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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 11/15/08 chpt 14 p. 11

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A/N: This is going to be a long chapter, partly because I want to approach the end of this story as soon as I can. I thought I'll update today since I already had this chpter sitting in my computer.

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Chpt fourteen

"Okay Micheal, you got it now?". Maria asked him for the hundreth time. Not long ago Liz had just called to confirm that part one of the plan had been easily done thanks to circumstances. The next step was also intruiging.

"Yeah. I got it! ". Micheal exasperated. Maria's fussy attitude was making him very tense.

After she had blurted out what Tess was upto and who she really was, Micheal felt like someone had grabbed a frozen turkey and smacked him across the face.

Sure, he was wary of Tess in the begining but over time, he let it go and was okay with the fact that she was trying to 'help' them all and he actually had begun to trust her when she helped him develop his powers and he sort of liked to think she was some kind of sister to him.

He wasn't entirely pleased on finding out her true nature. It worried him that it might be too late and he refused to let Maria see that side to him. "You're worried aren't you?". Maria softly asked, pulling the man she loved closer to her.

She knew Micheal would do a lot to hide his feelings and try to cover it up with a mask. But she knew better. She knew how he felt by reading his facial expression. He might have not noticed but she did.

"I...am...a little worried." He shrugged, hating to admit it as Maria stroked his cheek tenderly.

"It'll be okay. We won't let anything bad happen to each other."

Micheal nodded and let her kiss him. "Okay. I'll be off now." He said, withdrawing slowely. Maria bit her lip as he brushed past her and left.

She hoped that one day, Micheal would be able to show her him without being ashamed of himself.

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Max waited in the crashdown for Micheal's arrival. As soon as the door opened, he got ready. Micheal looked around before storming over to Max and sitting down.

"Are you sure about this because if not then.." Micheal said but Max cut him off.

"Micheal, right here, right now." Max said with urgency. "We need everyone to witness it."

"Okay," Micheal nodded. Max passed him the tabasco sauce. "What's this? Scooby snack?". Micheal joked before opening the cap and lifting the bottle and parting his lips to tilt in the spicy sauce into his waiting mouth.

Seconds later, Micheal was choking and got up, pushing a waitress and grabbed the plate off her hands and smashing it to the floor. "It's hot! It's hot!". He yelled, putting his hands to his throat in a bizzare behaviour. Max shot up and looked around nervously.

Everyone stopped and started at Micheal in confusion and curiousity.

Jeff stopped to see what had happened and Micheal was already on the floor, writhing in pain. Max hesitantly bent down, took out a pair of shades and put it on Micheal's face. "Micheal we gotta go." Max said, attempting to haul him back on his feet.

"I'm on fire! I'm on fire!". Micheal yelled louder, as rehearsed.

Max finally managed to pull him up and drag him towards the exit. Jeff Parker rushed to see what the matter was. "Is he alright?". Jeff pointed at a trembling Micheal.

"He's just not well." Max lied quickly before exiting the crashdown leaving everyone wondering what the hell was wrong.
Max drove Micheal to the Valenti's and called Isabel on the way. When he had reached the house, he put the ignition of and stepped out with Micheal.

"Right, let's do this man." Micheal said before throwing himself in Max's arms as Max dragged him to the Valenti's porch. Max frantically ran the bell.

Within seconds, Jim hastily answered it and was surprised to see a pale Micheal heaving in Max's arms. "He's sick." Max said. "Can we come in?".

Jim stepped aside to let Max bring himself and Micheal in.

"What the hell is wrong with Micheal?". Jim asked, shutting the door as Max put Micheal on the sofa.

Max turned around and looked worried. "He's dying." He finally said as Tess made her way downstairs and Max saw her. "I think that the illness had come back and now I can't do anything. The healing stones won't work and I've tried everything." Max panicked.

"What sort of illness is this?". Tess curiously asked making her presense known. Jim glanced at her and then looked back and forth at a shaking Micheal and a worried Max.

"He had this before." Max gasped. "When he went to that ritual at the indian reservation almost two years ago, he just started to sweat, talk to himself and shake uncontrollably. Just now he was yelling and screaming in the crashdown."

"That's strange." Tess narrowed her eyes.

"That is strange." Jim agreed, rubbing his chin. "I wonder what could have caused this."

Tess grabbed a blanket from the cupboard and went to Micheal to place it on it. "Right now he needs warmth otherwise he will go crazy."

"It's something more then that." Max panicked. "He...had tabasco sauce which I beleive set it off. He had the whole bottle." Max explained.

"Must be an extreme." Tess said, placing a hand on Micheal's forehead. "He must have had too much of an extreme which conflicted with his ahem..cycle."

"What do you mean by cycle?". Jim asked.

