The Joker (m/l/ AU/Adult) 5/24/07 [COMPLETE]

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The Joker (m/l/ AU/Adult) 5/24/07 [COMPLETE]

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Title: The Joker!
Category: Max and Liz who else?
Rating: ADULT
Disclaimer: I don't own anything I'm just borrowing the names of the characters.

Summary: Max is a whealthy lawyers family's son. Liz is not rich. She's living with her always drunk mother in a trailer on the bad side of town. But, fate made her attend the same and great high school as the richest families of Roswell. Of course, it's difficult for her, but she manages to join into Max Evans's band and becomes the Joker for 3 years.

15 years later, she comes back to Roswell to meet her old friends for an important event : the meeting of the Elders.
What will happen when Max and Liz meet again? What happened 15 years earlier that turned the lifes of a lot of students upside down and Max and Liz's in particular?




A/N: Like I always do, I try that prologue by myself, without Bixie's help (sorry girl). I hope that you'll excuse my mistakes in English, that will be better when we'll work together later.
And sorry if I annoy you again with my writing, but I have that idea in my mind since a while and I want to give a try. Of course, FEEDBACKS are really appreciated
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PROLOGUE

He couldn't help it. Max had the habit to follow the scar with his finger that he had on his jaw. A bad habit he used to have when he was escaping in his thoughts.
Remembering Liz's fury and humiliation when she had hit him, he knew that everyone was wrong. If she had wanted, she could have hurt him more seriously, since she had used her old and rusty bicycle chain. Liz had acted with all the anger she had in her heart without planing to hit him.

For months he was in pain and didn't go to see a plastic surgeon to heal and repair his scar. He was still feeling the pain on his cheek, even today. But time went by and now he was here to meet Liz after 15 years.

He read in the papers that she had succeeded in her life, and that she was a famous lawyer, always defending the women for sexual assults and racial discrimination. The papers had talked about a complex trail that she had won recently and were calling her the best lawyer of Dallas!

Max couldn't help to be astonished by the path she travelled since the time they were playing music together...the time she called herself the Joker, himself the Ace of Hearts and Michael, Alex and Kyle the Paquet.

So?....Would she be there today? Would she come knowing that he'll be there too? Michael said that she had agreed even if the comity had to beg a little for her to agree. Max was not surprised, Liz hated all events. She always loved to manage her life according to her own will, without constraint and with independance. He knew that and had paid the high price.

A horn interrupted his thoughts. He smiled, in only 40 minutes he would be in Roswell...40 minutes and he would see her again after 15 years.

Now he was ready to confront her, he was ready to hear what she had to say and explain why she hit him, but that was not the only reason. He needed to know what had she done in those 15 years?

Digging his hand in his pocket, he found the little piece of paper and smiled. Soon, he would know if Liz would keep her word till the end. Of course, she paid him back the money, but she had promised him something else, 15 years ago, and he was here to demand her to keep her promise.

That he came to the meeting of the Elders today, was only for that reason.

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A smoked atmosphere and a rock and deafening music, that was exactly what she was expecting here, she thought when the door of the club slammed behind her. She stopped for a little while to check her outfit.

For this event, Liz had choose her sexiest outfit : a short and tight dark silk dress, definitely too short seeing the looks the other women were giving her.....How dared she come so unveiled among those people? She seemed so indecent between the high society's women. But she didn't care for any of them.

She was here to enjoy the event. Today was a special day, she had decided to bluff those snobish people, but she had mostly decided to bluff Max Evans.....


OK..Once again, should I stop or should I continue?-
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hey, like I said Bixie did a gread job and corrected this one too. THANK YOU SANDRA!!! so here's a new chapter, I tried to come back to their past, sorry you won't have all the answers but maybe you'll begin to understand what kind of relation they all had...

about your questions, it's too soon to tell you why Liz hit him so hard, but in that chapter you'll begin to understand some things...all I can say, about the job she chose, it has something to do with her past...I mean her life was very hard and she wanted to help those women like her mother had never been helped in her past..

OK...Time to thank you, READERS and LURKERS to read that fic, I hope you'll like this part too and LURKERS, if you want to tell me something about it, please come here and leave a fb....


Emz80m- Hope you'll keep coming!

aussietrueblue- I'm here, will you be here for the next update?

begonia9508- Eve, they were together at high school, they are 33 years old. they are old enough to be married or having a partner....you'll know that later...later in the fic.

WildSphinx- I hope you'll keep coming cause Max and Liz have a lot to do together before that.

cocopucks- that's what I did...

icequeen- Jazzy, we talked about that, and you know I'm a reading machine too.. hope you'll wait again to know that, I just began to talk about their past..

Bixie- Sandra you know that I like to surprise you....and even you, you don't know yet...patience!

urpersonaloddball- thank you, hope you'll like this part too

anonymousarefan- I'm here and I hope you'll like this enough to come back to read it

GottaFeedTheMonkey1257- I hope that'll be good enough for you to keep coming till the end

Liz86000- Whaou!! I have a lot to read here and as I already told you, you wont have all the answers here. You'll have some...I gave the reason about her job above but you'd have understood alone...hope you'll like this part.and thanks for the bump.

phyco352- I've listenned to you, I'm here!

LegalAlien- you'll got only one answer from me, her job, above. why did she slap him so hard, I'm sure you'll understand it when you'll read that part.

Blink1lit- thank you, hope you'll like this one too.

Thank you all, as I said I answered about her job at the begining of my post. I want to tell you that I've already update MURDEROUS MASSAGES, I'll update this week JUST AN AFFAIR and I'll do it before the weekend I hope for REVENGE and LOVE ON THE INTERNET..


Chapter 1

Perched on her booth, Liz asked for a beer and kept looking around. She recongnized some of the students that were with her in high school. She was irritated that none of them came to talk to her but more angry with herself cause she never let them to come close.

She was deep in thoughts, when a hand caught her beer. "Hey, that's mine!" she said startled. "I know that!" a friendly voice answered. "But didn't we share everything in the past?"

Alex Whitmann!!! He swallowed half of her beer and sat down in front of her. "Hi Liz, we didn't see or talk to each other for a very long time, did we!?" he said genuinely.

Without feeling embarrassed, he took another sip of her beer and winked at Liz. *Alex! No one could resist his bad boy charm!*

"So, beautiful lady, did you come down to mix with the ordinary people?" he asked.
Too happy to talk with someone she knew, Liz bursted out laughing.

"Do you know that I almost didn't recognize you." he said putting the spot on her.

Under the light, Liz was in all her glorious beauty: modern, well dressed without forgetting her magnificent hair, so different from the girl she had been: a hippy with dyed shaggy hair.

"Is that hair really yours?" he required, and with his well-known boldness, he slid his hand in her silky hair which was curling all around her face.

"Cause...if it's really yours....you can't be Liz, Liz the Joker had a bundle of straw on her head." he teased her.

"Stop teasing me Alex and come in my arms, I want to kiss you."

He hugged her and placed sound kisses on her soft lips. "You know, I like you hairstyle but I liked the old one too, it was really.....hum....spiky!"

Liz laughed and pulled on her short dress to hide her thighs. "With all the bleaching and bad treatments I made it endure, I was wondering if I would have the same hair I had when I was younger."

"You even have curls, you should give me your hairdresser's adress, he is a magician!"

"Alex, stop making fun of me, will you, or I'm going to cut that ponytail you have to a shoulder length!" she warned him.

"Whaou! Calm down Dalila! Don't touch! It took me 5 years to achieve this result and your little hands won't ruin that. Ok?" he said winking. Liz always found him funny and really handsome. Today, all dressed in black, he was looking gorgeous and stylish.

"You might have seduced a lot of women with your irresistible smile!"

"Not as much as you with that dress!" he replied straightly.

Liz raised her eyebrows. "Do you find it shocking?" she asked adjusting the strapp on her shoulder. "Shocking? No, definitely not. Let's just say that it's daring, especially with those legs of yours."

Liz smiled brightly, it was so good to flirt, just for pleasure. She had been wrong, she could have been in contact with Alex during all those years, she could have had a easier life.

"Tell me, Don Juan, you're not trying to seduce me, are you?" she teased him.

"It's not impossible!" he replied with his irrestible smile.

"If I didn't know you, I could think that you were serious."

"If I didn't know you, I would say that I was sincere."

"Liar! After you criticized my hairstyle like you did!"

"Wrong! I said that your hairstyle was...spiky."

"Stop teasing me Alex!"

"Me? Teasing the great Liz Parker? Never!"

It was as if they had seen each other the day before. 15 years had been erased in a few minutes.

"You know that you're lucky that the evening is just begining. I won't forgive the next person who will call me "the great Liz Parker"! If I hear it once again, I'll kill the next person who will say it."

"In that case, I should warn Max." Alex said casually.

Max...Hearing that name that was so special for her, Liz felt herself blushing. She bent her head, and pulled at the hem of her dress. She tried to talk as casually as Alex. "Are you talking about Evans? Why? Is he here?" she asked trying to act indifferent.

"I haven't seen him yet." he said looking around. "He might have been held up at his paper."

"Is he journalist?"

"Yes, he works at the Daily Roswell." he said, then he attacked her. "Don't lie to me Liz....You came for Max, didn't you?"

"What are you talking about?" she exclaimed lying. "I came for all of you, you, Michael, and Kyle! I never talked to the others students and for now, you're the only one I've met."

Liz had never been the kind of girl who talked with others. Except Maria, her partner, she never had many friends. She made the choice to succeed in her work.

"I've never been that sociable." she said sighing. "I can live without the others company." she added. Alex didn't answer. He seemed to frown.
"What? Did I say something that upset you?" she asked.

"Actually, I feel offended!...NO....Humiliated....Maybe both...Yes I feel offended and humiliated!" he stated.

"Why? Is it what I said about friends? But....I didn't mean you."

"Thanks to reassure me..."

She took his hand and stared into his eyes. "Don't be stupid Alex, if you haven't been there, if I hadn't counted on your friendship, I wouldn't have continued....I mean high school and everything...I would have given up." she said serious.

"I wouldn't have let you ruin your life and giving up on your studies." he said leaning towards her. "You know I always appreciated your honesty with me. You were the only one who told me the truth about my songs."

"Of course, I was impressed. We won lots of prizeses thanks to your songs. Do you remember the Paquet?" she asked.

"How could I forget?"

"You're talented Alex and you know it. I'm sure you have lots of prizesess in your room."

The noise of pool balls behind them interrupted their conversation. "That little music brings back a lot of memories....clic....clac....clic...." she said.

She turned around to look into the hall and noticed many eyes staring at her. "I wonder why everybody is staring at me like this all of sudden! It's annoying!"

"Oh come on Liz, don't play the innocent girl, will you! Did you see your legs? Did you see your low neck? Did you see your....."

"Stop that!" she cut him off. "Of course, I have legs.....shoulders.....and everything.....That's normal for a woman!" she said pushing her hair behind her ear...

"You even have hair, now!" He sent her a mischevious smile. "I would give a lot to spend this weekend in your room Liz!"

"In your dreams!" she said laughing.

"OK....are you going to tell me about you...and your life during those 15 years I didn't see you."

"Ok....but on one condition...." she said pointing with her chin to the pool table.

"Are you kidding!?"

"No...Why?"

"Do you remember the last time we played pool?"

"Of course! A september's evening. And we were all crazy and naive too."

Liz never forgot that famous day....She got down from her booth, wiped an invisible spot on her dress and took Alex's arm. "Let's play before Max comes. He would be capable to spoil my fun!"

"You have a weird definition of fun....I don't want to re-live that again!"

"Don't worry!" sending him a hot look "Since our last party, I haven't been arrested for indecent behavior"


West Roswell High School, 18 years before....

"I don't want to come out of this car." Liz protested as she folded her hands. "You had no right to drive me here! This is really not the place I'd want to be after the day I've spent." she harrassed her friend.

Calmly, Alex turned around towards his friend. "Do you know that you're really stupid. Stupid and unbearable!"

"Thanks! Is that what you're really thinking? Let me tell you that if there is someone stupid, it's not me...it's Tess Harding! NO! The most stupid is not her, it's Max!" she conclued.

"Why do we have to come here for practice?" she asked.

"Stop Liz, will you? You know that we always used to practice at Max's!" he said as he climbed out of the car. He hoped that she would move. But Liz didn't. She kept protesting. "It's not because we're used to practice at Max's, it's that why are we compelled to do it always here?." she insisted.

Liz was infuriated this evening. In the afternoon, Tess Harding was telling to all her friends about her vacation.... and how she lost the top of her bikini in Max's pool...and how the boys had looked at her...And Liz has had endured that during one hour.

"OK....Are you moving or not?!" No answer. Exasperate, Alex opened the door and pulled Liz out of the car. "Now, you're coming!"

Liz reluctantly walked towards the house. "You know what, you're a annoying person!" Alex said.

"Don't talk to me like that!"

" Then stop behaving like a 5 year old child!"

They arrived at the door, this time it was not Max who opened it, but Mr. Evans in person. *His Highness.* as Liz nicknamed him. He greeted them and let them come into the house, his so huge mansion. "Hi Liz, Alex...your friends are waiting for you in the little lounge." he said kindly.

"Thank you Sir." Alex replied polite.

"It's my fault if we're late." Liz excused herself. Then, she felt the fierce yearning to provoc this man. She turned around towards him "You know," she explained determined to shock him, "my mother has been fired today, and when I came home from school I found that she was drunk...I couldn't let her alone in that state. Alex helped me to put her in bed and then we left."

"I understand." Mr. Evans said neutrally. "I hope she'll be better tomorrow."

"Thank you Sir, I'll tell her."

When she turned back, she noticed that Alex was not beside her, she caught him in the hallway. "You could have waited for me!" she said angry.

"Are you crazy, Liz?" he was fuming. "Did you loose your mind or what?" he asked infuriated.

Without answering, she passed by him. *What is wrong with me? Why that rage? That need to provoc others at all costs!* she thought.

The obsessing image of Max and Tess in his pool didn't explain everything. There was her mother's image without work and an alcoholic. This dismissal meant that she had to leave her school, that she was sentenced to live in poverty and the alcohol abuse.

She stopped to answer Alex. "No, I didn't loose my mind. I dispise Max Evans and I wish he would drown in his pool with his dollars."

"Liz, you feel bad because of your life, but to be so unfair!" he said looking into her eyes.

"All this luxury make me vomit." she protested. "Even the hallway is bigger than my room!"

She knew that she was unfair but she couldn't help it. Every word, every rumor about Max was turning her upside down. And yet, she knew that Max and her were
like the water and the fire. They were at the opposite sites from one another.

She was tormented by money problems and she couldn't bear to be under Max Evans's roof.

"You couldn't understand Alex!"

"What? What can't I understand? Tell me. You know friends are here for that, to try to understand." he said softly.

*No...I don't want to talk about my problems... A father gone...a family life ruined...Everything I hate in my life....and that bikini story with that stupide Tess Harding!!! No....I don't want to talk about my problems with Alex.* she thought.

