of beer, nearly missing Tess’s chest.

“Neither can I.” Tess added.

“You? You’re not going anywhere til’ I get de seal.” Khivar threatened.

“I said you’d have them.” Tess snapped back.

“For your sake, you betta hope so.” Khivar warned. “If you don’t, Liz will stay Queen.” Khivar threatened seeing Tess’s face become enraged.

“Why is she out here like this?” Why isn’t she locked inside a trunk or something?” Tess asked looking at Liz in disgust.

“Why aren’t you tied up like the bitch you are?” Liz snapped feeling the electric current crackle in her hand.

“You’re so going to wish you didn’t say that.” Tess said hitting Liz with one of her energy blasts that tossed Liz back in the dirt parking lot. Liz got up quickly and threw her own blasts to Tess hitting her on her leg and stomach.

“That’s for Alex.” Liz said quickly making her way to her and kicking Tess on the stomach.



The Chevelle

“I knew she was going to betray us.” Isabel stated in anger after hearing of Tess’s renewed allegiance with Khivar. “We should have killed her when we had the chance.” Isabel said with resentment.

“That’s what I said.” Michael commented. “Maybe next time I say we kill somebody, let’s do it.”

“Michael, your first option is to kill whoever we’re dealing with.” Maria reminded. “And not to mention that you suggested it towards me once too.”

“I stand by my statement.” Michael responded.

“Oh, you are so going to pay for that one.” Maria warned crossing her arms.



Old Soap Factory

By the time they reached the factory, they saw Khivar standing amused as he watched Tess and Liz fighting.

“Whoa, catfight.” Michael pointed out witnessing Liz blast Tess as they hid behind an abandoned car that had been vandalized.

“That’s for Alex!” They heard Liz scream. Max looked on surprised, never imagining Liz getting into a fight.

“She’s kicking her ass.” Maria commented as Liz kicked Tess in the stomach with all her might.

“That’s for Max!” Liz screamed.

“Remind me never to get Liz angry.” Max comments as Liz levitates Tess before sending her flying on the sidewall of the soap factory.

“And that’s for me.” Liz declared infuriated. Tess stumbled to stand up holding her hand out for Liz to stop. “Get up! I’m not finished with you yet.” Liz ordered sending an energy ball flying towards Tess, but Khivar used his powers to change the direction of the blast to hit a tree instead.

“Hold on, mon ami. You can’t kill her yet, she still hasn’t told me how t’ take de seal from your beloved Max and Michael.” Khivar said using his control over Liz causing her to stiffen up.

“Okay we have to move now.” Max commanded. “Tess doesn’t know how take the seal, I never told her. It’s all a matter of time before Khivar finds out and kills Tess…”

“You say that like it’s a bad thing.” Maria interrupts.

“He kills her and he’ll takes off with Liz.” Max finished. “He can’t take her to the portal. If he does, we’ll never see her again.” Max warned.

“Right. Let’s go. Maria stay here.” Michael restricted.

“Big shocker.” Maria said leaning back on the car as she watched the three of the creep their way to Khivar, Tess, and Liz. Isabel went right to cover Max and Michael from behind a huge garbage bin while they went left with intentions of sneaking up behind Khivar and snatching Liz with a brave shot of making a run for it. Just as they were as close as the could ever be, Maria watched as Khivar appeared all of a sudden behind Max and Michael, but Max, Michael or Isabel didn’t seem to notice it. Then she looked over to Tess and saw her with her eyes closed tightly, assuming Tess was mind warping the three of them into thinking Khivar was in front of them. Maria struggled mentally not knowing what to do so she stepped out and screamed. “Look out!” She warned, turning every ones head to look in her direction. Furious for Maria ruining his ambush, Kivar raised his hand and blasted Maria making her fly back about ten feet.

“Maria!” Both Michael and Liz screamed. Michael started discharging his own blasts as he made his way to Maria. Max quickly rushed to Liz and grabbed her arm.

“Let’s go.” Max states, but Tess, fuming at the sight, used her powers to send Max flying back.