"Every male alien go through a testosterone cycle thingy. Basically they have needs and if they overfill their needs for example Micheal's desire for tobasco then they start to go in spasms and eventually go schizophrenic. It's some time of speech schizophrenia where speech is disorganised and the brain reaction becomes slower."

"Uh-huh." Jim nodded. "What else can it do?".

"It can't eventually kill." Tess said apologetically.

"What can save him?". Max intervened.

Tess paused, thought for a while and then smiled. "He needs to go home for the cure."

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When they fed Micheal some honey to 'calm' his nerves down, Max decided to have a talk with Tess as they watched a sleeping Micheal from across the room as they leant against the wall. Max couldn't stand to be next to Tess at all but he wanted to know the reasons behind her behaviour. They had all accepted her and made her feel welcome in their gang and in return she had betreyed them for no apparent reason.

If she wanted to take Liz's place then Max thought that was absurd. This game of cat and mouse was fucked up and was really immature and stupid. Tess didn't realise that no one would be able to take Liz's place in his life, yet she continued to play those games.

"Thanks for everything you know." Max forced out from his lips. "Whenever we needed you, you're always there." He knew this was bullshit. She was only there, waiting for her cut and nothing else. She didn't give a damn if anyone of them suffered, he wondered if she cared at all? "I don't know what I did to deserve to have a friend like you."

Tess smiled and looked at him. "I think in the past life, you must have been one great husband."

Max wanted to scoff. That he didn't know, the memory retrivals were all bullshit. He might have not even been married to this sickly monster in the past life, Heck he could have been a pauper who might have been murdered by her or Kivar.

Max froze as Tess's finger curled around his hand, her icy fingertips sending chills into his senses. "I should thank you for giving me hope..of living." She smiled and rested her head against his stiff shoulder.

"Yeah." Max held his breath, trying not to pull away sharply. Instead he used his other hand to remove Tess's hand from his left hand and then turned her to look at him. "Tess..whatever it takes to save each other, I'm willing to take that chance. If it means going back to Antar to save Micheal...then let's go."

Tess blinked. Was she hearing right?

Did Max Evans just say he would go home ? Which meant he'd leave this town, his friends and most importantly Liz behind?
"Oh..you would."

"Yes." Max said determined to convince Tess that he was telling the truth instead of a lie.

"You would leave everyone behind.." Tess asked needing a little more persuation.

"I don't care. All I care is about the four of us." Max snapped. "I've had enough of putting other people first. From now on, it's only you, Isabel, Me and Micheal. I should have looked after all of you before instead of messing around."

Tess jumped at Max's words. She was happy. Finally the King had shared her point of view. "I have the key, we can leave whenever you want-" She began but he cut her off.

"Now!. Max said. "Let's leave now."

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After when Isabel had reached the Valenti's to be explained what the situation was, they all had left for the pod chamber. Tess was more then happy to take her key and her book in order for the granolith to be activated so they could all go home. Max had raced to the cave with them and had asked Tess for the key.

"So this is the key right?". Max asked, as she handed them the key.

Tess nodded, not thinking it was necessary to tell him that she had gotten it off Liz. She would make sure of it that he wouldn't remember Liz once they left for Antar and then she would have no barries to take him as her husband and get pregnant with his child. This was pure joy for Tess. She loved it. She wanted to thank Micheal a thousand times for being ill right now.

Althought she was bummed she hadn't been able to sleep with Max yet. She would dream of all the sex they would have in Antar, away from that bitch Liz and all those pathetic humans..oh the royal bed, across the silky draps and crown jewels..it would be better then a setting on Earth she supposed. And she would she queen too.

"It normally takes a whole day to be activated..if you want to go later that is." Tess rolled her eyes. Any more delay, that Liz Parker might make a move on her man.

"We're leaving now."

"Max are you sure...this is all too fast." Isabel said in a broken voice. "I just left a clip for our parents and I am just..so unsure about this whole thing." She said, remembering her role in this plan as she and Alex had discussed it before.

"Isabel, what is important is the four of us staying together no matter what. I'm sorry to say but nothing else matters." Max bit back the bile. Of course they did matter, his parents, friends and most importantly Liz who was the basis of his existance.

He bent down and inserted the key into the slot.

The key went through and the lights beamed up. Isabel hugged Micheal closer to her as they watched the lights bright up and the alien symbol at the side of the granolith light up and beep.

Max then pressed a button.

Much to Tess' dismay, he pressed the hold button.

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Chpt 15

Liz stirred as the small vibrations ran throughout her body. The sound of the tyres squealing as it rubbed on the granite floor and made a violent turn. Her ice cold fingers trembled as she felt a stinging cut on her bottom lip.