"Look...." she began, but then stopped. Max was leaning at the doorway, looking at her....waiting for her...and being the opposite of Liz, Max didn't loose his temper.

"Where have you been?" he asked with this husky voice which always made Liz shiver.

*Oh no! The shudders...the sweaty hands.... the goosebumbs...NO. It won't let it happen again.* she fumed to herself.

"Calm down, Ace of Hearts!" she replied. "Sorry for the delay, it was my fault....Let's go practice."

They did it for hours, Liz, sometimes deep thoughts, couldn't help but stare at Max. He was staring back and seemed furious. He was playing the drumm like a beast and Liz suspected that he was furious because of Tess Harding's gossips.

When they ended the practice, Liz suggested to play a game of pool, and they reluctantly accepted. They couldn't refuse anything since she was the only girl of the band.

"Ok, since it was my idea, I decide. Max you play first, this way you'll be in a better mood!"

He took a queue and came back to the pool table, mumbling. "At least, I don't want to destroy myself. " he said brushing his hair.

Alex who didn't want to be in the middle of the argument was sitting in a corner, Michael and Kyle, both sprawled on the couch, chuckled nervously. At the opposite of Alex who was doing his best to be discreet, they appreciated the show even if they knew that their friends would made them pay for it later.

Max glared at them, then like a real professionnal pool player he gave a wonderful demonstration of his talent. He was the perfect son of the perfect father and that's why Liz hated him...because she had ANY reason to hate him.

Maybe he felt the tension Liz had inside her cause when he looked at her, like he already did so many times, he missed his target and failed.

"Finally! I was wondering if I could touch one ball before the end of the evening." she said. She was very agitated and feeling hot. She took off her sweater and began to play. Like Max, Liz was an excellent pool player, like if she had played all her life.

Suddenly, disturbed by Max's look, she missed her target too. There was something strange in his look which was roaming over her breasts, like fever...like desire?

Exasperate, she lent the queue against the table and took off her shirt. "And is it better now?" she enraged.

Michael and Kyle bursted out laughing...Humiliated, Max yelled at them to shut up. But it was too late, Liz was loosing her control, she undid her bra and threw it on the floor.

"And now? Is this even better? You can compare now! So which are the best? Mines or Tess Harding's?" she was fulminating.

And Max kept silence, that enraged her even more. "Tell me Max? Answer me!"

But he didn't answer, instead he turned around towards his friends on the couch, they were red like tomatoes. "The show is over! I'll take Liz home." he said calmly.

He gathered her clothing and handed them to Liz with a shaking hand. She put on the shirt without the bra. "Liz...Listen to me, stop with those stories about Tess."

Liz turned pale, she was still enraged but also ashamed.

"She lied.." Max continued. "You know her!"

"Not as well as you do!"

"I didn't stop to tell you that there is nothing between Tess and me! And nothing happened!" he pleaded.

"What do you mean? That even if something happened it doesn't count because it's just Tess!"

Max sighed. "You're killing me Liz...What do you want me to say?"

"The truth for once!!! NO...NO, I don't want to know, I'm not interested. I want to go home."

" First, I want you to listen to me, Liz."

"I don't want to...if you can't drive me, I'm going to walk" she retorted stubborn.

"It's too far... Liiz." he pleaded again.

"I can walk!"

"It's too dangerous! You can't go there alone..."

"That's where I live, and nobody will assault me or kill me either." He was disgusting, to remind her that she was living in a defavorised area.

"Liz, I didn't want to hurt you, you know that." he said and grabbed her shoulders. "Listen to me Liz, I care about you, I don't want anything to happen to you."

"I'm able to take care of myself." she replied.

"Able or not, I'll drive you." he said and he grabbed her wrist as she tried to push him to walk out of the room.

"Leave me alone! I know, you're used to see people agreeing to everything you want like every rich boy, but it doesn't work with me!"

"Perfect, since you don't want my help, I'm asking my father to drive you..."

"NOOO!! I don't want that!" she yelled.

"Ok, I'm calling a cab then, I'll pay for it."

"Oh! you and your money!!!"

"What about my money? I didn't steal it!" Liz was on the edge of the tears, she was tired of Max, of the Evans's and their dollars..she was tired of herself....She only wanted to go home, that's all.

"It's always the same thing, the riches are richer and the poors pay the taxes..." she mumbled suddenly...She would want to shut up but the words were escaping out of her mouth, "And if they have a little money, they pay their studies."

"What are talking about ?" Max asked worried.

"Nothing Max, take me home please." she straightened herself and passed in front of him proudly.

*That's it! She can manage by herself after all* Max thought when he saw her leaving, but after he contemplated the idea of her alone in the streets, he ran after her and followed her.

Back to the present time

"I'll shoot the ball n°8 in the corner." Liz said under Alex's admirative gaze.

"Still ok for the winner is paying for dinner? I'm dreaming of a hamburger with chips!"

"Oh! you want a hamburger! You're going to have one...you're the leader tonight!" she teased him.

Alex couldn't help but pull her tight into his arms. "Liz...Liz! It's so good to see you again!"

"The pleasure is shared!"

'Oh no! Not that voice!' she whispered when she heard it.

"What did you say?" Alex inquired.

"Tell me that I'm dreaming! Tell me that it's not HIM!"

Alex turned around and smiled. He leaned towards Liz "Hey yes! You have an excellent ear, my Beauty."

Then she tried to hide behind Alex from the man whom, despite all those years, she had recognized his voice....Max Evans!


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hey guys, I'm back with a new chapter, I hope you'll like it, it is a little longer than the others.

About the plot, we left Max and Liz at the moment they were going to meet each other. You won't get your answers but you'll see how they were feeling.

anyway, I hope you'll forgive my mistakes, I'm trying to improve my English but it's a little hard. I saw that I lost a lot of readers and I hope that this part will please you and you'll come back in that part.

I want to thank you, READERS and LURKERS for your interest in that fic, and I hope you'll follow me till the end.



icequeen- in the last part, we saw her upset about Tess, but Max's being rich was her major problem in the past. Hope you'll like this part.

Bixie- Bixie, it's not the only reason, but it's the most important one. and I wanted to tell you that Tess will be just a reference, or I'll talk about her very lightly. I'd like to answer to your question, but I don't want to give away...so keep reading this part and the next and you'll see..

anonymousarfan- thank you, I hope you'll like this part too. I can't tell you about the paper...maybe you're right...maybe wrong...just wait for a few chapters to know the answer.....

begonia9508- Eve I hope that you'll keep coming here if you want to know what really happened with Max..almost the end. but here, you'll see how insecure Liz has been feeling, and what her friends were thinking about her. How? you have to read it!

Liz86000- Liz, like I said to Eve, you'll have to wait to really know the reason why....I forgot to say that you'll know why she chose to defend women soon...hope that you'll keep coming and reading that fic!

Roswell 10/2/00 - Hope you'll keep coming too. Thank you.


I just want to say that I updated LOVE ON THE INTERNET and A TIME TO FORGIVE....and I'll do it for the others soon.

here is the chapter...Please don't forget to leave fbs...


Chapter 2

Alex turned around on himself and greeted his friend "Hi Max. You're looking good for a little town journalist, although your hair is whitening a little."

*Little town journalist?* Liz noticed for herself *Funny!...He always dreamt to be a brillant reporter for the greatest daily news of the country!* she thought surprised.
- That's true, I'm not the same anymore" Max replied ironically.

This voice!! How many time this voice had made her blushing or quivering!

She pressed her head against Alex's back and wrapped her hands around his waist. *The next time, if I want to spend a quiet weekend, I'll obey to Maria....if I can...* she thought.

Max continued to chat with Alex "Tell me Whitman, if you cut your ponytail, would you lost your musician talent?" he asked
"I should find a Dalila who is worthy of cutting them. If I find her, I'll tell you. You'll get the scoop!"

"Dalila? Tell me Alex isn't it her behind your back. I see a Dalila hidden behind your back, she is digging her nails in your abs!" Max joked.

Alex grabbed Liz's hands and untied her fingers. "Wrong Max! That Dalila has already another man under her skin!"
"Jerk!" Liz mumbled as she came out of her hiding place.

She was in front of the only man on that Earth she wanted to erase from her memory....and yet she had crossed hundreds miles to meet him..
How could she forget him? How could she have thought that time would erase the desire..the past? Max was too gorgeous. Too irresistible. Too Max!
Cheeks blushing again, she looked at him.

Straight like a I, sure of himself and cooler than an ice cube, Max was staring at her. A glass of beer in the hand, he seemed to wait for something to happen with that cold assurance. So typically Evans!
*Always the same handsome guy that damned Evans!" Liz thought very embarrassed. *Not really a model, rather cool but so classy!*

"Hi Max" she said smiling "We didn't see each other since long, do we?" *At least 15 years and 15 stitches* she added for herself as Max's scar was remind her of a sad event, almost a shame.
"Hi Liz" Max replied cooly.

To her great disappointment, he looked at her little black dress, her long and slender legs, her magnificent hair with a neutral look since Alex, earlier....*OK Max! We're going to see who will win!*

Then, her ardent temper took the best of her. She will force him to react, at all costs! Pretending to tighten her sandal, she bent, unveiling even more her thighs. Max didn't move but Alex couldn't help to whistle admiratively. Liz straightened herself and glared at him. Then, she brushed her hair behind her ears and slid an arm along her hip with sensuality.

Max swallowed his beer quietly but his calm didn't fool anyone. Liz was proud to see that he was far from the marble man he was trying to look like. *Ok Max Evans, you're not as insensitive as you want me to think!...And now, that I proved that, what I'm going to do?* she wondered. She couldn't help to feel uncomfortable by his silence.

She looked at Alex for some help "Ok...Well! I'm leaving you, you'll be able to stare at each other as long as you want. I'm going to see if Michael and Kyle are already there."

"Traitor!!" Liz mumbled and she pushed away his hand from her shoulder.

That's the moment Kyle choose to appear "Hi pal! I was going to look for you!" Alex said.

Kyle was as gorgeous as his friends, a little shorter than them, but you could see that he was playing football in his past when you looked at his shoulders. "Hi Kyle...You're handsome as always" Liz said as she kissed him on the cheek.
"Isn't it great to be here together after all this time?" he asked to his friends.

"Why don't you present us your friend, Kyle....Unless she didn't want to know us..." Liz suggested, she didn't want them to talk about the past.

Kyle took his friend's hand "Serena, here is a part of our crazy band: Liz Parker, Max Evans and Alex Whitman. Guys this is Serena Malone."
"Hi Serena!" Liz said. She was surprised to see that Kyle's girlfriend was a petite brunette like her, he always dated blonds when they were younger. "I'm sure that Kyle told you a lot about us, but believe me, most of what he said is stories. Kyle likes to tell stories." she said smiling.

"Don't worry Liz, I know him enough to make the difference between truth and story. " she said laughing. They met since a few minutes but Liz felt as if she knew her for long.

While the guys were all talking, Liz looked at each of them. They had changed, they were more confident, Alex surely because of his success with the music, Kyle seemed to be showered by his life, he didn't have Alex's talent or Max's class but he was happy, she could read it on his face...and Max....

*Ahh Max!!* Liz sighed. He was the reason why she never gave up and yet, he was the one who humilated her. Since the first day they met, she understood that some day....between Max and her...

Serena's laugh interrupted her thoughts. "They are incredible! Like if they had never been apart!" she said surprised.
Liz looked around, people seemed to be happy to be here and she decided to be happy too and to enjoy that event. "Tell me Serena, do you work in the same company than Kyle?" she asked

"Are you kidding? No...He works with our ennemy! Out of the question to work together, or we'll be fired. No, at the end of the day, we meet in a pub to drink champagne if the market is good or just a coke if our clients loose their money." she explained.

"I can't picture a stressed Kyle. At school he worked a lot, but he was the first to have fun too." Liz replied.
"He is a typical workaholic, I'm the same. I know how he's reacting."
"You're very close..."
"You're wrong!" Serena corrected. "We're only good friends. He thinks that I'm his buddy!"

Liz smiled. "That reminds me of something!"
"What?"
She pointed her chin toward the men "At school, I was their buddy too."

"Are you sure? I'm a little surprised. Don't you see how they look at you? Not like a buddy for sure!"
"That's the truth! I'm sure that Kyle told you about our group!"

"Yeah, he talks about all of you since years. I knew who you were immediatly, when I saw you! Even Max and Alex, I spotted them as soon as they arrived."
"Kyle might have tell you a lot about us. Tell me Serena, what did he tell you about me?" she asked anxious to know what they were thinking about her.

"He told me that you didn't know yourself. That you ignored who you are for them, what they think about you, what you inspire them." she said seriously.
"Only that?" Liz laughed. "He told you more than I thought!"

She had been that blind to be so wrong? She always thought that she was not important...that she was only a pawn...a joker for example!
"You're wrong Liz, you're not their buddy. I saw their looks when you got down from the booth earlier. Believe me, they were obvious. Maybe Max didn't react openly but Alex and Kyle had not their eyes in their pockets.

Liz laughed..nervously. Where Serena had seen what she just described? She was mistaken. "Come on, you're going too far or it's just your imagination!"
"Ok, I'm going to prove to you that it's not my imagination. Turn around discreetly and look at them. Do you see how they stare at you?"

Liz glance over her shoulder "I see them, so?"
"Wait a second, I'm sure that you'll find out that they are not only interested by your hair. Look at Kyle...I bet that he's going to blush."

At the same moment, caught as he was fixing Liz's legs, Kyle blushed. "See! What did I say?"
"I think that he's surprised to see me now, I was a punk when I was younger. As for Alex, I think that he looks at me with the eyes of an artist, that's different...There is Max left..."

*Max always sure of himself who doesn't care of me...* she thought sadly.

"Max?...I think that he's different. He has the same look than you. Your relationship is not easy..."Serena said.
Touched!

Liz avoided to turn around. "Max gives me the impression to have something to setlle with you. And you, Young Lady, you have a heavy crush on him."

Liz turned pale, if Serena knew what she was feeling, if the tension between them was that obvious, the others also knew. *Stupid! Don't be stupid! Of course they know. They are here to see the match between Max and me. All the looks on her were not some admiring marks, they were just waiting for the fight! stupid ass...* she cursed.

"Liz, I don't want you to feel embarrassed, but I know about Max's scar." she said softly "That's the reason why I asked Kyle to come with him."

She might know the striptease story too! Thanks Kyle, he never shut his big mouth! "Serena, I hope you'll support me!" she said a little worried.
"You don't need me, look around there is a lot of girls here!"
"I'm not exactly their friend...I've never been" she replied. "I was not too comfortable between them" she confessed.

"So why did you come?"
"Tonight?"
"Yeah"

She didn't have time to answer, Kyle interrupted them "I think that the band is arriving!" he said. He walked toward the platform followed by all his friends.