“NO!” Liz cried out raising her hand but not as fast as Tess, who shot Liz with a electric charge, but received one herself by Isabel you received one from Khivar. Seeing his opportunity, he walked over to Tess’s battered body.

“How do I get de seals?” Khivar exclaimed impatiently.

“I don’t…look out!” Tess warned seeing Michael bolting to them. Khivar quickly shot his blast hitting Michael, sending him back from where he came from. “Let’s go.” Tess yelled to Khivar who threw Liz over his shoulder and carried her away kicking and screaming.

“No! Max!” Liz shouted trying to make an impossible reach to Max.

“Liz!” Max yelled running to her, but then suddenly a purplish light shot down from the dark sky. “No!” Max screamed as he saw Kivar carry Liz into the lighted portal with Tess and with a blink of an eye, they were gone. “NNNNNNNOOOOOO!!!!” Max cried falling on his knees as he cried in his hands. Isabel ran to hug Max.

“Max. Help me.” Michael pleaded in tears, when Isabel and Max turned around they saw Michael carrying Maria in his arms and were stunned to see a metal rod piercing through Maria’s stomach and back. “Max. Help.” Michael whimpered.

“Michael.” Maria attempted to talk. “I love you.”

“No, Max is going to heal you.” Michael sobbed.

“Michael.” Maria called out again.

“Michael, you have to pull it out of her so I can heal her.” Max informed him. Michael nodded and handed Maria to Max, who sat on the floor with her while Michael held on to the piece of rod that was visible and pulled as hard as he could, falling back with a bloody rod hearing Maria cry out a yelp of pain and agony. Max quickly covered her stomach with his hand and began to heal her, letting off a bright glow between his hand and her stomach. Max feeling drained collapsed beside Maria who was struggling to regain her breath.

“Maria. Maria.” Michael called out relieved as he pulled her into his arms and hugged her as they stood up on their knees.

“What happened? Where’s Liz?” Maria asked wiping the burning tears from Michael’s face.

“She’s gone.” Michael answered.

“We have to get her back.” Max ordered as he looked up at the night.

“How?” Isabel asked as she helped him up and looked up with Michael and Maria.

“I don’t know. But I’ll find her. No matter what.”
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Chapter 9


Old Soap Factory Parking Lot


“I don’t know. But I’ll find her. No matter what.” Max declared as he walked at a speedy pace to his car and opened the driver side door, sticking one foot in.

“Where are we going, Max?” Isabel question, seeing Max as she once saw him before when he found out Nasedo had taken Liz.

“To get the Destiny Book. There has to be something in there…”

“Maxwell, you’ve read that book a thousand times.” Michael interrupted as he flapped his seat over so Maria and Isabel could climb in the back.

“I must have missed something.” Max answered as he sat down and started the ignition. Michael climbed in the car and Max drove off making the tires squeak leaving a trail of dirt behind them.


The Chevelle

“Maxwell, this isn’t you. You’re not thinking straight.” Michael warned, as he held on tight to the door handle as Max applied the brakes at the sight of the red light beaming from the traffic light. Max drove up next to another car with a girl they recognized from school, Chrissie Toddler, Isabel watched from the corner of her eye as she turned on her car radio while she waited for the light to change green.



What would you do if I follow?
Don't turn away, what are you looking at?
He was so happy on the day that he met her
Say, what are you looking at?
I was a Superman but looks are deceiving
The rollercoaster ride's a lonely one
I'd pay a ransom note to stop it from steaming
Hey! What are you looking at?
She was a teenage girl when she met me...
What would you do?
What would you do if I followed you?
What would you do if I follow?
The girl got reasons, they all got reasons
Hey! What are you looking at?
She was a happy girl the day that she left me
The day that she left me
She was a happy girl the day that she left me
She was a Sour Girl the day that she met me
The day that she left me



‘That was Stone Temple pilots and their hit single “Sour Girl”, from their album No.4 debut back in 1999. And now KROZ listeners I leave you with Stacey in ‘Midnight Love’.’


