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Title: Maxzan

Author: Francesca

Rating: Adult

Couple: M/L

Authors note:
Hey! so originally when I got this idea about an hour ago, this was supposed to be a one parter but my plans have changed and I may have to make it a little longer… not that, that’s a bad thing right? :wink:

Declaimer:
I do not own any rights to roswell... The rights to the show belong to Jason Katims, the WB, etc.

Summary:
OK, so I basically got the idea from Tarzan even though I have never watched the movie and only know little facts about the story line. I thought it would be clever calling it Maxzan … get it Zan? :oops: Ok, moving on Liz gets stranded on an island and finds Max, who is the king of the jungle.




MAXZAN


Part One

The small jet plane crashed landing straight into the open water. How could anyone survive an incident like that?

The three passengers inside held their breaths moments before, waiting in fear as they saw their end coming near. Then nothing.

It all went black.

But for one person, one fragile, petite person on that plane- the end had come and left empty handed.

Liz Parker opens her eyes, unaware of her surroundings.

What had happened?

Where was she?

All these different questions entered her mind, but no answers. None that she could remember.

She slowly sat up, groaning in pain as she felt the ach shot through her spine.

Looking around her surroundings Liz sees the sparkling blue water, of the open ocean. The golden sand and the clear blue sky.

Thinking back hard, Liz closed her eyes seeking her memory to figure out what had happened.

The last thing that she remembered was being seated on her private jet plane, that was taking her back home, Miami.

She had just walked out of her job in Boston. She had nearly worked there for 3 years, being one of the best news reporters around.

She knew that something was wrong, she was never really happy there anyway.

But the last thread was when her boss had asked her to have an intimate relationship and had promised that it would not interfere in their work.

After 2 years of working for the man and thinking that she knew him and that he was a great person who has been happily married for 6 years, Liz was absolutely crushed to find out that the only reason they are happy is because his wife has no idea of what goes on in the office behind close doors.

Liz wouldn’t let him talk to her like that. She knew Jesse’s, her boss’s wife- Isabel.

Isabel was a great friend to Liz and had been since before Liz started working at the studio in Boston. In fact if it weren’t for Isabel Liz would have never gotten the opportunity to follow out her dreams.

Slipping out of her glaze Liz looks around again, seeing the tall trees brushing together and the cool waves, splashing to shore.

She remembered boarding the jet in a hurry.

In the plane there was only her, the pilot and the co-pilot.

Where were they now?

Searching the clear water Liz tries to see if she can find any sign of the plane. After spotting nothing she finally stands stretching her sore muscles.

She turns to the land in front of her and begins to walk forward into the jungle that awaits, away from the sandy beach.

Walking shakily through the jungle she turns to every sound, jumping a mile into the air, afraid of her own shadow.

She was alone.

She was alone in the jungle!

What kinds of animals would be there?

Surly she wouldn’t survive on her own- she thinks over and over again, that one single thought of survival haunting her.

This was like that Tom Hank’s movie, the one where he gets stranded on that island all alone and all the people back home waiting for him think his dead-

Oh god!

What if everyone thought she had died and didn’t bother to search for her?

What was she saying; Liz had no one waiting for her.

The only friend she had was Isabel and she was positive that Isabel couldn’t do anything to save her.

Poor Isabel had to save her self, from the horror that was her marriage.

As she continues to walk through the jungle getting more inland she sees more of the beautiful, and scary all at the same time, scenery.

Liz thinks of all the things she would change if she had the chance to get off of this island.

All the mistakes she had made in her life.

Look where they had lead her.

To the jungle-

Alone!

When she was 18 Liz had left her family, who loved her more than anything to go to university in New York wanting to try and make it big later on in her life.

She had left her friends.

She could still remember the looks on their faces when she had broken the news to them.

They were devastated.

All their lives they had promised each other that they would grow up together, go to the same high school- being in Roswell helped that, since there was only one high school in the whole town.

But the one promise she didn’t keep which she had always said she would is to stay and go to university together.

Even if they didn’t that wouldn’t matter that much but as long as they had kept in touch.

Which they didn’t.

After leaving, Liz never looked back on that part of her life. Michael and Maria were the only friends she had ever had.

Her parents owned this small alien themed café, which made her the laughing stock of her school.

Mr and Mrs Parker were always to busy to listen though, when Liz wanted to explain her feeling or just have someone to talk to. It felt like they never really noticed she was there with them until the day she had told them she was leaving.

Why would she want to remember something like that?

About a year ago she had tried to get in contact with Maria, she found her address and current phone number.

When she had called though she got the voice mail- it shocked her.

‘Hello, you’ve reached Maria and Michael Garuin’ Maria’s voice answered through the machine.

‘Michael and Maria Garuin’ Michaels voice then appeared and before she could leave a message she hanged up.

Her best friends in the whole wide worlds for most of her life, had gotten married.

They hadn’t told her.

The thing about that though, is that5 she didn’t blame them.

She blamed herself.

It was her fault that everything was like this; if she had stayed in contact with them she would be happy now.

She wouldn’t feel like she is alone.

She would have her family.