When she felt Max brushing her, Liz quivered, but she did her best to hide it. She pretended to concentrate on the musicians. That was easier to fake than to talk to Max, however, he seemed not ready to talk to her either. She wondered if he didn't want to increase the tension between them.

Liz pushed that idea away and looked at the man with the guitar. Jeans..boots..white shirt, long hair and black glasses, the rocker was playing a wonderful solo "It's Michael Guerin!" she exclaimed
"Exactly" Max said.

*Humm, is this the begining of the peace between us? Liz wondered.

"They are great!"
Then Michael began to sing "I didn't know that he was singing. What a voice! He's amazing!" she said excited.
Max nodded "You're right, he's a genius! It's because he sings for his pleasure. He always told me that he couldn't be a professionnal cause he was scared to fail" he whispered in her ears.

"Did he say that to you?"
"We always were in touch." he replied. Then, he stopped talking, only enjoying the music. He was swinging to the sound of the drums.

Overwhelmed by the tempo, Liz began to sway. Unwillingly, she brushed Max. *That's so good! How did I love to touch him!* She thrilled from head to toes but refused to let him know it. She had decided to have fun, to enjoy just the feeling to be beside him..She wanted to forget everything that was not this moment.

Then Michael and the musicians began to clap in their hands, Michael sang a wild song and the crowd cheered him, clapping in their hands too, crying his name! He took off his shirt and threw it over the people, yelling "Viva the 80s! Viva the music! Viva the Paquet!"

"Ok, my friends, choose the good partner and let the music play!" he said to the crowd.

Liz tried to come closer to the platform but someone grabbed her arm "Dance with me?" Max said holding his hand out to hers.

Hand in hand, fingers intertwined, Max and Liz walked toward the dance floor. He pulled her against his chest tightly and slid a leg between her thighs, softly, then he pressed his body against her. Liz couldn't help but shiver.

That was the first time that she was in his arms and the sensation was unique. But she couldn't enjoy it because of her past..
Little by little, she felt her body relax but she refused to let herself go. Her past was still haunting her and she didn't want to put in danger the life she chose to live.

And yet, she was feeling her body react to Max's proximity. "I love the way you're dancing" he whispered huskily in her ears. "That's the first time we dance together, isn't it?"

*Yeah, they were friends who played music together but they were living in 2 differents worlds.* she thought.
"You're right, we never danced together" she confirmed.
"And yet, I'm sure we had a lot of opportunities: Valentine, the Proms, Graduation's parties..." he said as his hand was caressing her back tenderly.

Liz pushed him away and tried to read into his eyes. "What?" Max asked surprised.
"Tell me Max, who I am for you?

He shrugged, amused "You are "The great Liz Parker!"

Not really satisfied by his answer, she insisted "Ok, but when we were young, who I really was?"
"The Joker!"
"But a joker didn't dance!"
"Humm...You're right" he said and he tightened his grip around her waist without answering.

He took her hand and put it on his heart, Liz gasped when she felt it racing against her palm.

"Tell me Liz, when you were talking to Serena earlier, you didn't seem to be bored, that was just the opposite. Can you tell me about what you were talking?" he asked.
"Nothing really important, girls stuff"

"Since when did Liz Parker talk about girls stuff with other girls? You've never done in high school"
"Max, I couldn't do it then, I didn't talk with anyone, except the band!"
"Why?"
"Come on Max, stop that game! You knew why, you didn't forget, that was only 15 years ago!"

"And now?"
"Now what?"
"With whom are you talking? Do you have friends?" he asked
Liz thought about Maria, the faithful but so hilarious Maria, she was her only friend.

As the band began another song, Max pulled her against his chest with a male sensuality which scared her. She felt against her tender body the obvious desire this man had for her, even if he was acting like if they were at a coffee shop. She was lost into the breathtaking sensations Max created for her.

"Do you have a boyfriend? Someone who is wooing you?" he asked again.
"Huh?...Why?"
"Why not? Don't you have anybody who whispered words in your ear?" he insisted.

Hurt by his joke, she glared at him "Words in my ear? Are you trying to humilate me?"
"Nooo! Of course not, I'm just interested by your life."
"Max Evans you won't have the details of my love life!"
"Why not? I'm sure that I'll be captived by them."

"I say NO.. However, my love life is a long and quiet river!"
"I doubt it...but in the same time, I'm not surprised." Max said.
"It's offending!....but in the same time, I'm not surprised." she repeated.

She smiled and stopped dancing for a second "Alex and I were very close, but you are the one who really knows me."
Max didn't answer and stopped almost completely to dance. Pressed tightly against each other, they eyes locked, they were like hypnotised.

Why if he was the one who really knew her, did he ignore everything about her today?

"I think it's time to tell the truth to each other Liz." he whispered seriously.
"What do you mean?" Liz asked, her heart racing in her chest.
"Come on. People don't need to listen to us." he said and dragged her toward the further and the most secluded corner of the bar. They sat down, without breaking the stare.

"Lizz!...." Max began but he couldn't say more, captived by her amazing eyes...her temptating lips...her sexy little body....

She was unable to move, still hypnotised by his golden eyes...like a lamb hypnotised by a wolf eyes..Except that Max Evans was not a wolf. Her lips were parted and without knowing, she licked them. That was the move that made Max Evans loose his control.

He grabbed her and pulled her against him and swooped down on her so delicious lips and devoured them...

TBC...IF YOU WANT IT............................................

the way he looks into her eyes.....
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hi guys. here I am with a new chapter and I hope that you'll like it....and sorry for my mistakes in English.

Max and Liz were dancing together during that event and Max kissed her...I know I stopped there. but you'll understand why I couldn't continue when you'll read that part. a 10000% dreamer!!!

I'd like to thank the faithfull readers who support that fics and the LURKERS who read it too. a little fb would certainly be appreciated!!


anonymousarfan- Sorry, I think that you'll understand that I had to stop here. and I'm waiting for your fb..

icequeen- like I already said, I had to stop here. I hope that this part won't disappointed you...read the chapter and you'll tell me in your next fb!

Liz86000- I think that you'll feel the same this time again...yeah Serena is a great girl. hum, sorry Liz...but in that fic, Michael won't meet Maria.....but as I'm not this cruel, you'll get a part of your hopes.

begonia9508- Yeah, Liz felt that she could talk to her...I hope you'll keep liking that fic...and Max and Liz....just read it and you'll see.

Bixie- I have only one word to say! YOU WON!


OK...It seems that my fics didn't catch your interest anymore and I'm sorry for that. That's why, I'm trying again with a new chapter of each one, if I see that I'm boring you, I'll stop writing and I'll ask to the mod for deleting them.
I'm not the kind of people who like to impose herself if she's not wanted.


So I've already updated LOVE ON THE INTERNET.....A TIME TO FORGIVE.....JUST AN AFFAIR???. I'll post the next part of MURDEROUS MASSAGES and REVENGE soon..I HOPE YOU'LL BE THERE TO READ THEM!!!

THANK YOU FOR ALL


here's the chapter.

Chapter 3


They pulled away slowly, without breaking the stare "We never kissed either" Max said huskily" he said, trying to enlighten the atmosphere.

Actually, Max was completely moved by that kiss, that was their first kiss even if they knew each other since 15 years and all the wait...the fantasies...the desire....the.... Ok, I stop here. But everything he felt for her since the first day he saw her was overwhelming him tonight.
And by the way she was looking at him, she was feeling the same way.

"I better go...I have a long road till Dallas and I've a big trail on monday." she said and began to walk away from him.

"Liz...I think that we should talk. Put that kiss aside for the moment, we really need to talk....please!" he pleaded. He knew that they won't forget that kiss, but he didn't want her to leave. Not anymore.

Liz looked at him, for a second she thought that he had lost that pride which was driving her so insane in the past.. The fact that he was pleading now, instead of demanding like an Evans *Come on Liz, be honest! Max was never demanding with you!* she reprimanded herself.

"Liz...You came here for the weekend, I'm sure that you'll manage to work on time for your trial. Please don't leave...and let's talk." he insisted.

"Ok. I stay for a while. I mean, I know that we need to talk together." she admitted.

And they returned to sit down. From their place, nobody could see them and Liz felt a little more comfortable.

"Tell me about your life Liz." Max asked.

"I thought that you wanted to talk about..."

"We have all the time to talk about it....For the moment, I'd like to know what happened in your life for 15 years." he repeated.

"Max, why did you come back here? I mean in Roswell. I remember that you wanted to write the bestseller of the century and live in New York, and I heard that you were working for the Daily Roswell. What happened to the great Max Evans?" she questionned.

"Great move, Liz! I asked you to tell me about you and you, as the great lawyer you are, you returned the question. Ok.....Actually, it took me 8 years to make the decision. But I don't regret my choice."

Liz thought that was strange and unexpected from someone who had such a great ambition in the past. Max took her hand in his and caressed it softly with his thumb. "You know Liz, I was thinking about it since long, but I couldn't do it because of the different places I've been posted to and because of my marriage. I regret that I delayed it so much"

*Because of his MARRIAGE!* That word made Liz feel like a bomb exploding in a bright sky. *He has been married! Maybe he's STILL married! That stupid Alex and his big mouth! He talked about everything but the essential.*

Moved by that news, she tried to take her hand off his, but Max tightened his grip. "And.... you're married since a long time?"she asked slowly.
"I'm not anymore. I thought that you knew it! That I've been married I mean..."

"No...No...But I'm not surprised, an Evans is a great match. I'd have been surprised if you were still single!" Liz thought that if Max was still married, that weekend would have been easier for her. He wouldn't have held her so tightly while they danced....he wouldn't have kissed her...at least she hoped so!

All of sudden she blurted "At least, that was not with Tess Harding?"

Max chuckled "My wife's name was Katherine. We met when we were at UCLA."

*Katherine Evans! Anyways, that sounded bad!* Liz thought *Did she marry you for your money? Did your parents like her? Were you in love with her?* Liz had a fierce yearning to ask him those cruel questions, but she didn't want to know the answers.

"Katherine and I, that didn't work." he kept talking as if he had read her thoughts. "We were unable to find a balance between our work and our private life. We were working like fools 7/7! We didn't have time to figure a real family life, let alone to create one." he explained.

Liz felt relieved to hear that his love and sexual life had not been that wonderful! He would never regret his moments with Katherine! She let out the breath she didn't know she was holding.

However she realized that Max's explanations were a little sad, as if the failure had been painful and she hated the idea that he could have been unhappy.
"Fortunately, you didn't have children!" she said "That's hard for the children when their parents divorced....but...huh...I'm sorry for you Max!"

"Cool Liz, it's over now. Let's talk about YOU and ME....It's not that I don't want to talk just about me, I'm ready to answer every question you have."

He ordered 2 beers and some nuts, when he got his beer, he drank it very slowly and put it on the table. Then he stretched his hand toward Liz. He took her chin between his fingers and forced her to look at him. "What are you expecting? Why did you come here tonight?"

*Ahhh! he asked THE question!* Even if she expected it, she didn't think that he would be so rude. She didn't know what to say "I...I don't expect....I don't expect anything special....from this weekend I mean..."she stammered "As I don't know anyone, I think that I'll mostly be bored here." Max smiled "You know..." she said again "I've nothing to say...nothing to tell and nobody to talk to."

Liz cursed herself for her cowardice. *Max asked me one question and I'm lost! Where is my will power? my passion? my ardour I have when I'm defending people for a trail?*

"Are you sure Miss the lawyer? he asked ironically
"I explain, I've no many friends here, at least not real friends to talk about the past!"
"You have friends Liz! At least 4!"
"Yeah the four from the Paquet!" she said smiling "I came here for them!" *LIAR!!! Liz stop lying to him!!!* she reprimanded herself.

She came here for one and only one reason: to see the one and only one Max Evans! But she would die rather than confess that to Max!

"You know Liz...I've never forgotten you." he said and he swallowed all his beer as if he was surprised himself by the bomb he has just blurted.

"Really?" Liz said, shocked.

*How didn't he forget her? Max the wealthy golden boy! The rich player! Knowing that was....wonderful and incredible...most of all incredible!!!*

"And...Can you tell me why you never forgot me?" she asked uncertain.

He shrugged "Always that "big brother" thing!" he said laughing at himself.

*BIG BROTHER?? That's why he had danced with her? To keep her from the bad encounters...to keep her from the nasty words some people could have told her? In that case, that was not necessary to hold me so tight against himself! By the way, is it correct to hold a sister the way he did while they were dancing?.....And is it correct to KISS a sister like he kissed me?*

"I see....You're always seeing me like a little sister, huh?"

"Let me tell you Liz, that you never allowed to anybody to approach you otherwise. No one could be close from you!..."

She contemplated his words and admitted that he was right. That time, she had so many problems in her mind that she hadn't time to flirt....

"Ok Max...." she sighed "Our relationship didn't go over than friendship, but your little sister?" she smirked.

"That was more sure like this."

"MORE SURE?? Because....you needed to keep your distances?"

Max turned around toward her, pulled her knees between his legs...his eyes looking into hers. "Look...Touch!"

He took her hand and forced her to follow with her finger....the scar.

The scar!!

"Here's what happened to me the day I tried to approach you"

Liz refused to look at the scar but she felt it under her fingers. She bent her eyes, ashamed....Then, recovering her aplomb, she looked at him without failing.

Max stared back at her with those amazing golden eyes. The same eyes she was admiring in the past, when she was envying Max...hating Max...and so much more....

"We need to talk Max"

Max didn't answer, keeping to stare at her and Liz lost a little of her confidence, her lips were lightly shuddering.

Then he stood up, rummaged in his jeans pocket and took a piece of paper out. He opened it and put it on the table, just in front of her.

Liz turned pale.

She knew exactly what was written on this piece of paper.... By her hand! She was the only one to know the truth... the only one to feel the grief the horrible piece of paper represented....And Max kept it for 15 years? That was really awful!

The memories she tried so hard to bury into the deeper corner of her mind came up like a volcano which threw up the lavas it had inside. The chain she hit Max with was still weighing in her hand...as heavy as the despair that was overwhelming her. She closed her eyes, remembering that moment, when he handed her the check.

He offered her the money for her studies and she accepted it, becoming, by that move, like the people she hated the most in the world, the Evans's world.

That day, she had lost her pride. That pride which helped her so much to endure the laughs in her back for 4 years, to endure the looks the others had for her *She was not from the same world than us, she shouldn't forget that!* Despite all the efforts she did to forget those images, they didn't stop to haunt her and Max was her ghost.

An elbow casually leant on the table, Max was playing with the piece of paper. *How dared he torture me reminding me of my weakness?*

*Ok...If he wanted to play to that cruel game, she wouldn't loose!*

"It seems to me that you don't dare to talk?" she said putting a slender finger on the paper.

He glanced at her and smiled sarcasticly "I'm not sure you're ready to hear what I have to say!"

Throwing her head back in a full of pride move, she got down from a booth and put her hand on Max's thigh. "Do you really believe it?"