"The bitch is awake." A harsh female voice announced. Liz found herself starting at the dupe of Isabel.

"Lonnie." Liz croaked, fighting every ounce of her being to get up.

"Don't bother. We chained you up real good." She spat, pointing at the heavy chained shackles Liz found her hands locked in.

She wondered how they were able to get to her so fast. The last thing she remembered was clearing away in the crash down and then darkness...

"You're not going to kill me are you?". She asked, wondering if that was the case. If they had chosen tonight to end her life and her fearing that Tess had already known about their plan to set her straight all along.

Rath who was driving, was chewing on his gum and turned around. "Aww, shame we have to waste such hot body." He leered at her. "I could have had a slice of that cake." He winked at her.

"Tess set you guys up to this didn't she?". Liz realised, as she couldn't think of any other explanation to why the dupes would kidnap her.

"Apparently you are in the way of us getting home." Lonnie replied. "And if you're in the way, then you're gunna die aren't you?". She said with irony.

Liz fumed and fumbled with the heavy chain. "Babe, those are tight." Rath laughed, glancing at the rear view mirror. "We're gunna have a lot of fun with you tonight."

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"Where is she?!". Max demanded within two seconds later Tess had vanished from their sights.

"She mind warped us." Michael cried in agony. "That's what."

"Oh god...Liz". Max said, running towards the exit of the cave. He took out his phone as soon as he left the pod chamber and dialled her number.

No answer. "Max, what's wrong?". Isabel asked her worried brother. If Tess had really escaped then it would mean disaster for them. Their well thought plan had failed and Tess had won...it would be their demise and what if what Liz said could come true..then they were all screwed.

"Hey guys!". They heard the shouts from down below. Michael was the first to notice and jumped over the boulders and towards the three who had rushed to them.

Maria fell into Michael's arms. "They took her. They took Liz." She cried in horror.

Michael turned around and gave Max the same grim look he wore on his face.

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When they reached their destination, they ripped Liz out of the car and forcefully dragged her in the observatory. Lonnie grabbing a fistful of Liz's perfect silk hair and pulled her as a person would drag their dog on a leash.

"Ow!". Liz cried in fury as her head began throbbing in pain. "Let go of me." She struggled to break from Lonnie's strong hold but with the heavy chained shackle on her wrists, that was impossible.

"Shut up bitch." Lonnie snapped and with a mighty force, threw the small brunette to the floor. Liz's knees were grazed and she winced in pain.

"You die here Liz." Rath clapped and whooped. "This is your Taj Mahal aka your tomb."

Lonnie smiled as Rath joined her. "We will so enjoy watching you scream as we kill you." She purred.

"Unchain her." Rath commanded Lonnie.

"What?". Lonnie looked blanky at Rath.

"Unchain her. We're gunna have fun with her before she dies." He rubbed his hands together. "Besides, I've been dreaming of this moment." He looked at Liz who tried to pull herself of the floor.

"You won't get away with this." Liz remarked, voice edged with anger. "He's going to come for you and when he does..boy you're gunna get it bad." She said, knowing her Max would never leave her in the hands of evil.

With a wave of her hand, Lonnie unchained Liz. "Bitch, let the games begin." Lonnie snarled and as soon as Liz was able to get up, Lonnie rammed into her.

Liz felt air rush from her lungs as she was pulled into the ball by a furious Lonnie. She let out a moan of pain as she tightened her fists and elbowed Lonnie in the face before delivering a fully blown punch across the face. She was no less either.

Lonnie staggered back and pressed her fingers to her own bloody bottom lip. She looked at her blood and looked at Liz. "Not bad for an amateur." She cracked her head sidewards.

Rath ripped open another packet of gum and shoved it into his mouth after throwing the packet on the floor. He knew he was going to enjoy this cat fight. He loved it.

Sitting on the steps, he watched the two females.

Lonnie flicked her hands and Liz was shocked as she noticed that her nails were growing longer, just like a lioness's claws lengthened. "Bet Isabel's manicure is nothing like mine." She hissed, bringing her hand closer to her face and then suddenly drove forward to attack Liz.

Liz dodged out the way in time, causing Lonnie to fall hard on the wall and using her sharp nails to leave a deep dent.
"Bitch, that's gunna cost you!". Lonnie said, blowing the dust of her nails.

Liz climbed onto the rails and swung herself up from the floor. Climbing each pole carefully, making sure she held on tight.
"Oh...you're a climber." She heard Lonnie comment from underneath.

Lonnie did the same as Liz and leapt onto the poles. Scratching the metal with her very sharp nails. "Someone's gunna die tonight." She laughed, hissing slightly.

Liz ended up on a platform and picked a direction to go in. Rath followed them, making sure he would not miss a single thing.