After what happened in the office earlier today with Jesse, Liz had made a choice.

She was going home.

There was no way she could stay in Boston any longer.

Before she had her job at least which helped her stay calm and occupied but now she had no reason to stay.

She could go.

She felt awful for leaving Isabel, but believed deep down inside that they would meet again and that when they did she would see a new Isabel.

One that wasn’t tied down by her husband, one that made her own decisions and wasn’t going to let anyone walk all over her.

And now she was here.

On this island.

Feeling tired and exhausted Liz stopped walking, she sat down near a tall tree leaning her back against it and slowly allowing her eyes to flutter shut.

She didn’t want to be here alone.

That thought scared her.

But then again the thought of someone being here on this island with her scared her more than someone not.

Liz suddenly shot up of the tree when she heard movement coming from the bushes across from her.

Following the movement with her eyes as it came closer and closer she held her breath, frightened with the sight she was going to see.

Frightened that she did not know what came next.

“Who’s there?” She screams, her eyes quickly landing on a think stick lying on the ground next to her feeling.

She picked it up and held it tightly with both of her hands, clutching it to her chest for protection.

“I have a stick and I’m not afraid to use it!” she yells as a figure emerges from the bushes.

She lets out the breath she was holding, as a sigh escapes her lips.

Standing in front of her, staring at her with the most intense eyes she had ever seen, was a gorgeous man.

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

I'd like to say thankyou to everyone who is reading and everyone who is posting feedback. So thankyou to:


clueless: I'm glad that you liked the first part and I hope you'll like the second part just as much :), Thankyou for your feedback.

roswell3053: Thankyou for you feedback to the first part of the story, I'm thrilled that you are liking it :D

L-J-L 76: Hey L, I'm glad that you really, really like my story ... it brings a smile to my face :) LoL, thankyou for your feedback and i hope you will keep reading on to see what will happen next!

Natalie36:
Natalie36:

can i be lizane and he be my maxzan
LoL, I think we would all like to be Lizane at this moment, just because we would all love to see Max in nothing but a cloth, or even better nothing at all :wink:, thankyou for your fedback!

dreamer19: I'm back with a new part :P see i didnt leave it too long :) ... I'm glad you liked the start and i hope you will like this chapter as well, thankyou for your reply!

alizaleven: Awww ... thankyou for your reply, I just had to update again ... i'm so glad that you love the story already :)

kittens: Thankyou for your feedback :), i hope this chapter will explain more.

I hope you all like the new part and let me know what you think, also i will be posting the next chapter to Physical Education sometime tomorrow, but if not then i will post on monday :)

Have a great day!

cheka...:P








Part Two




Standing in front of her, staring at her with the most intense eyes she had ever seen, was a gorgeous man.

Unsure of what to say or what to do Liz made a quick decision and dropped the stick from her grasp.

She just prayed that she had made the right decision.

What if she had dropped it and he was one of those island people who like to kill anyone that steps on their property, or likes to take the young girls to their home in the bushes-

Liz then thought of that, would she really mind if this handsome man took her home?

Her eyes travelled the length of his body taking in his appearance.

He had thick brown hair with bangs that finished just above his collar, his eyes were dark and mysterious. He was wearing nothing but a piece of clothe that was wrapped around his lower half.

Liz cursed that cloth.

His body was tanned and muscly. His shoulders were broad and his stomach covered with a six pac which was glistening in the light, which shined through the canopy of trees.

He stares at her closely for what seems like an eternity, just taking in her appearance and eyeing her closely.

He had never seen something like this before.

It looked like him, Just- not like him.

How was he supposed to explain it?

He had been here all his life, this was his home and the only family he had were the animals which he was king of.

But this creature before him amazed him.

It was beautiful.

He might just decide to keep her.

She had her hair down and flowing down to just below her shoulders, her shirt was ripped in the front with buttons missing along the side. Her short grey skirt was ripped even further on the spilt that was on the side, exposing even more of her skin to his desire filled eyes.

“Hello” Liz says after waiting for some kind of action from this strange, gorgeous man.

“M-my named Liz” she says pointing to herself trying to make him understand what she was saying.

“Liz” the word falls from his lips in a bare whisper, sending shivers up Liz’s spine.

“Yes Liz” she says again with a slight smile, taking a step towards him while holding her hands to her chest, still motioning to herself.

“What’s your name?” Liz then asks as she points to him.

Not understanding what she was saying he just continues to look at her strangely.

He could understand some of the things she was saying, he didn’t know how or why, but he did- but other things made no sense.

Liz walks to him slowly, taking one step at a time not wanting to scare him off or make him think that she was a danger to him.

Stopping straight in front of him she moves her hands to his chest and points to him.

“Who are you?”

He’s breath hitched in his throat as her hands landed on his skin, sending all kinds of chills through him.

“Max” he says as he brings his hand up and bangs it on his chest.

Liz then smiles as she looks up at him.

Ok, so now that she knew his name what else was there to discus?

‘Ummm, what are you doing on this deserted island by yourself? someone as sexy as you should be in a museum somewhere’ – not really a great ice breaker she thinks.

Hold up a second.

