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Title: You're The One
Author: Courtney
Category: M/L
Rating: Teen
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters which belong to Jason Katims and the other people.
Summary: Max Evans is the new guy at Roswell High. He was hoping that there would be some definite changes from his old school and boy was he right. He meets the perfect girl and the perfect friends, but things are just way too perfect. Is everything in Max's life going too well
and is something going to happen? And if it does will it ruin it forever??

Author's Note: So this is another story I have started. Hopefully my summary is okay. Please leave me some feedback!! Let me know what you think!!


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Maxwell Evans walked into West Roswell High with a smirk on his face. Okay, I knew that this town wasn't that big, but this high school doesn't look so bad, he thought to himself as he turned his head towards some girls that were walking ahead of him. He was in his senior year in high school and he hoped to make this one his best year. His parents had moved to Roswell so they could be closer to their new firm; there was one a little ways out of Roswell and one in Clovis, which was about three hours away, so when they went to the Clovis one, he would obviously be by himself for the rest of the day, or however long they wished to stay.

They moved to Roswell from Chicago, Illinois and from Chicago to Roswell was a big difference, but Max didn't mind. He actually didn't mind the move; he had just broken up with his girlfriend of two years in Chicago, her name was Tess Harding and she was such a bitch, and it took him about a month before he moved to realize that when he had found out that she was cheating on him with his ‘best friend’ and when he had confronted her about it, she didn’t deny it or say she was sorry so he broke up with her; his friends were big jerks also, so he couldn't wait to move and have real friends hopefully and maybe, just maybe a real girlfriend who wasn't like Tess and would maybe fall in love with her.
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Thanks for the feedback!! Here's the next part, hope ya'll enjoy!!!

Chapter 1

Max walked into the office part of the school to register and to get his schedule. After he was all set, he set foot towards his first period class, which was History. Not his favorite class, but hey he had to start somewhere in this school, right? That's why he couldn't wait for third or fourth period; he had chemistry and English. His favorite classes! This day was going to be long, he knew it, but he couldn’t wait to meet new people. His first two classes unexpectantly went by fast, so now he was onto his third period, which was the class where he had lunch, two good things all in one class, he thought to himself, this day just can't get better can it.

In his first period class, he met this guy named Alex Whitman, he was a cool kid and he had invited him to sit at his lunch table, and of course Max agreed to it. In his 2nd period, he met a guy named Michael Guerin and a girl named Maria DeLuca, it looked like those two were going out, even though they did fight quite a bit, but Max thought it was more of love fighting, and they also invited him to have lunch with them, of course he agreed, but he said that a guy in his first period invited him to sit with him at lunch, they asked what the guys name was and he said Alex Whitman, Maria said that her, Alex, and this other chick had been best friends with Alex since like 3rd grade, and Alex and Michael were good friends too. So Alex and those two sat at the same lunch table, he asked who else sat at the lunch table, Maria said that Alex's girlfriend, Isabel McDaniels, sat with them too, and of course Maria's other best friend did too, but he never did catch her name.

He walked into the room and gave the teacher his paper and after that she asked him to sit a couple rows back and his partner for lab would be there in a few minutes, probably running a little behind. Max walked ahead and took his seat. He set his stuff down and waited for his new lab partner to get there, I hope it's a chick, Max thought. He laughed to himself, he looked around the room and saw a couple of chicks staring at him, he smiled back at them, but none of them really stood out to him. Wow Maxwell, first day at this school and already you've got chicks looking at you. He looked to the door, hoping the "partner" would get there soon.

As soon as he went to look away, a girl came rushing in with long flowing brown hair and the most beautiful eyes and body he'd ever seen. Whoa! Max thought, she is, she’s the one. No girl had ever stuck out like this to him and he just knew that he was in love. The girl looked around the room over towards him and he smiled at her, she smiled back and walked over towards him. Go Maxwell, Go Maxwell; he cheered himself on.
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A/N: Sorry it took so long to get this out, but I'm not really sure if anyone likes it or my other fic that is out, Story of My Life. :oops: Let me know if you like it, please.


Chapter 2

Liz Parker rushed into her 3rd period class; she was going to be late, she just knew it. Kyle Valenti needed to stop harassing her and definitely stop asking her out because she was just so not interested in him. She'd need to tell Maria about this time, because Kyle always said something to her about her large breasts, but this time for some reason he didn't.