"Boo!". Lonnie said, suddenly appearing before Liz. "Did you miss me?".

And then began swinging her nails to scratch Liz's beautiful face. Swiftly Liz, moved out of the way to avoid being scratched, she stepped backwards and gripped the poles on both sides before swinging up and kicking Lonnie twice straight in the jaw with the heels on her boots.

"Ooh that's gotta hurt." Rath said and that caused Lonnie to go even more mad.

"I'm gunna kill you." She thundered at Liz and ran for her again. Liz threw a punch and Lonnie gripped her fist, pushing it down and then pushed Liz back and giving her no time to react, drew a hand and scratched just below her neck.

Liz winced in pain. "Fuck!".

"Fuck that's gotta hurt!". Lonnie laughed and grabbed Liz's hair again, pulling her head back. Liz's fingers automatically went to pry Lonnie's fingers of her hair. Lonnie bent down to Liz's chest and smelt the fresh blood from below her neck and smiled, knowing she had caused that. "I've always wanted to kill you." She admitted and then pulled her face closer to Liz's. "Guess I'll have that chance tonight huh?".

Just before she could draw a fatal blast, Liz's pendant began to glow and the energy seeped into her skin and Lonnie who was fascinated watched as the glow ran up Liz's throat and into her eyes.

"Huh?". She gasped, but before she could react, Liz's eyes shone blue and shot laser beams from her eyes, hitting Lonnie full blast. Lonnie let go of her and fell across the room, hitting the wall and then falling more then thirty feet down and met her deadly end.

Liz gasped and fell to the floor, shocked at the energy surge within her. Rath, dissolved his chewing gum and watched in shock as Lonnie was just killed by Liz. His eyes glared at Liz.

Liz, who was barely recovering from the shock was approached by a hasty Rath who grabbed her aching shoulders and plastered her to one side of the pole.

"What did you do!". He demanded, starting at her face. "You're not supposed to have powers!". He yelled and then pushed her off the platform, causing her to fall.

Liz fell on the hard cold floor and screamed as her spine felt like it was shattered.

Rath, gripped the pole and threw himself off. He landed on two feet and pulled his sleeves up. "Get up bitch." He growled and raised his hand.

Liz screamed louder as he used his powers to push the pain in her body a little harder, causing it to spread.

"What am I doing?." He said, using his other hand to take out a camera. "I should be filming this." He switched on the camera. "Because..after I kill you..I would like to kill your mate."

Liz squeezed her eyes shut as the pain spread in her sore body. "Ahhhh" She screamed as Rath switched the volume of pain up.

"Ahh that's it." He said, zooming in on Liz's face with the camera. "Your Max shall see how much pain I caused you before I kill you."

"His precious beautiful soulmate, dying in the hands of his enemy." Rath said and leaned closer to Liz.

He pressed a hand to her stomach. "He healed you right there did he?" He whispered in Liz's ear.

"Your mate fixed you right there." He pressed more firmer to her abdomen and filmed what he was doing the same time. "Max would not like me to touch you would he? He'd go mad if he sees my dirty fingers all over your beautiful body."

He sneered. "Well, your mate is a selfish bastard! leaving you to die at this moment." He lifted his hand of her stomach and then used his powers to focus on her.

"What are you doing to me?". Liz's lips trembled in fear.

Suddenly a sharp rip in her stomach caused her to cry out loud. "Ahhh!". She almost chocked back the tears as she felt the warm blood trickle down her stomach. "Oh god no." She whispered as she realised what he was doing to her.

"I'm undoing what your Max did to you." Rath replied.

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Liz screamed in pain as it intensified, more blood seep from her stomach and she could actually feel the bullet lodged in her abdomen.

Straight away her thoughts of Max filled her head. She wanted Max so badly. The thought of not ever seeing him again made her panic and scream louder.

"Yes..baby...scream so hard that it pierces the heart of your mate." Rath grinned, holding the camera straight.
Liz's back arched as she wriggled, trying to move. She could smell the metallic blood from her. It made her feel sick what he was doing to her.

"Looks like it's not enough." Rath said and focused on tearing the tissue more fatally.

"ARGHHHH!". Screamed an agonised Liz, squeezing her eyes closed, trying to endure the pain.

He began to laugh at her crying out in pain. It was so good to see the beloved mate of the reformed king suffer. There was so much joy in his heart right now. Suddenly, a hand from behind grabbed his hair and pulled his whole hair off from the roots, leaving him bare from the head.

His jaw dropped open as the camcorder fell from his hands and ended on the floor with a thud, being damaged as soon as it hit the ground.

The pain soon was felt from the roots and Rath put his hand on his bald head to feel that his hair was gone. A shrill cry of horror escaped his lips when he couldn't feel his rough mane. Clots of blood formed through the sore roots and he brought his hand down to his face to see the blood on his hands.