They were on the island!

The island that she was flying over- oh shes so stupid, Liz thinks.

How could she not remember?

Instead of going straight to Roswell Liz had asked the pilot to do a detour and take her to an island.

She told him that it didn’t matter to her, which one he chose.
She just needed time to think things over.

Liz began to speak but before she could say another word a loud bang was heard through the jungle and Max instinctively wrapped an arm around her pulling her flush against him while tugging her along as he ran.

“What was that?” Liz asks frightened, but Max silences her by bringing his hand up to her mouth.

Liz just stays quiet as they hide in a forest if trees with bushes surrounding them and keeping them hidden from the footsteps that approached.

Maybe she wasn’t all alone on this island.

Maybe Max wasn’t either.

She was saved!

She watches as a young man walks with a blonde woman at his side, while 3 other men walk behind them.

The woman smiles wickedly wrapping her arms around the young mans waist.

“Oh Kyle, do you know that soon we will be rich? We will be swimming in cash” she says excitedly and the conversation intrigues Liz.

“Baby I can’t wait either” Kyle replies as he leans down to kiss her before adding, “All we have to do now is get rid of that jungle boy freak and we’ll be happily spending all our money, I don’t care what I have to do! I’ll knock down this whole jungle before giving up on finding that gold”

Gold?

Who were they?

They could knock down the jungle-

This was Max’s home from as far as she could tell.

Were they talking about Max?

They want to get rid of Max? Kill Max? NO!

Turning she glanced at Max who had his eyes downward staring at the ground with a sad expression on his face.

Liz knew at that very minuet that these people were bad.

They were not saved.

TBC...???
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Part Three




After they were alone again Max lead Liz through the jungle till they reached a huge tree which at the top had a box-like wooden – cubbyhouse?

When Max climbed the rope leading to entrance Liz realised that this was his home.

How is it possible that Max had grown up here?

How long has he been here for?

Max looked down once he was sitting on the edge of the wooded tree house, he smiles as he sees Liz struggle to make it up the rope.

Liz groan and grunts are she tries pulling herself upwards, only to fall flat on her back.

Max makes him way back down, he hovers above her checking for any signs of injuries.

After making sure she is ok, he wraps her arms around his neck and her legs around his waist, then begins climbing up the rope again carrying her with him.

Liz was too busy to notice that they had made it up the tree, she was in a daze and was burning with desire.

Her skirt had risen up and was now resting above her hips and she once again cursed that cloth which covered Max’s ‘member’.

Max saw the desire burning in her eyes; he knew exactly what she was feeling because he was feeling it for her.

He watches as he glaze lowers down the length of his body landing on the small piece that covered him from her intense glaze.

He slowly leaned down caressing her face, he watched as her eyes landed on his lips as he presses them against hers.

He didn’t know how he had leant to do that, but he was glad that he had tried.

Her lips were so soft and gentle that he instantly wanted more, but didn’t want to rush into things that may hurt his angel.

And that was exactly what she is.

She was an angel sent from heaven to him and he was supposed to take care of her and protect her.

Liz felt his need and parted her lips granting him the access he wanted, to explore her mouth.

She moans when she feels his tongue peek inside as his hand runs up her back to rest just beneath her breast.

Her moan sent shivers of desire shooting through Max and he breaks the kiss only for a minute, to lay her down before him and hover above her.

Liz realised then that the tree house was actually quiet big from the inside, even though there where no bedrooms or bathrooms, let alone a pool outside, what more could you want.

Your stranded on a deserted island with clear blue water, golden sand, a tree house and a jungle man…

That all made up for the things she didn’t have on this island.

‘I guess I’ll just have to find other ways of keeping myself occupied’ she thought with a sheepish grin at the thought of some other ‘activities’ she had in mind for her and Max.

A bright grin appeared on her lips as she watches Max struggling with the buttons of her shirt.

Having enough Max grabs both ends ripping it open and sending the last few buttons flying. The smile on his face was priceless though.

“Max” Liz moans as he kisses down her chest, wanting to know what was good and what was not.

When Liz moaned that assured Max that what he was doing was good and that he should continue.

He then hovered over her lower regions, yanking at her short skirt and pulling it off of her, leaving her in only her bra and panties.

Max gulped at the sight before him.

Never in is life had he seen something so beautiful, she was everything he had ever wished for and more.

Liz looked into his eyes and smiled when she saw that he was happy with the sight of her, she had always been uncomfortable with her body.

That would explain why she was a 26 year old virgin.

What Max didn’t know was that this was a first for her too, they would share that together and the thought of that made Liz happier than anything in this world or the next.

Liz reached behind her and unclasped her bra, pulling it from her arms and letting it fall to the floor of the tree house.

Max stared at her bare breast, the passion shining in his eyes.

Before Liz could register what was happing her head was thrown back in pleasure as Max hungrily sucked on her right breast.

“Oh god! Max” Liz screams in ecstasy.

Needing more though, Liz reachers down between their bodies feeling around until she comes into contact with the tie holding up the damn cloth that has been covering her Max.

Untying it quickly she trows it to the other side of the house, before reaching down to his swollen member and cupping him in her hand.