Lucky day, she guessed and ran the rest of the way to her class. As she walked into her class, she looked over to her lab table, she was by herself normally, but today there was a guy sitting there. Must be my new lab partner, she thought. She noticed that she was just standing there looking at him, so she decided to go to the table. She couldn't help but notice how utterly handsome he was. Brown hair, hazel brown eyes, amazingly tan body, and she even bet he had a lot of muscles too. She knew she was blushing, but she couldn't help it. When she got to the table, she couldn't help but notice that he was looking straight into her eyes. Whoa, this guy is amazing.

She looked back into his rich hazel eyes, she saw a spark of some sort in them, and this is definitely different, she thought. I've never felt this way before about anyone; I think I'm in love with this guy I don't even know. Wait Liz, don't get in too much for yourself, this guy could be just like Ryan. As soon as she thought about Ryan, she cringed. Ryan Thompson was her ex-boyfriend and he used Liz pretty badly, he was all sweet at first, but then turned psycho and told her what to do all the time and he was overly jealous, so then she finally told Maria and they got a restraining order against him, and this was a little over a year ago. Liz cringed again at the remembrance of her ex. She just would stay away and not get involved with anyone too soon. She sat down next to this new mysterious guy. She thought she should speak first.

"Hi. You must be new here. My name is Liz Parker," she held out her hand and he shook it, as soon as their hands touched there was a spark of electricity, neither one thought the other one saw it, so they didn't say anything.

"Yes, I am new here. My name is Max Evans, I guess you're my lab partner then, right?"

He smiled at her and she couldn't help but smile back at him, "Yes, I am. So do you like this class?" "Yep, it's my favorite, along with my next period class, which is English."

"Oh really, that's my next class. Let me see your schedule." she took his schedule and looked at his classes, "Yep, you're in my class. Are you some kind of stalker or something?"

She giggled at him. "Nope just a guy sitting next to a beautiful girl." She blushed.

"Please don't say that."

"Why not it's so true. You are the most beautiful thing I have ever seen in my whole life."

"Why don't we just get to know each other first before we jump to any conclusions, Max."

"Okay." Max told Liz a little about himself, while she told him some about her. Soon, the class was over and it was lunchtime.

"Well, I guess I'll see you next period, Max."

"Yeah, I'll talk to you in 45 minutes, Liz!"

Unexpectedly, Liz wrapped her arms around Max's neck and gave him a hug, and Max hugged her back, not wanting to let go. Then realizing what she did, Liz unwrapped herself from Max.

"Sorry, I just thought-"

"No, it's okay Liz, you don't have to apologize. I'll see you next period. Enjoy your lunch," and Max turned to leave with a smile on his face.

Liz couldn't have felt more embarrassed in her life, she definitely needed to talk to Maria now, forget about what Kyle didn't do, this is WAY more important.
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A/N: Thanks for the feedback. Enjoy the next part.

Chapter 3

Max couldn't believe that Liz Parker just hugged him. He just hoped that she liked him back. He needed to talk to Michael, Maria, and Alex about her; maybe they could help him out. He bought his lunch and then looked around for Michael, Maria, or Alex. He spotted Alex at a table with a blonde, and he found Michael and Maria hand-in-hand walking that direction. He headed that way and couldn't wait to talk to them about Liz.

"Hey guys," he said. They all returned their hellos and introduced him to Isabel. Michael and Maria explained to Alex that Max was in their calc. class and he told them that Alex was in his history class, so it all worked out well.

"Where is your other chick friend?" Max asked Maria.

"She is probably either getting her lunch or getting harassed by Kyle Valenti. Oh, Kyle is the big jock on campus and his father is sheriff in this town and he likes to ask her out all the time, even though she says no and yet he doesn't know how to get a clue."

"So did you meet any luscious babes today, Maxwell?" Michael asked teasing Max.

"Actually yes I did, there is this really amazing girl in my 3rd period class and it turns out she is in my 4th too. She is just so hot and her eyes, well let me just tell you I got lost in them, and she smells so good. I got a whiff of her scent when she unexpectedly hugged me before we left for lunch."

"What's her name?" Isabel asked.

"Her name is-"

"Hey guys...wait, what are you doing here?" Liz stared at Max.

Everyone stared wide-eyed at Max and Liz.