She brushed the scar and giggled...That was the first time in her life that she had the courage to confront a man this way....so feminine. Most of all THAT man! That Max who had impressed her so badly in the past.

And....all of sudden....under a unknown pulsion.....she kissed him.

*Oh G-d! What a kiss! What a woman!*

*As if the contact of her finger on his cheek was not hard enough, there was now her hand on his thigh and her mouth on his lips!*

*Devillish! That woman was a demon! A demon who was kissing him like a goddess!*


Her sweet lips were massaging his, they were soft like the silk. The tip of her tongue, wet and mellow, dipped in and out in his mouth. That touch, erotical and tender in the same time, was the softest and the most electrical than he ever acknowleged with a woman.

Yes really, there was any woman who kissed like Liz Parker....Liz who was playing a pervert game!

He grabbed her hair....her amazing curled hair, so different from the bundle of straw she used to have in the past...then he slid his hand along her nap and held her head in his palm. *G-d! what a goddess!*

He was completely under the spell and his body couldn't help to react to that sexual tornado. He wanted her like he never wanted a woman in his life...The temptation was to strong.

At 33 years old, Liz was fascinating him even more than 18....He brushed her soft and powdered cheek....her fleshy and exciting mouth....her low neck...and stopped. He beautiful doe eyes were shining under the soft lights of the bar.

Then, after an awkward silence, he bent and kissed her again. Liz didn't slip away but offered herself in that kiss, she parted her lips and let him take everything she was ready to give. Shameless she was ready to surrender.

Max grew bolder, he slid his hands on her hips and pressed her tighter against him. Temptress, she undulated seductively against his body.

She was driving him insane and he felt in the bottom of his body the fierce yearning to make love to her. He wanted her desperately. He wanted to take her...to seduce her... to shower her....He wanted to taste her....he wanted to smell her most intimate scent....He wanted to unleash inside of her a storm of pleasure...

He wanted to feel finally his mouth on her skin...his tongue on her flesh....his fingers on her belly.


He was lost in his dream and an image popped under his eyelids...an image which had haunted him since so many years : that was a hot day and he was taking off her clothing, one by one...the most slowly he ever could. She appeared naked, half silk _ half velvet, in all her glory and he was kissing her body...her neck...her breasts...her hips...her belly....inch by inch. He was tasting the sweet lips between her legs....then he entered inside her soft body wildly to hear Liz cry her pleasure.

Liz's hand was wandering on his thigh, then higher and she quivered even more.

Max put his hand on hers.

Suddenly embarrassed by her behavior, Liz blushed, confused. She had never been so bold before or so intimate with a man.

Even with the darkness, Max could see the fire on her cheeks, her cloudy eyes and that was more than enough to excite him.

"Sorry" she said taking a step back. "I have to go for a second...but when I'll come back we'll continue our....conversation."

TBC..IF YOU WANT IT.............................................

the way he looks into her eyes.....
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hi guys, REMEMBER ME? I'm back with a new chapter! I hope that you didn't forget me or that fic! :lol:

if you remember, we left Max and Liz at that Elders reunion....and that was hot between them....Liz kissed him and then escaped....

There, you'll see what happened after Max caught her up...I hope you'll like this part.

as always I'd like to thank the faithful readers..... I wonder if you'll be back again..... and the lurkers. Thank to read that fic.


Liz86000- you're right, that was too soon...but 15 years passed and she was an adult now...I hope that you'll like this part, you'll get some of the answers, not all...

begonia9508- you said it Eve! life is complicated too. You're right Liz is not ready for a relationship with Max, there is too much between them and they need to clarify everything...but do you think that I could resist when I have Max and Liz to make them kiss? sorry I'm weak :wink: I hope you'll like this part and I'm waiting for your fb...

anonymousarfan- no...they never had sex...it was just a dream he was having for years. I agree with you, it's too soon and you'll see that Liz agrees with you too. hope you'll be here to read what happened to them...

icequeen- No Jazzy, they didn't sleep together, he was just dreaming for years about her...as for the paper....read that part and you'll see. I've given some tastes. I hope you'll like this part. tell me.

LegalAlien- Do you want to know what was written on this piece of paper, you'll know it in this part...Do you want to know how deep did their relationship go in the past? you'll have a taste in this part. The backgrounds...you'll have to wait and read the next parts..

Ok girls, I'd like to thank you for your support. It means a lot for me, even if I lost a lot of readers, I know that I have you, faithfull to my fics and really thank you. I'll update the other fics later.

here is the chapter...

Chapter 4

What happened exactly between them here? What was those kisses meaning? And that excitement he was feeling? Indeed he came for her. To confront her and to get the answers....but never....really never.... he would have figured such a reaction from her.

That kiss was not a high school girlfriend's kiss, that's what annoyed him. That was a maneuver to make him lose control, to weaken him cause she was perceiving him like a danger. *Good! She indeed got me!* he thought.

His elbows on the table, he was pondering *Liz had deeply changed! She became a woman, feminine till the tip of her nails, desirable, sexy and fiercely resolute and yet....*Under her shell, he felt her fragility...like a secret wound.

However, she chose to be a lawyer to defend people but mostly to defend herself: the years passing by plus her talent helping, she had succeeded.

When they were at high school, she was very ambitious, the only snag was the money and he, Max, had resolved the problem with a check. That damned check which had provoked the break up...It had been an enormous blunder, signed EVANS.

All along the school years, Max had a rough relationship with Liz, more intense than the other teens. But the day he came with his dollars, as if he wanted to buy his friend, that day.... he spoiled everything between them.

At the begining, Max didn't want to see what was going on between him and Liz, he understood that there was something....he read it in her eyes....but that was too complicated for a seventeen years old teen. He was already overwhelmed by his father...Liz's mother...his class's magazine...the music practice with the Paquet...the basketball...too much for him!

When Liz left that day, Max didn't understand...He took him a long time to realize that he had deeply hurt her!...Later he had found out that Liz had a hard complex because of her social condition and her poverty and she never overcame it.

After the check thing, she never accepted to talk to him, not even take his phone calls. Never again she accepted his invitations.

He had to understand that despite their feelings, even if they never talked about them, nothing would be the same because of that check. Maybe she was just a Parker but no one could buy her though.

But tonight...15 years later....there was that kiss...Is this a kiss from an old friend?...No. Is this a kiss from a futur lover? No.

His experience told him that Liz was different from his ex-wife. He shared with her a short but real passion, he had had that with some women he dated after his divorce...but the kiss Liz just gave him has nothing to do with what he had in the past...That kiss was pure dynamite.

And Max didn't understand that behavior from a girl who was as unreachable as a fortress. What was she really looking for? She was a mystery for him.

Anyway, it seems that the next hours will bring to him a pleasure that he wasn't expecting.

A slap on his back brought him back to the reality "Do you find that the music is too loud? Is that the reason why you're hiding in a secluded corner?"

"Oh, Michael! Hi....Already finished?" Max asked shaking warmly Michael's hand.

"I have to breathe. You know music is very physical!"
"I bet...I remember that!"

"Tell me Max, what's going on in your life? I saw you with a lovely girl earlier, who is she?" Michael asked.

"Come on Mike, you didn't recognize her?" Max questionned glancing all around the hall.

"Why should I? From the stage I saw a fantastic figure but that's all! I couldn't see very well."

"You saw enough" Max groaned.

"You're right. That seemed very hot for a kiss...Come on tell me!" Michael begged "Who were you kissing so passionately?"

"Liz Parker" Max confessed in low voice.

"Liz Parker??" Michael repeated dumbfounded. "Are you kidding? The Joker? Our so irritated little punky?"

"Absolutely! And believe me, she didn't improve her temper!"

"Well...well...I'm going to judge by myself since she's coming toward us.....Oh..no....She's about to leave.."

Swaying her hips like a panther, Liz was walking toward the exit.

"If I were you, I would be on my guard. Who knows, maybe she has a bicycle chain hidden in her purse? The last time she had hit your head, this time, maybe she had decided to tear it off."

"I've been more than lucky, that's true." Max said thoughtful. "Ok, Mike enough talking about Liz...the pause is finished..go back to your music."

Michael slap friendly his shoulder and walked away. Michael just left than Max was looking at the door from where Liz just walked out.

He never thought that he would settle things with her tonight, maybe not even during the weekend, but he couldn't let her go.....Not after the kiss she gave him.

He ran to catch her up and found her at the parking lot. She was opening the door of a fabulous red sport car. A design that fitted perfectly with the woman she became.

He walked toward her; when she heard his steps she lifted her head.

Despite her success, despite the time, she always had that angel face, that transparent look he always knew in her eyes. Two deep black lakes where was seething the rage of life.

Was she still fiercely an outsider despite her professionnal success? Seeing her tonight, he couldn't believe it. He read enough about her to doubt that she was still playing that role.

And he was going to remind her that her success was not an excuse to let the old friends down....it shouldn't be an excuse to forget her debt either.

He came beside her and put his hand on the top of the car "Fifteen years have passed....and here we are again in a parking lot." he said watching for her reaction.

She throw her purse on the seat casually and took her time to turn around toward him *Was he going to talk about what happened 15 years ago? Or did he came to claim something more than a kiss?* she thought anxiously.

"Honestly, I don't know what I'm doing here tonight." she said

"Come on Liz, you came for the Elder reunion."

"Ah yeah! Stupid me!"

"Do you know that Mike didn't recognize you?"

"Thanks! Did I grow that old?"

"No...You changed...That's different."

"Do you really think so?"

"You, more than anyone else, has the answer!"

"Ok..I changed my look. I have expensives clothes, I comb my hair and I put some makeup on my face...since at the high school..."

At school, except her punky clothing it was impossible to ignore, he never paid attention if Liz had make her face up or not, he had so many things to think about. And no one could approach her, she was like a wild animal, she never let anyone tame her.

"If you think that that was easy for me to attend your snobish school giving the poor area I was living in? I did my best to survive in your world Max and I fought very hard to go out from mine"

"It's an old story now Liz, you don't live there anymore!"

"A past like mine can't be erased so easily Max. And believe me, the professionnal success has nothing to do with that. It's written in my mind forever."

She looked into his eyes "Do you even know who I am? Who is hiding behind Liz Parker?" she asked.

Max chuckled, he liked that sort of game they were playing.

"Did you keep that habit to undress in front of men when you're playing at the pool?"

"Would you be pleased if I answered yes?"

She sat down on the leather seat of her car.

"Are you virgin?" he asked, unable to restrain himself.

"I'm sure you would be pleased to know about that too."

*She's so talented to return my questions!* he thought.

"Is that all what you want to know?....In that case, I'm leaving.."

"So soon? Why are you so eager to leave this reunion?"

"Dallas is far, my dear. And I have a ton of files waiting for me."

*She's going to leave..I should have known!*

"One more time you let me down...you're escaping the parking lots"

"Me? Absolutely not!"

"Are you sure? You forget too quickly!"

Furious she climbed out of her car "What do you want now? Do you want that we make it here?"

"Make what here? What do you mean?"

He was really embarrassed and dug his hands in his pockets, thus she wouldn't see them trembling. She was leaning against the car and looking at him with an arrogant look.

"Are we going to stay and fight all night long on this parking lot?"

"Do you want us to go back to the club to talk?" he offered.

"After our kiss? OUT OF QUESTION! Let's the others wondering where we are, what are we doing? Gossip will keep them busy!" she said smiling. She was calm now.

Despite his envy to not push her, he couldn't help but question "Do you want to leave because of our kiss earlier or because of what happened 15 years ago?"

Liz shivered. She lifted her face to the sky, enjoying the stars of that summer night. *He knows me so well! He read my thought like a open book!*

Overwhelmed by the question, she bent her head on her arms. The silence was heavy....too much emotion...too many remorses...too many regrets....

But as always she didn't let things get the best of herself, she looked at him, proudly "Don't take advantage of my weakness Max. I came because of our past...."

"I came for you Max" she whispered.

Max sighed deeply "Me? Really?"
"Really."

"We never talked since that day, yet."

"I know that you had tried....I should have called you back, but..." she stopped a while trying to find her words. "But I was not...."

Max was silent while she was talking.

"I was not ready. I hadn't enough courage...Maybe I was not adult enough, not yet....to face that memory...that painful memory... The money....our fight....That was too much! I was feeling humilated, Max. Understand me! Of course I needed that money, but I was ashamed to have accepted it....most of all from you."

Max knew that she was telling the truth. He had needed years to understand her motives. Her anger had been so undue...so unexpected too... Tonight, he wanted Liz to give him an explanation. He wanted Liz to give him the reasons of her fury, cause, even if he had understood, he wanted to hear everything from her mouth...Now.

He made a step toward her "Why most of all from me? However, why did you pay me back so quickly? I wouldn't have sent the police after you."

She moved back "You have to understand, Max, that when you are poor, you're ashamed to owe money. That's like a defect, so you hurry to pay the loan back. I'm sure that you knew me enough and that I couldn't live with that debt." she said sadly.

Under the moonlight, Max noticed her neck throbbing, the necklace was lightning and there was something magical in the air.

He liked the couple they were but he shouldn't forget why he came or how she left him. No, it wouldn't take a moolight, a look or an embrace for him to burn his wings again.

"I didn't know you as much as you thought...But I paid the price to learn."

Liz opened the door of her car "You know what? You're an Evans! And believe me in my mouth it's not a compliment." she said contemptly.

"I don't deserve that Liz, but I won't justify myself. Just know that I'm closer from you than from my father."

*What does he mean?* she wondered.

"Stop that Max! Ok, I want you to know that I'm here to apologize. I'm not asking for your forgiveness, I just want to end that story, to sooth my conscience. You see, my request is selfish."

"To end? I was expecting that our kiss would have been a begining!"

"The begining of what?"

He hadn't expected that question, but he had an answer...easy. He rummaged in his pocket.

"Ah no! Not this paper again!" she exclaimed.

Glad of his effect, Max unfolded the little piece of paper.

"This paper is a debt. You wrote it."

"I wrote it under the pressure! I'm not forced to pay it." she cut him off.

"So, according to you, this debt could be unpaid!"

He was using blackmail and she was infuriated "MAX!!! I was only 17 years old! I was at the edge of the breakdown. I could have promised to you the moon if you wanted it...."

"But you didn't promise me the moon, Liz..."

He made a step toward her "You promised me......Your body" he whispered and took her hand in his.

They heard someone gasp in the night.....

TBC...IF YOU WANT IT......................................................
the way he looks into her eyes.....
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Hey guys! I did it finally. I wrote a new part, I wanted to write a long part to make up for the delay. I hope you'll like it. I'll be looking forward to your fbs...

I know that you have been shocked to hear what Liz had promised to Max, 15 years before, but you have to remember that she was desperate that time...she would have promised the moon if she could!

Here you'll see how the relationship is developping and you'll have a flashback in the past, to understand better that relationship.