Stroking him softly she leans forward kissing his lips again.

Max’s hands travel down to her underwear removing it gently and caressing the skin left along the way.

Max continues to groan at the feel of Liz’s hands on him.

She was truly his angel.

And she was sending him to heaven!

When her panties joined the rest of her discarded clothing Liz eagerly wrapped her legs around his waist bringing his manhood in contact with her wet heat.

Liz watched as max looked at her, his eyes pleading for permission which she granted and with one smooth thrust he joined them as one.

It amazed Liz how they could communicate with each other with out the need for words.

She never knew how much one glance could mean, but now she had Max and everything meant a whole lot more to her.

Max groaned at the feeling of being inside of her.

She was so wet that he easily slid in and out of her and that made him very aroused.

He pushed harder and deeper while looking at Liz’s face searching for any signs of discomfort.

He slowed down been he saw a drop of water rolling down her cheek.

Where did that come from?

What she leaking water?

No, that was impossible- s-she was crying, he recognised then.

He stopped moving inside of her as he reached up and wiped the tear drop away, when he went to pull out of her though she stopped him by bringing his hands down to his backside and pushing him deeper into her.

Max watched her emotions and was glad to see that the look of pain that had mirrored her face moments ago was now replaced by desire and need.

“Harder” Liz screams thrusting her hips upwards and Max knew straight away what she wanted.

He started to grind into her harder, wanting to satisfy her every need.

Sweat began to form on their naked bodies and Liz threw her head backwards as she felt her walls begin to clench around his member.

“Oh Max!” she cries trowing her head back as she reaches her climax.

When Max felt her walls tighten around him, he didn’t know what was happening but as soon as he felt the burning sensation shoot through him, he knew that he had reached his peek.

He collapsed on top of Liz, but soon rolled over afraid that he would hurt her by his weight.

Liz didn’t let go though, when Max went to pull away she kept her arms wrapped tightly around him, keeping them joined as one.


*******


“What was that?” Tess asks as she turns to Kyle a furious expression on her face.

She was pissed, they had been searching everywhere for this hidden gold and they couldn’t find it anywhere.

It was time that they went to that cute, foxy jungle boy and made him lead them to it.

They had been walking through a field, when they heard the sounds of moans and screams of ecstasy.

It pissed her off that someone was having fun while she was out here looking for something that she should of already had.

But what pissed her off even more was knowing that the only other person on this stupid island was the jungle boy, which by the sounds of those screams- his name was Max.

Then the question is, who is Liz?

And why did she get to fuck someone as hot as Max? Tess wanted Max and she always gets what she wants.

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Part Four



Max and Liz lay sleeping soundly on the floor in the tree house. Max’s arms protectively wrapped around Liz’s naked waist, as she slept with her head resting upon his chest.

Max’s eyes fluttered open a smile gracing his lips as he stared down that the beautiful angel in his arms.

His!

That was the only word that ran through his mind at that moment.

She was only for him.

If anyone else ever tries to hurt her or take her away from him, he would make sure that they never see the light of day again.

Liz on the other hand was having an awful dream.

She was being saved.

Why wasn’t she happy about this?

Max!

If she were to be saved she would have to leave Max, I mean surly she couldn’t stay here with him and – he wouldn’t consider going back to Roswell with her…

Would he?

No! Of course not-

This was his home, this is where he belongs.

Liz suddenly springs up from her sleep shaking at the thought of being separated from Max.

It was an awful dream, especially towards the end, when she had turned away from Max not wanting to see the hurt in his eyes at her leaving him.

That would be the way it would feel if she left and he stayed.

Max wouldn’t be there anymore.

He would only exist in her dreams.

And she knew she would be hurting both of them.

Max took her shaking form into his arms holding her tightly as she trembled, she had a nightmare.

Max knew all about nightmares.

He had had them all his life, but the one that was the worst it the nightmare where he always ends up alone.

He doesn’t want that.

Especially now, that he has found Liz.

Now that he knows what it is like to be with her why would he ever want to be without her?

His heart was sore.

He had never had this feeling.

It was like he knew that it was for Liz but what was it?

Brushing her hair back and out of her face he looked down at her concerned.

She looked up at him and saw the love shining in his eyes and she knew that she felt the same way.

That’s why she couldn’t bare the thought of not being with him.

She had found him less then 24 hours ago and now hours later her heart was sore and aching with love for this man.

“I love you” she says bring her hand up to her heart and then to his.

Max knew exactly what she was saying and a sexy smile formed on his lips as he placed him own feelings.

He loved Liz.

Of course he did.

He had only dreamed of love.

He had never experienced it before and now he could truly say, love was great!

“Max loves Liz” he says moving his hand from his heart to hers, he watches as a lone tear falls from her eye as she flies into his arms, hugging him tightly.

No one had every told Liz that they love her, not even her parents. I guess they always thought that she would know, parents are supposed to love their children.

They shouldn’t have to tell them, right?

Max smiles down at Liz, with one of his sexy grins. He leans in and just when their lips are about to meet in a hot passionate kiss-

A loud bang is heard, throughout the jungle.