"What do you mean what is he doing here, Liz?" Maria asked her best friend.

"No reason, well he's actually in my 3rd period and 4th and I guess now he is sitting at our lunch table for the rest of the year, isn't he?"

"Uh, yeah. Is there a problem with that Liz?" Alex asked her.

"No, I don't have a problem with it. How do you all know each other?" Liz asked.

"Alex is in my 1st period, and Maria and Michael are in my 2nd. Is there really a problem with it Liz, because if there is I can leave and go find a new group to hang out with, I guess?"

Everyone was staring at Liz, especially Max, why does she have a problem with me sitting here, does she not like something, or me Max thought to himself.

"No Max, I don't have a problem with you sitting here. It just surprised me that you're here, that's all." After that, everyone finished his or her lunch in silence.

"Michael, Alex? Can I talk to you two alone?" Max asked. "

"Yeah sure" They both said at the same time. Wait, Maria and Isabel are leaving with Liz. So just stay here.

"Okay, what's up Maxwell?" Michael asked Max.
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A/N: I promise it gets better! Hope you like this part better.

Chapter 4

This is not good. Oh boy, this is not good. Liz thought to herself. She had just found out that Max Evans, the gorgeous guy from her chemistry class was like friends with her other friends and was sitting at her lunch table. This could be a good thing, just don't let it get to you. While everyone finished his or her lunch in silence, Liz couldn't help but look at Max, he is so gorgeous and he's really sweet and funny. Don't fall for him, Liz. Wait...Too Late! Just don't let him see it, play it cool. Friends. Just friends is good. I can't do this, must tell Maria and Isabel. They will help me.

"Maria…. Izzy? Can I talk to you two? ASAP, like now?" Liz asked. Maria and Isabel both nodded their heads. All 3 girls got up and went over by the Coke machines.

"What's up Lizzie?" Maria asked. "Kyle bothering you again?" Isabel asked looking concerned.

"No, it's not that. It's just, well what do you guys think of Max?"

"He's a sweet guy and hot also." Maria said.

"He is really funny too. I think he's in my 5th period, because he said he had shop and that's what I have, so yeah. But he is definitely a great guy." Isabel smirked.

"What would you guys do if I said I think I am in love with Max? I mean I know it's a little soon, but I mean come on, he is so cute, funny, hot, sweet, he has a great personality, and I think he has great abs, well his muscles, well he is just in great shape." Liz stared dreamily at Max across the quad. Isabel and Maria couldn't help but smile.

"Liz, how do you know that he has great abs?" Maria smiled.

"Well, uh, before we left for lunch I kind of, um gave him a hug."

"Oh okay." Isabel said.

"I personally think that you should go out with him. I mean obviously he likes you, Liz. I think you two are both gaga for each other, I think more than Michael and me are and that is a lot. You two would make a great couple, but be careful. I know by watching all the girls look at him, they think he is gorgeous. Once you get him, don't let him go." Maria smiled at her best friend.

"I think the same thing. Be careful, Liz. I mean I don't think that Max is the same kind of person that Ryan was, but if he hurts you, well we'll kill him! I hope he makes you happy, babe!"

"Thanks guys, you really are the best. Should I flirt with him until he asks me out?"

"Of course!" Maria and Isabel screamed!

"Group hug!" Liz shouted as Maria and Isabel hugged her at the same time.
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A/N: Here's the next part. I used one part from Romeo and Juliet... but it probably won't even be right, so I am sorry. But enjoy!! :D

Chapter 5

"Guys, the girl I like is-"

"Liz Parker, we know. We know. We could tell by you guys staring at each other during lunch. If one of you wasn't looking at each other than the other one was. I think you should go after her man." Michael said.

"Me too. I mean I think Liz is kind of scared to show her feelings because; well her ex-boyfriend was a psychotic freak. He tried to control everything she did and told her what to do all the time; if she didn't do what he told her to do he would threaten to kill her. She was so scared for so long and I think she has just recently gotten over it. So treat her right, or else we'll beat your ass." Alex finished.

"I had no idea. She was a little defensive while we were talking in class, but I had no idea it was like that. I promise I would never do that to Liz. I think I love her, I've never felt this way about anyone. I will take good care of her. What should I do to get her to show her emotions towards me?" Max asked.