He then turned around to see his culprit.

Max Evans stood there, holding his torn hair in his hand. The grim silence etched on his face was a forewarning like the calm before a disastrous storm

Anger burned within him, being mirrored in his eyes. His stoic expression caused goose bumps to appear on Rath's skin. Max's eyes shone in a deep amber from a dark gold. He was powering up..

Rath watched in horror as Max looked at his torn hair and used his powers to disintegrate it to dust right before his eyes.
He whimpered, cowering.

"You bastard. You ripped my hair off." Rath whined.

Max growled and in one swift motion, he reached for Rath's neck, pulling him down with a mighty force, restraining himself from snapping his neck in one go. He wanted to torture him as he tortured his Liz. Very slowly.

He bashed his head on the rock hard floor, denting Rath's forehead and did so for a few seconds. Dribbling his head on the floor like bouncing a basket ball. Rath had no choice but to surrender to the greater force of Max. A pissed off mate was hard to handle.

Very hard to handle and he had no idea what he had gotten himself into. Hit after hit, Rath's skull began to give away and he could hear his skull cracking.

"Stop it!" He shrieked and tried to struggle out of Max's strong grip.

Max stopped and Rath balled his fist to strike Max but Max gripped his fist and crushed it.

Rath screamed just like he made Liz scream. It tore Max's heart to pieces, hearing the scream of his beloved through their connection. He knew where she was through their connection and that's why he found her before it was too late.

Max watched Rath scream. He needed to see he was making him agonise in pain or his heart would not be content.
Then Max felt a prickling sensation in his mind. Tess the bitch was trying to mind warp him but little did she know her fucking mind warp was useless as his connection with Liz evolved into something much deeper and unbreakable.

He pushed the energy that was trying to break into his mind, pushed it so hard that he got hold of Tess' mind and pulled.

In no minutes her body was flying through the wall of the observatory. Smashing into the building. Tess cried out in shock as Max did that.

Rath noticed Max's attention was diverted and slapped his hand on Max's chest, attempting to shock his heart. Max looked back and the shock bounced back to Rath, making him go limp.

Max grabbed Rath's throat and snapped it. Finally killing him in the process. Tess was still lying on the ground and so was his soul mate was shivering with blood all over her stomach.

"Oh god Liz." His eyes returned to their normal state as he rushed over to her, cradling her head in his hand and placing on hand on her cut stomach like he did that day. He connected with her and began his healing straight away. She looked like she was loosing too much blood. Max wanted to return the color back in her beautiful cheeks.

"Stay with me Liz." He urged, voice so soft. He fought his heart not to break down. He would save her.

Liz gasped and her blood stained fingers met her lover's hand which was on her stomach. She trembled and her lips parted. "M-Maaax..." She gasped, feeling her soul mate close to her.

"You'll be okay my love." He whispered, sealing up her wound.

"I love you..." She whispered as darkness clouded her vision and her eyelid fluttered shut.

"Liz..no...Liz..." Max urged.

Tess had found herself lying face flat on the ground and Max cradling Liz in his arms. Anger boiled in her. He still was trying to save that bitch she thought angrily. She got up and charged at them.

Max who was aware of his surroundings, pulled out the key to the granolith and turned around the same time Tess came closer to him and used the pointy end of the key to impale her upper stomach.

Tess shrieked in pain as he stabbed her with the key. "Go to hell!". Max yelled at her, pushing the thoughts of himself into her mind. How hurt, angry and betrayed he was to know she was a traitor to them, how everyone had taken her in and included her in their group.

"Look Tess." Max forced her to meet the faces of those who she had been wanting to destroy. "Take a look at them all!".
Tess met the faces of Kyle, Alex, Maria, Isabel, Michael and...Liz from Max's mind..

"These people, whether you care about them or not have made you feel welcome and accepted you!". He growled as she clutched her stomach and stepped back, white sparks from the key hurting her. She reached a hand out for Max.

"I've always wanted you." She mouthed before the key consumed her body.

Max watched in disgust as she disappeared. The key would take her to the granolith and the granolith would automatically set off to Antar where Tess would meet her end.

Max looked back at Liz who was limp and pale. "Liz!". He lifted her shirt to see no wound but why was she still...
He needed to complete the healing process and placed his hand on her stomach again, this time to connect with her entire body and heal ruptured tissue and broken bones.

"Is everything okay in there?!". Voices shouted as people ran in to see what had happened.

Shit, Max thought...

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Her eyes slowly opened, narrow oval shaped vision in the centre of darkness. Her upper and lower lashes brushing against each other. The smell of medicine floated in the air and she could hear the steady beats from the heart monitor she was linked to.