OK, I'd like to thank the READERS and the LURKERS to read that fic, that what brings me to continue.


harroc83- I tried to explain that above, thank you for reading it. I hope you'll tell me what you thought about that part!

icequeen- I know...it's shocking! but she was 18 years old and desperate!

begonia9508- Eve, he waiting 15 years for that debt...He can't not have her now that she's beside him. and no, she paid her debt back but she promised him her body too...

g7silvers- yeah you'll find out who here but there was someone else.....

anonymousarfan- I know....shocking! and no, she paid it back...and like I already said, she was desperate. She promised....her body too. and feel free to ask your questions!

Erina258- I'm glad that you like this fic...I hope that you won't be disappointed by that part!

L-J-L 76- Lizza, you'll find out who gasped here, the others questions will have their answers later..or I'll stop here.

littlewind- thank you! hope you'll come back to read the rest.

begonia9508- Eve I like that post! I'm here and I hope that the wait will be worth...

Liz86000- hey Liz, glad to see you here. like I said, I hope you won't be disappointed!

anonymousarfan- I hope you'll be there to tell me if you like that part!

L-J-L 76- thank you Lizza. I just wanted to say that I put A time to forgive on hiatus and Murderous Massages will be updated soon.

THANK YOU ALL, I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED AND I'M WAITING FOR YOUR IMPRESSIONS!!!

here we go!!

Chapter 5


"Did I hear what I think that I heard?" Alex asked smirking. "And I was not the only one to overhear that...I won't tell you who did it too."

"Alex! Stop that you're not funny." Liz replied a little worried. "Do you think that it's good for a man of your quality to overhear private conversation?"

She didn't want the others to know her deal with Max, it was enough to have him putting under her nose that damned piece of paper, shameful, she tried to hide her embarrassement.

"Hey Alex, actually you didn' hear anything."

Finally, Liz was glad to see Alex, more than Max who had decided to settle that story before Liz left.

"Hey tell me something, Ace of Heart, aren't you pressuring our Joker?

Max shrugged

"Let me tell you one thing, man : let it down, I tried too and believe me, she rejected me like I've never been!" Alex faked to stumble and Liz couldn't help but laugh.

But Max was irritated *Geez, I was about to reach the goal, and my plan is going to fail because of this dumb man!*

"You didn't loose your old manners, always here when you're not wanted!" Max groaned.

"Right Max, I kept that weird habit to put my nose in the others business!" Alex joked.

Liz smiled hearing Alex confessing his flaw "No, you're not indiscreet....you're worse!"

"Anyways, I won't be indiscreet that long, I've to shorten my weekend...Real life is calling. But I'd like to spend the hours left with my best friends." he waited to see their reactions "And one of my best friends is an amazing girl which is turning me on. So Liz, ready for a hamburger?...Oh, you can come with us Max!"

Max tried to trap him "Sad you're not that lucky, man! Liz is about to leave..."

"But she just came." Alex exclaimed. "Look Liz, I can't stay till sunday, we only have tonight and tomorrow morning to evoke our memories, you and me."

"I don't know Alex....." she said not convinced "You know I have an important trail to prepare and....actually, I shouldn't have come."

"Come on Liz" Alex insisted "We only spent 15 minutes together. 15 minutes to shower 15 silent years! You can't say that you stayed too long."

Not really enthousiast to go with Alex, scaring of what could happen with Max if she stayed here, Liz was hesitating.

"Stay till the BBK tomorrow" Alex insisted again "You'll leave after. You'll drive me to the airport, that's on your way."

Max was observing Alex's manners and obviously Liz. *Unless I'm mistaking, but Liz is annoyed by Alex's insistance. Maybe by his bad tasted hints too? But our Joker doesn't want to look irritated, so she is smiling...that little smirk I know so well!* he thought.

He was right, Liz didn't know what to do *If I stay, we'll continue our conversation with Max, that's logical. If I leave...I'll give up on the possibility to end that story with him once and for all. Geez! what do I have to do?* she was deep in her thought, hesitating...and plagued.

She pushed her hair behind her ears, nervously "Let's have that dinner!" she stated "I'm unable to react when I'm starved. I'll decide later if I stay."

"YEAH! I knew it!" Alex exclaimed, he looked into Liz's car "Fabulous machine, but you only have 2 places. What do we do Max? We take your car or we heil a cab?" he asked.

Now that he knew that Liz was staying, Max decided to let her hang about waiting for him. "Go without me" he said "I have to go home, a mare which should give birth tonight...."

Liz looked at him, shocked "Horses? Do you own horses?" she asked amazed.

"Yeah..And a dozen of cats and an old dog."

"Are you kidding me? Where do they live?"

"I'll tell you tomorrow." he cried out when he walked away.

"Jerk!" she yelled

"You see Liz, you were right earlier. I'm an Evans like father like son!" he answered.


West Roswell High School, 17 years earlier

"Geez! What's that? Tam tams?"

Max didn't answer. He knew Kyle and his manners since years.

"You know, we have someone else to replace Chris, our saxophonist. And you won't believe me but that's a girl!"

"A girl! Oh G-d!" Michael exclaimed.

"She better knows play very well" Alex added "If not..."

"We're going to know it right now..." Max said, his eyes locked toward the door.

A weird figure appeared at the doorway. He had already seen the girl in the hallway of the school, once or twice. He even talked to her. She was coming from an insecure suburb high school he heard.

Shy and hesitating, she walked into the room where the others were waiting for her.

She was wearing some very ugly pants which were falling on her shoes, her hair were like a bundle of straw and she had a masculine hat on her head. The most strange part of her outfit was her top. That was a white short top which looked like underwear and didn't hide her stomach.

She was very slim and big brown eyes which were eating all her so pale face.

Her books in her left hand, she was hold the saxo in her right's one."Hello!" she said looking at each boy in front of her. Awkward silence and grimaces.

That was Alex, the boldest, who talked the first. He stood up from behind his piano and held out his hand. "Hi, I'm Alex Whitmann."

"I'm Liz Parker"

Michael played 2 notes on his bass "I'm Michael Guerin"

She damped her lips and played some notes on her saxo "Liz Parker"

Amused Max was looking at the scene. Now that was Kyle who came to present himself "Kyle Valenti. I hope that our director knew what he was doing when he forced us to take you with us." he stated.

Max stiffened. Why Kyle always felt the need to be rough around new people?

"I hope that he knew what he was doing when he forced me to play with you, too." she retorted.

"Funny bird!" Kyle mumbled.

Max left his drums and held his hand out "Hi, I'm Max Evans"
"Hi Max" she answered.

"Now that the presentations are done, you have to know that we're used to play together since months. We'll have to learn to play together you and us, like a team."

"Why? Because I'm a girl!" she replied upset. "A saxophonist is a saxophonist, you know!"

Kyle tried to hide a laugh since Michael sniffed and Alex hit the corner of the piano with his head.

"You're right, but we have to get used to play with a new partner!" he said and pointing her instrument, he asked her if she was experienced.

"You want to know if I'm good? Well, people said it!" she said ironically.

"Show us how do you play." Kyle asked still agressive.

Mumbling, she put her instrument and her books on a table "Ah...guys! When will you ever trust girls!"

They sneered again but Liz didn't pay attention, only Max didn't say anything.

Ignoring the others, she asked him "How do you prefer me to play? Like Charlie Parker or Coleman Hawkins?"

Alex was stunned "Because you know Charlie Parker?"

Liz laughed "And you? Sinatra means something to you?"

Well the new musician seems to not have her tongue in her pocket. Alex was still stunned, Max shrugged and suggested her to begin to play.

Well planted on her feet, her bitten nails on the keys of the instrument, she began to play the National anthem.

"No...Max! We can't accept that!" Kyle cried.

Michael shook his head disappointed since Alex was smirking.

That was enough. Why would they continue that audition since she didn't fit to their band? Max was about to annouce her when Liz improvised on a famous song.

Shocked, they stopped to sneer. She was playing like a real professionnal, her eyes closed, living each note she was playing.

When she chose the National anthem, she knew perfectly what she was doing. She wanted to test them, the same way they tested her.

At that moment, Max was sure that they had found the perfect musician they desperatly needed for their band. Then, they began to play with her forgetting everything that was before she played.

At the end of the song, there was an awkward silent. Liz's look caught Max's eyes since she was gathering her things.
"I'm waiting for all of you tomorrow at 4:00 after the classes" he stated. "Be on time!"

Then Liz left and Max looked at her when she walked out of the room. *Well, the next 4 years will be very interesting and I wonder if I'll be safe at the end." he was deep in his thoughts.


Present time? at Max's ranch.

"How is the mare?" he asked.

John Jones took his time to answer like he always did since Mas hired him, 4 years ago.

He was calm and serene and that was what decided Max to hire him.

"If everything is firne, you'll be a father soon." he said with a smile.

"Funny how a foal's birth can bring happiness." Max said as he was thinking about his father. *That's not the moment to think about my origine.* he thought.

John raised his eyebrow "How was your evening, Mr Max?"

"Well..thank you John"

"Did you see your friends?"

"Yes John"

"And did you meet some girls?

"You know John, there was only one girl with us in my class.

"And she was there?"

"Of course, but she grew up. I almost didn't recognize her."

John smiled. "Is she married?"

"I don't really know."

"You don't really know? Didn't you talk with her?"

"Yes, John, we talked. We danced together and if you want to know everything, I even kissed her."

"Kissed?"

"Yes John, but after that we quarreled."

The old man burst out laughing "Mrs Jones and me, we quarrel sometimes, but that's not a reason to not love each other."

*LOVE? Liz and him?* Here is a reflection that he liked to hear but he didn't answer. After all his relationship with Liz was not Mr Jones's business. "Are you sure I can't help you?" he asked again.

"Help me for what? Everything will be all right, don't worry." John said.

But Max was anxious for his mare and wanted her to give birth in good conditions. He came beside her and whispered into her ears "See you later Charlie, that won't be long, don't worry."

He came back in his house and sat on his couch, thinking about his life. He never thought to buy a ranch but, when he came to visit his parents one day, he fell in love with that house and bought it.

However, he was not destined to be a gentleman farmer. After the high school, he went to college to study journalism and he succeeded there. He met his wife there.

Since the begining of their marriage, he felt that Katherine was very ambitious and she managed everything in their life: where they should live, who they should see...She loved to be the center of the reunions and she only met the powerful people.

She had encouraged him to aspire to be the most influent newspaper's editor. Katherine was one of those women who love cocktails and fame.

At home, she was the manager too. She chose everything and she ordered for everything. Max didn't have a word to say and he just followed her, until he understood that his wife was suffocating him.

But one day, she told him that she didn't need him anymore. She told him that he was just a father's son unable to be a real man. He was hurt but relieved when they divorced. His couple had no heart, no soul.

Was he really a father's son? Maybe when he was young. That was what Liz thought when he gave her that check.

Deeply hurt and humilated, she hadn't been able to repress her anger, her rage and without her wanting it really, she hit him with that chain.

At that moment, he would have forgiven her if she had agreed to have an explanation. But she didn't give him that chance, she never accepted to answer his phone calls.

Today, he wondered if she erased all her griefs against the Evans. After all she was famous now. If that was the case, he would be happy.

Even if there still was that debt between them....she had promised her body.

The day after.

The last time she passed by this park, Liz had a check in her hand. That check represented more money than she ever had during her whole life. She didn't know that a teen would have so much money on his account, but we were talking about Max Evans, the Evans were the wealthiest family of Roswell.

Today that she, more or less, frequented that people, she realized that she would never be one of them.

From her place she was looking at those women which were settling the tables, the chairs, the food and drinks...that was like a ballet.

Everything was smelling money, and Liz regretted that she let Alex convince her to stay one more day. They laughed a lot last night, remembering their common past, but that dinner showed her that, under his innocent look, Alex was a good psychologist.

He only said "Come Liz, tell me everything." and she told him everything he wanted to know since 15 years. He knew now about the debts, the one she paid back, the one Max demanded. He knew her past..her present and even where she was with Max now. She had been unable to restrain herself, she confessed everything.

Why didn't she go back to Dallas like she intended to do? Maybe because she was dying to stay and see what would happen between her and Max...She was fascinated by him, more than when she was younger.

She remembered him yesterday night, in the parking, he was so sexy and she kissed that handsome man. She remembered his husky voice, the words he said to her...she remembered everything....that's why she wanted to flee again. She was scared.

Without that reunion, she wouldn't have seen the Paquet and Max. She never came back to Roswell in 15 years, she build her life far from there. Today, she found out that, despite her fabulous career, fabulous car, fabulous clothes...she was still the same Liz Parker than Max Evans humiliated giving her that check. The wound was still open.

She felt rejected even if she admitted that she stood apart from those people. That was her choice but not only.

"Someone told me that you were Liz Parker!" Michael Guerin startled her "I noticed you last night but I didn't recognize you. Actually, I saw you when you were leaving."

"What do you mean?" she asked

Michael took off his glasses and sat close to her "Hum...I've learnt with the years that being discreet was a virtue."

Once again, she found him changed like Alex, only Max didn't change.

"So? What do you tell me?" he whispered.

"I don't know! What do you want me to tell you?"

He came closer "Don't play innocent. You know very well..."

"Not at all!"

"Ok..I'm gonna tell you. Where are you Max and you?"

"Max and me?"

"Oh stop playing the dumb girl!"

"Dumb girl? Are you sure that I'm Liz Parker?"

He grimaced. "Come on Liz, kiss your old friend!"

Liz hugged him very tight. "That's good to see you again. You were awsome last night on stage!...."

He put a finger on her lips to stop her talking "Don't say it..I play for my pleasure, that's all."

"Max told me that you were in the Marines."

"Can you imagine that? I've been trapped in some sort of governemental programm, but I don't regret it. I saw a lot of countries. I saw all that I wanted to see."

"And now that you are civil..."

"I only want to party. I only want to enjoy my life...We'll see later for the rest."

"You look great Michael."

"Yeah? Yes, I just haven't the same pleasure you were enjoying with Max last night yet."

Liz hesitated to answer. Michael was Max's best friend.

"I would say that Max and I enjoyed some pleasure last night."

"Huh?" Michael said, surprised. He put his glasses on and smiled.

"When I kissed him, I didn't expect to take any pleasure." she tried to convince him.

"What did you expect? I don't understand. Cause seeing both of you from where I was, you didn't seem to be bored..."

Of course she was not bored! How Max's kisses could be boring? *AAAHHHH....Those kisses!!* she was still shivering! She looked at him "That's true, that kiss was pleasant. But nothing more" she lied.

"Whatever!" Michael cut her off. "This conversation is over. That's only you and Max's business. But don't forget what I said: we're not born to be annoyed. Life is complicated and you have to enjoy it."

They walked side by side toward the sport area "If I understand what you're saying, my dear Michael, now, for you, only pleasure counts."

"Exactly. That's why I'm happy that you are reconciled Max and you. That will be easier for both of you."

Liz stopped walking "We're not reconciled. Let's say that our relationship is more normal but nothing more. I had to apologize to Max for the damage I did 15 years ago. That's why I'm here." she stated.