"Well don't force it, but I think she is over there talking to Maria and Izzy about what she should do and I think that you won't have to worry for very long." Michael gave Max a thumbs up.

The bell rang all of a sudden and everyone went their separate ways to their classes, except Max and Liz. Max was just throwing his tray away when Liz walked over to him.

"You want to walk me to our next class, Mr. Evans?" Liz smiled at him, which almost knocked him down to the ground. God, her smile is beautiful.

"I would love too, Ms. Parker."

They walked back to class side by side. During their fourth hour class, they flirted the whole hour. They sat next to each other and were always talking to each other. One time Liz accidentally dropped her pencil and bent down to get it, and let me say this, the reason Max watched her as she bent down to get it is so obvious. They had to do this exercise in class where they had to be in partners and act out part of Romeo and Juliet, and of course they got assigned the kissing scene.

Their skit went a little like this:

Liz: "Good pilgrim you do wrong your hand too much, which mannerly devotion shows in this? Saints have hands that pilgrims hands do touch, and hand to hand is holy palmers kiss."

Max: Then let my lips be these hands.

Max and Liz got closer and closer until their faces were inches apart and as if by fate, the bell rang. Liz had run to her desk and scribbled something on a piece of paper and then handed it to him, she also gave him a quick embrace before she ran out the room. Max headed over to his things and quickly gathered them up and ran to his last hour class, then quickly read the paper that read,

"You said those lines really well and you smell really good. I would really like to go out with you tonight. I work at this restaurant in town called The Crashdown and my shift gets over at 6:30, so if you could pick me up there that would be awesome. I hope to see you there! -Liz”

Whoa! Max thought she wants me to meet her later, I will be there. What a day today, Max thought to himself as he headed towards his jeep. On his way he saw Michael and Alex, he walked over to them.

“Hey guys, how do you get to the Crashdown, Liz told me to meet her there when her shift ends and I have no clue how to get there.” Michael and Alex gave Max a high-five and told him how to get to the Crashdown. It was about 2:50 and Max couldn’t wait to meet Liz in 4 ½ hours.
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A/N: Thanks for the feedback again, everyone! I know they fall in love fast, but it's Max and Liz...heheh!

Chapter 6

Liz’s shift flew by fast. She then raced upstairs to change. She just knew that Max would be there at any time. She locked her door and took the fastest shower that she had ever taken and quickly blow-dried her hair and put on her make-up. She picked out a cute little jean skirt and a pink top with her 3-inch sandals. After she was all done, she raced back down the stairs into the Crashdown.

Max was sitting down at a booth talking to Maria, when he saw her, their eyes instantly locked. Maria got the message and went back to her job. Liz walked over by Max and sat down.

“Hey Max. Glad you could make it.” Liz saw that Max was checking her out and blushed.

“You look great Liz. I mean, uh I’m fine. How are you?”

“Thanks Max. So do you. I’m great. You want to go out somewhere, the movies, another restaurant, my room?” Liz looked down, not believing what she had just said, but wondered what his answer might be.

“How about the movies and a restaurant. We can save you’re room for another time.” Max winked at her.

“What movie do you want to see and what’s good here?” Max asked. “I don’t care because you’ll be with me.”

“Well, then. I knew that I would be satisfied because the most gorgeous girl in the world is standing right next to me. I had no idea that you would compliment me like that.” Max winked at Liz again. Liz smiled at him without blushing. Okay, why aren’t I blushing, I usually blush when guys compliments me. Hmmm, maybe he is the one for me. I truly hope so. I think I’m in love. Liz thought to herself.

“Whatcha thinking about Liz?” Max asked. She soon realized that she hadn’t answered him back.

“Oh some things; mostly about you though. If we go, maybe I’ll tell you what I was thinking about. Let’s go, Max.” Liz said while taking his hand in hers and leading the way out of the Crashdown’s doors.

Max led Liz to his jeep and opened the door for her, then ran around to the driver’s side and got in and she told him how to get to a restaurant and then they went to a movie. Soon, the movie was over and time to take Liz back home. As Max pulled back up to the Crashdown, Liz couldn’t help but just stare at him with a dreamy look in her eyes.

“So this is where you live?” Max asked.

“Yep. You see that balcony right there with the ladder? Well that leads to my room, anytime you want to see me you just climb up there, okay?” Liz smiled at him. Max pulled into the parking lot, parked the jeep, ran around to open Liz’s door and climbed up her ladder after her. Liz sat down in one of her lawn chairs hoping that they could talk a little longer.