Max and Michael quickly shot a look at each other. The light then change green and Chrissie took off. “Max, Michael, what’s wrong?” Isabel questioned seeing Max wasn’t moving. Max slammed on the gas and quickly jerked the wheel around and headed back to the Old Soap Factory, leaving skid marks on the road.

“What’s going on?” Maria asked frightened as she held on to Isabel.

“How could I’ve been so stupid!” Max said with an energized smile.

“I can’t believe we completely forgot about it.” Michael added with the same enthusiasm.


Old Soap Factory

Max and Michael got out of the car and ran to the area where they saw Khivar, Tess, and Liz disappear and began searching hysterically. “Anything?” Max asked Michael.

“Okay, can someone please tell me what’s going on? Why are we back here?” Maria asked following Michael as he moved back and forth on the ground.

“What are you guys looking for?” Isabel asked following Max as he dodged back and forth.

“Max! Over here!” Michael yelled.


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Surfgirl02 wrote:ACK! It's driving me crazy....I can't think of the tune to Sour Girl. I can picture Scott Wayland in the video with whom I'm pretty sure is Sarah Michelle Gellar...but I can't think of the tune. And to add insult to injury my sister moved out of the house and took claim to half of the cd collection...a really good reason why sharing with siblings is a bad idea. O'well it will come to me eventually.
http://www.stonetemplepilots.com/multimedia_video.html

You can hear "Sour Girl" on their official site. Here's the link to the video.


Chapter 10

“Look.” Michael said pointing to the ground. When Max, Isabel and Maria looked to where Michael was pointing to, they noticed three sets of footprints. One made by what seemed like dress shoes, the other from work boots and then the third by heeled boots that left an appearance of being dragged away.

“What does this mean?” Isabel asked standing over the tracks.

“’Midnight Love’ comes on at midnight. Liz’s flash told me to get here at midnight, but we got here earlier.” Max said kneeling down to one of the heeled footprints.

“I still don’t understand.” Isabel said shaking her head.

“Isabel, remember when Khivar followed you to La Jolla?” Max asked seeing Isabel nod “When you pushed him into the portal, Khivar went back to Antar. He went back but his vessel stayed.”

“Yeah, Denny Ridgley. He didn’t know where the hell he was.” Michael added. “Why didn’t this vessel stay?”

“So you’re saying…” Maria trailed off.

“That it was all one of Tess’s mind warps.” Max said with a relieved smile.

“Well if Liz didn’t leave then where is she?” Maria asked hugging herself.


Near the Roswell Desert

“Let go of me!” Liz demanded kicking and screaming as Khivar carried her over her shoulder. “Let me go.”

“How much further?” Khivar asked Tess frustrated, who was leading the way.

“The pod chambers are just over there.” Tess announced pointing to the rock formations where the pods are kept.

“Let me go!” Liz yelled kicking Khivar with her boot heel making him fall to the ground taking Liz down with her causing her to land on her knee. Liz gathered her pain and quickly turned around hitting both Khivar in the chest and Tess in the back with her powers. She forced herself up on her feet and began running back to the dirt road with a terrible limp. In tears, she spotted a car driving towards her and waved her arms to get the drivers attention. “Hey! Please! Stop!” When the driver noticed her in the middle of the road, he quickly slammed on the breaks and got out of his car.

“Jesus, are you alright?” He asked helping her to the passenger side.

“Someone attacked me. Please, I need to get back to town.” Liz pleaded as he buckled her seat belt.

“I’ll take you right away.” He said closing her door and running to his side before taking off. Just then Tess and Khivar reached the road in time to see the red taillights disappear into the night. Angry, Khivar turned to face Tess and grabbed her by the throat.

“Ahhh.” Tess yelped as Khivar lifted her off her feet.

“She’s gone.” Khivar yelled and then released Tess making her fall on the ground as she regained her breath. “For your sake you betta hope I find her.” Khivar threatened and headed back to the car they had hidden and took off in chase of the car Liz had escaped in.
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