A gun shot?

If it was then the person was close, really close.

Liz held onto Max tightly as she felt his muscles clench underneath her grasp, he was still.

His eyes looking straight ahead.

And he was extremely angry.

He loosened her grip from around his neck, letting her arms fall to her side.

Placing her further into the tree house he swung around leaving through the opening before Liz could say a single word.

Liz watched as he swung from trees, his muscles flexing as he moved, as he moved further away from her.

And close to who ever was holding that gun.

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Part Five



Liz was huddled in the far corner of the tree house. It felt like hours since Max had left.

Was he alright?

Had he been captured?

-Killed?

The thought of Max dying made Liz feel like screaming, she wouldn’t live if something happened to her Max.

He was everything to her and he had managed to make her feel things for him that no one else ever could.

Making a quick decision Liz stood up as fast as she could in the small tree house, slowly making her way to the entrance.

She grabbed hold of the rope which lead to the land and swung her self around it, until her feet met the ground.

She began running in the direction that she saw Max leave through.

Hurriedly making her way through the jungle she fell, tripping over a large log which was hidden by shrubs.

She hits the fall with a grunt, turning carefully trying not to hurt her aching muscles anymore than they already are.

She stands bent over looking down at her knee which is scraped, with blood dripping down her leg.

When she stands she looks left then right, trying to decide which way to go.

Making her mind up she turns left walking fast, but not running.

Her head shoots up looking ahead of her, where she sees movement.

The trees brush together, while the shrubs underneath wack side to side dangerously, what was happening?

Liz runs behind a huge canopy tree, hiding behind it as it shields her from whatever was coming.

She hoped that it was Max but as she continued to watch the bushes being parted so viscously she knew that Max was not that violent.

Her grip tightened on the tree as she sees the young man from earlier today, Kyle with that blonde haired girl.

The three men that were with them seemed tired.

The sat down on a fallen log and watched as the blonde haired women began pacing up and down, up and down furiously.

Her angry glare boring a whole straight through Kyle.

“I want my gold!” she screams at him.

“Tess, it’s my gold- and we’ll get it when we get it” he says as he glares right back at her.

“Your gold?”

“Yes my gold” he answers as he comes to stand in front of her.

“It was me who found the map which lead us here, it was me that asked you to come along to help me find this tressure and the only reason I did that was because you were a great fuck! But now sweetie, I take it all back” he adds smugly.

“I will find this gold” he screams again, turning around making Liz gulp as she hurried to be hidden in the shadows.

“And I will do whatever it takes” he adds and before Tess can blink an eye he turns around pulling out a gun from his right pocket, shooting her in between the eyes.

The loud bang echoed through the jungle.

The only other sound which was heard is the scream of a female.

A not so hidden female, anymore.

Liz cover her mouth trying to stop herself, they were going to find her! They were going to shoot her just like he shot Tess.

Tears fell from Liz’s eyes as she struggled to breathe; she had just witnesses someone dying.

Even if it was a wicked ole bitch, no one dissevered a death like that.

Kyle swung his head around to the tree behind him, he had heard that scream.

He had heard that scream before.

Only the last time he had heard it, she was crying out in ecstasy, but now there was definitely fear in her shaky voice.

He looked then to the three men he had ordered to come to this island and help him find the gold.

He had talked them into it, saying that they could have 10 percent each- of whatever gold they found.

Little did they know that once they lead him to his gold he would kill them, them make his way back to the states where he would live like royalty.

Even if he didn’t have a woman by his side, his gold would make him happy.

The three men were still sitting on the log acting natural even after just witnessing the death of the young blonde woman.

They had heard the scream and knew that Kyle wanted them to go behind that tree and capture whoever it was that was hiding behind it.

But would they, NO!

They had been on this god damn island for three fucking days now and were still looking for this gold, which they didn’t have any proof that it existed.

The map they had been following had been lost.

That stupid blonde had let it fall into the river they were passing on their way through a narrow walkway two days ago.

And now they didn’t even know where they were going, or the way back to their boat.

Glaring at them angrily Kyle walked behind the tree wasting only little time.

Who ever this person was.

They were trapped.

There was no way of running now, and they knew that.

As Kyle saw her quivering body, he licks his lips hungrily.

“Hello, princess”

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Part Six


“Hello, princess”, his smug voice says from above her.

His eyes looked her up and down as if she were is next meal, making Liz shutter as she thought of what he might do to her.

By the way he was looking at her, she knew exactly what he had in mind and the thought of that made her sick to her stomach.

Her terrified eyes met his hungry ones.

He grabbed her by her arms, pulling her up straight before pushing her back against the tree with his body flush against hers.

Liz whimpers from his tight grip and struggles to get away from his wandering hands.

Freeing one of her hands she brings it up until it connects with his face, slapping him hard.

His hands fly to his cheek holding it in pain and Liz takes that opportunity to run as fast as she can in the opposite direction, not wanting to come into contact with the three men he was with.

Her legs gave out making her tumble to a stop, hitting her head against a rock knocking her unconscious

Before her eyes shut and the darkness takes her away, she sees Kyle hovering above her a sly smirk mirroring his face.