“So what did you want to talk to me about, Liz?” Max asked looking at her with an unreadable expression on his face. Liz was suddenly scared to tell Max how she felt about him, but she knew she had to.

“Max?”

“Yes, Liz. I need to talk to you too.”

“Okay Max. You go first.” “Okay. I think, no I know I am in love with you Liz. I know I haven’t known you for that long, I think it’s like 24 hours at the most, but I feel like I’ve known you forever. I mean you’re everything I could ever want in a girl; you have a great personality, you’re smart, caring, nice, sweet, plus you’re beautiful, you have the most incredible eyes and well I just love everything about you. I love you, Elizabeth Nicole Parker. Now what was it you wanted to tell me?” Max looked at Liz and couldn’t wait for her answer.

“Max, I, you’ve just said everything that I wanted to say. I love you too, Max.”

What happened next surprised Liz. Max kissed her with the sweetest kiss it was soft and innocent. Whoa! Did he just kiss me? Did he? Did he? I really do love him a lot, even though I just met him earlier today. It feels as though I’ve known him forever. He is a great kisser; I want to kiss him again. Max then pulled away from her and saw that she smiling the biggest smile he’d ever seen her smile. Without thinking Liz jumped into Max’s lap and reached for his chin, pulling it towards hers and then gave him a huge kiss. Wait, what am I doing, does he even like the way I kiss? Does he even want to kiss me again? Just ask him, Liz. It’s okay. He hasn’t asked me out yet either yet. Nice going, Liz!

“Max? I um…” Max had cut her off.

“Liz, the way you kiss is amazing and will you go out with me?” Is he reading my mind?

“Thanks and yes, I will go out with you Maxwell Nathaniel Evans.” She suddenly looked at her watch. Ooh it’s late. Time to go. You’ll see him in the morning.

“Hey Max, I got to go inside. Will you pick me up in the morning before school everyday, meet me right here in this spot every morning, will you?” Max just nodded and then gave her a really big kiss and then hugged her and then saying good night before he ran to the ladder, winked at her then went down to his jeep.

All Liz could do was smile as she climbed in through her window and lay down on her bed with the biggest smile you could ever see.
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Chapter 7

As Max drove home he had stars in his eyes. He just couldn’t get his mind off of Liz Parker, his new girlfriend. Max then got a great idea and called Maria to ask her about his plan and some more questions and she thought it was great and answered them. He couldn't wait to give Liz her surprise tomorrow. Max slept very peacefully that night. The next day Max had gotten up early to get his surprise ready for Liz, after that was done he went to go pick her up.

Liz was waiting on her balcony for him as he pulled up. "Hey there," she said.

"Hey yourself," Max smiled at her. Gosh she looks so hot! Liz was wearing a short khaki skirt, a sleeveless red shirt, and 3 inch black pumps. I think red looks very good on her. I hope she loves her surprise. Max thought to himself. Liz climbed down the ladder and ran to Max's jeep where he already had the door opened for her. She hopped in and they took off.

"So what do you want to do later for our date tonight?" Max asked Liz. "I don't care as long as you’re with me." Liz smiled at him. Soon they arrived at school and Max followed Liz to her locker, watching her open her locker, and as soon as she opened it she saw a ton of white roses and a note, which read:

Dearest Liz,

You are the best girlfriend in the whole world. I just wanted to let you know that and that you are my soulmate. I will never hurt you. You are my other half, my one and only. I love you Elizabeth Parker with all my heart. My heart is yours and no one can take it away from you. Here are 100 white roses for every time I will think of you today, but I will think of you more than that just to let you know. I love you.

All my love,
Max


"Oh Max. This is just so, thank you. I love you too." Liz said and then kissed him on the lips. Max had never seen Liz cry, even though it was his second day there, but it made him feel sad that he had made her cry. Wait, these are tears of happiness not sadness, he thought as he pulled Liz into a big embrace while kissing her on the forehead.

"I love you more." Max smiled at her. The rest of the days went by fast, as well as the rest of the week, and well that turned into a month, and then before you knew it had been 5 months. Max and Liz were falling in love with each other and Max loved it. He had finally found ‘the girl of his dreams,’ and it wasn’t Tess.
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