"What you gave him last night is more than all the apologizes of the world."

"Don't be ridiculous! I marked him for his life, did you see his scar?"

"I'll exchange with him when he wants." he burst out laughing and took her hand. "Come on, let's go, they are forming the teams for the volleyball match."

The match turned to be a real mess for the girls's team. The boys were stronger and they lost easily against their powerful shots.

After a while, the girls surrendered and the match stopped.

Max pulled off his shirt and attached a little scarf on his head. *He is so beautiful! so hot!* Liz couldn't help to think. *Why did he undress himself? Didn't he know the turmoil she was feeling when she looked at him?*

She had seen him bare chest when they were at school, but now he is different, more mature...more sensual..more...*Stop Liz!* she cursed herself but regretting that she couldn't caress his scupltural chest.

"Do you want to play again?" Alex asked

"OK...But we mix the teams, boys and girls."

Max and Liz came naturally side by side "What do you think if we flee?" he whispered into her ear.

"I'd say that we'd be incorrect."

And she left him to take her place on the field. That man was disturbing and seemed to take a real pleasure to disturb her. But why, since she was dreaming to have his arms around her, was she rejecting him, always? Did she want to punish herself because of that scar?

Michael threw the ball on him but as he was not ready, he fell down beside her. "Not in a good shape Evans?" she mocked him.

Max stood up quickly and sent her a smile which said long on his real shape "You have no idea how in a good shape I'm." he replied.

"Always winning, huh?"

"I can't help! That's in my family as you didn't stop repeating it, since I met you."

"Hey!" Kyle yelled "Are you playing or doing something else?"

"I'm sorry, that Max. He's disturbing me."

"Did I really disturb you, Beautiful?"

"You already know it."

They were face to face.

*Why did he call me "beautiful"? Does he....No. I better stay far from him or I'll lose my mind* she thought.

The players were tired and the weather was too hot to continuer, the match was languid and Michael offered to stop it. "We should have lunch to recover our strength. That's just the begining of the day!"

The players cheered and began to walk toward the tables prepared with the lunch.

Attracted one toward the other like an invisible magnet, Max and Liz drew closer to each other and walked away from the group.

Reaching a fountain, Liz couldn't help to wipe Max's face when she saw it covered with dust and sweat. She wiped it slowly with a tissue and was unable to repress her envy to continue further.

She let her fingers caress his neck and lower to his stoned bare chest. She couldn't control her fierce yearning to touch him.

"What do you want Liz? To torture me? To tie me up until I asked for relief?" he said moaning.

All of sudden, she stopped and stared at him.

He was smiling now and his smile was devilish. "Unless you want to make the show in front of that people who are waiting for that since 15 years....." he asked gripping her hand.

TBC..IF YOU WANT IT........................................................
the way he looks into her eyes.....
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hey everybody, I'm back with another chapter. I've been busy with a ton of work but I found a moment to write that chapter. I hope you'll like it. I know that I stopped abruptly the previous part but that was to introduce that part and the nookie part which is coming next time.

Like always, I'd like to thank my readers and the lurkers who are reading and supporting that fic.


Lizza- pleased to see you here. I hope you'll enjoy that part.

anonymousarfan- I explained why above and I hope that this part will be worth for the wait. thank you.

begonia9508- exactly and Liz begins to be fed up to play that game. but the past is full of hurt and pain...hard to overcome it. but...I'm waiting for your fb here. thank you.

icequeen- they are begining in this part...but that's only the begining of a sensual game..Talk? they need more time to do it, at least Liz. thank you.

Erina- thank you if you like the past part, and no, not in this part. but soon there'll be another one. I hope you'll like this part and sorry for leaving this way...

kittens- no, they weren't together, Max was confused and Liz was too hurt about her condition. she didn't bear to be the poor girl in the rich school with rich students. thank you.

SmileeUk- Thank you for the support and I hope that this part will please you the same way. Less torture I think...

POM- thank you, the new fan! like I said to SmileeUk, I think that you'll be less tortured by M/L in this part.

Emz80m- not into bed but into each other arms, now....thank you

roswell3053- welcome here and thank you for the support I hope you'll like this part too.




I HOPE TO UPDATE "MURDEROUS MASSAGES", "LOVE ON THE INTERNET" and "JUST AN AFFAIR??" SOON, IF YOU WANT TO READ THEM.....

here we go....

Chapter 6

If he wanted to tease her, Max had chosen the bad partner cause Liz was not in the mood to joke. This morning she has been near to have a quarrel with him but when she reminded herself of the others waiting for that fight, she stopped.

She was in the same state and didn't want to give them what they were so eager to see, she breathed deeply. Max was always unnerving her and, she couldn't help it, she was always reacting too fast.

She wanted to humiliate him, to take a revenge like that day when she threw the chain toward his face. But she was not there for that, she thought trying to regain her composure. She cursed herself to react that fast, she was angry against herself, against the world but mostly against Max.

She brushed her hair with her hand nervously. Honestly, what did he say to justify her anger, her behavior? Not that much! she had a real bad temper sometimes!

When she thought about it, she admitted that he didn't deserve that anger, but once again, she couldn't help to feel it. Maybe she was hidding an emotion or who knows an unreasonable desire.

Yes, she desired him. Yes, she wanted him. Max.

And if her desire was leading her to a room, she would step into that room! She wouldn't give up on her pleasure for once and would give in the temptation.

Max startled her when he grabbed her arm. She looked at him surprised.

What if she touched his body? What if she pressed herself against his chest and gave in to that fierce yearning to kiss him? However, she refused that this weekend could only be about sex. She promised herself when she arrived.

Once again she breathed deeply. She was disturbed and couldn't help to feel conflicting feelings. A part of her was dying to make love with him once and for all since the other part was dreaming of revenge. He surely was aware of her state of mind.

*Ah, if only Maria was there!....Dear Maria, I'm already hearing her "I've told you Liz!*

Too late....

"Do you have my debt?" she asked without looking at him.

Max didn't react but keep walking toward her, then he stopped and grabbed her shoulders. "You'll have it in one hour" he answered sliding his hands under her little white top. "No, the easiest thing is that you come with me, we'll be at my house in less than half an hour."

He was serious suddenly... too serious.

She shivered and felt a wave of heat invading her body. He wanted her, that was sure. The blaze in his eyes didn't left any doubt about his intentions. And since she wanted him too, why would they play longer "at cat and mouse"?

They were going to make love.

Max Evans and Liz Parker.

The Prince Charming and Cinderella.

The glory and the misery.

Once again, she shivered and her eyes blurred. She was going to hold him tight in her arms, Max Evans.... the man that was hunting her dreams since 15 years.

She wanted to touch his body, to feel him naked against her. Here. Right now. On the grass. And who cares if everyone can see them!

She will undress him, slide her fingers in his hair, unzipp his pants and see him for the first time completely naked, then she'll caress him.

She'll hear him panting. She wanted to hear his breath, his voice, his excitment. She wanted to hear his cries of pleasure when he'd be inside of her body. She wanted him submissive. She wanted him all and now.

During her life as lawyer, she had defended women who acted under that sexual pulsions and she had been surprised then. Today, she understood them, they were sister of passion.

She smiled and arched her body "We have all the time Max. We don't need to hurry."

"Right. After all, I'm just waiting for you since 15 years!..."

"Did you really wait for me?" she asked seductively but yet worried.

He brushed his hand through his hair "Yes, you can call that a fantasy or an obsession...as you like."

She raised on her feet and whispered in his ear "Am I really your fantasy?"

Tenderly, she caressed his cheek just above the scar "That's the first time I hear that." she said softly.

Max bent his head then looked up into her eyes "You were the whole class's fantasy, Liz, don't tell me that you didn't know that!"

"What do you mean?"

"Nothing." he replied softly "At this time, you were blind...We'll talk about it later."

Liz was disappointed that he didn't continue to talk about that. She was disturbed to hear that, without knowing it, she had fascinated all the class but she shook her head, unable to believe it.

"Anyways, it's out of question to leave since everybody are still here."

"Don't you see that almost everybody are gone Liz?" he whispered.

His hand on her shoulder was caressing with the strap of her bra.

"Since now, we're going to play to another game with different rules."

"And who will fix the rules?"

"You, me..us"

"And what if I refuse to play?"

"Impossible! You want to play as much as I want, I read that in your eyes."

He took her hands in his, interwined their fingers and squeezed them.

"You don't read anything" she retorted

"Let's say that I hear it...in your breath, in your voice, in your breathing..."

She knew that he was right, everybody could see her emotion just hearing her panting breathing. But she refused to surrender.

"In your dreams, Evans."

"I see it in the way you let me be close to you..I don't know why but I don't think that many men had been able to do it."

That was not curiosity anymore that was requirement. NO...She won't answer!

*Not answer....not answer....*

"I know that I'm right" he said when she kept silent.

Leaning toward her, he captured her lips. His mouth was soft and wet, fleshy and greedy, so greedy. That was not only a kiss, that was a flare up of her body. Liz would never have thought that a man's mouth could arouse her like that.

She gave into the desire and pressed her body agains his. She locked her eyes with his and began to undulate with want.

Unable to restrain the wild desire he was feeling for her, Max felt his body hardening.

Liz took his hand and squeezed it in hers, then she threw her head back to take breath. But Max wrapped her neck in his palm and pulled her into his arms.

She parted her lips, sought his tongue and welcomed it into the soft moisture of the mouth.

She was so tender and sexy! Max deepened the kiss and began to nibble at her lips, at her tongue. When he needed to pull away, Liz didn't let him go. She was under the spell of her sensations despite herself and she was submitting to the violence of her desire.

Max's manly body smelt the sun and the sweat, their mouths were fighting ragingly since their tongues were duelling.

Max was the first to pull away needing for air. He opened his eyes and tightened his grip on her hips. Boldly, Liz brushed his stomach and sighing, she slid her fingers under his short waistband.

"Liz....Liz...do you know what you're doing to me?"

"I'm just playing at the new game you told me"

"I think that I like it."

He smiled and slid his hands under her waist, then lower and Liz moaned.

"Liz, I want to touch you" he whispered in the hollow of her neck.

"But you're touching me, Max" she replied panting.

"I want to touch....more intimately."

Liz was speechless. Her hands were on his chest and she was drawing on his skin.

"Touch me Liz..I want you to touch me." he begged, overexcited.

His sweated forehead against her, he whispered huskily "I want you to touch me everywhere." It was like if he was imploring her, like if he was asking for a favor....Didn't he understang that she couldn't refuse anything? That she was waiting for this moment since 15 years?

She felt her heart pounding in her chest. Her heart....he didn't forgot either.

At this moment, they heard someone coughing.

Liz turned around. They weren't alone. The teams were here and were enjoying to see their kisses. They were applauding them.

Never mind! Max and Liz needed to hold themselves tight. They kissed passionately once again and pulled away.

Max turned around and see their 3 friends at the first row, he smiled and they came around them. Alex wrapped Liz's shoulder "Don't you think that it was worth to come, Joker?" he asked with his usual tact.

TBC...IF YOU WANT IT...............................................................
the way he looks into her eyes.....
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Hi guys, I know that I didn't post here since long(REAL LIFE IS EATING ME). I hope that you didn't forget me, or at least that fic. I know that you wanted to know what happened between Max and Liz after the scorching kisses, but you'll have to wait a little longer. I have some things to clarify before. So if you're still stuck with that fic, I promise that the next chapter will be the one you are waiting for.

As always, I'd like to thank the faithful readers who are reading that fic and the lurkers too. I hope you be there for that chapter and I'm waiting for your fbs.


L-J-L 76- I'm sorry Lizza, I can't answer all your questions. I hope that you'll like this part even if you won't have action between Max and Liz.

begonia9508- thank you Eve, I hope you'll like that part.

SmileeUk- I hope that you won't be disappointed if there is no action between Max and Liz, but like I promised above, the next part will be all about them...

roswell3053- You're right, but you'll have to wait a little longer to see them devour each other. Don't mind?

touched by an alien- it took me 3 months to update it, I hope that you'll still stick up with me here.

anonymousarfan- you're right but she had to come to the evening party first and meet someone who....but read and you'll see why you'll have to wait for a while before they devour each other.

Liz86000- Hey Liz, glad to see you there. Sorry but as I said to Lizza, I can't answer to her questions for the moment. I hope that you'll be there after that part too.

Erina- yes, I know but you have to know that Max is waiting for her to pay her debt back like she did for the money. and believe me, he won't be that impersonnal.... but in the next part only.

Lizza- thank you, I hope you'll be here for that part

icequeen- you're right, they want each other very bad, but I have to clarify some things for Liz to understand her friends, before she gave in. I hope you don't mind!

anonymousarfan- hum! double fb, thank you! and sorry for the delay.

SmileeUk- I won't and I hope you won't too. Sorry for the delay.

I WANT TO TELL YOU THAT I'LL UPDATE "LOVE ON THE INTERNET" AND "MURDEROUS MASSAGES" AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.


Chapter 7

The country club "smelt" the power and the money. With its huge facade, the building was the symbol of the wealthy area of the city, the part of the city Liz never put a feet when she was younger.

As she parked her car at the entrance, the doorman looked at it, amazed, he explained to her that he has never seen such a amazing car before when he handed her the ticket. She put it in her red purse and headed to the fabulous hall.

Despite the little voice that was whispering in her ears that she didn't belong to that world, Liz felt at ease here and sure of herself. *Why couldn't I belong to that world? I've the same right than Max Evans to be here!* she thought, wiping an invisible dust on her long silky dress.

She knew that she was classy with that dress, she paid it a fortune. It was dark red with a deep low-neck in the back and the same bold low-neck in the front. She was amazing with that dress without knowing it. She completed her outfit with a pair of Chanel high heels sandals and a solid gold bracelet at her wrist. With her hair flowing around her shoulders, she looked like Hollywood star rather than the poor girl she used to be 15 years ago.

She wondered if the people that were attending that event would recognize her. She'll get the answer tonight. If not, she wouldn't mind as much as Max would be with her.

Max.... She had paid her debt back to him, at least the money he lent her but she knew that she had another one.... she would pay too. That was the reason she came to that event... To see Max Evans, to try to explain her move and, she hoped, to get him forgiveness.

When she came into the ballroom, the band was playing a song she knew and she moved her fingers on a invisible saxo while her body was swaying with the music. She was a little sad to have given up the saxo, she was always happy when she was playing music, that what made her life better when she was at high school.

Thinking about her youth made her think about the check Max gave her. She thought that she had lost her integrity taking the money. She was desperate to know that when she made that promise, she looked like her mother and that was a sin...a mortal sin...She had promised her body to a man in exchange of his money! She couldn't accept that and she felt ashamed for 15 years because of that.

Now, time came to hold her promise and she knew that she'll do it like she did for the money. The question was : did Max give her the money without second thoughts? Or did he give it to her knowing that, like her mother, she would repay him with her body? Those questions were torturing her. She accepted everything but not that she would be compared to her mother. She worked too much for that. She only had to wait to know the answer.