Help.

*****

Max’s head shot up in alert.

Something was not right!

He had gone back to the tree house to make sure Liz was alright. He had looked everywhere to find these people, but couldn’t.

He didn’t know where the sound had come from but on his journey he had found most of the jungle-

Most of his home, destroyed.

The plants were out of their roots the bushes trampled on and the trees knocked down in some areas.

He knew who had done this.

It was those three other things.

The four things which were the same as him, with that other thing that was the same as Liz.

How could those three men, that to Max looked as if they worked for that ‘Kyle’ guy, destroy his whole jungle?

How could they knock down trees?

Where they that strong?

He had seen that thing that one of the built guys was holding, he called it an axe-

Was that what had knocked down the trees?

When he had finally made his way back to the tree house his heart had fallen.

She wasn’t there.

Liz was gone!

That’s when he heard the heart wrenching cry of a woman’s voice.

Not any woman.

But his Liz.

She was in trouble.

Franticly he fled the tree house following her scream, swinging from tree to tree while hoping that she was ok.

If anything happened to her, he would kill who ever was responsible.

*****

Liz’s eyes fluttered open, her eyes then grew bigger as she looks around confused.

Then she remembered.

She remembered what a horrible day it had been, but at the same time what a wonderful day it had been.

Horrible.

The plane crush.

Being stranded on a deserted island.

Realising you weren’t alone, but with other men searching for gold.

Dangerous men.

Seeing someone die.

Getting caught by the killer.

Wonderful.

Max!

Being stranded on a deserted island with Max.

Making love to Max.

Telling Max that she loves him.

Max telling her that he loves her back.

All of those events in less then 24 hours, oh what a day it had been.

Unfortunately for Liz, this moment was a horrible one.

As she sits up her eyes collide with those of the dangerous man, Kyle.

He was looking at her as if he wanted to tear her clothes off of her, but then his glaze changed and his expression looked as if he wanted to tear her apart.

“She finally awakens” Kyle says as he takes those last few steps to stand in front of her.

“I would kill you right now-” he starts to say as he leans down to her level.

“- but I think I’ll have some fun with you first” he then adds answering her earlier confusion.

He wanted to do both!

Tear her clothes off of her.

Then tear her apart!

Kyle had been thinking.

After what had happened serval hours ago he felt like pulling the trigger of his gun and laying a bullet between her pretty eyes, just like he had done to Tess.

The bitch had slapped him.

And no body got away from slapping Kyle Valenti.

But then when he looked down at her and his eyes travelled the length of his body, he grew hungry.

When he finds his gold-

And yes, he will find it.

He might want to settle down and start a family and what a better way then making her be his wife, forcing her into it.

So what about the year!

Who would know what was going on, just because these days people weren’t forced into arranged marriages didn’t mean that he couldn’t make her marry him.

She would marry him.

Liz would be his wife.

It would be so easy, he laughed when he finally worked out his plan.

He would make her stay at home; she would never be allowed out! She would stay imprisoned.

In the mornings she would do as he asked.

Making him breakfast.

Have sex.

Then leave him alone till he was ready for her again.

Through out the day she would clean.

Why should he have to waste any of his money on cleaners when he would have her?

At night she would cook him dinners.

Clean again.

Then have sex with him again.

She would have his children.

As many as he wanted, when he wanted and when he was fed up, he would simply lock her in one of the rooms in the mansion and wait for her to rot and die.

But right now.

He would use her as bait.

The only person that could lead him to his gold was Max and Kyle knew that the best way to get to Max was by Liz.

If the screams of desire he heard earlier were any indication of how they felt for each other, meant anything to either of them.

Then Max would show up.

Kyle would make him believe that he will free Liz when he gets his gold, but then when Max leads him to it.

He will dispose of him.

Kill him, and take Liz for himself.

His plan was genius and it would work!

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Part Seven



“Get your hands off of me!” Liz screams as Kyle’s hands travel the length of her body greedily.

Rasing his hand he slammed it down of Liz’s face, slapping her hard and then watching as she fell to the flour defeated.

“You will do as I say” he orders.

Kneeling on top of her so that she was lying between his legs, he continues his journey of her body, while Liz struggles against his grip helplessly.

His hands fall to her, already ripped shirt and unties the knot holding it together.

He then slips his hands inside cupping her left breast with his right hand while his left hand holds her hands above her head.

Liz spits in his face as an attempt to make him stop what he is doing.

It felt so wrong.

“You slut!” he screams as he lets go of her hands and reaches into his back pocket pulling out the gun that he had shot Tess with.

“You wanna try and fuck with me now?” he asks, pointing it at her with his finger resting against the trigger.

Liz stilled.

She didn’t want to die, not yet.

She had only just found Max, she needed more time with him- so that he would make her feel all the things that she had always dreamt about feeling.

Kyle then goes back to her body, the gun still pointing towards Liz as his hands sneak under her short skirt.

Liz closes her eyes in disgust.

After making love to Max, Liz knew what it was all supposed to feel like- and this wasn’t what it was supposed to feel like.

Not at all.