She let out a soft moan through parted lips, her throat was dry. "Lizzie?". Nancy croaked, lifting her head of the bed to see if her daughter was finally awake.

Liz rasped and slowly turned her head in the direction of her mother. "Mom?". Her weak voice frightened her mother. She had the urge to sniff and felt a wire connected to her nose.

"Oh sweetie! you're awake!". Nancy cried, putting a hand to her mouth and tried to control herself. It had been a day since Liz was in this condition. She was so critical the doctors had mentioned there was a risk of her falling into coma. Nancy and Jeff had prayed so hard that Liz would wake up soon.

Seeing her baby girl awake was such a miracle and she could never be happier.

"Mom what happened?". Liz groaned, feeling so helpless. Her legs felt numb.

"Sweetie..." Nancy sighed. "Apparently you went to the observatory last night, some guy tried to force...himself on you and you ended up falling down a flight of stairs and almost breaking your back and you sustained so many injuries in the process."

Liz turned her eyes on the ceiling and remembered last night's events...

How Rath and Lonnie kidnapped, handcuffing her with heavy shackles and throwing her in a car to take her to the observatory to kill her. Lonnie unchaining her and then hitting her. Lonnie's long nail scratching her, causing her to bleed.

Then her pendant glowing, her eyes flashing light, Lonnie was killed and then Rath pushed her off the stairs and practically responded her wound with his powers and filming it at the same time, spewing something about her mate getting angry...

And then nothing...

"I'm sorry." Liz apologized. "I should have been more careful."

Nancy lovingly stroked her daughter's hair. "Thank god nothing serious happened. Max.." Nancy said and looked at Max who sat sleeping at a chair behind them. "Max came in time to save you. The guy had committed suicide by then and Max had called the paramedics before it was too late."

Liz sighed in relief. She wanted to thank Max for being there for her and for fixing up this horrible mess so her parents' wouldn't be sucked into the alien abyss too. "How long has Max been here?". Liz curiously asked, devouring his handsome features. He looked so beautiful in his sleep.

"Since you were admitted here." Nancy answered, so impressed with Max's devotion to her daughter. "He's a keeper Liz." Nancy smiled. "Don't let him go. Ever." Nancy was so happy that Max had never left Liz's side although she was worried about him devoting all of his free time to stay by her daughter's side in time of need.

Liz wanted to smile but the wires was in the way. "I'll go and talk to the doctor." Nancy, softly said, removing her hand from Liz's smooth hair. "I'll be back sweetie."

Liz formed a small smile as her mother left her. She looked at Max who slowly woke up as soon as Nancy left.

Max smiled when he saw Liz and rose from his chair. "Morning Beautiful." He said, making his way to her, he bent down and placed a kiss on her forehead. Liz closed her eyes in the blissful sensation of having her beloved's lips on her skin.
"Hey." Liz's replied in a smooth voice.

Liz wanted to cup his jaw and kiss him but she was restrained by these medical equipment. Her hands has those cream packs on it with the needle inserted into her hands. She felt sore still.

"Don't worry beautiful." Max gave her a wicked grin and placed a hand on her arm. "I'll have some time." Was all he said before he began to heal her.

The scratch on her shoulder was soon gone and her back felt much much better. Way better then before. "You're my medicine." Liz smiled, her body being restored back to it's normal self without the pain.

When he was sure all the pain had gone from her body, he let go. Since Liz was asleep, her mother or father always stayed around and he couldn't have the chance to heal her.

"Max.." His name breezed out from her parted lips. "What happened to Rath and Tess?". She curiously asked.

"It's a long story Liz." Max answered grimly, seething in anger what Rath had almost done to Liz and that Tess..."I ended Rath and sent Tess back to Antar before they could do anymore damage." Max answered. "I would never let them get away with it." He ran his fingers through her soft hair.

"About that guy who 'committed suicide'...was that Rath?". Liz asked.

Max nodded. "He changed to his original form as he died." Max whispered.

Liz's eyes widened at Max's words which could mean one thing. Rath wasn't a dupe and neither were the others. They were just aliens masquerading around as them. "It was all Tess's plans." She realised as it dawned on her.

"We don't need to worry about them." He smiled. "We need to worry about you getting discharged from the hospital. You can't imagine the surprises I have in store for you." He winked.

Liz immediately grew hot. Max growled. "Beautiful..." He found it hard to concentrate when things heated up between them. "We all can't wait for you to come back." His hands met her cold fingers. "Everyone's waiting for you and when we take you out of this hospital, we will take back our lives and we will be together, forever."

"Forever Max." Liz whispered as Max kissed her fingers causing them to go warm. She couldn't believe this was finally over. No more Tess and she could finally have her Max.