She looked around and saw Kyle and Serena who were talking with some friends she knew. She winked to Serena and, with her finger, asked Kyle to come beside her. He did it without hesitating "That song made me think about you, Liz" he said as he led her on the dance floor. "Do you remember the first practice day? I never forgot it."

"Neither I" she replied. If she wanted to learn something, she only had to let Kyle talk.

"You were so talented, Liz! You amazed us with you sense of the rythm and your talent with a saxo"

"Stop it Kyle, you're going to make me blush! It's not talent, my father taught me everything that he learnt from his own father..."

"And so on...I understand." he said

"Sort of, yeah...I learnt music as soon as I was able to hold a saxo, maybe before...My father always sat on a booth with me in his lap whilst he was holding the saxo. He showed me the music..I was 5 or 6 years old."

"I always wondered where did you learn? I don't know why I always thought that you had a professor for years.."

"Kyle! Do you really believe that my family had enough money to pay a music professor?"

"Sorry. I can't help to talk a lot and say things without turning my tongue 7 times in my mouth, I'm sorry."

"It's ok"

"Thanks G-d you have your father to teach you"

"He died when I was 8 years old. I continued to practice alone after his death."

"Whaou! Let me tell you that you worked very well cause you amazed us more than you know!"

*Ok, now, I'm going to know what I crave to know since so long!* Liz thought for herself.

She looked up at him "I didn't know that I had so many people admiring me!"

"I'm not surprised that you had no clue about it." he said continuing to dance again with her.

"Serena told me that I didn't know what the paquet was thinking about me...."

Another couple hit them, Kyle and Liz turned toward the clumsy dancers. "So, don't you think that you should excuse yourself?" Kyle asked them.

Surprise! That was Max dancing with Tess Harding.

"Hi Tess, tell me Max, did you forget how to lead you partner?" Kyle asked amused.

"We're sorry, I was engrossed by the music" Max said his eyes staring at Liz's mouth and low neck.

Liz captured Max's eyes and gasped softly. The world faded around them. Once again, that was like if they were alone in the ball room. She felt like if she was a bottle rolling around on a raging ocean. She felt that she was loosing herself in a sea of honey and shivered *Max...his arms...his skin....Max's bed...Ahh* she was thinking.

Tess's annoying voice startled them "Dear Kyle, I'm so happy to be here tonight. I didn't have the chance to see you since the begining of the weekend." she whinned

"Dear Tess, I understand your eagerness!" Kyle replied sarcasticly.

Liz had a hard time to repress her yearning to laugh at Tess. Annoyed, she turned around toward Max who was still staring at her with a look saying "Save me from that stupid woman!". Did she dream or was he really begging her to save him from that girl?

Tess was upset by Kyle "You're so funny Kyle! You didn't change. I always thought that YOU were the Joker of the band!" she said flirtously.

"Interesting! But what you're doing with Liz?" he asked ironically.

Liz began to be bored by this conversation and was about to go when she heard her name.

"Ah yeah, Liz! Who knows what is she doing now, the poor girl!" Tess said with contempt.

Shocked, Max and Kyle reacted in the same time "You're forgetting that she was the main person in the band. Thanks to her if we have been prized so many times."

"Oh tell me about it!" Tess said. Refusing to admit that Liz has such an importance in Max's eyes, she clung on him. "I wouldn't believe it!" she added with a smirk.

*Always the same bitch!* Liz thought. She was smiling to Max but glared at Tess "You can't know everything my dear!" she threw up at Tess's face.

Worried by the conversation, Kyle took Liz's hand and walked away from the couple. "Let's sit" he said handing a champagne cup to Liz. She couldn't help but glance at Max while she was sipping her drink.

"Don't worry, nothing will happen" Kyle said
"I'm not worried, I just want to be sure that she won't loose her top once again" she said bursting out laughing.
"Impossible"
"You know Kyle I learn to not trust people. And with his amazing eyes, Max is able to make anybody melting."

"His amazing eyes? Did you look at him? He seemed to be bored with her!"
Liz chuckled with pleasure. "Your Max is not interested in that girl, but that's not the same story with her. She's single again and she's looking for a prey"

"A prey?"
"Yeah, but don't worry." he said smiling.
"You know Kyle, that weekend, I heard a lot of things, I'm not worried. Nothing can reach me!"

Wanting to enlight the mood, Kyle took her hand "Liz, Max likes you."
That was like if he stabbed her in the loins. Liz felt as if her heart was going to stop beating. *Calm down Liz, breathe!* she cheered herself.

Completely moved, Liz breathed deeply and closed her eyelids *Max liked me... he was not in love with me....*If Kyle wanted her to die, he wouldn't have said anything else, the monster!!

She wanted to kill him, to strangle him, to make him swallow what he just said. But before she could do anything, Kyle added "Actually, we all liked you...a lot."
"WHAT??" she said widdening her eyes. He was aggravating his case.
"Any of us could forget the first time we saw you."

She shrugged, but Kyle continued "You could ask to Alex or Michael. They'll tell you the same."
More and more surprised, she frowned. "You'll think that it's absurd, but that day... You took our hearts...all of us." he said closing his eyes, like if he was remembering their past. "And yet, I remember you head. You had your hair cut like a scrubbing brush and your outfit....you looked like a hippy. But you were determined, we thought that you wanted to play the chief, that you wanted to lead the band. And when you played....we were under your charm...and we have been for 4 years."

Her eyes watering, her heart pounding in her chest, Liz couldn't believe what she was hearing "Me??? my...charm???" she stammered.
"Yes! YOU...your charm." He leant toward her and squezzed her hand "Your charm, your talent, your aplomb... You didn't care about what people could think about you. You never fake around people." he interrupted himself trying to tell the right thing "You never complained of your life, your difficulties..You were like a rock."

*How wrong you are Kyle! I was not strong, if you knew....*

"You impressed all of us with your way of life. You didn't care of anything, at least anything that was important in your eyes. I would have been happy to be like you then. I felt like if I was compelled to be the first of the class, the best student."

*Why did he tell me that? Why now? Here? After all these years?* She took a sip of champagne looking away, she didn't want him to see her emotion.

*Why did they hide so long what I was craving to know? to hear? That I was important in their eyes, that I was someone that count for them, a little...just a little!! that was all that I was asking for...* she thought

She felt warm inside, she was glad that they didn't reject her. She felt so lonely, so unwanted...*G-d, finally, I was not a outsider! I felt excluded since they were accepting me!*

"Kyle, you shouldn't keep that for yourself so long."
"I know. But I understood a lof later, much later." he said and reached out his hand to wipe a tear on her lashes.

"You know I felt lonely for 4 years. Lonely and sad."
"I don't agree! You have your life. You were following your path without anything to distract you. You thought a lot about the music and our band but most of all, about your future." he smiled "I don't know your secret, but I want you to know that you've influenced me, Alex and Michael. Even Max..."

She cut him off "But not Tess Harding! Didn't you see that she didn't recognized me earlier!"
"Are you kidding? She knows exactly who you are. All the people here recognized you perfectly. But for a reason you can understand, they are ashamed and don't know what to tell you. They shouldn't excuse themselves and don't dare to do it."

She didn't care of those people. Kyle had reassured her, she knew that she had her men's affection, that was all that she wanted. "Thank you Kyle. You made me feel good. I know what I always wanted to know."

"No, you don't know everything.. There is yet..."
"Yet? What?"
"Someone who has certainly a lot of things to tell you...Here he is..."

Max's POV

If he wasn't leaving the dance floor right away...if he didn't kidnapp Liz which was talking with Kyle, he would loose his self-control.

His desire was torturing him since weeks, he was burning since weeks. Since he had received that invitation for the weekend.

Since years - 15 ans - he didn't cease to wonder if fate would put Liz on his path. Would he see her again? Would he recognize her? And if yes, what would happen between them? And another question was always in his mind : did she think about him too? Did she have questions too?

She had already answer to a part of his questions, silently. At least, her body did, her kisses. How could he sooth the fire she lit? He never heard of someone who extinguished a forest fire with a watering can...!

While they were playing this afternoon, the attraction he was feeling for her increased. She had been so passionate and sexy, he didn't need it.

Now they were here and his blood was boiling like a burning lava. He looked at her all along the evening, spying each of her attitudes, each of her reactions. He had looked at her when she was dancing with Kyle, seen her when she was smiling. When they looked at each other, when she came into the ball room, he had seen her shivering.

She was amazing and he never doubted that, when she would take off the disguise she was hiding behind, she would be the most gorgeous girl he ever saw in his life. But the reality surpassed what he guessed. Liz was breathtaking!

He wanted to feel her hair on his skin. He dreamt of her mouth on him, he already kissed her but he swore to himself that he will devour it again before the end of the night.
He couldn't take his eyes from her, she was so sexy, so beautiful, the most beautiful girl of the event and he was sure that she didn't know it.

He figured her after a lovemaking night, her mouth swollen by his kisses, her hair dishevelled, her eyes full of desire for him. He closed his eyes and visionned her again.
He was contemplating her naked, indecent, exhausted in his arms.

He couldn't wait longer. He wanted to feel those emotions and for that, he had to cross the dance floor and to take her away from Kyle which was boring her with his conversation.

Did she feel him arriving? She took her glass of champagne and looked behind. He was near her table now and he felt stressed. After looking for her since years, he was reaching his goal now.
He made the last stride and ignoring Kyle, he leant toward her "Let's go..Let's go." he whispered to her ears.

His throat was dry, his stomach was hurting, though he stretched out his hand toward her.
"Where?" she asked panicked.
"Let's go!" he repeated again.

She looked at Kyle then stood up, her purse in her hands.

Kyle smiled, happy for them "That's it, go!"

She took Max's hand and repeated with a bright smile "Let's go!"

TBC...IF YOU WANT IT........................................................................







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hey guys, I wrote a new chapter and I hope that you'll like it. Max and Liz are looking for a secluded place....you'll tell me what do you think about it.
but like always I'd like to thank the readers and lurkers that pay some attention to my work. that really mean a lot for me.


candycane14 - oui je ne vis pas en France mais je suis française d'origine. and I just wanted to say that Max didn't know if he would ever meet Liz again after all those years apart. am I clear?

panda2001- I don't know if you got the answers you expected but here Max and Liz had something better to do than talk. Something they were waiting for 15 to do....

roswell3053- yeah, I think they'll be busy this time. I hope you'll like that part too.

begonia9508- thank you. Yeah Liz hadn't a real life when she was younger and she fought a lot to become what she is now. and you're right, they were and they still are in love with each other but they can't talk about it...love is sometimes something complicated. about the other stories, I asked for some help to know which fic could I begin to post after these ones, on the Work by author thread but no one is intersted to tell me (sad)

Erina - Liz has one word...but here it won't be about the debt...but I let you read the part. you'll see that...

POM- you'll be pleased I'm sure to see what happens in that part. and Tess? don't worry you won't see her anymore!

anonymousarfan- I agree and I'm sure that you'll like this part.. I didn't say that everything was resolved, but....

SmileeUk- I'm not that devil!!! and you'll see that when I promise something I hold my promise....I'm waiting for your fb to tell me if I did a good job!

I hope that I'll have some readers since I don't post that often. I'd like to tell, if you're interested, that I'll update next "Just an affair??" and I've already updated Love on the Internet. Hope you'll like all of this but who knows???

Chapter 8

They walked toward the first door that opened in front of them. There were lots of couples walking in the garden that wanted to avoid the crowd.

The night was warm and a sweet smell of roses was floating in the air. Impatient to escape the crowd, the light and the noise to finally be alone with Liz, Max led her along the dark alleys to find a secluded place.

"Stop Max! Where are you running like that? Look, don't you see that there were people everywhere!" Liz asked out of breath.

Max, disappointed, slowed down and looked all around. Actually, on the grass, under the trees, there were people...people were invading his area and he couldn't make them disappear. Nowhere he couldn't find a place to hide or a bench to sit....neither a bed to lie!

A bed?

Why did he need a bed? His desire was too violent, he was waiting for that moment since 15 years....He was waiting to have her in his arms....for 15 years of fantasies!...and he didn't want to wait for longer, not even for an hour, to drive to his house.

She was here! In flesh! Not in his dreams this time but completely real. In flesh and blood.. The woman of his sleepless nights...of his foolest desires... the only woman who is able to drive him wild.

"Max! Max! Please calm down. Let me breathe!" she begged panting.

Max stopped. Liz had a hard time to breathe, under the moonlight, her eyes were gleaming and her hair flowed like a ruban around her face. Slowly, she walked toward him smiling, her hand caressed the scar and Max shivered, *G-d her fingers were so soft!!*

She stood in front of him, their eyes locked "I won't flee Max, do you hear me? I won't flee...not anymore" she said sensually.

Shocked, he understood the message. His dream is coming true. She's going to give herself to him. She didn't express it clearly but he could read it on her pretty face.

Madly happy, he breathed deeply and he felt the air filling his lungs more easily. She consented to make love with him and he wanted her to burn for him, with him...totally. He stared at her, completely moved by her bright and serene smile. He was waiting for that moment since so long...

He sighed. He knew that they had to talk about the past but for the moment they have an urging problem to resolve. He grabbed her wrist with his burning fingers.

"Come with me Liz" he whispered.

"Where?"

He looked exasperately around, there were only the swimming pool, the tennis court or the golf field in front of them and so many walkers. "This way!"

She followed him without discussion. She knew that she had passed the non return point.

Max didn't talk, he was thinking that when they were younger he wanted her but when you're 17 years old, you're too impatient. And he didn't really know...torn between his feelings for her and his fierce yearning to live..

He had desired her with all his strength after the accident. He had that piece of paper that gave him the right to possess her. He had to wait, only wait. But then his desire was mixed with anger and revenge.

Today, everything is clear. He wants her without second thoughts, just because she is Liz. Liz, the carefree, the strong and insolent Liz, the beautiful, classy and so feminine Liz! and soon, she'll be his forever.

"Where do we go?" she asked again.

Max smiled, an adorable smile. "I have a fierce yearning of love" he said
"Ah yeah??"

"A yearning that lasts for years!"
"I hope that you went to the doctor!" she joked

"I don't need a doctor" he replied bursting out laughing. "I have my medecine in front of me"

While they were joking, they reached the swimming pool gate, unusually closed tonight for security reasons. As a member, Max had the access code and opened easily. The view was fabulous with all the lights brighting around the pool.

"Are you allowed to enter here?" she asked not daring to enter

"As a member yes, don't worry."

"And what are we supposed to do here?" she whispered

"I'm sure that you remember when I asked you to come to my swimming pool and you always said no... Tonight you can't refuse my invitation to the pleasure!"

Liz's eyes blazed like stars. "Because tonight I'll have some pleasure?" she murmured flirtously

He wrapped his arms around her and pulled her against his chest "I'm going to give you a lot of pleasure" he promised.

"Once?" she asked

"As many times as you'll want."