Liz’s eyes flew open when she heard the rustling of trees.

Max! Her mind shouted.

Kyle was still too busy pulling off her skirt to realise that he was being watched by furious eyes.


*****


Max slung, holding on to the branch of the tree above him as the people below fell into his view.

It was her.

His Liz!

She was with Kyle, Max soon recognised.

His eyes grew big when he noticed what Kyle was doing to her.

His hands where wandering the length of her body, ripping off what was left of her shirt, while sliding his hands under her skirt.

Max breathing picked up in anger.

He watches as Kyle pulls out a black object, holding it to Liz’s face.

He had seen it before.

They had called it a gun. He didn’t know what it was used for but he knew that it made a terribly loud sound.

He knew that it was bad, the moment he saw Liz stiffen beneath Kyle.

His fists clench to his sides as he continues to watch unnoticed by either one of them.

Liz’s eyes close and Max can see the slight wetness falling for it.

It was a tear.

She was crying again.

But this time, it was because she was scared.

She was scared of Kyle.

Kyle had made her cry and now he would pay.

Climbing down from the tree silently Max came into view, still hidden from the vicious monster that was man handling his Liz.

Yes, Kyle would pay alright.

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Part Eight



Liz stayed silent as she watched the figure behinds Kyle step closer and closer to them.

Max!

She did not move, not wanting Kyle to know that Max was there.

If he did, then her Max was gone.

Stepping straight behind Kyle, Max made his presents know as he jumped angrily onto the other mans back sending his flying forward.

Liz managed to move away, before either man could land on her.

She watches as they struggle against each other, Max trying to beat the shit out of Kyle and Kyle trying to point his gun at Max.

Liz’s heart raced as she watched Max pull back before lunging at the man again, making his gun fall from his grasp.

Liz wanted to run up and take the gun before Kyle could get a hold of hit again.

But she was too scared.

The gun was still near Kyle.

There was no doubt in her mind that if Kyle reached his gun then it would be the last time she would see Max’s shining eyes.

Max pulled Kyle by the legs, taking him further away from the gun, which Kyle was trying to reach for.

Kyle was lying on his stomach, but Max quickly turned him over and began throwing straight punches to his face.

This was the bastard that was hurting his Liz.

He would not get away with it.

Liz made a quick decision.

Pushing her fears behind her, she run towards the gun grabbing hold of it and laced her fingers through it.

Pointing it at the two men, who were rolling around on the floor, each throwing punches at each other.

She tried to get a good view of Kyle, not wanting to miss and get Max instead.

But the opportunity never came.

They were too close together.

Kyle brought his hand down to his pocket where he slid out a pocket knife, which went unnoticed to both Max and Liz.

Flicking it open he plunged it into Max’s stomach before he could notice.

“No!” Liz screams as she watched the knife disappear into Max.

Her face falls as she sees all emotions leave from Max as he falls straight down, landing in the dirt.

Tears flooded Liz’s vision.

She continued to point the gun into mid air, not seeing as Kyle stood up and made his way over to her.

“Max” the sigh left her lips as she crumbled to the floor.

Wiping her eyes she sees the grin on Kyle’s face as he walks close to her.

With shaky hands she brings the gun up, pointing it at Kyle’s chest.

“I’ll do it” she shouts.

Would she?

Could she really take a persons life?

He just took Max’s.

But could she take his.

“I dare you to Liz” Kyle laughs taking another step further to Liz.

Just when he is about to launch on top of her a loud bang is heard through the jungle, as five sets of eyes looked on shocked at the scene before them.

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“Oh my god!” Liz hears someone scream.

Was she dead?

All she remembered that had happened in the last few seconds was watching the man she loved die before her eyes.

She remembered pointing a gun at Kyle, telling him that she wasn’t afraid to shoot him, but knowing that she truly didn’t have the guts to.

She remembered Kyle laughing before trying to launch on top of her to get the gun, believing that she wouldn’t shoot him.

Had she?

She didn’t remember pulling the trigger.

She hadn’t pulled the trigger.

Then who had?

She was the one holding the gun.

There was only one gun.

Where had the other gun come from?

Her head turned in the direction of the sounds and when her eyes landing on the five people standing in the corner near the trees, her eyes grew big.

“M-mum?”

“Lizzie” Nancy shouts as she runs to her daughter engulfing her in a hug.

“W-what a-re you d-doing here?” Liz stutters unsure of what to say.

She hadn’t seen her parents in so long that it was a real shock to her, let alone seeing them on the island she was lost on.

“We got a call earlier today from Isabel, she told us you were coming home and to expect you in Roswell, in a few hours” Nancy explains as she looks back and smiles at the young blonde woman who was standing next to her husband.

“When you didn’t come back, I nearly passed out” she continues.

“But when we found out that the plane never landed, that it left but never came out” Nancy says with tears flowing freely own her cheeks.

“I couldn’t breathe, I thought I had lost you baby”

“Isabel flew in after I rung and told her that the plane never came, she called a few airlines in Boston and they told her that something must have gone wrong, they said they would put on a search and they did”

“The found the plane sinking in the water and a near by island, this island Lizzie” she explains.