Her and Max were going to live their lives together and there wasn't going to be anyone coming between them ever again. No future visits, no mind warps..especially no Tess.

She loved the sound of that. "Can't wait." She felt herself smile more.

Liz's mother approached the room with the doctor. "Doctor she's awake." Nancy said. Max slowly drew back from Liz to allow the doctor to do her checkups on Liz. She took out a small flashlight. "Hey Liz." She smiled. "How do you feel now?".

"Better." Liz gave a warm smile and her eyes darted to Max's molten golden ones, her smiled spread. "Much better."

Max returned a shy smile back to his Liz and dug his hands into his pockets. Nancy couldn't help but notice the little eye to eye thing Max and her daughter had going on.

"I need you to widen your eyes." The doctor said as she bent down and used one hand to lightly press against Liz's forehead and below her eyes as she flashed the light in her eye.

As the doctor checked up on Liz, Max decided to walk out and grab hot chocolate for Liz as he could hear her thoughts through the connection. Nancy stopped him just in time. "Thank you Max, for everything." She said.

Max smiled. "Don't worry about it Mrs Parker. Any guy would do the same for the woman he loves." Was his answer before he left the room wearing a dreamy smile.

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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 12/11/08 chpt 16 & 17 p. 14

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Ping thnks for the fb! I was just editing the final chpt! lol. :D


Liz's Dress

Chpt 17

"Oh my god, what am I wearing?". Liz laughed as she put on her hot pink dress and then she knew what it was. "You're planning me a party aren't you?". Liz smiled coyly.

As soon as she had gotten discharged from the hospital, Maria practially dragged her to her house and made her stay away from home for hours until she made her put on a dress.

Maria smiled, she knew it wasn't easy to keep secrets from Liz. "Yeah. You cracked it, oh well." Maria rolled her eyes as she smoothened out Liz's dress. "The color looks fantastic on you. Max's mouth will be left hanging open cause your got cha freakum dress on" Maria laughed.

Liz blushed. Things between her and Max had developed and had made them closer. She remembered the two times they made love.

It was more beautiful then she had imagined. She couldn't wait to be alone with him again. Oh boy, she didn't know how long could she hold out..

"You know, you did give me quiet a scare Liz when you passed out. The pendant." Maria held up the necklace. "Seems to have a mind of it's own. How it detached itself from your neck when the doctors took it off. I say this thing is defo alien."

Liz took the necklace in her own hands. "I don't understand the purpose of this pendant. But I do know whatever happened, this pendant was helping the right side and not the wrong." She clutched it tightly in her hand, remembering where it had led her and shown her things if she had been ignorant.

"This pendant actually saved my life...all of our lives." Liz said. "If I hadn't been taken twenty years ahead and saw what I saw...maybe Tess would have still been around, all of us might have went our own ways and who knows...some of us might have been killed." Liz's eyes shone darkly with fear. "It opened my eyes up Maria." Liz said and looked at Maria.

"Wow." Maria gasped astonished. "I wonder what you saw Liz...did I exist?". She asked curiously as Liz fixed the pendant on her neck.

Liz recalled seeing Maria from the timeline and grimaced, she didn't want to tell her friend that. "Maria...let's just say...none of us were in a good place.." Liz drifted off but Maria wanted to know.

"What happened Liz, tell me everything. Please?". Maria begged. "What did you see?".

Liz sighed and knew she wasn't going to get past this. "Promise me that you're not gunna flip out..." Liz said and began narrating her story of the timeline she ended up in.

After she had finished, Mara was left gawking. "What? Me a whore with five boys and-" Liz cut her off.

"Maria, that's not going to happen here. I know you won't do that." Liz said.

"But Liz..you don't get it." Maria shook her head. "If you died that day...that would have happened. I would have lost my will to live, get married and have a great life. I wouldn't have a sister to share my happiness with, I wouldn't have a sister to be my brides maid and most importantly, I wouldn't have a sister to be an aunt to my children." She sobbed. "I totally would have lost control like that."

"Oh Maria." Liz threw her arms around Maria and hugged her.

"You're my sister Liz, I can't bear to lose you."

The two girls had their moments and Amy tapped the door. "Max is here." She said.

Liz and Maria broke apart and Liz tried not to laugh. "Your mascara Maria."

"Huh?". Maria looked in the mirror. "Oh. Damn that waterproof mascara." Maria picked up a tissue and wiped the mascara off her cheek. "You go with Max Liz, I'll meet Micheal soon." Maria said.

"You sure?". Liz asked, stopping just before the door.

"Does it look like I want to witness you and Max sucking face?". Maria teased.

"I guess not." Liz blushed. "See you later." Liz said and took off.