"How much time are we allowed to stay?" she enquired

"We've already lost 2 minutes."

He took her hand and led her beside the pool, he took some towels with them.

Max pulled a deck chair and put his jacket on it. "I hope that you'll agree to swim with me this time?" he asked untying his tie.

"Are you sure that we don't risk anything?" she replied as she slid her jewels in her purse.

"Don't worry, nobody will come if that's what you're afraid of. Only the rare members are allowed to come here by night. I know them and they're not here tonight."

He began to undo the buttons of his shirt. Liz was staring at him, moved to discover his body. Then, panting, she took her sandals off and sent him her most charming smile. The smile of a devilish temptress.

Completely aroused, Max felt his groin throbbing but he didn't want to hurry. He had to regain his control if he didn't want to spoil everything. He wanted to reach the peaks of felicity with this woman, Liz the only one who made him weak on his knees.

Liz raised her long dress and slowly pulled down her stockings, Max couldn't help but swallowed hard. Did she know that she was killing him? He won't be able to restrain himself from ravishing her if she continued like this.

Oblivious of Max's state, she pushed the straps of her dress and let her fall down on the floor. She bent to pick it up and put it on the chair. When she turned around toward him with a bright and so innocent smile, Max felt like if he was really dead and gone to heaven.

She was there, in front of him, in nothing but her lace white bra and the matched thong, waiting for him to make the next move, bitting her lips like a shy little girl. *How could she seem so innocent?* he wondered. He was certain that, beautiful and sexy like she was, she could have every men she wanted. Even if he felt that she was not the kind of woman who gave herself without a feeling, he was certain that Liz didn't wait for him to loose her virginity.

"I'm waiting for you to undress Max. I'm just with my underwear since you have your shirt and pants." she said hoarsly.

He looked at her, moved by her beauty, and smiled "You're right but don't blame me, I was looking at the goddess you became. I knew that you were beautiful when we were at school but you became breathtaking!" he said brushing tenderly her cheeks.

"You have to know Liz that I want you to be mine tonight. I came here for that reason." he said huskily

"The debt! I know." she said a little sad. She expected him to only want her because he was in love with her.

"The debt has nothing to do with my desire Liz." he replied locking his eyes with hers.

Liz was shocked *He was not here to make her pay the debt, he really wanted her to be his!* Liz's lips were trembling when she came closer "You have to know Max that I've decided that you'd be my first lover." she said it so softly that Max didn't believe what he heard.

He was certain that she was determined to give herself to him tonight, but her first lover??? And yet, that the words she used. He felt like he was going crazy, his thoughts were turning in his mind....*Was it possible that Liz...No...No....No...I'm taking my wishes for the reality! She didn't want to tell that she was a virgin! She couldn't be at her age!*

He looked at her and finished to undress himself. Now they were in their underwear, hungry for each other and too shy to make the first move. Liz was the most courageous and spoke first "Didn't you tell that you invited me to swimm with you tonight?" And without letting time to react she dived graciously in the pool.

"I'm waiting for you Max!" she said softly. He couldn't not respond to that sweet invitation. He dived in the pool and swamm toward her slowly, like a tiger toward his prey.

Liz was panting when she saw the burning desire in his eyes. She knew that she was going to give herself to Max tonight, but would he care about the gift she was going to give him? What if he didn't care for her and didn't appreciate to be the first man of her life? He even didn't know that he always had been the only man she wanted, since school.

"Don't be afraid Liz! I'm not here to hurt you, I'm here to give a lot of pleasure" he said as he took her in his arms. Liz was looking at him with her eyes wide opened like if she was terrified. *Could it be possible that I'm terrifying her? No, I didn't do anything to frighten her...So why?* Max was shocked to see that Liz was scared of him *She should know that I wouldn't pressure her!* he thought.

"Liz we won't do anything that you don't want, you know that!" he said softly.

"I just need a kiss Max." she replied softly.

He put his hands around her waist and pulled her toward him. Then he swooped down on her lips and ravished her mouth violently. He couldn't stop kissing her, he was a thirsty man in the desert and Liz was the spring of fresh water he dreamt to drink since ages.

Tying her arms around his neck, she wrapped her legs around his waist and abandonned herself to that violence. "Liz...."

He said her name against her mouth and she nibbled at his tongue. Groaning, he tightened his grip like if he was going to swallow her, invading her mouth feverishly, like a drunk man, like a robber who plundered a full of treasures cavern.

"You're so beautiful, attractive like the devil....you're desirable, breathtaking....you're fabulous my little witch...you're driving me crazy Liz...you're magic!!!" Max was unable to stop talking as his mouth and his hands were all over her body.

Liz felt her body shiver violently when Max's lips captured her nipple and sucked it. That was the first time in her life that she let a man approaching her this close, but that was Max, the man that obsessed her for 15 years.

She wanted to touch him too and with an hesitant hand she reach his stomach and even lower, a growl from him stopped her dead in her tracks *What have I done? Did I shock him?* she wondered.

Even if she looked like a modern woman, Liz was like a very young girl when it comes to her love life. She never let anyone approach her before and she didn't know how to react around Max. She wanted him as much as he wanted her but she was far from experienced in that field and she didn't dare to tell him...at least not really.

"Liz....Touch me again... please..." he pleaded "I crave to feel your little hands all over me." he said his eyes burning with passion.

Liz trembled, never, before tonight, she wanted a man like she wanted Max. Never she met a man who make her feel all the new sensations she was experienced with Max. Once again, her tiny hand flew toward his boxer, she tried to pull it down and Max's soft laugh froze her again *Damn! that man won't let me do what I want and yet he begs me to touch him!* she thought

"Liz....Don't be afraid..."

"Actually, I'm not afraid, that's just that every time I try to touch you, or you're growling, or you're laughing....I really don't know what to do with you Max!" she said a little upset.

"Sorry...I'm not laughing at you...and if I growl, I'm sure you know why... Please Liz, don't stop and touch me... I've told you.... I crave to have your hands on me." he said and to reassure her he bent and captured her lips hungrily.

Liz forgot to be scared this time and let her hand caress Max's stomach, he took her hand and put it on his cock. She froze when she felt it throbbing under her touch. She looked at him, his eyes were closed and he was panting.

"Maax..."
"Touch me Liz and I want to touch you too..." he groaned

She took him in her hands and Max felt like if he was dead, he helped her to stroke him the way he liked, then he slid a finger inside of her.

Liz gasped. Max was touching her very intimately and she liked it....Inconciously, she was undulating against him and driving him nuts.

"Liz....Slow down Baby....It will end before the begining" he said kissing her

"Sorry Max." she said shyly.

"Don't Baby... Do you like that?" he asked when he slid another finger inside her heat.

"Yeesss! Don't stop Max!" she panted.

She couldn't think clearly while he was doing his magic on her. No one told her that she would experience so many sensations, that she would feel her body burning with desire aching to feel his groin inside of her.

Max thrusted his fingers in and out until Liz came against his hand. When she opened her eyes, he felt a pang in his heart when he saw the passion shadowing her look. She was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen in his life and he was in love with her. She didn't know it but soon he'd tell her....

For the moment, all that he wanted was to bury himself inside her delicious body. "Liz, I want you Baby.... so much" he said and bent toward her lips and kissed her reverently.

"I want you Max... I want to be yours..."

Hearing that, Max grabbed her hips, raised her a little and penetrated her with one long thrust. The pain was sharp and fast and Liz cried out.

"Liz???"

Max was looking at her, stunned....shocked.... moved beyond everything....

Her eyes closed, motionless, she didn't speak, just trying to take breath.

"Liz??"
"Yeah"

She opened her eyes and smiled

"You're a virgin?" he whispered

"Not anymore..."

"But..."

She took his face between her hands and stopped his words by a scorching kiss "Don't be afraid, Max...Everything is ok."

TBC...IF YOU WANT IT....................................................
the way he looks into her eyes.....
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hey guys, here I'm with a new chapter of this fic. I hope that you'll like it. but before, I'd like to thank the readers and the lurkers for their support of that fic. I'd like to say that Max and Liz had been apart for 15 years so they have a lot to catch up...hope that you'll follow me! I could tell that I surprised you with my nookie part there, but that was the right moment for them to take that step in their relationship but as I said in my fbs, they were apart for 15 years, this is long! too long!

Erina - shocked? nooo! I can't believe it! and yes Max and Liz slept together...really. and you know what? since they didn't do anything for 15 years....they.....no just read.

L-J-L 76 - hey Lizza, here I am, I hope that you'll find some answers to your questions in that part. I'm almost sure of it. Hope you'll like the part.

candycane14- thank you! like I said the debt was only a way for Max to get her and he waited 15 years for that!! long huh??

begonia9508- Eve, I hope that the new fics will please you enough to follow me there like you do here. thank you!
and...No, Max was and is not a playboy. He hadn't time to analyse his feelings towards the strange girl Liz was when she was young, he was too young too. Now, 15 years later....he expected to get who he dreamt to possess since the day he laid his eyes on her : Liz Parker!

Gaby7tvm - thank you, I hope you'll like that part too!

roswell3053- Here is it! I'll be waiting for your impressions!

anonymousarfan - Yeah? I understand too, that's why I've planned to write a large nookie part....if you can wait till the next one to read the end of that nookie part!

SmileeUk- it seems that Erina's quote gets some people to agree with her. Hope she'll do the same for that part.



I'VE UPDATED "LOVE ON THE INTERNET" YESTERDAY AND I HOPE I COULD DO IT FOR THE NEW ONES AND FOR "JUST AN AFFAIR" SOON.


Chapter 9

Usually, Max would be sleeping after the lovemaking, but for the moment he couldn't do it, but only focused on Liz and reminded himself of the recent events that happened since he saw her again.

She was so beautiful, lying peacefully against him and he couldn't stop to observe her, to contemplate her, amazed. Despite himself, his eyes were devouring her, he liked her...a lot. He noticed that all the men were looking at her tonight and oddly, he felt proud of it but couldn't help the jealousy to eat him alive too. She was beautiful.... or maybe more.....Yes, she was more than beautiful. She was.....

He was trying to get free from his obsession but his eyes always went back to her, he couldn't restrain himself. He was there, lying beside her, trying to find the right word to describe Liz Parker.... Finally, a word exploded in his mind "INCREDIBLE!"

That was the right word "Incredible!" Liz was incredibly beautiful, incredibly unique, incredibly desirable.... And Max found out that, for the first time in his life, he was incredibly happy.

He felt the urge to wake her up, to kiss her, to caress her so moving body. Actually, he couldn't stop to think about that. He was only living for the desire he was feeling for her....but that was not only about her body, he needed her voice, her presence, all that made Liz. He was disturbed to always want to be with her and make one with her. That feeling was deep and throbbing.

What happened to him?

He was desiring Liz all the time, at every second and he never felt that before her. He had desired women before and after his divorce but that was never with that intensity, that painful and tiring persistence... Even with Katherine, he never felt that...

What did Liz Parker have more than the others to drive him crazy with passion and want? By which mystery had she that effect on his senses, his mind and his thoughts? Did she give him a magic drink without his knowing? No....that was not that simple.

Max felt overcome by a mystery he was unable to decipher. That was a sort of agony for him cause he was not used to be overcome by anything. He was not the kind of man who surrendered without fighting. He had to know....

Why did Liz Parker stay a virgin until tonight? She was beautiful, smart, charming.... She had everything to make a man the happiest of the universe and then..... she was a virgin until she gave herself to him.... WHY? Why him? Why only now... 15 years went by since they were at school and she was the same pure young girl. Nothing had changed really, like if life had stopped for them for those 15 years and had given a gift to them : the possibility to live what they had not been able to live when they were 17 years old.

He was happy to be the first man in her life...her first lover! That was a strange sensation and, in the same time, he couldn't help to feel proud. He knew that he was stupid to feel this way but he couldn't repress that deep feeling of possession.

And the most incredible thing was that he couldn't get enough of her, he wanted her to be his, every second of his life. He wanted to possess her again, to taste her again, to loose himself in her heat again...

Liz moaned in her sleep and blinked. "Max?" she asked shyly. Even if she let him possess her body in every way he wanted to have it tonight, she couldn't help to feel embarrassed under the sunlight.

"How do you feel, Baby?" he asked softly.

Liz was a little reassured by his voice and the tenderness she was reading in his eyes "I'm hungry" and to prove that she was telling the truth, her stomach growled.

She giggled and blushed then hid her head under the blanket. "Liz! I didn't know that you would still be so shy! You don't have to hide from me now, do you? Come on, give me just a morning kiss and I'll lead you toward Mrs Jones. She's making the most delicious pancakes you ever ate in your life." he said leaning toward her. She gave him a peck and tried to roll on the side, but Max didn't let her escape, his desire was overhelming him again, he pinned her against the mattress and kissed her with all the passion he was feeling for her.

"Maax" Liz moaned. She didn't know how he would react this morning and refused to let him see that she was full awake while he was contemplating her, but now that she felt how aroused he was, she forgot all her fears for a moment and let herself enjoy the fact that she was in Max Evans's bed for the first time of her life.

For 15 years, she dreamt of that man, she dreamt of what they were living now, and she had decided to not waste a second of that dream. She knows that tomorrow she'll return to her real life, that Maria will ask her about her weekend, that she'll have to defend that woman with that trial...she knows about all this, but this morning, like tonight, she has decided to forget what was not Max and her. She wanted to enjoy life for the first time of her life. She earned that right.

He kissed her softly, tenderly, like if she was the most precious object than he had to manipulate. He took all his time, tasting her lips, sucking them. Liz was surprised. She expected him to be as passionate than he had be the last night. That kiss was fabulously tender, in one word : magic!

Max held her tightly against him and his lips were everywhere, on her lips, her cheeks, her nose, her chin and were lowering toward the destination she was craving to feel them. Liz was shocked to see how much she wanted to give herself to that man.

She had defended women who told her about them, slaves of a man's love, she understood them. She was like them, Max's love slave, at least for that weekend.

She gasped and startled from her thoughts when she felt Max's hands on her breasts, playing with her nipples. He took one in his mouth and sucked it, since his fingers were kneading the other. Once again, Liz felt like if he was leading her to heaven.

Her legs trembled and she wrapped them around his waist *That man was able to make me feel weak like a little lamb, that wonderful and terrifying in the same time* she thought.

Max felt her wet core rubbing against his throbbing member "Liz you're driving me wild!" he cried.

"That's exactly what I want to do since I saw you the first time!" she replied, biting softly his nipple.

"LIIIIIIZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!" he couldn't repress his cry. That little witch was learning fast and if he let her, she would be able to "possess" him forever.

"You drove me wild last night Max, I was trying to make you feel the same!" she said innocently.


Max kissed her hard and bit her lower lip unable to stop. He wanted to swallow her and in the bottom of his heart, he couldn't help to scare of the effect Liz Parker had on him. He was obsessed.... possessed for the first time of his life.

TBC...IF YOU WANT IT......................................................
the way he looks into her eyes.....
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