“I knew that you were still alive, your so much stronger than any of us- so we didn’t give up. We got a private jet plane and came here and what do we find?”

“We find our little girl, stranded with crazy men who want to kill her, who point a gun at her- when you got the gun we knew you wouldn’t pull the trigger and we knew that he would” Nancy says turning to face her husband who still held the gun.

He dropped it in the dirt and spoke.

“So I killed him before he could kill you”

“Oh daddy” Liz says jumping from her mother arms and into her fathers, which quickly engulfed her.

“I love you Lizzie, I always have and I should have told you all the time- but I didn’t and I’m sorry. But I never wanted to loose you” Jeff says as he pulls away, looking into his daughters tear filled eyes.

“I love you too daddy” Liz says then turn in his arms to face her mother.

“And I love you mum”

“I’ll always love you Lizzie” She replies with a sweet smile but her eyes soon fall to the man lying on his stomach in nothing but a small cloth covering his lower half.

Liz’s eyes land on Max as well and her eyes fill with tears again.

“Who is he Lizzie?” Isabel asks as she steps closer to Liz, laying a supportive hand on her shoulder.

“Max”

She walks to his side kneeling down, bringing her hand up to his face as she brushes his bangs aside.

“Max?” she asks, wanting to hear a reply.

Needing to.

She couldn’t loose him.

She loved him.

He loved her.

They needed their happily ever after.

Leaning her head on his shoulder and she continues to cry, then she hears the muffled groans leaving his lips.

Her head flies up and her lips let out a sigh.

“Max?”

“Liz”-

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Part Ten



“Oh god Max, you’re alive!” Liz screams in relief as she hugs Max tightly, squeezing him in her arms, forgetting about his injury.

Max’s groan, makes her remember and she slowly pulls away while helping him turn over on to his back.

He smiles up at her while reaching his hand up to her face, to caress her cheek.

His eyes then switch to turn to the other five people watching them and worry fills his eyes as he brings his hands up to protect her, as much as an injured man could.

“No, Max its ok” Liz says pushing his hands aside, holding them in hers as she pulls his head down to rest on her thigh.

Max understands her and lets her take his hands in hers, still eyeing the five people suspiciously.

“Max this is my mum and dad” Liz introduced gesturing to them.

They both smile genuinely in greeting.

“You can call us Nancy and Jeff” Jeff tells the young man.

“This is Isabel Ramirez” Liz says and Isabel steps forward shaking his hand in greeting and Max just smiles at Liz’s friend.

“Its actually not gonna be Ramirez for much longer” Isabel says as she smiles at Liz.

“I know what Jesse was up to, I knew from the beginning but I couldn’t blame him because I fell in love with someone else too” she explain.

“So I only found him after I realised Jesse was a cheating son of a bitch but I knew I was going to leave him, as soon as I met Alex” she continues, with a smile as she thinks of Alex.

“I filed for a divorce two weeks ago, we had been talking about it for ages now but Jesse had threatened me and said that if I embarrassed him, he would kill me. So I couldn’t tell anyone, not even you Liz- my best friend” she adds smiling at Liz and Liz smiles back happy that Isabel can finally move on.

“Alex knows about Jesse he knew when we first met, but he still loved me and we got engaged before Jesse found out about us- there’s nothing he can do now though and I’m so happy that I’ll be in Roswell with best friend” she adds, confusing Liz.

“Roswell?”

“Alex’s hometown, he wants to stay close to his family and I want to go anywhere he is” she explains.

“Oh Isabel” Liz says hugging her friend.

Isabel then moves back and Max just smiles up at Liz, happy to be here with her and the people she loves.

He loved seeing a smile on her lips and if these people were what made that smile then he would greet them with open arms.

“This is-” Liz starts, but stops as fresh tears start to build up in her eyes.

“Hey Lizzie” Maria smiles with tears flowing down her cheeks as well.

“Hey” Liz greets back unsure of what to say.

Max on the other hand just sits confused as to what is going on, still in pain but nothing he can’t handle.

I mean come on, he grew up in the freaking jungle all alone.

“Hey” Max says, copying Liz’s greeting and making Liz giggle at his new word.

She then looked back up to Maria and Michael, who was holding his wife in his arms while smiling down at Liz.

“How you going Zi” Michael asks sending Liz a friendly smile.

Both Liz and Maria run to each other throwing their arms around one another, happy to finally see each other again.

After so many years no words were needed to tell how they felt.

Michael walked up to the girls and when Maria pulled away he leaned in and hugged Liz tightly, while Max sat glaring at him with jealously.

Liz saw this and sent him a reassuring smile, telling him that she was his.

Max relaxed but Michael had already noticed and pulled away holding his hands up walking over to Maria saying.

“Don’t worry Max my boy”

“I’m a happily married man” he adds looping an arm around her waist.

Liz then moved back to Max’s side nervously.

She was saved.

Shouldn’t she be happy?

Shouldn’t she be screaming from the top of her lungs?

Why wasn’t she?

Max.

She was going to go and Max had to stay here in the jungle.

This was it.

She was saved, but now all she wanted was to not be saved.

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