Amy smiled at Liz who trotted down the stairs. Liz looked at Max who was waiting for her by the door dressed in an adorable deep maroon shirt and black jeans.

"Max." Liz sighed and threw her arms around him the minute she closed the distance between them. She pressed a kiss to his lips.

"God you smell good." Max said and nuzzled her creamy neck.

Liz moaned and smiled as he planted sweet kisses on her neck. "It's not me, it's the perfume."

"Wrong." Max denied. "You always smell good, I need you all the time. You're my drug." He said in a seductive whisper.

Liz blushed. "Not right here". She realised they were still standing in the doorway of Amy's house.

Max understood. "You're right." He relectantly pulled away from Liz's neck and took her hand.

Amy had just walked down the stairs. "Hey you guys are still here." She chuckled.

"Oh, we were just leaving." Liz told her.

"Have fun guys." Amy smiled. "Both of you look adorable."

"Thanks Miss Deluca." Max blushed. "Take care."

"Bye Amy." Liz waved at her bestfriend's mother as Max lead her out of the house and she shut the door after them.
Taking her in his jeep, Max drove Liz to the crashdown, taking the long way. He parked the jeep and looked at Liz as he shut off the engine.

"Remember this part last time." He teased with a boyish grin. Through their connection, he sent images of the time where they had found the orb and were just about to enter the Crashdown the next morning.

"Oh." Liz smiled, blushing as she remembered how horny they were at that time. "I still can't beleive we didn't make love back then...." She lifted her gaze upto Max who smiled at her.

He reached over and brushed a loose strand of hair from her face. "It was a hair thing.."

"Oh.." Liz chuckled, remembering that moment too.

"Come on love." Max said getting out of the jeep and walking over to her side to get her out.

Liz reached over as Max lifted her out of the jeep. "Did I mention how beautiful you look?". He whispered in her ear. The dress on her was amazing.

"Thanks Max." Liz replied.

"I can't wait to have you to myself." He winked, leading her towards the doors of the crashdown where everyone was waiting.

The pushed past the doors and bits of shiny confetti fell on them as everyone cheered out. "SURPRISE!".

Liz gasped in surprise, the whole diner was beautifully decorated with tinsel and other sorts of decorations. A banner hung from the ceiling saying WELCOME HOME LIZ

Alex stepped out, got down on one knee and began taking photos of the couple. "You gotta captute this moment." He said, while taking a few snapshots of Liz and Max.

Isabel strolled over along with the other and pulled Liz into a hug. "Welcome home Liz."

Kyle was the second to hug her. "Nice to have you back."

"Thanks guy's..this is amazing!". Liz smiled.

"It was worth it." Jeff said, joining the kids. "My little Lizzie got better and finally came home, what more could you ask for?".

"Let's celebrate." Michael said, opening a bottle of champange.

"Yaay!".

The music was playing and Liz couldn't resist the urge to take Max on the dancefloor as soon as they had their drinks. Max was more then happy to comply and Superhuman by Chris Brown filled the room with it's melody.

"So?". Max said, as his body and Liz's body touched while they slowly began to sway in rhythm.

"So.." Liz looked in his eyes.

"About the pendant." He said, looking at her neck. "Are you still gunna wear that?".

"Hmmm maybe." Liz shrugged.

"Liz..."

"It's okay Max. I think this pendant has done a lot of favours on me. I...I have no problem in keeping it." Liz said truthfully. "And I don't think it'll do anything for now."

"How can you be so sure?". Max pondered.

"Because even if it does...I'll always come back to you." Liz vowed. "Nothing can keep us apart."

Max smiled. Liz was right.

Nothing could keep them apart anymore.

"Our hearts cried for each other." He said, licking his bottom lip. "That's how I knew about you faking to sleep with Kyle and everything we kept from each other."

Liz chuckled. "Mr Romeo, you kept nothing from me apart from the fact you love me so much you'd risk everything for me." She reminded him.

"Oh that." Max rolled his eyes smiling. "Of course. But you risked everything for me." His golden eyes roamed across her face. "For that, I am thankful to have you in my life, here with me."

"You know I feel the same." Liz responded softly.

God I love you.

Liz was surprised to hear his thoughts so clearly. Their connection was getting more powerful.

"You know, we have to be thankful for this pendant." Liz told him.

"We do." Max agreed and then leaned forward to kiss Liz passionatly on the lips as they danced together.

Liz kissed him back full of promises in the future..

Their hearts cried and brought them back together again...

TBC...

A/N: Yep, I decided to make this into a series. Lol. But this is the end for Cry of the Heart.
I suck at endings. Hope you enjoyed reading and enjoy the video Shellbell_456 made for me (this fic)! Here it is again, lol.

Cry of The Heart Video

Thanks for reading everyone!
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